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by **gauriandme** 14/4/2011, 8:33 pm

First topic message reminder :

*triangular love story: 16*

*Recap*

1. Priyu tells everyone abt her pregnancy. They conduct DNA test & the result say tht the Pratham is the father of Priyu’s child.

2. They also come to know tht even Sanjana is excepting with 4months.

3. Hearing this news Saahil & Pratham r in 7th heaven.

4. Pari pinpoints Priyu saying tht she is a witch. She curses her.

5. Pratham getting very angry & slaps Pari & throws her out of his house.

6. This act of Pari hurts Priyu very badly.

7. He tries to console Priyu & finally succeeds.

*triangular love story: 16*

*shimla (Home)*

Priyu & Sanju was sleeping while P & Saahil were busy in kitchen making their favorites. After few mins Priyu & Sanju got up. They came down in the hall. They got amazed after knowing tht their husbands’ r making their favorite dishes. Sanju to Priyu: Priyu! Lagta hai aaj suraj purab se nahi balki pashchem (west) se ooga hai.” “Bilkul nahi”, a voice came from the kitchen door. It was Saahil who was holding a tray which had two bowls. Beside him was P who too had a tray full of food. They came near them & placed it in front of him while Sanju & Priyu peeped inside the tray. They had prepared Panner bhaji, chapatti, gulab jamun & Kachories. The aroma of the food was excellent. Sanju taking the aroma: mmmm….. Waise khushboo toh aacha aa raha hai.” Saahil took the tray & brought it in front of her & requested nicely: Toh kya aap khane ki kripa karengi??” Sanju said proudly: Of course!!! Kyun nahi???” She tasted the bhaji made by Saahil. Sanju said: Mmmm!! It’s Yummy!!” Saahil smiling: Thnks!!” P took the tray in front of Priyu. She took a piece of chapatti & dipped it in Methi Mutter Malaye. She tasted it & said: Woow! Yeh toh bohot tasty hai. Tumne kaisise shikha??” P smiled& said: Ma ne sikhaya. Its called METHI MUTTER MALAYE.” Sanju tasted it & said: Yummy!! Its wonderful!!” Even Priyu tastes Saahil’s food & said tht it was wonderful!! Later all had their lunch.

*AT EVENING*

At evening all were sitting in the hall. Dadu had called everyone. He anted to make an important announcement. He said: Ab 1-1 ½ mahine me Pratham aur Priyu ki shaddi hai. Toh maine yeh socha raha tha ki kyun na sare baccho ki shaddi ek saath kar doo??” Komu: Sare baccho ki??” Dadu nodded in +tive. Nihu said: Aur konse baccho ki shaddi ki baat kar rahe hai aap?? Dadu looked at Nishant & said: Tumhe kya lagta hai jab tak tum hum sab ko apni LOVER ke bare me nahi bataoge nahi toh mujhe samaj me nahi aayega??” Nishant acting innocently: Dadu! Aap kya keh rahe hai mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai?” Pulling his eyes he asked: Accha?? Kya ab bhi tumhe kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha hai??” Nishant screaming: aa.. Dadu.. Sorry!!” Everyone burst out laughing. Dadu said: Toh maine yeh decided kiya hai ki main tum baccho ki shaddi Pratham aur Priyu ke saath he kar de. Aryan ki Komal se, Nishant ki Nihu se, Yash ki Riya se aur Punit ki Disha se??? Kyun??” All smiled.

by **gauriandme** 14/6/2013, 10:41 am

the pixs are made by Gaya.. not me Smile

by **Story 7 Writer** 14/6/2013, 8:09 pm

I read first half, will comment after reading whole part...and i agree wid aanchal, pics r good and its visible that u really worked hard writing this scenes...

by **aanchal** 15/6/2013, 7:49 pm

gauriandme wrote:the pixs are made by Gaya.. not me

oh ok.. very nice edits gaya.. specially the bedroom one:flower:

by **gauriandme** 16/6/2013, 8:16 pm

*TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY 25 - PART TWO*

As the Team (along with Shekhar) climbed the car, the car explodes! Priyu screeches out loud. Kuvz says: Ab toh tumhe mujhse koi bhi bacha sakta!” Looking at Pinto he says: Great work Pinto!” This leaves Priyu in utter shock due to which Priyu starts feeling suffocation & falls unconscious again.

Kuvz & Niyati try to wake her up but fail to do so. Kuvz turns towards Pinto & says: Jao City Hopspital. Waha se ek Gynac ko uttha le aao. Abhi!!!!” Pinto nods & takes two more goons along with him to the City Hospital. After 5 mins Priyu gains consciousness. She is sitting like a statue without speaking anything to anybody.

*After 20 mins*

Pinto enters the room holding the arm of the doctor. He removes the black stole from her eyes uncovering it.

Mansi Parekh as Dr. Mansi Seth.

She opens her eyes & starts shouting at Pinto: How dare you! Tum mujhe yaha utha kar kyun aaye aur…” B4 she could continue Kuvz points his gun at her & says: Chup raho warna sedhe ser mein ek goli maar dunga. Samjhe” Terrifed by Kuvz behavior Mansi just nods.

Kuvz continues: Yeh Priyanka hai. Isse thik karna iska dyaan rakna tumhari zimmedari hai. Samje?” Mansi looks towards Priyu & run towards her: Priyanka! Kya hua tujhe.” Priyu looks at Mansi & hugs her tightly & cries aloud. Kuvz asks: Tum janti hoo isse??” Mansi nods. “Hum dono schoolmates’ the. Par yeh yaah kaise? Aur Aap kon hai.” Kuvz chuckles & says: Thik hai.. Dyaan rakho iska.” He moves out of the room along with Pinto & other.

Mansi & Niyati sit either side of Priyu. Hugging Mansi tightly, Priyu bursts out crying. Niyati & Mansi try to console her; Mansi asks her again as what happened & how are these people. Controlling her tears Priyu reveals everything to Mansi. After few mins Pinto enters the room & says to Niyati: Bhabhi ji!Boss aapko bula rahe hai.” Niyati nods & runs out of the room. Pinto gives a flirty look to Mansi though she gives him a narrow look.

*After some time*

Mansi is making a list of medicines Priyu will require when Kuvz enters & tells Mansi to move out of the room. First Mansi hesitates but when Priyu nods Mansi moves out of the room. Kuvz smiles & sits at the edge of the bed. He says: aacha laga yeh dekh kar ki tum mujhe apna ne lagi.” Priyu gives him a blank look & says: Mujhe klya pagal kutte ne kata hai jo main tumhe apnaunge??? Mar jaunge lekin tumhe kabhi bhi nahi apnaunge! Samjhe?”

Kuvz face gets red as blood in anger. He shouts: TUM NE MUJHE SAMJH KE KYA RAKH HAI? TUM JAB MERI INSULT KARNA CHAHOGE KAR LOGE? TUM MUJHE DORR RAKHOGE AUR MAIN TUMSE DORR CHALA JAUNGA?? Bas tumhari delivery hoo jaye tab tum dekhna main tumhe apna kaise banata hoo!” Getting up from the bed he continues: mujhe jo chaheye tha maine humesha cheena hai! Aur jo koi bhi mere raste mein aaya maine usse maar diya hai! Bhalehe woh koi bhi hoo! YAHA TAK KI MAINE APNI MAA TAK KO NAHI CHHODA!” This makes Priyu taken aback:shock:.

Kuvz gives her a wicked smile & confesses: Ha! Maine apni Maa ko maar dala hai pillow se unka muh band kar ke.” Making an innocent face he again sits on the bed: Main kya karta Priyu! Aur koi option nahi tha mere pass. Maa kabhi nahi chate thi ki main aur Rishi Dad ka business sambhale. Woh nahi chahti thi ki hum criminals bane. Par main iss baat se khush nahi tha. Mujhe paisa haheye, power chaheye!! Par Rishi Maa ke sabse karib tha. Isliye usne Maa ki baat maan le. Par mujhe Rishi ko bhi iss business mein lana tha. Isliye main Maa ko maar dala!

by **gauriandme** 16/6/2013, 8:20 pm

~FLASHBACK 15yrs ago~

A woman is peacefully sleeping on a giant beautifully carved bed. A boy, around 19, slowly enters the room. He is in a night suit, has neatly combed his hair. He sits beside the woman, takes the spare pillow beside her. Just then the woman’s sleep breaks. She gets puzzled & asks: Kuvar! Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai??” The boy gives an innocent look & says: Maa! Mujhe maaf kardo! Mere pass aur koi option nahi hai! Aapne mere liye koi option chhoda he nahi hai!” The woman gives him a puzzled look; before she could ask anything else he places the pillow on her face & pushes it hard.

The woman tries to push Kuvar back but fails to do so. Suddenly the woman has stop fighting back. He removes the pillow & looks at his mother. Her eyes are wide open looking towards the ceiling & her mouth is slightly open. The boy looks back & finds his father standing at the door. The boy moves towards his father; the man says with pride: Good job son!

Balwant & Kuvar plant a bomb under the bed where his mother’s deceased body is lying. Kuvar switches the button on & the room explodes. After few days when Rishi, 16, arrives home at his mother’s funeral Kuvar & others tell him so as to instigate him, that their father’s rival Yadav planted a bomb to murder his father but unfortunately his mother got killed. In anger Rishi kills Yadav & his whole gang.

Rishi had crush for Niyati & so did Kuvar; but just to have Niyati he purposely makes Niyati , 12, fall for himself, though knowing that Rishi loves her. He purposely used to kiss her in front of Rishi just to make him jealous. He made love with her so that she wont leave him & go to Rishi. When Kuvar mentor & Niyati’s father learns that Kuvar has killed his own mother he tells Kuvar that he wont let him marry her daughter. This made Kuvar fear that Niyati will go away from him, he wont have physical relation with her, Kuvz kills Niyati’s dad by pushing him down from his balcony. Later he gave Niyati an excuse that as her dad was drunk & that night it was raining he sliped & fell off the balcony.

~FLASHBACK ENDS~

Priyanka gives him a shell shocked look. Kuvz gives her his sinful smile & goes out of the room. After few mins Mansi enters the room & asks her why she is in a shock. Priyanka narrates Kuvz past to her.

*Rishi’s room*

Kuvz enter the room. He finds Rishi sitting in a rocking chair, his eyes closed as if he is in a deep sleep. Kuvz knocks the door. Rishi slowly opens his eyes & looks towards the door. He says: Bhaiya wha kyun khade hai aap? Andar aayeye.” Kuvz nods & enters the room. He sits beside Rishi in a normal chair & says: Aaj party hai, sara kaam Pinto ko de diya hai.” Giving Rishi a bag Kuvz says: Yeh tumhare liye suit laya hoo. Tum aaj yeh suit pehen lena.” Rishi nods in positive & takes the bag from Kuvz. Kuvz smiles at him & goes out of the room.

*Niyati’s Room*

Kuvz goes to Niyati’s room. She is standing near the window lost in her thoughts. Kuvz goes towards her & hugs her from behind. She abruptly turns around & gets surprised to find Kuvz. She asks: Aap?” He hands her over a bag & says: Saree hai iss mein. Aaj raat ko party hai mere jeet ki. Tum yahi saree pehena.” Niyati nods. Kuvz moves towards her & kisses her lips. His reactions makes her stunned. He says: Yeh gift hai. Priyanka ka itna dhyaan rakhne ke liye.” She nods again. Holding her hands he kisses her continuously.

*Priyu’s room*

As Kuvz enter the room he finds Priyu slowly eating her lunch. He gives Mansi a bag & says: Issmein skirt aur top hai.Aaj shyaam ko party hai. Isse yeh pehna dena.” Mujhe koi party mein nahi aana hai aur na he mujhe yeh pehena hai!” Kuvz makes a sour face Evil or Very Mad

& says: Request nahi kar raha hoo.. Order de raha haoo, samjhe tum!!”

by **gauriandme** 16/6/2013, 8:22 pm

*In the Evening*

The party room is decorated with full of lights, the wall is painted in red & black color. AS the guest step out of their cars they are escorted in by hot & beautiful women. All the guests have arrived. The guests are of course all criminals & corrupt police officers & ministers. One of them is Prashant Devakar who is a police officer & was also a colleague of Priyu’s father Shekhar. It was him who had told Kuvz that Shekhar was in Mumbai. Kuvz welcomes everyone; waiters serve the guest with top quality of beers, vodka & whisky.

One of the guests asks: Kuvar sahab! Bhabhije kaha hai jinke liye yeh party rakhe gaye hai?” Kuvz smiles & says: Woh tyaar hoo rahi hai. Abhi aa jayege.” Niyati gets sad as the guest referred even Priyanka as “Bhabhi”. Kuvz calls Pinto & Niyati & ask them to check whether Priyanka is ready or not.

Another guest, a minister, praises Kuvz’s work: Kuvar sahab aap toh bade he bahadur nikala! Shekhar aur uski puri team ho maar dala. Aapne mujhpar toh bada aisaan he kar diya hai. Woh ACP ko mujhpar shak hoo gaya tha. Aacha hua aone use mere raste se hata diya warna ussne toh hum sab ki band baje de thi! Ek toh khud nahi bikta than a he humme bikne deta tha.” Another one praises Kuvz saying that he has a lot of guts to kidnap ACP daughter.

After few mins Pinto, Niyati & Mansi bring Priyanka into the party hall. Everyone gets mesmerized by Priyu’s beauty. The guests try to control themselves & tell Kuvz that his choice is very good. One of the guests, Muthu Iyyer who is an Major in Army officer, gets a bit confused after seeing them:suspect:. Priyu quickly recognizes him; he was a good friend of her dad. Shekhar had said that he doubted them that he smuggles drugs & weapons. She tries to hide from him.

Muthu asks in a typical south Indian accent: Yeh.. maine inne kahe dekha hai.. yaad na aa raha hai.” He peeps at her while Kuvz gets confused. Kuvz says: Yeh Shekhar Pradhan ki beti hai.” Before he could say anything Priyu says to Kuvz: Mujhe chakkar aa raha hai. Main apne kamre mein ja rahi hoo.” She quickly gets up & she, Mansi & Pinto move towards the door when Muthu shouts affraid

: Sir! Aapne kisko kidnap kar liya! Yeh toh … Yeh toh.. Spy ” Before he could continue Pinto gives Priyu one of his pistol; she turns to face Muthu & shoots at point blank range on Muthu head, right between his eyes. Pinto & Mansi remove their gun & gun down Muthu’s bodyguards.

Before Kuvz & his men can gun down them someone shoot all Kuvz goons. Kuvz turns & learns it is Rishi & Niyati who killed them

TO BE CONTINUED IN LAST PART

by **aanchal** 17/6/2013, 2:40 pm

wow usha.. very interestingly writtenn..hope pratham & priyu's family escaped somehow..

sorry but i didn't understand the last part.. are pinto & mansi part of shekhar's team? Question

by **gauriandme** 17/6/2013, 6:25 pm

You'll understand it in the next part.. dont worry Very Happy

by **gauriandme** 11/7/2013, 9:12 pm

*TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY 25 – PART THREE*

Priyu quickly gets up & she, Mansi & Pinto move towards the door when Muthu shouts: Sir! Aapne kisko kidnap kar liya! Yeh toh … Yeh toh.. Spy….” Before he could continue Pinto gives Priyu one of his pistol; she turns to face Muthu & shoots at point blank range on Muthu head, right between his eyes. Pinto & Mansi remove their guns & shoot down Muthu’s bodyguards. Before Kuvz & his men could defense them someone shoot all Kuvz goons. Kuvz turns & gets surprised to see Rishi & Niyati are pointing their guns at him. They killed all his goons. 20 people who ha disguised themselves at caterers come out in the hall with their guns pointing at the bodyguards of the ministers. Some of the bodyguards who are actually working for Shekhar point their gun against ministers. 10 waiters too removed their guns. Another 10 people entered the room with their face covered in a monkey cap.

Kuvz looks at Rishi & spats: Tum pagal hoo gaye hoo kya???” Rishi says: Haa, pagal tha main joo aap ki baatho mein aa gaya.” Puzzled Kuvz asks: Matlab?” Rishi: Aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai Bhai?? Maasa ko aap kaise maar sakte hai? Woh toh aapse kitna pyaar karti thifir kyun?”

This makes Kuvz outrage. He gives Priyu an annoyed look & says to Rishi: Tum isski baat kyun maan rahe hoo? Yeh humme phoot dalkar humme ek dusre ke khilaf bhadka rahi hai, kya tummhe itna bhi nahi dikhaye deta hai??”Rishi shouts: Bhai agar yeh baat mujhe koi bhi kehta na toh main bilkul bhi nahi manta. Par yeh sab maine aur Niyati ne apne kaano se suna hai jab aap Priyanka ko yeh sab bata rahe the! Ab please aap jhoot bolna band kigiye.”

~FLASHBACK~

When Kuvar enters Priyu’s room & Mansi came out, Niyati move towards Priyu’s room to give her some pills & clothes. Rishi accompanied to help her. They come to a halt at the doorstep when they hear Kuvz shouting hard, confessing that he killed his mother & Niyati’s father. They felt as if lightening has struck them. Before Niyati could break down Rishi holds her & takes her back into the room.

~FLASHBACK ENDS~

Unable to make an eye contact with Rishi Kuvz glares at the floor. Niyati asks: Kyun kiya aapne aisa?? Huh????” Kuvz shouts: KYUNKI MUJHE JO CHAHEYE WOH MAINE HASIL KIYA HAI! MUJHE DUNIYA KI HAAR KHOOBSURAT SE KHOOBRUAT CHEEZ AACHEYE AUR MAINE HUMMESHA USSA HAASIL KIYA HAI! TUMHARE BAAP AUR MERI MAASA MERE RAASTE KA KAATA THE! ISLIYE MAINE UN DONO KO MAAR DALA…..”

Niyati give him a tight slap on his face which shocks him. In return he tries to slap Niyati when Rishi holds his hand & pushes him on the couch. Kuvz gives a fuming look first to Rishi & then to Priyu & says in an irritated tone by taking an uncomfortable breath: Priyanka! Yeh sab tumhara kiya hai na? Maine tumse tumhare rishte chhine isliye tum mujhse mere rishte chin rahi ho??”

Priyu gives him a narrow look. Kuvz adds: Par tumhe yeh sab karne se kiya milega? Tumhara parivaar aur tumhare dost toh wapas nahi aayenge na! Maine unnsabko maar dala hai!” “Aaccha??” A voice comes behind Priyu; a person comes in front of Kuvz along with 6 others & they remove their monkey caps. Looking at them Kuvz get shell shocked. In front of him stood Vishal, Anu, Arjun, Purvi, Rohan, Riya & Shekhar. All give him a winning smile. Kuvz look at Pinto & he too smiles at him.

Confused Kuvz asks: Par gaddi mein bomb tha aur tum log jaise he gaddi mein baithe woh blast hoo gaya. Toh…. Tum sab.. kaise??” pinto explains: Aree gadhe! Yeh log gaddi mein bohot pehle baith cuke the. Gaadi ke niche yeh man hole tha. Gaddi ka base floor jab nikal kar yeh log man hole ke through raste ke dusri taraf pohoche. Maine bas timing change kar di the jo maine issaro se Priyu ko bata diya tha.” (Remember in 25-1 epi Pinto who actually signals Priyu to look at the timing on the video.) Pinto continues: Uss mein toh main maheer hoo. Sab jante hai. Humsab jab training lete the tab…” “Training?” Kuvar asks. “ Par tum toh Don Joseph D’souza ke right hand hoo na?” Pinto laughs & says: Main Pinto nahi hoo. Maine a secret agent Suraj Thappar hoo! Pinto aur Don Joseph ko toh maine kab ka maar dala hai”

by **gauriandme** 11/7/2013, 9:16 pm

This make Kuvz make angry & frustrated. He looks at Priyu, smirks at her & says in sarcastic tone: Aacha hai! Par maine toh tumhare pati ko toh tumse chiin liye! Ab kya karogee tum? Yehi tumhari sazza hai mujhe dagabazzi karneki.” Someone in a monkey cap who is behind of Priyu peeps at Kuvz & says: Are you sure?” The person too comes in front of Kuvz & removes his monkey cap. After looking at the person Kuvz feels as if lightening has struck him. He sees Pratham standing in front of him, alive. Pratham turns towards Priyu & they hug each other tightly.

Kuvz who is still in shock keeps on staring at Pratham with his mouth wide open. Pratham says to Priyu in a concerned voice: Pata hai main kitna darr raha tha tumhare liye. Tum akeli pata nahi kya yeh kya karta…” Interrupting in between she says: Yeh kya kar leta Pratham? Isski itni aukaad nahi hai.” Listening to this Kuvz starts fuming & shouts at Priyu: AAAAA!!” He gets up to hit Priyu but Priyu hold his hand, twist it & kick him down the floor; he falls on his face. She says: Poor eek din tumhare yaha kaidh thi. Kya kar liya tumne?” Vishal & Arjun pull him up & throw him on the couch.

Taking a hard deep breath Kuvz asks to Priyu: Kyun kar rahi hoot um mere saath yeh sab? Kitna pyaar karta hoo main tumse aur tum…” “PYAAR???” Priyu asks. She continues: Tum kisse se pyaar nahi karte. Tum sirf apne aap se pyaar karte hoo. Aur agar tum mujhe pyaar karte the toh kyun mujhe jungle mein adh mare halat mein chhod karbhaag gaye? Huh??” Kuvz: Kyunki Rishi ne mujhse bhaag ne ke liye kaha!” Aur aaj wahi mujhe chhod kartumhare side par…” Cutting him in between Priyu says: Rishi par illjam dalna band karo tum!! Agar tum sach mein pyaar karte toh mujhe chhod kar nhai jate bhale tumhe koi bhi kuch bhi kehta!” To this Kuvz remains mum.

She says: Tum kisse se pyar nahi karte hoo! U selfish, self centered jerk! Mujhse mere zindagi chine ki koshish ki. Utna kafi nahi tha toh tumne mujhe se mera parvivar, maa, behen chin liye! Aur.. aur mera baacha bhi!!!” Confused Kuvz asks: Baacha?”

Priyu continues in a choked voice: Vaishnov Devi ke bas mein main aur Pratham bhi the. Jab bus khaye mein girne wali thi woh ek jagaha atak gaye. Tab Maa ne Pratham ko bus ke bahar bheja aur kaha ki woh mujhe pehele bahar le gaye. Jab Pratham bus se bahar utra tab Komal ne mujhe bahar utar ne ke liye kaha. Main utar rahi thi tab bus gir gaya aur main fhisal gaya aur paith ke bal gir gaye.” In full frustration she says: TUMHARI WAJAH SE MAINE APNA SAB KUCH KHOYA! SAB KUCH APNA DUSRA BACCHA BHI!!!”

Rohan says: Hum sab dusre bus mein the baccho ke saath isliye bach gaye. Uske baad hum sab depression mein chale gaye the. Woh Shekhar sir the jinhone humme hosla diya. Tab hummne pata chala ki ss sab ke peche tumhara haath hai. Tab humne ek secret TEAM banaya. Training liya; tumhare bare mein sari info nikale. Aur ek-ek karke tumhare godowns mein aag lagaya.” Arjun says: Hummare TEAM ki captain Priyanka he thi. Humne tumhe tab tak pareshaan kiya jab tak tum wapas India nahi aa jaye. Aur jab humme information mila kit um India aa rahe hoo humme pata tha ki Shimla jaroor aaoge.” Anu says: Priyanka ke yaad ke liye. Fir humne plan banaya.” .

Priyu says: Jab humme pata chal ki tum India aa chuke hoo aur woh bhi sedhe Shimla mein tab humse plan ko executive kiya. Maine Pregnant hone ka natak kiya taki tumhe mein ek kamzoor aurat laga.. Pregnanat hone ki vajah se main jyada bhaag bhi nahi paunge jisse tum mujhe aaram se pakad pao. Jaan puch kar mein Piya aur baacho ko school lene gaye. Baacho ko pehele se balkar rakha hoa tha ki hum ek game khel rahe hai. Aur tab mujhe wahi tum mile.”

She says in irritated tone: Saachi! Mujhe pata bhi nahi tha ki tum Kuvz hoo. APna dost samjhate the tumne pas tum toh dusman nikle. Anyways…. Fir hum jaisa chate the waisa he hoa. Mujhe pata chal ki mere upar koi nazaar rakhe hoa hai. Aur tab uss din tumhara call aya. Tab maine toh tumhe warn kiya tha par tumne mujhe majak mein le liya.”

Purvi: Aur fir tumne humse info nikalna chaha. Aur jab tumhe humari asliyat pata chala tab tumne hum par humla kiya. Par humbach gaye. Jab humne dundh ne ki koshish ki kaise tumhe humare asliyat pata chala aur kaise tumne humme dhoond nikala tab mujhe iss ring ke bare mein yaad aaya. Tab pata chala Umesh ne ring ko dekha hai toh woh tumhe jaroor kahega. Aur phir humle ke baad jab humme tum par shaq hoa tab yaad aaya ki tumne mujhse iss ring kle bare mein pucha tha. Doubts aur baad gaye.”

Rohan: Fir Arjun aur maine internet mein research karte waqt tumhare ek photo mein tumhe uss Umesh ke saath dekha. Tab sab pani ki tarah saaf hoo gaya. Fir humne Sir ko yeh sab bata diya. Aur Pinto. I mean, Suraj, Joseph ke gang ki info nikalne ke liye woh gang mein shamil hoo gaya. Tab ussne yeh pata chala ki tumhare relation Joseph ke saath bade aache hai.Tab ussne Joseph, Pinto aur poore gang ko iss tarah khatam kiyajaise kissiko bhi pata na chale. Aur tumse milna woh Shimla aa gaya yeh kehkar ki Joseph ne usse bheja hai.”

Priyu: Aur ussi din tumne mujhe aur Pratham ko lunch ke liye invite kiya. Fir jab hum tumhare ghar aaye tab main usse room mein gaye jaha mujhe mere pictures mila aur usse basement mein jaha saree sabot the ki tum Kuvz hoo. Fir wahi main ek plan banaya. Vishal ne mujhe call kiya. Vishal ne bataya ki usse tumhare asliyat ke bare mein sab pata chal gaya tha. Main tabhi usse hidden room mein thi. Mere kehne par Rohan ne Pratham aur Riya ko call kiya; sare calls group conversation mein dala; Tabhi maine Riya se kaha ki woh Baba aur baccho ko lekar Mumbai chale jaye. Fir maine mere ek pendrive mein basement ke sare info copy kar liye. Mujhe uss computer se pata chala ki tum Pinto yani Suraj se baat kar rahe hoo. Toh aur ek plan banaya. Fir pata chal agar room ka darwaga barabar lock nahi hoa toh tumhe pata chalega, red dot blink karega. Strange baat eyh thi ki tumne khud darwaza bar bar lock nahi kiya toh. Toh jate waqt mein bhi darwaza lock nahi kiya taki tum CCTV footage chec karo aur tumhe pata chale ki main room mein thi aur tum humare pecha aao.”

Jab main aur Pratham gaddi ki taraf ja rahe the tab hummne Suraj ko dekha. Usse tabhi Baba ka phone aaya aur unhone Suraj ko sab bata diya. As planned hum jab gaddi mein baithe tab Pratham ne bullet proof jacket pehen liya tha. Aur fir Suraj ne tumhe humme waterfall ke pass le jane ke liye kaha, jaise hum chahte the. Fir Pratham ne tumhe itna mara ki at last tumne pistol nikal kar Pratham par shoot kiya. Pratham aur hum sab 3 saal se training le rahe hai. Swimming mein, high jumping mein. Toh waterfall se jump karna toh Pratham ke liye baye haath ka kaam tha. ”

Showing him the ring on her right hand’s index finger she continues: Taking a pause for a second she continues: Aisa he ring Pratham ke pass hai jisse actally dabane se dusre ring ko signal miltahai vibration ke through. Isse tarah Pratham ne mujhe signal bheja Waterfall mein jump karne ke baad ki woh safe hai. Aur maine tumhe joor se maara. (Smirking) Tab maine tumse kaha tha ki Aaj mitthi khilaya hai kal haar khelaunge. Aur fir maine behoosh hone ka natak kiya. Tum mujhe haath na lagao isliye Suraj ne mujhe uthaya aur car mein rakha..”

She removed a small bug from her back end tooth & earphone from her ear. It was tiny like a rice flake & it wasn’t visible to anyone. She says: Isse raha main TEAM se connected thi. Fir party ke liye tayaar hote waqt maine, Mansi aur Suraj guns aur attack plan discuss kar rahe the. Tabhi humari baat Rishi aur Niyati ne sunn le. Strangely unhone humara saath diya. Unhone bata ki unn dono ne tumhare baat sun le thi.” Fir Rishi ki madat se Baba, Pratham, Vishal, Anu, Purvi, Riya, Rohan aur Arjun aandar aaye. Caterers ke disguise mein baki officers aandar aaye. Tab jab in saab ko yaha ek saath dekha toh pata chala ki issdesh ko kitne log dokha de rahe hai!"

Shekhar says: Kabhi nahisocha tha ki tum Kuvz hoge. Tumhe hum sab ne itni izzat de, apna parivaar mana aur tune humme itna bada dhoka diya!” Moving towards Prashant Devakarm his colleague Shekhar asks by pulling Prashant’s collar: Tu aisa kaise kar sakta hai huh??” Apne desh ko dokha??? (Shouting) Kaise???” Ashamed Prashant lowers his gaze. Shkhar pushes him back & goes towards the politicians 7 asks: Aur aap sab?? Issdesh ken eta hai aur aisa kaam karte hoo!! Sharam nahi aati hai aapko??” Pratham says: Ab jail mein sab jayenge toh akal thikane aayege!” To this one of the politician’s replies with arrogance: Tum log kya humme jail pohochaoge! Ek minute mein bahar aa jayenge! Kabhi suna hai neta ko saza hoye hoa??” This makes the TEAM angrier.

Priyu replies: ha! Yeh baat toh sahi hai! Toh kya kare?” She looks at Shekhar while he nods to all. Priyu, Pratham, & their TEAM point their gun towards the politicians while Shekhar points at Prashant & they trigger the gun. Bullets hit their bodies (Politicians & Prashant’s) & they fall on the floor surrounded covered in blood. Now Priyu points her gun at Kuvz which makes him dread. She smirks & says: Don’t worry tumhe itne galdi nahi marunge. 24 ghanto baad milte hai Kuvz!”

Saying this she removes an injection from Pratham’s pocket & before Kuvz could resist she hits him with it on his neck & Kuvz falls unconscious.

[size=24] [size=18]*24 hrs Later*

Kuvz slowly opens his eyes & looks around him. His head is still spinning, maybe because of that injection; he thinks. He remembered how Priyu injected him. A range of anger flows through his mind. He finds himself in a glass room. He tries to get up but learns that he is sitting on an iron chair which is actually a Witches Chair with arm & leg rests which unable him to move his hands & legs.

He tries hard to move himself but the more he tired the more the spikes of the chair pierced into his flesh. His blood poured from his wound on the floor of the room. Suddenly a projector started & it displayed a video on the wall in front of him. It was actually a Live video of a news channel. Kuvz observed the date & time & learned it is July 25^th, 12pm. He remembered when Priyu had injected him it was July 23^rd evening. He again looks at the news.

The news reporter, a lady, says: Ek bohot he bade suchana mili hai ki World famous Gangster Kuvz pakda gaya hai. Woh koi aur nahi famous businessman Kuvar Mahindra Pratap Singh hai jo Gulmohur company ke Owner aur Chairman hai. Unnhe ACP Shekhar Pradhan aur unke special squad ‘TEAM KUVZ’ ne pakda hai. Bohot se politicians aur police officers bhi Kuvz ke saath the jo cross firing mein mare gaye hai.Kaha jata hai ki Iss TEAM mein khud ACP ki beti, damad aur bahu bhi shamil hai. Unhone ek plan banaya tha jisse Kuvz ACP Shekhar ki beti ko kidnap kare aur woh sab usska bhanda poodh sake.

5 saal pehele bhi Kuvz ne aise he koshish ki thi jismein Priyanka, ACP Shekhar ki beti ne Kuvz se bachne ke liye suicide karne ki koshsih ki aur bohot buri tarah se ghayal hoo gaye thi. Kehte hai ki Kuvz ko achanak pata chal gaya ki Priyanka zinda hai aur isliye ussne usse kidnap kar diya tha. 3 saal pehele Vaishnov Devi mein jo accident hoa tha jissmein Sabse bade politician Aman Sachdev aur ACP Shekhar ka parivaar ka deehant hoo gaya tha woh Kuvz ne he karvaya tha. Isliye unhone officially ek secret TEAM banaye aur har Kuvz ke godowns mein raid kiya. In 3 saalo mein unhone Human trafficking, Drugs aur Arms smuggling jaise kaye parde faash kiya hai.

“Kuvz ka bhai ka yeh kehna hai ki Kuvz ne Ussi maa aur ani sasur ka bhi murder kiya hai. Isliye Kuvz ke bhai Rishi aur unki patni Niyati sarkari gavah banana ke liye tayaar hai. Rishi ke wajah se duniya ke name mujrim pakade ja cuke hai aur bohot logo toh encounter bhi hoo cuka hai. Bohot se Human trafficking aur Drug godowns mein raid kiaye gaye hai puri duniya mein. Abhi Kuvz ACP Shekhar ke custody mein hai. Khabaro ki mane toh APC Shekhar iss case ko Fast Track Court mein dalne ka petition file kiya hai. In anger Kuvz yells out aloud: AAAAAHH!!!!”

TEAM is able to see Kuvz. They were on the other side of the glass wall of the room. They were able to see how Kuvz is struggling. Looking at the condition of Kuvz, the entire TEAM’s members burst out laughing. Their voice can’t penetrate the room as well as Kuvz cannot see them. As they move out in the main office Piya, Abhay, Karishma, Neha, Dhara & Shubh run towards Priyu & they hug each other tightly. Priyu kisses each one on their both cheeks. Priyu says: Chalo ice cream khate hai!” Kids get joyous after listening to this. AS they come towards the reception, that 50yr old woman Anna greets Priyu. They hug each other & Anna says: Congratulations for your success.” Priyu: Thank you Anna.” Anna also greets Pratham. Arjun & Rohan wonder why she behaves rude with them only. Then they move out of the courier office & walk towards their car when Suraj whispers to Mansi: Aaj ka ice cream meri taraf se.” Mansi giggles to this. All sit in the car & drive off.

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by **gauriandme** 11/7/2013, 9:17 pm

*1 MONTH LATER*

*MUMBAI- Friday*

It has been a month of Kuvz’s arrest. Shekhar had applied petition to Fast Track Court so as to speed up the judgment on Kuvz. TEAM wanted from court to give Death sentence to Kuvz for his deeds. TEAM was supported by Media as well as by common people which also included victims of Kuvz’s sinful actions. In many places college students, socialists had gone against the Government & had been sloganeering against them. As the situation became blazing at last Government declared Death sentence to KUVZ. His punishment is to be executed on Saturday.

*AT VISHAL’S HOUSE at 5pm on Friday:

Priyu is preparing food in the kitchen along with Riya. At the same time doorbell rings. Shekhar, who is sitting on a couch, moves towards the door to open it. He finds Deepak Chauhan, one of the officers of TEAM. Shekhar: Aree! Deepak aao, andar aao.” Deepak comes in and asks: Sir mujhe woh SURI MURDER CASE ka file chaheye tha. Woh aap ke pass hai isliye..” Shekhar nods & says: Haa mujhe pata hai. Ruk jao. Main abhi lata hoo. Tum baitho.” Deepak sits on the couch while Shekhar goes to his room to bring his file.

At the same time Pratham with Vishal, Anu, Purvi, Arjun, Rohan & Suraj open the main door with the key & enter the house. Purvi & Anu run towards the kitchen & hug Priyu softly. “Congratulation yaar!!”, Anu & Purvi wish her together. Priyu giggles & says: Thank you!” Vishal hugs her & says: Chalo jaldi se hummere ghar mein ek chota sa khilona aayega.” Then Arjun, Rohan & Suraj individually hug her & congratulate her. Anu asks: Hey kitna mahina ha?” Priyu: One.” Riya: So happy for u bhabhi!” Priyu giggles & then hugs Pratham tightly.” Rohan asks: Priyu bache kaha hai? Unhe pata hai ki tum pregnanat hoo aur unh eek bhai ya behen milne wala ya wali hai?” Priyu: Ha! Baacho ko pata hai. Sab bohot excited hai. Filhal woh log Anna ke ghar gaye hai.” Arjun & Rohan together shout: ANNA KE GHAR??!!” Eveyone give them a strange look. Pratham asks: Kyun kya hua? Itna zooor se kyun chilla rahe hoo?”

Rohan: Yaar woh hum dono se kitna rudely baat karti hai yaar! Hum dono itna aache se usse greet karte hai aur woh khadoos ki tarah dekhti hai.” Listening to this all burst out laughing. Suraj says: Tum dono ki mast se pareshaan hokar woh tumse chidti hai.” Arjun & Rohan make sad face which makes everyone giggle. At the same Suraj’s mobile rings. It is Mansi’s call. He accepts & says: ha, main aata hoo.” He then cancels the call. Suraj says: Priyu main chalta hoo.” Priyu: Aree par tum dono dinner karne aa rahe hoo na?” Suraj: Haa, zaroor aayenge. Byee.” Everyone together: Byee!” As Suraj moves out of the kitchen he sees Deepak standing near the door & listening to their conversation. As he sees Suraj Deepak suddenly turns his back to him & starts talking on the phone. Suraj does find it weird but then his phone starts rings. Suraj: haa, aa raha hoo.” AS Suraj moves towards the door he eyes are stuck on Deepak only. But then he ignores him & moves out of the house, towards his car.

*At 8pm*

Priyu, Riya, Anu & Riya are placing dishes on the table. All boys are watching WWE on TV. Rohan & Arjun are cheering their players: Yes! Punch him! Kick him!” Pratham, Vishal & Shekhar are observing both of their reactions & chuckle at them. Priyu: Hey bhagwan! Yeh dusra bakwass game hai iss duniya mein! Itna cheating karte hai, bakwass batein karte hai, pata nahi tum sab ko yeh game kaise pasand aata hai.” Rohan: Yaar Priyu yeh LIVE action hai!” Priyu asks in sarcastic manner: LIVE action???Ha! ha! Kuch nahi, ek toh cheating karte hai, chair se marte hai koi bhi aat hai aur bech mein ghuss jata hai. Pakaw!.....” She goes on criticizing the game about Rohan & Arjun didn’t give a heed to it.

Priyu goes in kitchen & brings a chocolate cake she had made for kids. Suddenly Arjun & Rohan start punching each other. Priyu gets confuse d & asks: Kya hoa? Yeh kyun ek dusre ko marr rahe hai?” Pratham: Dono ke favourites aaj ek dusre ke saath ladh rahe hai, isliye dono ek dusre ke khilaf ladh rahe hai.” Priyu gives him a perplexed look while Pratham sniggers. Riya & Purvi decide it’s better that they ignore them. Priyu gets anxious & says: Pratham plz inhe rook na! Vishal!” P & Vishal look at each other, turn towards Arjun & Rohan & jump upon them to separate them. Looking at this Priyu rolls her eyes & says: Do baacho ka baap kone jaa raha hai aur harkate dekho!” Purvi, Anu & Riya laugh out loud.

After few mins all four get tired & sit on the couch breathless. Shekhar goes to the bar counter & brings a champagne bottle & 5 wine glasses; fills it with Champagne , keeps one with him & give others to them (boys). Shekhar: Aaj jashn banana ka din hia. KUVZ ko kal fhassi de jayege. So happy!” Priyu: Baba, Suraj aur Mansi aane ke baad champagne mikalna chaheye tha na!” “Ha, woh dono jab aayenge tab ek aur nikalenge.” Priyu sniggers & smile to him.

The landline phone starts ringing. Priyu keeps up the receiver & asks: Hello?” From the other end one of the agent replies: Priyanka madam! Main Tonny bol raha hoo. Yaha bohot gadbad hoo gaya hai!” “Kya keh rahe hoo tonny? Ab kya hoa? Saaf saaf kaho.” Everyone surround her to listen. Priyu keeps the call on speaker. Tonny says:Madam KUVZ bhag gaya aur jate jate ussne humare bohot se staff ko goli marr kar chala gaya. Madam aap sab chup jao. Woh aapko he dhoondne aa raha hai.” Everyone give each other alarmed look. Shekhar says to Purvi: Beta tu Suraj ko call kar aur usse bol ki kahi safe place jaye aur humme bhi bateye.” Purvi nods & calls to Suraj. “Arjun, Rohan tum dono sare laptops, equipments tablets pack karo. Vishal tum mere saath aao , hum sare ammunations, guns sab pack karte hai. Ok?” Vishal, Arjun & Rohan nod. “Pratham tum apne aur Priyu ke kapde bandh loo. Anu Riya tum baki lgo ke kapde band lo.”

by **gauriandme** 11/7/2013, 9:21 pm

Priyu: Baba, humne itne mehnat se usse pakda tha aur woh kaise bhaag gaya?” “Beta, tu chinta mat kar, iss baar bhi hum usse nahi chhodenge. Ok??”Priyu nods. “Baba main Anna ko call karke alert rehne bolti hoo. Waise bhi humare alava aur kissi ko pata nahi ki baache Anna ke pass hai.” “Ha beta ek bar call kar le.” Priyu calls Anna & alerts her while she assures Priyu that she’ll give everything to keep kids safe

Here, Pratham packs his & Priyu’s clothes along with Priyu’s medicines. While coming to the hall he also brings a huge Tiffin casserole & fills it with chapattis, bhaji, rice & dal. He also collects all the bottles of water with him. Purvi comes towards Shekhar & says: Sir, Suraj aur Mansi dono call nahi utha rahe hai.” “Beta try karte reh, koi na koi zaroor uthayega.” Purvi nods & tries again. After packing at the necessary items, Shekhar removes his Tata Winger (15 seater) car from garage.

Everyone climb up & they move to Anna’s house to pick up kids & hide them in a safe place. Purvi again tries Suraj’s no. but now someone does pick the call. Purvi keeps the call on speakers & says: Hello! Suraj! Kaha hai tu? Main….” “Madam mein Jignesh bol raha hoo. Suraj sir aur Mansi madam par attack hoa hai.” Purvi: Kya??” “Woh toh bhagwan ka sukar hai ki dono ko bas mamuli cote aaye hai. Par…” Anu: Par kya??” “ Par Niyati aur Rishi par bhi humla hoa hai. Aur iss hamle mein Niyati ne fir se apna baacha kho diya hai. Aur Rishi bhi bohot ghayal hoo gaya hai.”

Everyone get upset after learning this, especially Priyu. Pratham tries to console her.

Jignesh tells them that Suraj & Mansi were attack at the Café Bar with bullets & acid. Though bullet just touched Suraj’s shoulder, Mansi’s arm got little burn due to acid. But she is doing fine. Niyati was attacked while visiting doctor & Rishi was attacked while he was going to hospital to see Niyati. At the same time Anna calls Priyu & tells her that Kuvz is attacking her house. Listening to this Priyu & Riya gets frightened. Shekhar consoles them & Shekhar tells Jignesh that they’ll reach hospital within 20 minutes. Jignesh agrees. TEAM changes their SIM cards so that Kuvz can’t track them & wear their tracking ring so that they can find each other easily.

*Anna’s house*

Shekhar parks the car a bit away from Anna’s house. P says Priyu to hide behind the wall fence. Pratham, Purvi, Anu & Riya stay with Priyu while Vishal, Rohan, Arjun & Shekhar enter the garden by jumping over the wall. They see Kuvz 5 goons are standing at the main door & another 5 behind the house. Rohan, with a remote, drives 2 small toy trucks, one in front of the goons at the main door & another in front of goons at the back of the house. Looking at the car the goons comes in front it & at the same time Arjun presses the red button & the car explodes killing all the goons.

Hearing the voice of blasts Kuvz moves towards the window & finds all his goons dead. He learns TEAM has arrived. He curses them under his breath & sends half of his goons out & half of them in the hall & keeps two goons with him as Kuvz had already captivated Anna & kids. Those two goons are pointing their guns at Anna & kids. Shubh asks Anna: aunty yeh kya hoo raha hai?” Anna replies: Shubh hum game khel rahe hai. Tum sab meri sari baate manoge na?” all kids nod.

Kuvz was on the other side so he wasn’t able to see them. Rohan & Arjun hide behind the tress while Vishal & Shekhar slowly enter the house. When the half goons move out of the house Rohan & Arjun shoots them & when another come down in hall Vishal & Shekhar fire at them. Totally 3 goons survive in the garden while 2 in the hall. Slowly TEAM kills all the goons. This panics Kuvz & he looks at outside the window. He finds all his goons are dead.

Taking advantage of this situation Anna signals kids to stay down while she quickly snatches guns from the goons & knocks them down. Listening to the gun shots Kuvz turns but before he react Anna quickly knocks him too & moves out of the room along with kids. She pulls a small cabinet in front of the door so as to block it. They run down towards the hall. Anna & Kids find Vishal & Shekhar. They get glad to see kids & Anna safe. They move out of the house & kids run towards the car. Priyu watches to coming towards the car. She runs towards them, hugs them & makes them sit in the car. Shubh is coming with Anna while Rohan is just behind them. But suddenly from nowhere Kuvz & those two goons come in front of the door, see Anna, Shubh & Rohan running towards the car & starts shooting at the TEAM.

To protect Shubh Rohan covers him & is hit by a bullet on his right arm. To protect Rohan, Arjun covers Rohan but he is too hit on his shoulder. Riya & Priyu screeches out loud. Looking Rohan & Arjun injured Anna covers them & is hit by several bullets on her back. Rohan & Arjun get shocked. In anger Vishal, Pratham & Shekhar turns to face him & start shooting at Kuvz & his goons. From the car Priyu, Riya too start shooting while Anu & Purvi protect the kids. Kuvz hides behind the wall so as to protect himself but his two goons are killed by the TEAM.

Anna pulls out a granite bomb from Arjun’s jackets & pushes all 3 of them out of the gate. She removes the key from the granite Arjun & Rohan shout out: NO!!” She looks at them & gives them a cute smile & says: God bless you.” Looking at Anna, tears flows from Rohan & Arjun’s eyes. All of them jump into the car & drive away from the house. Kuvz watches Anna pulling the key. Kuvz: Ohh shit!” He gets panicked, runs towards the wall & jumps off it. At the same time granite bomb explodes. TEAM gets startle looking at Anna’s body getting burst.

Shekhar calls Jignesh & Tells him to double the security as Kuvz might attack them in hospital. Jignesh tells them that Suraj just got conscious & wants to talk with him. Shekhar: Suraj, beta kaise hoo?” “Main thik hoo sir! Sir baccho ko khatra hai, Woh janta hai bacche Anna ke pass hai.” But Shekhar interrupts him in between & explains him everything about it, how Anna protected kids, how they killed Kuvz’s goons & how Anna gave up her life to protect them. This makes Suraj upset. Shekhar asks: Beta tumhe kaise pata?”

Suraj explains that he saw Deepak listening to their conversation in the evening. He says that Deepak himself attacked on him & Mansi. But we acted as if we are dead thus he went away. Deepak is corrupted & they should teach him a lesson. Then later I called Jignesh who had come to Mumbai for some work & he thus admitted them to hospital. Learning this TEAM get more agitated. Suraj says that he, Mansi, Niyati, Rishi & Jignesh will meet him at sunset point. They all agree to it. Anu did take some medicines with her. Riya & Purvi clean the wound of Rohan & Arjun respectively, applied ointments & wrap their wounds with the bandages.

Pratham calls Tony & tells him to come at Sunset Point with a Honda city car without informing anyone about it. As Tony comes, Pratham, Vishal & Anu go with him to teach Deepak a lesson. Actually Rohan had tracked Deepak’s mobile after knowing his truth. Deepak is under an impression that Suraj is dead & no one knows his truth. So he took that for granted & didn’t bother to switch his mobile off. Deepak is in a bar, may be enjoying with his black money.

*Bar*

Deepak is fully drunk & is throwing money on the dancers. Pratham, Vishal & Tony enter the bar from the back door while Anu is in the car waiting for them. They find Deepak dancing with the bar dancers. Their blood starts boiling in anger. After few minutes tired of dancing, Deepak moves towards the toilet. Pratham & Vishal too follow him. He’s too drunk to walk. As he entered the toilet, Anu removes the plug of the electric supply thus lights go off. At the same time Pratham & Vishal keep their gun of Deepak’s chest & threaten him: Don’t you dare make a sound!” Deepak nods in positive. Vishal & Pratham tie his hands & mouth & Pratham says: Abhi hummare saath aao.” They drag him outside without coming to any one’s notice; throw him in the car’s dicky & move towards Deepak’s house.

After reaching Deepak’s house (a bungalow) Pratham ties Deepak to an iron chair, ties his hands & legs to it; Vishal is pointing his gun against Deepak warning him not to shout or he’ll shoot him while Anu removed a wire, tied it to the chair & inserted it to the electric circuit. Anu removes a Lie Detector Machine & wraps Deepak’s hand with leather cover attached to the machine. Pratham: Dekh, sach sach bata, agar tune jhoot bola na toh iss Lie Detector se pata chalega aur Anu waha switch on karege aur tu yaha fry hoo gayega, samjha????” Deepak doesn’t say anything. Pratham continues: Tune Kuvz ko bahar kyun nikala? Kisski madat se nikala? Kon kon involve hai iss sab mein?” Deepak looks at P & spits on his face. P wipes his face with a hanky, forcefully pressed tht hanky into Deepak’s mouth & punches on his face. Vishal nods to Anu & she switches on the electric flow. Current passes through his body & he starts shivering. Pratham signals to Anu & she switches it off.

Pratham says removing the hanky: Main fir puch raha hoo? Kiisne madat ki? Kon involve hai? (Shouting hard) BATA!!” Deepak gulps down & says: Mujhe nahi pata. BEEP! BEEP! The Lie Detector Machine started making noise & the needle moved towards right side, i.e. Lie side. It blinked its Red button. Pratham gives him a wicked smile, puts hanky into Deepak’s mouth & there Anu switches the current on. She keeps switching it On & Off again & again. Then at last Deepak agrees to tell the truth or else they’ll keep him torturing. He agrees that he removed Kuvz from the cell, gave him guns & info about the TEAM & Piyu’s kids., Suraj & Mansi’s date Venue. And he tells them that person’s name who is actually friend of Kuvz which makes the TEAM shell shocked. Deepak says he has a memory card in which he has proof against that deceiver who is Kuvz’s friend. The memory card consists of videos, documents, bank statement of the fraud which Deepak had found when he had hacked his account. He explained that he kept the proofs with him so that later he can blackmail Bisht. He also says that Kuvz is moving towards the hospital to kill Suraj, Mansi, Niyati & Rishi. P calls Jignesh & says: Sun! Tum sab waha se nikalo! Abhi. Kuvz waha tumhe maarne aa raha hai.” “Kya??”

by **gauriandme** 11/7/2013, 9:26 pm

At the same time a car stop in front of the hospital & Kuvz’s goons shoots all the police guards standing at the main gate & then the car enters the hospital premises. Kuvz had instructed his goons not to waste the bullets on other people except the TEAM & police officers. SO they neither shot doctors nor nurse nor patients. Asking info about the room no. where Suraj, Mansi, Niyati & Rishi were admitted, they head towards the rooms, on the 3^rd floor through lift.

Pratham, Vishal & Anu do hear the gun shots on the phone. P says to Jignesh to call Priyu & keep the both of them in group conversation. After putting them in conversation, Priyu tells him to take all four of them out of the hospital from the back door. Jignesh takes Suraj, Mansi, Niyati & Rishi & moves towards the back door on the ground floor through stairs. Niyati is so weak that she cannot walk fast. While coming down they meet some of Kuvz goons but before goons can shoot at them Jignesh, Suraj & Rishi shoot at them.

There, Kuvz listens to the gun shoots & stops the lift on the 2^nd floor where Jignesh & all were there. As Kuvz gets out of the lift he sees them climbing down the stairs & starts firing at them. They hide behind the wall near the stairs. Kuvz yells out: Tum mujhse bhaag nahi paoge! Aaj toh main tumhe maar kar he rahunga!” Niyati takes the phone from Jignesh & tells to Priyu: Priyanka, tum chinta mat karo, sab thik hoga.” “Niyati, kaise hoo?” “ Main thik hoo Priyanka, par mujhse vada karo. Vada karo ki agar humme yaah kuch hoo gaya toh tum Kuvz ko zinda nahi chhodogi! Mere baacho ka badla loge, Promise?” Priyu controls her tears & says: Promise! Par tum sab ko kuch bhi nahi hoga” A smile appears on Niyati’s face, “Thank you Priyanka.”

Saying this Niyati & Rishi take one-one gun from Jignesh & tell him to take Suraj & Mansi from there while they’ll cover them. At 1^st they don’t agree but both Rishi & Niyati force them by giving them their promise & then they have to agree. Now Rishi & Niyati get ready, come in front of Kuvz & starts shooting at him & his goons continuously. Kuvz runs towards the door & hides himself while all his goons are hit by the bullets & so are Niyati & Rishi. Goons & Niyati- Rishi fall on the ground in the river of blood. Quickly Jignesh, Suraj & Mansi sadly look at Niyati & Rishi & run down the stairs as soon as possible. Kuvz gets up & comes in the front to find all his goons dead. He moves towards Rishi & Niyati who were still breathing & says: Itna pyaar unn logo ke liye, unn paraye logo ke liya aur mere liye kuch nahi??” Rishi & Niyati rise their head & look at Kuvz & smile. Niyati says in a choked voice.: Un paraye …….logo ne mujhe woh sahara………….., woh apnapan diya… jo…….. jo…. kabhi tumne nahi diya. Ab mera badla Priyanka legi!” In anger Kuvz fires on Niyati’s head & when Rishi tries to oppose Kuvz to shoot at him on his head.

As Jignesh, Suraj & Mansi get out of the back door of the hospital one black Honda City car comes to halt in front of them. They think it is Kuvz’s car & in panic they try to run away from the car. “Aree ruk yaar! Hum log hai!” They stop at once & turn to back to see Pratham, Vishal, Anu & Tony peeping out the window of the car. Before P got tell him to quickly come & sit in the car they run towards the car & sit inside. Laughing out hard Pratham rushes the car to hit the road & moves towards Sunset Point.

*Sunset point*

Shekhar & others are waiting for Suraj & all at Sunset point. Suddenly they see Tony’s car coming towards them. It comes to a halt & everyone climb down the car. Shekhar & everyone get glad to see them alive. Everyone hug each other. Suraj gets happy to see kids safe & sound. Now, everyone is sitting around a bonfire; it is late night 10pm & the weather has turned quite chilly. Shekhar removes the tiffin which Pratham had packed. They all share food with each other. While coming out of the hospital Suraj did bring his & Mansi’s medicines. After having food they take their medicines. Pratham also give Priyu her pills. Rohan & Arjun eat their pain killer pills while Priyu gives them anti bacteria injections.

Pratham & Riya make kids eat some food & also give them some medicines as they were really scared after watching Anna hit by the bullets. Priyu had refrain them from looking at Anna when she got exploded.

Shekhar removes his mobile & tells TEAM that he should inform Mr. Bisht about the situation when Pratham stops him. He tells him not to call him. Shekahr: Kyun beta? Sir hum sab ki bohot madat kar payenge!” P: Nah karega Baba. Kyunki wahi sabse bada dhokebaaz hai!” “Kya??” All gets astonished after learning the truth. Pratham tells them that Deepak said Bisht is the person who helped Kuvz to get out of the cell. Purvi: Par Pratham woh aisa kyun kar rahe hai? Woh toh Paap ke bohot aache dost hai. Papa humesha mujhse unki taariff ki hai aur……”

Cutting her talk in between Pratham says: Purvi Bisht ne he tumhare Papa, Amar Sachdev ji ka murder kiya.” Learning the truth Purvi fells as if someone has pierced a sharp knife in her heart. Keeping a comforting hand on Purvi’s shoulder Anu says: Purvi Bisht ne kabhi bhi Amar uncle ko apna dost nahi mana. Uss insaan ko Uncle ka post chaheye tha; uncle ko pata chal gaya tha unki asliyat ke bare mein. Unhe pata chal gaya tha ki woh Kuvz ke saath milkar Human Trafficing, Drug & Arms Smuggling kar rahe hai.Woh Vaishnav devi kse lotkar aane ke baad unpar case karne wale the. Isliye ussne unhe …. Marr diya.”

Pratham gives Rohan the memory chip; Rohan inserts it in the laptop & a folder pops up into the screen. As Rohan clicks on the folder he sees a lot of videos, documents in it. He clicks on a video. The video opens & in that video they see Bisht & Kuvz talking. Kuvz is thanking him for the help. Kuvz threatens him that if he hadn’t helped he would have told Bisht name to TEAM. Bisht tells him he’ll always help Kuvz as he too hate Shekhar. Then Bisht thanks Kuvz how he had helped him to kill Amar. Watching this video Purvi couldn’t believe Bisht had backstabbed bed her father. After her father’s death she had always considered Bisht like her father; always believed in him. Purvi wipes her tears & says: Now it’s time to take revenge from backstabbers!”

Then later Suraj asks: Pratham tum sab toh Deepak ke ghar mein the na? Toh hospital mein kaise pohche?” Pratham says: Deepak ne kaha ki Kuvz tumhe maarne hospital aa raha hai. Isliye hum tum sab bachane aa gaye.” Priyu: Aur Deepak kaha hai?” Pratham, Tony, Vishal & Anu smirk at each other. This puzzles Priyu “ Kya hoa? Bolo na?” Vishal: Hum sab nikal rahe the tum Pratham ne current ka switch on rakh diya tha.” This stuns everyone. Tony: Ab tak toh usse dilblast hoo gaya hoga.” Priyu gives Pratham a shocked look. P looks at her & says: Priyu mere baacho ka sauda karne ki koshish ki the ussne” Looking at the bonfire he says: aise kaise chhod deta?” Priyu keeps her hand on his shoulder & hugs him tightly. Anu: Ab kya karna hai? Plan kya hai?” Shekhar: Pehle bacho ko safe jagah par chhodna hai.” Riya: Par kaha baba?” Purvi: Mere ghar mein.

*At Purvi’s bungalow*

Purvi’s house, actually Amar Sachdev’s house is a huge bungalow. By birth he was a very rich person. To enter politics & to help people was his main aim of his life. Purvi explains that as he was a politician he had made a lot of hidden rooms. He had told Purvi about these hidden doors so as to protect her. Purvi enter her father’s room. As she enters looking at photos, the awards, the achievement of her father, makes her nostalgic. Controlling herself she moves towards the huge mirror. On the above of the mirror two leafs are carved at the ends. She pressed one leaf on her left side & the mirror gets titled. The mirror is actually a door. Stunned after finding the mirror’s truth everyone enter the room. It is life a normal room with bathroom and toilet. Purvi explains them that they can see everything outside but no one can see inside the room. The room has speakers & even there isn’t any network problem. There are also electricity plugs here.

Pratham had bought many food stuffs & Bisleri bottles while coming. Shekhar tells Tony, Mansi will stay here with kids. Priyu bends on her knees & softly explains to stay with Mansi & Tony. Riya also explains Shubh not to trouble anyone. Kids nicely agree to it.Pratham says: Priyu tum bhi yaha raho.” Priyu in anger: Kyun?” Pratham softly replies: Kyunki tum pregnant hoo.” “Toh??? Pratham mujhe Kuvz se badla lena hai aur main lekar rahonge. Ussne mujhese mera baccha, mera parivaar cheena hai. Aur….” “Isliye keh raaha hoo. Woh janta ha iki tum pregnanat hoo aur woh tumhe aur hummare baacho ko haani poochayega. Isliye…” Priyu turns towards Shekhar & gives him pleading look. Feeling helpless Shekhar looks at Vishal. Vishal says: Pratham tu chinta mat kar. Main Priyu ko kuch nahi hone dunga. Promise!” Pratham looks at Vishal, Then at Shekhar & then Priyu. He shakes his head & walks out of the room.

*Bisht house*

After leaving Kids with Mansi & Tony TEAM move towards their next step of the plan. Pratham is still angry with Priyu. He knows Priyu’s feeling but cannot see her in danger again. To console Pratham Priyu holds Pratham’s hands& rests her head on his shoulder. Pratham too rests his head on her & holder her hands tightly in fear.

With the help of that memory chip Arjun finds that many TEAM members (other members) are also corrupted. Rohan has tracked that Bisht is in his house as he still doesn’t know that TEAM knows his true colors. He also finds that all those corrupted members of TEAM are also with Bisht. Shekhar stops the car behind the bushes; just few meters away from Bisht’s house. Shekhar had called other trusted TEAM members & did say them about Bisht’s true color. They promised him that they’ll give their lives for the motherland. They meet Shekhar on their way to Bisht’s house. They also learn that Kuvz is in Bisht’s house.

With the help of X-ray binocular which enables one to see through the walls so as to learn how many people are there in a building. Thus, TEAM learns that in that building total 25 people are there including Bisht & Kuvz, 2 at the gate, 5 in the garden, 5 in the hall, 1 in each of the 5 balcony, 5 in 1^st floor & 5 in Bisht’s room. With a gun Pratham smartly shoots a tiny bug which is like a small mosquito, in the Bisht’s room so as to hear the conversation between Bisht & Kuvz. They hear Kuvz is frustrated as he can’t find Priyu & the TEAM anywhere. They have vanished, puffed in thin air. Bisht tries to comfort Kuvz but Kuvz threatens Bisht that if he doesn’t find Priyu, he’ll destroy everything. “Bisht agar mujhe gussa aa gaya toh main poore shehar mein aag laga dunga! Samjhe??” Bisht still tries to console him but all in vain. Now after listening to this conversation TEAM plans their next move.

After few minutes Jignesh halts his car in front of the gate. The two people at the gate come towards the car & peep inside but get astonished to find Jignesh there. Jignesh says that he wants to see Bisht at once. They quickly inform Bisht that Jignesh is here & he wants to meet him urgently. Bisht tells him to send him in quickly. Kuvz hides himself in the bathroom. TEAM does see it through their binocular. Jignesh is connected with the TEAM through the small earphone which is not quietly visible. They keep on informing Jignesh about Kuvz’s position. The guards allow Jignesh to enter into the gate. As Jignesh enters the gate 2 of 5 guards come near Jignesh’s car & tell him to go to 2ndfloor into Bisht’s room. As Jignesh enters Bisht’s room Bisht asks: Jignesh kaha the tum? Aur baki sab kaha hai.”

Jignesh burst out crying & says: Sir! Sir mujhe bacha loo! Pata nahi Shekhar sir aur baki sab kaha hai. Main yaha waha bhatak raha hoo! Mujhe baachoo sir!” Bisht gets confused & asks: Par tum toh hospital se Suraj aur Mansi ke saath nikle the na??” “ Haa sir par Suraj aur Mansi toh raste mein he utar gaye aur fir pata nahi kaha chale gaye, kuch nahi pata sir!” Jignesh goes on crying while Bisht tries to comfort him. In cupboard Kuvz is getting more frustrated.

In the garage Jignesh’s car is parked by the 2 guards. AS they park & move towards the door of the garage Shekhar & Vishal place silencer on the gun & shoot them. These two men had hid in the dicky of Jignesh’s car as planned. Then they put the dead bodies in the dicky & then slowly move out the garage.

2 other Team members quickly shoot the 2 guards at the gate (with silencer of course) & then take their position. Slowly & steadily Shekhar & Vishal kill the other 3 men guarding the garden by stabbing, breaking the neck & shooting on head respectively. Then Vishal slowly climb one of the balconies with the help of a pipe; the guard doesn’t notice him while Vishal stands just behind him & breaks his neck. Then slowly they kill all the 3 guards on the 1^st floor balconies. Then they climb down in the hall holding one gun in both the hands & quickly shoot all 5 guards.

Here, Jignesh is crying so hard that even Bisht can’t control him. Outside, Purvi, Arjun, Riya, Rohan, & Suraj enter Bisht house. Priyu, Pratham & other members surround the house. TEAM knocks out the other 5 guards & enters Bisht’s room. Shekhar quickly moves towards the bathroom & smashes the door but gets stunned to find no one inside. Kuvz has already escaped from the window of the bathroom.

by **gauriandme** 11/7/2013, 9:27 pm

Purvi moves towards Bisht & slaps him so hard. She screeches out: KYUN!! Kyun kiya aapne aisa??” Maine aapko itna respect, papa ne aapko apna dost mana aur aapne hummare he peeth mein choora bhooka?? How??” She punches him hard & shouts: U back stabber!!” Bisht pushes her back & says: YES! I’M A BACKSTABBER! Mujhe paisa chaheye! Position chahe tha isliye maine tere baap ko maara. Par tumhe maine humesha apni beti mana hai. Humesha! Par ab mujhe apne aap ko bachana hai.” Saying this he removes his gun & shoots at Arjun but Purvi comes in middle & gets hit on her shoulder. In anger Arjun shoots on Bisht’s hand & starts punching & kicking him.
In the garden, after climbing down the bathroom window Kuvz runs towards the garage. When he heard the screech of the guards outside the room he realized that TEAM has arrived & thus to save himself he jumped out of the window. As he moves towards the garage Priyu shouts: Kuvar ji! Kaha ja rahe hai aap? Itne jaldi kaha bhaag rahe hoo?” Kuvz stops & turns towards the voice. He finds Priyu standing in front of him pointing her gun at him. She is wearing pink skirt & white loose top. He smiles & says: Tum bohot aache lag rahe hoo & by the way congrates! Tum phir se maa banana wali hoo! Par dukh ke baat yeh hai ki tum mere baacho ki maa nahi ban rahe ho.” Priyu smirks at him & says: Tum yaha se ab seedha jail jaoge.Bhool gaye ktumhari fhaasi hai!” “Priyu tum jitney baar mujhe pakdoge utne baar main bhaag jaunga! Samjhi?” Kuvz quickly kicks a stone towards Priyu’s stomach but Pratham jumps & catches it & throws it on Kuvz face, thus knocking him down. Kuvz tries to get up but Priyu shoots on his both legs & hands.

TEAM brings Bisht down where Priyu, Pratham & Kuvz are standing. Purvi then says to Bisht: Aaj main tumse aapna badla lene wali hoo! Saying this she removes on granite, open the key & puts the granite in his shirt & throw him away. Within 10 seconds Bisht explodes into pieces.Kuvz gets shocked afterseeing Bisht die. As he tries to run Priyu hits on his head& he falls unconscious.

by **gauriandme** 11/7/2013, 9:59 pm

*Afterfew mins*

Kuvz gets conscious but finds himself on a grassy land surrounded by tress. As he tries to get up he realizes his has been hit with bullets on both his hands & legs. The wounds are unbearable. He shouts in pain when Priyu says: Dard hoo raha hai??” Kuvz looks around & finds a Tata Winger standed few meters away from him. He is wearing a hearphone through which Priyu is talking with him. Priyu says: Saach kaha tumne, agar main tumhe jail le gaye toh tum fir bhaag jaoge. Isliye main tumhe yaha laye hoo. Apne left side me ek board hai usse padho.”

He looks at his left side & finds a board in which it was written “LION RESERVE. BEWARE” Reading it Kuvz gets so scared that he feels his heart will come out of his mouth. Soon he realizes1 lion & 6 lionesses have surrounded him. As he is injured the blood’s smeel pulled these wild creatures towards him. Priyu says smiling: Ab dekho kaise insane ke raja ka shikar jungle ka raja kaise karta hai.” Suddenly the wild creatures’ pounch on him & starts biting & ripping him hard. Their long & sharp tooth pierces his body. And slowly Kuvz dies. Tears starts flowing from Priyu’ s eyes. She says: Maine Niyati ko diya vada poura kiya. Aaj sabke aatmao ko shanty mil gaye!” TEAM gets very happy to see Kuvz dead.

Later Priyu shoots in air & listening to it lion & lionesses run away. Forest guards come & take away body of Kuvz. Luckily his face isn’t ruined. Later Bisht’s & other TEAM members true colors are releaved to the world by the TEAM.

EPILOGUE STILL REAMINING……….. 7 MONTHS LATER..

by **aanchal** 11/7/2013, 10:15 pm

read the first part.. very nice.. all family members r safe. pratham is also safe:cheers:.. very interestingly written usha Smile

by **aanchal** 11/7/2013, 10:33 pm

wat a huge update... will read rest tomorrow..

by **gauriandme** 12/7/2013, 11:10 am

*7 MONTHS LATER- Shimla- 7am*

Pratham is pacing in the corrider restlessly.Vishal, Rohan & Arjun are leaning against the wall while Riya & Anu, are sitting on right side while Purvi is sitting on the left side of Shekhar. He’s consoling them. At morning Priyu started getting labor pain.

*2 hours before- 5am*

Priyu pats on Pratham’s shoulder & whispers: Pratham! Pratham!” Pratham slowly opens his eyes & finds his better half looking at him anxious. He abruptly gets upp & asks: Kya hua??” “I think my water just broke..”, she replies innocently. Learning this he rushes towards the cupboard & removes a bag he had packed long agowhich has towels, clothes, ECT. Then he runs towards Priyu, make her stand & take her down in the hall. Rohan-Riya, Arjun-Purvi & Vishla & Anu live with Shekhar after their marriage, while Suraj & Mansi lve with Suraj’s dadi.

“Baba! Roha, Riya, Anu, Arjun! Sab aao!” All rush out of their room & as they see Priyu they realize its time they should move to hospital. Rohan calls Suraj & tells him to come home & look after kids. Suddenly Priyu yells out in pain which makes Rohan, Arjun & Vishal terrified:shock: . Hearing her loud painful yell they too start yelling like Priyu. Rohan crying: Yaar Arjun thode mahino baad toh humari wali bhi aise he chillayege na!” Arjun who is sobbing like a child says: Haa!” Vishal says tearing flowing from his eyes: Yaar mujhe bhi mat bhoolo na!” Looking at their reaction Riya, Ourvi & Anu roll their eyes in frustration while Priyu & Pratham give each otherpuzzled look. Anu: Oyee! Kya baacho ki tarah roo rahe hoo! Huh??” Turning towards Shekhar she continues: Baba aap jayege aur gaadi nikaliye hum sab aate hai.” Riya: Kya hua hai tum logo ko huh???” Priyu: Wahi toh dard mujhe hoo raha hai ro yeh log rahe hai.”

Suraj & Mansi stop their car in front oftheir house As they climb out they hear Vishal, Rohan & Arjun reaction which makes them burt out laughing. Vishal, Arjun & Rohan give them an annoyed look. Controlling their laugh Suraj says he & Mansi will stay here.

Rohan says innocently: Riya kuch maheno baad tum logo ko bhi pain shuru hoga na, isliyee ….” Riya cutting his sentence says: Mujhe jab pain hoga tab dekha jayega Pain mujhe hoga toh tum kyun ro rahe hoo??” “ Riya par darr toh lagta hai na…” “Rohan! Kya hum yeh sab baad mein discuss kar sakte hai?? Ab jaldi se bhabhi ko hospital mein admit karna hai.” Pusing him in front she says: Chaloo!!!!” As they move towards the car Pratham help Priyu in sitting inside the car. Here Arjun says: Purvi tum chinta mat karo huh main tumhare saath hoo huh.” Hearing this kind of kiddish behavior of Arjun Purvi gives him a shocked look with her mouth wide open. Vishal holdes Anu’s hand & says: Main bhi. Anu & Purvi hit them together & tell them to shut up:D .

Pratham, Priyu & Shekhar share a baffled look. Unable to control her pain Priyu shouts out: Areeeeeee!! Mujhe koi hospital le gaooo!!” Hearinging her shrieks, all quickly sit in thecar & Shekhar drive off towards the hospital.

*Now 7am*

It has been 2 hrs Priyu is in pain but delievery hasn’t happened yet. Priyu is yelling soo much which is giving more gossebump to Vishal, Arjun & Rohan. Their reactions are making their better halfs laugh. Abruptly they hear voice of a baby crying. A wave of happiness flows among them. The door of the maternity ward gets open & a gynec comes out holding a small cute baby, white as milk while his cheecks are pink like strawberries & big as apples. She says: Congratulation Mr. Malhotra! It’s a Baby Boy!” Listening to this good news Vishal, Arjun & Rohan start shouting. Jumping & hugging Pratham. PRathma holds his just born baby & smooches on his tiny forehead. The baby slowly opens his tiny little eyes & gives out a huge yawn. As he yawn his cheeks becomes pinker Embarassed

. This makes everyone happier.

Pratham says: Mam, kya mhum Priyu ko dekh sakte hai??” “Ya, sure.” He nods, gives the baby to Shekhar & runs into the room. It is a special individual ward. He findsPriyu lying on the bed, maybe tired after all this pressure & pain. He solely bends to & kisses on her forehead. She slowly opens her eyes & gives him a cute smile. Shekhar & others come in with the baby. Shekhar says to the baby: Loo bhi main phir se Nana ban gaye” KSissing on his cheeks he says: haa! Aapka Nana!”

Looking at this tears flows from her eyes. Shekhar hands over the bby to Vishal & moves towards her daughter. He wipes her tears & says: Na beta! Rote nahi! Aaj toh itna bada din hai! Hai na??” Priyu nods still sobbing & hugs his father tightly. Shekahr says patting her back: Thank you beta! Thank you soo much!” Priyu: Ayee hote toh….” Shekahr says looking at her: Ayee hai beta, hai, hummare dil mein.” Priyu nods & hugs him tightly.

Here TEAM is busy playing with their kids. Priyu says: TOh at last tum sab ka rona dhona band hoo gaya!” Vishal, Arjun & Rohan laugh out loud. Priyu says: chalo ab 7 months ke baad Anu, Purvi, Riya aur Mansi bhi hummse ek aise he toofha denge!” Everyone chuckle out.

Suddenly all kids run into the ward with Suraj & Mansi. Rohan gives the baby to Priyu. All kids peeps at the baby. Looking at the kids the baby keeps on staring at them. Piya slowly touches his soft cheecks & says: Mama! He’s sooo soft!” Priyu nods: Yes baby, He’s very soft. Just like u all.” Abhay says: Bua aab yeh hummare saath pakada pakadi khele ga na??” Pratham replies softly: Nahi beta: Ab yeh bohot chhota hai. Jab bada hoa na tumhari tarah tab khelega.”KArishma & Nehan bend & kiss him on his cheecks while Shubh says to Priyu: Mami! Main na isse apna aadha khana dunga.” All giggle out after listening to Shubh. Riya says: Beta! Abhi baby ke data nahi aaya hai, toh woh kaise khayega??” Shubh: Toh mamma woh kya khayega?” Rohan bends down on his knees & says: Woh abhi sirf Dudh piyega.Jab data gaayenge toh khayega! Samjhe?” Shubh nods.Vishal Asks: Waise hummare champ ka naam kya rakhne kya plan hai?” Priyu & Pratham look at each othr & say: Parth!”

After few months Anu gives birth to a baby girl & names her Sheetal, Purvi & Riya to a baby boy whom they name Amar & Yash respectively. Mansi gives birth to a baby girl & names her Shruti. Thus all live happily serving their country & taking care of their kids.

THE END

by **Gayathri** 27/7/2013, 11:14 pm

wahh usha ... awesome end .... I liked the way u got pratham back into the track ...
and the plot ka end awesome yar

by **gauriandme** 30/7/2013, 10:44 am

Thanks

by **aanchal** 24/8/2013, 8:30 pm

lovely ending usha.. Very Happy

by **gauriandme** 29/8/2013, 7:19 pm

by **Story 7 Writer** 17/9/2013, 11:31 pm

Beautiful end...interesting resolved. Good work usha Smile

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