TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: TLS: PARTS

by **gauriandme** 1/10/2007, 8:12 pm

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¤TRIANGULAR Love story-Part-1

Hello everyone. I am back with my story. This story is basically based on our Angeles’s childhood and the love of between both the families. When they were small what they did, what did they played, how was very one’s attitude towards each other, ECT…Guys I am not nice in English. If any problem is there then plzz tell me or yogesh have also written in Hindi too. If I am unavailable to write in English. I have also written some hard words, but in brackets like this { } I have written their meanings too. So it will be easy for u all. There is neither very crying scenes in it, nor very emotion scenes. It is like a movie which contains happiness, sorrows, sadness and revenge and jealousy too. This is link of the photo of this story-

¤TRIANGULAR Love story-Part-1

It was 6 in the morning when Sumi woke up & took a bath. At 7 she started doing pooja’s preparations (She was some what Orthodox type) her house had 2 bedrooms, one small hall and one kitchen. She was living with her family which consisted her husband, her children, her devar and devrani and their one child. They were living happy.9yrs have past of Sumi and Shekar’s marriage and 7yrs have of Shanti and Shashank’s marriage. Sumi started doing arrthi by the saying prayers. Then she took the arrthi all over house and started spreading the smoke of the arrthi all over the house. She goes to her room and saw his husband and children having a gr8 sleep. She gave a cute smile and went back in front of god’s statue .She kept the plate of arrthii on the table and joined her both hands in front of God. She prayed to god, ’’Hey bhagwan mere parivaar ko sada khush rakhna. Mere parivaar pe koi bhi aaacch na annee payee. Sabki eechaa (wish) puri hogaye. Hey bhagwan.’’After then she heard some foot steps. She suddenly turned and saw her whole family in front of her.

She said:Aree tum sab ute(awake) hoe ho! Mujhe laga kit um sab sua hua ho.

Shekar: Hum bas mazak kar rahe the.tumhe ooluu(Owl) banana ke liya.

Sumi: Youuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!. Saying this she ran behind him to hit him whereas he started hiding behind Shashank. Seeing this everyone started laughing .

After sometime, Sumi started preparing the Tiffin’s of very one. She made all children ready for the school. Then after that all of them started having their breakfast. After taking a bite of chapatti and bhauji,Shekar exclaimed,’Waaahhh kya khana hai!!!’’ Sumi got very happy hearing this.She said,’Sach???’’.’Ha’ shekar said and further he naughtily said,’ha sachii bahot bahot hi Bura bana hai’ She started staring shekar angrily. She then said pulling the food plate of shekar,’Ok.Thik hai.Tho phir mat khaooo. Kyun shashank??????(Turning to shekar) Tumhe pasand nahi ayyaa na???Tho phir tum khir(sweet dish) bhi mat khana.(actually shekar loved khir very much,x=specially khir made by sumi)’’ After hearing this, Shekar suddenly said,’’Aree tum tho bura man gayee. Main tho majak kar raha tha. Just joking u know.”’Sumi: No.U didn’t liked it na then let it be.” Shekar: Aree baba main tho mazak kar raha tha. Sorry. Sumi: Hmmmmm.Tho chup chaapp se khaaoo.(said angrily)Seeing all this shashank and shanti started laughing .

After having their breakfast, Shekar took all the children to their school and from there he went to his office. He was just an ACP.

Shanti had taken holiday as she was not feeling well. She and Sumi were alone in the house.

Sumi: Shanti aaj bacchoo ko jaldi school me half day hai.Tumhe pata hai na??????

Shanti: Areeeeeeeeee ha!!!!!! OOOOOHHH ! Bhol hi gaye. Thnks for remembering me didi .

Sumi: AAAA y thnks. No thanks no sorry. Plzzz.

Shanti: Ok. (making a sad face she said) Didi I am missing pitaji and maa. I want to see them both.

At the same time the door bell rings. Sumi got up and went towards the door the open it. When she opened the door, she was shook to see her Pitaji(Dad) on the door steps.

She said excitedly: Pitaji !!!! Aap yaha.

{Guys I will represent Mr.Pratap Thokor as Mr.Thokor, only him and will represent Sunaina thokor,wife of Pratap thokor as Mrs.Thokor}

Mr.Thokor:Kya mujhe andar nahi bolaogi????

Sumi who was soooo happy to see his father there forgot everything. She said: Ooooo! Sorry pitaji. Aayyeaa na. Andar aayeaa.

Shanti watches her father .She got sooooooooo happy tht she went towards him and hugged him tietly .

Shanti: Pitaji ohhh we were just talking abt u now.I missed u toooo much.

Mr.Thokor: Sumi Shanti Mein tum ek baat batana chahata hooo. Mein jaldi se jaldi Shekar aur Shashank ko bolao.I want to talk to u all.

At the same time some one rings the door bell. Shanti goes towards the door and opens it. She was also again shocked to see her mother and his brother and his wife on the doorstep. She was soooo happyyyyyyy to see her in her house. She took her mom inside the house. Sumi saw her mom and got sooo happy.

Sumi. Maaaa….Aap..

She went towards her and hugged her tietly. Both Sumi and Shanti then realized that they have to take their children from school. Then they all went to school and brought all the children back home.

After sometime all of them gathered in the hall. Then Mr.Thokor started to talk

Mr.Thokor: Mene ek fasla kiya hai.

Yash T (T is Thokor): Kaisa fasla???

Mr.Thokor: Mene fasla kiya hai ki hum sab ek saath rahenge.

After listening this everyone was happy tht he had accepted Shekar and Shashank.

Shekar: Maaf kigiaa hum nahi aayaege.

Mr.Thokor: Kyun par????

Shekar: Kyunki Main appne parivaar ka booj kisi aur par anhi daalna chahata hoo.Sorry pitaji.Par……….

Mr.Thokor: Main janta that um yahi kahoge. Issi liya I will stay with sumi and shanti. So do any one has any problems????

Sumi: Lakin Maa ko akkele???? Aur Bhaiya???

Yash: Sumi donot woory.Maa humare saath rahengi.Kyun??

Mrs.Thokor: Haa.Tum chinta mat karo Sumi.

Sumi: Lekin aap hum se milne aaogi an???

Mrs.Thokor: Kyun nahi.Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai. Hearing this Sumi gave a cute smile.

So then all children went out in the garden for playing. In the evening Sumi made some snakes for everyone to eat. Then suddenly she remembered tht today Saahil’s exam papers must have been given. Saahil was in 4th (Now Let come on to their children )

Priyanaka and Sanju and Riya as u all know r genius in studies. They used to always get above 90%.Saaahil was just a dumbo . He used to always fail or was getting less mark. He used to also not get atleast50%. But he was good in sports. He used to always win trophies or medal Sumi used to always get frustrated of Saahil as he used to always get failed. Komal and Niharika were also good in studies. They used to get above 85%.Girls had no problems but boys pheeeewww . Pratham, Aryan and Yash were also good in studies. They used to get at least 75%.And Natesh and Punit were like Saahil.No!!! Worst then Saahil.40% they used to bring .

Pratham used to always get attracted:oops: towards Priyanka. He used to always watch Priyanka. When she plays with other, when she talks or when she cries or when dance or walk.

She went out and saw Sahil playing with all children. She went towards him and pulled him to the hall. She asked him angrily,Where r ur exam papers???? Did u pass in all subjects???? How much % did u got???

Saahil who was really shocked tried the turn the talk. He inturn told her in cute sound, ayeee kitna sawal pochtiho???? Ek ek pochonaa.

Sumi:Aaccha to bol to pass hoa sab subjects me???

Saahil as usual gave a smile which showed tht he had failed.

Sumi: Hey Ram!!! Main is ladke ka kya karo. Accha kisme fail hoa???

Saahil who again gave the same smile said, Sab me.

Everyone were shocked to hear tht. Sumi was sooooo shocked and angry tht she went towards the garden and took a big branch from the garden to hit sahil. Seeing this Saahil ran everywhere and behind him Sumi started running. Seeing this every one was laughing including the kids. Then Saahil ran towards shekar and told tht he got first prize in sports. Shekar got very happy and inturn Sumi got more angry. She said: Haa Sports. And started hiting saahil.Everyone tired to stop her.

Sacchii: Areee bas bachhaa hi baba. Mar daogi kay???

Sumi:tum hi bolo kya karo me. He is a PAPA’S BOY.

Sheakr: Someone is JEALOUS.

Sumi: Wht??? And she want behind him and tired to hit him. He ran outside and everyone started laughing .

Then after 2yrs Shekar become commissioner as her was the best. Then he transferred to Shimla. Then everyone both the families went to Shimla leaving Jaipur.

Sooo this is the end of the first part. I know it’s a big and boring part but Next part is very nice and in the next part is a leap part. U all will enjoy. Hope sooo. Any problems then plzzz ask me. Do send ur comments.

Coming Next: Priyanka,Komal jaldi aaoo. College ke liya deeer ho jayaga.

PRATHAM!!!! PRATHAM!!! PRATHAM!! Everyone started cheering.

Usha:D.

by Guest 2/10/2007, 6:31 am

wow !! yaar i just enjoyed this part especially where he made ooloo to sumi ! hehehe but story is fablous keep continue

plz keep continue ur fictions .. yeh mat socho kaun pasand karega infact maine bhi iski parwa nahi ki thii aur sirf apne fictions ko continue kiya aur ab dekho mere fictions ko bahut saarey reply miltey hain so just keep continue and i know u can do it !

by **aanchal** 2/10/2007, 10:11 am

nice story. Smile

by **gauriandme** 2/10/2007, 12:08 pm

Thnks for commening Smile

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Usha.

by **gauriandme** 2/10/2007, 8:18 pm

0TRIANGULAR Love story-Part-20

Hello guys. How r u all??? I am again back with the 2nd part of the story. Now this part is based on Pratham and Priyanka’s love and his proposal. Hope u all will enjoy this part. Guys I have added one person in my story.He is Dara Singh as Shekar’s father. His name is Soonesh Pradhan.He is Commisoner of Shimla and Shekar is ACP And SAahil is also an ACP. So shekar is not alone. I know very confusing. Woohh hamesha kabbab me haadi hai. Ye samaj lo app sab. Hope u all very understand. And not get confuse.

0TRIANGULAR Love story-Part-20

In House (House means Pradhan Thakor House)

‘’OHHHHHHHH, What a lovely morning it is!!’’ It is 6.00am in the morning. Sumi opens the big window in the hall. Then she goes towards kitchen and cooks food and some sweets for the ‘Prasad’. She took 1 and a half hour to cook all dishes. While cooking food she starts singing song ‘Kabhi neem neem’’ from Yuva.

(Guys I cant sing the song or write it so I’ll write in short form)

First Para of the song sumi is singing now. Then later in the end, as usual the same thing repeats,She does pooja and joins her hands and prays,’’Hey bhagwan mere parivaar ko sada khush rakhna. Mere parivaar pe koi bhi aaacch na annee payee. Sabki eechaa (wish) puri hogaye. Hey bhagwan.’’ ’’After then she heard some foot steps. She suddenly turned and saw her whole family in front of her. When she turns she finds all her family in front of her whole family in front of her. Then later she sings the remaining song, ’Shonda ki lali,mukha chamkaya’. She sings the song by cooking her food, and serving the food. After when her song got over,Sumi said:Pratham kaha hai.Where is he.Aur Priyanka kaha hai woohh.

At the same time:

Priyanka shouting come down wearing green dress. ‘’OHHHHHH u r looking very beautiful beta.’’,Yash says. Priyanka says,’’ Ayee Main aeee’’ (Ayee-Mom,Aee-Coming).And comes down and says nicely to yash,’’Thnks uuuuuuuuuu.’’ ‘’Sooryyyyyy ayee late hogaya.’’ ‘’Its ok beta. Accha ye bata Pratham kaha hai???’’ ‘’Mujhe nahi pata,shaking’’ her head in negative.Priyu ‘’Hi Dadu’’ Somesh’’Hi beta.Kise ho??’’ Priyu’’Fine dadu.’’ Sumi: ‘’Aree ye sab ladke gayab hai’’.’’Aree ha aaj pratham ka race hai. Bike race.’’,Sahil. Listening this Priyu got shocked and said: Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!. OO SHIT.Me bhol gayii.Pratham ne mujse kaha tha. Padhayee karte karte bol gayii.OOO god. Woo bahot naraj hoga.’’ Saying this priyu takes 2 parathas(of aloo and methe. My mom does that)And says:Me chalti hooo.Bye.’’ ‘’Wait.Hum bhe aate hai’’ Saying this all angles take their breakfasts and tiffins in their hands and kissing their mom they all followed priyu.

In College:

All people were shouting charring like mad. ’’PRATHAM PRATHAM PRATHAM.COME ON PRATHAM.’’ All girls were very eager for the race. And at last He wins. He wins. ’’YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA’'

All girls shouted. Then one man comes down of his bike. He slowly removed his helmet. OOOOOOO U all have to see his smiling face. All girls were around him. Congratulating him kissing him (on his cheeks).Then Shashank comes there and Congrates him. He gives him a smile and huggs him. But. But his eyes are SEARCHING some one. His eyes are moving here and there to find her. But he is unable to find her. He was very upset. He went away from all girls. He went near to his jeep and kept his hand on his seat. He felt a concerning hand of Aryan. Seeing Aryan’s expression Pratham started crying in Aryan’s arms(He is TOOO EMOTIONAL). Pratham: ‘’Wohh.. woo nahi aee. Maine use kaha tha use kal ki, ki kal mere bike ka race hai. Par wohh nahi aee.’’ (OOOO POOR BOY) Saying this he again started crying.

Natesh: No yaar. Priyanka aisa kabhi nahi karegi. Dekhana wohh jaroor aeegi. I am sure about this yaar.’’ ‘’Nahi wooh nahi aaegi. Dekhana’’ Pratham. Punit : No. wohh aeegi. Bhalki wohh agee hai yaar. See.’’ When all looked forward to the gate, they saw Priyu running inside. She looked towards the boys and Pratham gave him an angry stern look and turned towards Aryan. She gave a cute smile to very one and vice versa accept Pratham. All girls came near to them and Priyu says ‘’Hi guys (looking at Pratham) Hi Pratham.’’ He again gave a stern look having tears in his cute eyes and said: ‘’Do not talk with me.’’ ‘’Sorry Pratham. Actually wohh kya hai ki me bol gai. Sorry. Aur tum bhi na. Me nahi aee tho chote bacche ki tarah rone lage. I know tum ne ye race jarror jita hoga. I know. Chalo ab jita hoa Cup dekha bhi do. Plzzzzzzzzz.’’ She kept her hands on her ears and said ‘’SORRYYYYY’’ Pratham just looked at her and gave her a cute smile and said: Its ok. Ye dehko my prize.’ He gave his prize to Priyu. She says: Woooowwwwwwwwww its gr8. Congrates (saying this she gave him a cute hug.).At the same time, Bobby Darling came running towards and hugged Pratham: Hi Pratham. Congrates. Muhje tumhe congrats karna tha par tum tho gayeb hi hoge the.Kaha the???(still having hands on Pratham) Pratham: Hey chodo mujhe(removing her hand from him).Agli bar muhje hath mat lagana. Lagoge tho mar dalonga. BD: O ho Lagoge nahi lagogi. ’’ P: Shut up and get lost. Bobby gave an angry stern to him and goes away. Seeing this everyone started laughing. Sanju ‘’Chalo ab class suru ho gayega let go.’’ Saahil : Ya. Mujhe bhi jana hai office. Ok.bye.”Bye Sanju.’’ Sanju:Bye(giving him hug) Take care.

All of them said bye and he went away. Komo :Chalo.Bye guys.’

All said by to each other and went on their way. Priyu, Sanju and Riyu went to their medical class, Komal to her class, nihu and natesh both went with saahil for their ACP training, Yash went to his painting class as he is the best painter & all Pratham, Aryan and Punit went to their business class. THAKOR COLLEGE consisted all types of education: Medical to Advocate, Business to Painting class. But it didn’t consist of ACP training. For tht Mr. Somesh Pradhan i.e, Priyanka’s Dada, had removed classes for that ACP training which was very near to THOKOR COLLEDGE.

After 6 hrs:

All angles meet at the canteen. Accept Saahil as he is officer cannot come always. One thing, Nihu is very nice in shooting, fighting, boxing, ECT than Natesh. After having their breakfast with ghupshups, Angles ordered coffee for themselves. They were laughing, giggling, joking, discussing, ECT. This all was seen by Pari, Tarun and all their friends. Pari: Dekho ye Priyanka kaise has rahi hai. Monica: Pata nahi Pratham ko is Priyanka me aisa kya pasand aayaa. I hate Priyanka. I hate her. Tarun: But I love her. Pari and other friends: Kya??? R u mad??? Tarun: Yes. I am mad’’ Tarun got up from his seat and went towards Priyanka’s seat and says: Hi Priyanka. How r u???? U r looking damn beautiful. Priyanka didn’t like him at all. She didn’t respond him and gets up from her seat and goes away. All of them gets up from their seats and goes away. Later Priyanka says: Next week se hum sab ka exams suru ho gayega. Tho tab tak muhje revision suru ra dena chahiye. Kyun sanju???’’ Sanju: Ya. U r right. Chalo ghar chalte hai.’’ Then their exams started and later after 2 weeks it overed. At that time shansanka comes there and says,’’Kya hoa??Khana khake ho gaya??’’ Sanju: Yes dad.’’ At the same there is an annocement by Mallika (Mallika is Archana Puran Singh. Guys hope u have seen Kucch Kucchh hota hai and in that u have sent he character of Anupam kher and Archana Puran Singh and there their characters r same.Here Mallika is a teacher and she doesn’t like angles especially sanju and love Pari and all her friends)Hello Mr.Pradhan.Kya aap ek min ke liya mere cabin me aa sakte hai.Plzzzzzzz.Bye’’ Sanju gave him an angry stern look to shashank and all angles goes to mallika’s cabin and says to mallika ,:Kya hai??Kyun aap dad ko bar bar bulati ho??Kuch kam nahi hai kya?? Agli bar bulaogi na tho thane(police station) pochva dongi. Samjee??’’ Turning towards Shanshank Main aapp ko bhi nahi chodungi. Mom ko batongi.Sanjhe??’’ Saying this she went out.All angles follows sanju. Shashank also went away. Mallika got soo angry by this whole incident.(Guys I am writing in short)

After few days :

In their house, P:Hey chalo na club cal ke time pass karte hai. Vese bhi exams tho over ho gaya hai na.’’Priyu: Ha.Magar results aanna baki hai. Results annae tanak main kani nahi aaogi.Vesi bhi mujhe bohot darr lag raha. Jiske vajhse mere pet me darth(pain) ho raha. Sanju: Yaap! Main bhi’’ ’’ P: sheeee. Tum kitna darti ho Priyu. Darpook. Tum jesi darpook maine aaj thak nahi dekha hai. Magar tum dar kyun rahi ho??? Tum tho genius ho na. Tum aur Sanju dono tho humesha first aatii ho.Tho darr kis bat ki??? Sanju: No. Darr ke mare meri jane jaa rahi hai aur tum keh rahe ho ki culb chalet hai. Pagal ho gaye ho. P(angrily) Ok. Fine.’’ Priyu: waise bhi agar tumhe jana hai tho jao. Tum kyun humara intajar kar rahe ho?? P: Tum nahi samjhugi. Itne din nahi samjh pai ab kya samaj paogi.’’ Saying this he got up and went out of the room. Sanju: Ise kya hoa??? Priyu: Isne aise kyun kaha??Main aisa kya kahe diya jo ise itna gussa aaya??? In garden, P sat on the steps and is very angry with the whole incident. Then at the same time Priyu comes there and sits beside him and asks him innocently,’’ Kya hoa??? Maine aisa kya keha diya jisse tumhe itna gussa aaya??? Tum jante ho na ki results ke time meri halt kya hoti hai. Agar tumhe bura laga ho tho I’m sorry.’’ P just looked at her and at her innocent face, then just gives her a sweet smile and waved his hand on her hair and says,’’ It Ok.’’ Both give each other a cute smile and hug each other.

by **gauriandme** 2/10/2007, 8:19 pm

On result day:

Sumi: Baccho breakfast karne aajoo. Priyu: No aaj nahi.Muhje bhot dar lag raha hai.Bye me ja rahi ho. Sumi: Aree kuch tho…’’ before saying anything all girls went away.(This same happens to me)

In College:

ANNONCER: STUDENTS PLZZ GO TO THE ADITORIOM. RESULTS WILL BE CONDACTED THERE.SO U ALL PLZZ ASSEMBLE THERE.THANK YOU.

P: Chalo chalet hai.’’ Priyu in a sad tone: hmm..’’ P: Come on Priyanka. Dekhna tum aur Sanju do jeetuge. U all will win this. It’s a challenge to u. Dekhna.Ok.’’ Priyu just nodds her head. ‘’Dekhte hai kon pass hota hai aur kon fail hota ‘’ Pari. P just gave her a look and says to her: Get lost. Mind Ur own business. Apne barme socho.Samje.’’ Saying this they left their place.Ohh Priyanka donot worry.U will surely pass” Bobby darling ‘’ Daro mat’’ Said to priyu giving her a smile. Priyu gave her a cute smile and says: Thanks.

In Auditorium:

All girls have sat on first row and Pari and her friends too. P and other were back standing. The Principle means Shashank is speaking: All students. Aaj hum sab yaha ek saath samnil hoa hai results ke liya. Aaj results ka annocement Shimla ke Commissioner karnege.’’ Turning towards Somesh Pradhan ’’U plzz proceed sir.’’ ‘’Ok.’’ He got up and said: Namaskar.Aaj me Medical ke results kahe raha ho.’’ He removed the result paper and here Priyu just joined her hand and closed her eyes. He opened the paper and just looked at pari who first only stand up and came near to the stage. This all was seen by Priyu and she was shocked. Somesh just nodded his head in negative and looked at Priyu and Sanju and said: First aaya hai Sanju and Priyu with 95.66%.We have 2 first comes.Hearing this SAnju and Priyu got up in excitement. All got very shocked. Pari just couldn’t believed it. All of them shouted and started greeting both of them. Sanju and Priyu goes running towards their dadu and give him a tiet hug. Dadu kya main??? Priyu. Dadu: yes. Hearing this she jumped like a small kid and took her certificate and her results. Then she just looked at P and gave him a cute smile. She came running down towards him and hugged him tietly and said: Tum ne sahi kaha tha. I won. Thnks for being my company.’’ P gave her a cute smile. Sanju came running towards Saahil and hugged him and said, ‘’main jeet gaee.’’

‘’Ya Ya, U won dear. Cheating karke. Right Angles???’’ Pari. Hearing this Priyu gave a smile and said,’’Tumhara problem kya hai Pari?? Har bar ek hi bat karti hoo. Sabko apne jese mat samjo jo cheating karke pass hote hai. Samjhe??’’ After tht all people left. Priyanka and all other first went to the temple to thank god and then to their father’s and dada’s- Nana’s offices. Then they straight went to their house with some sweets.

At night in their home:

P: Hey chalo na kahi goomne chalet hai. Kya kaete ho???” Priyu: Right. Magar Kaha??? P: Goa’’ Komal : wowwwwww gr8.’’ Priyu: Ha It has so many beaches. Kyun sanju nihu riyu Kya bolte ho???’’ Sanju: Right. Magar Saahil. Kya tum aaoge??’’ Saahil: Sure!!’’ Main tho holiday bhi mang li hai’’ P: Then tht final. Hum Goa jaenge.Ok??’’ All angles: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(By bringing their hand front) Now all friends r going to Goa. The beautiful place with lots of beaches.

At Goa:

All girls r playing in beach near the resort by throwing water on each other. Priyanka was fully enjoying with her friends and sisters, throwing water, giggling with them. P was just watching her, her smile, her play, ECT. All boys were just gazing at her. P was riding water bike (motor boat) in sea. All girls were watching him and getting very excited. OOOO he is looking damn cooooooollllll.

After, when P and Priyu were on the beach:

P apna bal sukha raha tha and Priyu too. P’s neck was covered with a towel.He was in shrit(white) and Bermuda(black) and priyu was in short shri(white and light pink) and sleeve less top(liitle pink and little orange). P: Hi.’’ Priyu: Hi. Waise accha ride kar lete ho bike. Cooll.’’ P: Thnks.Waise u r looking very beautiful.’’ P came near to her and was going to come more near but o priyu suddenly turned. ’’Kya hoga P???’’ ‘’Kuch nahi’’ Saying this he went away. Priyu felt someone’s hand on her sholders. When she turned she was nihu and komu. Komu: Hey ye insaan I LOVE U tuhje kab kahega???? Humesha farlt karke jata hai. USELESS’’ Nihu: Ya. I too think soo.’’ Priyu: Karega. Who apne pyaar ka ishaar(KABOOL) jarur karega. Dekhna.

At night:

Priyu was in black and red shorts. She was standing lining to a bamboo stick. P just watched and kept himself in control So tht he will not fall after seeing Priyu. After sometime P and all friends were gathered near the bonfire. P: Hey chalo ek game khelte hai. Dekho is bowl me bahot se chits hai. Sab me ek ek word likha hai. As usual tape me gana shuru hoga aur hum sab ye pillow ek dosre ko pass karenge. Aur jab gana stop hoga aur jiske bhi hath me ye pillow ho wo is bowl me se chitt mikal ke is chit jo likha hai wahi shabth se gana gayega.Ya fir shayari bhi chalega,kahani,riddle and puzzle bhi chalega.Lekin kisa bhi agar turn hoa na tho wohh pir nahi kelega. OK??’’ Everyone agreed him. Song started and pillow was passing here and there. Suddenly the song stopped and the pillow was in the hand of tallyy. P: Chal bol kya kahega???? Punit: Shayari bolunega.Shayr hoooooo(punit tootlata hai.as u all know. So yash hits him on his head) THnks. Shayar hoo. Sharyri hi bolunga.He took one chit and it said ‘’Ja’’.Then he said: jaruri to nahi jiine k liye sahara ho,j-j-j-jaruri to nahi hum jinke hai wo hamara ho,kuch kashtiya d-dd-doob jaya karti hai,jaruri to nahi har kashti ka ki-ki-ki-kinaara ho’’. Everyone was very surprised accept disha. She hated tally. Now telly was out. Again Song started and pillow was passing here and there. Again the song stopped and the pillow was in the hand of Disha. Dishu: Main bhi sharyri hi bolunegi (Guys not defining everything. Sorry).Now Disha was out. Again the Song started and pillow was passing here and there. Again the song stopped but the pillow was in the hand of P. P was very surprised. P: OK. He took one chit from the bowl and it said ‘’Dhu’’. He thought and thought and thought. Then he said: Main gana gaunga. Ye gana muhje meri bua me bataya hai. Natesh band la. Natehs nodded his head and brought her gitar and band. This song is frm Krrish Koi tum sa nahi. With P Priyu also sings. First para they sing next morning in some garden. And second they sing in night with everyone.

Starting is the music like ''ting ting''. At tht time P was just watcing Priyu and vice versa. Both were lost in each others eyes.All was there.

P: dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se,'' (Priyu watches him and gives him a cute smile)(P singing snging he comes near to Priyu)dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se

dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se(everyone claping)

chandni rehti hai jahaan pe

(Pointing towards sky)khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se

koi tumsa nahin(then music is there and P stats dancing), oh koi tumsa

nahin

koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

(Then Priyu says tilting her head) neend chupti hain jahaan pe, neend chupti hain jahaan pe

(Then with music Priyu turns)neend chupti hain jahaan pe

khwaab sajte hain jahaan pe

(Pointing towards sky)khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se

koi tumsa nahin, (then all starts dancing)oh koi tumsa nahin

koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

( all starts singing.Then in morning all r in the mountain.

Priyu is playing with bitterfly and playing in garden and

trying to catch it but she was enable. Then P sings)

phool, titli aur kaliyaan, ho gaye tumse khafa( Priyu stares at

him angrily.)

hoo Phool, titli aur kaliyaan, ho gaye tumse khafa

(with action)chhen li joh tumne inse, pyaar ki har ek ada

pyaar ki har ek

ada

Rang banta hain jahaan pe,(Priyu gives him a cute smile and runs

away flying her dupatta)rang banta hain jahaan pe

rang banta hain jahaan pe

roop milta hain jahaan se

khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se

koi tumsa nahin, (dancingly)oh koi tumsa

nahin

koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

Then in the evening all r again near beach with bonfire. Then

just Priyu sings)

mere dilke chor ho tum, kiya tumhe ehsaas hai(seeing P nad P gets very happy tht

she loves him)

haan(taking a pappy dog) Mere dilke chor ho tum, kiya tumhe

ehsaas hai ishq tha duniya mein jitna, (seeing P and was upset)

sab tumhare paas hai

sab tumhare paas hai

(Coming near to P and smiling)hey deewanapan jahaan pe,

(Dancing) hey deewanapan jahan pe

hey deewanapan jahan pe

(keeping her hand on P's shoulder.Then P tooo smiles)

bante hain ashiq jahaan pe

khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se(telling with eye action

Pointing towards the sky.)

koi tumsa nahin,

(Dancing) oh koi tumsa nahin

koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

(Then everyone starts dancing)

(P sings)dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se, dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se

dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se

chandni rehti hai jahaan pe

khabar yeh ayi

hai wahaan se

koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

(Priyu says)koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin.

(Then both watched each other and gave a smile. Then Priyu

went towards Saahil sanju and others.)

After the song:

All have gone to their rooms. Priyu find P on the beach.She goes near him and asks him: kya hoa aise kyun bete ho??? ‘’Nothing. Aise hi. Priyanka chalo beach ghoom te hai.’’ ‘’Ok. chalo’’ They both were walking on the beach giggling with each other.Then they liend to a tree and P said: Priyanka. Tum jantihoo I am in Love.’’ Priyu just couldn’t believe. Shw as abt to cry when P told her: janti ho who kon hai???’’ Priyu became normal and asked, kon???’’ P: Tum. Priyanka just turn towards him and gazed at him. P came near to her and gave her a cute kiss on her lips.

COMING NEXT: Priyu gave P a big tiet slap:shock: .

Usha:D ,

by **aanchal** 2/10/2007, 9:03 pm

wow such a gr8 part. love the beach part between pratham & priyu. & pratham being emotional for his love....so cute. Very Happy

by Guest 3/10/2007, 4:52 am

yeah pratham is always in love like romeo hehehee....

by Guest 3/10/2007, 4:56 am

oh my god !!! priyu ne pratham ko slap !! that`s horrible affraid

by Guest 7/10/2007, 6:27 am

hey usha aajkal kahaan ho plzzzzzzzzzzzzz post ur fiction parts soon we all r eagrly waiting for ur fictions ... plzzzzzzz continue yaar !!!!!!

by **gauriandme** 7/10/2007, 11:50 am

Triangular love story:3

Hello again guys. How r u all???? I got comments from u all. And I was very happy to read the comments. Munir said to me tht he liked the booby dearling part. So in this part there will be more booby dearling and priyu’s dadu. This part is based on Priyu’s answer to P’s propose, all angles proposing their love and picnic to Shimla’s forest and ur villans entry. Tht will be the last scene. Hope u all will like it.

Triangular love story:3

Priyu became normal and asked P: Kon hai woh??’’ P: Tum. Priyanka turned towards him and gazed at him. Then P came near her and gave Priyu a kiss. Priyu just couldn’t belive her fait. She thought: O my godd!! Ye kya hoa?? P proposed me. Woooww.’’ She again looked at P and P came near to her and says: Main tumhare bina nahi rahe sakta ho Priyanka. I love u. Main tumhare liya kuch bhe karne keliya tayar hoo.’’ He looked at her and asked: Tumhara jawab kya hai??? Haa yaa Naaa????? Tum chaho tho time le sakti ho. Jitna tumhe chahiya utna. Magr mujhe jawab janana hai. Plzzzzzzz’’ Priyu came near to her, again gave him a look and gave him A BIG TIET SLAP:affraid: . P just couldn’t believe wht happened. He kept his hand on his hot cheeks and looked innocently at Priyu. Then she ran towards the beach. Suddenly P catches her hand and asks her: Kya hoa?? Tumne muhje kyun maara? Hearing this Priyu said in a shouting manner: Tum. Tumhe itni der lagi muhje propose karne me??? Tum jante ho main is bat ko sunne ke liya kitne der se intazaar kar rahi thii.15 yrs. Jab main paach saal kit hi tab se. U stupid. Dambooooo.’’ Then she catches his collar of his shrit and pulled him towards her and gave……. (Ooohoo U all know wht happened.) After tht she runs between the trees and P too runs behinds her. After all tht( u know wht) they both were lying beneath a tree. Priyu was in arms of P. They talking and giggling and doing many things, ECT.

Then Priyu get up and goes towards a tree. P too follows her. Then asks her, Kya hoa?? Kya soch rahi ho??’’ Then priyu says having tears in her eyes: I promise Agar tumhare alwa mujhe koi muhje paa nahi paega..( I think u all must have understood) Main sirf tumhari hoo.(Guys cant explain the part. She wants to tell tht she is only of him. She can’t be of any other person. No one will have dared to touch her.) And if it happens then Priyu: I’ll die.’’ Then p suddenly kept his fingers on Priyu’s lips: Aisa bilkul nahi hoga. Main hoo na. U r only mine. OK??’’ Priyu agreed his words by shaking her head in +ive. Then P gave her a cute smile and give her a cute kiss on her cheeks and they both hug. Suddenly they both heard something. There… in the bushes, someone was there. But who???? ‘’Hey kyon hai waha??? Bahar aao uu’’ Priyu told in an angry tone. ‘’OOO goodd’’ Both of them exclaimed seeing all angles coming out of the bushes. ‘’Tum log yaha??? ’’P said. Sanju’’ Hmm. Tumhara romance dekha rahe the. Woow u both make a gr8 pair.’’ Sanju gave a smile and hugged Priyanka. Then all went towards the hotel. Then Saahil and Sanju were busy in their chit chat. Lost in LOVE.

Next day, Pratham was finding Priyu here and there. But he was unable. He asked everyone but no one knew anything.

He starts beginning very anxious abt Priyu. Then he goes towards sanju and asks abt Priyu. At the same time, Pari comes there. Pari in a pointing manner: Pata nahi kaha chali gaye Priyanka. Jhanj(indentify) Kar lo Priyanka ko. Kya pata kisi ke saath bhag gaye hoge.’’ Then Taarun comes there and continues: Ya sis. Main bhi yahi sach raha tha.’’ P was going to hit him but suddenly he felt Priyu’s hand on his shoulders. He turned back and saw priyu. Priyu: Stop Pratham. He catches her and took her towards the place where they were at night. Psaid havng tears in his eyes: Kaha thi tum??? Kaha kaha dond raha tha me tumhe janti ho??? Priyu told him: Marne. Kya Prathaam Main Cooks logo ki madat kar rahi thi. Y r u soo emotional???’’ P keeps quiet. Priyu continues: Main college me late aye tho tab tum roee and now??? Be bold. U should be bold. I didn’t know tht Prince is soooo emotional, so childish.’’ She turned her face and towards the beach and started little bit crying. P went towards him and says with expressions: Sorry jaan. Actually main bohot he care rakha ho. I don’t want to hurt u. Sorry (putting her fingers on his ears.)’’ Priyu gave a smile and both hugged. P: Chalo shopping karne chalet hai. Kya kahati ho ?? Priyu smile and agreed. P called everyone to go for shopping and all agreed.

They all arrived for hotel to shopping center of GOA with their Car.

The shopping centre was very big. It had many rooms i.e. many shops like shops of dress, jewellers, and shoes, make up things. It also had Parlous, canteen, ECT. P and Priyu went to dress shop. She chose one Punjabi, 2 skirts, 3 tops and scarf’s. P took some shirts and jeans pant. With tht they again went to hotel and had their lunch. Next day they returned to Shimla from GAO. Sumi: Tohh Kaisa tha trip to GAO??’’ Priyu: Gr8. Bahat mazza aya.’’ Sumi: Ahmm. Mazza tho jaroor ata kyunki Pratham waha jo tha.’’ Priyu gave a shying smile.Sumi: Ooooooo Dekho tho jara kya sharmarahi hai. Wohhh.’’ Priyu: Aayyee aap bhi na.’’ Satying this she went out. Priyu and all others had many gifts for their parents.

Next morning Shekar was sitting in sofa. Priyu: Baba kya hospital shuru hogaya hai??? Actually I was getting borr ss ed.’’ Shekar: Nahi beta. It will start after a month or 2 month.’’ Priyu: OOOO. Thik hai. Main aayee ki madat karti hoo. P: Priyanka yaha jaldi aao. Plzz.’’ Priyu: Ok.’’ She went towards his room and went inside. Then P just pulled her towards him and hugged her. Priyu: OOO plzz leaveeeeeeeeeeeeeee.’’ She beat him very hard.P :oooo aaaa eeee’’ Priyu: shut up.’’ She left him and was going towards the door.

Coming Up: Suddenly P started shouting: aaaaa baahhaooo……… And started crying.

A businessman with a business suit comes towards angles. Looks handsome, walks well and has a smile is cool.

My question: Who is this business man????

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 7/10/2007, 12:09 pm

TRIANGUALR LOVE STORY-4

Hello everyone once again. Sorry for late posting as I was busy…Hey no one answered my question. My question was= Who was tht business man???

TRIANGUALR LOVE STORY-4

She went towards his room and went inside. Then P just pulled her towards him and hugged her. Priyu: OOO plzz leaveeeeeeeeeeeeeee.’’ She beat him very hard. P :oooo aaaa eeee’’ Priyu: shut up.’’ She beat him and turned towards the door. P: AAAA Bacchhoo Priyuuuu. Aaaa.’’ Pryiu suddenly come near to him and said in worried voice: Kya hoga. OOO sorry.’’ Suddenly he pulled priyu and kissed her. Priyu: Ufff u stupid.’’ She got up and pushed him down. Priyu: Ayyee. Muhje bookh lagi hai. Kuchh kaneko do na. Plzzzzzzzz.’

Sumi: Hain hain. Dheti hoo.’’ P comes to sumi and huggss her: Ayee . Meri shaddi ki baat kab karogi dad se?????(making childish face) Muhje priyuu se shaadi karni hai. Plzzzzzz.’’ Sumi: OKK. Main dekhongi. I’ll try beta. Don’t worry’’ Listening this he hugged Sumi. Then Priyu comes and in anger says: Hain hain. Ayyee bat kargi. Kyun??? Tum kyun nahi kar sakte?? Darr Lagta hai.’’ P makes sad face. ‘’Muhje nahi pata tha ki ‘’Pratham Thakkor’’ ko bhi darr lagta hai.’’ Listening this P gets very angry and says’’ok. Main he bat karunga. Woh bhi jaldi’’. Priyu: Yaya. ‘’20 saal baad’’. Tab thak meri kisi aur se shaddi bhi ho gaye hogi aur 4 bacche bhi. Tum unhe kahaniya sunana’’ P: Yes. Humare bacchee. Aur wohh bhi 8.’’ Priyu: Muhje marne ka Irada hai kya???’’ P and Sumi starts laughing and P Huggs Priyu. Sanju: Aree yaar. Bass. Chalo naaa(like Mawali languages)College jakar Basket Ball Kalna hai na ??Ki….. romance karna hai. Saahil: waahh!! kitna pyaar hai dono me. Tum kabhi is tarah karti ho kya.Tum nahi karti un he toh karne do.’’ Sanju: Acchaa Meri jaan. Bol diya. To chalo aur jake gaadi nikalo. Faltu me mera demak mat chattoo.(it’s a mumbaiya language)’’ In anger saahill went out and all burst out laughing. Then Sanju again asked (By joining her hands): Guys Plzzz” Priyu and P together: Ok. Coming!!

In college all angles were ready with their positions. It was a match btwn girls and boys.(Guys don’t know anything abt Basket ball. Blaaa blaaa bol rahi ho. So plzz don’t laugh). First the ballwent to sahil then to nitesh and suddenly nihu snatched the ball. And was running towards the basket. Then gave to Priyu. Priyu and P were running round and round AND suddenly she saw a man. NO NO NO. A Business man, who was just watching. She gave him a question mark look and frm there he smiled to her. She ignored him and ran towards the basket and…. threw the ball in the basket. She got so exited tht she jumped like a small baby, saying yeyeyyeyey… P looked at her and laughed. She teased P and was busy in jumping. But suddenly she saw tht same man watching her and should his THAMB pretending to say tht ‘’KEEP IT UP’’. Priyu gave him a strange stare and turned towards sanju who was watching all this frm the beginning. Sanju: Chod na use. Chal khalte hai.’’ Priyu just nodded her head and went with sanju. After few seconds both Sanju and Priyu saw him going inside. Priyu: Kon hai wohh??’’ Sanju: Pata nahi. Hoga koi. Chal saahil bula raha hai.’’ Then both went towards saahil. Then in end girls won and boys were defeated. Then all went towards fresh room. All (boys)with pari and Monica were near their car. Nitesh: Yaar fir har gaye. Kya yaar wohh Nihu bhi na.Rakshasi.’’ Nihu frm behind: Oyeee itna bura lag raha hai to khel kar dekha na.’’ Nitesh: Aree ye kaha se tapak padi yaar. Nihu: Aashman se. Aur kya re kya bol raha tha. Hum ladkiya Rakshasi. Tu hoga rakshas. Tere Chahere se maloom padta hai.’’ Like this fighting goes on and on and on. Then suddenly Shashank came and said: Kya ho raha hai??? Firse jhagada.’’ Nihu: Dekho Nitesh muhje Rakshasi bolta hai. Shashnak: Bas bas. Accha bataoo Priyu kaha hain??’’ Priyu: Yaha pe.’’ All were just glazing her. She was looking very gorgeous with white skrit dark blue sleeveless top with a blue white scarf. Her hairs had become curly. Had a light makeup with light color lipstick. P just looked at her and she gave him a smile. He lost his balance but controlled himself. Priyu: Kya hoa.’’ P nodded his head in –tive. Shankar: Acchaa bachoo isse milo. Yain ek famous business man hai. Mr. SINGH. A businessman with a business suit comes towards angles. Looks handsome, walks well and has a cool smile. Priyu and sanju looked at him and then looked at each other. He looked at Priyu and smiled. Mr. Singh: Shashank gi main inhe apna introduction kudha(himself) deta hoo.’ Shashank nodded. Mr singh gave a smile and said: Hello students. My name is KUVAR. KUVAR THAKKOR. I am by professional a Business man. Maine suna ki yah ke students bahot hosayaar hai. So main yaha app sab ko trip a offer dena chahata hoon.’’ Priyu: Konsa offer???’’ Kuvar smiling: Trip to my house. My haveli. Jodhpur, Rajasthan.’’ Saahil trip?? Kuvar: Arre aap. Priyu : U know each other. Kaise??? Saahil: enki secretary ka koon hogaya tha. Toh maine ye case investigate kar raha ho. SAnju :Kaise hoa kon??’’ Saahil : Koni ne us bechari ko rape karke murder kar diya. Priyu: Ohhh. Kuvar gi we will think of ur offer. Kyun Pratham??? P: ya.’’ Priyu: chalo guys ghar chalet hai. Ayye intazaar kar rahi ho gi. All angles nodded her head and went towards their car. Priyu just went beside Kuvar and with P and kuvar could Smell her fragnance ( Balkwaas!!! ).

Priyu to shashank : Chachu magar hum toh abhi abhi goa jakar ayaa hai. Fir Rajasthan???’ Shashank: Priyu beta 2 months ke liya. Aur hospital toh band hai.tab thak toh ga sakte ho na?? Priyu nodded her head: Ji Chachu.’

Priyu and P r sitting on bed. Priyu: Kya khete ho? Rajasthan jaye??’’ P: Hmmm. Chalte hai. 2 mahene yaha par rahe kar kya rarnege????’’ Priyu: Ok. Maine Kuvar gi ko bolti ho.’’ P nods and Priyu takes her mobile and dials Kuvar’s no. Kuvar takes the phone and says: Hello. Priyu: Kuvargi main Priyanka bol rahi ho.’’ Listening her voice he get very excited and says: Gi boleye.’’ ‘’Hum sab Rajasthan se ayenge.’’ Listening to this he get more excited and says: Woow. Thtz gr8. Tohh maine aaj jodhpur jata ho aur bus ka intazaam karta ho.’’ Ok. Bye.’’ ‘’Bye….’’ Sanju and Saahil were sitting on a sofa. Sanju: Saahil tum aa rahe ho na?? Saahil: Hmm. AA raha ho( he wanted to come bcoz he didn’t believe on Kuvar. SO for investigation we went with them) Sanju: Maine janti hoot um investigate karne humare saath aa rahe hoo.’’ Saahil: Sanju… U know muhje wohh katarnak lagta hai. Very dangerous. Agar muhje investigate karna nahi hota toh bhi surely main tumhare saath ata. U knows I love u soo much.’’ Sanju: I know bacchaa. I know.’’ She huuged him. All angles were ready to go for a big trip. Priyu and P were very happy and excited. Par unhe kya pata ki unke zindgi ki kushiya dhere dhere khatamhone wali thi.

COMING UP NEXT: Kuvar: U r looking very beautiful Priyanaka gi.’’ Priyu gave a strange smile and went inside the bus. P gave a stupid smile showing his white teeth . He helped her u get into the bus by giving a helping hand.

Usha.

by Guest 8/10/2007, 3:49 am

thanx for posting iam enjoying these stories and every part .. Very Happy

by **gauriandme** 8/10/2007, 6:38 pm

Thnks for commenting.

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 6:54 pm

TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: PART:5

Hello everyone. I am AGAIN back with 5th part. This part is mainly based on our angles journey to Rajasthan. I am also writing a new story named ‘FAMILY’. Hope u will like it.

TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: PART:5

All were in a SCORPIO CAR which was moving towards the Bus station. They reached their destination. All stepped out the car. They saw a big bus. From inside Kuvar stepped out. He looked at Priyu and was very happy to see her. She was with P. Her hand was in his(P) hand. Seeing this he smiled. Moving towards ur douds, he said smiling ‘ Hello. So ready??’ P: Ha. We r ready. Chalo Priyanka.’ Snapping her finger Priyu remembered something. She said: Ohhoo Maine apna purse car maine bhool aye. Pratham u go inside I’ll come.’’ Saying this she went towards the car. P gave a smile and went inside the Bus. Priyu took her purse and went towards the bus. While going Kuvar stops her and says: Priyanka gi aaaaaaaaa. Wohhhh…..’’ (I forgot the mention ur douds dress. Priyu was wearing sleeveless pink top and P was wearing black jeans,back shirt and a back jacket.) Priyu: Ha boliye.’’ Kuvar smiling: U r looking very beautiful. Really.’’ Listening to this Priyu gave a strange smile and went towards the bus. P was listening this standing inside the bus but near the door. When Kuvar saw him he gave a stupid sa smile showing his millionaire white teeth. Kuvar too gave them a simple smile and went towards the driver. P gave Priyu his hand to help her to climb the bus.

And also this was seen by angles. And got very angry.

Priyu sat beside the window in the front set. P sated beside her. At tht time komal came and said: Di. Wohh Buddha kya kehe raha tha???’’ Priyu: Kun Buddha???’’ Wohi Kuvar.’’ Priyu started laughing: Ooo god. Tum bhi na.’’ P: Ha Priyanka. I hate tht man. He always watching like a MAJNOO(he was very angry)’’ Seeing his anger Priyu turned his face & gave him a cute kiss on his lips. Komal looked so shocked and went towards her set. P looked at her told her: Priyanka plzz tum us Majnoo see dor raho. Plzzzzz.’’ Priyu: Ok babba. Maine usse dor rahongi aur tumhare paas rahongi. Ok.’’ P gave her a cute smile and hugged. At the same time K ( Kuvar will be donated as big K) came inside the bus. He saw them hugging each other. He felt jealousy. He came inside and sat beide P and priyu’s set and looked outside the window.

Then the bus arrived. K saw P sleeping on Priyu’s shoulder. And Priyu was looking outside the window. A smile appeared as she saw the beautiful scenary outside. Seeing her smiling he too smiled. Then Priyu looked at P and smiled. P had slept like a small kid. Then suddenly her attention went towards K. K was just looking at her. Seeing him like this she felt uneasy. And again looked outside. K knew tht she was feeling uneasy but still he couldn’t remove his eyes from her. She knew tht K was watching her. She looked at P and waked him up. P got up and in sleepy voice he asked: Kya hoa?? Kuch chaiye?? Priyu: Pratham Wohh Muhje tumhare kandhe par sona hai.’’ P smiling: Ok baba. Soojao. Come.’ She kept her head on his shoulder.

After 5 hrs they had reached to a ‘Dhaba’. All stepped out the bus. Some went for a fresh up. Some went to have snacks, ect. Priyu washed her face with water (Guys do u remember kyunki’s scene at the time of holi when nandini as washing her face with water same thing is happening now) K was just gazing at her. Then Priyu went towards P. Priyu: Pratham lets eat something.’ P nodded her head and both went towards the shop. Priyu asked for two Pepsi. Priyu just kept the head on P’s shoulder. All people were looking at them. After some time then again arrived towards the Mahal. Then they reached to their destination.

The bus was moving through a market. All were peeping out of the window. The market was very beautiful. Everyone was feeling very nice after seeing all the beautiful things. Then the reached the Mahal (listen when u r reading abt the Mahal, just remember the tunes only tunes, of Dheree jalna of Paheli) All stepped out of the bus. The Mahal was very beautiful. Very art full. Very big. Colorful. Everyone felt very nice. It also had a swimming pool. All stepped inside the Mahal. The hall was very big. The Mahal had more then 100’s of rooms. ‘’WOWWW!!!!’’ Everyone exclaimed. Priyu was very happy. She remembered her house in Jaipur. Same. K: SO how is my home???’’’ Priyu: Very nice. Very beautiful, hai na Pratham??’’ P nodded. K: Chaleye hum ap sab ko apka karma dekhate hai.’’ They all climbed the steps. (remember Basu house’s hall. Only Hall)

Priyanka: Kuvar ji hum behene ek he kamare me rajenge.’’ K: Ok. Pratham u all too????’’ P: Yes hum bhi. K nodded and headed towards the room. Kuvar showed them their rooms. Both rooms were opposite. It was very beautiful, very big. It was like a room of a Princess or of a Queen. It had big mirrors, big bathroom. It had big window. Very beautiful. It too had AC. Kuvar showed everyone’s rooms. Angles got fresh up and were sitting on the big and huge bed. Komal: Di ghar kitna mast hai na.’’ Priyu nodded. Sanju: Yaar tujhe humare ghar ki yaad nahi aati.’ Priyu again nodded. Nihu: Bohot rich hai.’’ Komu(Komal as Komu): Aree yaar buddha hai. Bahot saaal se business karta hai. Rich tho hoga na. Kyun di???’’ Priyu again nodded. Sanju in anger: Kya yaar sirf gadhe ki tarah sar hila rahi hai. Kuch toh bolll.’’ Priyu: Kya bolu??’ Sanju: Gungi hai??? Tohh??’’ Priyu: Kuch nahi. Yaar Kuvar muhjje gurkar dekhta kyun hai???’’ Komu: Buddha pagal ho gaya hai.’’ Sanju: Shutup. Let it be Priyu. Leave him. Chal neche jate hai.’’ Saying this all went down.

Priyu’s hair was wet as she had hair bath. They all went down. All boys were sitting in the garden. Natesh: Aree BABA aagee Rakhasi!!! Hey Nihu ke bol dekh. Pakka shock laga hoga.’’ Saying all of them starts laughing. Nihu hears everything. She comes towards him in anger and says: Acchaa. Dekhu natesh u r crossing Ur limits. Mind u.’’

Natesh: Crossing limits?? Aree nihu main toh leta hon. Cross kaha kar raha hon?? Kyun guys?? All starts laughing. Nihu angrily goes away. At tht time kuvar comes. He watches Priyu and again sees her like mad. P comes frm back and watches K and watching him angrily. K comes out of his thought and sees P and gives him a smile.P too gave a stuoid smile. He went towards Priyu and hugged her.

coming next: Priyu falls on……………………………..P or……K ??????

Answer Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 6:55 pm

ÔTriangular love story: Part 6. (TLS)

Hello guys. I am back with 6th part of TLS. Last time I asked u a question and now u all will get Ur answer.

ÔTriangular love story: Part 6. (TLS)

At the same time K comes there. He watches Priyu and again sees her like maniac d. P came from back and watches K angrily. K comes out of his thoughts and watches P and gives him a smile. P too gave a stupid smile. He goes towards Priyu and hugged her. K gets a call and he heads over the palace. P says: Jaan u r looking gorgeous.’’ Priyu smiles naughtily and says: Hehe mujhe ajj masti karne ka man kar raha hai. Smilingly she pushes P down and starts running. One servant had just swept the floor. The floor was still wet. Priyu didn’t know abt tht. K too came from the opposite side. He was busy with his talks in mobile. Suddenly he saw Priyu falling down. Priyu shouted: aaaaaaaa!!!!!!!’’’ K want towards her the help but he himself fell on Priyu (HEHEHEHE, an unexpected, isn’t it???). Priyu was trying to get up but all was in vain whereas K was just lost in Priyu’s eyes. Priyu had brown beautiful eyes. K was feeling to kiss her beautiful eyes. Priyu saw K and felt uncomfortable. P Ran towards them and asked were they ok. K came out of his thoughts. K got up from Priyu and P helped Priyu to get up. Priyu had pain in her leg. She started crying like a small child. All got anxious abt Priyu. P felt sad for her. He hugged her and asked: R u Ok jaan’’. K got very much annoyed due to this and called his servants and asked: Yaha pani kisne giraya????’’ One servant (Shyam) told in terrified manner: Wohh pochaa lagaya tha sahab.’’ K was just going to shout at him when Priyu said: Rahane digiye. I am fine.’’ K kept quiet. P carries her in his arms and took her towards her room. All followed her.

Doc came and treats priyu’s leg. He tells: Nothing to worry. She is fine. But U have to take rest’’. Next day P was looking for Shyam. But he was nowhere. He asked K abt him and K told: HE must be in his house.’’ After two days Priyu got well. But Shyam was still missing. When everyone went to his house they met his family. His family told them tht SHYAM DIED 2 DAYS AGO. He had done suicide. Everyone was shocked after hearing tht. At coming to Haveli Priyu .: Aisa kaise hogaya?? I don’t believe this.’’ P: ME too.’’ After sometime everyone went to their respective rooms. Kuvar went to his room. Hrishi followed him. He closed the door and Hrishi told: Bhia kya appne Shyam ko????’’ K gives his wicked smile and says: Ha. [Suddenly getting angry] Usne meri Priyanka ko choot pohocaya. Isliye maine use uski saja di. I cant bear tears in my jaan’s eyes.’’ Saying this he goes out of the room. Hrishi: Ye toh marvake rahega’’. Sanju watches K coming out of his room. But she didn’t hear anything.

Priyu was lying on P’s chest and P was lying on bed. Priyu: What do u think abt Shyamj’s death??’’ P: Nothing. Y r u getting so worried jann. Just chill’. P gave a cute smile to her. She too smiled. They both hugged each other. K was walking in the passage. He saw both of them hugging. He got very angry. And went away from there.

At lunch everyone came to the dining room. They took their respective places. P and Priyu sat beside each other. K saw them and got fumed. But kept himself calm. For lunch they had palak panner, Dal Rice, Mixed Bhaji, Salad, and chicken kabab. Priyu taste Palak Panner. She made an strange face. She said: Namak kam hai. ‘’ The cook turned anxious. He was 60yrs old. K looks at the cook in anger. Priyu added some salt in the bowl of Palak Paneer. Priyu tasting: Hmmm now delicious.’’ K with anger: Aapka dyan kaha rahta hai khana banate waqt???? Humare ghar ke mehmanoo ko issa khana dete hai aap????’’ Priyu: It’s Kuvarji. Hum namak daal lenge. Aap unnhe mat….’’ K: Plzz Priyankaji.’’ Cook lening on the knees: Maaf kijia. Galati ho gaye. Agle baar ye galati nahi hogi.’’ K (shouting): Just get out of my sight.”

Priyu: Aap Aisa kaise kar sakte hai???? Wohh boddhe hai. Unnhe jaada cheje yaad nahi reheti. Aap unnhe aise kaise chila sakte hai???” Puzzled K looked at her. She was fuming with anger. She looked at the cook with kindness in her eyes: Aap maafi mat mangiye. Aapse kuch galti nahi hoe hai. Namak kam hai toh hum namak daal denge. Lekin ek baat hai. (Smiling) Khana toh bohoooooooot tasty bana hai. Aap aise he khana banaye ga. Namak kam rahega toh bhi chalega.” Smiling the cook kept his hand on Priyu’s head and went away. Priyu looked at K and went back to her seat to have her lunch as she was very hungry and not at all interested in wasting time. K was just shocked at Priyu’s behavior. He thought tht she would feel bad. She’ll get angry. But no. She showed her kindness towards tht old man. He was quite impressed and even puzzled with her behavior. P looked at her and smiled at her.

In K’s room, K was sitting in his chair. Hrishi: Bhai Priyankaji toh ajeeb hai. Itni acchi hai woh!! Mujhe pata nahi tha.” K smiled. Hrishi: Lekin.” K looked at him. Hrishi: Agar who itni acchi hai toh fir wohh aapke kaam me aapka saath nahi degi.” K(smiling): Usse kisne pocha hai??? It’s my work. Usska kaam sirf meri patni bane rehene me hai. Bas.” Both started laughing wickedly. K went to Priyu’s room. The door was open. HE entered the room. He saw Priyu sitting near window reading a book of HARDY BOYS (My fav. story book). She seemed to be in other world. She looked so calm, so sweet. He just kept looking at her. At tht time Riya, Komal, Sanju and Nihu entered the room. They saw him. They got angry. They went towards him and asked: Aap??? Kya chaheye???” K came out of his thoughts. Priyu too. She looked at him. Priyu: Aap yah ape???” K: Ha. Maine aapse soory kahene aaya tha.” Priyu: It’s ok.” K (happily): Really! Thanks.” Priyu: Waise aapko unse maafi mangni chaheye.” K nodded and went away. P was standing at the door step. P: Tumne usse maaf kiya??” Priyu: Ha. Aur kya karo??? Woh toh Kuvar hai.” Aryan: Leave it bhabhi.” Chalo niche chalet hai.” All nodded. They came down. They saw a car. From it a man wearing business suit came out.

Coming up: “ Meri bahu acchi hai. Sundar hai. Maine chahta ho Kuvar ki tum Priyanka ko jaldi paa lo. Iske liye Tumhe Pratham aur Priyanka ko dor karma hoga”

Who is this man??? What he will do to separate Pratham and Priyanka??? Will they Separate??????

Well plzzz answer these questions. I want ur views regarding this. Do comment.

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 6:56 pm

Ø Triangular love story: Part: 7

Hello friends. I am back with 7th part of TLS. Hope u all will like it.

Ø Triangular love story: Part: 7

They came down. Suddenly they saw a car at the gate coming to a halt. From it a man wearing business suit came out. He was short, fat and wearing glasses. K was sitting on one of the sit of the garden. Suddenly he saw tht man entering the gate. He exclaimed in a loud voice: Pitaji!!!” All of them looked at each other. K hugged him. K: How r u pitaji??” Tht man: Fine beta. Then tht man looked at Angles. And said (removing his glasses and pointing towards them with it): Ye????” K: Aayeye. I’ll introduce them to u. They both went towards Angles. To Angles: Ye mere pitaji hai. Aditya Gujral(Adi is the short form).” All them joint their hand and did namaste to him. Adi recognized Saahil very well. Adi poining towards Saahil: Aap Saahil hai na. ACP???” Saahil nodded in +tive. Both shake their hands with each other. Then Adi looked at P and Priyu .He again recognized Priyu. . P had his hand on Priyu’s shoulder. Adi saw tht. Then K introduced all of them to Adi. Priyu( in a questioning look): Toh Pratham chale???” Before P could say something K: Aap kaha jaa rahe hai??” Suddenly Riya( as she knew Priyu didn’t like to talk with K): Yahi. Garden me goomne. Actually who hum sab bore hoo gaye the. Isliye” K looking at Priyu and smiling: Ok. Aap ghomiye. Enjoy.” Priyu smiled. K went inside and Priyu just rolled her eyes and went into the garden. Adi went into his room followed by K and Hrishi. K hesitatingly asked: Apko Priyanka kissi lagi???” Adi smiled: Bahot sundar hai, (in tensed tone)Lekin...... “ K in questioning look: Lekin kya??” adi: Dushman ki beti ke saath dosti,pyaar… kuch thik nahi hai.” K(wickedly smiling): Socho dad agar maine uss ghar ka damad ban gaya toh Priyanka ko mohra banke hum uss ACP ko barband kar sakte hai.” Adi: Lekin tum Priyanka se shaddi kise karoge??” K: Woh aap mujhe par chood digiye. Maine woh kaam karoonga. Ek plan hai humare paas.” He gave them devilish smile.

After few mins all three of them came down. They saw Angles palying basketball. Then again the game was won by Priyu. She started teasing P by showing her tongue and started jumping. K thought, “Priyu is soo cute and childish”. P was just staring at Priyu and smiled. All other started laughing. Suddenly P grabbed her and kissed her in front of everyone. All angles(laughing loudly): OHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” When P left her Priyu just looked stunted. She kept her mouth wide open. P: Mooh band karo makhi chali jayegi” P gave a cool smile and went inside. She looked at P with surprise. All angles started laughing. Annoyed Priyu went behind P. K was too shocked to say. Adi in anger: Meri bahu acchi hai. Sundar hai. Maine chahta ho Kuvar ki tum Priyanka ko jaldi paa lo. Iske liye Tumhe Pratham aur Priyanka ko dor karma hoga kyunki Thakor khandan ki bahu kisi aur ke saath…. ” Annoyed K said: Janta hoo dad. I’ll do tht. Priyu came into her room and suddenly she was grabbed by P and he hugged her and both fell on the bed. P started kissing her…( u can imagine,hehehhe) Priyu trying to separate: Stop it Pratham. OOOOO!!!!!” They heard someone knocking the door. P got up and open the door. It was K. He asked for Priyu. When Priyu came he said: Apko humare ghar ki Kuldevi dekhni thi na??” Priyu nodded. Aaj hum waha janege. Aap sab tayaar rahe ga.” Both nodded.

Later when P and Priyu became fresh after a bath they came down. All went to the temple to watch and pray Kuldevi. It was MAA DURGA. It was very much beautiful and large. It looked soo real. Colourful. It looked as if itself goddess DURGA had standed with the TRISHUL in her hand. She was sitting on a huge TIGER. The statue was awesome. K said to everyone proudly: Ye mandir aur murti humare purvajoo(forefather) ne banaya hai. Ye mana jata hai ki yaha jo bhi sache aur acche maan se kuch bhi mangta hai usse who mil jata hai. Apko joo mangna hai mangiye.” Priyu was beside K and P was busy taking photos of Goddess DURGA AND OF THE TEMPLE. At tht time Pandit ji cames and watches Priyu and K together. He had been told by K before Angles came to Jodhpur tht with his dream girl he would come in this temple. When Pandit ji cames both together, by coincidence, were going to take aashirwaas from Pandit ji. But Priyu suddenly stopped. K felt bad. Pandit ji: Kya hoa beti??” Priyu: Aap pati-patni aur jinki sagaye hoee hai unh eek saath aashirwaad dete hai na??’ Pandit ji nods. She smiles and calls P. Both together take aashirwaad of Pandit ji. Pandit ji puzzled. He looked at K. Priyu explaining: Pratham mera hone wala mangetar hai. Kuvar ji nahi.” K felt insulted but kept smiling. Pandit ji gives them aashirwaad and they both bang the bell of the temple. Both take aashiwaad of Devi Durga also. Even after 10 mins Priyu kept on praying. P(in bored tone): Aree kab tak devi maa se aashirwaad dogi. Who bhi thak gaye hogi.” Priyu gave him an angry stare. P got afraid: Aree tum kyun maa durga ki jagaha le rahi ho. Maine tumhara intazaar karta hoo na.” And went away from there with wide eyes.

Suddenly P got a call but no one was talking. He thought bcoz of network problem. So he went out of the temple and asked: Hello??” Priyu with joined hands with nice and pure heart: Devi maa mere parivaar ke raksha karna. Meri Pratham ke raksha karna. Muhje aaj najane kyun bahot darr lag raha hai. Pata nahi kyun??? Aap plzzz usski, sab ki raksha karma. Apna saya sabhi par banaye rakhna.” Suddenly she heard a truck’s tyre had fractioned on the road. She felt(still praying, she has not opened her eyes) as if tht truck will dash Pratham. She turned and her eyes widened as she saw tht tht truck was going to hit P. She shouted: PRATHAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Coming Up: “The truck.” Priyu saw. “PRATHAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

Did the truk hit Pratham???? What will Priyu do to save Pratham??? U’l know in the next part. Do comment.

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 7:20 pm

Ø Triangular love story: Part:8

Hello friends. I am back with TLS 8th part. In this part u will also have a song with interesting things. One thing is very interesting which will shock u all. Hope u all will like this part.

Ø Triangular love story: Part:8

(In this scene P is wearing black jeans and white colour kurta while Priyu is wearing white top with red skirt with golden designed. Her hair was open)

She turned and her eyes widened as she saw tht tht truck was going to hit P. She shouted: PRATHAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Priyu ran towards him. Before tht truck was going to hit P she pushed him and both fell on the other side while the truck went away. Priyu in solicitous tone voice: Kya tum tik ho???? P looked at her. She was breathing highly. P putting his hand on her shoulder: Kya tum tik ho??? Priyu nodded. K came towards them: Kya hoa??? Aap thik hai?? Both nodded in positive. P got up and gave hand to Priyu for help. He(P) saw Priyu had got injured near her elbow. He felt so bad. P hugged her. They sat in the car and went towards the palace.

In her room, P treated her by applying some ointment. P was sitting beside Priyu on bed. K, Hrishi and Adi were also there. P: Woh truck driver ne gaddi kun nahi roke???” Priyu: He must have got afraid.” P: Lekin kya woh dekhaka nahi chala sakta tha.” Sanju: Pratham usske saamne tha tho bhi usssne truck ko brakes nahi lagaye. Isska matlab…” Saahil: Isska matlab usse Pratham ho truck se uddana tha.” Piyu in anxiety tone: Par kyun??” Saahil: Pata nahi. Magar pata lagan a hoga.” K looked at them. He got worried. Saahil’s cell got ringing. He answered to the call. After few minutes he cut the call. He turned towards K and said: Disha ka katil makda gaya.” In anxiety tone K said: Kyun hai who??” Saahil: Rahul. Disha ka BF.” K took a sigh of relief. K: Par kyun??” Saahil: Ussse ye koon accidentally ho gaya.” K nodded. He went towards P and Priyu and others. Priyu asked to K: Aaj sham ko hum kaha jayenge??” K: Hum sab aaj registhan(Desert) ki seer karne wale the. Lekin aap…” Priyu: Nahi ye toh mamolisi choot hai. Hum sab aaj wahe jayen ge. K smiled and said: Thik hai aaj 6 baje aap sab tyaar raheye. Hum tab thak arrangements karte hai.” All nodded and K went out who was followed by Adi nad Hrishi.

They went towards the room and closed the door. K removed one cigarette and lightened it. K in annoyed tone: Balo bhi na. Ek kaam bhi thik tarah se kar nahi sakta. Usse Pratham ko marne bheja tha. Magar ussne toh Priyu ko choot pohochaya. Aur woh Panditji.( Tears began to fall from his eyes) Unhone issa kyun kaha??? Issa aashirwaad kyun diya un dono ko?? Kyunn?????????? Uss Pandit ko toh main dekhta hoo.” Saying this he opens the door and goes out of the room. Adi and hrishi looked at each other in anxiety. They knew K has got angry. He would have no control over his anger and sadness. “NOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN” Both started thinking.

At 2 it started raining. Angles came out and girls started playing in rain. Just then K entered the huge gate. He saw Priyu playing in rain. She was looking very cute and innocent. She was looking like 5yrs old child. P watched Priyu playing in rain. He kept on looking at her. Suddenly his attention turned towards K. He got enraged. And went inside. Priyu thought tht yy he went inside angrily???? Then she looked here and there. Then she noticed K looking at her. K came out of his thoughts and went inside. Now she knew yy P went inside angrily. Priyu went inside the room. P angrily: Y he looks at u like a maniac??” Priyu kept her hand on his shoulder to make him relax. P looking at her: Mujhe accha nahi lagta koi tumhe iss tarah dekhe” Priyu nodded.

It was six now and all were ready. P was wearing white kurta with red pajama. Priyu was wearinf marun colour skirt with golden and silver designed. Amd marun colour top. It was like tyope of Rajasthani. K just kept on looking at her. He fell on a trance. She was climbing down from the steps with P. When K’s eyes fell on P he got annoyed. Both were giggling and were having fun. She saw many camels sitting there. Coming towards K Priyu said in excitement: Kuvarji kya hum sab uut(Camel) par chalenge???” K nodded smiling: Jee ha.” She smiled jumped in excitement. P started laughing. Priyu: Chalo na Pratham. Chalte hai. Kitne dino ke baad hum sab uut par bethenge. Hai na???” Priyu nodded in +tive. Kuvar in questioning look: Kya aap sab uttpar bat cuke hai??’ All nodded. K: woow thtz gr8. Agar hum he nahi bethe hai. Chalo aaj chalet hai. All went towads their respective camels. Priyu sat o her camel and P sat behind her. K: Pratham aap alag uut par beth sakte hai.” Priyu: Nahi kuvarji Pratham mere saath bethega. They all sat on the uut nad when the uut got up K suddenly fell down. All started laughing. He too started laughing. When he saw at Priyu she was looking very cute while laughing. K smiled and again sat on uut. But now he didn’t fall. They also took a car with them.

They were now in the middle of Desert. K said: Yaha rejisthan ke beech ek Shivji ka mandir hai. Hum waha bhi jayenge.” When they reached they burn a bonfire and sat around it. The temple was beside them.There was a group of Rajasthani people was going on. They were singing good about the rejisthan.( Now the song starts. The song is Morni of Lamhe. U all will get the full song through this link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wlmekhG_QL8 )

( K was asking Priyu meaning of what tht woman was singing. And this way by sinning the song she explains all of them its meaning.) morani baaga ma bole aadhi raatama (Priyu, by sitting on P’s lap.)chhananachhan chudiyaan khanak gayi dekh saahibaan (Moving her hands)chudiyaan khanak gayi haath ma (She dances with tht woman.)(By putting her dopatta btwn her face) main to laaj ke maare, ho gayi pani pani (Looking at everyone.)sab logon ne sun li meri prem kahani (Looking at P and sinning innocently.munhase baat nikal gayi (By covering her fac with her hand) main to laaj ke maare, ho gayi pani pani (P removes her hand) sab logon ne sun li meri prem kahani (Saying with actions)munhase baat nikal gayi baat baat maa, baat baat ma (dancing with tht woman)chhananachhan chudiyaan khanak gayi dekh saahibaan morani baaga ma bole aadhi raatama (Leaning towards a pillar)Saajan saajan main terah hoMera saajan mujar nahe (Looking up at the moon.)Jab dekho chandanri ood mer Mere naina neh barsave( leaning on P)Mere naina neh barsave( crying) ( by actions)jaane kaun ghadi main nikale saajan gharase ( covers her face by keeping her dopatta) main ghunghat mein jaaun gayi kitane savan barasaae ( Removing her dupatta) jaane kaun ghadi main nikale saajan gharase main ghunghat mein jaaun gayi kitane savan barasaae( K remember’s the evening scene when she was dancing during rainfall )(Looking up at the sky) meri pyaas na bujhi re barasaat maa, barasaat ma chhananachhan chudiyaan khanak gayi dekh sahibaan ... morani baaga ma bole aadhi raatama (Dancing with tht woman when the music was there) (Sitting on one charpai)suni sej pe saiyaan sari raat main jaagi (Pointing at P) tere piichhe piichhe meri niind to bhaagi (By getting up from charpai)suni sej pe saiyaan sari raat main jaagi (Going towards P) tere piichhe piichhe meri niind to bhaagi (By hugging him)mera chain bhi gaya re (touching his face)tere sath ma tere sath ma chhananachhan chudiyaan khanak gayi dekh saahibaan ... (By dacing with tht woman)o mera nehara chhute re maaeri chhaati phuute dhola o dhola mat ja ja ja

re dhola mat ja ja ja ...

She was going to fall and P holds her. Their eyes met. K was feeling jealous. Then they visited the temple. Adi had said a Sapera to leave a snake near P. He did it. When Priyu and P were doing the pooja the snake came infront of them. They got scared. Then it went towards the Shiv bhagwan’s ling and surrounded itself. (It means ki Bhagwan ne khud darshan diye ho). Angles were very much happy by watching the scenario. They all joined their hands and prayed to god. Adi and K got very much angry. When adi was siting in the car suddenly he was bitten by tht same snake. He was taken to the hospital as soon as possible and treated. He was saved. K felt bad for his father. But he was angry with P. Y didn’t he wasn’t bitten by tht snake??

After few days Adi was back at palace. Now it was decided tht they all will visit ANATH ASHRAM. They also went to the ashram. But Adi didn’t go with them. He decided to stay in the palace and relax. By watching the kids playing Priyu was very much happy. To impress Priyu he was giving charity to the ashram of about 5 crores. Priyu also felt to give charity. So she called his father in law and requested him to provide charity for about 5 crores. Yash was very much impressed. He assured her tht we will transfer 5 crores in her account. With few minutes it was transferred in Priyu’s account. She signed a check of 5 crores in the name of tht ashram. K was very much surprised. P was happy with Priyu’s decision.

P went towards Priyu. She was playing with a child. She said: Ohh ye bachhe kitne pyaare hai na.Humare bacchee bhi…………………” She suddenly stopped and looked at P. He was hurted. He went to one corner and started crying. Priyu went towards him and kept her hand on his shoulder. Priyu crying: I am sorry Pratham. I am sorry.” P turned towards her and said: Nahi. Mujhe tumhare kehene se dard nahi hoa hai. ?Maine apne kismat par roh raha hoo. Mere wajah see tum maa nahi ban sakti. Mere wajah se. YYY???” Priyu nodded in –tive: Nahi. Woh tumhari galti nahi hai. Ye sab toh uss accident ke wajah se hoa tha. ( Friends the matter is tht P cant make Priyu preg)

Coming up: P and Priyu both falls from the mountain.

Well do comment. Whiz the suspense???

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 7:22 pm

Ø TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: PART: 9(TLS: 9)

Hello friends. I am back with the 9th part of TLS.

Ø TRIANGULAR LOVE STORY: PART: 9(TLS: 9)

At the time K was present there. He was hiding behind the tree so tht no one could see him. After visiting the Anathalay they returned to the palace. Sanju and Punit recognized tht K was much happier while returning than visiting the anathalay. Everyone went to their respective rooms. Both were puzzled due to his behavior tht y K went inside Adi’s room instead of his room. K went inside Adi’s room and locked the door. Moving towards him K said everything in a happy tone. Adi was shocked after hearing this news. But then both smiled to each other. At night Priyu was behind the palace from where a small forest started enjoying the cool breeze. She was smiling, by thinking about something. She was so much lost in the beauty of the forest and enjoying the cool breeze tht she didn’t even recognized K who was standing beside her.

When she turned she was shocked to see K. He was smiling at her. Shocked Priyu asked K: Aaaapp.. yaha???” K nodded and said: thinking about something. Something which is special??? Bcoz when u was thinking u were laughing too.” Priyu shook her head. Turning towards the forest: The scenario is gr8, isn’t it??” K nodded in +tive. K (taking hold of rod by both the hands): Well aapp yaha per kaise???” Priyu: Mujhe need nahi aa rahi thi. Isliye yaha par aaye.” K: And wht about Pratham. Where is her??? Sleeping???” Priyu shook her head in –tive. Who tuhh mere liye coffee bana raha hai. Kitchen me hai. Usse bhi need nahi aa rahi hai” K: Usse coffee banana aata hai??” Priyu nodded in +tive and said proudly: Maine use bana sikhaya hai.” K smiled at her answer. K (to himself): Bacchu lagta hai jab main Priyanka se shaddi karonga tab muhje bhi usske liye raat ko aapni need kharab karke iske liye coffee banana padega.” Priyu looked at K and got perplexed: Ab aap kya soche rahe hai????” K: Kuch nahi.’’ Priyu: Kya aap ye nahi soch rahe ki shaddi ke baad aapko bhi aapne patni ki seeva karni padegi??” K looked at her and got shocked: Aapp ko toh chehera panda aata hai. Aapse toh baccke rahena padega.” Both started laughing. At the same time P came with 2 cups of coffee. When he saw K there he said: Aap yaha?? Priyanka tumhe batana chaheye tha na ki Kuvar bhi yaha hai.” Priyu: Muhje nahi pata tha ye bhi yaha aayenge” P: Fine. Maine aur ek cup banata hoo.” Priyu: Nahi. Hum dono ek cup share karte hai. Kuvarji ko dusra cup do.” P nodded and he priyu shared one cup of coffee. Priyu & K took a sip of coffee. Priyu: MMMM. Woow accha bana lete ho.” P smiled. K didn’t feel tht it was good. H felt tht the coffee was worst which he had not ever had in life. But forcibly he managed to smile (Well the coffee was good. But u all know y K felt it worst).

Next morning, Priyu as usual was reading a book of Sidney Sheldon. P came and sat beside her. P: Priyanka. Yaar mujhe Kuvar ka behavior.” Sanju: Muhje bhi yahi lagta hai.” Priyu said by closing the book: Bas dus din. Dus din ke baad hum Simla chale gayenge. Hai na???” Punit: Aree ha. Maine tohhhhh.” Meet hit him on his head. Punit gave Meet a flying kiss and continued: Maine tohh ye bhool he gaya tha. By watching this comic, humorous scene all started laughing.

“ Bas dus din” Hrishi said. He, K and Adi were sitting in K’s room. Hrishi continued: Bas dus din bacche hai pir ye sab yaha wapas Simla chale gayenge.” K got offend by hearing this. K: Muhje kuch na kuch toh karma padega iss Pratham ka.”

At afternoon everyone came down for lunch. After having their lunch everyone went into their respective rooms. But P just wanted to have a walk as he had consumed a huge amount of food. He was climbing down the steps. He came out of the palace and started walking. He felt as if somebody is following him. He turned and saw a furious dog. He ignored it and started walking. But the dog was wild and started running behind P. P started running as fast as possible. Priyu watches this. She screams: PM!!!!” Then taking help of some guards she manages to save P. Ya. K has send tht dog behind P. He did this to stop Priyu from going back.

At evening, all went for shopping. After shooping Priyu was going by car to haveli. When Priyu saw the Drga maa’s temple she requested the driver to stop the bus just for 5 mins. She told tht she wanted to take aashirwaad of Devi Durga Maa.Everyone climbed down the car. She went inside the temple but found the different pandit. Surprised Priyu enquired about tht old pandit. One devotee: Aap ko nahi pata. Unhone kudkushi kar le. Kuvar ji ko bhia nahi pata iss bareme. Bohot dino se ghar se gayab the. Phir ek din unka shav(dead body) jungle me mila.” Everyone shocked to know tht. Kuvar said: Ohh no!!! Guruji. Ramlala( his P.S) Tumne hume iss bareme kyun nahi bataya. Ramlal didn’t say anything. Everyone headed towards Guruji’s house. His daughter, champa, was crying terribly. Priyu got very upset after watching the condition champa. She ran awy from there. P went behind her. P saw her crying near the tree. P: Priyu don’t worry sab thik hojaye ga.” Priyu nodded. K saw her(Priyu) condition and got upset.

When K went to the palace he closed himself in his room. Suddenly he heard a knock at the door. When he opened the door he saw Adi and Hirshi. Both rushed inside. Tumne ye kya kiya. Tumne Guruji ko….” K nodded: ussne Priyu and Pratham ko humesha pati patni rehen ka asshirvaad diya. Issliye.” K startedlaughing like a maniac.

Now the day has come. K was very much upset due to this. He tried hard to explain his feeling for her. But he was unable to do it as Priyu was busy in packing her bags. And also P was there with her.Whenever he saw P with Priyu his blood started steaming. He used to feel to slay him. It wasn’t a big thing of KUVZ. He tried to attempt P’s murder but he was saved by Priyu again and again. He didn’t know what was so special about P that made Priyu crazy about him.

The bus was ready to arrive. Priyu saw K who was standing far away from Bus. Everyone thanked him for such a wonderful trip. After meeting Adi she went towards K. Priyu: Kuvar ji???” Wiping his tears K turned towards her. He controlled his tears. Priyu( with a smile):Hum sab ne ye trip bohot enjoy kiya. Thank you for tht.” K just gave her a smile. K: My pleasure. Priyu too smiled and asked: Kya aap nahi aa rahe hai humare saath??? K shook his head in –tive: Bas Airport tak hi aaoonga. Priyu: Ok. Chaleye. Hum chalet hai. They went towards the bus. When she turned she saw P waiting for her. He gave his hand to help her to get inside the bus. Priyu giggled and kept her hand on his and got inside it. K got wounded after watched this. Priyu and P sat on their right side, on first seat. The bus moved on. As some construction was going on the bus took a short cut from Devi Durga Maa’s temple. She remembered the Guruji. She felt bad for him. She thought wht made him to do this biggest mistake????

The bus reached at the airport. Then the announcer announced tht the flit with depart with in 30mins. Then everyone went towards the exit. Priyu looked back and said good bye by moving her hand. Everyone did the same. K too moved his hand to say god bye. Then they went away. The plane departed after 30 mins. He saw the plane moving in the sky.

When K went to palace he could feel Priyu’s absence. At night he registhan(desert). He went at the same place. He could hear Priyu’s voice, tht same song.

Morni Bagama bole addhi raath maa…..

Coming up:

K: Priyu tum sirf meri ho.” Now Priyu got afraid

Wht will K do now???

Do comment.

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 7:23 pm

Ø Triangular Love Story: TLs: Part:10(i)

Hello Friends. I got at least 8 comments for which I am very happy. Do commenting.

Well this part is split into two parts. It has a song. I am sure u will not like it.

Ø Triangular Love Story: TLs: Part:10(i)

When K went in the palace but he could experience Priyu’s absence. After few mins he went towards the desert. He went at the same place. He could hear Priyu’s voice, tht same song.

{morani baaga ma bole aadhi raatama chhananachhan chudiyaan khanak gayi dekh saahibaan chudiyaan khanak gayi haath ma } At morning K got fresh and stand near the window watching the swing in which Priyu used to play. He was wearing his business suit. At tht time Adi and Hrishi came there. Adi (keeping his hand on K’s shoulder): Usse yaad kar rahe hoo beta??” K nodded. He was having tears in his eyes. Adi had never seen K so depressed. K went outside.

He was sitting near the wall where Priyu and K were having their coffee. Beside tht wall there were many pillars. Suddenly he heard some one’s voice. She saw Priyu in designed Punjab (White color, with Grey and golden designs, hairs were open). She was climbing down the steps looking at him (smiling).

(Priyu)

La La La La La La Lala La La La La

(K singing. Closed his eyes)

Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanammmm

{She smiled at him. She playing with her dopatta and climbed down the hill. Adi and Hrishi were watching this and got shocked as they saw K. He was pointing at Priyu)

(K song, smiling)

Tere Naam

(Priyu)

La La La

(K singing)

Tere Naam

La La La La
(She came near him)

Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam Hooooo Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
(Touching her face)

Pyaar Bahut Karte Hai Tumse Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam

(Holding her hand)

Ho Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam

(They were near a river. She ran away)

La La La La La Lala La La La La
La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La

He came near her.

(Now she was in Blue-yellow dress. All girls dancing with Priyu)

Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya

(He was standing near a greenery place. She was near him)

Gulshan Bhi to Ab Veerana Lagta Hai

(Looking at her, he sang)

Har Aapna Hum Ko Begana Lagta Hai

(Holding her dupatta and surrounding her with it)

Hum Teri Yaadon Mein Khoye Rehte Hai

(She was too watching him in his eyes)(Touching her face)

Log Hume Pagal Deewana Kehte Hai

(Removing her dupatta she ran away)

Tere Bina Tere Bina

(Nodding his head in -tive)

Tere Bina Naamumkin Hai Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam

(Opening his hands at the edge of the hill)

Ho Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam

(He remembered all moments of P and Priyu)All girls)

Lagi Chote Na Lagi Chote Na Lagi Chote Na

(She came near him. He holds her hands.)

Ishq Ka Dhaga Tote Na
Lagi Chote Na Lagi Chote Na Lagi Chote Na

(Bringing her closer)

Ishq Ka Dhaga Tote Na

(He smiled at her and brought her close to kiss her)
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya

(But suddenly she vanished)
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya

{At night, he again remembers those scenes of P and Priyu}
(She removed his tears from his cheeks)

Naino Se Behte Ashqo Ke Dharo Mein

(Looking at her and then at the sky)

Humne Tujhko Dekha Chand Sitaro Mein

(Near them was a bonfire. They looked at it)

Virhaki Agni Mein Pal Pal Tapti Hai

(He holded her hands)
Ab to Sasein Teri Mala Japti HaiTere Liye Tere Liye

(When she was running away he forcely pulled her towards him)
Tere Liye Is Duniya Ka Har Sitam Hai Gawara Sanam

(She smiled at him)

Ho Har Sitam Hai Gawara Sanam

(He was now near the swing)

Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam

She went away. She turned to look at him & smiled at him and borught her hand forward. Abruptly she got vanished. So he went back to his room and closed himself in his room.

Tere Naam Tere Naam Tere Naam

Now Adi and Hrishi were confirmed tht K has gone barmy (Well bcoz they couldn’t see Priyu). They were watching him since morning.

In morning, K was sleeping in room dreaming about Priyu (Huhhh what else can he dream??) Abruptly he heard his mobile ringing. When he saw the name on his mobile he got jovial. He answered the call: Hello. Priyanka ji. Aap pohach gaye??” Priyu smiling: Ya. Aur woh bhi safely. Waise kal raat ko he pahoch gaye the magar aap sab soye honge na toh issliye maine phone nahi kiya.” K still sleeping on the bed: Acchi baat hai” Priyu: Toh maine rakti hoo. Bye” K undesirably said: Bye.” She cancelled the line. He wanted to talk with her. He wanted to say each and everything to her. But he had no guts. Ya he is called as LION but in front of Priyu he was a mouse. He got fresh and booked 3 tickets for Shimla.

They reached Shimla within 5hrs. Instead of going to Priyu’s house he went to his house. He had a huge basement down the house. It was like an HEADQUATERS where he did his drugs & weapons business, where he kept his black money, millions of money. He went to his cabin and called his Secretary. It was a girl (Niyati of Kulvadhu). Niyati: Sir may I came in???” K: Yes Niyu. Came in.” She came inside the cabin. She enquired: How r u now sir???” Reading a file K casually said: I am fine.” Niyu: U r missing Priyanka maam, aren’t u???” K grinned. K: So u have not forgot her yet.” Angrily: How could I forget that Sir?? K had sent Niyu to make P fall in Niyu’s trance of Love. But instead of falling in love with her he made fun of her saying: Dekho I love only Priyanka. Tum kisi aur ke saath jao. Apna aur mera time waste mat karo. Tumhe toh koi aur bhi mil gayega.”

Trying to change the issue looking towards her K said: So whtz ur plans for tonight???” With a smirk Niyu said: Nothing.” Coming towards her and holding her hand K said: So can u come with me tonight to…..” Saying this he gave her a long kiss. K is a womanizer type of person. He had only liked to love women. But something was special with Priyu. He wanted to marry her but also wanted to have sexual relationships with another woman. His secretary Disha(This is another Disha) was also killed by him as she was carrying K’s baby and was forcing him to marry or else she’ll the police that he is Kuvz. He even killed his own child. He gave money to his lawyer to make Rahul stack on Disha’s murder case. Not even disha he has even killed many woman. Then after their long kiss K leaved her. Cupping her face K said: Come tonight at my room.” She nodded and went away.

Mittals and Pradhans were having their breakfast at 8am. Sumi had said everything abt P and Priyu’s relationships to everyone. Umesh said to P: Hum kal Ootty jayenge.” Getting happy P said: Woow gr8. Hum sab packing karte hai.” He was going to get up when Umesh stopped him and said: Hum waha business ke kaam se jaa rahe hai. Sirf maine, tum aur Yash.” P looked at him in disbelieve. He knew hisdad was joking as he never went to any place without Priyu. Smiling at his dad he said: Ohhh dad. Aap Priyu ka naam lena bool gaye.” Umesh staring at him: I have not forgotten my son.” P looked at him with him mouth wide open. His mouth was full of roti and sabji. Everyone looked at Umesh in unsuspicious. At the same time Priyu came there with hot rotis. She gazed at everyone and enquired whether something was wrong. Umesh told her everything. She too got sad. She saw P going inside his room in anger. Umesh took Priyu inside his room. Priyu: Papa maine janti hook i aapne ye kyun kiya” Umesh turned towards her and said smiling: Beta thnks.” She oo smiled at him.

Then she went inside P’s room and closed the door. She saw P standing beside window angrily. His back was in front of her. She went towards him and hugged him from behind. He turned towards her and hugged her tightly. He was lamenting like a child. Sobbingly he said: I’ll not go anywhere without u. U don’t worry. I’ll be with u.” Controlling her tears she said: U have to go. Alone.” Freeing her he looked at her and said: Priyanka??” She nodded. She headed him towards the bed. She said sweetly: Jaanu U r not going to stay there forever. Only for a night. U’ll be back tomorrow. Isnt it???” Plooked at her and enquired: Y r u doing this??” Priyu: For u. I have seen a dream Pratham. Not only did I but also every member of this family. I want tht u shuld become a big business man like Papa. U shuld be independent person. Enough independent tht u could run this family. U know now Papa need u in business for help. Its ur duty to help him. Cant to conduct ur duty???” P looked at her and smiled. He said: I will.” She smiled at him and went towards his closet. She removed a small bag and filled it with some clothes. Some gentleman suits some jeans. Now his luggage was ready.

After few mins his luggage was ready. He went towards Priyu. He gave her a kiss. Then both came down in the hall. Then Umesh, Pratham and Yash departed for airport.

At evening phone came tht they have reached in one piece to Ootty.

Coming up: K sat on his chair wondering abt something. He called his special spy and explained him everything. He called Priyu.

Fearful Priyu said: What do u want Kuvz?” Kuvz: U.

Do comment. And also the feedback, my mistakes.

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 7:25 pm

Ø Triangular love story: tls: Part10(ii)

Hello friends. This is the 10(ii)th part. It reveals K’s iniquity tactics against P and Priyu. But it also contains some romantics and scenes which u all will not like.

Ø Triangular love story: tls:Part10(ii)

Next day Priyu, Sanju and Riya went to hospital. It was their first day for work. Both were happy but Priyu was affronted. She felt P’s absence. Since yesterday both and called each other more then 100 times. But she was happy that they were returning to Shimla that night. She waited for night. After 10pm her duty finished as there were few patients and she went home. They were returning to Shimla at 12pm. She waited for them. Suddenly she got a call. She saw the name in the phone, it was P. Smiling she accepted the call. Priyu asked: Where r u???” P (deceiving to her) replied: In the plane.” He had already reached in Shimla and was in his car. Yash and P were in one car and Umesh was in another car. The time taken to reach from the airport and his house was 20mins. P was eagerly waiting when these 20 mins will get over and when he’ll meet his beloved gf. He called her again and again. Within 10 mins he had called her nearly 50mins. Giggling Priyu said: Pratham agar tum muhje itni baar phone karoge na tho mobile ka balance zero ho gayega.” Pratham smiled. After talking about 2mins she cancelled the call. K sat on his chair wondering abt something. He called his special spy and explained him everything. After few seconds she again got a call on her room phone. She kept it on speaker. She said: Pratham kitni baar phone karoge. Jaanu mujhe bhi toh phone karne ka muka(chance) do.”

P was dialing number of Priyu’s room’s phone but it said tht it was busy. If P was not on the phone then to whom was Priyu talking???? Priyu: Pratham kuch bolte kyun nahi??? Bolo??” She heard a voice: Kyaaa kahooo??? It sounded her hasky and slow. He was talking like a snake. She got hashed: Kaun?? Kaun bol raha hai??” He said: Tumhara dewaana.” “Stop it Pratham. Mazaak band karo na.” “Maine Pratham nahi hoo”. “Toh kun bol raha hai??” “ Kuvz. Tumhara dewaana aur tumhare baba ka dushman.” Now Priyu got afraid. She asked: Muhjse kya kaam hai??” Kuvz: I just want to say something to u. I LOVE U.” Priyu in annoying tone: GO TO HELL.” “ Aree chilo mat. Accha ye bato kya hoga agar Pratham ghar nahi pohocha toh???” Suddenly her room’s door got open and there appeared P. She got happy watching P there and went towards him. She hugged him. Kuvz: Kya baat hai. Lagta hai Pratham ghar pohoch gaya. Pratham maine tumhe acche se bool raha hoo. Priyanka ko chood de. Shez is mine.” P: Kon ho tum???” “Kuvz” Priyu said. Kuvz(grinning): Tum Punjabi suit me bohot khubsurat lagti hoo.” Priyu in fear: Tumhe kaise pata??” Kuvz: Mujhe sab pata hai. Pratham Ootty gaya tha. Abhi abhi lota hai. Hai na(laughingly)??” Both of them got scared. Laughingly Kuvz said: Be scared of me Pratham. Priyanka ko chood do warna..” Pratham: Warna??? Warna kya karoge.” Kuvz frowningly said: Warna I’ll kill u.” Priyu got afraid. Pratham(in a challenging tone): Toh maarkar dekho.” Saing this he cancelled the call. Priyu in a scary voice: Pratham do u know wht u told him??? Pratham woh ek UNDERWORLD DON(specifiying it)hai. Woh tummhe maar dalega.” Pratham grinned at her: Mujhe kuch nahi hoga.” He called Saahil and explained him everything what all happened. Saahil called the phone operator and asked him to notice down the number as well as the address. After few mins tht operator gave him the number and the address of it. It was a PCO number. When they went for an enquiry they didn’t get any clues. {K had explained his spy to stay inside the PCO while he was talking with Priyu. He took help of double connection.}

Next day Priyanka went to the hospital. Her whole was stressful. She had been almost forgotten abt the call of Kuvz. At 11pm Sanju, Riya and Priyu were getting ready to return home. Suddenly the light turned off. Sanju and Riya went to check what wrong was going on. Priyu was packing her bags. Pratham had said tht he will come to take them. Suddenly her mobile started ringing. It flashed hospital’s number. She got stunned. He acceped the call and answered it: Hello. Kon bol raha hai??” “ Tumhara dewaana.” She did recognize that voice. It was Kuvz. She got scared. She asked in terrified tone: Kya chahe tummhe??? Kyun mujhe parashaan kar rahe ho??” Kuvz: Maine tumse milna chahta hoo. Milogi mujhe??” Priyu in anger: Nahi. Nahi milongi maine tumse. Jo karma hai karo.” She was gonna keep the call when Kuvz further continued: Thik hai. Toh maine he aajata ho waha. Tumhare kammare maine.” She heard some noise at the.

window. She took few steps towards the window. She was sweating hard. Kuvz warned her: Gaye mat gao. Kya pata. Maine bhi toh ho sakta hoo.” Suddenly a hand came on the window and she shouted loudly and receiver fell down. She opened the door and ran outside. After few steps she dashed a person. She hugged him and said(holding him tiet): Pratham. Pratham woh Kuvz. Kuvz ka phone aaya tha. Woh kahe raha tha ki who yaha aayega.” “ Aur maine aagaya”. She got stilled for a second and separated herself from him. She looked at him but couldn’t see her face as it was dark. That person removed his lighter, brought it in btwn their face and pressed the button of it. It got lighted. Priyu stunned for a second looking at tht person. YES it was Kuvz. She screamed loudly and ran in another direction. She again dashed a person. And now she forcibly separated herself from him and ran back. Tht person holded her hands and she started shouting loudly: Mujhe chood do. Plzzz. Plzzzzz.” Abruptly light turnedon and she saw his face. It was P. She got relieved and hugged him. She started sobbing and said: Pratham Pratham Kuvz. Woh…” She said him everything. Pratham went inside her cabin and watched here and there. He even searched the whole hospital but didn’t find anything. Even outside the window of her cabin. There was no one. He made Priyu relax and took them home. P explained everything to Saahil and Saahil sent some of his officers for investigation. But all was in vain. They didn’t find any clues

After few days:

P took Priyu for a long drive. It was 9’o clock. They went to their patent place. It was a hill where the scenario was fabulous. It was a place where people visited rarely. They removed a bottle of white wine and poured it in two glasses. Both took a sip of wine and looked at each other. The cool breeze made the environment more amorous. They shared a passionate kiss and got lost in their own world. Priyu kept her head on P’s shoulder and P held her from back. Priyu said: Pratham when I am with u I just forget all my pains and anxiousness. U know u bring me to another world. A world which is full of love and fun. U r my life.” P: And u know something. U always make me realize how important r u in my life.” Both smiled at each other and cuddle each other. Priyu: So how was ur day???” P: Very hectic. We had 4 meeting at different places, each abt 2 hrs. U know it was just tiresome. I was feeling drowsy. I was wishing if I had a soft spongy pillow.” Priyu: U r now feeling drowsy, aren’t u??? Then u would have rested dear.” P nodded in –tive & said in a childish manner: Aree when I saw u, sleep was miles and miles away from my eyes.” Priyu burst out laughing. P kept looking at her. Both hugged each other. They sat in their car and went away.

Next day a spy of Kuvz came to his office and gave him the snaps of P and Priyu last night. Kuvz got enraged after looking at the snaps. He knew now the water is going over head. He sat on his chair and started thinking abt his next steps.

At night, P and Priyu were alone in the house. Everyone had gone out for someone’s marriage. As P and Priyu wanted to spend time with each other they stayed at home. Priyu was in kitchen and P was watching TV and helping Priyu by cutting vegetables. After he cut the vegetables he went in the kitchen and helped and learned from Priyu in making Dal and Bhaji. Suddenly the light turned off. P: Priyanka tum yaha ruko maine switch board ko dekta hoo.” Priyu nodded in +tive. P went out. It was behind the house. After few seconds she felt someone’s hand on her back. She shouted: Pratham. Tum age nahi. Maine yaha khana bana rahi ho. Don’t disturb me.” But he didn’t listen to her. He pulled her towards her and holded her hands tietly. He brought her face to face. Now she really got petrified and asked: Praaa..tham wwwhat r u doing??? He removed his lighter and pressed it on and brought it in front of their face. “Hi Priyanka.” It was Kuvz. She shrieked loudly. She kicked him with her legs and ran away towards the door. But he pulled her hairs. She called: Pratham bacchoo!!!” Pratham heard her voice and ran inside the house. But the kitchen door was closed from inside. There was another door to enter kitchen. But it was all in vain. Till then Priyu was trying to escape from Kuvz. Then she went near the door, opened it and went out of the kitchen and went in hall. Suddenly she dashed to Pratham. She hugged him and started crying. He consoled and made her sit on sofa. He went into the kitchen and found no one there. From another door Kuvz had escaped. P went outside and searched for him. But he found noone. Then he called police and asked them to send some officers for Priyu’s security. They searched for some clue but it was of no use. When everyone came he told them the whole story. Everyone got in tension. They didn’t know wht to do next.

Coming up next: Priyu: Komu maien jungle mme hoo. Kuvz mujhe maar dalega.”

“Nahi. Nahi Kuvz plzzzz”

Do comment.

USHA.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 7:26 pm

Ø Triangular love story: tls: Part11(i)

Next day all were busy with the preparations. After two days Saahil and Sanju’s engagement was there. They distributed the invitations. They also invited Kuvar. All members did their shopping. Sanju and Priyu buyed some dresses. P understood tht Priyu had forgotten Kuvz and his calls.

Now the day has come. The engagement was in their house. K had also come. All guests had come. Tarun and Pari had also come. They saw Priyu. They went towards her and said: Hi Priyu”. She just smiled. They said: Priyu, humne suna ki tumhe Kuvz ka phone aata hai. Woh tumse pyaar kara hai. Kya yeh sach hai???” She just ndded. P was also present there. He knew Priyu had forgotten abt it. He said: Its not ur business. Yaha engagement dekhne aaye ho toh woh dekho. Ok??” Both glared him in anger.

(Maharashtran people perform lord ganapati’s puja during engagement) After Lord Ganapati’s puja, panditji said them to put rings in their respective fingers. Sahhil and Sanju put rings in their fingers and with joy everyone started clapping. (Priyu had woren red top and red lahenga, P had woren red kurta with white pajama, sahil had worne white top and pajama and sanju had woren the same ress which Priety Zinta had worne in Maahive song of Kal ho na ho). P anoouched: Intni achhi shaam hai to kuch gana shana ho jaye.” He signaled the DJ to play the music.

(Maahi ve of Kal ho na ho. Dance all same)(others said) Maahi Ve Maahi Ve That's The Way Maahi Ve(sahil said to sanju, she started smiling)Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai ReMaahi VeTere Haatho Kangana KhankeTere Pairo Payal Chance Hai ReMaahi Ve(P said to Priyu)Naino Se Bole Rabba RabbaMann Mein Dole Rabba RabbaAmrut Ghole Rabba RabbaTu Soniye( Dadu said. P extended his hand towards Priyu and she accepted it and he pulled her towards the dance floor and all four started dancing.)Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(P said)Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(Dadu said)Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(P said)Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (Angles said accept Sanju,sahiil,P and Priyu)That's The Way Maahi Ve(P said to Priyu with actions)O Tere Aankhen Kali Kali Tera Gora Gora Mukhdha Hai ReMaahi Ve(Sahil said to sanju)Tere Rangat Jaise SonaTu Chaand Ka Tukda Hai Re Maahi Ve(P and sahil said with actions)Tere Gaal Gulabi Rabba RabbaChal Sharabi Rabba Rabba Dil Ki Kharabi Rabba RabbaTu Soniye(dadu said)Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(Sahil said)Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(dadu said)Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(P said)Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve All girls were playing fugdi. Dancing: Sahil=SAnju, Priyu=P. K got angry.)(Sanju said with actions)Barse Rangini Kaliyan Hai Mehki Bhini BhiniBaje Mann Mein Halke Halke Shehnaiya Re( Priyu said with actions)Jitne Hai Tare Aanchal Mein Aa Gaya SareDil Ne Jaise Hi Li Angadayee Re( Sahil and P)Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi RajkeChal Bajke Oh SoniyeDil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye(dadu said)Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(P and Sahil)Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(dadu said)Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve(P and Sahil)Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve (I am skipping some part of song bcoz it doesn’t match it. I am skipping the 3rd para)(Sahil said)Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai ReMaahi Ve(P said)Tere Haatho Kangana KhankeTere Pairo Payal Chance Hai ReMaahi Ve(P and sahil said with actions)Naino Se Bole Rabba RabbaMann Mein Dole Rabba RabbaAmrut Ghole Rabba RabbaTu Soniye (P said)Jind Maahi Ve (Sahil said)Jind Maahi Ve (Both said)Jind Maahi Ve (All (angles) started dancing. K was watching Priyu)Soni Soni Aaja Mahi VeEverybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi VeJind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi VeEverybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi VeSoni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve After few minutes, all guests were having their dinner. K went towards Priyu. Priyu: Aree Kuvarji aap. Aap kab aye. Maine toh aapko dekha he nahi. Kaise hai aap??” K smiled and replied: I’m fine. Aap kaisi hai. Thik???” She nodded in agreement. K: Mmmm, mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai. Akeleme.” Priyu: Chaliye. Balcony me baat karte hai.” She took him in the balcony. Priyu: Boliye.” K was hesistating to speak. Priyu: Kya hoa Kuvarji??? Any problem???” K nodded in –tive. Muhje kisise pyaar hoga hai.” Priyu’s eyes got widen: Woooo. Wow. Kisse???” K kept mum. Angles were listening their decision by hiding behind the door. P was also their. Tarun and Pari were not only hiding from K and Priyu but also from angles. Insecurely stamping her feet she asked: Bataye na. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.” K said encouraging himself : TUM” Priyu got a dynamic shock. Tears came out of her eyes. Coming closer Kuvar said: I’m in love with u.” She got incensed and gave a tiet blow K. Priyu: I….never knew ki…. aapp…….” She went away. She entered her room. P and other angles came there. She ran and hugged him. P: Maine sab sun liya hai. Kaha than a maine uss Kuvar se door raho. Pata tha mujhe ki woh issa he karega.” Sobbingly she said: Sorry….” He hugged her more tietly after hearing her cute voice. The ceremony got over. Every guest had gone. P said abt the incident happened btwn K and Priyu. Everyone got shocked. Priyu was setting on her bed when she heard a phone ring. She took the receiver and asked: Hello??” From other said: nuCthCththh. Becharas Kuvar. Usse tumhara thaptad mila. Soo sad.” She knew woh was it. She cancelled the call. Again the phone rang. But she didn’t accept the call. Abruptly both her mobile as well as her room phone started ringing. Then hall phone. Then kitchen phone. By hearing tht sound she got afraid and started screaming loudly.: Nahii Nahii. P came in his room and hugged her tietly. Then the phone ring stopped. In Malhotra house, Pari: Priyanka is very lucky u know. Sab usske pecche pagal hai.” Tarun nodded in +tive. Pari: aur usme se ek pagal tum bhi ho. “ Tarun looked at her and kept quiet. Days passed now it’s the month of September. Slowly Priyu started forgetting the incident of Kuvz and Kuvz’s calls which were also absent as she got engrossed in her hospital. Now its 16th September. Priyu’s b’day. As she got up from sleep she saw tht her room was decorated with ballons. She got happy. P came towards her and wished her by giving a red rose: HAPPY B’DAY JAAN.” She smiled and hugged him. Others wished her. Then after getting fresh she went with angles for shopping. After shopping P said tht he had work somewhere and he needed to go. She agreed but at 8 she got call from P and he asked her to meet her at “Shimla House” immediately. He sounded as if he was in gr8 danger. When she reached there she was asked to enter a room. She found tht the room was very dark, even she was unable to see her hand. Unexpectedly the lights of the room lighted and everyone cheered: HAPPY B’DAY PRIYANKA.” A wide smile spread over her cute face. She ran and hugged P. Everyone wished her. Then he took her towards the table where a huge vanilla cake was placed. As she took a knife to cut the cake P stopped her and said: I have a gift for u. Uppar kamare me hai maine tumhara dress raha hai.Jao. Jaldi change kar lo. Fir me tumhe tumhara gift donga.” She nodded and went upstairs. Within 20mins she got ready and came downstairs. She looked wonderful. She was wearing black fork, diamond chain and rings, her lips was shining with pink gloss. P kept his hand on his chest as if he will get a heart attack. Looking at P’s condition she giggled. She came down and hugged P. She was astonished to know tht her whole family was present there. Both took ashirwaad of their elders. Both came at the center of the hall where the table was there. P announced: Priyanka, maine tumhe aaj ke bohot he special gift dena chahata hoo.” He bended on his knee and took her right hand and asked: Will u marry me??” She was taken back with tht question. She was not at all expecting abt such a type of question. She didn’t utter a word. Just nodded in +tive. P took a small box (ring box) from his pocket and removed a diamond ring from it. Everyone present there cheered loudly. He put the ring of her finger. Sumi gave a platinum ring to Priyu and she put it in P’s hand. Then both again to ashirwaad of elder. Then the cake was cut. Yash signaled DJ to play the music. P said to her: After the party we’ll both have dinner at a special place. She smiled and both went started dancing. After some time she got a call. She got angry after reading the name of the caller on the mobile. It was Kuvar. But she accepted the call (in rough tone): Hello. Boliye kya kaam hai??” K: Happy B’day. And I am sorry.” He apologized to her. He said tht he told wht he felt abt her and he didn’t want any kind of answer from her. She felt bad for K. In sympathy tone she said: Its ok…” He said tht he going to London for ever bcoz of business. He said tht he has sent a gift in her house. After wishing good bye they cancelled the call. Hirshi: Aap me usse maaf kiya bhai.” K: Nahi” Hieshi: Toh??” K: Uske saja usse jaroor milege. Jaise disha ko mile tohm moot. Abhi issi waqt. “ Hirshi: Toh kya aap Priyanka ko ...” K: Nahi who meri jaan, Aur disha sirf ek attraction. Maine Priyu ko nahi maronga magar…” A impious smile spread around his face. She said to P abt the discussion btwn her and K. Understanding K’s situation he forgot abt everything. When the party was came to an end and taking permission of elders P took Priyu outside and asked her to stay there. It was dark as there were no street lights. Tanhi angles bhi aaye the goodbye kahene. Then the car arrived. Priyu sat inside the car and everyone told goodbye to her. Angles were moving towards their car when heard someones cry. They searched here and there and were shocked to find P lying behind the bushes. They ran towards him. He was bleeding badly. He face ws covered with blood. Komu: Agar Pratham biju yaha toh Priyu di ke saath kon hai???”

----------TO BE CONTINUED……. (JUST KEEP WONDERING. WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT????)

Coming up next: Priyu: Komu maien jungle mme hoo. Kuvz mujhe maar dalega.”

“Nahi. Nahi Kuvz plzzzz”

Do comment.

USHA.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 7:29 pm

Ø Triangular love story: tls: Part11(ii).

Thnks for commenting. Plzz read this para again even if it is repeated bcoz I have added some conversation also.( In one part I didn’t write the expression of Elders after knowing the relationship of P and Priyu and others. They were pretty happy with it and accepted it)

Ø Triangular love story: tls: Part11(ii). {The time was 3.30am) When the party was came to an end and taking permission of elders P took Priyu outside and asked her to stay there. It was dark as there were no street lights. Then the car arrived. Priyu sat inside the car. At same time angles came there. Nihu: Goodbye di goodbye biju.” She told goodbye to everyone. Then the car departed Angles were moving towards their car when heard someone’s cry. Cry means someone was murmuring in pain. They searched here and there and were shocked to find P lying behind the bushes. They ran towards him. He was bleeding badly. His face was covered with blood. Komu: Agar Pratham biju yaha toh Priyu di ke saath kon hai???” They broght P on senses and asked him abt the situation. He got up slowly. In tense he said: Kuvz. Kuvz Priyanka ke saath hai. Muhje jaana hai. Priyu ko Kuvz se bacchana hai. I have to.” He got up and started walking towards the car. As he was wounded he felt dizziness and fell down. Angles held him and took him towards the car. Komu removed her mobile from her purse and dialed no of Priyu’s cell. She was able to hear the ring of the cell. On the other hand Priyu was watching out of window. She noticed tht the car took the 1st root and was moving towards the jungle. She kept mum as she knew tht P wanted to give her surprise. She noticed tht her mobile was ringing up. She accepted the call: Haaa Komu. Bol. Kya hoa?? “Di..” Her voice was hoarse. Priyu: Kya hoa??” Komu: Di Pratham jiju humare saath hai. Woh ghayal hai. Unnhe Kuvz ne mara hai. Aur bhi apke paas Kuvz hai jiju nahi.” Priyu got stunned after hearing tht. Saahil took phone from Komu and said: Priyu jump from the car. Now!!” Priyu slowly unlocked the door and opened it. The call was not been yet cancelled. She was gonna jump when Kuvz held her hand, stopped the car and asked: Kaha jaa rahi hoo Priyanka??? She got terrified and kicked Kuvz and immediately she jumped from the car. She started running as fast as she could towards the jungle. Angles had kept the call on speaker. Komu asked her: Di kya hoa??” Priyu hide behind a tree and started crying and said“Komu mujhe who maar dalega. Muhje plzz bacchoo!!” Komu:Di ap kaha hoa??” Priyu sobbingly: Komal maine yaha jun…” Someone kicked Priyu from behind. She fell on ground over her face. When she turned she found Kuvz. He shot the mobile with the bullet. Komu: DIDI!!! She moved back at a snail’s pace facing Kuvz. Suddenly Kuvz catched her leg and dragged her towards him and tore the freels of her fork. She screeched loudly. And he fell on her. He catched both of her hands tightly. Kuvz in anger: Scream… LOUDLY!! MORE LOUDLY. BUT HERE NOONE IS THERE TO SAVE U FROM ME, NEITHER PRATHAM NOR UR FATHER OR SAAHIL!!!! BCOZ I HAVE ALREADY KILLED PRATHAM.” She stopped screeching and looked at him in disbelief: NO!!!! THIS IS NOT TRUE. U R LYING!!!!” Saying this with full energy she managed to push him over from her and started running. Kuvz followed her. She saw a big tree in front of her and started climbing. She sat on one branch and started sobbing. Suddenly she heard footsteps. She tried to control herself. She saw Kuvz was standing near the tree. He was searching for her here and there and said: Priyanka. U cant hid from me dear. I’’LL GET U!!” He moved forward. A drop of blood from her forehead fell on the ground, just beside Kuvz foot. He suddenly stooped. She stilled at on place. He turned and looked here and there. He statue himself there for a second and suddenly jumped and pulled her leg. She fell on ground and cried with pain. He sat on his knees glaring her in anger: Maine kaha na tumse jaan, mujhse bhagana, chipna itna aassan nahi.” She went back and tried to stand on her legs but found it difficult. She was too injured to stand. He tried to help her by holding her hand but she pushed him away and tried to run. But her hold her hand and made her dashed against the tree and leaved her hand. Due to this her head started spinning. Her forehead was injured and blood came out. She, however, managed to get near a trench (khaee). She went near the egde of it. The trench was abt 30 feet deep. She heard a voice: Ruko Priyanka. Aage khaee hai. Tum gir jaogi. Yaha aoo. Mere paas. Maine tumhe bohot pyaar kaonga. I LOVE U.” She remembered Kuvz words: I HAVE KILLED PRATHAM.” It was running in her minds. And at last she decided. Kuvz came near to her. The distance btwn them was 3 feet’s. She said: I don’t believe u Kuvz tht u killed Pratham bcoz if P is dead then I must not have been alive. But it’s better to die instead of becoming urs. Sorry Pratham. I’m sorry.” She closed her eyes which were pouring tears, went back and Bended herself towards the trench when Kuvz suddenly holded her and hugged her. She opened her eyes and tried to get away from him. She pushed him away and lost her balance and feel in the trench. Kuvz shouted: Priyanka!!” She screamed: PRATHAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! With a jerk P got up from his bed. He noticed tht he was in hospital. His forehead was bandaged. He tried to stand on his feet and went out of his room. Angles and the elders were there. They tried to hold him and he requested: Priyanka muhje bula rahe hai. Woh ek bohot he bade problem me hai. Muhje jaane doo. Komu Priyu ne tumse kya kaha phone par??? Komu:Jiju din kehhe rahe thi tabhi call disconnect ho gaya. Jab phir try karne ki koshish ke toh laga nahi.” P: Magar ussne tumse kuch toh kaha hoga.” She remembered and said: Ha! Di ne kaha ki: “Komu mujhe who maar dalega. Muhje plzz bacchoo!! Toh maine pucha : Di ap kaha hoa??” Phir din e kaha, Komal maine yaha jun…” Bas phir phone cancel ho gaya.” P started thinking. Maine yaha jun???? Wht did she mean???? After thinking hard he looked at komal and said: JUNGLE. WOH JUNGLE MAINE HAI. ‘Jun’ se sirf jungle aata hai. Aur kuch nahi. Ma muhje jane do. Priyu ko bacha na hai “ Sumi: Par tujhe toh chot lagi hai.” Saachi kept her hand on Sumi’s shoulder and said: Beta tum jao. Priyu ko lekar aao. Jao beta.” “Thnks mom.”Saying this he took blessing from elder and ran out of the hospital with angles and went towards the jungle.

Kuvz came near the edge and saw Priyu lying on a rock. Her head was badly injured and blood was collected near her head. She was conscious and looked at Kuvz. He tried to jump but he felt someone was holding her. It was Hrishi. He nodded in –tive to Kuvz and dragged him towards the car. Kuvz was still in the state of shock and asked: Plzzzz Hrishi muhje jane do.” Hrishi: Nahi bhaiya. Agar aap pakade gaye toh u will bein gr8 danger.” “magar Priyu..” “ Usse bhol jao aap. Plzzzz’ They both sat inside the car and went away. Within 15mins Angles came. They saw P’s Tata Indica car on the road. They climbed down the car and came near P’s car. They peeped inside the car but were upset to find no one there. They looked here and there. P: Priyu ye kahena chahati thi ki woh jungle me hai. Guys let search inside the forest. Come on!” It was 4. The environment, scenario had turned hazy. The leaves contained dewdrops. As Angles came inside the forest they felt a bit chill. Crossing their hands tietly they rummaged around for Priyu. “Crii!!!!” A sound came. P looked down and found his feet on pieces of Priyu’s mobile. He bended on his knees and took the broken mobile and said in husky voice: Yeh toh Priyu ki hai.” and looked at others. “Pratham”, Sahiil called who was a 2 feet away from there,” Yeh dekho, Priyu ke fork ke freels hai.” They moved forward. “Bhaiya!!!” They looked forward towards Nihu who was standing near a tree (the same tree on which Priyu had climbed): Dekho Koon!! Shayad ye Priyu di ke….” Now everyone were getting afraid tht wht has happened to Priyu???? Riya: Eddhar bhi hai.” They found the blood on many trees stem. P saw a little bit of light was coming from his right. He went towards the light’s direction. Angles too followed him. He found tht there was no land and saw a trench. They felt a strange feeling but hoped tht it wasn’t true. He came close to the trench by closing his eyes. He slowly peeped inside the trench and was shocked, stunned by watching Priyu laying on rock which was covered with her blood. He shouted: Priyanka.” He looked around and found another way to climb down. All were shivering with fear by watching tht scenario. He came down and took her wounded head on his hand. He cried: Priyu. Priyu yeh kya hogaya.” Priyu slowly opened her eyes and found tht she was on P' lap. She said in low voice: Tum.. zinda ho.. Where were u??? U r soo late. U always came late.” P started cryinga dn apologized: Sorryy.” Priyu: Pata hai,.. Kuvz ne kaha tht u r dead. (In childish tone) But I told him tht he was, (taking adeep breath) was lying. If u r not there then how can I live??? But U know it was better to die instead of becoming Kuvz, (smiling) wasn’t it???” P looked at her in disbelief and asked: U did this purposely????” She nodded in +tive. He hugged her. Nihu: Jiju come on. Lets take her to hospital” Sanju: Ha Pratham. The case is really gonna be critical. Come one. Hurry UP!!!” P took her in his arms and went towards the car. Sahil called his colleagues in his office and ordered them: Nakabandi kar do. Muhje Kuvz chaheye!” But it was too late as Kuvz plan has already left to London.

by **gauriandme** 3/11/2007, 7:30 pm

They brought her to hospital and made her lied on a bed of Operation theater. The elders were dazed to see Priyu’s condition. The operation started. The red bulb light up. The bubbly, talkative, naughty girl was fighting for her life from death. P went to church which was in hospital. He bended on his knees, closed his eyes and prayed to god having tears in his eyes: OHH JESUS!!! PLZZ SAVE MY PRIYANKA. I CAN’T LIVE WITHOUT HER. I LOVE HER. SHE’S MY LIFE. SHE HAS NEVER DONE ANY EVIL THING. SHE IS SOO KIND. PLZZZ SAVE HER….” He felt someone’s hand on his shoulder. He turned and saw his elders. P to Sumi and Saachi: Ma! Ma I can’t leave without her mom. I love her.” and started crying. Sanju, Riya and Shanti came out of operation room. They looked at others. Sanju: Kuch nahi hooa sakta. There 99% of death chances” saying this she fell on her knees and started crying. Saahil consoled her. She said: Saahil Pratham koo kya kahe???” “ Aisa kuch nahi hoaga” P said and entered the room. He went towards Priyu. She was conscious. Everyone entered inside. P held her head and asked: Tum Muhje chood kar nahi jaogi naa??” She touched his soft face which had turned wet due to his tears, looked at his lustrous eyes which had turned whitish and felt sad. She cursed their destiny tht y they r being separated. For wht reason???? She nodded in –tive and started crying. She looked at everyone. Everyone was upset. She looked at her mother and father. Umesh an Saachil, ect. And then at Sanju and her sisters. She felt a rough hand waving her soft hair. It was Saahil. He kissed on her fore head and started crying. Suddenly she felt as if she is unable to breath. She was suffocating. Everyone got shocked. She tried hard to breath. She hugged P tietly: Maine janti hoo me marne wali hoo. Magar muhje nahi marna hai Pratham. Plzz Muhje baachoo. Plzzzzzz!!. He said: Ha maine hoona. Maine tumhe bacchunga. Tum…..” He felt tht Priyu had loosen her grip. When he separated her from himself he found her dead. Everyone turned like statue. “PRIYANKA!!!!!!” Komu and Nihu: Di!!!” “U can’t leave me like this. Plzz come back. U promised me tht u’ll not live me alone. Plzzz come back. Plzzzz. (Turning towards others) Plzz aap log bulao na usse. Plzz. Mom woh aapki baat manti hai. Aap usse bulao. Plzz call her.” She didn’t reply. He went to Angles and begged him but they too didn’t reply. P in anger: U all hate her. U all don’t wont her to come back. U all hate her.” Tears were continuously shedding from his eyes. Shekar: Nahi beta. Woh vapas nahi aa sakti hai. She cant beta.” “ Kyun nahiaa sakti woh???? Woh Aaye gi. Jaror aayegi. Dekhna” Everyone were confirmed tht Priyu’s death has so deeply affected her tht he has gone crazy. P cries loudly besid Priyu’s bed and fell unconscious. But no one recognizes abt tht. (Now P is in a dream. He is in a very romantic place. And is searching for Priyu)“Priyankaaa!! Kaha ho tum??” “Yaha” When he turned he found Priyu wearing white cudidaar. Her hair was kept open. Little make up was done. And her lips were shining with pink liploss. He came near her and touched her face. Priyu cried: Tum kyun aaye ho yaha Pratham. Plzzz chale jaoo.” “ Aise kise maine cala jaoo. Tum chalo mere saath.” “Maine tumhare saath nahi aa sakti Pratham. Maine jaha hoo waha see koe bhi wapas nahii aa sakta.” “Tum Muhje iss tarah chood nahi sakti. I LOVE U PRIYANKA” AND I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U.” “I TOO LOVE U PRATHAM.” “NO U DON’T. AGAR TUM MUHJSE PYAAR KARTI TOH TUM MUHJE ISS TARAH CHOOD KAR NAHI JAATI”. They heard a voice: PRIYANKA AAO. AAJOO. TUMHARI JAGAH YAHA HAI.” She turned to go but P requested her: NAHI PRIYU MAAT JAO. PLZZZ.” But she turned to go. Suddenly she heard a voice.)

(Forwarding his hand)Tere bin main yun kaise jiya

Kaise jiya tere bin

Tere bin main yun kaise jiya

Kaise jiya tere bin

Lekar yaad teri raaten meri kati Lekar yaad teri raaten meri kati

Mujhse baaten teri karti hai chaandani

Tanha hai tujh bin raaten meri

Din mere din ke jaise nahi

Tanha badan tanha hai ruh (closing his eyes and a drop of tear fell on his cheeks)namm meri aankhen rahe

Aaja mere ab rubaru

Jeena nahi bin tere

(She started crying) Tere bin main yun kaise jiya

Kaise jiya tere bin

Tere bin main yun kaise jiya

Kaise jiya tere bin

(They both remembered the memories spend together- Goa trip and Rajasthan trip- the beautiful night spend together in each others arms and her condition she found in forest and her last breath) (Coming towards her) Kabse aankhen meri raah mein tere bichhi Kabse aankhen meri raah mein tere bichhi

Bhule se hi kabhi tu mil jaaye kahi

Bhule na mujhse baaten teri

Bheegi hai har pal aankhen meri

Kyun saans loon kyun main jiyu

jeena bura sa lage

Kyun ho gaya tu bewafaaa (She was shocked to hear tht he called her “BEWAFAA”)ujhko bata de wajah

Tere bin main yun kaise jiya

Taise jiya tere bin ...

Tere bin main yun kaise jiyakaise jiya tere bin... (She was going away)Kaise jiya

Kaise jiya tere bin Tere bin, Tere bin, Tere bin (She came back, wiped his tears and smiled)Tere bin Tere bin Kaise jiya(then suddenly a bright light came.)

With a jerk he got up: Priyanka!” Everyone looked at him. He looked at everyone and got puzzled. He asked: Y u all r crying???” Kya hoa???” Everyone gazed at him in disbelief. Saachi: Beta. Beta Priyu….” and started crying loudly. P (keeping his fingers on his lips): Sssshhhhhhhhh!!!!! Aree kitni aavaj karte ho aap??? Itna kyun roo rahe hoo?? Kya koi maar gaya??” All were stunned. “Dekho Priyu jag jayegi aur Sanju ne he kaha hai na ke Priyu needs rest toh aap sab shant ho gao. OK???” He went towards Priyu’s lifeless body and waved his hand on her head and said a song (like lori). Sumi was unable to bear P’s condition. He was badly affected mentally. Riya: Bhaiya. Bhabhi is dead. She is…” Suddenly he got furious and warned her: SHUT UP!!! SHE IS NOT DEAD DAMIT!! SHE IS SLEEPING. CAN’T U SEE?” Sumi: Stop it beta. Hosh me aao.” Wohh Maar….” “ Maar nahi sakti woh. Muhje aakele chodkar nahi jaa sakti woh. She cant” He went towards Priyu’s body and asked to get up. When she didn’t he got angry: Stop it Priyanka. Plzzzz come back. (Tears flow from his eyes) Plzzzz.” Then he looked here and there and found something. He went towards it and switched on it. It was a current machine (u know doc’s use it. It gives jerks. I don’t know its exact name). Everyone tried to stop him. But he warned them if anyone comes in the middle and he will attack them with it. Sanju: Ruku. Pratham ko karne do. Jab usse pata chalega tab woh shant ho gayega.” Everyone agreed to her decision. P went near Priyu. Priyu had once taught him how to use it. He asked nurse to help her. Now 1st time no movements, 2nd time no movements AND???????????????????????

Wht will happen now??? Will P accept Priyu’s death or……???? Will Priyu come back in P’s life???? Wait for next parts. Do comment.

Usha.

by Guest 3/11/2007, 8:04 pm

woww thats very intresting i think p accept priyus death magar dhere dhere thoda waqt lagega

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