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*Recap*
1. Priyu tells everyone abt her pregnancy. They conduct DNA test & the result say tht the Pratham is the father of Priyu’s child.
2. They also come to know tht even Sanjana is excepting with 4months.
3. Hearing this news Saahil & Pratham r in 7th heaven.
4. Pari pinpoints Priyu saying tht she is a witch. She curses her.
5. Pratham getting very angry & slaps Pari & throws her out of his house.
6. This act of Pari hurts Priyu very badly.
7. He tries to console Priyu & finally succeeds.
*triangular love story: 16*
*shimla (Home)*
Priyu & Sanju was sleeping while P & Saahil were busy in kitchen making their favorites. After few mins Priyu & Sanju got up. They came down in the hall. They got amazed after knowing tht their husbands’ r making their favorite dishes. Sanju to Priyu: Priyu! Lagta hai aaj suraj purab se nahi balki pashchem (west) se ooga hai.” “Bilkul nahi”, a voice came from the kitchen door. It was Saahil who was holding a tray which had two bowls. Beside him was P who too had a tray full of food. They came near them & placed it in front of him while Sanju & Priyu peeped inside the tray. They had prepared Panner bhaji, chapatti, gulab jamun & Kachories. The aroma of the food was excellent. Sanju taking the aroma: mmmm….. Waise khushboo toh aacha aa raha hai.” Saahil took the tray & brought it in front of her & requested nicely: Toh kya aap khane ki kripa karengi??” Sanju said proudly: Of course!!! Kyun nahi???” She tasted the bhaji made by Saahil. Sanju said: Mmmm!! It’s Yummy!!” Saahil smiling: Thnks!!” P took the tray in front of Priyu. She took a piece of chapatti & dipped it in Methi Mutter Malaye. She tasted it & said: Woow! Yeh toh bohot tasty hai. Tumne kaisise shikha??” P smiled& said: Ma ne sikhaya. Its called METHI MUTTER MALAYE.” Sanju tasted it & said: Yummy!! Its wonderful!!” Even Priyu tastes Saahil’s food & said tht it was wonderful!! Later all had their lunch.
*AT EVENING*
At evening all were sitting in the hall. Dadu had called everyone. He anted to make an important announcement. He said: Ab 1-1 ½ mahine me Pratham aur Priyu ki shaddi hai. Toh maine yeh socha raha tha ki kyun na sare baccho ki shaddi ek saath kar doo??” Komu: Sare baccho ki??” Dadu nodded in +tive. Nihu said: Aur konse baccho ki shaddi ki baat kar rahe hai aap?? Dadu looked at Nishant & said: Tumhe kya lagta hai jab tak tum hum sab ko apni LOVER ke bare me nahi bataoge nahi toh mujhe samaj me nahi aayega??” Nishant acting innocently: Dadu! Aap kya keh rahe hai mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai?” Pulling his eyes he asked: Accha?? Kya ab bhi tumhe kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha hai??” Nishant screaming: aa.. Dadu.. Sorry!!” Everyone burst out laughing. Dadu said: Toh maine yeh decided kiya hai ki main tum baccho ki shaddi Pratham aur Priyu ke saath he kar de. Aryan ki Komal se, Nishant ki Nihu se, Yash ki Riya se aur Punit ki Disha se??? Kyun??” All smiled.
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Hey ppl. I’m not doing to show the marriage as I hav to finish this story & 4C soon. So plss understand.
*triangular love story: 17*
*5yrs later*
As the helicopter landed, he climbed out. As he did he took a deep breath & smelled a familiar fragrance of the nature. He watched the surrounding & smiled to himself saying ohh it’s the same. He moved towards the fences & again took deep breath. Suddenly all the old memories came in front of his eyes. He opened his eyes n felt someone’s hand on his shoulder. He turned & smiled at her. It was Neha( Daljit Kaur). He saw his younger brother standing behind with a frowning look. Rishi said: Bhai, wapas Shimla aaneki kya jarorat thi?? Hum London me hee ache the. Yaha aaye nhi aur aapko apni purani yaadein yaad aane lagi hai.” Kuvar gave a dry smile & turned towards his mansion. Jagah badal dene se yaadein toh nahi badalti, hai na?
He entered the mansion which was huge, floor was covered with navy blue colour carpet. As he entered he saw balwant standing there with his hands joined: Padhro hukumsa! Kaise hai Aap?” Kuvar gave a warm smile & said: Maine thi hoo.. aap kaise hai?” Balwant: Maine thik hoo muhumsa.”
Kuvar climbing the stairs: Toh kaisa hai Shimla?’ Balwant saw Rishi who gave him a stink eye & continued: Sab thi hai Hukumsa.” Kuvar entered his room, sat on the chair, instructed balwant to sit in front of him. He asked: Business kaisa chal raha hai? Sab thik?” Balwant nodded. Just then a maid came with a tray of Tea & cookies. She placed it on the tea t able (which was in front of him) & then served each of them. After having the tea Kuvar got up & said to balwant: Chalo office chalet hai.” All 3 gave him a shocking look. Neha asked: Itne jaldi? Abhi toh aaye hai Aap….” Kuvar turned & looked at her giving her a warm smile: Tum aur Rishi aaram karo. Maine aata hoo.” As Kuvar turned towards the door Rishi asked: Bhai aabhi kyu…..” Kuvar shot him a look & then turned towards the door: Balwant humare saath chaleye.”
*AT EVENING*
After finishing few meeting kuvar told Balwant that he’ll go home alone. Balwant tried to resist but Kuvar told him that he needed sometime alone. Explaining this he moved towards his car, told the driver tht he’ll drive the car. Driver gave him a astonish look. Kuavr gave him an angry stare & asked: Kya hai! Chavi do!” Poor driver gave him the keys.
At he was drivng through the road all his memories he had with Priyu started running in front of this eyes. Her eys, her smile, their 1st meeting, her behaviour, her BLOOD! Damn! He suddenly applied brakes. He took a long breath & tried to control his fear. He heard a bell ring. He looked towards his left & saw a school. It was her school. He remembered.
He climbed down the car & moved towards the school. He entered the school & looked around the place. He loved all the place where she was connected. He saw the swing & thought that even she must have used it. He saw the walls & thought she must be using it to play hide & seek. And…. OOPSS…….
He turned & saw a beautiful little girl had bumped him. She gave him an innocent look & said: Sorry uncle! Maine aapko nhi dekha.” Kuvar looked at her & something familiar he found in her eyes. She had the same brown eyes. He behind on his knees 7 gave her a warm smile: its ok beta ” Listening to this she gave him a smile. Ohh she also has the same smile.
The girl widened her eyes. He looked at her & asked: Kya hoa?”
She shouted: Hiiee Muma!!!” She ran towards her mum. He smiled & turned to see her. He got so shocked tht he felt as if lightening hit this body! It was Priyu!!
Coming up: Kuvar looked at her & asked: U r alive??
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He climbed down the car & moved towards the school. He entered the school & looked around the place. He loved all the place where she was connected. He saw the swing & thought that even she must have used it. He saw the walls & thought she must be using it to play hide & seek. And…. OOPSS…….
He turned & saw a beautiful little girl had bumped him. She gave him an innocent look & said: Sorry uncle! Maine aapko nhi dekha.” Kuvar looked at her & something familiar he found in her eyes. She had the same brown eyes. He behind on his knees 7 gave her a warm smile: its ok beta ” Listening to this she gave him a smile. Ohh she also has the same smile.
The girl widened her eyes. He looked at her & asked: Kya hoa?”
She shouted: Hiiee Mamma!!!” She ran towards her mum. He smiled & turned to see her. He got so shocked that he felt as if LIGHTENING hit this body! It was Priyu!!
Priyu had bended down her knees. The little girl went running into her arms.She gave her a warm hug kissing her little forehead. Cupping her little face in her hands she asked:Toh mere bache ka din aaj kaisa tha?” The little girl taking a deep breath finding words to form said: aacha tha. Aapka kaisa tha Mamma?” Priyu delighted by her question smiled: Mera thik tha. Pata hai maine aapko aaj bohot miss kiya.” “Maine bhi Mamma”. They hugged each other tightly.
He couldn’t believe his eyes. He fell on the green grass ground after looking at her. He was just trying to digest the fact of Priyu being alive & having a kid that he felt second LIGHTENING stroke. As Priyu got up on her knees holding her car which was just behind her he realized that she had a baby bump. Ohhh no… he whispered under his breath. How come she gave birth to two kids or will give when P isn’t alive.
He saw someone climbing down the car from the driver seat. As that someone came to observable another LIGHTENING stroke (3rd, hehehehhehehehe). It was P. He felt as if he’s getting heart attack [What will happen if u r hit by lightening thrice ] He wasn’t able to breathe, felt as if he’ll die suffocating. Suddenly he heard 5 kids, 3 girls & 2 boys running towards Priyu & P. P came running & hugged all of them. He exclaimed: ohh my baachas!”
Kuvar widened his eyes . He assured that he’ll die today by heart attack. 5+2=7…Are they planning to create an Indian Cricket Team, he thought . He started to have dizziness & felt as if he’ll fall down. But… suddenly he felt her eyes on him.. She grabbed P’s arms & pointed towards kuvar. P looked whom she was pointing
As she walked towards him he stiffened himself . His heartbeat increased. He felt as if his heart into pieces. He thought does she remember me, does she know that I’m Kuvz, what if yes. As she stood right in front of him he felt as if she’ll slap him. She’ll ask him why he did it her. But instead she gave him a huge smile.
“Aap yaha? Kaise hai aap?” Kuvar didn’t know what to say. So he asked : Aap.. Zinda hai??” P & Priyu looked at each other.
*AFTER FEW MINS*
Kuvar & Priyanka were sitting on the bench while all kids were forcing P to buy them an ice cream. She explained him all that happened 5yrs ago. She also asked him where he had gone, why he didn’t come. To this he said: Baba ki maut hoo gayi. Toh maine Rajasthan chala gaya. Sirf uske baad London.” She gave him a consoling smile. “ Aur kaise chal rahi hai aapki life? Shaddi ki ya nahi?’” He looked at her & said: Ha. Neha se. Baba ki ichcha thi. Chaar saal hoo gaye.” Her eyes widened. He saw happiness in her eyes. “ Congratulation Kuvar ji. Aur bache hua?” He said: Yah. She’s preg with our 1st kid.” “ Bas ek he?” He thought yes… khude ke itne hai toh kya hum bhi cricket team banaye ? He gave her a fake happy smile. “ Aapke toh 6 hai aur( looking at her tommy) ek on the way hai. Planning for cricket team?”
Suddenly smiled faded from her eyes. She suddenly responded: Nahi nahi. Yeh sab toh meri beheno ke bache hai. Sivaye Piya ke. Woh meri beti hai. Yeh sab mujhe aur P ko sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Toh humare pass e hoote hai. Pratham unki saari baate manta hai na. issi liye.” Kuvar took a deep sigh of relief.
P came with four ice creams. He gave one to Kuvar, 2 to Priyu & one for him. P looked at Priyu & laughed the way she was eating, like a baby. Kuvar also loved it. P: Yeh kya baache jaise kha rahi hoo??” Priyu frowned at it & said: Well u r forgetting my dear husband that I’m pregnant. So yeh aadat humare bache ki hai.” P nodded in agreement.
After eating ice cream P & Priyu decided to leave. Priyu: Toh Kuvar ji Ghar zaroor aayega. Aree…… Saturday ko mere aur Pratham ki marriage anniversary hai. Aayega zaroor.” Kuvar nodded in agreement.
As Priyu sat in car & they drove away, smile of Kuvar’s face dead away. Anger took place. He now understood why Rishi & Neha were trying to stop him from coming to Shimla. He muttered: ?Unki ab khair nhi!!!
COMING UP: He slapped at Neha: KYUN? KYUN MUJHSE JHOOT BOLA TUMNE
Kuvar will call Priyu as Kuvz…………….
Marriage anniversary…Priyu , Pratham & Piyawill go missing…….. What will happen???
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Ppl I forgot to mention that Niyati is Neha. Actually I had forgotten her name
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1. Kuvar learns that Priyu is alive & was saved by P.
2. He also learns that they r now married & are having 5yrs old girl while Priyu is still 7months pregnant.
3. Priyu invites Kuvar in their 5th wedding anniversary.
4. Kuvar gets furious to know that Rishi & Neha lied to them about Priyu’s death.
*TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: 19*
AT KUVAR’S MANSION:
He parked his car on the driveway, threw the keys towards the butler & stormed towards the mansion. All the scenes of the school started coming in front of his eyes. Her beautiful smile, her innocent face & … her kid. As he entered the finely decorated hall he saw the huge dining table was filled with all kinds of Rajasthani food. All was his favorite. He saw Niyati was decorating the table with fresh & lovely daisy flowers. She was telling a servant to keep everything neat & clean & as per Kuvar’s choice. He moved towards her & kept his hand on her. With a jerk she turned around & saw him. Slowly his stern face melted into a smile.
“ Har baat par itna kyn darr jati hoo?” “Nahi woh toh maine bas ….aisehi.” “ Rishi kaha hai”, he asked. “ Wooh kisi kaam se bahaar gaya hai.” She smiled at him, “ Aap ja kar haath- mooh dhoo ligiye tab tak maine khana lagati hoo.” He nodded & moved towards stairs when he stopped. Turning behind he said: Gynecologist ka appointment le loo. Aaj jana padega.” Niyati at first got confused then positively nodded. Gynec ne toh next week bulaya hai. Toh phir kyun, she wondered.
AFTER FEW MINS, AT DINING TABLE:
Kuvar climbed down the stairs wearing red kurta & chudidaar pajama. He saw her standing near the table waiting for him. She was wearing baby pink transparent sari where her baby bump was properly visible. Her hair was open. He smiled at her. She smiled back.
He told all servants to give them some privacy. So all servants went outside the house. He pulled a chair for her & told her to sit. He took a seat next to her. He stopped her while she was serving. Maine serve karo, he asked. She nodded.
He served her & himself. It’s my luckiest day, she thought. While they were eating, he praised her that the food was delicious. That made her blush. She asked: Aap ne Gynec ka appointment lene ke liye humme kyun kaha? Ussne toh ek hafte baad bulaya tha…” Helping himself with a spoonful of rice into his mouth he answered: Normal check up ke liye. Tumne travel kiya hai. Isiliye.” She nodded again. “ Tumhare paas loin aye sari hai?” “ Haa, hai toh. Par kyun?” “ Saturday ko 5th marriage anniversary hai.” “ Kisiki?”. While she was having muttar panner he said: “Pratham aur Priyu ki.”
A shock wave went through her body. The spoon was in the near her mouth while he mouth was wide open. She looked at Kuvar, her eyes terrified. She gulped & asked, still spoon in her hand near her mouth: kyuunnnn Priyuuu???” Her voice sounded fearful. He turned towards her & smiled. “ Priyanka jaan. Bhool gaye?” She placed her hair behind her ear, her hands still shaking: Paar… wooh toh maar cuki….”
He moved his hands on her head & slowly brought down towards her ear & held her hair tightly & pulled her towards him. While she was crying for help, he asked: “Kyun? Aap sab toh yeh jante the na? Toh itni shock kyun ho Aap?” Tears were gushing through her eyes.
Suddenly he thumped her head on the table. Her head started spinning. She held her head with a hope that it would stop spinning, but in vain. He held her neck & started to press it hard. He said slowly in her ears “ Mujhe jhoot pasand nahi hai aapko pata hai na..” Then shouting aloud “ PHIR KYUN AAP SAB NE MUJHSE JHOOT BOLA? KYUN!!!!” Now her eyes had turned wide, red & watery. She started to feel suffocating. I’m going to die today, she thought. Then she remembered of her child. She felt as if her baby was kicking. Even the baby is feeling suffocation, she thought.
Suddenly she heard a noise: Bhai!! Kya kar rahe hai Aap?” Rishi came running towards the table & pushed Kuvar aside. Niyati held the table tightly & started taking up deep breath. Rishi gave her a glass of water. She held the glass & started drinking it hastily. Rishi looked at Kuvar & shouted: What is wrong with u Dammit!” “ Well! I’m getting mad Dammit!!!!”
Rishi said: Bhabhi pregnant hai Bhai. Phir kyun……” Kuvar interrupting him, shouted aloud: Wooh bhi toh pregnant hai? Phir??” Rishi gave him a confused look. Kuvar continue, full of anger, “ Kyun, ha? Kyun?” Rishi narrowed his eyes. Kuvar blizzard towards Rishi, pulled his collar & asked: Kyun Rishi? Aapne bhi mujhse jhoot bola?? Jhoot bola ki Priyu maar cuki hai?? Kyun?”
Rishi was in shock. How he learned that, he wondered. Kuvar as if understanding what Rishi was thinking leaved his collar & smiled. “ Aaj maine use mila. U know usne Prathma se shaadi kar le hai. Saturday ko unki 5th Marriage anniversary hai. Aur toh aur use do bacche bhi hai.” Rishi raised his eyebrows. Kuvar continued: Haa. Ek 5 saal ki beti aura b wooh 7 months preganat hai, bikul Niyati ki tarah.” Rishi & Niyati looked at each other. Rishi asked: 5 saal ki beti? Par…” Interrupting again: Wooh meri nhi hai.”
“ Toh kya problem hai?” Kuvar looked at him confused. Rishi continue: Bhai, aap ki shaadi ho cuki hai. Aap Pita banana wale hai. Toh ab aap kyun Priyanka ke peche bhaag rahe hai?” “KYUNKI WOOH MERI HAI. “SIRF” MERI!!!” Saying this he turned his back on Rishi & started to climb the stairs when Rishi said: Isiliye Dad ne hum sab se jhoot bolne ko kaha. Kuvar stopped & turned towards Rishi. He came near to him & looked at his eyes. They were still & were saying the truth. Kuvar stood there still. Rishi said: ?Bhai!Aap pagal jaise ho gaye the toh Dad ne jhoot kaha. Par sirf aapke bhale ke liye. Bas.”
Kuvar sat on the stairs while Rishi sat next to him. Rishi said: Bhai plss usse bhool jaeye. Ab aap bhabhi aur aapke aanewale bacche par concentrate kigiye.” Kuvar looked at Niyati.
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*Kuvar’s Mansion*
Kuvar sat on the stairs while Rishi sat next to him. Rishi said: Bhai plss usse bhool jaeye. Ab aap bhabhi aur aapke aanewale bacche par concentrate kigiye.” Kuvar looked at Niyati. Unable to look at Kuvar, she looked at the floor, still shivering. Rishi: Bhaiya aap bhabhi ko Gynac ke paas le jaye. Please ab aap sirf bhabhi ka aur apne bache ke bare me socheye.” Kuvar gives him an stink eye & gets up. He looks at Niyati & says in the stern voice: Khana kha kar tayaar ho jao. Gynac ke paas aapointment hai.” Niyati, still looking at the floor, nods her head.
*Hospital*
Kuvar & Niyati had just finished their checkup. Doctor had given him some tips as what precautions they should take & also prescribed few vitamin medicines. After taking all the info from doctor they moved out of the cabin. Kuvar hadn’t uttered a word since they had left home. He behaved as if she didn’t exist.
While they were moving towards the stairs, they heard a voice of a girl: Kyat um kitne sawaal puchte hoo? Mere Dr. Shetty khud jawab dete dete thak gaye.” The guy replied: Jaan important questions toh puchane chaheye na.” Girl: Important questions?? Tum ne full ek ghanta questions puchne me lagaya u kn.”
Kuvar & Niyati did recognize the voice. They both turned towards their back. They saw Pratham & Priyu walking holding each other’s hand. They were so busy in talking that they didn’t even realize that Kuvar was standing in front of them. Priyu was wearing chocolate color sari with her hair tied behind. Kuvar couldn’t take his eyes of her. This made Niyati jealous. Kuvar: Hello!”
Pratham & Priyu were happy to see them. Priyu: Ohh Kuvar ji Hiee!” Realizing Niyati was standing beside him, she said smiling: Hey hie! Kaise hoo tum?” Niyati gave a short smile: Maine thik hoo. Tum kaise hoo?” Priyu:Maine thik hoo. Checkup ke liye aaye the?” Niyati: Haa. Toh kya tum bhi?” Priyu smiled & nodded. Priyu: Ha woh maine thoda sa uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi. TOh is liye Gynac ke pass aaye thi. Aur Pratham ne use sawal pooch pooch kar pareshaan kar diya.” Priyu giggled while Pratham made an innocent face. “ Toh kya hoa? Maine pita ho iska aur tumhara pati.” Looking at Kuvar he continued: Kuvar ji aap bataiyen. Aap ne gynac se bhi sawaal poocha hoga, ofcourse poocha hoga! Aap pita hai iss bacche ke. Aap ki duty hai aur aapka isskeliye pyaar bhi.” Kuvar give a short fake smile & nodded.
B4 Kuvar knew that Priyu was alive he did take care of Niyati abit. He wasn’t happy with the child as her wanted Priyu conceive with their child. He wanted a baby girl just like her. Just like Piya. When he had seen Piya he thought that Priyu has taken rebirth in the form of Piya. After learning Priyu’s fact, he neither cared abt Niyati nor abt their child. He just wanted to get her back. He wanted to raise his family with her.
Now they all were moving towards their cars. Pratham: Kuvar ji aaiye hum gadi lekar aate hai. (Looking at Niyati & Priyu he smiled) Ladies we will be right back. P & Kuvar shared a laugh & moved towards the car. They were moving towards their parked car. P was trying to open the car door while Kuvar had already sat into the car. Kuvar felt to crush P under his car . But unfortunately he couldn’t .
While they came with their cars near Priyu & Niyati P & Kuvar heard some guy was whistling at both of them. This made Kuvar annoyed. He started moving towards them while P held him & told him to ignore. This made K more annoyed. How he can bear this, he thought.
That guy comes close to Priyu & says: Hiee beautiful1 Wanna come with me tonight?” K knew that Priyu will get terrified. But Priyu looks at him & gives him a cute smiled & punches him hard on face:O. This leaves K & Niyati shell shocked while P laughes aloud. Priyu again punches that guy on stomach & he falls down. Looking at tht all his friends run away. Priyu peeps at him & says: Get Lost Loser!” Saying this she gives him a cute smile & moves towards P.
P gives her his hand to hold & brings her closer to him & hugs her. “Gr8 punch jaan!” She looks at Kuvar who is still in shock & asks: Kya hoa Kuvar ji?” “ Woh aap toh itna darti hai aur aapne use punch maara toh…..” Cutting him in btwn she says: Kuvar ji woh Priyanka toh uss din khaaye me gir kar maar cuke hai. (Smiling) Yeh Priyanka thode se different hai. Ab maine kisse se nahi darte.” Looking at the guy who was still lying on the floor, she continued: Na isse do kode ke mavali se (Looking at K) Aur na he uss do kodi ke darpook Kuvz se.” Taking a deep breath she says: Ab maine darna chhod diya hai. Ab agar Kuvz mere samne bhi aa gaya toh woh mujhe nahi, maine use daara kar bhaga dunge.” Saying this she gives a winning smile to him & looking at her wrist watch she says: Hum chalet hai Kuvar ji. Saturday ko milte hai. Bye Niyati.” P says: Mujhe iss Priyanka see aur bhi pyaar hai!” Both laugh & P helps Priyu to sit into the car & they drive away.
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In Study room, Kuvar was sitting in his royal recliner in front of fireplace. He was deep in thoughts. He was wondering how Priyu had punched that guy, from where she got such confidence. Earlier she used to get so terrified only by hearing Kuvz name & now she is ready to face him & want to punch him. How was it possible? “No no, it isn’t possible”, he said to himself. “Priyu sirf apne aap ko jhoota dilasa de rahi hai. She cant face ME! She cant!” He picked up his mobile & dialed Priyu’s no. He wore a micro phone which will help him to change his voice tone.
On the other end, Priyu was sitting on her bed with P on her side. They were checking out their old pictures in their laptop when Priyu’s mobile rang. PRIVATE NUMBER was displaying on her mobile. She looked at P while P nodded & told: Speaker par rakho.” She nodded & accepted it. Keeping it on speaker she spoke, “ Hello? Kon” “ Hi Priyu! Maine hoo, Tumhara deewana! KUVZ”
She looked at P & P nodded in +ve. She took a deep breath & said: Hoohhh! Really? KUVZ!” She bursts out laughing. This made K confused. She continued: Ohh main toh darr gaye!” K said: Main mazak nhi kar raha hoo!” Priyu: Mujhe pata hai. Main bhi mazak nhi kar rahe hoo! Maine inn 5 salo se tumhare call ka intazaar kar rahe the. Tumhe ye batane kit u kya samajhte ho apne aap ko? Huh? Tumhe kya laga tum mujhe marne ki koshish karoge aur ab jab tum mujhe call karoge toh maine tumse darr jaonge? Tumhara khena manuge? BHAAD ME JO TUM! Maine tumse ab nahi darte hoo!Samjhe tum!” K: Maine suna hai tumhe ek pyaari se beti hai. Kya naam hai usska….. ha! Piya! Aur tum aur ek bache ko janam dene wali hoo. Agar unhe kuch hoo jaye tohh….” Cutting in btwn she continues: Ek baat kaan khool kar sun lo! Agar tumne mere baachho ko haath lagaya, ya Pratham ko maarne ki koshish ki ya mujhe satane ki koshish bhi kin a toh yaad rakhna tum, toh main tumhara aisa haal karunge na kit um apne shakal tak bhool jaoge! Pachtaoge tum! Panga mujhse hai! Ek Patni se, Ek Maa se! Yaad rakhna!
(shouting aloud) AB PHONE RAKH!!! ”
*11pm*
An hour had passed after he had called her. He didn’t believe the way she talked with him. SUCH CONFIDENCE, SUCH GUTS!, he wondered. Suddenly someone bought the wine glass in front of his face. K was taken aback & saw at the person in anger. It was Rishi. K gave him an angry stare & ignored him.
“Pi ligiye Bhai”, Rishi said. Without looking at Rishi K took the glass & gulped down the White Wine. Rishi sat next to K’s chair. He took a sip of the wine & looked at K. K was taking in deep breath. It was obvious from his face that he was angry. K: Woh mujhse aise kaise baat kar sakti hai? How dare she talk with me in that manner?”
Cutting his sentence, Rishi replied: BHAI bas! Bohot hoa. Maine aap se kaha tha ki aap Priyu ko bhool jayeye. Aap ko apne present aur future par dhyaan dena chaheye.” “ Main use nhi bhola sakta!” “ Aapko use bhoolana hoga, apne liye nahi toh Baba ke liye! Aap jante hai na hum India kyun aaye hai! Puri India me hummare business ki band baji hoye hai. Ek ke peche ek hummare aado par police chape maar rahi hai aur hum yaha Shimla me purane yaadein tazaa kar rahe hai!”
Saying this Rishi gets up from the chair & goes near the window. Gulping the wine, he continues: Agar humne abhi isse control nahi kiya toh police hum tak bhi pohoch sakti hai.”
Balwant came running into the study room. Holding his breath he spoke: Hookum! Hummare Vasantpur ke adde par police ne chhapa maara ha. Aur kissine pura ka pura adda jala diya hai. Humare logo ke saath. Koi nahi baacha. Supervisor Bhaloo bhi nahi.” Listening to this both Rishi & Kuvar got shocked.
*In the Secret Room at 12am*
Kuvar, Rishi, Balwant & other supervisors were having discussion abt how police got the info abt their secret godowns. In last 2 yrs one by one 6 of their godowns had been attacked by police. 1st godown attacked by them was in Bundelkhand of UP where they had kidnapped a group of girls that were to be sold in the International Black Market. 2nd was godowns of Drugs & Cocaine in Orissa. 3rd was of Fake Antique statues in Jaipur. 4th was of RDX, Guns & Ammunitions in Bihar. 5th was of Adulterated Alcohol in Andhra Pradesh. 6th was a small clinic in Vasantpur, Gujarat in which body parts were sold illegally. All these godowns were 1st attacked, burned down & then all the ppl of the godowns were either killed or taken in as an evidence. As per the source a new team is behind all this. MISSION KUVZ!
One man entered the room & stood in front of Kuvar. He spoke: Sir Vasantpur ke godown ka ek insaan jinda hai. Usse hummare admeyon ne hospital me admit kiya hai. Police ko nahi pata hai. Uski halat najukl hai.” Rishu spoke: BHai humme jana chaheye.: Kuvar nodded in +ve.
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A man at his 30’s walked into a small office. It was a courier office. It was small & cosy. Bunch of papers were lying all over the place. He went at the reception. A woman at her 50’s was sitting who was sitting at the reception looked at him. The man spoke: Suraj Purab me ugta hai.” The woman nodded & gave him the card. He goes into a small room & standing in front of a wall. Outside the woman presses a green button under her desk. Suddenly the wall divides into half & slides towards its sides like a lift door, revealing a white room where everything was of white color. The man enters the room & the walls again close behind him. There in front of him was a reception desk & he saw a girl at her 20’s was sitting on the chair. He went towards her & gave her the card which the woman had given him. She smiles & opens the door.
The man enters the room. Now the room’s walls were made of thick glass. The door was voice proof. Many ppl were at their desk , buys doing their work. The man presses the lift button & when the lift door opens , he enters & presses BASEMENT button. The lift was spacious, had a camera, an attached coddless phone.
As the lift door opens he steps out & finds an iron door. He presses his palm on the screen beside the door. The screen identifies his palm prints & it displays ACCESS GRANTED & the door opens. The man enters the room & finds men with guns guarding the passage. They identified him & allowed him to enter the main room.
A man at his 50 was coming out of a glass room. He was the man entered the room & said: Aree Vishal! Tum toh kal subha aane wale the na?” Vishal (as Tarun Khanna): Haa sir. Par maine sunna humne uss godown ke supervisor ko jinda pakda hai?” The man at his 50’s nodded in +ve. Vishal: Sab bohot khush hai yeh khabar sunkar. Hum ne uss supervisor ke badle ek lawarise dead body chhod dee hai. Iss liye Kuvz ko pata bhi nahi chalega ki humne use ek aadmi ko pakda hai.” The man at his 50 nodded & says: VIshla tum kuch haath saaf kyun nhi kar lete uss supervisor par. Waise bhi tumhe dekhakar sabki heel jate hai.” Listening to this Vishal laughed & says: Yes sir! I would love to. He enters the room & after few mins the culprit shouts aloud in pain!
COMING UP NEXT WEEK:
1. Kuvz travel to Vasantpur.
2. Intro of MISSION KUVZ
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