Bhagya: The Destiny.

by **gauriandme** 11/12/2007, 7:57 pm

First topic message reminder :

I'm rewriting this story due to some reasons. I'll send the prolouge now. I will change the story as I cant think a proper end to this story. Plzzzz read it.

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 25/6/2009, 6:52 pm

Plzzzz reply soon guys! Hope u all will love this epi.

by **Gayathri** 25/6/2009, 7:25 pm

nice part ,abhi om aur bebo ko milva hi do ..

by **aanchal** 25/6/2009, 8:19 pm

thanks for another interesting part.

.i hope zoya & her baby r saved Rolling Eyes

this was hillarious
Bebo
did puja of Tulsi Maa ( Basil plant, not tht Tulsi Maa of KyunkiJ) Lol!

by **gauriandme** 26/6/2009, 3:11 pm

Thnks Aanchal & Gayatri.

by **virgosaumya** 26/6/2009, 9:11 pm

om aur bebo ko milva do
aur om ke man mein kanha ki liye trust jaag jaaye

by **HitenGaurifan** 28/6/2009, 10:07 am

Hiii I read first part of bhagya and I enjoyed it very much. It was very interesting specially om bebo first meeting n interaction..btw the joke of elephant and ant was too quite funny..Thanks for this interesting story.

by **gauriandme** 28/6/2009, 7:50 pm

Hi!! How r u???? U r most welcome Munir :voshah: !!!

by **HitenGaurifan** 30/6/2009, 8:31 am

Usha, I read second part and this was too very very interesting. The beginning of part with a dream that was quite romantic and later turned out to be sad dream was quite interesting and shocking that what would be the significance of that dream. I am thinking about it whether the dream was telling some thing about past or future or what..so Om did not believe in Krishna bhagwan..btw bebo n lolo are nice nicks..The last scene in which Om said i love you n opened the door n saw Shnati there was so cute...thanks Usha for this wonderful part.

by **gauriandme** 30/6/2009, 7:42 pm

Hahahaha I'm happy tht u liked my fics. Many interesting epis r going to come. Plzzzz always read my fics & give ur lovely comments!!!

by **HitenGaurifan** 2/7/2009, 7:11 am

Hi Usha,
Today I read 2 more parts (third n fourth) of the story and I enjoyed reading them. Besides story, the pictures are also very nice. The effects which you are creating in the collage pics are too good ! As for the story its going on fine..I like that scene specially in which Om helped Shanti and then asked for friendship n she politely refused for it. Om does not want to see Krishna in his dream but I think if some one wishes not to see any one in dream, that person see the same dream. Dreams are such a big mystery. Anyways in the end Om refused to take aarti. Now I am wondering whether she will convince her for it or not. I think she will convince her for it and may be he will do it without agreeing with its significance. Anyways I will read the next part to see whether my guess is correct or not. Thank you

by **Sahil kohli** 2/7/2009, 10:58 am

by **gauriandme** 2/7/2009, 5:34 pm

Thnks Sahil & Munir!! Munir u have to read the further epis to see whether ur guesses r right or not. And the dream of Om is a big mystery!!

by **HitenGaurifan** 3/7/2009, 10:11 am

Hi Usha,
Today I read part 5of the story. My guess was wrong. Om did not took aarti. But I enjoyed this part as well. I like the conversation or I should say arguments btw Om n bebo on lord Krishna . It was also good to know that Lolo got to know about love of Om now i guess coming part will be sad. May be zoha's kid will die or may be Kanha will do some miracle and kid will be saved. Cant say any thing for sure but I think may be the child will die this time too.

by **HitenGaurifan** 3/7/2009, 10:14 am

Post the next part soooooon. Meanwhile I will read other stories.

by **gauriandme** 3/7/2009, 4:42 pm

Hi!! Thnks for ur reply!!

by **gauriandme** 27/4/2010, 8:41 pm

“BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 6”

* RECAP *

1) Bebo
learns tht Om hate Kanha. She asks the reasons
& comes to know tht Kanha troubles Om in
his dreams. She even discovers tht Zoha had faced 3 miscarriages.

2) Zoha
refuses to accept tht Kanha had done this purposely.

3) Bebo
tries to explain Om tht everything will be
sorted out. He, who created this problem, will also solve it out. But still Om is unsatisfied.

4) Om asks
her wht is her relationship with Krishna &
y she has soo faith on Him. Bebo says tht:
Kyunki yeh mere sab kuch hai. Mere Pita, Meri Maa, Mere Bhai, Mere Dost, Mere
Pati (Om’s
eyes widened), Pati matlab “MY PRICE
CHARMING”!!!! Aur mujhe inpar sabse
jada vishvaas hai aur maine
janti hoo ki Kanha mera vishvaas kabhi nahi thodenge.

5) Listening
to this Om gave her a shocked look while Bebo
giggled & went out to perform Tulsi puja.

6) Later
after doing puja she spread the aarti around the while Om
kept looking at her mysteriously but she ignored him. This made him angrier.

7) Om said
Bebo not to do tht spreading in his room while Arjun allowed her to do
spreading so as to make Om annoyed.

Cool

Om was caught red handed for watching Bebo by
Lolo. He thought tht she will tell Om’s
feeling to Bebo. But instead, she, Momo & Dodo promised him tht she’ll help
him to create love in Bebo’s heart.

“BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 6”

* AT NIGHT (10PM) *

Rucchi sent Mike to call Zoha
for dinner. After searching her in the whole house he decided to visit his
room.

Zoha was standing near the window when
Mike came in. He went towards her & hugged her from behind. He kissed her
neck. She turned towards him. Hugging her he went on kissing her on her neck.
Zoha said: Mike???” Mike( still engrossed): Hmmmm…” Zoha said: I’m pregnant!”
Mike stopped & looked at her. He gave her a huge smile. He hugged her
tightly. Zoha didn’t utter a word. Zoha said: Mike!” He looked at her. Tears
started following from her eyes. Mike said: Hey baccha! Chill. Aur….” He got
still. He saw Zoha’s hand. Her hand was blooded. Mike went back & saw tht even his hand
was blooded. Zoha cried(holding her breath): Mujhe apna baccha nahi khona hai
Mukesh! Plzzzz!!!!!!!!!!! Meri madat karo!!!” Saying this she fell on his arms
& went unconscious. Mike shouted Zoha!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by **gauriandme** 27/4/2010, 8:44 pm

* AT CITY
HOSPITAL*

Mike was sitting on a bench
still. His faced had turned white as if he has seen a ghost. All were standing
beside him. Om, Sahu, Arju & Yash were
sitting beside him. To their opposite Bebo, Lolo, Mom & Dod were sitting
with concerned looks. At tht time Doc came out of the room. Watching Doc coming
out of the ward Mike got up. Doc came close to Mike & said: Mukesh!” Mike
gave him a terrified puzzled look. Doc said sadly: Mukesh, Zoha ki halat phir
waisi he ho gaye hai. I think we have to do surgery.” Mike quickly: Toh usme
kya sochna? Jaldi operation kejiye.” Doc:
Mujhe sirf yeh puchna tha ki….. DONO ME SE HUM
KISSE BACHAYE??” Mike:
Kya??? Phir nahi!” Saying this Mike burst out crying. Everyone tried to console
him except Bebo, Lolo, Momo & Dodo. They gave Doc an terrified look with
tears falling from their eyes.

Doc continued: Agar aapko
bacche ko bachana hai toh aapko Zoha ko khona hoga aur….” Mike held Doc tietly
& said: Nahi! Zoha ko bacchaye. Meri Zoha ko kuch nahi hona chahiye! (Leaving
Doc, he begged) Plzzzz Raj!! Meri Patni ko baccha loo. I can’t live without
her! Plzz.” Raj (Doc) nodded +tively &hugged Mike
patting his back. Doc ordered the nurse to shift Zoha to Labour room. AS the
nurse pushed the stretcher towards the room, it went in front of Mike. Mike
stopped it & stared at Zoha softly, who was unconscious. He kissed her
forehead controlling himself not to cry. He leaved her & turned to opposite
direction & burst out crying covering his eyes. Watching him in such a
horrible situation, everyone burst out crying. Unable to control the situation,
Bebo ran outside the hospital.

She
ran outside the main door but stopped at one point. She looked beside her &
saw a temple of Shree Krishna.

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She
turned towards the temple & moved towards it. She removed her chapels,
touched the 1^st stair of the temple doing namaskar. She went inside
& found few ppl there. She sat near the deity of Lord Krishna. Tears were
flowing from her beautiful eyes.

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After
few mins she found herself alone in the temple. The climate outside had turned
cold. It felt as if it is going to rain heavily. It looked like rains indicated
sadness of the Nature. Bebo looked at the Kanha’s deity.

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She
said softly: Kanha! Kyun?? Kyun kar rahe hai Aap aise? Zoha ne kya begada hai
Aapka?? Kyun unhe itna dard de rahe hai Aap. Kyun?..... Kanha mujhe ab unka dukh
saha nahi jata. Plzz mat karo na unke saath aisa. Plzz…”

“Woh tumhari baat nahi manane wala, Usse request
karna band kar do Bebo.” A voice came from behind. She turned & saw Om standing there. He came towards her while she kept
sitting at her place. He bend to his knees & said: Shanti… mat karo koi
vinti. Kuch nahi hone wala hai. Wahi hoga jo phele hoa tha.” Bebo maintained her
silence, looking at the deity. Om cont’d: Ab shayad tumhe samaj me aa gaya hoga ki main tumhari
So-called-Kanha se nafrat kyun karta hoo??” Bebo looked at him with tearful
eyes. Om got up to gobut stopped. He turned
back & asked: Kya tum aa rahi ho??” Bebo just simply nodded her head in
+tive.

by **gauriandme** 27/4/2010, 8:48 pm

* AT HOSPITAL (1AM)*

The red
bulb was still on which meant tht the operation was still going on. Mike was
sitting on a bench with his wide open, tears flowing from his red swollen eyes.
All were lost in their own world when suddenly the red bulb switched off.

It was
raining very heavily. Raj, the doc, came outside confused. Mike got up &
asked: Raj, Zoha thik hai na??” Raj gave him a puzzled look. He looked around
& scratched his head. Bebo &
Lolo exchanged suspiciously looks. He said: Zoha??Ha… Wo normal hai. Usse toh
kuch bhi nahi hoa.” Mike nodded in +tive & asked: Raj? Ladka tha ya
Ladki???” Raj quickly said: Mujhe kaise pata hoga?” Mike got puzzled &
asked: Matlab? Zoha ka….(He was feeling hard to speak) abortion hoa.” Raj
cont’d: Abortion? Who said??” All got puzzled. Raj said: Abortion nahi hoa.”
Ronit: Ha????” Raj said with wide eyes: Zoha ko bleeding ho raha tha jiski
wajah se baacche ki maut ho rahi thi. Magar ab bleeding hoa he nahi. Matlab..
bleeding ho raha tha…par… par band ho gaya.
Aachank. I’m surprised kyunki yeh ek pehla case hai jissme bleeding aachank ruk
gaye ho, tab jab Zoha ka resisting power full down hai. It’s a miracle!! A
miracle!!” Saying this he went to his room lost in his own confused thoughts.

Listening to this Mike rushed
into the room where he saw Zoha sleeping peacefully. All entered the room
except Bebo. She went into Lord Krishna’s temple & bended down her knees
and said with folded hands, tears in her eyes: Thnk U Kanha!! U r soo cute!
Thnk u!” Saying this she got up n saw Om
behind her. She ran towards him n said: Dekha! Dekha tumne! Kanha ne sab thik
kar diya! Unhone bache ho bacha liya…. Zoha thik hai.. Unhone uski suni ghod
bhar de… bhar de… Maine
kaha tha na ki Kanha kissi ka bura nahi karte…kaha tha na??” Om
kept silent. He was drenched in rainwater. Saying this Shanti ran outside &
started enjoying the rain. She was wearing a mumtaj type top of red with blue
design n chuddidar pants of blue color. She was drenched in rainwater. Om was again lost in her beauty……

* AFTER FEW HOURS*

She didn’t believe on Doc when
she came to know tht her baby was perfectly fine. She kept her hand on her
tummy to feel her baby which was very small, just few centimeters long growing
in the warmth of her womb. The room door got open n she saw all coming in with
a huge smile. She saw her drenched in water coming inside with a huge smile,
bigger than others. She sat beside her n said: Congo Zoha! U’ll become a proud
mom now.” She said back n said: I’m enjoying this situation bcoz of U honey…..
yaad hai tune kaha tha ki agar maine
Kanha se manungi toh who jaroor meri iccha puri karenge aur tune bhi unse mere
liye manga tha… Dekh unhone sab dono ki sun li…Hai na???” Bebo smiled n said:
Ha….” “Yes”, Arjun shouted giving Zoha a
bouquet of red flowers ,”Wow can u
imagine??? Yash, Saahil, Omi bhai yaar
hum chahu ban gaye… kamine Mike tu baap banene wala hai… Yaar!!!” Saying this
he started dancing. Zoha n all burst out laughing. Coming towards Doc he asked:
Doc hum Zoha ko kab ghar le ja sakte hai??” Doc: Actually Arjun tum sab chaho
toh abhi le ja sakte hoo.” All got happy. Mike asked: Koi problem toh nahi hoga
na?? Zoha thik hai na??” Doc laughed n said: Mike don’t worry! Zoha ab thik…
actually maine kahonga it’s a miracle kyunki
inta bada miscarriage hote-hote bach gaya
aur upar se Zoha aur usske baby ko koi problem nahi hue. Thtz gr8 yaar! U all r
very happy. But maine
thode medicines likh kar deta hoo tum woh manga lena aur usse as prescribed
Zoha ko dete rehna. Ok???” Mike gave a huge smile n nodded. He turned back to
Zoha, sat beside her n asked: Ghar chale??” Zoh nodded tears flowing from her
eyes.

* AT BACK HOME *

It was 6’ o clock
in the morning. Omi parked the car in front of the house door. Bebo came out n
made Zoha climb down slowly. As they climbed down Om
parked the car in the garage. She took a
huge breath; she felt Bebo’s hand on her shoulder. Bebo: Chal andar aaja.” Zoha
nodded. Mike n Om joined them. Everyone had come home except these 4 ppl. As
they entered Rucchi came wid a plate of aarti n started taking aarti of Zoha.
She placed tika on Zoha’s head n welcomed her in.

by **gauriandme** 27/4/2010, 8:51 pm

* NEXT DAY *

He was peacefully
sleeping on his soft bed holding his soft cushions. Suddenly he heard her
voice. He lifted his head n recognized tht she was singing prayers again. Disgusted
he buried himself under the pillows so as to save himself from her”
so-called-bhakti-songs”. But he was getting more attracted towards her sweet n
melodious voice. He got up with his eyes closed n yawned wide. With his closed
eyes he went towards bathroom and dashed himself badly to the bathroom door n
fell straight on the carpet floor of the room. He gave out a huge shout but
then too no one heard him. He got up angrily n opened the bedroom door n went
out. He came down n looked at Shanti who was giving aarti to everyone. Shanti
gave him a puzzled look. She saw his nose was red like tomato n recognized tht
he has hit himself somewhere. She came towards him n gave out a sweet small
laugh. Om….who was lost in her innocence had
almost forgotten tht he was angry on her. Shanti asked him controlling her
smile: Good Morning! Waise tumhari naak ko kya hoga hai?? Kuch laga hai kya??” Om who has forgotten everythg just touched his nose slowly n gave out a huge
shout: OUUCHH!!!!”

All bursted out laughing. Om geeting angry again said to Shanti: Hass kya rahi hoo??
Yeh sab tumhari wajah se hoa hai…”
Shanti controlling her laugh asked: Kya??” Om
continued: Ha! Na tum subha subha yeh tumhari ganna nahi gati na meri need
totti na maine
need me chalta aur na meri naak bathroom ke door se jakar takrati..” Shanti: Om! Agar tum need maine
chal rahe the aur tumne apni aankhe band ki thi toh issme mere gana gane ki kya
galti hai??” Om: Aur yeh sab tumhari gana gane
ki wajah se hoa hai??” Shanti gave him an puzzled look while Om
was standing like an idiot in front of her. Angrily she went out to do Tulsi
Puja while everyone gave him an angry stare……Lolo came towards him n said: Kar
de na gadbad… Ab Di ko kaise manaoge??” Everyone went into their rooms while he
kept on thinking like an idiot.

TO BE CONTINUED……..

*COMING UP NEXT*

* Pandit
came into the house…… Om, Mike, Zohaa, Saahil,
Arjun n Yash learn tht Bebo is an adopted daughter of Saachi n Deepak.

* Rucchi,
Ronit, Saachi n Deepak narrate the whole story…..

*
“Sandwich, Sandwich, Sandwich……. Di ab aur Sandwich khaya nahi jata….” Lolo said in a cried tone….

HOW WILL OM CONVENCE BEBO????

HOW WILL OM REACTW WHEN HE’LL
KLEARN THT SHE IS AN ADOPTED GIRL???

*KEEP READING*

BY

USHA

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by Guest 27/4/2010, 9:58 pm

It's nice too see Usha is back with 'Bhagya'...Episodes were intresting! Iam sticking to it! Wink

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by **Gayathri** 27/4/2010, 11:05 pm

wowwwwwwwww /.............. thts amazing update usha .....

ek dum interesting hota jaaraha hai .......

by **virgosaumya** 28/4/2010, 7:36 pm

interesting epi plz isko roz send kar diya karo

by **aanchal** 14/5/2010, 9:42 pm

yup... very interesting updates.. plz do continue soon

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