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*triangular love story: 16*




*Recap*



1. Priyu tells everyone abt her pregnancy. They conduct DNA test & the result say tht the Pratham is the father of Priyu’s child.

2. They also come to know tht even Sanjana is excepting with 4months.

3. Hearing this news Saahil & Pratham r in 7th heaven.

4. Pari pinpoints Priyu saying tht she is a witch. She curses her.

5. Pratham getting very angry & slaps Pari & throws her out of his house.

6. This act of Pari hurts Priyu very badly.

7. He tries to console Priyu & finally succeeds.




*triangular love story: 16*


*shimla (Home)*


Priyu & Sanju was sleeping while P & Saahil were busy in kitchen making their favorites. After few mins Priyu & Sanju got up. They came down in the hall. They got amazed after knowing tht their husbands’ r making their favorite dishes. Sanju to Priyu: Priyu! Lagta hai aaj suraj purab se nahi balki pashchem (west) se ooga hai.” “Bilkul nahi”, a voice came from the kitchen door. It was Saahil who was holding a tray which had two bowls. Beside him was P who too had a tray full of food. They came near them & placed it in front of him while Sanju & Priyu peeped inside the tray. They had prepared Panner bhaji, chapatti, gulab jamun & Kachories. The aroma of the food was excellent. Sanju taking the aroma: mmmm….. Waise khushboo toh aacha aa raha hai.” Saahil took the tray & brought it in front of her & requested nicely: Toh kya aap khane ki kripa karengi??” Sanju said proudly: Of course!!! Kyun nahi???” She tasted the bhaji made by Saahil. Sanju said: Mmmm!! It’s Yummy!!” Saahil smiling: Thnks!!” P took the tray in front of Priyu. She took a piece of chapatti & dipped it in Methi Mutter Malaye. She tasted it & said: Woow! Yeh toh bohot tasty hai. Tumne kaisise shikha??” P smiled& said: Ma ne sikhaya. Its called METHI MUTTER MALAYE.” Sanju tasted it & said: Yummy!! Its wonderful!!” Even Priyu tastes Saahil’s food & said tht it was wonderful!! Later all had their lunch.


*AT EVENING*

At evening all were sitting in the hall. Dadu had called everyone. He anted to make an important announcement. He said: Ab 1-1 ½ mahine me Pratham aur Priyu ki shaddi hai. Toh maine yeh socha raha tha ki kyun na sare baccho ki shaddi ek saath kar doo??” Komu: Sare baccho ki??” Dadu nodded in +tive. Nihu said: Aur konse baccho ki shaddi ki baat kar rahe hai aap?? Dadu looked at Nishant & said: Tumhe kya lagta hai jab tak tum hum sab ko apni LOVER ke bare me nahi bataoge nahi toh mujhe samaj me nahi aayega??” Nishant acting innocently: Dadu! Aap kya keh rahe hai mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai?” Pulling his eyes he asked: Accha?? Kya ab bhi tumhe kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha hai??” Nishant screaming: aa.. Dadu.. Sorry!!” Everyone burst out laughing. Dadu said: Toh maine yeh decided kiya hai ki main tum baccho ki shaddi Pratham aur Priyu ke saath he kar de. Aryan ki Komal se, Nishant ki Nihu se, Yash ki Riya se aur Punit ki Disha se??? Kyun??” All smiled.

*Mumbai at 2am*

A man at his 30’s walked into a small office. It was a courier office. It was small & cosy. Bunch of papers were lying all over the place. He went at the reception. A woman at her 50’s was sitting who was sitting at the reception looked at him. The man spoke: Suraj Purab me ugta hai.” The woman nodded & gave him the card. He goes into a small room & standing in front of a wall. Outside the woman presses a green button under her desk. Suddenly the wall divides into half & slides towards its sides like a lift door, revealing a white room where everything was of white color. The man enters the room & the walls again close behind him. There in front of him was a reception desk & he saw a girl at her 20’s was sitting on the chair. He went towards her & gave her the card which the woman had given him. She smiles & opens the door.

The man enters the room. Now the room’s walls were made of thick glass. The door was voice proof. Many ppl were at their desk , buys doing their work. The man presses the lift button & when the lift door opens , he enters & presses BASEMENT button. The lift was spacious, had a camera, an attached coddless phone.

As the lift door opens he steps out & finds an iron door. He presses his palm on the screen beside the door. The screen identifies his palm prints & it displays ACCESS GRANTED & the door opens. The man enters the room & finds men with guns guarding the passage. They identified him & allowed him to enter the main room.

A man at his 50 was coming out of a glass room. He was the man entered the room & said: Aree Vishal! Tum toh kal subha aane wale the na?” Vishal (as Tarun Khanna): Haa sir. Par maine sunna humne uss godown ke supervisor ko jinda pakda hai?” The man at his 50’s nodded in +ve. Vishal: Sab bohot khush hai yeh khabar sunkar. Hum ne uss supervisor ke badle ek lawarise dead body chhod dee hai. Iss liye Kuvz ko pata bhi nahi chalega ki humne use ek aadmi ko pakda hai.” The man at his 50 nodded & says: VIshla tum kuch haath saaf kyun nhi kar lete uss supervisor par. Waise bhi tumhe dekhakar sabki heel jate hai.” Listening to this Vishal laughed & says: Yes sir! I would love to. He enters the room & after few mins the culprit shouts aloud in pain!


COMING UP NEXT WEEK:

1. Kuvz travel to Vasantpur.
2. Intro of MISSION KUVZ

wow usha.. interesting twist.. mission kuvz...very nice update.. thanks... update the nxt part soon...

Nice update usha...

Thanks

kya dhaasu entry di hai ... and amazing twists and the story lines toh wah wah ...
i m waiting to see what shall happen next ...
and indeed Priyu ke char ko u shaped it a li'll stronger and tat sounds great

Thanks Gaya

*TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: 21*


*MUMBAI 2 AM*
 TARUN KHANNA AS VISHAL SINGH
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Vishal entered the glass room which was an enquiry room. The walls were made of such glass that unable the insider to see outside the room but enabled the outside to see inside the room. Inside the room there was a long wooden table with 8 chairs. At the very end the culprit was tied to the chair. Vishal stood opposite him, the other end of the table, kept the files on the table. He looked at the corners of the room. 4 mini cameras were installed. There was also a speaker attached to the wall.
Vishal removed his grey coat & placed it properly on the chair. He loosened his black tie & sat the table next to the culprit. He folded his hands & observed the culprit. He says without any expression on his face: Maine tumse ek simple sawal puchta hoo. Tumhara naam kya hai?”The culprit looked at Vishal & smiled. He was at his 40’s, black, round face, fat with no hair. He says: Dekhlo ek sawal pucha hai. Toh ek he sawal puchana. Samjhe?” Vishal didn’t say anythg. He just observed him.
A girl, at her 20’s, enters the courier company & says to the receptionist: 362636.” The woman nods & gives her the card.

 SURVEEN CHAWLA AS ANU PATEL



After few mins another girl of same age enters & playfully walks towards the receptionists & smilingly says: I love chocolates!” The woman smiles & gives her the card.
 ASHA NEGI AS PURVI SACHDEV


Later two boys, who r of the same age, enters the office in a stylish manner, remove their ear phone & smile at the woman sitting at the receptionist.

 Rithvik Dhanjani as Arjun Chopra



 Karan Wahi as Rohan Chopra


Chewing their gums they say: Hi beautiful!” The woman glares at both of them & asks: PASSWORD!” They make sad faces & say: www.ARC.com. The woman gave them their cards & they headed towards the room sadly. Rohan rubbing his eyes says: Arjun yaar shez soo mean!!” Arjun sadly: I kn…” Rohan: Hum humesha use itne aache se baat karte hai aur woh hai ki khadus ki tarah mooh banate hai.”

They enter the white room & were stunned to see Anu & Purvi there. Anu & Purvi both were wearing formals, Anu in yellow shirt balck pant while Purvi in brown shirt black pant. Both the girls were giggling. Arjun’s eyes were stuck on Purvi, they way she was giggle, he thought that she’s like a small baby.

Purvi & Anu looked at them & smiled. Both wished the boy “Good Morning!” while boys wished them back. Purvi was Arjun staring at her & she smiled at him. Arjun who was busy watching Purvi placed his one leg upon another & falls down. Both the girls & Rohan help him to get up. Rohan: Yaar dekh kar chala kar, agar use dekhta rahega toh aise he girta rahega.” Arjun: Ha! Jaise t uteri wale ko dekh kar girta nahi hai!” Listening to this Anu & Purvi burst out laughg while Rohan makes a scowl face.

As they entered the Main Room the person at his 50’s comes towards him. They salute him & he salutes them back. Rohan: Sir hummare Mr. Punctual kidhar hai?” The man laughed & says: Enquiry room me.” The others nod & enter the room.

Vishal hears the door opening & turns to see all the 4 entering the room. Vishal greets them: Morning!” All smiled. Anu looked at Vishal while he tried to ignore her. This made her angry. Purvi, Arjun & Rohan learned it. Purvi: Kuch bola isne?” Visha nodding in –ve: Nahi.” Purvi: Toh khatirdari kare?” Vishal: Maine toh tum sab ka intazaar kar raha tha.” Turning towards Rohan he asks: Ready kar te hai.” Rohan nodded & he & Arjun placed a small suitcase on the table. Anu places another suitcase beside it & Purvi places a small wooden box on the table.

Vishal opened the suitcase which Arjun had placed. It wasn’t a suitcase; it was a Lie Detector Machine & wrapped the culprit’s hand with leather cover attached to the machine. The machine’s screen showed a a semicircle diagram. At the right angle the needle showed Neutral. To its Left it was in Green color & to its right it was Red color. Green indicated the Truth while Red indicated Lie. Vishal switched on the lie detector while Anu opened the other suitcase which she had placed on the table.

It was a Shock Machine. She plunged it to the electric switch. A head phone was attached to the shock machine; she placed in on the culprit’s head. Purvi opened the wooden box; it contained different tools which are used by police to torture the criminals. Arjun & Rohan opened their laptops. Purvi & Anu were standing on the right side beside Arjun & Rohan while on the left Vishal was sitting on the table.

Vishal looked at the culprit & says: Maine tumhe phir kheheta hoo. Humme information do hum tumhe kuch nhi karenge. Tumse puche hoe har sawaal ka sahi jawab do. Agar tumne galat jawab diya toh tumhe ek thappad aur current ke jhatke milenge.” Arjun: Aur ha agar tumne galat par galat jawab diya aur tumhe marte marte, current dete hoa agar tum amr gaaye toh…”

Culprit cutting in btwn: Tum sab mujhe maar nahi sakte.” Purvi: Aacha.. Aisa kyun?” Culprit: Kyunki main ek Sarkari mujrim hoo. Agar maine puchtach ke waqt mara gaya toh ..... (He looks at Purvi & smiles) tum par musibat aa jayege na jaan.”

Arjun boiled with anger but Purvi smilingly said: Par kya tumhe pata na CHACHA ki duniya ke liye tum maar gaye hoo! Humne tumhari jaga par ek lawaaris laash rakhi hai. Tumhare saath saath humne aur do logo ko bhi pakada hai. Toh ab hum tumhe maar bhi de toh, it doesn’t matter.” Listening to this the culprit started sweating. Anu: Toh ab humme sab kuch sach sach batao!” The culprit looked at them in confusion while Vishal started rubbing his forehead. He was gettg angry. Anu & Purvi looked at each other.
Still the culprit doesn’t utter a word & SUDDENLY Vishal slaps on the culprit’s face; so hard that all of his 5 finger’s mark was visible on the culprit’s cheek. Culprit started crying hard & says: Mera naam Ram Lal hai.”

BEEP! BEEP! The Lie Detector Machine started making noise & the needle moved towards right side, i.e. Lie side. It blinked its Red button. Vishal gives him a wicked smile & slaps him again, even harder. . Anu switches in the Shock machine & current passes through the culprit’s body. She keeps switching it On & Off again & again. The culprit remembers tht if he lies he’ll be more tortured.


Gulping he says: Mere naam ….Bheegu hai Sahab!” Now the needle moved towards the Left side, Truth side. Vishal looking at Arjun he repeats his name: Bheegu… kuch mila?” Arjun nodded & says: Ha.. Yeh insaan ka list toh bohot bada hai yaar! Chori, Murder, Molestation.. sab hai.” Vishal turned back at Bheegu & asks: Kya KUVZ ko kabhi dekha hai tumne?” Bheegu: Nahi sab, maine usske kabhi nahi dekha. Woh hummesha mobile par phone karke kaam bolta tha.” The needle now moved towards the Green side.
Vishal: Kya kaam karte hoot um uske liye?” Bheegu: Maine supervisor hoo Vasantpur ke aadee ka. Waha maine dekhta tha ki consignment barabar tayaar hoo rahe hai ya nahi, operation kaise jar aha hai…” He keeps on tellg about his work.
Vishal asks: KUVZ kaha hai?” Bheegu: Yahi hai sahab. Hindustan mein.” Rohan: Woh pata hai humme! Hindustan me woh kaha hai? Shimla??”
Purvi & Anu gets shocked. Both ask together: KYA??!!” Rohan: Ha, woh yahi hai. Khabar hai ki woh Shimla mein hai.” Purvi in a fearful tone asks: Shimla?” Rohan nods in +ve. Anu & Purvi look at each other in terror. Purvi: Par Shimla mein toh Priyanka hai! Toh..” Vishal cutting her in btwn: Relax. Sab thik hai.” Both girls give a sigh of relief.
Vishal looked at Bheegu & Bheegu says: Sahab mujhe nahi pata.” Green light blinked. Vishal asks: Baki ke godowns iss desh mein aur desh ke bahar kaha kaha hai?” Bheegu doesn’t answer. Bheegu looks at the Lie Detector, then at Vishal. Vishal understood tht Bheegu knew but didn’t want to speak abt it. Vishal shouted: BOLO!!!!!”

Vishal looks at Anu & she nods. Anu again passes the current& switches it off but still Bheegu doesnt say anything. Then Vishal looks at Purvi & Purvi nods. She goes near the wooden box & removes a tool & plucks out the nail of Bheegu’s right hand’s index finger. Bheegu screeches in pain & starts telling them abt the names, address & works taking place in tht godowns. Purvi removes one nail to get info abt each godown names.
Bheegu looks at them, totally tired & asks them for water. He tells them: Sir KUVZ Vasantpur jaroor aayega. Woh Hindustan yeh sab rokhne aaya hai. Apko woh Vasantpur me zaroor milega.”

*AT 3AM*

They come out of the glass room. Both girls run towards the man( whoz at his 50’s) & ask: Sir Priyanka kaise hai?? The man smiled & says: Sab thik hai baachhoo. Priyu ek dam thik hai. Raat ko usska phone aaya tha.Usne bataya ki KUVZ Shimla mein hai. Ussne Priyu ko phone kiya tha.” Both girls gives puzzled look to tht man. He continues: Woh use dara raha tha ki woh Pratham aur Piya ko maar dalega. Usse pata hai ki Priyu pregnanat hai; Par meri beti ne usse ulta dhamkaya ki agar ussne uske pati ya bachoo ko haath tak lagaya toh wohh khud usse maar dalege.” The man was none other than Shekhar Pradhan, Priyu’s father.

 BHUPENDRA SINGH AS SHEKHAR PRADHAN




Arjun: Sir suna aapne Bheegu kya keh raha tha? Usne kaha ki KUVZ humse darta hai! TEAM KUVZ se!!” The man laughed & nodded. He says: Janta hoo.”Rohan: Sir Abhi toh usski aur hava tight karne hai humme. Aur sir agar aap hummare head hai toh phir toh hummare jeet pakki hai.” Listening to this all laughed. Priyu’s father is actually the head of TEAM KUVZ. Shekhar: So team! Vasantpur jane ki tayaari kar do.”
Suddenly Shekhar’s phone rings. He picks up & asks: Hello?” On the other end: Suniye, aap aa rahe hai na? Aaj shraadh hai.” Listeng to this Shekhar feels as if someone has pierced knife into his heart. Controlling himself he answers: Haa.. Maine aata hoo.”

*SHIMLA, AT 10AM*

Kuvar, Rishi& Niyati climb down the car. Niyati had consulted a pandit so as to erase problems from her life. So tht pandit had said her to do a small puja of Goddess Ganesh so as to get rid of her problems. After convening K, which wasn’t tht easy, they had headed towards the temple. Rishi had helped Niyati in convincing K.
As they climb up the 21 stairs of the temple K says: Mujhe yeh pata nhi chalta hai kit um uss pandit ki andhavishwaas batoo par kaise vishwas karti hoo?? Aur Rishu tum bhi??!! Tum bhi iss Niyati ki madat kar rahe ho??” Rishi says: Bhai, thode der agar aap mandir chalet hai toh usme kya buraye hai. Plz bhai! Behes mat karo.” K nods in –ve & climbs up the stairs. When they reach outside the temple, they remove their shoes.
K looks in front of him & gets shocked to look at Priyu & her whole family. They all were wearing white dress. Pratham & other got up; it was understood tht P was performing the puja. He was holding a leaf in which food were placed. As they move towards left to give is it to the crows K saw a line of photos were placed with garlands on them. The photos were of Pratham’s Dad & Mom, Priyu’s mom Sumi, Pratham’s brothers Aryan, Nitesh, Yash, Punit & Priyu’s borther Saahil & sisters Komal, Niharika & Disha, Sanjana & Priyu’s chacha & Chachi. Even P’s Dada & Dadi who were also Priyu’s Nana & Nani’s photos were there.

Priyanka was playing with Piya & other 5 kids, 3girls & 2 boys. Pandit asks the kids to take blessing from their Mom & Dad. Priyu takes hand of a boy & tells: Abhay jao, mumma papa ke blessings lo.” The boy goes near to Saahil & Sanju’s photo & takes blessing. Then Priyu asks a cute girl: Karishma jao bacha.” The girls goes towards Komal & Aryan’s photo. “Neha..” Another girl goes towards Niharika & Nitesh’s photo to take blessing. While another girl goes towards Punit & Disha’s photo to take blessing. Looking at the girl Priyu says: Good girl Dhara! Aao idhar.” Suddenly Priyu starts searching someone. Behind her she finds a cute golu molu boy with a sad face. Priyu slowly bends on her knees & asks: Kya hoa Shubh?” The boy innocently replies: Maine aaj extra chocolates khaye. Mumma ne mana kiya toh khane se par maine kha liya, toh Papa mujhe naraj honge na…”

Listeng to this Priyu’s eyes turned watery. Controlling herself she replies softly: Mahi baccha, aap Papa se aur Mumma se Sorry khe dena. Phir Papa aapse naraj nahi honge..” Listening to this the boy smiles & asks: Saachee???” Priyu laughs replies: Muchieee!” The boy runs towards Yash’s photo & holding his ears he says: Sorry Papa..” & then runs towards a girl & says: Sorry Mumma!” The girl bends on her knees & hugs him tightly. She crys & says: Its ok bacha.” Priyu goes near the girl & says: Riya! Plzz rona mat, warna Shubh bhi royega.” Removing her tears off her face she smiles & says to Priyu: Maine nahi rounge Bhabhi..” Priyu smiles & when she turns she gets perplexed to see K there.

She goes towards him & smiled: Aree aap sab… yaha?” Niyati: Haa woh hum sab yaha Ganesh ji ki puja ke liye aaye the.” Priyu: Ohh..” K’s eyes were fixed on the photos. K: Yeh sab kaise hoo gaya????” Priyu turned towards the photo & says: Accident mein. Hum sab Vaishno Devi ja rahe the. Tabhi humare saath ek MLA bhi the.”
Turning towards K she asks: Aapko pata hai Vaishno Devi ke raste par ek bas khaye mein gir gaye the jisme ek MLA bhi tha?” K nodded in +ve. Priyu continues: Uss Bus mein yeh sab bhi the. Ek Gangster Shiekh ne Bus ke breaks fail kar diye the. Humsab dusre bus mein the. Aur aachanak hummare aankho ke samne pura bus khaye mein gir gaya. Koi nhi baacha. Aayee, Maa, Pappa, Dada, Dadi.. Koi nahi. Aur…”
B4 she cud continued she sees Shekar standing near the wall fence. The temple was in the mountain. He was standing near the edge. He was engrossed in his thought. She knew he was remembering the moments he had spent with his wife, brother & his children. He was feeling as if all his energy, all his happiness has drained out.
Priyu goes near him & asks: Baba?” Shekhar turns towards her & she hugs him. Tears pour from both of their eyes. Shekhar sees K there & he goes near him. When he comes close to K he suddenly collapses.
“SIR!!!” Kuvar hears screech of few people. When he turns around he sees group of 5 ppl come towards Shekhar & holds him. P & Riya run towards him. Vishal to P: Pratham chair le aa.” P nods & brings a chair. Riya helps Shekhar to drink some water. When he turns normal he learns tht all his kids (including TEAM KUVZ) were crying. Shekhar smiles & tells him to relax. Rohan crying: Sir aap plzzz depress na hoo. Plzzz!!! Shekhar nods in +ve. Shekhar sees K & greets him. K says: Sorry sir mujhe pata nahi tha..” Shekhar: Its ok Kuvar. Kaise hoo?” K: Thik hoo Sir.” Shekhar also greets Niyati & Rishi & congrates Niyati abt her pregnancy.
Later Shekhar was paying pandit money. K looking at Vishal, Rohan, Arjun, Anu & Purvi asks: Yeh sab aapke Baba ke kon hai?” Priyusmiles & says: Yeh mere Baba ke students hai. (Looking at the photos) In sab ke jane ke baad, yeh 5 hum sabke family member hoo gaye hai. Vishal comes towards Priyu & says: Priyu thik hai na tu?” Priyu smiled & nodded. She introduces K to Vishal & others. She says: Kuvar ji yeh sab officers hai.” Listeng to this K gets shocked!!!

COMING UP NEXT:
1. Rohan falls for….. ( GUESS )
2. K & TEAM KUVZ came face to face & even have dinner together :O
3. Visit to Vasantpur of K & TEAM KUVZ

I find dat lie detector wala part interesting the way u wrote, the whole picture was happening infront of me...nice episode!

interesting update usha... the whole family died.. that's so sad..

THANK U ! U kn I was eagerly waitg to kn ur comments ... Yes aanchal story mein agar saddness na hoo toh mazza nahi ata hai & did u like the new characters???

awesome update usha .
The way u introduced characters and priyu's dad ...

caricature of each character is amazing ...and it fits perfectly ...

Thank U for the lovely comment Gaya

gauriandme wrote:THANK U ! U kn I was eagerly waitg to kn ur comments ... Yes aanchal story mein agar saddness na hoo toh mazza nahi ata hai & did u like the new characters???

ya right.. thoda sadness to hona hi chahiye.. & probably this is the reason behind change in priyanka's attitude.. yes i liked the new characters...ur choice of actors is also perfect

lazzeez dinner ka menu padhke to mooh mein paani agaya ...
Usha amazing episode ...

K ka aankh to Priyu par hai .. ummm wonder P ko pata chala to khair nahi..
Finally families ka disclose hua ..

I m waiting for the next to know who kills anu

The way rohan replied was cool...liked dat part. Iam soo waiting fr d next episode...

sorry for the late reply usha...very interesting update.. the story is building its pace..

Thanks for the comments .. Its ok, no probs