TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: TLS: PARTS

by **gauriandme** 1/10/2007, 8:12 pm

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¤TRIANGULAR Love story-Part-1

Hello everyone. I am back with my story. This story is basically based on our Angeles’s childhood and the love of between both the families. When they were small what they did, what did they played, how was very one’s attitude towards each other, ECT…Guys I am not nice in English. If any problem is there then plzz tell me or yogesh have also written in Hindi too. If I am unavailable to write in English. I have also written some hard words, but in brackets like this { } I have written their meanings too. So it will be easy for u all. There is neither very crying scenes in it, nor very emotion scenes. It is like a movie which contains happiness, sorrows, sadness and revenge and jealousy too. This is link of the photo of this story-

¤TRIANGULAR Love story-Part-1

It was 6 in the morning when Sumi woke up & took a bath. At 7 she started doing pooja’s preparations (She was some what Orthodox type) her house had 2 bedrooms, one small hall and one kitchen. She was living with her family which consisted her husband, her children, her devar and devrani and their one child. They were living happy.9yrs have past of Sumi and Shekar’s marriage and 7yrs have of Shanti and Shashank’s marriage. Sumi started doing arrthi by the saying prayers. Then she took the arrthi all over house and started spreading the smoke of the arrthi all over the house. She goes to her room and saw his husband and children having a gr8 sleep. She gave a cute smile and went back in front of god’s statue .She kept the plate of arrthii on the table and joined her both hands in front of God. She prayed to god, ’’Hey bhagwan mere parivaar ko sada khush rakhna. Mere parivaar pe koi bhi aaacch na annee payee. Sabki eechaa (wish) puri hogaye. Hey bhagwan.’’After then she heard some foot steps. She suddenly turned and saw her whole family in front of her.

She said:Aree tum sab ute(awake) hoe ho! Mujhe laga kit um sab sua hua ho.

Shekar: Hum bas mazak kar rahe the.tumhe ooluu(Owl) banana ke liya.

Sumi: Youuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!. Saying this she ran behind him to hit him whereas he started hiding behind Shashank. Seeing this everyone started laughing .

After sometime, Sumi started preparing the Tiffin’s of very one. She made all children ready for the school. Then after that all of them started having their breakfast. After taking a bite of chapatti and bhauji,Shekar exclaimed,’Waaahhh kya khana hai!!!’’ Sumi got very happy hearing this.She said,’Sach???’’.’Ha’ shekar said and further he naughtily said,’ha sachii bahot bahot hi Bura bana hai’ She started staring shekar angrily. She then said pulling the food plate of shekar,’Ok.Thik hai.Tho phir mat khaooo. Kyun shashank??????(Turning to shekar) Tumhe pasand nahi ayyaa na???Tho phir tum khir(sweet dish) bhi mat khana.(actually shekar loved khir very much,x=specially khir made by sumi)’’ After hearing this, Shekar suddenly said,’’Aree tum tho bura man gayee. Main tho majak kar raha tha. Just joking u know.”’Sumi: No.U didn’t liked it na then let it be.” Shekar: Aree baba main tho mazak kar raha tha. Sorry. Sumi: Hmmmmm.Tho chup chaapp se khaaoo.(said angrily)Seeing all this shashank and shanti started laughing .

After having their breakfast, Shekar took all the children to their school and from there he went to his office. He was just an ACP.

Shanti had taken holiday as she was not feeling well. She and Sumi were alone in the house.

Sumi: Shanti aaj bacchoo ko jaldi school me half day hai.Tumhe pata hai na??????

Shanti: Areeeeeeeeee ha!!!!!! OOOOOHHH ! Bhol hi gaye. Thnks for remembering me didi .

Sumi: AAAA y thnks. No thanks no sorry. Plzzz.

Shanti: Ok. (making a sad face she said) Didi I am missing pitaji and maa. I want to see them both.

At the same time the door bell rings. Sumi got up and went towards the door the open it. When she opened the door, she was shook to see her Pitaji(Dad) on the door steps.

She said excitedly: Pitaji !!!! Aap yaha.

{Guys I will represent Mr.Pratap Thokor as Mr.Thokor, only him and will represent Sunaina thokor,wife of Pratap thokor as Mrs.Thokor}

Mr.Thokor:Kya mujhe andar nahi bolaogi????

Sumi who was soooo happy to see his father there forgot everything. She said: Ooooo! Sorry pitaji. Aayyeaa na. Andar aayeaa.

Shanti watches her father .She got sooooooooo happy tht she went towards him and hugged him tietly .

Shanti: Pitaji ohhh we were just talking abt u now.I missed u toooo much.

Mr.Thokor: Sumi Shanti Mein tum ek baat batana chahata hooo. Mein jaldi se jaldi Shekar aur Shashank ko bolao.I want to talk to u all.

At the same time some one rings the door bell. Shanti goes towards the door and opens it. She was also again shocked to see her mother and his brother and his wife on the doorstep. She was soooo happyyyyyyy to see her in her house. She took her mom inside the house. Sumi saw her mom and got sooo happy.

Sumi. Maaaa….Aap..

She went towards her and hugged her tietly. Both Sumi and Shanti then realized that they have to take their children from school. Then they all went to school and brought all the children back home.

After sometime all of them gathered in the hall. Then Mr.Thokor started to talk

Mr.Thokor: Mene ek fasla kiya hai.

Yash T (T is Thokor): Kaisa fasla???

Mr.Thokor: Mene fasla kiya hai ki hum sab ek saath rahenge.

After listening this everyone was happy tht he had accepted Shekar and Shashank.

Shekar: Maaf kigiaa hum nahi aayaege.

Mr.Thokor: Kyun par????

Shekar: Kyunki Main appne parivaar ka booj kisi aur par anhi daalna chahata hoo.Sorry pitaji.Par……….

Mr.Thokor: Main janta that um yahi kahoge. Issi liya I will stay with sumi and shanti. So do any one has any problems????

Sumi: Lakin Maa ko akkele???? Aur Bhaiya???

Yash: Sumi donot woory.Maa humare saath rahengi.Kyun??

Mrs.Thokor: Haa.Tum chinta mat karo Sumi.

Sumi: Lekin aap hum se milne aaogi an???

Mrs.Thokor: Kyun nahi.Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai. Hearing this Sumi gave a cute smile.

So then all children went out in the garden for playing. In the evening Sumi made some snakes for everyone to eat. Then suddenly she remembered tht today Saahil’s exam papers must have been given. Saahil was in 4th (Now Let come on to their children )

Priyanaka and Sanju and Riya as u all know r genius in studies. They used to always get above 90%.Saaahil was just a dumbo . He used to always fail or was getting less mark. He used to also not get atleast50%. But he was good in sports. He used to always win trophies or medal Sumi used to always get frustrated of Saahil as he used to always get failed. Komal and Niharika were also good in studies. They used to get above 85%.Girls had no problems but boys pheeeewww . Pratham, Aryan and Yash were also good in studies. They used to get at least 75%.And Natesh and Punit were like Saahil.No!!! Worst then Saahil.40% they used to bring .

Pratham used to always get attracted:oops: towards Priyanka. He used to always watch Priyanka. When she plays with other, when she talks or when she cries or when dance or walk.

She went out and saw Sahil playing with all children. She went towards him and pulled him to the hall. She asked him angrily,Where r ur exam papers???? Did u pass in all subjects???? How much % did u got???

Saahil who was really shocked tried the turn the talk. He inturn told her in cute sound, ayeee kitna sawal pochtiho???? Ek ek pochonaa.

Sumi:Aaccha to bol to pass hoa sab subjects me???

Saahil as usual gave a smile which showed tht he had failed.

Sumi: Hey Ram!!! Main is ladke ka kya karo. Accha kisme fail hoa???

Saahil who again gave the same smile said, Sab me.

Everyone were shocked to hear tht. Sumi was sooooo shocked and angry tht she went towards the garden and took a big branch from the garden to hit sahil. Seeing this Saahil ran everywhere and behind him Sumi started running. Seeing this every one was laughing including the kids. Then Saahil ran towards shekar and told tht he got first prize in sports. Shekar got very happy and inturn Sumi got more angry. She said: Haa Sports. And started hiting saahil.Everyone tired to stop her.

Sacchii: Areee bas bachhaa hi baba. Mar daogi kay???

Sumi:tum hi bolo kya karo me. He is a PAPA’S BOY.

Sheakr: Someone is JEALOUS.

Sumi: Wht??? And she want behind him and tired to hit him. He ran outside and everyone started laughing .

Then after 2yrs Shekar become commissioner as her was the best. Then he transferred to Shimla. Then everyone both the families went to Shimla leaving Jaipur.

Sooo this is the end of the first part. I know it’s a big and boring part but Next part is very nice and in the next part is a leap part. U all will enjoy. Hope sooo. Any problems then plzzz ask me. Do send ur comments.

Coming Next: Priyanka,Komal jaldi aaoo. College ke liya deeer ho jayaga.

PRATHAM!!!! PRATHAM!!! PRATHAM!! Everyone started cheering.

Usha:D.

by **Sahil kohli** 2/6/2009, 10:12 pm

YA SUSPENSE BANA DALA

by **aanchal** 3/6/2009, 10:34 am

ya plz suspense khatam karo jaldiiii

by **gauriandme** 3/6/2009, 7:54 pm

Thnks for commenting. Dont worry suspense jaldi katam hoga.

by **Gayathri** 4/6/2009, 1:09 am

v r almost screwd to our seats coz u hav made such a suspence and thats making us more eager to read it more n more

by **gauriandme** 4/6/2009, 4:15 pm

Yes I want to make u ppl more eager!

by **gauriandme** 16/6/2009, 5:48 pm

*triangular love story: 15*

*Recap*

1)
Pratham
has recovered Priyu from the tragedy. She’s happy with Pratham.

2)
Their
parents, after consulting Panditji, decide their marriage date.

3)
Pratham
& Priyu enjoy Holi very much. It becomes a very precious moment for her.

4)
But
at tht time Priyu discovers tht she’s expecting.

*triangular love
story: 15*

*shimla (Home)*

All were sitting in the hall. Priyu was
terrified of speaking abt her condition. Her mind was full of questions. Wht
shuld I say??? Wht will they think?? Wht will they say?? Wht will they feel??
Wht will Pratham say?? Will he understand me??? Such questions came in her mind
making her terrified. Shekhar asked Priyu: Priyu beta tumne hum sab ko yaha
kyun bulaya hai??” Priyu coming out of her thoughts said: Ha?? Woh actually…”
But she again got lost in her thoughts. Pratham watched her sweating. He asked
her in concerned voice: Kya hoa Priyu?? Tumhe itna pasina kyun aa raha hai???
Tum kiss baat se itna darr rahi hoo Priyu??” Sanju said: Priyu tu itna kyun
darr rahi hai?? Bata de na. Yeh toh tum dono ka hai na??” P asked: Kya hum dono
ka hai???” Priyu said to Sanju: Agar nahi raha toh..??” Sanju getting angry:
Yaar y r u thinking pessimistic?? Think optimistic!!” Priyu asked: Magar…”
Sanju getting more annoyed said: Priyanka! Maine tera treatment kiya hai. Mujhse jada
iss baat ko aur kon janega??” P got puzzled. He looked at Sanju then &
Priyu. He asked: Tum log kya bate kar rahe hoo?? Kya koi mujhse batayega??”
Priyu looked at Pratham & said: Pratham??” P nodded in +tive. She cont’d:
I’m expecting!” P’s eyes widened, even others. He looked at Priyu clearly &
then at Sanju. He asked : Did she say tht shez expecting?? Means she’s
pregnant??” Sanju nodded in +tive. P got up & walked 3 steps & turned
& looked at her. Priyu gave him a concerned look.

P jumped high &
shouted: YES! MAINE
PAPA BANENE WALA HOO!!!!!!!!” All burst out laughing except Priyu. P came
towards his mom & saas & said: Suna apne aap dadi banene wale hoo.
YES!!!!!!” P came towards Priyu , bend down his knees & said: Dekha!
Treatment kam kar gaya.
Sanju ne joo mujh par treatment kiya tha wo kam kar gaya! (Getting emotional) Priyanka hum
“Mummy- Papa” banene wale hai. Thnks!”

P got up & was going
towards the door when Priyu held his hand. P turned back to see her. She got up
& said: Pratham??” P cupped her face with his hands & asked: Ha?
Bolo??” Priyu looked at him with tearful eyes. Watching her he got tensed &
asked: Aree! Priyu tumhe kya hoa?? Tum kyun roo rahi hoo??” She was getting
scared. Tears were continuously flowing from her eyes.

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Pratham
asked curiously: Priyanka??” Priyu looked at him & asked in choked voice:
Agar yeh baccha Kuvz ka hoa toh???” P’s eyes widened & asked: Nahi! Aisa
nahi hoo sakta!” Sanju : Ha! Priyu yaar! Acccident ke baad miane tere sare
tests kia the. Toh ussme kaise koi symptoms nahi mile the.” Priyu: Lekin..” P
said: Kya farak padta hai??? ( Pulling Priyu towards him) I don’t care
Priyanka! Mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai ki yeh kiska baccha hai.”

P’s
mom & dad agreed to Pratham. They too didn’t care abt it. Priyu said: Kya maine phir bhi DNA test
karva lo??” P got & angry & was gonna say no when Priyu requested:
Plzzz?” P looked at her tearful innocent eyes & just nodded.

* After 5hrs, at
9pm*

All
were waiting for the report. Before 5 hrs Priyu, Pratham & Sanju had gone
to Hospital for DNA test. Suddenly door bell rang & Aryan went towards the
door & opened it. A ward boy had come to give the report. After taking the
report he closed the door & came towards P & Priyu. P opened the report
& saw the results. Then he looked at Priyu & said: Positive. Yeh humara
baccha hai! Priyu gave out a sigh of relief & sat on the couch covering her
face. P sat beside her & hugged her.

Sanju
looked at everyone & said: Waise Maine
bhi…” Saahil looked at her suspiciously & asked: Tum bhi kya??” Sanju sat
beside him & gave him a cute innocent smile & asked: Wo yeh ki (Shying)
I’M TOOPREGNANAT. 4 MONTHS!” Saahil’s eyes widened & he started coughing
hard. Sanju got angry & hit him very badly. Saahil said: Aree! Plzz maro
mat.” Everyone started laughing. Even Saahil & Sanju laughing. Sanju came
towards P & said: Pratham Priyu kaa 2^nd month chal raha hai.
Priyu. Hum dono kke bachho me sirf 2do mahine ka farak hoga ….Ab mazza
aayega!!” Saying Sanju hugged Priyu.

by **gauriandme** 16/6/2009, 5:57 pm

* After one month*

Priyu & Pratham were alone in
the house. P had gone for a bath. Priyu
was sitting on a couch when door bell rang. The maid went & opened the
door. It was Pari. She entered the house & saw Priyu sitting on a couch.
Priyu saw her & got up. Priyu smiled & said: Hi Pari! Kaisi hoo??” Pari
said proudly: Thik hoo! Tum???” Priyu smiled: Maine bhi thik hoo.” Priyu tells the maid to
bring a glass of water. Priyu asks Pari to sit on the nearby couch. Priyu
asked: Tum yaha??” Pari: Ha wo Pratham se yeh contract papers sign karwana tha.
Partnership deal ke contract papers hai. Waise tum hospital nahi gaye??” Priyu:
Ha woh actually I’m not feeling well. So..” Pari: Ha! Suna hai tum pregnant
hoo.” Priyu just gave a short smile. Pari laughing: Accha hai tumhari. U know u
r quite intelligent.” Priyu didn’t understand wht she meant. Pari cont’d: Nahi
samjhi? Thik hai maine
samjhati hoo tumhe. Tum apni khoobsurati ka aacha fayada uthati hoo.”

Priyu felt bad. She didn’t know y she was saying such things to her.
Pari cont’d: Jaise apne khoobsurati ke
saath pyaar ka vada Pratham ke saath, mere bhai ko apne pyaar me dalti hoo,
phir attract Kuvz ko karti hoo, phir pyaar kisi aur ke saath aur phir apne
engagement ke dn Kuvz ke saath bhag jati hoo aur ab na jane kisska baccha lekar
Pratham se shaddi karne chal padi hoo.” Priyu got up from her seat angrily
& asked: TUM JANTI HOO TUM KYA KEH RAHI HOO??” Pari got up from her seat
& said: U know Priyanka U R A 3^RD GRADE WOMAN.” Priyu got soo
hurt tht she closed her eyes in shame. Pari cont’d shouting: U KNOW U R A…”
Suddenly Priyu heard a sound of slap. She opened her eyes & saw P slapped
Pari soo hard tht she fell on the floor. P held Pari’s hand & threw her
outside the door & tore the contract paper. He warned her: Agar tumne Priyu
ko phir insult kia toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga1” Saying this he closed the
door.

Pratham came inside but didn’t find Priyu ther. He searched her &
found her behind the house garden. She was sitting on a bench & was
continuously crying. P sat near her & said: Kya hoa?? Kyun ss idiot ki baat
ka itna bura maan rahi hoo??” Priyu looke at him with tearful eyes & said:
Pratham mujhe akela chhod do. Plzzz!”

Till then Sanju, Saahil, Aryan, Komu, Nishant, Nihu, Yash & Riya
came home. Maid told them everything. They all went behind the house & saw
Priyu crying. They were going towards her when P held them & said to go
inside. He’ll handle her. They agreed but saw everything standing behind the
bushes.

{ Maan ki Lagan from Paap}

{ P came towards Priyu & hugged her from
behind & started dancing in the same position.}

O Laagi Tum
Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

{Priyu pushed himj back & ran
away from him}
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

{ Walking towards
her he sang with expression.}

Gali-Gali
Ghoome

{Touching his heart then pointing
at Priyu}

Dil Tujhe
Dhoondhe

{Coming close to her}

Gali-Gali
Ghoome

{Pulling her towards him}

Dil Tujhe
Dhoondhe.

{Touching their eyelashes}
Tere Bin Tarase Nayan

{ Hugged her tightly & started
dancing & smiling}
Lagan Laagi
Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

{Priyu pushed him back & again
ran away}

(Coming towards her, he turned her
towards him}
Aa Ja O Meri Jaan

{Cupped her face}
Mere Dil Ka Jahaan

{Held her palm &touched her
nose with his index finger}
Maange Teri Khabar

{P Tears came from P’s eyes. Priyu
wiped it off}

Dhoondhe
Tera Nishaan

{Priyu hugged him tightly. P
smiles & sings dancingly}
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

{Holding her he
sings with expression}
Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe

{Touches her eyelashes with him}

Tere Bin
Tarase Nayan

{Looking at her}
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

{Taking red roses from his
pockets}

Lagan Laagi
Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

{Giving to Priyu. She smiles}
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

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{He holds
her in his arms & takes her in her room. He places her on her bed &
closes her door & curtain}
Tera Tujhako Saunp De Kya Laagat Hai Mor
Mera Mujhamen Kuchh Naaheen Jo Hovat So Tor

{ Lying beside her, he looks at her & sings}

Tere Bin
Mera Man
Jaise Ban Men Hiran
Jaise Pagali Pawan
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

{ (This para
is not sang by anyone. Its just imaginary) P & Priyu both look at each
others eyes}

Aa Aa
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Re Sa
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Re Sa
Ma Ga Re
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Re Sa
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Sa
Pa Ma Ga Re Sa
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Re Sa
Sa Re Ga Ma
Ma Ga Dha Pav Sa

{ Kissing
her forehead, nose cheeks, chin & at last lips}

Ni Dha Ni
Dha Pa
Dha Pa Ma Pa Ma Ga
Dha Ma Re Ga Pa

* Coming up Next*

P & Priyu’s marriage preparations.

*By

Usha*

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by **aanchal** 16/6/2009, 8:18 pm

thanks for updating.. nice part.

waiting for next part .
pratham is so loving & caring :angelish:

by **virgosaumya** 16/6/2009, 8:41 pm

yaar ye part awssim tha
aur plz jald se jald next part bhejo

by **Gayathri** 17/6/2009, 12:55 am

wah ,,,, shayad isse hi sacha pyaar kehte hai jo sirf thode hi logon ko naseeb hota hai

by **Gayathri** 17/6/2009, 12:55 am

exceptionally great part ... waiitng to read the next soon

by Guest 17/6/2009, 6:31 am

Yeahh Pratham-Piyu lovestory is really sweet... Plz update soon Wink

by **gauriandme** 17/6/2009, 6:12 pm

Thnks for such beautiful comments. I'm too happy :1: .

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