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Bhagya: The Destiny.
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Bhagya: The Destiny.
I'm rewriting this story due to some reasons. I'll send the prolouge now. I will change the story as I cant think a proper end to this story. Plzzzz read it.
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“BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 02”
They were sitting on a boat in the middle of a small pond. She was playing with the water, waving her hands on water. He was playing with her long, wavy, silky hair. Then he moved his hands on her. She had applied mehandi which had turned dark. Slowly he moved his hand towards her stomach. He recognized tht she was pregnant.9th month. He called her slowly: Jaan???” She looked at him. He continued (making an innocent face): Humhe humare bachoo ke saath jald se jald khelna hai.” She laughed loudly. Ohhh!!! She was soo preity, he realized……… She was decorated with heavy & costly jewelries. She said: Pata hai tumhe hume jodwa bacche hone wala hai!!” Listening to this good news his enthusiasm was at its top level. He asked: Saachi!!” She gave him her adorable smile & nodded. He too gave his million dollar smile. She looked at front. He looked at the same direction. It was Lord Kirshna’s mruti. Then he came close to her & gave her a passionate kiss. Suddenly her hands slipped from his shoulder. He gave a look at her & found BLOOD!!FROM HER STOMACH BLOOD WAS POURING. HE LOOKED AT HER. SHE WAS LYING DEAD IN HIS HANDS. THEN HE REALISED THT EVEN HIS CHILDS WERE NO MORE!!!! HE ANGRYLY LOOKED AT LORD KRISHNA’S STATUE WITH FULL OF GRIEF, HATRED!!!
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[b][i]BHAGYA: THE DESTINY: 02”
[i][i]They were sitting on a boat in the middle of a small pond. She was playing with the water, waving her hands on water. He was playing with her long, wavy, silky hair. Then he moved his hands on her. She had applied mehandi which had turned dark. Slowly he moved his hand towards her stomach. He recognized tht she was pregnant.9th month. He called her slowly: Jaan???” She looked at him. He continued (making an innocent face): Humhe humare bachoo ke saath jald se jald khelna hai.” She laughed loudly. Ohhh!!! She was soo preity, he realized……… She was decorated with heavy & costly jewelries. She said: Pata hai tumhe hume jodwa bacche hone wala hai!!” Listening to this good news his enthusiasm was at its top level. He asked: Saachi!!” She gave him her adorable smile & nodded. He too gave his million dollar smile. She looked at front. He looked at the same direction. It was Lord Kirshna’smruti. Then he came close to her & gave her a passionate kiss. Suddenly her hands slipped from his shoulder. He gave a look at her & found BLOOD!!FROM HER STOMACH BLOOD WAS POURING. HE LOOKED AT HER. SHE WAS LYING DEAD IN HIS HANDS. THEN HE REALISED THT EVEN HIS CHILDS WERE NO MORE!!!! HE ANGRYLY LOOKED AT LORD KRISHNA’S STATUE WITH FULL OF GRIEF, HATRED!!![/i][/i][/i][/b]
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With a jerk he got up & shouted: Nahi!!!!!!!!!! With a jolt others got up. At the same time alarm rang showing 7am. Saahil coming close to him: Bhai. Tu thik hai na???” Om looked at him & ran towards the window. He opened the curtains & the morning sunshine fell on his face. Arjun kept his hand on his shoulder. Zoha & others crashed into the room. Zoha in a concerned tone: Kya hoa Omi. Kyun chilya tumne??” Controlling his fear he narrated his dream to others…. Ronit: Maine tumhe kal psychiatrist ke pass lekar jaon ga.” Ruchhi: Krishna ji tumhare sapne me aaye. Fir bhi itna bhayanak sapna???” Don’t know yy but Om hated Lord Krishna. He found him a different. He thought bcoz he hated Krishnaji thtz yy in revenge he is showing him this dangerous dream. He think Krishna ji is making fun of him. He said in anger,slowly but pressing the words: Apke Krishna bhagwan kuch nahi karte. Kuch nahi!!
She was sitting near the gallery looked at the outside view. She hadn’t slept last night. She had the dream abt the same guy who save her from falling (Ofcourse, Om). She saw tht she was leaving him forever. & he is shouted, calling her to come back. She didn’t know yy she had tht type of dream. Earlier she used to have dream of Lord Krishna & of her marriage. When she met tht guy yy her heart she tht he meant something to her. She thought they had a relationship of….???? Lolo came into the room & saw Bebo busy in her thoughts. She hit her friendly on her back. She jolted front. Bebo: Lolo , mat kar aisa.Lagta hai na!!” Lolo: Sorry di. Kya hoa aap apne khayalo me khoye hoyi ho???” She nodded –tively. Lolo: Apne sapne ke bare me soch rahi ho na di??” Bebo nodded. “Chal na di. Kyun itni chinta karti ho. Don’t worry. Take a chill pill yaar!!!” Bebo smiled at her. “Chal di tyaar ho ja.” “Kyun. Hum kaha jaa rahe hai???” “I knew it. App bhool gaogi. Aree Dad ke best frined se nahi milne jana hai kya.” “Ohh shit!!!!” She hurriedly went to change room to get ready. Lolo laughed at her. She slowly prayed in her mind: Hey Kaanha!!! Di ki raksha kigiye ga. Plzzzzzz”
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They were sitting in board room. Ronit had called him there for some purpose. As they were getting bored Zoha asked everyone how will they propose their girlfriend. Arjun said: Aree yaar bhabhi. Pehle milne toh do. Yaha toh kismet he kharab hai aur aab kismet ki mallika ki baat kar rahi hoo.” Zoha(in punjabi tone): Oye!! Tu kuch kam naye hai oye. Ek girlfriend bhi banana nahi aata hai oye!! Khote tu toh useless hai oye!!! Kuch kam kaa ban. Mard ban!!!” Yash: “Oye bhabhi hum toh Mard hai hai.” “Oye chup kar.Mard kehta hai. Pehle Ladki ko propose karte ho aur jab ladki sandal othye toh ek pir par dode chale aate ho !!” Everyone burst out laughing. Turning to Mike: Oye tu rehne de. Tujhe skpi karti hoo.” Turning to Saahil she said: Oye Saahil. Tu bata tu kaise karege aapni GF ko propose” “Muh se.” Everyone burst out . She said: Useless!!” “ Arre saach bata na Zoha. Aur kahase, I mean(everyone raisingtheir voice of laughter which gave rise to Zoha’s anger :mad: ) kaise karo maine kissi ko propose??” “Oye Shut up!!!” Turning to Om, she smiled & asked: Oye toh bata. Tu kaise karega osse propose??” Mike: Aree yeh toh usski jaan bacha kar usse ek tarah she propose kar chukka hai. Unka expression mast tha ha!!” “Oye shut up. Tum chup raho.” She continued: Oye bata na Om.
Om got up, took the rose from the vas infront of him. He said standing infront of everyone: Maine kahonga, “Jaanu maine tumse bohot pyaar karta….. Tumhe……. khona nahi chata maine……. Tumhari saase meri saaso se judi hoye hai aur meri tumhare saaso se. Bas itna hi chata hai ki tum mujhse pyaar karo . Sirf mujhse….” Zoha: Dekha isse kehte hai Mar…….” Closing his eyes he turned towards the door & said: I LOVE U.” The environment went silent. He thought yy soo. He slowly opened his eyes & saw Bebo infront of him. She was in type of jumpsuit. She had tied fountain type aamboda iwht lil make. She was looking gorgeous. {Om was wearing jeans, shrit with jacket.All back.}She looked at him shocked :shocky: !!!!
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Hi. I’m Bebo. Ohh sorry. Shanti.” “And I’m Om” They shook their hands.
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