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The Murder Story 2
The Murder Story 2
Story Synopsis: Anjali's murder is still a mystery. After completing her graduation in London, Anjali's sister Priya get the news of her sister's untimely death. Soon after her arrival in India, Priya decide to find the truth behind her sister's murder at all cost. But she is unaware that she is in danger.
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Story: The Murder Story 2
Story Written By: Dipendu Dutta
Genre: Suspense-Thriller
Story Started on: August, 2014.
Last edited by Diipendu Dutta on 5/8/2014, 9:19 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Episode 1
Day Time of a busy urban city. [cut-to]
Scene-1: [Zoom-In on the footsteps of a woman] Someone is walking towards the apartment building.
Scene-2: A young woman entered in an apartment where she see many people, wearing white clothes, were gathered for the funeral. It's Anjali's funeral after the 1 day post-mortem. Sana, Anjali's friend recognised this young woman and called her name "Priya!"
Priya, Anjali's younger sister, arrived as soon as she heard about her sister untimely death. Priya break-down in front of Anjali's dead-body. She was feeling very helpless at that time because her sister Anjali was everything for her after their parent's death. Anjali always took care of her education and did everything for her. Sana ask Priya to not let that tears go waste. It was a clear murder case but there are still lack of evidence. Now, Priya decide to find-out the truth and the murderer to avenge her sister Anjali's death. At the same time police also reach there and the inspector knocked the door. The inspector was Vishal, Anjali's fiancé. Sana introduce Priya to Vishal. Sana get a call and she go outside the apartment.
Meanwhile, Vishal ask Priya if she is okay. Priya tell him that all she need right now is to punish the murderer who killed Anjali. Vishal try to convince her that the investigation is going on and as soon as the police get the evidence, they will arrest the killer. Priya tell Vishal that she does not believe in police and their investigation because they couldn't save Anjali. Sana come there giving the apartment's duplicate key to Vishal. Vishal ask Sana, how did she get this key? There was only one duplicate key of Anjali's apartment which was given by Anjali to Vishal only. Sana told him that this is the duplicate key which Vishal always used to carry and it got missing on the night of Anjali's murder happened. Sana said she found this key near the entrance door this morning. Vishal, as an inspector get doubt on Sana's weird statement because in this restricted apartment, there's no possibility that police won't find this key near the entrance but Sana could.
Scene-3: In the police station, Vishal get all the call records of every suspects. He find that this morning, Sana was talking to Gurpreet. Gurpreet is Vishal's friend. Vishal know that because Anjali and Vishal, Gurpreet and Sana met. But still, after Sana's statement about the key lead her to become a suspect because Sana had a fight with Anjali two days earlier of Anjali's murder. Vishal ordered the recorded phone conversation and what he heard was shocking-
Phone conversation between Sana and Gurpreet on the day of Anjali's funeral.
Sana: Vishal yehan aya hai...I hope osey yeh na pata chale ke tum bhi ees mein involve ho...Afterall tumne mera bahut bada kaam kar dia. Ab main jaakar Vishal ko ees apartment ke duplicate keys dene wali hoon...
Gurpreet: Kahin Vishal ko tum par shak tou nahi hoga?
Sana: Ho bhi gaya tou humey smart-move karna hoga...Anjali se related proofs ko tum handle kar lena jaise tumne abhi tak poora plan execute kia hai... I love you.
Gurpreet: Love you too.
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Vishal could not belive his own best friend Gurpreet is also involve with Anjali's murder case. What he could not get is, why would these two would want to kill Anjali? But now Vishal have the evidence which will make Sana and Gurpreet the prime-suspect.
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Episode 2
Priya talking to Ajinkya on phone: Please tum jaldi ajao... mujhe yehan theek nahi lag raha hai. Aisa lagta hai jaise har pal mujh par kisi ki nazre hain...
Ajinkya: Don't worry. Main araha hoon...bahut jald!
Priya noticed a shadow outside the window. Priya tell Ajinkya to come there at her place.
15 Minutes Later...
Priya was taking shower. Suddenly! she heard someone has entered in the apartment. Priya cover herself with the towel and went out to see and unexpectedly there happen a power-cut. Somehow Priya find a torch and go out in the living area. She found someone has already entered in. Priya is now scared thinking if it is the same killer who killed Anjali. She look back and scream!
It was Ajinkya, Priya's boyfriend.
"Waise shower ke baad ees towel mein, aur poori tarah se bheega tumhara yeh badan...dekh kar...khud kisi aur ki saanse ruk jayegi..." -Ajinkya come closer and hug her tightly.
Priya slapped him saying- "Tumne tou mujhe dara hi dia...mujhe laga ke..."
Ajinkya: ke kya? Koi tumhara murder karne aya hai? Tumhe jo bhi bure nazar se dekhega, main khud oska murder kar dunga! (smiled and hug her)
Ajinkya: waise ees towel mein bahut hot lag rahi ho...
Priya: shutup!
Priya run away and ask him to check the power-fuse-board to fix the power-cut problem.
Priya was wearing her dress while suddenly Ajinkya appeared and hugged her. The silence of this night was so tempting that Priya couldn't stop Ajinkya to let her kiss but before he could kiss her, Priya stopped him. Ajinkya asked the reason. Priya tell him that she is upset with whatever is going on. Police did not find any strong evidence against the killer who killed her sister Anjali, showing him Anjali's photo. Ajinkya get surprised. Priya asked him if he know her sister?
Ajinkya tell her that he knew her sister Anjali in the college days because they were in the same batch.
Priya with tears in her eyes said, she is very unlucky because everyone she loved, left her alone in this world. Ajinkya promise Priya that he will never leave her in any circumstance. He expressed his feelings for Priya, kissing on her forehead and then he said "I Love You" to her. Priya hugged him.
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Episode 3
Sana: I hope everything is set according to our plan... Ab yeh kaam jaldi se ho jaye tou achha hai!
At the same time Vishal entered in the cabin.
Vishal: Kaunse plan ko jaldi execute karne ki baat ho rahi hai!
Sana is astonish to see Vishal right in front of her.
On the other hand, Priya have to go somewhere but her car get puncture so she decide to take bus. Near at the bus-stand, Priya is waiting for the bus. Two men on the bike was coming, wearing helmet and pass near from Priya. They tried to throw bottle of water sort of a thing on her but that thing splashed on other girl who was standing next to Priya. Those helmet wearing men rode-away. On the same seconds, that girl felt it was Acid!
In a moment crowd gathered to see what has happened to this girl. The girl's face was totally destroyed. Priya was scared and sure as it was for her but unfortunately an innocent is suffering now.
In the police station Sana and Gurpreet explaining Vishal. Vishal play all those recorded phone conversations between Gurpreet and Sana in which they were talking about Anjali's murder case. It was all clear that Gurpreet and Sana are the prime-suspect now. Gurpreet ask Sana that now it is time to open all the secrets. Sana agreed and they explain Vishal, right after the murder of Anjali, Sana and Gurpreet decided to find all the evidences but keeping it undercover because there are the chances that the real culprit will definitely try to destroy all the evidences if he notice. So till now they were working on this without even letting Priya involve in this.
Sana tell Vishal that whoever killed Anjali, has killed her according to her written novel. Sana had this knowledge as Anjali told her earlier that Anjali met someone who was madly in love with her but she rejected him. And now, the killer must be aware about Priya.
Sana request Vishal: Please save Priya...
Vishal: Main Anjali ko tou bacha nahi paya...Lekin ees baar main Priya ko kuch nahi hone dunga...
[ Phone rings ]
Vishal get the news that, at the bus-stand, someone has just tried to acid-attack on Priya.
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Episode 4
After knowing Ajinkya from last one year, he never mentioned about his brother is a police inspector. The servant inform her there is no one in the home right now. Priya decide to wait for Ajinkya for sometime. She go near to those family-photo-frames. Suddenly her eyes got an attention towards the cupboard. There was something lying under. She found it was a big-knife, there was a blood stain on it. The knife was telling its story that someone has tried to clean the knife, but the blood stain remained. She took the knife in her purse and when she was about to leave, Priya stuck with something and the whole bunch of cds fell down. There was one particular cd in which there was a sticker, written, Anjali.
Priya's suspectation in her mind just started now to get clear step-by-step. Priya decide to check the cd, somehow she played the cd and what she saw was a shocker. There was Anjali in the cd with Vishal where Vishal slapped Anjali.
Does that mean Vishal is the real culprit? Now Priya has an evidence against Vishal. Obviously it is Vishal! She took the cd and was about to leave that she get stuck with Ajinkya.
Ajinkya: Tum yehan?
Priya hugged Ajinkya saying- "Oh Ajinkya! I Love you!..."
Ajinkya: aaj kuch zyada hi pyaar araha hai?
Priya: I am so lucky ke mujhse koi sachha pyaar karta hai... warna log tou...
Ajinkya: I Love you... (smiled)
Priya: Tumhi par tou ab bharosa hai... please, never hurt me. Achha abhi mujhe ghar jana hoga, tum mujhse milne aao dinner par... saath mein dinner karenge?
On the other hand, in the police station, Sana and Gurpreet find out the part of the novel where the killer brutally kill the victim. They try to consult with a psychiatrist about this kind of mental problem. They get to know that these kind of psychopaths seek for love and affection and if something disturbs them, they destroy everything. Sana and Gurpreet are now sure that Priya is in danger, that acid attack was a part of it.
Sana and Gurpreet try to contact Vishal but it is unreachable.
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Episode 5
Scene-1: Priya removed her dress. Wear a towel, increase the steam pressure so that she can take a steam-bath. Before she enter to take steam, she get an idea to solve this cd-format problem. She can transfer the video on her mobile using the laptop so that she can watch the video on her cell-phone at the same time she can get ready. After it is done, she entered in to take a good steam-bath while she can watch that video.
Scene-2: At the front door, someone just entered in the apartment. the entire living-hall was all dark. He head towards the room where Priya was there.
Here in the steamy bathroom, Priya decide to play the video. The video is finally working! The video starts with Vishal and Anjali had an argument and Vishal slapped her. The argument was about Anjali told Vishal that his own brother, Ajinkya is behaving odd and last night he proposed Anjali at her book launch party. This video was shocking for Priya.
In the video, Vishal did not believe Anjali and the video got recorded in the security camera. Now Priya was sure that this whole time this video was with Ajinkya, and that blood-stained knife, belongs to Ajinkya not Vishal.
Someone increase the volume of the steam. Priya feel little odd because she didn't put this steam on this much of increased volume. Apparently someone lock the steam-room door from the outside. Priya found the door is locked from the outside and the steam pressure is now even higher. It was difficult for Priya to survive this terrible hotness. She try hard to get out of there but in vain. Suddenly someone opened the door and grabbed her hand. Priya was all blank. Finally she see the face, it was Ajinkya.
Ajinkya: Are you alright?
Priya is now aware of the truth. The person who killed her sister Anjali was Ajinkya. Ajinkya hugged her. Anjali say in his ear that she know the truth how he killed her sister Anjali. Ajinkya shoved her. The cellphone fell down and it was on the recording mode.
Ajinkya: oh! How foolish of me! And I thought I will manage to scare you so that you stop sneaking around Annn-jali's murder case... No! Don't look at me like this! I LOVED YOUR SISTER!
Priya: Then why?! Why did you killed her?
Ajinkya: because she never accepted and believed that only "I" truly love her! But she loved my brother Vishal! So... I killed her! But trust me, you remind me of your sister, since I saw you, I decided, I will make you mine! But now, you know the truth...so...everything is wrong! To fix this, I must Kill you...
Priya: what?
Ajinkya: You have to die...You must die Priya! (said in a psychopathic manner)
Priya was terrified. She take paper-weight and hit on his head and she try to run away. Priya somehow manage to wear something and run towards the door.
On the other hand, Vishal driving to reach to Priya as soon as possible. He gets the text from Sana, written, "Priya is in danger".
Ajinkya saw the knife in Priya's bag and go out to kill Priya. Priya is all frightened to see the door is locked from the outside...She was not getting any idea how to escape. She remembered the master-key given by sana. Ajinkya was behind her and he shoved her. Priya get stuck with an edge of the table and faint down on the floor.
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Episode 6
Priya: Please let me go... Maine tumhara kya bigada hai? (crying)
Ajinkya: bigada tou maine bhi Anjali ka kuch nahi tha...lekin osne mere pyaar ka ees tarah sab ke saamne mazaak bana kar rakh dia oska kya?! Ab agar maine tumhe jane dia tou... tou main mujhe faansi ho jayegi na! esiliye! tum marr jao mere liye? please?
Ajinkya is all set to kill Priya with his knife. Suddenly the door slammed! It was Vishal.
Vishal: Priya ko jane do Ajinkya! Let her go! Jo tumne Anjali ke saath kia, ab main woh Priya ke saath nahi hone dunga!
Ajinkya slowly turned towards Priya to kill her but Vishal ran and jumped on him to stop him. In the fight between these brothers, Vishal get himself injured, hit Ajinkya on his head. Ajinkya fell down on the floor. Somehow Vishal manage to free Priya. Priya was very scared. Vishal promise her that he will protect her. Suddenly Ajinkya stabbed Vishal. Priya was all frightened. She ran towards the door but Ajinkya grabbed her leg and she fell down. Somehow she kicked him and ran away.
Priya managed to come outside the building and she ran to save her life. Priya knew it may be the last night of her life but she remained strong. She kept running and Ajinkya was also following her. He was almost near to catch her. Somehow Priya reach at a place where this party was going on. There was this music playing 'Chaar Bottle Vodka' in the party and Priya entered in the party to hide herself. Everyone was partying and dancing on this music. Priya feel a bit relief as here she is safe but still she doesn't have any idea from where and when Ajinkya may showup!
People were partying on this song 'Chaar Bottle Vodka' and one of them asked Priya to join. Priya tried to seek for help. Suddenly Priya saw Ajinkya has found her and he is coming towards her. Priya rushed to the mic area where the DJ was playing music. She told the people there about what she had suffered from and at the same time they helped her to call the police. In this loud party, in this crowd, it was difficult to find Ajinkya. After the police arrived, Priya gone to her apartment where the attack was happened. Vishal was lying there on the floor but Ajinkya was missing. With the help of police Priya managed to get admit Vishal in the hospital. Police started their investigation to find and arrest Ajinkya.
After 3 days...
Ajinkya is now fine. Priya tell everything about what happened that night. Police come-up with the news, Ajinkya has committed suicide.
After getting this news, Priya felt relief. But the loss she had, it would be very difficult for Priya to get out of this trauma.
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