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by **gauriandme** 14/4/2011, 8:33 pm

First topic message reminder :

*triangular love story: 16*

*Recap*

1. Priyu tells everyone abt her pregnancy. They conduct DNA test & the result say tht the Pratham is the father of Priyu’s child.

2. They also come to know tht even Sanjana is excepting with 4months.

3. Hearing this news Saahil & Pratham r in 7th heaven.

4. Pari pinpoints Priyu saying tht she is a witch. She curses her.

5. Pratham getting very angry & slaps Pari & throws her out of his house.

6. This act of Pari hurts Priyu very badly.

7. He tries to console Priyu & finally succeeds.

*triangular love story: 16*

*shimla (Home)*

Priyu & Sanju was sleeping while P & Saahil were busy in kitchen making their favorites. After few mins Priyu & Sanju got up. They came down in the hall. They got amazed after knowing tht their husbands’ r making their favorite dishes. Sanju to Priyu: Priyu! Lagta hai aaj suraj purab se nahi balki pashchem (west) se ooga hai.” “Bilkul nahi”, a voice came from the kitchen door. It was Saahil who was holding a tray which had two bowls. Beside him was P who too had a tray full of food. They came near them & placed it in front of him while Sanju & Priyu peeped inside the tray. They had prepared Panner bhaji, chapatti, gulab jamun & Kachories. The aroma of the food was excellent. Sanju taking the aroma: mmmm….. Waise khushboo toh aacha aa raha hai.” Saahil took the tray & brought it in front of her & requested nicely: Toh kya aap khane ki kripa karengi??” Sanju said proudly: Of course!!! Kyun nahi???” She tasted the bhaji made by Saahil. Sanju said: Mmmm!! It’s Yummy!!” Saahil smiling: Thnks!!” P took the tray in front of Priyu. She took a piece of chapatti & dipped it in Methi Mutter Malaye. She tasted it & said: Woow! Yeh toh bohot tasty hai. Tumne kaisise shikha??” P smiled& said: Ma ne sikhaya. Its called METHI MUTTER MALAYE.” Sanju tasted it & said: Yummy!! Its wonderful!!” Even Priyu tastes Saahil’s food & said tht it was wonderful!! Later all had their lunch.

*AT EVENING*

At evening all were sitting in the hall. Dadu had called everyone. He anted to make an important announcement. He said: Ab 1-1 ½ mahine me Pratham aur Priyu ki shaddi hai. Toh maine yeh socha raha tha ki kyun na sare baccho ki shaddi ek saath kar doo??” Komu: Sare baccho ki??” Dadu nodded in +tive. Nihu said: Aur konse baccho ki shaddi ki baat kar rahe hai aap?? Dadu looked at Nishant & said: Tumhe kya lagta hai jab tak tum hum sab ko apni LOVER ke bare me nahi bataoge nahi toh mujhe samaj me nahi aayega??” Nishant acting innocently: Dadu! Aap kya keh rahe hai mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai?” Pulling his eyes he asked: Accha?? Kya ab bhi tumhe kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha hai??” Nishant screaming: aa.. Dadu.. Sorry!!” Everyone burst out laughing. Dadu said: Toh maine yeh decided kiya hai ki main tum baccho ki shaddi Pratham aur Priyu ke saath he kar de. Aryan ki Komal se, Nishant ki Nihu se, Yash ki Riya se aur Punit ki Disha se??? Kyun??” All smiled.

by **gauriandme** 25/1/2013, 8:49 pm

*Vasantpur*

Vishal & his team step out of the airport of Ahmedabad. A Black Scorpio was standing on the road with a man in black suite & black goggles. He is white, average height & little stout. The man moves towards them & shaking hands with everyone he introduces himself. He says: Good morning Sir! Mera naam Jignesh Patil hai. Main sub-inspector hoo.” Vishal & others wish him back. Jignesh continues: Sir… (ignoring Vishal) Ek.. buri khabar hai.” Vishal gives him asuspicious look while Arjun & Yash give each other a blank look. Anu: Kya buri khabar hai?” Jignesh doesn’t reply. Purvi: aree! Batao!” Turning his back he says: Sir woh jo ek insaan zinda tha woh kal raat maar gaya.” Vishal & others shout together: KYA!!!”

One informer had told Team that one person had survived in Vasantpur Godown Attack. His name was Umesh. So Team wanted to investigate this survivor. But now with this survivor dead The Team wondered how they will catch hold of Kuvz.

Vishal turns Jignesh to face him & asks: Yeh kaise hoa? Tum logo ne toh kaha tha ki woh thik hoo raha hai. Ab achanak kaise maar gaya?” Jignesh: Pata nahi sir…” Anu: Toh PATA LAGAO! Postmortem karo uska.” Jignesh nods & says: Madam body ko bhej diya hai postmortem karne. Thode deer maine result aa jayega.” Anu nods. Vishal says: Chalo.”

Vasantpur was just 5km away from Ahmedabad. Arjun: Vishal mujhe lagta hai ki kuch gadbad hai. Woh insaan aise kise maar gaya?” Vishal: haa.. mujhe bhi kuch aisa he lag raha hai. As they reach the cottage where they were asked to stay Jignesh receives a call from Forensic doctor to give info abt the postmortem report. Arjun’s suspicion gets true. The report says that tht survivor Umesh dead bcoz of choking of his wind pipe. From his lips thread fabric of pillow is found. That means Umesh was killed by pressing pillow on his face which choked his windpipe.

Purvi: Kuvz ko pata chal gaya hoga ki ek insaan zinda hai. Isliye usne apne aadmi bheje hone Umesh ko marne ke liye.” Vishal nods. He says: Arjun tum, rohan aur Purvi cottage me jao. Main, Anu aur Jignesh hospital jakar aate hai. Thik hai?” Arjun, Rohan & Purvi nod while others drive off towards the hospital.

*Hospital*

After investigating the doctors & the staff of the hospital, Team learns that the killer might have come in a disguise of a doctor. Umesh was also guarded by 2 local Police constables. Jignesh shouted at them saying how they can be so careless. One constable also says that the killer was wearing yellow shirt & black pants. He couldn’t see his face as the killer had covered it with doctor mask. The constable explained that the patient was half burnt so his was kept in burnt ward. So ppl were asked to enter the ward by covering the body. This helped the killer to hide his face.

After investigating everyone, Vishal, Anu & Jignesh move out of the hospital Vishal notices a petrol pump standing on the opposite side of the hospital. Something on the roof of the petrol pump catches Vishal’s eye; a surveillance camera. A wide grin appears on his face. He looks at Anu & learns that even she had noticed the camera.

*After 15 mins*

Vishal had called Arjun, Rohan & Purvi & they all enter the petrol pump. After introducing themselves as Police Officers Arjun asks the pump owner: Apka jo yeh surveillance camera hai kya woh chal raha hai?” The owner: Jee sahib.” Arjun: Kya do din pehele camera chal raha tha?” Owner: Jee haa.” Arjun: Kya kal raat ko yeh camera chal raha tha?” Owner: Haa chal raha tha.” Arjun & Rohan together: Gr8!”
They both start working on the petrol pump computer. Arjun copies the videos of last two days till Vishal & others entered the hospital into a pendrive. After tht Vishal & Anu ask the owner & staff of the pump whether they had seen any fishy last night near the hospital. To everyone’s surprise no one had seen anything suspicious.

*Cottage at Vasantpur*

Rohan plays the video when Umesh was taken to the hospital. They didn’t find anything fishy. Then they play last night’s video when Umesh was found dead. At 12.00am they see a Fiat car halting in front of the hospital. A person wearing yellow shirt & black pant climbs down the car. He wears the doctor mask covering his face. Jignesh says: sir yeh toh Sharp shooter hai! Peter D’souza!” Jignesh calls his best informer to the cottage.

Learning this Vishal calls the constable who had seen the murderer. The constable recognizes him from his shirt & pants. Purvi notices something on the video & says: Vishal dekho gaadi ka number! Rohan kya tum thoda zoom karoge?” Rohan nods. After zooming the number of the car was quite visible. Vishal tells Jignesh to call RTO & ask info abt this car.

After few mins Jignesh gets the info abt the car & also his informer comes. Jignesh asks: Sunil kyat um jante hoo Peter D’souza kaha hai?” Sunil: Haa sab. Suna hai ki woh kal subha Juna chawl mein aane wala hai. Suna hai ki ussne bohot bada haath mara hai. Bohot paise wala ho gaya hai.” Vishal asks Jignesh why he didn’t arrest Peter if he was soo dangerous. Jignesh explains him tht Peter is very smart & slips away from their hand every time. Vishal says: Iss baar woh bhaag nahi payega!”

by **gauriandme** 25/1/2013, 8:53 pm

*Next Morning*

The team along with Jignesh & Sunil enters the Juna chawl in disguise. Purvi disguise herself as a Bhaje wali, Anu as Phool wali, Vishal & Jignesh as old people & Arjun, Rohan & Sunil as goons who r standing near a Bidi shop. The chawl was a 3 store building.

The same fiat car which Team had seen in the video came to a halt in front of the Bidi Shop. A man of 7 feet, dark & muscular climbs down the car along with other goons, one stout & other thin & skinny.

Vishal & Jignesh go near to Peter & Vishal says: Kya Peter bhai! Suna hai bohot paise kama raha hai?” Peter turns towards Vishal & asks: Tu kon hai be???” Vishal smirks & asks: Tera baap!!” Saying this he punches Peter hard on his nose.

The two persons accompanied with Peter jump on Vishal & Jignesh. To protect them Arjun & Rohan jump on the stout & thin men. Other goons from the chawl run towards Peter to help. Now Anu & Purvi start kicking & punching the goons. Suddenly from the chawl side gun shots are targeted towards The Team.

The Team hide themselves. Vishal & Jignesh hide behind a truck; Arjun & Rohan hide behind the bidi shop while Anu & Purvi hide behind a wall. The Team counter attack at the goons. Anu & Purvi fire towards west side; Arjun & Rohan fire in north side while Vishal & Jignesh shot towards east side.

Vishal tells Arjun & Rohan to enter the building & he & Jignesh will protect them. Slowly Arjun & Rohan enter the building. Hitting every goon Arjun & Rohan make their way up. Vishal signal Anu & Purvi to follow Arjun & Rohan into the building. A goon shoots on Jignesh’s right arm but he doesn’t give up. He wrapping his wound with his hanky & continues with his firing. The Team is so highly trained that it was only one or two instances when their bullets didn’t hit the target. They alone were enough wipe out thousand of goons. Arjun, Purvi, Rohan & Anu, within few mins wipe off every single goon & take over the building.

After long & continuous shootout, The Team kills everyone except Peter. Down Vishal was still firing at Peter & his two men. From the top Arjun tries to aim at Peter, but he wasn’t able to locate him. But he kills Peter’s men. Slowly at each fire Vishal goes near to Peter. Sensing the trouble Peter aims towards Truck’s petrol section & fires. Realizing where Peter is aiming, Jignesh & Vishal run away from the truck & the truck blasts. Peter curses himself for aiming wrong & runs away. Vishal tries to follow but a car comes in front of Peter & Peter enters into it & the car drives off.

*After half an hour*

The team is checking whether anyone was alive. Anu comes towards Vishal & says: Vishal koi nahi bacha hai! Peter bhi bhaag gaya. Ab kya kare?” Vishal gives Anu a sad look. Jignesh is sent to the hospital. Arjun & Rohan are checking the building. They learn that the building was actually a gun godown.

The main road is just beside the chawl building. The traffic was increasing minute by minute. 2 constables try to control the jam. A person come towards Vishal & says: Hello.” Vishal turns & look at the man. He gets surprised to see Kuvar there. Vishal asks: Aree Kuvar Mahindra ji aap? Yaha? Aap toh Delhi me gaye the na”

Kuvar: Jee ha. Par humari meeting Baroda shift hoo gaye hai. Toh hum sab baroda ja rahe the par yeh traffic me atak jaye hai. Aap yaha?” Vishal: Woh yaha kuch kaam tham. Isliye aaye hai.” Kuvar: Ohh ok. Toh Kya aap meri madat karenge iss traffic se bahar nikalne mein?”
Vishal smiles & nods at him. He tells the constable to help Kuvar. Kuvar looking at the team & giving a huge grin says: Good-Bye!” The team smiles back.

*At Cottage*

The team is sitting in the balcony wondering what they should do to grab Peter. Anu brings tea while Purvi bring biscuits for everyone. Arjun & Rohan are searching more info abt Peter; his lifestyle, his friends, work, ECT. . Anu sees something weird on Vishal’s body. A red spot; it moving around his body. Suddenly Vishal’s mobile rings; he picks the call. From the other side a man says: Good Bye!!!!”
Anu gets still, she realizes tht the red spot is laser light. She jumps on Vishal & suddenly a bullet hits her back & blood spills on Vishal! More bullets r fired towards the Team.

Coming Up Next:

1. Priyu learns abt K’s secret!
2. K KILLS PRATHAM & KIDNAPS PRIYU.
3. K KILLS THE TEAM INCLUDING PRIYU’S FATHER.

by **Story 7 Writer** 26/1/2013, 7:28 pm

most shocking episodes everrr!

lets hope k wont kill priyu...

by **Gayathri** 26/1/2013, 11:55 pm

Its really very interesting episode usha ...and the story has really reached its summit in a well prepared way Smile

I m now keen to read how and what will priyu do to escape ?
Will she know Pratham Died and how will she react to it

by **gauriandme** 27/1/2013, 6:03 pm

Thank u for such a supportive comment gaya Very Happy

by **aanchal** 31/1/2013, 5:00 pm

wow..gr8 episode..full of twists n turns.. hope anu is out of danger..

but i hope pratham isn't killed. Rolling Eyes

by **gauriandme** 31/1/2013, 6:12 pm

Thanks aanchal Very Happy

by **Gayathri** 1/2/2013, 7:36 pm

I think pratham ka marna plan ka ek hissa hai .. Smile

looking forward to read it Very Happy

by **gauriandme** 27/2/2013, 9:48 pm

]*TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: 24*[/size]

*Cottage*
The Team run into the cottage & cover themselves behind the wooden wall. Vishal carries Anu & take her inside. He slowly places her on the floor & gives her a concern look. Purvi helps Anu to lean on the wall. Anu looks at Vishal & forwards her hand & asks: Gun do mujhe Vishal.” Vishal nods in –ve & says: Tumhe goli lagi hai. Tum…...” Anu cutting his sentence says: Vishal tum bhool rahe hoo ki main eek officer hoo! Humne kabhi bhi haar manana nahi sikha hai. I don’t care that I hav been hit by a bullet. A small cheap bullet can’t stop me performing my duties! So now give me the gun!” Vishal smiles at her & hands her a small gun.

Nonstop bullets are fired towards the cottage. The bullets had hit the windows & the broken glasses are lying on the floor. Even the mirror glass is broken Rohan picks up a huge piece of broken mirror glass & slowly tilts the mirror to see the reflection of outside. They see 2 men are moving forwards towards the cottage. Rohan looks at Arjun & both nod to each other. They suddenly tilt towards their right facing towards the men & Rohan shoots at the first men while Arjun shoots the second.
Slowly more Peter’s men come close to the cottage. Purvi keeps up another piece of mirror & starts shooting the men. Anu tries to get up but Vishal stops her. Vishal: Maine tumhe gun sirf emergency ke liye diya tha. Toh ab tum baithe raho, plz!” Anu looks up at Purvi 7 says: Yaar mujhe bohot gussa aa raha hai! Mujhe shoot karna hai!” Purvi sits beside Anu & says: Tu chinta na kar, teri taraf se maine maar deti hoo.” Anu in a choked voice says: Gr8!”

Arjun & Rohan are hidden behind the wall beside Vishal. Rohan Arjun looks at Vishal & asks: Ab kya kare? Yeh log toh badte he ja rahe hai” Vishal removes his mobile & dials Jignesh’s number. Vishal carries Anu & moves towards the back door while Purvi, Arjun & Rohan follow him. As Vishal moves out of the door a man comes running towards him. Anu points & shoots at tht man. Purvi, Arjun & Rohan who were following Vishal run towards him. Peter shoots at the gas cylinder & the whole cottage blows up.

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Within few mins a troop of police officers arrive near the cottage to defend the Team. The officers kill all Peter’s men except him. Again he is able to run away from the spot.

Suddenly Anu falls unconscious. Vishal shouts: Anu! Aankhe kholo plzz! Listen to me! Please!!!” Purvi bends towards Vishal & checks Anu’s pulse. Arjun & Rohan sit beside Vishal on either side while other officers surround him. Purvi gets pleased & says: Vishal Anu zinda hai! Bas unconscious hai.” Vishal gives Anu a blank look while Purvi nods in +ve & smiles. A helicopter lands in front of the burnt cottage. 2 men climb down the copter & remove a stretcher. Vishal carries & places Anu on the stretcher. His shirt was drenched in Anu’s blood. The stretcher is placed into the copter & the Team sit beside the stretcher. The fans of the copter now start spinning faster & faster & the copter is lifts from the ground.

*At the same time in Orange Hotel*
Kuvar is pacing in his room. He wonders how he can be such a fool. He didn’t even bother that the Team is formed by Shekhar himself. He talked, walked & ate dinner with those 5 people who are responsible for killings of his men. Umesh’s last words start ringing in his ears.

~FLASHBACK~
At 12am Fiat Car halts in front of the hospital. A man of 7 feet, dark & muscular climbs down the car & enters the hospital. He is wearing a white coat with a mask. He enters Umesh’s room & asks: Umesh kaise hoo?” Umesh who is resting on the bed, half burnt, slowly opens his eyes. Even though with his injury he would see very little, he does recognize Peter. Umesh smiles & says in a low voice: Peter bhai! Main thik hoo. Aap kaise hoo?” Peter smiles & says: Main thik hoo.” Peter & Umesh had been working for long time.
K who was sitting in the car outside the hospital was watchg this whole incident in his tablet along with Rishi. Peter was wearing a small wireless camera in his shirt. Peter continues: Kya tumne dekh woh log jinhone godown mein aag lagaye woh log kon the?” Umesh: Haa bhai. Dekha maine.”
Listening to this K’s eyes widens. Peter bends down & asks: Kon the woh?” Umesh says: Paanch log the, unme se ek ladkiya thi.” Hearing this K & Rishi give each other a astound look. Umesh continued: Yeh ladki ka haath maine pakda tha. Aur achanak uske haat se gloves nikal gaya. Maine dekh ki usne apne ungli mein ek ring anguthi pehene thi jispar sanskirt mein Om likha tha hiro se. Maine use pakadne ki koshish ki par woh bhag gayi.”

by **gauriandme** 27/2/2013, 9:49 pm

K wondered that he had seen tht ring somewhere. But he couldn’t remember where he had seen it. He starts scanning his memories; London…Vasantpur, Jodhpur… & then Shimla. Suddenly an image came in front of him. Now he knew where he had seen it. He had seen it on Purvi’s finger last night while having dinner. Slowly he understands that The Team includes non other than Vishal, Anu, Purvi, Arjun & Rohan; Shekhar is the head of the Team. K’s blood boils in angry. Even Priyu must be knowing abt it. How canPriyu do such thing to him? He instructs Peter to kill Umesh.
Peter agrees & looks at Umesh & says: Sorry par agar tum bach gaye toh tum humare liye khatra hai.” Umesh gives him a confused look. Peter picks up a pillow lying on the couch & suffocates Umesh to death.
~FLASHBACK ENDS~

Someone knocks the room door. K looks at Rishi who was sitting on the couch; indirectly tellg him to open the door. Rishi nods & moves towards the door & opens it. A guy; small & thin; enters the room & lowering his head he says: Hookum! (in her terrified tone he continues) Kaam nhi ho saka. Police ki force waha aa gaye.” K tries to control his angry by tightening his fist. He says: Koi baat nahi. Mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna hai.” Saying this abruptly he removes the sword placed on the wall & beheads the guy. The guy’s head rolled towards Rishi while his body is lying in the pool of blood. K says: Thik issi tarah un logo ka sar dhad se alag kar dunga main.” K gives a malicious smile to Rishi.

*At the same time*

Team is taking Anu to hospital in Baroda. They are sitting in a copter. Vishal is holding Anu’s hand; his eyes r stuck on her. Tears started flowing from his eyes. This state of Vishal made other 3 stunned.

*Next day*

She opens her eyes finding herself in a huge hospital room. She feels someone’s hand holding her hand. She slowly moves her head & looks that the person. She gets astound to see Vishal who us sitting in the chair but resting his head on the edge of the bed. She couldn’t believe her eyes. She remembers how Vishal reacted when she was hit by the bullet. Vishal had always ignored her, her feelings. But now he has started givng her some attention.

At the same time Purvi opens the door & watches Anu wake. Both give each other a huge warm smile. Anu looks at Vishal & then at Purvi giving her a cut happy smile. Looking at Vishal Purvi giggles. Anu slowly tries to get up but this makes Vishal conscious. Purvi hides behind the wall so as to avoid Vishal knowing abt her presence. Vishal looks ta Anu & says: Mujhe uthana chaheye than a! Tum mat helo.” Anu slows nods. He continues: Luckily tumhe bullet left shoulder par laga hai.”. Vishal helps her to sit properly. Anu says: Tum yaha raat bhar the?” Vishal becomes still & looks at Anu & both get engrossed in each other’s eyes.

Arjun & Rohan move out of their room & walk towards Anu’s room. They come to a standstill as they see Purvi peeping into the room & giggling. Tie toed Arjun & Rohan go towards Purvi & slowly pat on her shoulder. Purvi looks behind & find Arjun & Rohan giving her a puzzled look. She giggles & gesture them to peep inside the room. Looking at Anu & Vishal lost in each other all laugh start giggling.
Coming to senses he hears some giggles. He looks back & gets embarrassed that all three had seen it. He takes deep breath & says: Purvi tum Anu ki madat karo. Arjun, Rohan tum mere saath chalo.” All 3 agree.

*After few days*

Shekhar had said Pratham, Priyu & Riya abt Anu’s injury but advised them not to contact the Team so as to protect them from Kuvz. He also said that the Team has been shifted to Mumbai for precautionary reasons. From last few days Priyu was so anxious abt Anu’s health. She wanted to meet her but wasn’t able to.
At night, she is standing near the window, deep in thoughts. She is wearing a yellow sari with orange strip. Her hair is lossely tied. Pratham comes towards her & holds her from the back. Coming back to senses she looks back at Pratham. Pratham turns her facing him & slowly leans her against the wall. Both look at each other. He holds her hand & asks: Anu ke liye pareshaan hoo?” She slowly nods.

He starts kissing her finger individually. Slowly he comes near to her & hugs her. She hugs him tightly; tears starts flowing from her eyes. He pats on her shoulder & says: Relax.” She looks at him & he nods. She too nods. He wipes her tears & touches her soft cheeks. Both look at each other. He slowly comes close to her & opens up her hair. He whispers: Dose do? Relax hone ka?” Listening to this she giggles. He kisses her right ear & slowly & softly starts kissing her neck. Then he starts kissing her lips; slowly & smoothly. Even she responds gradually. His love made her relax; helped her to forget her problems, her tensions. He carries her in his arms & slowly places her on the bed.

by **gauriandme** 27/2/2013, 9:51 pm

*In Mumbai, at the same time*

It’s been 5 days the Team is shifted to Mumbai’s secret house. Anu is given all the medical facilities. Day by day her condition has improved. Even her wound didn’t require being dressed. But one thing made her upset; Vishal’s behavior. Vishal tries his best not to stay alone with Anu. His weird behavior starts annoy s Anu. She wanted to talk with him, to share her feelings but couldn’t. Purvi, Arjun & Rohan tried to console her but all in vain. Now she couldn’t take his ignorance.

Purvi, Arjun & Rohan r busy playg chess. Vishal is moving towards his room when Anu pulls him to the corner of his room. Anu demands: What is ur problem? Tum mujhe ignore kyun kar rahe hoo?” Giving her a scared look he says: Main!” Nodding in –ve he continues: Nahi toh…” She comes close to him & gives him a narrow look. Moving a little back she takes a deep breath & says: Vishal main janti hoo ki Eva ko bhoolna aasan nahi hai. I understand. Par tum mujhse baat kyun nahi karte hoo? Kya main tumhari dost bhi nahi hoo kya?” Vishal nods his head in –ve & says: Aisa nahi hai Anu… ( Looking at his feet) Main bas thoda darr gaya tha.” They both give each other a innocent look. Coming close to each they share a long kiss. Few mins later Vishal closes his room’s door; makes Anu sleep on the bed & loves her to the fullest.
Purvi, Arjun & Rohan who had been watchg the whole scene hiding behind the passage wall start giggling. Watchg Vishal closing the door all 3 decide to leave them alone. They enter the hall & sit on the couch; Purvi at the end, Arjun in the middle & Rohan beside Arjun. Smiling at the situation Purvi says: Main aaj bohot khush hoo. At last Anu ko woh khushi milli jiske liye usne itne saal intazaar kiya. Arjun & Rohan both nod together.

Slowly Arjun signals Rohan that even he wants to spend time with Purvi & requests him to go into his room. First to pull Arjun’s leg he says No but when Arjun makes an innocent face Rohan agrees giving him a huge smile & nods positively. Rohan takes his laptop & goes into his room.

Slowly Arjun caresses Purvi’s hair & then her cheeks. His touch makes her shiver. She cups his face with her hands & then touches his lips with her. Later they go into Arjun’s room & spend the night together in each other arms, adoring each other.
In his room, Rohan texts Riya & requests her to come online on Skype. She happily agrees. After signing in & accepting Rohan’s video request they both are able to see each other. Smilingly she asks in a low voice: Kya hua? Abhi tak soye nahi?” Rohan nods in –ve & says: Nahi… Sab apne Gf ke saath busy hai aur main akela hoo?” Riya: Gf ke saath busy hai matalb?” Rohan: They are having their cosy moments.” They both starts giggle. Riya: Really? Woww! Main toh Anu aur Purvi ke liye bohot khush hoo.” Rohan nods. Riya says: Toh? Tum akele bore hoo raha hai?” Rohan again nods positively. Looking at Rohan’s response Riya giggles. Rohan gets so blissful to see her laughing. He asks: Bacche so gaye??” Riya: Ha. She turns the laptop towards where Shubh is sleepg. Rohan: Awee! Mera bacha!” Later they talk for abt 3hrs & then go to sleep.

*Next Day in Mumbai at 11 am*

The Team officers are sitting around a round table on the sundeck discussing abt the attack in Vasantpur. Last 6 days they had discussed abt how Kuvz goons found them. They played each & every detail in their mind again & again to find any clue; to find how Kuvz learnt that the Team was in Vasantpur. They couldn’t understand the situation. It is like a puzzle. Half of its pieces were joined but half was still remaining. All they wanted to find is the remaining part of the puzzle. One word was playing in their mind again & again, “HOW”.
Purvi slowly closes her eyes & plays each & every memory of her in Vasantpur. Suddenly she opens her eyes & starts search for a file. She looks at Arjun & learns he is reading tht file. She snatches the file & begins to find something, ignoring Arjun’s shocked look. Arjun: Purvi r u ok?” Purvi nods & says: Ya, Ya!” Finally she finds what she was searching for. She looks at Anu & says: Anu tujhe yaad hai jab hum sab Vasantpur se godown mein raid dali thi tab waha ke ek worker ne mera haath pakad liya tha?” Anu nods. Purvi turns the file towards Anu & continues: Yeh wahi insaan hai!”

Vishal, Rohan & Arjun peeps at the photo. Vishal asks: Umesh?” Anu & Purvi nod in +ve. Purvi says: Usne jab mera haath pakda tha tab shayad usne mere haath mein yeh Om wala ring dekha hoga. Jab Kuvz aur usske aadmi Umesh se milne aaye honge tab Umesh ne un logo ko kaha hoga iss ring ke bare mein. “ Rohan interrupting in bwn: Par aise ring toh bohot ladkiyan dalti hai. Usne yeh kaisa pata lagaya hoga ki unmein se tum bhi ek hoo?” Purvi remains silent for a minute thinking abt Rohan’s question & then answers: Shayad uss laga hoga ki Shekhar sir ne humme bheja hai uske peche.. aur woh toh janta hai na ki shuru se Sir use pakadne ki koshish kar rahe hai.” Vishal goes into the kitchen to bring some snacks.
Purvi, Arjun, Rohan start discussing when Anu’s mobile starts ringing. PRIYU starts display on the mobile screen. Anu says: Hey guys Priyu ka phone hai!” Saying this she accepts the call & keeps it on speaker. Anu says with a huge smile on her face: Hiee! Kaise hai tu?” From the other side Priyu who was holding her phone btwn her ear & shoulder says: Maine thik hoo. (Putting bangles into both of her hands) Tu bata, tu kaisi hai?? Aur tum sab kaise hoo” Anu smiles & says: Main thik hoo.” Purvi: Hum sab thik hai. Ghar mein sab kaise hai? Priyu: Sab thik hai. Main aur Pratham Kuvar ji ke ghar ja rahe hai. Unhonne humme lunch ke liye invite kiya hai.” Arjun: Baache nhi ja rahe hai?” Priyu: Nahi. Baacho ko ghar mein he rehna hai. Isliye Riya aur Baba bhi gha mein rehnege. Sirf hum dono ja rahe hai. Chal main phone rekhte hoo. Pratham bula raha hai. Byee.” All together say: Byeeee.”

Vishal comes in the sundeck with two plates, one full of samosas & other full of chips. He places the plates in the table & asks: Kiska call tha?” Purvi replies: Priyu ka.” Vishal: Ohh! Kaisi hai woh?” Purvi: Thik hai. Bahar ja rahi the.” Vishal: Kaha?” Rohan who has filled his mouth full of samosa replies: Kuvz ke ghar.”

Arjun, Purvi & Anu who r gonna have a bit on samosa suddenly stop. They look at Rohan in shock. Rohan is continuously filling his mouth unaware of wht he just spoke accidently. They all ask together: Kaha gaye hai?” Rohan busy eating the samosa says: Kuvz ke ghar.” Suddenly Roahn stops eating. He comes to a standstill, with his mouth swollen with food & his one hand holding samosa near his mouth. Abruptly he gets out & shouts: Nahi Nahi!! Mera matlab hai ki Priyu Kuvar ke ghar gaye hai.” Looking at Rohan the way he is looking makes everyone burst out of laughg. Controlling her laugh Purvi says: Rohan tumne toh Kuvar ji ka name he badal diya.” Making lil fun of Rohan they get back to work. Vishal asks: Arjun & Rohan to find more info abt Vasantpur, crime rate, ect.

*At 12 noon*

Arjun is suffering on the net when something weird catches his eye. He calls: Vishal! Purvi Anu sab yaha aao! Dekho mujhe kya mila hai.” All come towards him & eep into his laptop. Arjun says: Yeh article iss news website pe hai. Iss article ke hesaab se kuch maheno pehele yaha ke pass ke gao mein ek charitable trust “Vishwas Trust” ne yeh promise kiya tha ki agar gao ke log apne bacho ko sheher bhejenge toh trust unke bacho ko free education dega. Gao ke log ek dum gareeb hai isliye unhone apne bacho ko trust ke havale kar diya. Par phir jab 2 maheno baad bache ghar nahi aaye, na unko koi phone aaya toh gao walo ne police complaint de. Tab puch tach karne par yeh pata chala ki yeh trust ek fraud hai aur gao ke baccho me se ladkiyon ko bhar beej diya hai aur ladkon ko Street beggers bana diya hai. Kadi mushakkat ke baad bhi ek bacha bhi haath nahi laga hai. Police ko shak hai ki yeh Trust KUVZ ke logo ne banaya hai.” Listening to this all get sad. Anu says: Gao walo ko pehele puch tach karne chaheye the. Phir he apne bacho ko bejana chaheye tha.” Vishal says: Anu yeh gao walo bechare unpadh hai, bhoole-bale hai, upar se gareeb. In sabke bare mein inn logo ne socha he nahi hoga.”

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Looking at Arjun Vishal asks: Aur kya likha hai iss article mein? Inspector ka naam hai kya?” Arjun nods & says: Ha. Hai. Inspector ka naam Girdhar Shah hai. Gao ka naam Girwadi hai. Police kheti hai ki unho logo ka kuch bhi pata nahi chala hai jo log bacho ko lee gaye.” Vishal dials Jignesh’s no & tells him to remove info abt “Vishwas Trust” racket.

Arjun is searching more info abt the racket when Rohan says: Arjun yeh dekh.” Arjun clicks on the link where Rohan is pointing. A page opens up which has a huge photo of Kuvar with caption: Kuvar Mahindra Pratap Singh. The article talks abt different orphanages, charitable trusts & other social activities Kuvar perform all over the world. Arjun clicks on the list of photos of the events. Suddenly something catches Arjun & Rohan’s eye. They look at each other & then at Anu & Purvi. They just couldn’t believe their eyes. Anu shout: Vishal!! Yeh dekho!!!” affraid

Vishal runs towards the laptop at looks at the screen. This makes him stunned. In front of him is a photo of Kuvar with his bodyguards & associates, said the caption. One of his associates makes the Team go shock. That person is none other than Umesh! The Team now understands how KuvZ found him. Kuvar had seen Purvi’s ring tht night during the dinner at Priyu’s house. He knew they were the Team as they are students of Shekhar. Now Vishal understood Kuvar’s fear when they met 1st time in the temple. Now Vishal understands y Kuvar said GOOD BYE in tht manner. Now they understood everything.

Taking few high breaths Vishal says: Priyu ko call kar! Abhi!!! Bol use ki jaldi ghar jaye!!” Anu nods & dials Priyu’s no & keeps it on speakers. Priyu accepts the call & says: Ha bol Anu kya hoa?” Vishal says: Priyu waha se nikal. Tujhe aur Pratham ko khatra hai. Kuvar he Kuvz hai!!” Priyu asks: Kya????” After few seconds: Dekh raha hai!! pale

COMING UP NEXT:
1. Pratham’s murder
2. Team’s murder
3. K plans to marry Priyu.

by **aanchal** 1/3/2013, 10:12 am

gr8 update usha.. very interesting.. loved the romantic part bw priyu n pratham... Smile

i will hv to skip nxt part Sad

by **gauriandme** 1/3/2013, 6:58 pm

Plzz dont skip! I promise it will be interestg Wink

.. Thnks 4 d comments Very Happy

by **Story 7 Writer** 3/3/2013, 2:05 pm

is pratham really gonna die??? Waiting for d next...

by **aanchal** 8/3/2013, 10:17 am

gauriandme wrote:Plzz dont skip! I promise it will be interestg .. Thnks 4 d comments

ya i won't skip.. meine aise hi likha tha... What a Face

by **Gayathri** 9/3/2013, 9:02 pm

I wonder will pratham die ...?

by **gauriandme** 10/3/2013, 6:12 pm

by **gauriandme** 11/6/2013, 9:22 pm

*TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY 25 - PART ONE*

*At noon*

Taking few high breaths Vishal says: Priyu ko call kar! Abhi!!! Bol use ki jaldi ghar jaye!!” Anu nods & dials Priyu’s no & keeps it on speakers. Priyu accepts the call & says: Ha bol Anu kya hoa?” Vishal says: Priyu waha se nikal.” Priyu asks: Kya???? Kuch sunai nahi de raha hai” Vishal: Tujhe aur Pratham ko khatra hai. Kuvar he Kuvz hai!!” Vishal keeps on repeating: Kuvar he Kuvz hai!!” Kuvar he Kuvz hai!!” After few seconds: Dekh raha hai!!” Listening to this everyone gets stunned.

# FLASH BACK: 30 mins ago i.e (11.30am) #

On 2st floor, the last room at the right corner is Kuvz’s secret room where he has placed his entire secret documents including Priyu’s photo. The door of the room is actually a pitch white wall which isn’t visible to anyone when it is closed. Above the door is a wall lamp; when its left lamp is pulled downwards the door opens. When the door gets closed the left lamp automatically goes up.

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Inside the room, Kuvz is standing in front of Priyu’s photo; absorbed in her beauty he says: Priyu aaj main tumhe apna banana wala hoo. Tumhare sare rishtoon ko aaj main tumse dur karke tumhe ek naya rishta dene wala hoo. Aaj main tumse tumhare Pratham ko dur karne wala hoo, aur bohot jald he tumhare unn dostoo ko bhi dur kar dunga. Aur fir tum sirf meri rahoge! Sirf meri!!” He hears the sound of the main gate open. He smiles to himself & says: Loh! Aagye meri Priyu!” A maroon BMW enters the garden’s pathway passing the open gate. The car is parked in front of the main door of the bungalow. Pratham & Priyu climb down the car.

Kuvar moves out of the room & pulls the door, but in excitement he doesn’t fully close the door!! He moves towards the hall, climbs down the stairs & walks towards the main door. Niyati tries to open the door but Kuvar vigorously pushes her behind & he opens the door. To his shocking Pratham is standing in front of him smiling; wearing a T-shirt & jeans, both hands in his pockets. Finding only Pratham in front of him a wave of anger hits him. He was expecting Priyu, not Pratham. He tries to maintain the smile on his face. Pratham does see the change in the color of his face & gets puzzled. Pratham smiles at him & says: Mujhe pata hai aapne kaha tha ki Priyu ko bhi saath mein lekar aao, aur main usse lekar bhi aaya hoo.” P point out at Priyu who is standing near the car talking with Riya on the phone.

Looking at Priyu in a baby pink annarkali, all the anger drains off & a smile appears on his face. Her hair is open, front hair is pinned after making a puff, light make up done. She smiles & him & replies on the phone: Riya main ab rakhti hoo. Thik hai, bye.” She cancels the call & move towards P. K welcomes them into the house. K asks: Baache nahi aaye?” Priyu: Nahi, Piya ko thoda sa ser mein dard hai. Woh nahi aayegi isliye sare baache nahi aa paye.” K gets a bit irritated after listening this. He wanted kids to come so that he can blackmail Priyu by abducting them. He strives to maintain his smile. K says: Ohh Niyati ne unke liye unke pasand ke khane banaye the.”

Priyu turns & asks: Niyati ne?” She looks at Niyati & asks: Tumhara toh 7th month chal raha hai na? Toh tumne khana kyun banaya?” Niyati anxiously looks at K & K replies. Woh.. maine kaha tha usse ki itna kaam na kare” Moving towards Niyati he continues: Par yeh meri baat nahi sunti hai.”

Niyati gives K a disgust look, tries to control her anger. K had forced her to cook for Pratham, Priyu & kids. Already she was feeling weak from the morning, she didn’t have strength to even stand but K didn’t have any mercy towards her. Now to show how nice husband he is, he is blaming her for everything.

Priyu: Kuvar ji bhale he isne ziddh ki, aapko toh usse rok na chaheye than na.” K just nods. K’s phone starts ringing. He tells them to sit till then he’ll take the call. He goes into one of the rooms of the ground floor & closes the door. He accepts the call & says: Ha bolo.” The person from other side named Sunil says: Sir Pinto aa gaya hai.” K gets confused & asks: Pinto?? Kon Pinto?”

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A person snatches mobile from Sunil & says: Hello Boss! Kaisa hai man! Apun Pinto bolalera hai!” Kuvz gets irritated & asks clenching his teeth: Kon Pinto????”

Pinto says: Aree man! Kya aap bhi! Bhool gaye kya appunko?” Goa ke mahsoor Don Joseph D’souza ka right hand Pinto bolrela hai! Joseph bhai ne aapko bola tha ki main aarela hoo, yaad aayaa??” In frustration Kuvz moves his hand over his hair & says: Ha. Pata hai. Sunil ko phone dena.” Pinto gives the mobile to Sunil & Sunil asks: Ha boss?” Kuvz: Usse yaha le aao aur basement ke through conference room mein le aao. Thik hai?”

*In Hall*

Priyu & Pratham are sitting on a pain white couch when suddenly Priyu feels uncomfortable. Niyati is ordering the servant to place the food on the table. Priyu goes towards Niyati & asks: Niyati bathroom kaha hai?” Niyati says: Aao main batati hoo.” Niyati takes Priyu to the 2st floor & turns towards the left side. She tells her that rooms on the 1st floor rooms are under renovation. She takes her into a guest room at the left end of 2nd floor. Showing her the room Niyati goes to the kitchen on the ground floor, to make sure all the food & desserts are ready.

After few minutes she comes out of the room. Her mobile starts ringing. “Anu” starts displaying on her mobile screen. She accepts the call tires to talk but the voice from the other end starts breaking. On the other end Vishal shouts: Priyu…( disturbance)……nikal!!” Priyu asks:Kya???? Kuch sunai nahi de raha hai”

So she starts moving to the right side on the 2nd floor where there is a huge window just beside the secret room of Kuvz. She tries to open the window; while opening her earring (round, marble like in pink color) falls on the ground; she tries to catch but to her surprise it rolls inside Kuvz secret room.
She gets puzzled as how it went inside the wall.

She moves towards it & slowly puts her hand into the space & the door slides towards the left. She fully opens the sliding door. Inside the room it is pitch dark. She looks around her to make sure she’s alone. She examines the door & finds the left wall lamp bending towards the ground. She is still holding her mobile close to her ears. On her phone Vishal is still shouting but she couldn’t hear him properly. Her full concentration is on this hidden door. As she steps inside the room, automatically the lights turn on due to motion sensors installed in the room.

As the lights turn on she finds the whole room is decorated with her photos, the ceiling, the walls, floors. On one wall the pictures were taken at her college, house & in Rajasthan.

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On other walls, her modeling pictures are placed. These pictures were also sent to her by KUVZ (remember once Kuvz had sent her pictures).

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Her heart starts beating so fast that she feels as if it will come out of her mouth. Now she is properly able to hear Vishal’s voice: Kuvar he Kuvz hai!!” Priyu says holding her mobile close to her ear with blank expression. Dekh raha hai!!” Listening to this everyone gets stunned.

# FLASHBACK OVER # Now#

Listening to this everyone gets stunned. Anu asks: Kya!!?!” Priyu says: Ha.” She explains how she finds the hidden room & how Kuvar has decorated the room with her photos. Suddenly Priyu gaze fall on one of the walls; this is actually a door.

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She slowly pushes the wall back & finds a round staircase moving downwards into the dark. She says: Vishal yaar dewaar ke piche ek staircase hai jo I think tehkhaana ke aur ke jata hai”. Priyu looks around & slowly climbs down the stairs. As she climbs down the lights get automatically on, here too, because of motion sensors.

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To her surprise the rooms is not a basement; it is actually a secret control room. She says: Vishal yeh koi tehkhana nahi, ek secret control room hai.”

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Suddenly she notices a dart board on the right side of the wall with Pratham’s photo with a red cross on it.

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Looking at the dart board, a lush of fear & anger flows through her. She says: Rohan! Pratham & Riya ko call karo aur hum sab ka call group conversation mein add karo. Now!” As Rohan starts calling Riya & Pratham Priyu says how Kuvz has placed Pratham’s picture on a dart board with a red cross on it. Priyu moves towards the computers & finds it the computer to her left shows maps while on her right the computer displays the visions of CCTV camera installed in the mansion. The computer screen is divided into 4 CCTV camera visions. On the 1st she saw Pratham sitting on his couch with Rishi, on 2nd she sees Niyati in kitchen, on 3rd she sees an empty corridor & on 4th she sees Kuvz in a room talking on his phone.

Pratham’s mobile starts ringing. Reading Rohan’s number he gets astonished. He accepts the call but again he gets taken aback when he hears Priyu’s voice. Priyu says: Pratham dheere bol aur cillaao mat! Meri baat suno, window ke pass jao network problem ka bahana bolkar. Jaldi!” Pratham: Hello? Kuch sunaye nahi de raha hai, ek minute rukiye.” Saying this he moves towards the window making an excuse of network problem. Pratham asks: Ha. Mr. Bakshi, boliye”.Priyu tells him everything, from the hidden room to Kuvz’s secret. Learning the truth Pratham starts fuming. Priyu requests him to control his anger & listen to her.

Shekar fuming in anger says: Kuvar!?! Woh aisa kaise kar sakta hai??? Humne usse apna ghar ka sadasya mana aur ussne….. ussne itna bada dhoka diya?” Priyu: Baba plz don’t panic. Control yourself. Mujhe tum sabko kuch sunane walli hoo, Kuvar kissi ke saath baat kar raha hai. Suno..” She keeps the call on speaker.
They learn that KUVZ is talking to a person named Pinto who is right hand of Don Joseph D’souza. Priyu asks: Baba yeh wahi Joseph hai na joGoa ka sabse bada drug smuggler hai?” Shekhar: Haa Priyu. Beta tu meri baat sun. Tu aur Pratham abhi ke abhi waha se niklo.” Priyu: Baba pehle aap meri baat suno. Aap, Riya aur baache, sab ek safe place par jakar chup jao…..Aur suno…” She tells Vishal to take Shekhar, Riya & kids to Mumbai.

After discussing everything Priyu climbs up the round staircase coming out of the control room. She looks around & moves out of the room closing the door. She climbs down to the ground floor. Pratham notices her coming down. They look around & find Rishi going into the room where Kuvz is present while Niyati is decorating dinner table. They both nod to each other & move towards Niyati. Priyu says: Niyati?”Niyati turns around while Priyu continues: Niyati hum dono ko jana hoga. Piya khelte waqt gir gaye hai. Usse bohot choot lagi hai. BOhot roo rahi hai. Jab tak main usse nahi manati woh shaant nahi hogi. Isliye mujhe uar Pratham ko abhi nikalna hoga. Thik hai, bye!” Saying this they both move towards the main door. But suddenly Niyati stops them: Ruko!”

Both come to a halt; they look at each other anxiously & turn towards Niyati. “Kuvar ji ko bata kar jayiye.” Priyu: Tum bata dena plz, woh samaj jayenge. Meri taraf se sorry bhi bol dena. Thik hai, Bye!” Niyati nods & they move out of the door. While moving towards their car, a black SUV parks behind their car. Two men, one man in black shirt & pant & another in a colorful shirt & dark pink pant Pinto, climb down the SUV.

by **gauriandme** 11/6/2013, 10:00 pm

Rahil Azam as Pinto D’souza

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Here, a red blinking dot on Kuvar’s laptop’s task bar attracts his attention. Realizing it is an alert signal Kuvar opens CCTV footage section & clicks on the 1st floor. Rishi peeps at the laptop. He sees Priyu entering the secret room. A wave of shock flows through his body. He watches at what time she entered the room & finds she entered the room at noon, i.e at 12pm. He checks his watch & finds the time is 12.30. Half an hour ago she has entered the room. He forwards the footage & finds she came out at 12.28pm. Kuvar rushes out of the room.

Pinto & Priyu & Pratham are coming from opposite direction. They are looking at each other suspiciously but ignore each other. Pinto’s mobile rings [Chikni Chameli as his ring tone Razz

]; he moves towards his left; he picks up the call & asks: Heeeellooooo?” He says: Aacha accha!” They walk passing beside him & sit in the car.

Kuvar runs towards the door but before he could stop them, the car had already moved out of the gate. Kuvar 7 Rishi run towards their car while Pinto follows them. Pinto: Sir! Apun pinto! Kya apun bhi aa sakta hai??’ Kuvar replies in a hurry: Ha!” Looking at the guards he orders: Aur tum sab bhi aao.” Pinto & Rishi climb into Kuvar’s car & it moves out of the gate.

Kuvar spots Pratham’s car at just 20 feet away from their car. Kuvar: Rishi gun de mujhe.” Pinto interrupts: Boss! Yeh aap kya kar rele hai!?” Kuvar gives him a perplexed look. Pinto says pointing outside the car right window: Woh dekho sign board. Uske hisab se lagbhag 1km andar hum city ke andar aa jayenge. Agar aap city me jane ke baad goli chalate rahoge toh sab dekh lenge. Aur..” Kuvar shouting: TOH KYA KARU MAIN??? USSE JANE DOO???” Pinto: Nahiii Man!”

Pointing outside the left car window he says: Dekho man! Abhi pass mein ek waterfall hai. Agar hum undono ko wahi le gaye toh? Aur maine yaha aane ke pehele padha tha ki uss waterfall ke pass afternoon ko koi nahi jata. Agar hum un dono ko waha le jaye toh??” Kuvar nods & through micro phone tells his guards to cover Priyu’s car. Thus 4 cars come towards Priyu’s car; one on each side & one on front & back. These cars covered Priyu’s car such that she neither could drive nor stop. She could turn only when the cars on her sides could turn. So slowly they bring Priyu & Pratham near the waterfall. All the cars come to a halt; Priyu – Pratham & Kuvz climb down their cars.

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Priyu comes towards Kuvz & asks in an irritated tone: Yeh kya batameezi hai?! Aapke logone humara raasta…” Suddenly she stops; Kuvz shows her on tablet the clip of her getting out of the hidden room. Avoiding alarmed look on her face she gives him a stink eye. Before Kuvz could take a step close towards Priyu, Pratham come in the middle. Pratham gives him a stern look while Kuvz give him his handsome smile. Kuvz’s goons come towards Priyu & hold her tightly by her arms. Some of his goons grab Pratham & Priyu’s cell phone.

Kuvz hit Pratham with his punch on Pratham’s belly & then on face. In turn Pratham starts punching & kicking Kuvz hard. Kuvz’s goons start protecting Kuvz but he tells them that he’ll handle him easily. Pratham laughs & hits Kuvz so hard that Kuvz couldn’t even resist. Looking at Kuvz’s condition Priyu giggles by keeping her hand on her face lightly. Kuvz looks at Priyu; looking at Kuvz bloody face (blood covered) Priyu gives him a winning smirk.

Pratham keeps on hitting Kuvz; unable to control, Kuvz takes out a pistol from his jacket’s inner pocket & points at Pratham. Kuvz looks at Priyu who got a bit anxiety. Kuvz: Kya hoa Priyu?? Darr gaye? Abhi toh hass rahi thi?” She throws him a stern look. Pratham: Kya hua Kuvar? Kya tum itne kamzoor ho ki tumhe pistol ki madat le?” Kuvar smiles & replies: Kya karu Pratham, ab waqt nahi hai ki main tumse ladu.”

(Pratham is standing at the edge of the cliff while Priyu is standing near the car) Kuvar is still pointing his pistol at Pratham; Smiling at Priyu Kuvz says: Pratham.. (Looking at Pratham, gritting his teeth) tumne itne jurat ki kit um meri Priyanka ko mujhse cheena! Tumhe Priyu se dur karne ke liye mujhe tumhe apne raste se hatana padega. Priyu ko tumhare dil se nikal ne ke liye tumhare dil ko marna hoga.” Priyu threatens in a choked voice: Kuvar don’t u dare….” Before she could warn him again Kuvz shoots Pratham in his heart.

Pratham jerks as bullet pierce into his body with a force. He touches his wound to find blood pouring out of it. He looks at Priyu who has become like a statue, stunned, tries flowing from her eyes. Pratham tries to walk but losses his balance & he falls back into the waterfall.

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Priyu screeches: PRATHAM!!” She runs towards the cliff to catch him but Pinto holds her arm tightly. She screeches again: NAHII!! NAHI!! CHHODO MUJHE!” She tries to free herself him but fails to do so. She falls down the ground on her knees, sobbing, panting. Kuvz kneels beside her, whispers in her ear: Ab tum sirf meri hoo! Sirf meri!” Priyu controlling her tears slowing lifts a small rock piece from the ground & hits hard on Kuvz head. Kuvz falls down the ground on his face, blood starts pouring out of his head. Rishi, Pinto & others run towards him to help. Kuvz gets up without taking anyone’s help & glares at Priyu in anger.

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His face is covered with mud & blood. Looking at his condition Priyu give him stern smirk to him. He bends towards her but she doesn’t go back. He says smiling at her: Bohot takat aaye hai tum mein. Ab toh tum mere saath he hoo. Dekhna tumari sari ego ki band baja dunga.” Priyu replies: Jaroor! Tumhari band toh main he bajaunge. Dekh lena! Aaj mitti( mud) khilaya hai. Kal haar bhi khilaunge!”

Priyu resist but suddenly falls unconscious in Pinto’s arms. Pinto makes her get up & takes her towards the car. Kuvz tries to lift her but Rishi stops & says that as he is hurt he shouldn’t lift her & let Pinto carry her. After a lot of resistance Kuvz agrees. Pinto carries her towards the car & places her on the seat. Kuvar sits beside her & let her head rest on his arm. Pinto comes towards Kuvz & says: Sorry boss! Apun ko maaf kar do, apun ne bhabhi ko uthaya. Maaf kar do boss!” Kuvz turns towards Pinto, smile at him & handing over Pratham & Priyu mobiles he says: Team Kuvz ko track kar. Aur…” He explains Pinto the plan. Kuvz: Agar tumne mera yeh kaam kar diya toh tum mere sabse bharose mandh aadmi ban jaoge. Par agar tum nakaam rahe toh…..” Kuvz places his hand on his left shoulder & presses it hard. After saying this Kuvz tells the driver to take them his safe house in the forest.

It took almost 15 mins to reach Kuvz safe house in the forest. When car entered the main gate of the house Priyu gains consciousness. The car comes to a halt in front of the main door.

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She lifts her head, looks around to find herself in her car beside Kuvz. She tries to get away from him when Kuvz hold her hand & pull her out of the car. He enters the house & finds Niyati pacing around the hall. Niyati looks at Priyu who is trying to free herself from Kuvz. Priyu throws her an angry stare. Ignoring Priyu stare she moves towards Kuvz & asks: Kuvar ji Pratham kaha hai?” Kuvar reply calmly: Woh upar hai.” Kuvz pulls Priyu & moves towards the stairs. Niyati asks: Upar?” He turns towards her, leaves Priyu’s hand & cups Niyati’s cheeks.

Priyu tries to run towards the door when Kuvz goons stand in her way like a barrier. She turns towards Kuvz & Niyati. Kuvz smiles at Niyati & slaps hard on her cheek leaving Priyu stunned. Kuvz pulls her & asks holding her arms tightly: Priyu ko 1st floor le jane ki kya zarurat thi!!! Haa????” He throws her towards the floor but Priyu & Rishi hold her before she could fall on the floor. Kuvz again comes to Niyati to slap her but Priyu comes in between & pushes him down the floor. Priyu: Bas karo Kuvar! Kaise tum apni pregnant patni ko marr sakte hoo? Haa?” Kuvz gets up laughing & says: Dekho tumhari badi behen ko tumhari kitni chinta hai!” Laughing aloud he slaps on Priyu’s cheek.

Kuvz comes near Priyu & says: Mujhse uuchi awaaz mein baat karne ki jurrat mat karna.. Warna…” Before he could say anything more Priyu gives Kuvz a tight slap on his face which makes him fall again on the floor. Everyone gets shell shocked at Priyu’s reaction. She says: Tum bhi ek baat dyaan se sun loo! Main Niyati nahi hoo jo tuhari maar ko chup caap kha loo! Main Priyanka hoo. Agar agli baar tumne mujhpar haath uthaya toh badle mein main bhi wapas tumhare kaan ke niche maar sakti hoo. Samjhe!!”

Getting up Kuvz tries to hit Priyu when Rishi stops him by telling him that both are pregnant & he shouldn’t beat them. Kuvz shouts: Niyati! Le jao isse 2nd floor ke last room mein. ABHI!!!” Niyati nods quickly & takes to the room Priyu, who is still staring at Kuvz. Pinto & Sunil accompanies them on the order of Kuvz. Niyati & Priyu enter the room while Pinto & Sunil come downstairs.

Priyu & Niyati sit on the bed. Priyu notices that Niyati is still shivering in fear. Priyu looks around & finds a glass of water beside her on the small table. She removes the cover from the glass & gives it to Niyati. Niyati looks at Priyu while Priyu smiles & just nods. Tears start flowing off Niyati’s eyes. Priyu tries to comfort her. Priyu: Niyati, kyun tumne aise insaan se shaddi ki jo tumhe thodi sa bhi respect nahi deta?” Niyati: Py… Pyaar karti hoo unse..” Priyu: Aise insaan se koi kaise pyaar kar sakta hai?” “ Sab tumhari tarah nahi hote na” Kuvar says.

He enters the room & is followed by Pinto & Sunil. Pinto switches on his laptop & faces it towards Priyu, Niyati & Kuvz. Kuvz says: Tumhare liye ek surprise hai!” Priyu gives him a puzzled look. Kuvz gestures her to look at the laptop. To her shock it showed Team Kuvz along with Shekhar coming out of the house in which Team Kuvz are staying in Mumbai. Kuvz: Yeh LIVE hai.” Priyu looked at Kuvz & then at Pinto who looked at his watch & then at Priyu giving her a smirk.
As the Team (along with Shekhar) climb the car, the car explodes! Priyu screeches out loud. Kuvz says: Ab toh tumhe mujhse koi bhi bacha sakta!” Looking at Pinto he says: Great work Pinto!” This leaves Priyu in utter shock due to which Priyu starts feeling suffocation & falls unconscious again.

TO BE CONTINUED.....

by **Gayathri** 11/6/2013, 11:12 pm

wow....Usha awesome means awesoem update ....
Lovely descrption of each n everything in detail esp the secret room , control room etc..

I still doubt ke pratham mara nahi hai... wo vapas ayega...

by **aanchal** 12/6/2013, 10:51 pm

thanks for the update usha.. will read it soon.. & the pics r beautiful.. u hv edited them so well:)

by **gauriandme** 14/6/2013, 10:41 am

the pixs are made by Gaya.. not me Smile

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