Bhagya: The Destiny.

by **gauriandme** 11/12/2007, 7:57 pm

I'm rewriting this story due to some reasons. I'll send the prolouge now. I will change the story as I cant think a proper end to this story. Plzzzz read it.

Usha.

by Guest 12/12/2007, 2:39 am

Best of luck usha !

so iam locking old oso Wink

by **gauriandme** 13/12/2007, 7:34 pm

"BHAGYA: THE DESTINY"

PROLOUGE

Hello friends. I am writing a new fan-fiction. I’ll only give slight info abt this story. Its based on reincarnation (rebirth). In pervious life both were someone. But who????????????????????

MAIN CHARACTERS

[size=9]Gauri Pradhan Tejwani as Shanti Singh

[size=9]Hiten Tejwani as OM Kapoor.

OTHER CHARACTERS:

Shilpa Saklani as Sanjana Singh.

Amit Sareen as Saahil Kapoor.

Jennifer Winget as Riya Singh.

Yash Tonk as Yash Kapoor.

Arjun Bijlani as Arjun Kapoor.

Reshmi Gosh as Reshmi Singh.

Ronit Roy as Ronit Kapoor.

Gautami Kapoor as Ruchhi Kapoor(Wife of Ronit)

Deepak Qazir as Deepak Singh.

Himani Shivpuri as Disha Singh(Wife of Deepak)

Arjun Rampal as Mr. Mukesh Kapoor.

Ronit & Deepak r best friends. Ronit lives in Mumbai whereas Deepak lives in Bangalore.

Shanti(Gauri) is born in an orphanage in Panchganny. She is adopted by Deepak Singh. Deepak has 3 childern i.e., Sanju, Reshmi & Riya. Ronit is very close to Shanti(Gauri) & he has 4 childern i.e, Saahil, Om, Arjun & Yash.

Whereas Mukesh is is Ronit's bro's son.

Ronit & Deepak r in Archiologists. Even their children r in the same profession.

Hope u all will like/love it.

Usha.</FONT>

[color=#ff0000]----------------------UshaKiran------------------------</FONT>

by **gauriandme** 13/12/2007, 8:00 pm

The new name is:

BHAGYA: THE DESTINY

by Guest 13/12/2007, 8:02 pm

Yeah now i think this fiction suits to the ght as bhagya - the destiny ..

Iam sure everyone will like & love this Fiction ...

by **aanchal** 14/12/2007, 7:05 pm

great intro. continue soon Smile

by **gauriandme** 15/12/2007, 7:17 pm

Thnks for comments. Yaar Krishnaa story change karne ke baad bhi 2 he readers Sad

.

by Guest 18/12/2007, 2:52 am

Dont worry b happy

Smile please ...

by **gauriandme** 19/12/2007, 7:04 pm

by **gauriandme** 20/12/2007, 8:11 pm

by **gauriandme** 21/12/2007, 3:21 pm

DOES ANYONE HERE CAN UNDERSTAND MARATHI???????

by **aanchal** 21/12/2007, 4:38 pm

by Guest 21/12/2007, 7:43 pm

no , sorry ....

by **gauriandme** 22/12/2007, 4:05 pm

I wanted to start this ff with a marathi song.

by **gauriandme** 2/1/2008, 9:33 pm

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz READ THE INTRO AGAIN. I HAVE MADE SOME CHANGES AGAIN. SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

USHA.

by **aanchal** 2/1/2008, 10:04 pm

by **gauriandme** 3/1/2008, 7:27 pm

Thnks for not getting angry abt my mistake Very Happy

. & one more thing: MUKESH'S SURNAME IS RAJPUT.

by Guest 7/1/2008, 7:14 pm

ok
Lovely part keep it up !

by **gauriandme** 12/1/2008, 9:22 pm

by **gauriandme** 1/10/2008, 7:44 pm

[size=24][b][i]“[]BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 01”[/

They were in each others arms. Suddenly she playfully pushed him & tried to run. He held her hand & pulled her. They came close to each other. Their eyes met. Her eyes was very attractive & striking . He was hearing a sound from extreme. It wasn’t too clear. As he closed his eyes the voice seem to have come closer & become clearer. He heard a scream of the girl. He opened his eyes & saw his hands were full of blood. Abruptly he got up. Alarm was ringing. He came to know tht he saw a hallucination. Ofcourse, it had always a hallucination when he was 16. He went back to his dream remembering tht blood. Suddenly he felt someone’s hand on his arm. He turned & saw it was Saahil. He got & switched off the alarm. With a puzzled expression he asked: Saw the some delusion??? He nodded. Saahil {S} patted him & looked at watch. It was 7am. S said: Omi come on its 7. Office jana hai na???” Om again nodded. S turned towards others who were having gr8 slumbering. S bet hard on their butts. All made n irritable sound. He made everyone get up except Om. He knew he was still disturbed with it.

All were sitting on the dining table. He still remembered tht eyes. So beautiful!!!! Rohan asked: Beta bhool jao uss sapne ko. Plzzz…..” “Kaise dad?? How?? Har roj wahi sapna. Kisse bardash kar me??” He felt someone’s soft hands. He looked up. She said: Chutkule sunke!” It was Zoha, wife of Mukesh. [/size][/i][/b] Bhagya: The Destiny. Ngu2vq

by **gauriandme** 1/10/2008, 7:57 pm

{Sorry for not introducing her in prologue} She continued: Suno. Ek baar cheti(ant) jaa rahi hoti hai. Tabhi samne haati(elephant) rahta hai. Woh cheti se puchta hai:

Haathi:Cheti tu kaha ja rahi hai’ .

Tabhi cheti boli: Me apne liye panty silane darji ke paas ja rahi hoo.”

Haathi: Accha hai. Suno agar kuch kapda bach jaye toh mere liye bhi sila dena.

Everyone burst out laughing. Om too guffawed loudly forgetting all his depressed thoughts. Rucchi, Ronit’s wife, came out of the kitchen with a tray full of aloo parathas. All were having their breakfast when Zoha asked: Aree guys. Chalo shooping karne chalet hai. Wht say???” All agreed but Ronit & Ruchhi preferred to stay back as they wanted to rest as it was Sunday! In no time others got ready{Others: Om, Saahil, Mukesh(Mike), Arjun, &Yash}They reached outside the mall. They parked their car & entered in. As Om entered he felt a strange feeling. He felt troubled. Yash: Aree Om chal na.” He followed others with a strange feeling. Mike: Aree Om yeh bata ke woh ladki kaise dekhti hai??” Om(grinning): Aree mujhe toh sirf uski aankhe dikhaye deti hai.” Mike: Accha toh thek hai. Ankhoo ko explain kar de” Om(remembering): Uski aankhe brown color ke the. Aur….” Lost in her beauty he cont’d: She had an beautiful eyes.” Turning to others he said: Attractive.” He was walking in a reverse manner. Zoha: Aree Om tumhare peche koi hai. Dekho..” But he was lost in his dreamgirl’s beauty. He went on praising her eyes. He came near Escalator. Suddenly he bumped a person. Om balanced himself but another didn’t Yes!. She screamed. He had heard tht scream. Om turned & held her hand. And pulled her towards him. And…. their eyes met!! [b] :feu: !!! Others surrounded them. But her hair clip fell down as she was tying her hair when Om bumped her. And her hair opened up. She has long…. hair which reached near her foot. He stared at her eyes. He did remember her eyes. She was the one. Yes!!! {Hope u have recognized her.}She looked into his eyes & thought had she seen these eyes before??? Yash whispered: Ladki dekhi nahi Omi fisal gaya.” Arjun giggled. Zoha was busy looking at Omi & her & her hair. Abruptly they heard a bellow: BEBO!!!!!!!!!! [/b]

by **gauriandme** 1/10/2008, 8:07 pm

They came back into senses. Everyone turned back& saw a girl in black jeans with white topm, {Shilpa Agnihotri as Sanjana}. Her hair reached till her shoulders. She had green eyes. Saahil continuously started at her :battlingeyes: . With her dazed eyes she reached near her {who were in same position } & said in a concerned voice: Bebo, r u alright??? Tumhe kahi legi toh nahi na?? {Looking at Om} Kyun ji!! App ko kya dekhye nahi deta hai kya???” Kya app ke sar ka ek screw dhila hai kya???{Suddenly shouting} :panganalena: Aree ulta bhi koi bhala chalta hai kya!!!!!!!” Om got frightened & Bebo was getting embarrassed. Sanju went on shouting, nonstop. Om said with all his innocence Sorry but Sanju was chatter box !! Bebo felt sorry for Om. Others stared at each other as wht to say next. At last Saahil went near her & ask: Excuses me. Dekiye yeh toh sirf ek galti thi. Aap usse maaf kyun nahi kar deti….” Before he could finish his sentence, Sanju spoke: Agar meri behen ko kuch ho jata toh :8: ??? . Agar woh gir jati toh???” Bebo said: Magar Lolo(Sanju’s pet name) me giri toh nahi na Me thik ho. Ok?? (Smiling) Tu chinta mat kar(Looking at Om) Thnk U.” Sanju got annoyed & said: Ok. Tu thik toh maine thik.” Saahil (smiling): How cute!!!” Sanju gave him an angry stare. Turning to Om: Aur tum aaj bach gaye warna….” Bebo: Lolo!! Chalo.” Suddenly she remembered tht her hair was open. She used to feel embarrassed when others used to look at long hair. She said: Lolo mera clip niche hai. Chal jaa kar lekar aate hai. They reached down & Bebo bend down to pick her clip. But 1^st Om picked it & their hands met. As their hands met their eyes too met. And they were again lost in their romantic world. Lolo came & snapped her fingers in front of their eyes . They again came back to real world. Bebo got up, tied her hair & went through the exit. But before going she turned to Om & smiled :hoola-hoo: . Om in turn smiled & waved his hair. Zoha came near him & said: Isn’t she beautiful????” Om nodded & narrated others tht she was the same person of his dream. All got shocked. But Om was feared abt one thing . One thing tht terrorized him. Tht scream & more over tht BLOOD!!

by **gauriandme** 1/10/2008, 8:11 pm

COMING UP NEXT:

Om again saw the same dream. Om proposes Bebo. Will ever Om solve the mystery of his dream????

BY

USHA.

by **aanchal** 1/10/2008, 9:11 pm

thanks a lotttttttttttttttttt usha for the update

wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

looking forward for the next part Smile

by Guest 2/10/2008, 10:42 am

i must say this part is romanticish ! :ilu:

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