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Bhagya: The Destiny.
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Bhagya: The Destiny.
I'm rewriting this story due to some reasons. I'll send the prolouge now. I will change the story as I cant think a proper end to this story. Plzzzz read it.
Usha.
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“BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 02”
She got amazed. She got mystified of wht has happened. Did he propose
her??? She gave him a perplexed look. He opened his eyes & saw her standing
in front of her. He didn’t believe his eyes. He got bamboozled. He thought he
was watching a dream. It’s a hallucination. He turned back & saw others
were in the same situation. The door
opened & entered 3 young girls, Lolo, Momo & Dodo(in jumpsuit
certainly). For conformation tht it’s not a dream he touched her nose with his
index finger. With the touch her face glowed. As he sensed her he took his
finger back. Watching this Momo went near Bebo & whispered: Hello……”
Coming to reality they mortified. Lolo went near Om & peered at his face. Om
went a lil back. She was biting her index finger trying to remember him.
Rapidly she snapped her fingers & said: Yes. Tum wahi ho na??? Tht
escalator wale???” Om slowly nodded. She kept
her hands on her waist, come infront of Om,
backing Bebo & said (with an angry stare): Tum yaha kya kar rahe hoo??”
Saahil whispered: Hogaya isska chatter
box open.”Others laughed!! Lolo slowly shifted her sight towards Saahil. In the
same position i.e. hands on her waist& walked towards
him. She asked by biting her teeth & moving towards him: Wht …did.. u
say????” He simply nodded his head in -tive. Bebo walked beside Om & stopped to have a look at wht Lolo was telling
tht guy. As she stopped he looked at her & again their eyes met. But this
time Bebo tried to ignore him. She looked at Lolo who was boiling with anger.
Bebo just set her hand on Lolo’s shoulders. Lolo felt her & her anger
reduce.
She
(Bebo) turned towards Zoha walking towards her. She smiled & in return Zoha
too smiled. Bebo’s smile was filled with sweetness. Bebo asked: Hi.” Om’s heart reached to his throat. He has heard her voice
again!!!!! She continued: Actually humme yaha Mr.Ronit Kapoor ne bulaya tha..”
Zoha said: Ohh!! Unhone humme bhi bulaya tha.Kya aap jante hai unhe??? Actually
woh mere papa ke bohot acche dost hai.” By
hearing this Om’s ears stood still like an antenna.
He thought, Best Friends!! Ohh tob to meri aur Bebo ki shaddi pakhi hai samjho.
Then they heard noise of the door. All turned towards it. Its was Ronit &
Deepak. They were having talks and laughs. As they entered Ronit saw his
children. Suddenly his eyes went towards Bebo. Ohh soo pretty. He did recognize
her. They came in & had an introduction with everyone.
Meanwhile, Rucchi & Sachhi came{Both r wearing kurta &
pants}. Rucchi was soo happy to see the girls there. Saachi: Chal Ab pehchan
meri betiyo ko Aur ha baacho apni pehchan mat batana. Let her guess.” Rucchi:
Hahaha. Maine toh guess kar he longi.” Saying this she went towards Riya &
Reshmi & recognized them very easily.Rucchi: Brown eyes Reshmi ke he ho
sakte hai. Aur tum Riya hoo.” They both giggled. Then she went towards Sanju
& Bebo. She saw Sanju & said: Maine
aaj moticur ke laddo banaye hai.” By
Hearing this her eyes go wide. She shouted motichor ke!!! Woow!!” Everyone
laughed. Rucchi: TOh tu Lolo hai. Lolo for laddo.Sanjana, hai na??” Saachi: Yeh ladki toh chup reh he nahi sakti.”
Lolo: Maine
kya karo maa, motichoor ke laddo ka naam sunte he mere muh me paani aa jata
hai.” Rucchi laughed loudly. Turning towards Saachi she said: Dekh maine toh sabko
phchan…..”
Slowly
she turned back & saw Bebo. She came towards her & touched her chubby
cheeks. Bebo gave her a sweet smile. Rucchi waved her hand through her cheeks,
nose & forehead. She taker her hand back & says: Meri Bebo! Dekho na
Ronit kitni pyaari lag rahi hai na.” Tears started pouring from her eyes.
Others were astonished to see her in such a situation. Controlling her tears
she said: Sacchi dekh meri Bebo mere jaise he dekti hai, na??” Sacchi got
puzzled & asked:Aise kaise? Yeh toh meri beti hai na?” “Toh sabse jada
pyaar maine
karti hoo.” “Rucchi.. Tu bhi na…” Ruchhi started laughing. Rucchi turned
towards Zoha & said to Sacchi: SAcchi dekh yeh meri bahu hai. Mukesh ki
wife.” Sacchi looked at her & was happy. “Bohot pretty hai.” Mukesh comes
forwards & both took blessing from Deepak & Sacchi. Deepak looked at
Mukesh & said: Tu toh Nishant jaisa lagta hai. Par smile Anna jaisi hai.”
Mukesh is son of Nishant, cousin bro of Ronit & Anna, best friend of Rucchi
& Sacchi.
Suddenly Deepak’s mobile rang. He removed his
cell & was shocked to see the number. His old client whom he worked in Bangalore. He looked at
Bebo & gave his cell to Bebo. She looked at the no & got shocked. She
looked at Deepak but he ignored it. Bebo got angry, but ignoring it she
received the call. From opposite a foreigner said: Hello Mr. Deepak. Can I know where r u?
U left the job without saying a word to me? How could u?”Bebo in a concerned
voice: Hello James. How r u??” “ Ohh Bebo how r u??” She kept the call on
speaker so tht everyone could hear it, especially Deepak. “I’m good. Wht abt
u??” “ Ohh I’m gr8! U see due to ur
father!” Slowly Bebo sat on a chair. Lolo, Mom & Dodo surrounded her. Bebo
gave an angry stare to her father for putting her in a soup. Bebo: Ohh James.
Actually we were in a hurry, so forgot to tell u.” “Ohh ya! Good. From when did
u start forgetting Miss Shanti.” Om &
others got studded. Her name is Shanti, he thought.Bebo{ in a cheerful manner}:
Ohh come on James, plzz believe me.” “Ohhk. I will. Right now where r u all??” “We
all r in..” “Mumbai, right?” “Yes.” “U all r gonna work with Ronit Kapoor,
right? The Gr8 Archeologist?” “Ya” “ Good I had a meeting with him last night
on phone. U know something daughter, even I’m gonna come to Mumbai & work
with u all.” “What!!” Bebo got up from chair & shouted.”Really?? ohh thtz
gr8! Will see u soon James.” “Ok.Siya.” In
a cheerful tone Bebo: Siya.”
The call
got cancelled. She went towards Deepak, Gave him a stink eye & said: Dad, don’t
u ever put me in a pickle, ok??” Deepak: Bebo, U janti hai na, Sirf tu he hai
jo usse samjha sakti hai. He listens to u.” “Fine.” Ruchhi asks: Kya hoa?” Sacchi
explains her everything tht James was their colleague & good friend. Rucchi
asks: Aree tumhare saman kaha hai?” Deepak: Palm Grove Hotel me.” “Toh ek kam
karo. Bachho{Telling her children} tum jao inke saath aur inki madat karo.” Om suddbely: Ok! Chalega.I’ll go.” “Sirf tu nahi. Sab
jao.” Everyone agreed.
The car
stopped near the Hotel. {Guys I have been to this hotel. Its wonderful. Its
beside Juhu Chupati, Andheri.} Girls, including Zoha went into their room,
packed the bags& came down. The luggages were too much.Somehow they reached
home.
As they reached
home, Rucchi was ready with a Aarti
thali. She made aarti of Deepak, Sacchi & girls. Later they entered home.
Ruchhi showed
everyone their room. Girls preferred the stay in one room. So they were
provided with a huge room. Ruchhi & others helped others. They kept their
clothes in closet. Bebo kept her loads of books in Library. Om
helped her, but she refused to make an eye contact with him. Bebo went out
& took her special box. She asks: Rucchi aunty..” Aunty nahi, Badi maa aur
Ronit Bade pappa.” They agreed. Bebo: Badi maa yeh bhagwan ki chijje??” “ Beta
yeh DevGhar ke paas rakhna. Ok??” They nodded. She placed the huge box near Dev
Ghar.
Later they had
sandwitches for their dinner & wentto sleep. Om ,while sleeping thought,
Aaj raat maine tumhe nahi aane dunga sapne me Krishna. Aaj nahi.
COMING UP
NEXT:
“Maan Mohana… Maan Mohana…”
Om:
Nahi. Yeh nahi ho sakta!!”
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Sorry for late replying. Bhagya is going smooth. Iam eagerly waiting for 4th episode... Usha i have one req. can u post the epi. of bhagya in double episodes??? Cause bhagya already bahut delay time par chal raha hai eseliye agar tum aisa karogi tou tumhare liye easy hou jayega...
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