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OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
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OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by gauriandme 2/11/2007, 9:19 pm
“OM SHANTI OM”
PROLOUGE
Hello friends. I am writing a new fan-fiction. I’ll only give slight info abt this story. Its based on reincarnation (rebirth). In pervious life both Om & Shanti ,i.e, Hiten & Gauri were killed.
MAIN CHARACTERS
Gauri Pradhan Tejwani as Shanti Mehra.
Hiten Tejwani as OM Kapoor.
OTHER CHARACTERS:
Shilpa Saklani as Sanjana Singh.
Amit Sareen as Saahil Mehra.
Jennifer Winget as Riya Kapoor.
Yash Tonk as Yash Singh.
Arjun Bijlani as Arjun Singh.
Reshmi Gosh as Reshmi Mehra.
Shreyas Talpade as Shri Malhotra.
Ronit Roy as Ronit .
Sharat Saxena as Sharat Kapoor.
Deepak Qazir as Deepak Singh.
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[color=red]NEGATIVE CHARACTERS:
Arjun Rampal as Mr. Rishab Menon.
Saahil, Shanti & Reshmi r brother & sisters, they have only father, Ronit Mehra
Sanju, Arjun & Yash r brothers & sisters.
OM & Riya r brothers & sisters. Their mother & Father died in an accident.
All r in a band of songs called OM SHANTI OM. OM SHANTI OM bcoz Om and Shanti r their favorites. They do performances in different places and they r too famous in Panchgany. They live in Panchgany. They not only sing but also dance. Arjun, Yash & Saahil r band masters whereas others r dancers and OM & Shanti r singers.
STORY:
Its to small story. The story is abt their reincarnation and the mystery of their murder. Their previous life’s they were people of 70’s.In theirpast life they lived in Shimla. Shanti was a famous actor where as OM was a junior artist. After their untimely demise they r immediately born as neighbors. Other things will continue in each parts.
Hope u all will like/love it.
Usha.
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by aanchal 2/11/2007, 9:43 pm
great intro. looking forward to read it. continue soon 
pls continue with TLS also
pls continue with TLS also
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by Guest 3/11/2007, 1:39 am
Woww amazing entry of om shanti om plzzzz start it soon iam veryyy excited to know
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by gauriandme 3/11/2007, 6:40 pm
Thnks for the comments . But only 2 reader 
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Usha.
. But only 2 reader .Usha.
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by Guest 3/11/2007, 8:03 pm
dont worry baad mein jitne users aayenge woh yeh zarroor achha comments do ur creations dont worry about viewrs 
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by gauriandme 3/11/2007, 8:10 pm
Hope it works. I'm realy confused how to start the 1st part.
Usha.
Usha.
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by Guest 3/11/2007, 8:23 pm
dont b confused aakhir kahin na kahin se tou story start hotii hi hai ok start it with some kind of special entry jaise hero ka style maarna something ...
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by gauriandme 3/11/2007, 8:52 pm
I have started it iwht differently. I'll post the parts soon.
Usha.
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by gauriandme 6/11/2007, 8:05 pm
[size=12][color=red]New Character:
Nausheed Cyrusi as Ruchha Khanna. She is playing a -tive role.
One more thing. both Om & Shanti's father is a big business man. They both r very rich.
Nausheed Cyrusi as Ruchha Khanna. She is playing a -tive role.
One more thing. both Om & Shanti's father is a big business man. They both r very rich.
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OSO: PART 1
by gauriandme 6/11/2007, 8:32 pm
“OM SHANTI OM:01”
Hello friends. This is the 1st part of OM SHANTI OM. Hope u all will like it. This part is based on their college and band rehearsals.
“OM SHANTI OM:01”
They were surrounded with fire. They were in a room which was furiously burning. They were searching a way to get out from tht room. But it was of no use. They heard some crack sound behind them. Beside them was a hole caused due to fire which was fuming with fire. When they turned a pillar of fire ell on their head & they fell in tht hole.
With a jerk she got up & looked here & there. She was in her room sleeping on her bed. Suddenly the alarm bell ranged & she was again jolted. She took the table watch, switched off the alarm & took a look at the time. She was shocked to know the time. It showed 7’o clock. She hurried got up from her bed and ran towards the lavatory. She washed her face in the basin and looked her face in the mirror remembering abt her dream. Within half an hour she took bath and busy selecting her outfit. She selected a white frock with matching ox arise jewellery. She did slight make up & applied transplant shining liploss on her reddish pink lips. She was looking like doll with her hair opened (her hair is long till her shoulder). She took her keys and sat inside her Honda car. She started the car and drived toward the college.
As the car moved over the mountain in a zic-zak way she observed the beauty of Panchgani. PANCHGANI is a beautiful hill station with beautiful people. Panchgani is 265kms away from Mumbai city. She saw the peak of the mountain was covered with fog. The whole surrounding was filled with greenery. St. Thomas College was on a mountain surrounded with huge trees & shrubs. As she entered the college she parked her car in the parking lot & moved towards the backside of college where there was a huge stage. As she reached there she heard everyone shouting. Everyone were shouting, OM! OM!! OM!!” She went near the stage and smiled as the singer.
{The guitar noise” Others were}
{A boy at his 20s was singing by moving his had according to the song. A guitar was handing on his neck}
Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya
hooo Saawariya
{Everone shouted: OM!!!!!!!!}
Doli mein bitha ke
Sitaro se sajake
Zamane se churake
Lejayega ekroj tera udake jiya
(Pointing towards the girl: SHANTI. She smiled) Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya
hooo Saawariya
owwwowoww
(Dance is same)
Doli mein bitha ke
Sitaro se sajake
Zamane se churake
Lejayega ek roj tera udke jiya
(Skiding on the stage)
Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya
hooo Saawariya
{He gave her his hand and brought her on the stage & started dancing}
{Looking at her eyes}Palkon ke shamiyane mein
{Extending his hands, indicating the surrounding}Khwaabon ke har thikane mein
{Pointing towards her}Teri hi parchaiya hai
Tu to har lambha Yaadon mein hai
{Bending on his knees infront of audience}Teri khamosh pheli nazar ka deewana bana
{Getting up & started dancing with her}Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya Doli mein bitha
hooo Saawariya
ke
(Putting glitters on her. She gets happy}Sitaro se sajake
Zamane se churake
Lejayega ekroj tera udake jiya
Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya
{She hugged him}hooo Saawariya.
After few minutes they were sitting in an open canteen. Shanti {she called Om as Omi): Omi wht a gr8 performance!” Om: Really?? Did u like it???” Shanti: Of course idiot. I loved it.” Om: wht did u love??? Song or me?” She rolled her eyes and requested: Not again Om. Plzz. (Said in a mild tone) Omi I told u I need time.” Saying this she went inside the canteen. Everyone knew tht Shanti do love Om but she wanted time. She just wanted to know him. After having their snacks they were moving towards their college to meet their principal. They were given holiday to learn for their up coming exams. While walking towards Principal’s office Om asked: Shanti itna late kyun aye tum???” Shanti:Kya tum nahi janti??” Om: Don’t tell me ki tumhe phir wahi aag wala sapna aaya.” She simply nodded: Chhodo na Om. Uss sapne ke bare me yaad mat dilao. Woh chees yaad aate he I start sweating.” Om kept his hand on her shoulder to console her. “Woo!! Wht a gr8 performance Om!” (Nausheed Cyrusi as Ruchha Khanna, she also has a band but not as famous as Om Shanti Om. She wanted to get rid off from this band. In short she is a –tive role. OSO is the famous band in Panchgani.) They tried to ignore her but she in their way and challenged Shanti: Tum dekhna iss bar ka woh opportunity Mujhe he milega. Mere band ko he album banana ka muka milega. (Pointing towards her)Dekhna.” Shanti kept her finger down she said: Letz see.” And she went away.
T[color=#333300]aking permission they entered principal’s office. Principal greeted them with a smile. Principal: Aao baccho. Muhje tumse kuch baat karne thi. But first Om, u sang very well.” Om: Thnk u sir.” “Baccho Mere paas tumhare liye ek offer lekin woh tumhe tabhi milega jab tum log college me top karoge. No dobt U will. But u will have to have patience. Ek baat to tum jante hoo ek tumhe album milega jisse tum apne band ka naam roshan kar paoge. I want tht u shuld try ur best. I want ur band to get famous beta.” Everyone together: We will sir.” Shanti: Hum koshish karenge ki hum top kare.” Hearing this Principal got happy. But all this was heard by Ruchha & her friends. She decided: Abt oh ye muka me he jitungi.”
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[/size]COMING UP: Judges said: Aur top kiya hai……….
WHT DO U ALL THINK WHO WILL TOP IN THE COLLEGE???? WILL SHANTI & OM REMEMBER THEIR PAST??? WHT Z THE DREAM ABT??????
USHA.
Hello friends. This is the 1st part of OM SHANTI OM. Hope u all will like it. This part is based on their college and band rehearsals.
“OM SHANTI OM:01”
They were surrounded with fire. They were in a room which was furiously burning. They were searching a way to get out from tht room. But it was of no use. They heard some crack sound behind them. Beside them was a hole caused due to fire which was fuming with fire. When they turned a pillar of fire ell on their head & they fell in tht hole.
With a jerk she got up & looked here & there. She was in her room sleeping on her bed. Suddenly the alarm bell ranged & she was again jolted. She took the table watch, switched off the alarm & took a look at the time. She was shocked to know the time. It showed 7’o clock. She hurried got up from her bed and ran towards the lavatory. She washed her face in the basin and looked her face in the mirror remembering abt her dream. Within half an hour she took bath and busy selecting her outfit. She selected a white frock with matching ox arise jewellery. She did slight make up & applied transplant shining liploss on her reddish pink lips. She was looking like doll with her hair opened (her hair is long till her shoulder). She took her keys and sat inside her Honda car. She started the car and drived toward the college.
As the car moved over the mountain in a zic-zak way she observed the beauty of Panchgani. PANCHGANI is a beautiful hill station with beautiful people. Panchgani is 265kms away from Mumbai city. She saw the peak of the mountain was covered with fog. The whole surrounding was filled with greenery. St. Thomas College was on a mountain surrounded with huge trees & shrubs. As she entered the college she parked her car in the parking lot & moved towards the backside of college where there was a huge stage. As she reached there she heard everyone shouting. Everyone were shouting, OM! OM!! OM!!” She went near the stage and smiled as the singer.
{The guitar noise” Others were}
{A boy at his 20s was singing by moving his had according to the song. A guitar was handing on his neck}
Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya
hooo Saawariya
{Everone shouted: OM!!!!!!!!}
Doli mein bitha ke
Sitaro se sajake
Zamane se churake
Lejayega ekroj tera udake jiya
(Pointing towards the girl: SHANTI. She smiled) Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya
hooo Saawariya
owwwowoww
(Dance is same)
Doli mein bitha ke
Sitaro se sajake
Zamane se churake
Lejayega ek roj tera udke jiya
(Skiding on the stage)
Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya
hooo Saawariya
{He gave her his hand and brought her on the stage & started dancing}
{Looking at her eyes}Palkon ke shamiyane mein
{Extending his hands, indicating the surrounding}Khwaabon ke har thikane mein
{Pointing towards her}Teri hi parchaiya hai
Tu to har lambha Yaadon mein hai
{Bending on his knees infront of audience}Teri khamosh pheli nazar ka deewana bana
{Getting up & started dancing with her}Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya Doli mein bitha
hooo Saawariya
ke
(Putting glitters on her. She gets happy}Sitaro se sajake
Zamane se churake
Lejayega ekroj tera udake jiya
Saawariya haa haaaa
Saawariya haa haa haa
Saawariya
{She hugged him}hooo Saawariya.
After few minutes they were sitting in an open canteen. Shanti {she called Om as Omi): Omi wht a gr8 performance!” Om: Really?? Did u like it???” Shanti: Of course idiot. I loved it.” Om: wht did u love??? Song or me?” She rolled her eyes and requested: Not again Om. Plzz. (Said in a mild tone) Omi I told u I need time.” Saying this she went inside the canteen. Everyone knew tht Shanti do love Om but she wanted time. She just wanted to know him. After having their snacks they were moving towards their college to meet their principal. They were given holiday to learn for their up coming exams. While walking towards Principal’s office Om asked: Shanti itna late kyun aye tum???” Shanti:Kya tum nahi janti??” Om: Don’t tell me ki tumhe phir wahi aag wala sapna aaya.” She simply nodded: Chhodo na Om. Uss sapne ke bare me yaad mat dilao. Woh chees yaad aate he I start sweating.” Om kept his hand on her shoulder to console her. “Woo!! Wht a gr8 performance Om!” (Nausheed Cyrusi as Ruchha Khanna, she also has a band but not as famous as Om Shanti Om. She wanted to get rid off from this band. In short she is a –tive role. OSO is the famous band in Panchgani.) They tried to ignore her but she in their way and challenged Shanti: Tum dekhna iss bar ka woh opportunity Mujhe he milega. Mere band ko he album banana ka muka milega. (Pointing towards her)Dekhna.” Shanti kept her finger down she said: Letz see.” And she went away.
T[color=#333300]aking permission they entered principal’s office. Principal greeted them with a smile. Principal: Aao baccho. Muhje tumse kuch baat karne thi. But first Om, u sang very well.” Om: Thnk u sir.” “Baccho Mere paas tumhare liye ek offer lekin woh tumhe tabhi milega jab tum log college me top karoge. No dobt U will. But u will have to have patience. Ek baat to tum jante hoo ek tumhe album milega jisse tum apne band ka naam roshan kar paoge. I want tht u shuld try ur best. I want ur band to get famous beta.” Everyone together: We will sir.” Shanti: Hum koshish karenge ki hum top kare.” Hearing this Principal got happy. But all this was heard by Ruchha & her friends. She decided: Abt oh ye muka me he jitungi.”
[color:9167=#333300:9167]
[/size]COMING UP: Judges said: Aur top kiya hai……….
WHT DO U ALL THINK WHO WILL TOP IN THE COLLEGE???? WILL SHANTI & OM REMEMBER THEIR PAST??? WHT Z THE DREAM ABT??????
USHA.
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by aanchal 7/11/2007, 3:27 pm
great part 
. of course our om & shanti will win 
. of course our om & shanti will win
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by Guest 8/11/2007, 5:03 pm
yes we really love om shanti om concept
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by gauriandme 11/11/2007, 3:36 pm
ANNOUNCEMENT: In this story OSO band & Rucha’s bad Western Band had a competition & who is the winner will be announced on the result day(both competition & studies), TOP in competition. But who will top in studies will also get Rs.20,000 as price. Who will top in competition will be given a chance to make their album.
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by gauriandme 11/11/2007, 5:05 pm
“OM SHANTI OM: 02”
Krishna & Aanchal thnks for ur lovely comments.
“OM SHANTI OM: 02”
As he entered her room, he found her peacefully reading a book near the window. He kept on staring at her at the doorstep, her soft hair dancing in air & her beautiful brown eyes, until she noticed him. She was surprised to see him so early in the morning. Shanti: Tum itni subah subah aur woh bhi yaha????” Kya baat hai???? (Teasing him) Kuch khaas???” He came towards her, took a chair & sat beside her & said: Tumse milne aaya hoo aur tumhare saath padhae kar aaya ho.” She raised her thin eye brose in amazement because he was never interested in studying. He used t come to college & used to pass just to be with Shanti. His passion was music, acting & Shanti. She asked: Kyun aaj itne saalo baad padne ka maan kyun kiya??? “Top karne ke liye. .” “We will Omi. Don’t worry. Accha ye baato. What abt others? Where r they??” Om: They’ll come within few seconds. Waise tum kya kar rahi ho??” “Studying. Wht else??” Others came within few seconds & they started studying. This was their last year. They have to pass & top in this examination at any cost. They started teasing Om. Arjun: Yaar dekh na Om padh raha hai. Heheheheh. “ Om: Oye! Chal padhaye kar kar warna ye miss(Shanti) cilangi. Lekin agar who nahi chilagi toh me tumhe ek RAPTA bagake dunga. Samjhe.” Everyone started laughing hearing Om’s mavali language. Ronit & Sharat were happy to see their children studying hard & were shocked to see Om studying. It was something impossible but it was possible bcoz of Shanti.
IN COLLEGE (same day):
Here professor was writing some important notes in the black board & there Om was busy watching Shanti. She was calmly concentrating wht professor was explaining abt. Professor shouted: Om! R u there in class or not!! Stand up” Coming out of his dream he suddenly stood up & asked: Yes sir???” Professor asked: Look at the board & answer which a/c will be debited & which a/c will be credited???” Om became anxious & said wrong answer. Professor nodded in –tive & pointed outside the door. Om looked at Shanti but she ignored him. She always defended him whenever he was in trouble. But this time she didn’t. Professor again ordered him to leave the class & gave him punishment to write the sums 2 times. Everyone were shocked y didn’t Shanti defended him.
Within half an hour the bell rang & all students came out of the class. As Shanti was moving towards the canteen Om caught her and brought her towards him & asked: Kya Shanti tumne sir se meri taraf se defend kyun nahi kiya???” “Kyun karo me?? Y??? Kya ye tumhari responsibility nahi hai kit um class me attentive raho?? Maine kaha tha tumhe jab sir notes de rahe ho ya explain kar rahe ho toh mujhe dekhne??? Bolo?? Om kept his head down due to shame. “(Calming her self) Om HUMME YE COMPETITION BHI JITNA HAI. TOP AANA HAI. Plzzzzzzzz concentrate karo. Aaj subah tumhe padhye karte dekh mujhe laga ki tum sudhar gaye ho. But I was wrong. U haven’t changed at all. U r the same. Aur jab tak tum sudharo ge nahi tab tak me tumse baat nahi karongi” Saying this she went away. Others were to upset due to Om’s behavior. Rucha was happy watching this scenario & now she was damn sure tht she will top and win in the competition of music & studies.
While coming home all those bitter words said by her was revolving around his mind. He came into his room and started badly crying. After half an hour he controlled himself & promised himself: HE WILL STUDY. HE WILL WIN THE COMPETITION AS WELL AS SHANTI’S HEART AT ANY COST.
Next day in college, there was a sudden test. The questions were given on the broad. The time limit was 45 mins. Shanti was getting anxious whether Om has studied or not. Everyone were busy writing their answers. Some copied others like Rucha & her friends & some were busy in removing the answer like Shanti & her friends & some were ideally sitting like Om. After 45 mins professor took their answer seats. Om showed him his H.W. He looked at Om & said: U did u Home work?? Good. Now letz see how much u score in this test.” Om said: Sure sir. I am confident tht I’ll score good. Then bell rang & all students started going out.
After 2 days they got the consequences of their test. They were surprised to know Om has scored the highest marks as Shanti. Not only was she happy but also others were except Rucha & her friend. When bell rang Shanti came towards Om & apologized: I’m sorry Om.” He gave her his charming smile & said: Thtz all right. No need to apologize.” She smiled at him & asked him to give treat. He agreed & everyone went out. The professor declared tht their final exams would be held on 1st March to 25th March. In between they’ll also have some kind of assignments.
He came towards her. She was busy discussing answers with Sanju, Reshmi & Riya. He wished her: Hi Shanti.” She turned towards him. He continued: Paper….. kaisa gaya ???” Shanti: Accha tha. Aur tumhara???” Om: Good.” “Om tumne padaye kit hi na??” He shook his head in +tive. She smiled at him & went away.
Everyone (OSO band) went to temple to pray to god to get excellent results. Each & every were eager to who had topped in college. They wished & prayed only for OSO band that they love the most. Then the Principal announced the topper of the college: Iss saal college me top kiya hai
GUESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
HE SHOUTED: OM SHANTI OM KE SHANTI NE WITH 98%!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Everyone jumped with joy. Rucha didn’t believe it. Shanti was hugged by Om. She went towards the principal & collected the awards. Principal said: Isne top bhi kiya hai aur COMPETITION BHI!!!”
Now she was totally shocked & happy. OSO band came on the stage & collected their results. They even came to know tht Om, Saahil, Yash & Arjun had scored 85%, 84 % 82% & 82% & Sanju, Riya & Reshmi had scored 95%, 94% & 92% respectively. Shanti was very happy to know Om’s results. He believed tht Om has really studied hard. Rucha went away in anger. After few mins Ronit & Sharat came & congratulated their children.
Next day students of 12th had kept a party for OSO band. OSO band attended the party with Ronit & Sharat. Shanti was wearing white- black forks with huge hills. He hair was open & had a light make up with transparent liploss where as Om was wearing a blue jeans, white shirt with black jacket. Om kept on staring at her. Her hair, her smile, ect. She saw him & gave him a cute smile & went towards Arjun. Hayyyy who tohh fida ho gaya!!! Suddenly he felt someone’s hand on his shoulder. He turned & was jolted back to see Ronit & Sharat staring him suspiciously. Suddenly Sharat removed a beautiful rose from his pocket and gave it to Om: Jaa Jaakar de aa usse. Aur sab ke samne propose kar.” He wanted to say something but Sharat ordered him: Jaa ! Aree tu mera beta hai. Sharat Kappor ka! Samjha. Ab jaa. Aur sawal- jawab mat puch. “ He looked at Ronit & Ronit nodded in +tive. Om nodded & went towards Shanti. She turned and saw Om with a rose standing behind her. He bend on his knees & forwarded his hand to gave the rose to Shanti & confessed: SHANTI I.. LOVE U.” She raised her left eyebrow & looked here & there. She waited for few seconds. Then she smiled at him & took the rose & went away running towards her car. Everyone shouted: yeeee!!!!! While running she turned at looked at him & again in front. Suddenly she felt a jerk. She saw every where she found no one. Then at front she saw a huge building burning with fire. He eyes widen. She was 2 feet away from tht building. She shouted loudly: AAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COMING UP NEXT:
SHANTI GASPINGFOR AIR: PAPA WHO BUILDING PURI TARAH SE JAL RAHA THA.”
ARJUN: EK BAD NEWS HAI YAAR.
HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE THIS PART.
USHA.
Krishna & Aanchal thnks for ur lovely comments.
“OM SHANTI OM: 02”
As he entered her room, he found her peacefully reading a book near the window. He kept on staring at her at the doorstep, her soft hair dancing in air & her beautiful brown eyes, until she noticed him. She was surprised to see him so early in the morning. Shanti: Tum itni subah subah aur woh bhi yaha????” Kya baat hai???? (Teasing him) Kuch khaas???” He came towards her, took a chair & sat beside her & said: Tumse milne aaya hoo aur tumhare saath padhae kar aaya ho.” She raised her thin eye brose in amazement because he was never interested in studying. He used t come to college & used to pass just to be with Shanti. His passion was music, acting & Shanti. She asked: Kyun aaj itne saalo baad padne ka maan kyun kiya??? “Top karne ke liye. .” “We will Omi. Don’t worry. Accha ye baato. What abt others? Where r they??” Om: They’ll come within few seconds. Waise tum kya kar rahi ho??” “Studying. Wht else??” Others came within few seconds & they started studying. This was their last year. They have to pass & top in this examination at any cost. They started teasing Om. Arjun: Yaar dekh na Om padh raha hai. Heheheheh. “ Om: Oye! Chal padhaye kar kar warna ye miss(Shanti) cilangi. Lekin agar who nahi chilagi toh me tumhe ek RAPTA bagake dunga. Samjhe.” Everyone started laughing hearing Om’s mavali language. Ronit & Sharat were happy to see their children studying hard & were shocked to see Om studying. It was something impossible but it was possible bcoz of Shanti.
IN COLLEGE (same day):
Here professor was writing some important notes in the black board & there Om was busy watching Shanti. She was calmly concentrating wht professor was explaining abt. Professor shouted: Om! R u there in class or not!! Stand up” Coming out of his dream he suddenly stood up & asked: Yes sir???” Professor asked: Look at the board & answer which a/c will be debited & which a/c will be credited???” Om became anxious & said wrong answer. Professor nodded in –tive & pointed outside the door. Om looked at Shanti but she ignored him. She always defended him whenever he was in trouble. But this time she didn’t. Professor again ordered him to leave the class & gave him punishment to write the sums 2 times. Everyone were shocked y didn’t Shanti defended him.
Within half an hour the bell rang & all students came out of the class. As Shanti was moving towards the canteen Om caught her and brought her towards him & asked: Kya Shanti tumne sir se meri taraf se defend kyun nahi kiya???” “Kyun karo me?? Y??? Kya ye tumhari responsibility nahi hai kit um class me attentive raho?? Maine kaha tha tumhe jab sir notes de rahe ho ya explain kar rahe ho toh mujhe dekhne??? Bolo?? Om kept his head down due to shame. “(Calming her self) Om HUMME YE COMPETITION BHI JITNA HAI. TOP AANA HAI. Plzzzzzzzz concentrate karo. Aaj subah tumhe padhye karte dekh mujhe laga ki tum sudhar gaye ho. But I was wrong. U haven’t changed at all. U r the same. Aur jab tak tum sudharo ge nahi tab tak me tumse baat nahi karongi” Saying this she went away. Others were to upset due to Om’s behavior. Rucha was happy watching this scenario & now she was damn sure tht she will top and win in the competition of music & studies.
While coming home all those bitter words said by her was revolving around his mind. He came into his room and started badly crying. After half an hour he controlled himself & promised himself: HE WILL STUDY. HE WILL WIN THE COMPETITION AS WELL AS SHANTI’S HEART AT ANY COST.
Next day in college, there was a sudden test. The questions were given on the broad. The time limit was 45 mins. Shanti was getting anxious whether Om has studied or not. Everyone were busy writing their answers. Some copied others like Rucha & her friends & some were busy in removing the answer like Shanti & her friends & some were ideally sitting like Om. After 45 mins professor took their answer seats. Om showed him his H.W. He looked at Om & said: U did u Home work?? Good. Now letz see how much u score in this test.” Om said: Sure sir. I am confident tht I’ll score good. Then bell rang & all students started going out.
After 2 days they got the consequences of their test. They were surprised to know Om has scored the highest marks as Shanti. Not only was she happy but also others were except Rucha & her friend. When bell rang Shanti came towards Om & apologized: I’m sorry Om.” He gave her his charming smile & said: Thtz all right. No need to apologize.” She smiled at him & asked him to give treat. He agreed & everyone went out. The professor declared tht their final exams would be held on 1st March to 25th March. In between they’ll also have some kind of assignments.
He came towards her. She was busy discussing answers with Sanju, Reshmi & Riya. He wished her: Hi Shanti.” She turned towards him. He continued: Paper….. kaisa gaya ???” Shanti: Accha tha. Aur tumhara???” Om: Good.” “Om tumne padaye kit hi na??” He shook his head in +tive. She smiled at him & went away.
Everyone (OSO band) went to temple to pray to god to get excellent results. Each & every were eager to who had topped in college. They wished & prayed only for OSO band that they love the most. Then the Principal announced the topper of the college: Iss saal college me top kiya hai
GUESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
HE SHOUTED: OM SHANTI OM KE SHANTI NE WITH 98%!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Everyone jumped with joy. Rucha didn’t believe it. Shanti was hugged by Om. She went towards the principal & collected the awards. Principal said: Isne top bhi kiya hai aur COMPETITION BHI!!!”
Now she was totally shocked & happy. OSO band came on the stage & collected their results. They even came to know tht Om, Saahil, Yash & Arjun had scored 85%, 84 % 82% & 82% & Sanju, Riya & Reshmi had scored 95%, 94% & 92% respectively. Shanti was very happy to know Om’s results. He believed tht Om has really studied hard. Rucha went away in anger. After few mins Ronit & Sharat came & congratulated their children.
Next day students of 12th had kept a party for OSO band. OSO band attended the party with Ronit & Sharat. Shanti was wearing white- black forks with huge hills. He hair was open & had a light make up with transparent liploss where as Om was wearing a blue jeans, white shirt with black jacket. Om kept on staring at her. Her hair, her smile, ect. She saw him & gave him a cute smile & went towards Arjun. Hayyyy who tohh fida ho gaya!!! Suddenly he felt someone’s hand on his shoulder. He turned & was jolted back to see Ronit & Sharat staring him suspiciously. Suddenly Sharat removed a beautiful rose from his pocket and gave it to Om: Jaa Jaakar de aa usse. Aur sab ke samne propose kar.” He wanted to say something but Sharat ordered him: Jaa ! Aree tu mera beta hai. Sharat Kappor ka! Samjha. Ab jaa. Aur sawal- jawab mat puch. “ He looked at Ronit & Ronit nodded in +tive. Om nodded & went towards Shanti. She turned and saw Om with a rose standing behind her. He bend on his knees & forwarded his hand to gave the rose to Shanti & confessed: SHANTI I.. LOVE U.” She raised her left eyebrow & looked here & there. She waited for few seconds. Then she smiled at him & took the rose & went away running towards her car. Everyone shouted: yeeee!!!!! While running she turned at looked at him & again in front. Suddenly she felt a jerk. She saw every where she found no one. Then at front she saw a huge building burning with fire. He eyes widen. She was 2 feet away from tht building. She shouted loudly: AAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COMING UP NEXT:
SHANTI GASPINGFOR AIR: PAPA WHO BUILDING PURI TARAH SE JAL RAHA THA.”
ARJUN: EK BAD NEWS HAI YAAR.
HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE THIS PART.
USHA.
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by Guest 13/11/2007, 2:50 am
yeah i agree with aanchal a fablous part ! keep it up and just chakde om shanti om hehehe ....
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Re: OM SHANTI OM:PROLOUGE & PARTS.
by Guest 18/11/2007, 9:00 am
thanx usha !
i really want to know what is the bad news arjun is taliking about
i really want to know what is the bad news arjun is taliking about
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