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Bhagya: The Destiny.
I'm rewriting this story due to some reasons. I'll send the prolouge now. I will change the story as I cant think a proper end to this story. Plzzzz read it.
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“BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 4”
* AT
NIGHT:
Om ,while sleeping thought, Aaj raat maine
tumhe nahi aane dunga sapne me Krishna. Aaj
nahi.” Saying this he was going to go for
sleep when he saw tht Library’s room’s light was on. HE got up went
towards the room. When he was quite close to the room he heard some noises. He
slowly opened the door & was her removing books from her huge trunk.
He entered the room & saw her arranging the books properly.
He went near her. She was near the
stairs.
He was so close to her tht he could smell her fragrance! Suddenly
she turned & saw him behind her.
Looking at him she got frightened. She asked: Tum?? Yaha??” He gave her
his cute smileJ. He replied: Woh
actually kya hai na maine
sone jar aha tha tabhi he mujhe yaha ka light on dekha toh socha kyun na switch
off kar do.” Smiling she said: OhJ! Actually maine yaha apne books
rakh rahi thi. Woh kya hai na Bade Pappa ne mujhe apne books ko library me
rakhne ko kaha. Toh maine
wahi kar rahi thi.” Om: Ohh! Thik maine bhi tumhari madat
karta hoo.” Bebo: Thik hai.”
After arranging
all the books, they sat on a couch wondering something. Bebo got up & said:
Its almostmidnight. Maine
chalti hoo.” Om too got up & said: Chalo maine tumhe tumhari room tak escort kar do.”
Both gave a huge smileJ.
Om switched off the lights & they came out. They were moving towards their room. Both had
maintained silence. Suddenly Om broke the
silence & asked: Kya tum meri dost banogi??” Bebo got stunted! She gave him
a confused look :loshish: & asked: What?? Tumne mujhse kya pucha??” Om
looked at her& said: Woh kya hai na abt oh hum ek ghar me rahte hai. Ek
office me kam karte hai. Colleagues ban kar kam karenge, right?” Bebo nodded.
He cont’d: Toh kyun na hum dost ban jaye?” Bebo’s room came. She opened the
door. Bebo gave him a smile & said: Itni jaldi? Abhi toh mile hai. Dosti
toh door ki baat hai!” Om got a bit confused.
She smiled & wished him: Good Night!” He slowly said: Night!” She went
inside & closed the door.
Instead of going towards his room, he went towards Mike & Zoha’s
room. He knocked the door thrice. Mike got up lazily & opened the door. He
was shocked to see Om there. He asked: Tu itni
raat ho yaha kya kar raha hai??” Om: Yaar mujhe tujhse aur Zoha se urgently kuch baat
karma hai. Kya maine
andar aaoo?” Mike nodded. He waked up Zoha. Om
explained them everything. Listening to this they burst out laughing . Zoha
still laughing said: Yaar usne toh tera popat kar diya!” Om getting frustrated
asked: Yaar toh maine
kya karo?” Mike: Tu ek kam kar. Abt u jaa apne room aur soo ja. Tu jakar Rest
kar aur humhe bhi rest karne de. Maine
soch kar tujhe kal batata hoo.Ok??” Before Om
could say anything Mike said: Good night! Sweet dreams!” Getting frustrated :panganalena: Om went into his room & lied on his bed & was
lost in his World of Questions !
At morning he got up
& looked at others who was still in a deep sleep. He made them wake up. It
was 6am. Saahil: Aree bhaiya! Sone do na.” Om
hitting them said: Chal uuth!” Saahil, Arjun & Yash got up lazily :bore: . Saahil
was scratching his head when he saw Mike sleeping on a couch on his stomach {
Woh ulta soya tha}. Saahil went towards him & kicked him. Mike got up with
a jerk & looked here & there :2: . All started laughing. Mike went towards
Saahil & started hitting him :moo: . Saahil trying to save himself said: Aree!
Aree! Maine
kya kiya? Woh toh Om bhaiya ne bola tha isliye maine
tujhe uthane gaya.”
Mike left him & went towards him couch & slept again. Suddenly Mike
gave out a laugh! “Heheh!” All looked at him confused. Arjun asked him: Hey
Mike! Tujhe kya hua? Tu has kyun raha hai.” Om:
Lagta hai Sahu(Saahil) tere kick ne iske dimaag par asar kar diya hai.” Saying this
all started laughing. Mike got up & said: Om maine tujpar hass raha hoo.” Om confused: Kyun?? :loshish: ” Mike smiling: Kal ki baat ke wajah
se.” Om glared at him & went inside the
bathroom. All followed him. Mike explained everyone abt it while brushed their
teeth & while their bath. Om was combing
his hair while others burst out laughing. ARjun controlling his laugh said: I
don’t believe this! Bebo ne Om ko, matlab The Gr8 Om
Kapoor se dosti karne se mana kar diya hai. Woohh! ”
Suddenly they heard music of sitar & dhol. The voice was coming from
the hall. Om & others opened the door
& saw outside. Suddenly they heard a voice. A melodious voice!
{They
climbed downed the stairs}
Man Mohana Man Mohanaaaaa…..
Kanha Sunona Aaa….
Tum Bin Paun Kaise
ChainaTarsu Tumhiko Din Raina
{Om
saw Bebo. He thought, Kaanha?? Krishna? Is she
praying to Krishna?}
{It was bebo how was singing
the song. She was wearing red & green chudidaar of Mumtaj type, her long
hair was open.}
{Folding her hands she sang}
Chodke Apne Kashi Mathura
Chodke Apne Kashi Mathura
Aake Basao More Nain
Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina
KanhaaaTarsu Tumhiko Din Raina
{She
was making haar of flowers, filling diya with oil. She brought bhoog( food like
sweets) & later brought Makhan. Zoha, Lolo, Momo & Dodo helped her.
Lolo played flute & Momo & Dodo helped Bebo.}
{She
lit the diya but due to wind it was gonna blow off. She quickly covered it with
her hands. And sang}
{Looking
at the diya, she sang.}
Ek Pal Ujiraya Aaye
Ek Pal Andhiyara Chaye
{Looking
at the deity}
Maan Kyun Na Dhabraye
Kaise Na Dhabraye
{Asking
(with expression)}
Maan Jo Koi Dhara
Apni Rahon Mein Paaye
Kaun Disha Jaye
{Looking at the deity}
Tum Bin Kaun Samjhaye
Tum Bin Kaun Samjhaye
{Om
came closer to Devgarh & slowly he stood behind Bebo to see whom was she
praying to, to confirm was it Him}
{Unfortunately,
YES. It was Krishna. He felt as if he’s having
a heart attack. He slowly went behind. There were few steps. He climbed down in
an inverse manner with a horror, stunned look :khoool: !}
{He
saw his statue}
{Smiling
she sang, looking at the deity}
Raas Rachiyan Brindavan Ke
Gokul Ke Basi
Radha Tumhri Daasi
Darshan Ko Hai Pyaasi
{Taking
flower mala}
Shaam Shalone
Nand Lala Krishna Banwari
{Putting
tht mala to Lord Krishna’s statue}
Tumri Chab Hai Nyari
{Holding
her face in her palm}
Mein To Hoon Tan Man Hari
Mein To Hoon Tan Man Hari
{Folding
her hands, praying to him}
Man Mohana Man Mohana
Man Mohanaaaaa Man Mohana
Kanha Sunona Aaa
Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina
Tarsu Tumhiko Din Raina
{Om
was now surrounded by Mike, Sahu, Arju, & Yash}
{Om couldn’t believe what he was watching. He hated
Krishna very much but his lover is a devotee of Krishna.
Tears started pouring from his eyes :cryingg: .
Mike, Sahu, Arju & Yash understood Om’s
feelings}
{Om saw other statue of Lord Krishna in Devgarh. But it
was a small statue, Bal Krishna.}
{Bebo
& others were preparing aarti thali. She filled diya with oil, kept rice,
2-3 flowers, haldi-kumkum & kapur & few sugar pieces.}
Jeevan Ek Nadiya Hai
Lehron Lehron Behti Jaye
Ismein Man Ki Naiyaa
Doobe Kabhi Tar Jaye
{Looking
at Lord Krishna}
Tum Na Khewaiya Ho To
Koi Tat Kaise Paaye
Majdhaar Rehlaye
Tu Tumri Saran Aaye
Haan Tumri Saran Aaye
{After
doing aarti, praying by holding aarti. Her eyes were closed.}
Mein Hoon Tumhari
Hai Tumhara Yeh Mere JeevanTumko Hi Dekhon Mein
Dekhun Koi Darpan
{Lolo
plays flute}
Bansi Ban Jaungi
In Hooton Ki Ho Jangui
In Sapno Se Jalthal
Hai Mera Maan Agan
Hain Mera Hmmm Hmmm
Bebo took aarti towards everyone
while Lolo took Ladoo’s thali to everyone to give prashad. She took blessing
from Ronit, Rucchi, Deepak & Saachi. Ronit & Rucchi were soo happy
after hearing her voice. Rucchi said: Beta tu bohot aacha gaati hoo. Saach.”
Bebo smiled. Ronit complimented saying: Bebo tumne Krishna
bhagwan ki murti ko bohot sundar tarike se sajaya hai. Unke ghene, sab bohot
acche hai.”
Bebo: Thnk u Bade Papa! Yeh gehne maine
aapne bachaye hoa paiso se liye hai. Bohot aacha hai na??” Ronit nodded in
+tive. She gave aarti to everyone & Lolo gave Ladoo.
At
the end she went towards Om. She placed aarti
in front of him in her hand. He gave her a perplexed look :loshish: . She looked at aarti & looked
at him. He didn’t get her. Then she took aarti & looked at him. He got what
she wanted to say. Even though he didn’t take the aarti. Ronit & Rucchi
gave each other an anxious look :saddyyy: . Bebo got confused & said: Aree! Aarti loo
na :think: ??”
He
looked at her. He thought, ohh shez soo pretty :battlingeyes: ! But he looked at others. Again
he looked at her. She gave him a puzzled looked :loshish: . Then she again looked at aarti
thali & at him. He gave her a stern look :panganalena: , she thought oh he looks cute even
in stern look :afcorse !: . He said with a stern look: Mujhe nahi chahiye.” Bebo asked:
Kya????? :gha: ”
WILL OM
BE ABLE TO EXPLAIN HER ABOUT WHT HE THINK OF KRISHNA????
OR SHE’LL
GET ANNOYED OF HIM??
BY
USHA
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aanchal wrote:lol... :titterr: . i think bebo will get annoyed of om
:voshah: I hope soo.
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toh door ki baat hai!”
Iam sure usha u took this line from kuch kuch hota hai movie jahan sharukh rani ko dosti ke liye poochta hai aur rani 1st meeting par hi yeh dialouge bolti hai...
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as far as stroy is superb ......
ithink she may nt b annoyed and om must tell her about what he thinks
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“BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 5”
* RECAP *
1)
Om helps
Bebo to arrange her books.
2)
Om asks
whether they can be friends but Bebo says tht there is still time to be
friends.
3)
On explaining this to his
bro’s they make fun of Om.
4)
At morning Om realizes tht he didn’t see tht disgusing dream.
5)
Bebo sings prayers of
Kanha & Om comes to know tht statue was of
Lord Krishna’s.
6)
He also discovers tht Bebo
is a gr8 devotee of Lord Krishna.
“BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 5”
At the end she went towards Om. She placed aarti in front of him. He gave her a
perplexed look. She looked at aarti & looked at him. He didn’t get her.
Then she took aarti & looked at him. He got what she wanted to say. Even
though he didn’t take the aarti. Ronit & Rucchi gave each other an anxious
look . Bebo got confused & said: Aree! Aarti loo na??”
He
looked at her. He thought, ohh shez soo pretty! But he looked at others. Again
he looked at her. She gave him a puzzled looked. Then she again looked at aarti
thali & at him. He gave her a stern look, she thought oh he looks cute even
in stern look. He said with a stern look: Mujhe nahi chahiye.” Bebo got
confused & asked again as if she had heard something wrong: Kya?????” Om in a stern manner: Mujhe aarti nahi chahiye!” Bebo
again asked: Kyun???” Bebo looked at the thali then at Om
& later at others who gave her worried look. Lolo & Bebo shared glances
with each other. Looking at Om Bebo said calmly: Om, Maine
tumhe kuch khane ke liye nahi de rahi hoo. Maine tumhe aarti lene ke liye keh rahi
hoo…..” Rucchi cutting off in between said: Bebo! Rehne de beti. Woh nahi
lega.” Turning towards Rucchi Bebo asked: Kyun Badi Maa??”
Om said: “Kyunki mujhe pasand nahi. Maine aarti, shraddha
aur bhakti and wht do u call it.. (Remembering) Yah! Attoot neeshtha & all.
I don’t believe in these things.” Bebo said: Ohh! I see. Toh tum modern jamane
ke modern ladke hoo. Right?” Om folding his
hand casually said: Ya. U can say tht.” Bebo cont’d: Toh tum nasthik ho.” Om just nodded folding his hands. Bebo said: Ok. Aarti na
sahi Ladoo toh kha loo.” Saying this Bebo turned towards the deity of Lord Krishna
while Lool took at Ladoo from the plate & was giving it to Om when he nodded in –tive. Om
said: Mujhe nahi chahiye.”
Bebo turned
towards him & asked: Kya?? Ab tum isse prashad nahi ek sweet samaj kar toh
kha sakte hoo na??” Om nodded in –tive &
said: Mujhe yeh Ladoo nahi chahiye. Especially woh lado ( peeping behind Bebo,
looking at deity of Lord Krishna) jo isse chadaya hoo.” Bebo turned back &
saw tht Om was looking at Kanha.
She said: Kanha ka??” Om just
nodded +tively. She said: Aree ha main
toh bhool he gaye thi ki tum nasthik hoo. Aur….” Om:
Nasthik ki baat nahi hai. Maine
sab bhagwan ki mamle me aasthik hoo magar tumhari iss bhagwan ke liye nasthik.”
Bebo didn’t understand anything. He cont’d: I hate him!” Her eyes widened &
she asked coolly: Hate him???? Om! Bhagwan koi cheej nahi jisse hum pasand
napasand kare. Woh humare Mata– Pita samaan hote hai jo humare saath humesha
hote hai. Balki unse bhi bohot bade aur important hote haihumare life me. Aur
hate karne jaisa Meri Kanha ne aisa kya kar diya hai tumhe??” Om
kept silence & ignored to look at her. She asked: Tumhari koi iccha adhuri
reh gaye hai, hai na???” Still Om maintained
silence & ignored her. She said: Icchaye jaisi tum exams me fail hoo gaye,
jaise tum koi cheej nahi mili…” Om still kept
silence & ignored her. She cont'd, said naughtily : Ya phir koi ladki ka
mamla hai?? Hai na??” Suddenly Om looked at
her. He gave her an amused look . Bebo smiled & said: Toh yeh baat hai.” Om said: Ha yeh baat hai. Janti hoo kyun maine isse nafrat karta
hoo?? (Getting a bit louder & angrier)
Bcoz maine
ne ladki ki zindagi ke bheek mangi thi jo mujhe nahi mili. Uski murti samne thi
aur maine
usse uss ladki ki jaan ki bheek mangta raha. Magar ussne kuch nahi kiya. Mere
haatho me usne apni aakhri saase li aur maine
kuch nahi kar paya. Kuch nahi!!!” Bebo asked: Uss ladki ka accident kaise hoa
tha???” Om: Accident nahi hoa tha. Pata nahi.
Bas itna pata hai ki mere haath me ussne apna dam tod diya.” Bebo asked: Kab
hoa yeh sab??”
Om looked at her. He thought, tumhe kaise batao Bebo ki
tum wahi ladki hoo. Bebo again asked the same question bringing Om out of his thoughts. Om
said: Sapne me.” Bebo gave him a puzzled look. She gave out a short laugh . He
gave her a shocked look while she pressed her lips to control her laugh. She
said: Sapne ..me??? Om sapne ki baat kabhi
sach nahi hoti hai. Aur…” Om: Lekin raat raat bhar maine roya hoo. Maine dar dar kar soya hoo. Tumhare iss
Bhagwan ko mujhe maat dene me bada mazza aata hai. Mere parivaar ko dukh dene
me bada mazza aata hai.” Bebo getting a little bit annoyed : Om
I don’t know tumhe aise sapne kyun aate hai. Magar maine janti hoo ki Bhagwan kabhi bhi apne
bachoo ke bare me bura nahi sochte hai. Aur wo kya tumhari saath Chess nahi
khel karhe hai tumhe Shyeh aur Maat dene ke liye! Aur aisa kya kar diya
haiInhone ki tum unhe apne dukho ka kaaran bata rahe hoo??” Om
said: Kya kiya hai?? Kya kia hai inhone??? Tum janti hoo Zoha aur Mike ki
zindagi barbaad kar di hai issne. ( Through actions with fingers) Teen. Teen
baar Zoha pregnant hoye aur Teeno baar ussko baccha peet me he….” Bebo gave him
a shocked look & peeped at Zoha whose eyes were filled with tears. Om cont’d, said in a chocked voice: Kya! Kya b. begada
tha meri behen ne isska?? Kya beghada tha unn masoom bacho ne isska fir kyun….”
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(Crying) Meri kismet me shayad Maa banana ka sukh nahi lekha hai Isliye….” Om( cupping her face): Nahi Zoha. Aisa mat bol. Tujhe yeh
such zaroor milega. Aur yeh sab issi ka karaya hoa hai! Inke na kehne se toh ek
patta bhi nahi helta. Toh yeh sab..” Bebo said, removing tears from her face:
Om, sahi kaha tumne. Inke na kehne se
toh ek patta bhi nahi hilta. Toh tumhe kya lagta haihum sab ke zindagi ki
kahani inhone he likhi hai. Tumhe lagta hai ki yeh bure hai toh kya hum sab
itne khush hote? Om kya tum apni zindagi me
itne successful hote??” Om kept silence. Bebo
looked at Zoha & removing tears from her cheeks: Aur rahi baat Zoha ki. …
toh Om aisa kehte hai jo hota hai aache ke
liye hota hai.” Om gave her a suspicious look.
She said: Ha. Yeh sab shayad kissi aache kam ke liye hoa hoga. Agar Kanha
humara bura chate toh shayad yeh duniya he nahi bachti.”
Om asked:
Teen bacche mar gaye Bebo! Isme kya aacha hoga??” Bebo smiled & said: Tum
jante hoo Maa ka bbhi 5 baar miscarriage hoo gaya tha. Magar dekho aaj woh 3.. mmm. Mera
matlab hai 4 baccho ki maa ban gaye hai. (Looking at Zoha) Dekhana Zoha bh Maa
banegi. Usse bhi wo such milega.” Zoha crying: Sachi??” Bebo laughing, pinched
her nose & said: Mucchi!” Zoha smiled & hugged her tightly. Bebo said:
Zoha maine
janti hoo tumne apne 3 bacche khoye hai. Magar hum nahi jante ki humare future
me kya hone wala hai. Isliye past me jeene se aacha present me jio. Bohot
khushi milegi tumhe. Kanha kissi bhi aache logo ka bura nahi karta. Dekhna
tumhari goodh bhi jaldi se bhar jayegi aur tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega.” Saying
this Bebo & Zoha both laughed .
Ronit
& Rucchi gave each others a satisfied look. Bebo looked at Om who still wasn’t satisfied. She said calmly by placing
her hand on his shoulders: Om, dekhna tum sab
thik ho jayega. Humara Bhagya me khushiya jarror aayengi. Jaha dukh hai waha
sukh ko toh aana he hai Kyunki Raat ke baad Din toh aata he hai na?? Iss dukho
se badal ko par kar ek khushi ki kiran jaroor aayega, jo iss dukho ke badal ko
such me dhal kar humpar khushiyo ki varsha karegi!” Ronit got very happy &
said: Sahi kaha tumne.” Bebo smiled &said: Maine Tulsi Maa ki puja karke aati hoo.”
They nodded. Standing in front of Lord Krishna she touched the aarti thali to
her head & was going towars the door when Om
came in front of her & asked coolly: Bebo! Tumhe iss par itna vishwaas kyun
hai??” Bebo smiled & said: Kyunki yeh mere sab kuch hai. Mere Pita, Meri
Maa, Mere Bhai, Mere Dost, Mere Pati (Om’s
eyes widened), Pati matlab “MY PRICE CHARMING”! !!! Aur
mujhe inpar sabse jada vishvaas hai aur maine
janti hoo ki Kanha mera vishvaas kabhi nahi thodenge.” Om gave
her a shocked look while Bebo just laughed out & went out.
*AT GARDEN*
Bebo
did puja of Tulsi Maa ( Basil plant, not tht Tulsi Maa of KyunkiJ). Then she spread the aarti around the house. Om was
sitting on the bench of the garden. He saw her spreading the aarti. Smilingly
she was busy spreading the aarti. Ohh damn!! She’s soo cute!! She just looks
like a princess, he thought. She was him watching her but she ignored him. Om knew tht Bebo has seen him watched her but he got
annoyed when she ignored him.
Even in
house she spread the aarti everywhere. Bebo was going to every room when Om came & said: Mere kamre me yeh felane ki koi jarorat
nahi hai.” Bebo casually: Thik hai.
Arjun said: Bebo tum hum sab ke kamre me aarti pehla sakti hoo. No
problem.” Bebo giggled with others while Om
gave a stink eye to Arjun .
* AT AFTERNOON*
Om was sitting in the terrace watching Bebo who was
watering the plants with Rucchi & Sacchi. She was laughing, talking with
them. He was lost in her beauty . Others like Mike, Zoha, Sahu, Arju & Yash were
busy talking with each other. Sahu asked: Bhai! Kisse dekh raha hai???” Om said (still lost in her beauty). Suddenly he felt someone’s hand behind. Om
said in an irritated voice: Aree Sahu, dekhne de ne yaar! Hmmm kitne……
khoobsurat lag rahe hai Bebo.” Sahu said in an terrified voice : Lekin ab thodi
der me tumhari chehra handsome se bekhari ki tarah hoo jaye ga.” Om got
confused & thought wht he said. He
turned & saw Lolo standing there. Om got
terrified after watching Lolo. She gave him a suspicious look . Watching Lolo
there Saahil went towards Om. Om asked
smilingly at Lolo: Aree…. Lolo…. tum… yaha??? Kaise???” Zoha, Mike, Arju &
Yash pressed their lips to control their laugh Lolo gave him an angry stare
& asked: Bebo ko dekh rahe hoo??” Om quickly said: Main???
Bebo ko??? (Nodding in –tive) Nahi toh!
Kyun ??” Zoha & Mike kept their hand on their mouth. Lolo came close to him
& made suspicious faces . She asked: Dekha rahe the ya nahi??” Om got scared & just nodded. Lolo asked: Pyaar karte
hoo Di se??” Om looked at her, bended his head
down & nodded. Sahu whispered in Om’s ears, lil bit moving his mouth: Abhi
toh tu gaye Bhai!” Lolo looked at Sahu
& asked: Kya hai??? Kya bol rahe ho???” Sahu quickly: Nahh… Nahh.. Kuch bhi
toh nahi !”
Om
quickly bends down to his knees making Lolo to bounce back. He held his ears
& said: I’m sorry! Maine
Bebo se sach me pyaar karta hoo!” He got up & came closer to Lolo &
said: Aur koi mujhe rook nahi sakta
kyunki…” Lolo gave him a nice, small slap on his face & said calmly : Shut
up Om!!” Om
got shocked while Sahu & others got confused . Om
went back keeping his hand on his face & Lolo said: Main toh yeh janane
aaye the ki tum de se Bebo se sach me pyaar karte hoo ya nahi. Isliye main tees
(30) minute se dekh rahe hoo ki tumhari dhyan Bebo se hat he nahi raha hai.” Om asked sadly (still keeping his hands on his face:
Toh?? “ Lolo said: Toh humne yeh decide kiya hai ki HUM TUMHARI MADAT KARENGE.”
Everyone got shocked & shouted: Kya???” Lolo gave a big smile. Sahu asked:
Hum????” Lolo rolled her eyes & pointed towards the door. Reshmi & Riya
were standing there. They said together: Hum karenge tumhari madat!!”
Zoha & Mike were
very happy. Lolo, Momo & Dodo were talking to others. Om
got very happy but suddenly something stuck to his mind. He asked: Kyun???”
Lolo, Momo & Dodo gave him an confused look. He asked: Kyun karma chahti ho
tum meri madat??’ They smiled & Lolo said: Kyunki maine
tumhari aancho me woh pyaar dekha hai, woh emotions dekha hai maine
Bebo ke liye.Aur kal raat jab tum Bebo ko dost banana ke kiye kha tha aur
tabBebo ne kaha ki ….” Om asked: Tumhe kaise
pata ??” They smiled at each other & said : Kyunki hum sab jage hoa the.
Humne tumhe Library jate dekha toh
tumhari pecha kiya. Aur tab tumne dost banana ka invitation diya aur Bebo ne
bade pyaar se inkaar kiya. Tab maine
tumhari chehre par woh dard dikha. Isliye humse socha ki tumhari madat kare.” Om smiled & Lolo winked him .
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Zoha was standing near the
window when Mike came in. He went towards her & hugged her from behind. She
turned towards him. Hugging her he went on kissing her on her neck. Zoha said:
Mike???” Mike( still engrossed): Hmmmm…” Zoha said: I’m pregnant!” Mike stopped
& looked at her. He gave her a huge smile. He hugged her tightly. Zoha didn’t
utter a word. Zoha said: Mike!” He looked at her. Tears started following from
her eyes. Mike said: Hey baccha! Chill. Aur….” He got still. He saw Zoha’s hand.
Her hand was blooded. Mike went back
& saw tht even his hand was blooded. Zoha cried: Mujhe apna baccha nahi
khona hai Mukesh! Plzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TO BE CONTINUED……..
* WHT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? *
* WILL KANHA SAVE ZOHA’S BABY OR AGAIN SHE’LL LOSE HER BABY??*
* WHT WILL BEBO DO NOW???*
*KEEP READING*
*COMING UP NEXT*
Om shouted: Tumhara Kanha kuch nahi kar sakta. Kuch nahi.
The doctor said: Hume dono me se
kissi ek ko bachana hoga.” Mike said: Zoha! Zoha ka bachaye.”
After operation the doctor came
out of the room confused. Mike asked: Doctor Zoha kaisi hai??” Doc: Woh ..Woh
tohh…”
BY
USHA
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