TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: TLS: PARTS

by **gauriandme** 1/10/2007, 8:12 pm

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¤TRIANGULAR Love story-Part-1

Hello everyone. I am back with my story. This story is basically based on our Angeles’s childhood and the love of between both the families. When they were small what they did, what did they played, how was very one’s attitude towards each other, ECT…Guys I am not nice in English. If any problem is there then plzz tell me or yogesh have also written in Hindi too. If I am unavailable to write in English. I have also written some hard words, but in brackets like this { } I have written their meanings too. So it will be easy for u all. There is neither very crying scenes in it, nor very emotion scenes. It is like a movie which contains happiness, sorrows, sadness and revenge and jealousy too. This is link of the photo of this story-

¤TRIANGULAR Love story-Part-1

It was 6 in the morning when Sumi woke up & took a bath. At 7 she started doing pooja’s preparations (She was some what Orthodox type) her house had 2 bedrooms, one small hall and one kitchen. She was living with her family which consisted her husband, her children, her devar and devrani and their one child. They were living happy.9yrs have past of Sumi and Shekar’s marriage and 7yrs have of Shanti and Shashank’s marriage. Sumi started doing arrthi by the saying prayers. Then she took the arrthi all over house and started spreading the smoke of the arrthi all over the house. She goes to her room and saw his husband and children having a gr8 sleep. She gave a cute smile and went back in front of god’s statue .She kept the plate of arrthii on the table and joined her both hands in front of God. She prayed to god, ’’Hey bhagwan mere parivaar ko sada khush rakhna. Mere parivaar pe koi bhi aaacch na annee payee. Sabki eechaa (wish) puri hogaye. Hey bhagwan.’’After then she heard some foot steps. She suddenly turned and saw her whole family in front of her.

She said:Aree tum sab ute(awake) hoe ho! Mujhe laga kit um sab sua hua ho.

Shekar: Hum bas mazak kar rahe the.tumhe ooluu(Owl) banana ke liya.

Sumi: Youuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!. Saying this she ran behind him to hit him whereas he started hiding behind Shashank. Seeing this everyone started laughing .

After sometime, Sumi started preparing the Tiffin’s of very one. She made all children ready for the school. Then after that all of them started having their breakfast. After taking a bite of chapatti and bhauji,Shekar exclaimed,’Waaahhh kya khana hai!!!’’ Sumi got very happy hearing this.She said,’Sach???’’.’Ha’ shekar said and further he naughtily said,’ha sachii bahot bahot hi Bura bana hai’ She started staring shekar angrily. She then said pulling the food plate of shekar,’Ok.Thik hai.Tho phir mat khaooo. Kyun shashank??????(Turning to shekar) Tumhe pasand nahi ayyaa na???Tho phir tum khir(sweet dish) bhi mat khana.(actually shekar loved khir very much,x=specially khir made by sumi)’’ After hearing this, Shekar suddenly said,’’Aree tum tho bura man gayee. Main tho majak kar raha tha. Just joking u know.”’Sumi: No.U didn’t liked it na then let it be.” Shekar: Aree baba main tho mazak kar raha tha. Sorry. Sumi: Hmmmmm.Tho chup chaapp se khaaoo.(said angrily)Seeing all this shashank and shanti started laughing .

After having their breakfast, Shekar took all the children to their school and from there he went to his office. He was just an ACP.

Shanti had taken holiday as she was not feeling well. She and Sumi were alone in the house.

Sumi: Shanti aaj bacchoo ko jaldi school me half day hai.Tumhe pata hai na??????

Shanti: Areeeeeeeeee ha!!!!!! OOOOOHHH ! Bhol hi gaye. Thnks for remembering me didi .

Sumi: AAAA y thnks. No thanks no sorry. Plzzz.

Shanti: Ok. (making a sad face she said) Didi I am missing pitaji and maa. I want to see them both.

At the same time the door bell rings. Sumi got up and went towards the door the open it. When she opened the door, she was shook to see her Pitaji(Dad) on the door steps.

She said excitedly: Pitaji !!!! Aap yaha.

{Guys I will represent Mr.Pratap Thokor as Mr.Thokor, only him and will represent Sunaina thokor,wife of Pratap thokor as Mrs.Thokor}

Mr.Thokor:Kya mujhe andar nahi bolaogi????

Sumi who was soooo happy to see his father there forgot everything. She said: Ooooo! Sorry pitaji. Aayyeaa na. Andar aayeaa.

Shanti watches her father .She got sooooooooo happy tht she went towards him and hugged him tietly .

Shanti: Pitaji ohhh we were just talking abt u now.I missed u toooo much.

Mr.Thokor: Sumi Shanti Mein tum ek baat batana chahata hooo. Mein jaldi se jaldi Shekar aur Shashank ko bolao.I want to talk to u all.

At the same time some one rings the door bell. Shanti goes towards the door and opens it. She was also again shocked to see her mother and his brother and his wife on the doorstep. She was soooo happyyyyyyy to see her in her house. She took her mom inside the house. Sumi saw her mom and got sooo happy.

Sumi. Maaaa….Aap..

She went towards her and hugged her tietly. Both Sumi and Shanti then realized that they have to take their children from school. Then they all went to school and brought all the children back home.

After sometime all of them gathered in the hall. Then Mr.Thokor started to talk

Mr.Thokor: Mene ek fasla kiya hai.

Yash T (T is Thokor): Kaisa fasla???

Mr.Thokor: Mene fasla kiya hai ki hum sab ek saath rahenge.

After listening this everyone was happy tht he had accepted Shekar and Shashank.

Shekar: Maaf kigiaa hum nahi aayaege.

Mr.Thokor: Kyun par????

Shekar: Kyunki Main appne parivaar ka booj kisi aur par anhi daalna chahata hoo.Sorry pitaji.Par……….

Mr.Thokor: Main janta that um yahi kahoge. Issi liya I will stay with sumi and shanti. So do any one has any problems????

Sumi: Lakin Maa ko akkele???? Aur Bhaiya???

Yash: Sumi donot woory.Maa humare saath rahengi.Kyun??

Mrs.Thokor: Haa.Tum chinta mat karo Sumi.

Sumi: Lekin aap hum se milne aaogi an???

Mrs.Thokor: Kyun nahi.Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai. Hearing this Sumi gave a cute smile.

So then all children went out in the garden for playing. In the evening Sumi made some snakes for everyone to eat. Then suddenly she remembered tht today Saahil’s exam papers must have been given. Saahil was in 4th (Now Let come on to their children )

Priyanaka and Sanju and Riya as u all know r genius in studies. They used to always get above 90%.Saaahil was just a dumbo . He used to always fail or was getting less mark. He used to also not get atleast50%. But he was good in sports. He used to always win trophies or medal Sumi used to always get frustrated of Saahil as he used to always get failed. Komal and Niharika were also good in studies. They used to get above 85%.Girls had no problems but boys pheeeewww . Pratham, Aryan and Yash were also good in studies. They used to get at least 75%.And Natesh and Punit were like Saahil.No!!! Worst then Saahil.40% they used to bring .

Pratham used to always get attracted:oops: towards Priyanka. He used to always watch Priyanka. When she plays with other, when she talks or when she cries or when dance or walk.

She went out and saw Sahil playing with all children. She went towards him and pulled him to the hall. She asked him angrily,Where r ur exam papers???? Did u pass in all subjects???? How much % did u got???

Saahil who was really shocked tried the turn the talk. He inturn told her in cute sound, ayeee kitna sawal pochtiho???? Ek ek pochonaa.

Sumi:Aaccha to bol to pass hoa sab subjects me???

Saahil as usual gave a smile which showed tht he had failed.

Sumi: Hey Ram!!! Main is ladke ka kya karo. Accha kisme fail hoa???

Saahil who again gave the same smile said, Sab me.

Everyone were shocked to hear tht. Sumi was sooooo shocked and angry tht she went towards the garden and took a big branch from the garden to hit sahil. Seeing this Saahil ran everywhere and behind him Sumi started running. Seeing this every one was laughing including the kids. Then Saahil ran towards shekar and told tht he got first prize in sports. Shekar got very happy and inturn Sumi got more angry. She said: Haa Sports. And started hiting saahil.Everyone tired to stop her.

Sacchii: Areee bas bachhaa hi baba. Mar daogi kay???

Sumi:tum hi bolo kya karo me. He is a PAPA’S BOY.

Sheakr: Someone is JEALOUS.

Sumi: Wht??? And she want behind him and tired to hit him. He ran outside and everyone started laughing .

Then after 2yrs Shekar become commissioner as her was the best. Then he transferred to Shimla. Then everyone both the families went to Shimla leaving Jaipur.

Sooo this is the end of the first part. I know it’s a big and boring part but Next part is very nice and in the next part is a leap part. U all will enjoy. Hope sooo. Any problems then plzzz ask me. Do send ur comments.

Coming Next: Priyanka,Komal jaldi aaoo. College ke liya deeer ho jayaga.

PRATHAM!!!! PRATHAM!!! PRATHAM!! Everyone started cheering.

Usha:D.

by Guest 3/11/2007, 8:04 pm

woww thats very intresting i think p accept priyus death magar dhere dhere thoda waqt lagega

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 8:14 pm

Hey how did u read there 6 parts soo soon??????????????? Shocked

Dont u wish ki Priyu shuldn't die bcoz in other fan club thye told tht they dont want tht she shuld die.

Usha.

by **aanchal** 5/11/2007, 3:25 pm

omg such an interesting story. mein to 1 ghnta screen se chipki rahi. pls don't let priyu die Sad

by **gauriandme** 5/11/2007, 6:27 pm

I'll try.

Usha.

by Guest 7/11/2007, 6:21 pm

ok

by **aanchal** 4/1/2008, 9:26 pm

continue with the story please

by Guest 4/1/2008, 10:05 pm

yeah plz usha ees story ko continue rakho
stry was gr88 !

by **gauriandme** 16/2/2008, 8:28 pm

Ø TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: 12

I am so sorry for posting this part soo late. Hope u all will like it.

Ø TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: 12

With a jerk he got up: Priyanka!” Everyone looked at him. He looked at everyone and got puzzled. He asked: Y u all r crying???” Kya hoa???” Everyone gazed at him in disbelief. Saachi: Beta. Beta Priyu….” and started crying loudly. P (keeping his fingers on his lips): Sssshhhhhhhhh!!!!! Aree kitni aavaj karte ho aap??? Itna kyun roo rahe hoo?? Kya koi maar gaya??” All were stunned. “Dekho Priyu jag jayegi aur Sanju ne he kaha hai na ke Priyu needs rest toh aap sab shant ho gao. OK???” He went towards Priyu’s lifeless body and waved his hand on her head and said a song (like lori). Sumi was unable to bear P’s condition. He was badly affected mentally. Riya: Bhaiya. Bhabhi is dead. She is…” Suddenly he got furious and warned her: SHUT UP!!! SHE IS NOT DEAD DAMIT!! SHE IS SLEEPING. CAN’T U SEE?” Sumi: Stop it beta. Hosh me aao.” Wohh Maar….” “ Maar nahi sakti woh. Muhje aakele chodkar nahi jaa sakti woh. She cant” He went towards Priyu’s body and asked to get up. When she didn’t he got angry: Stop it Priyanka. Plzzzz come back. (Tears flow from his eyes) Plzzzz.” Then he looked here and there and found something. He went towards it and switched on it. It was a current machine (u know doc’s use it. It gives jerks. I don’t know its exact name). Everyone tried to stop him. But he warned them if anyone comes in the middle and he will attack them with it. Sanju: Ruku. Pratham ko karne do. Jab usse pata chalega tab woh shant ho gayega.” Everyone agreed to her decision. P went near Priyu. Priyu had once taught him how to use it. He asked nurse to help her. Now 1st time, No movements, 2nd time, No movements AND??????????????????????? 3rd movement & she got up with a sudden jerk spitting blood & started gasping oxygen from her surrounding as fast as she could. Everyone glared at her in shock. The machine from P’s hand falls down. They didn’t believe their eyes. Even doctors. YES SHE WAS ALIVE. She fell on bed & started breathing hard. She looked at P & gave him a mere smile. Sanju ran towards her & called the nurse for injection. She requested everyone to go outside. Everyone came outside, still in shock. They didn’t believe their eyes. Wht did Pratham do to her???? They looked at him who had covered his face with his hands.

by **gauriandme** 16/2/2008, 8:41 pm

Sanju was checking machines lied beside Priyanka. Suddenly she felt as if Priyu was moving. When she came near to Priyu she saw Priyu’s eyes were slowly opening. A huge smile spread on Sanju’s face. She heaved her hand through Priyu’s head & asked sweetly: Kya tu thik hai”. She slightly nodded & asked: Pratham….” “Haa maine abhi Pratham ko bulati hoo.” At the same time Riya entered & was happy to see Priyu awake. Then Sanju called out Pratham & asked him to come to hospital. She went towards Priyu & said that he was coming. A smile appeared on her face. She memorized their beautiful days in Shimla & Rajasthan, tht night in Desert & those beautiful nights, ect.

{Main hoon Wohh Assman of KRRISH}
{ Starting think of forests. Beautiful forests. With trees, waterfall And P comes there and watches Priyu sitting near waterfall. She looks at him and comes towards him. P sings with expressions}

(P sings with expression)Main hoon woh aasman
Aur tum ho yeh zameen
Ho kar bhi hum juda
Hote juda nahi

{Priyu sings with expressions}Tum ho woh aasman
Aur main yeh zameen
Ho kar bhi hum juda
Hote juda nahi

{Both sings} :Main hoon woh aasman

{ Now there is a sweet theme with P rans behind Priyu and she too runs. Suddenly there is a thin fog around her and there are dangerous sounds and she finds someone coming towards her. She gets frightened. She watches tht man closes and finds KUVZ with his mask on his face. Behind Priyu was a deep valley ( kaayee) Kuvz start coming closer to her and she (without turning behind) goes backwards. Kuvz tries to touch her but she fall in tht valley and when she opens her eyes(eangles sound comes)she finds herself in P’s hands. Then P sings} Suddenly she remembered last night, tht Devil’s face covered with mask & his sinister actions. She palpitated, spooked out & screeched aloud. Pratham who had reached hospital few seconds ago rushed into her room & found her sitting on the bed, her fore head covered with bandage, leg folded near her chest & her eyes spooked out. He went towards her & consoled her: Priyu! R u ok???” She stared at him for few seconds. Tears started pouring from her beautiful brown eyes. She hugged him saying: Woh phir aayega Pratham! Mujhe darr lag raha hai! Pratham mujhe bachoo. Plzzz!” “Tum daro mat Priyu. Tumhe kuch nahi hoga.” Pulling him back she asked innocently, “Kaha the tum Pratham?? Plzzz mujhe chodd kar mat jao plzz…” “Nahi jaonga. Kahi nahi jaonga. I PROMISE!” They again hugged!

by **gauriandme** 16/2/2008, 8:45 pm

Premi banna jitna mushkil
Pyar nibhana usse bhi mushkil
{ Now Priyu sings hugging her}Paas mere tu hona agar tu
Kitna tadapta hai mera dil

(P sings smiling)Main hoon teri nazar
Mera intazar tu
Ho kar bhi hum juda
hote juda nahi

{Priyu sings with expressions, hugging him}Tum ho woh aasman
Aur main yeh zameen
Ho kar bhi hum juda
Hote juda nahi

Main hoon woh aasman

{ Now they r in a place where behind them is a huge waterfall and mountains. They are lying in a layer of dark green grass, and having ROMANCE. Having fun playing with water. Then Priyu goes towards the trees and P comes behind her. Then he comes close to her. Priyu sings.}

(Holding her hand) Pyar ki jitni bhi hai kitabe un mein likha hai naam hamara
{ P kisses her forehead, Cheeks, Chin and sings and priyu runs aways frm him} Deewanpan hum dono ka jaanta hai yeh jaahan sara

{ Coming towards P & pointing to him she sings}Kissa tu mera
Main tere kahani
Ho kar bhi hum juda
Hote juda nahi

{ P sings } Main hoon woh aasman
Aur tum ho yeh zameen
Ho kar bhi hum juda
Hote juda nahi

{Priyu sings} Ho kar bhi hum juda
{P sings} Hote juda nahi
{Priyu sings} Hote juda nahi
{Both hugging sings}Hote juda nahi

USHA.

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by Guest 19/2/2008, 1:17 am

nice parts !

by **gauriandme** 20/2/2008, 7:24 pm

Thnks!

by **aanchal** 5/5/2008, 4:51 pm

usha plz continue the fanfic soon

by **gauriandme** 6/5/2008, 12:13 pm

I'll surely post it soon.

by Guest 19/5/2008, 6:37 pm

plzz continue da parts !
flower

by **gauriandme** 2/5/2009, 5:44 pm

Ø Triangular love story : 13:

[size=12]I received ur lovely replies & I was pleased to read it. From this part there will be only & only quixotic, romantic scenes btwn P & Priyu.

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Ø Triangular love story: 13:

[size=12][size=18]Her eyes opened slowly. She looked at her left. The window was open. It gave a fantastic scenario of outside. The opposite mountains were covered with thick layer of snow. On the right she saw him peacefully sleeping. She was sleeping in his arms. Oh, how cute he looks while sleeping, she thought. Even he was injured. His forehead was covered with bandage. She slowly lifted her head towards his lips & gave him a small morning kiss. Slowly he too opened his eyes & saw her smiling face. He felt so relaxed to see her smiling. She wished him: Good morning!” Gave her a kiss on her fore head he too wished: Morning!” &. She got puzzled as y he kissed her on forehead. Grinning he replied in a choked voice: U see I’m stinking.” “So??” He chuckled a bit & kissed her lips. He got up & said: have a small nap till I came.” Holding his hands she asked: But where r u going?” Smilingly he answered: To get fresh.” She smiled & left his hands. He went inside the bathroom.

[size=12] She looked around the room. It was a special ward. There wee many machines beside her bed. After 20 mins P came outside. She went towards a wheelchair, opened it up & put on the brakes. He lifted Priyu in his arms & made her sat on the chair. He rolled it inside the bathroom. He helped her to brush her teeth, to get fresh.

[size=18]Sanju came inside & saw them coming out of the bathroom. Sanju: Pratham aree tumhe isse uttana nahi chaheye tha. Shez too weak. “
She helped him to sit her back on the bed. Priyu: Sanju maine thik hoo Tu dar mat.” In an irritated tone Sanju replied: Pata hai mujhe. Annkho se poata chal raha hai ke tu kitni weak hai. Aur mujhe sikha rahe hai.” Priyu gave her a small laugh. Sanju sat beside her & explained: U know how we were scared on knowing ur condition dear. Ayee ke aasuu toh rukte he nahi the. Baba ko toh kuch sujta he nahi tha. Sab ghabra gaye the yaar. Jab tu wapas aaye na toh aisa laga ki hume sab kuch wapas mil gaya.” Priyu smiled. Holding P’s hand Sanju thanked: Thnks to Pratham. Yeh toh mentally unstable ho gaya. Par ab sab kuch thik hoga hai. Thnks to God!” The door got opened & everyone came inside. Hugging his sis Saahil asked: Cha lab bas hogaya rona dhona. Chalo Nashta karte hai.” Then everyone started having their breakfast.

v After 10 days:

v After 10 days:

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[size=12]P took good care of Priyu. Priyu usually had bad dreams abt tht vicious night. So to make her calm he accompanied her. Priyu felt safe in P’s arms. Due to love, kindness & affection Priyu’s health started getting better & better. However, fractures were taking time to get healed { Yes she had fractures, u remember Kuvz pulled her leg when she was on tree. Later she jumped in the trench}. Chatting with P & others made her time pass. He made her laugh, smile & talk. He even helped to walk.

[size=12] After 20 days Priyu was discharged from the hospital. They brought her home. As she entered her house she felt relief. She was so happy to see her house. Ohh its so beautiful, she exclaimed. They all sat on a couch & started chatting. Watching such beautiful moments tears started pouring from her eyes. P got tensed: Kya hoa Priyu? Tum ro kyu rahe ho??” Everyone looked at Priyu. “Pata hai Pratham, Maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki maine kabhi aapne ghar aa paungi. Aisa laga ki maut ne mujhe inn sab se dur kar diya. Magar tum mujhe wapas laye.. Mujhe yeh zindagi di…. Thnks. Thnk u soo much. P gave her a tight hug. Suddenly Priyu felt pain in her head. Sumi: Pratham tu ja aur Piryu ko kamre me sulake aa.” P nodded & took her in the room.

[size=12]He made her sleep on the soft bed. He went to small table to take water.
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{Its Dheere Jalna, song of Paheli. Priyu sings in mind.}
{Thinking} socha na tha zindagi aaise phir se milegi jeebe ke liye
{Looking at P}aankhon ko pyas lagegi apne hi aasu peene ke liye
{P comes near to her, she looks at him}dheere dheere dheere dheere dheere jalnazindagi ki lau pe jalnadheere jalna - 3
{She touches his cheeks}{Hugging him}zindagi ki lau pe jalnakaanch ka sapna,
gal hi na jayesoch samajh ke ,
aanch rakhnadheere jalna - 3dheere dheere dheere dheere dheere jalnahona hain jo hona hain woh hone se toh rukta nahi
He makes her sleep on the bed & he sleeps beside her}aasmaan toh zukta nahin

v LONDON:

He was sitting on a royal chair at his huge mansion. He felt someone’s hand on his shoulder. He turned & saw his father. He said: Beta kaise ho??” Kuvz:“Dad woh kaisi hai???” “I don’t know beta. Son, forget her. Usske bare me information mikalna bohot difficult ho gaya hai. Police ne security badha de hai.” “Kaise bhol jao usse maine. Maine usse itni buri halat me chhoda tha. Aur…” Suddenly a person came running towards them. He halted & started breathing heavily. He gave a paper to Aditya. He read the paper & got shocked. He then passed the letter to Kuvz. Kuvz too got shocked by reading it. It was from their spies in India. It said tht they just visited the hospital in which Priyanka was admitted. It wrote tht due to major blood loss she is no more. Still stunned he fell on chair. Tears started pouring from his eyes. Kuvz in choked voice: Mujhe uske pass jana hai.” He got up & started running towards the door. But Aditya held him & pulled him back. In irritated voice: Plzz dad mujhe jane do. Plzz.” Saying this he burst out crying. Aditya explained him if he returned back then Police will surely ask abt his whereabouts. Aditya took him to his room.

He was sitting in his room with her picture, remembering her. A song came in his mind:

La la la la la la…

Tere Naam Hum ne kiya hai Jeevan apna sara sanam

Pyaar bohot karte hai tumse,

Ishq hai tu humara sanam,

Hoo Ishq hai tu humara sanam.

On the other hand, in shimla:

{Remember Tere Naam’s music)

Priyu is happy with her family. {Flute music} She does puja, cooks food. Shez enjoying her life here.

In London:

He doesn’t have food..

{Tadap Tadap Ke from Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam}

{Kuvar is continuously crying}He shouts loudly

Bejaan Dil Ko , Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya,
Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya

{He tries to shoot himself with his gun. But he couldn’t}

Tadap Tadap Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya,
Toh Lut Gaye, Haan Lut Gaye, Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,

{Still crying, looking at her photo}

Tadap Tadap Tadap Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya,
Toh Lut Gaye, Haan Lut Gaye, Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,

Tadap Tadap Tadap Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya,
Toh Lut Gaye, Haan Lut Gaye, Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,

{Remembering her, each moment spent with her, their 1^st encounter, their moments in Jodhpur, tht vicious night}

He burst out crying. He totally gets mad.

Ajab Hai Ishq Yara, Pal Do Pal Ki Khushiyan,
Gam Ke Khazane Milte Phir, Milti Hain Tanhaiyan,

{Looking her photo}

Kabhie Aansoon, Kabhie Aahen, Kabhie Shikwe Kabhie Nale,
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye,

{Starts shouting, He watches her face in sky, at night in moon.}

Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye, Mujhe Din Ke Ujalon Mein Teri Yaadien Tadapayein,
Teri Yaadien Tadapayein, Raaton Ke Andheron Me Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye,

{Crying loudly}

Machal Machal Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya, Toh Lut Laye, Haan Lut Gaye,
Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

{He was sitting on heaps of Priyu’s photos. He tries to cut his wrist with blade. & even cuts it. Blood starts pouring} He takes drugs (not medicines.). Looking at the sky, he started shouting.

Agar Mile Khuda Toh, Poochoonga Khudaya,

{Looking himself in the mirror}

Jism Mujhe De Ke Mitti Ka, Sheshe Sa Dil Kyon Banaya,

{Looking at his injuries}

Aur Us Pe Diya Phitrat Ki Woh Karta Hai Mohabbat, Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat,
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat Uspe De diya Kismat, Kabhie Hai Milan Kabhie Furqat,
Kabhie Hai Milan Kabhie Furqat, Hai Yahi Kya Who Mohabbat, Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat,

(He takes the knife & starts making cut over his hands, wrists, face, neck.}

Sisak Sisak Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya, Toh Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye,
Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,

He fells on the ground. He was sleeping in the river of blood.

Tadap Tadap Tadap Ke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi, Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki,
Aisa Kya Gunah Kiya,
Toh Lut Gaye, Haan Lut Gaye, Toh Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,

Niharika comes in his room & watches him sleeping on the floor which had gone red due to his blood. She came towards him & found him unconscious. She ran outside to call Hrishi & doctor.

BY USHA.

by **gauriandme** 2/5/2009, 5:49 pm

Do u all think Kuvar deserves this??????

by **aanchal** 2/5/2009, 8:00 pm

ohhhhhhhhh ushaa thanks a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt for updating. loved the parts. & p's love & care for priyu :angelish:

& yes kunwar deserved this. he deserved more painful death than this one :mad:

by **Sahil kohli** 2/5/2009, 8:36 pm

:correct:

by **gauriandme** 3/5/2009, 12:35 pm

Thnks for commenting Very Happy

by **gauriandme** 10/5/2009, 5:35 pm

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by Guest 10/5/2009, 7:05 pm

Lol kuvzzz need more terrible death!... Never mind... U keep on! Wink

by **gauriandme** 10/5/2009, 7:55 pm

Thnks for commenting.

by **gauriandme** 2/6/2009, 8:50 pm

triangular
love story: 14

{Sorry guys. Kuvz ki
secretary ka naam Niyati hai. }

Niyati comes in
his room & watches him sleeping on the floor which had gone red due to his
blood. She came towards him & found him unconscious. She ran outside to call
Hrishi & doctor.

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After 2 ½ months:[/size]

She was sitting on a couch watching
Charlie Chapline movie. She was continuously laughing. P kept on looking at
her. She looked at him asked: Kya hoa? Aise kyun dekh rahe ho??” P said nodding
his head in –tive. P says: Tum huste hoa bohot pyaari lagti hoo.” She shied
& hugged.

Elders had called Pandit
ji. Dadaji asked: Panditji yeh rahe Pratham aur Priyanka ki kundali. Aap jaldi
se unke shaddi ka muhorat dhond legiye.” Tht Pandit nodded & started
searching mouharat.

Pratham & Priyanka
were in their room, lying in each others arms. They heard a knock outside their
door. It was Sanju. She came inside & said tht all r calling them down.

They came down & saw
tht Panditji was present there. They went towards him & took blessing from
him. Panditji said: Jeete raho.” P asked him: Aap yaha?? Koi hawan ki tarik tyee
karne aaye hai aap??” Dadu replied: Pratham hum sab tumhari aur Priyu ke shaadi
ke date fix karwane ke liye Pandit ji ko bulaya hai.” P & Priyu together:
Kya!” Pandit ji: Ha beta aur maine
date dhoond bhi liya hai. 29^th April.” P & Priyu: Kya!” They
looked at each other & smiled. Sumi: Bas ek mahina baki hai.” Sanju took a big thali of royal sweets &
filled P & Priyu’s mouth with it. All were happy.

When Panditji departed, Niharika
said in excitement: Hey guys bhool gaye kya?? Sunday ko Holi hai aur aaj
Thursday hai. Chalo hum sab shopping karne jaate hai. They all agreed &
except P & Priyu all went for shopping. P & Priyu preferred to stay at
home & spend some time with each other.

Priyu was sitting in her
room, reading a book. P was in the kitchen, preparing something for Priyu. After
preparing it he took it towards Priyu. She was him coming towards her. She saw
tht he was holding a tray. She asked: Pratham, yeh kya banaya hai tumne??” He
sat beside her & made her taste it. It were Pakode. She tasted it &
said: Wooow!! It is…. Delicious! Hmmm! Yummy! Pata hai tumhe ess cookingko
seriously lena chaheye” He said at her & kept on looking at her. Ohh how
innocent she is, he thought. She saw him looking at her. She came close to him
& made him eat it. He took a bit & said: Wooww! Mujhe lagta hai tum
sahi keh rahi hoo. Mujhe saach me ees cooking ko seriously lena chaheye.”
Saying this, they smiled.

Later he took her for a
ride. He took her on the hills. Woow, its soo pretty, she exclaimed.

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He stopped his car near the hills & both
were lost in each others eyes. Priyu came towards him & gave him a
beautiful kiss!! Then he took gave her a kiss! Later they were lost in their
love.

Holi:

She went into his room
& sat beside him. He was in deep sleep. She took red color & slowly
rubbed it on his face. He enjoyed her touch. He slowly opened his eyes. He got
up & looked at her. He gave her a cute smile. She too smiled at him. He
said: Good morning!” She too wished him. Before being caught, she went out. He
got confused y she went out like this. He got off his bed & stretched his
body. Priyu & others were outside the door, watching him secretly. . He
waved his hand through his hair & came in front of the mirror. He slowly
opened his eyes & looked at himself. Looking at himself he gave out a huge
scream: AAAA!!!!!

All
burst out laughing. P ran out to catch any one of them. All ran down, towards
the garden. P followed them.

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As
he came in the garden, P’s mom & dad threw water from the balcony. He went
wet. All burst out laughing. He saw Priyu laughing. She was looking soo cute.
He took some colors in his hands & ran towards her. She tried to run but
held her hand & pulled her towards him. They were lost in each others eyes.
He slowly rubbed her face with red color. She slowly took red color from her
back & threw it on his face. Then she pushed him back & he fell in a water
tub which was full of color water. Looking at this she started laughing. He too bursted out laughing!

In
priyu’s room:

Sanjana, Komu, Nihu,
Riyu & Disha came into her room. Komu:
Yaar! Kya mazza aaya!” Nihu: Waise Priyu di kaha hai?” Disha: Ha.Khaha hai
woh??” Sanju: Pata nahi. Priyu bhi….” Suddenly they heard noise of water. Sanju
looked towards the bathroom door. It was half open. They entered in & saw
Priyu stting in the bath tub with the shower on. They came towards her &
asked wht was she doing here. Priyu looked at them. She said: Mujhe vomit hoa.”
Nihu: Toh?? Isse aise shower ke niche bethne ka kya matlab haii??” Priyu said
in a choked voice: I think I’m expecting.” Their eyes widened. Sanju got happy
& said: Woow. Matlab tera aur Pratham ka?? Woow! Isska matlab Pratham ka
treatment successful hoa!” Priyu: Agar yeh baccha Pratham ka na raha tho??”
Hearing this they got shocked. Sanju got up & brought Priyu in the room
& asked her to get ready. Priyu asked: Kyu??” Sanju Check up karne jana
hai.” Priyu: AGAR YEH BACHA PRATHAM KA NAHI RAHA TOH????

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Wht will happen now?????

BY USHA

by **Gayathri** 2/6/2009, 9:01 pm

ohh no plss usha is suspense ko jaldhi kahtam karo...... icant just wait nymore

by **Sahil kohli** 2/6/2009, 10:12 pm

YA SUSPENSE BANA DALA

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