Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: 4C: Parts.

by **gauriandme** 28/9/2007, 7:26 pm

CHORICHORI CHUPKE

CHUPKE CHUPKE:

PROLOGUE

Hello Friends. I am writing a story which is abt Mahek and Pratham. Mahek’s nature is quite similar to my friend’s nature. This story will have 10 to 12 parts. Hope u will like it. No suspense in khalnayak.

.CHARACTERS:

1} Main Characters:

a)Hiten Tejwani as Pratham Mittal, also known as PM

b)Gauri Pradhan Tejwani as Mahek Punj also known as PM.

c) Akshadeep Saigal as Ansh Gujral.

d) Shabbir (Hrishi of Kaahin Toh Hoga) as Krrish Gujral.

e) Abhey Gujral: Harsh of Dulhan)

f) Aditya Gujral( Father of Ansh, Krrish and Abhey)

2} Other Characters:

A] Punj Family.

a) . Shekar Punj =dad of gauri in old kutumb
b) Sumi Punj =mom of gauri in old kutumb
c) Shashank Punj - Deepak Qazir.(Comedy) ,as shekar pradhan’s brother,sanju’s dad.
d) Shanti Punj -Mom of sanjana( dadi of Ek Ladki Anjani si))
(e) Saahil Punj =Saahil of kyunki(in this elder brother of priyanka)
f) Sanjana Punj.Sanju =Ganga of kyunki(cousin sis of Mahek, Mahek’s chacu’s daughter.
g) Komal Punj,Komo-=Rakshanda khan,Younger sis of gauri in this.
h) Niharika Punj :Nihu: Mansi Verma ( same of TLS)
i) Kasak Punj- Surveen chawla. .(Comedy)
j) Vicky khanna- Vikas Seth( Abhir of Kyunki) .(Comedy)
k)Pari Malhotra –Maninee Mishra.(Comedy)
l)Bobby darling. .(Comedy)
m) Riya Mittal =Sneha of Kasautii.
n)Dara Singh as Siddharth Punj.
o)Dadi of Kavvanjali as Mahek’s dadi.
p)Saahil of kyunki as Aryan Mittal.
q) Eijaz Khan as Nishant Mittal.
r) Yash Tonk as Yash Mittal. .(Comedy)
s) Punit Mittal: Vrajesh Hirjee(Comedy)
.Intro of the story:

Most important thing is tht ki Pratham’s family,i.e., his mom and dad, are not there. They died in a plane crash when all were small. They were killed by Aditya Gujral. Yash and Punit were adopted sons of Pratham’s father and mother. Sumi and Shanti Jethani- Devrani.
After the death of Pratham’s family Punj family took care of pratham and others. They treated them like their own child and grand children. They gave everything. They made the strong, self reliant so tht they will take revenge from Aditya Gujral..
Then later PM became ACP. Aryan becomes Advocate. Kunal becomes Boxer, Yash becomes A spy. And Riya becomes an Forensic expert. And Punit becomes a computer master. Yash loves riya.
In this story Saahil is ACP. Sanju, mehek, komu, nihu r like dons in their colony.
All of them r good in fighting. They r like Angles to the people. When ever sumi shouted at any of them all colony people used to get angry. They were like socialist. Surveen,i.e., Kasak is Qazir,i.e.,Shashank’s daughter. Kasak is in love with Vicy ,i.e,. Vikas. Everyone likes their jodi .But Shashank hates him. His thinking was tht only a military man will marry his daughter. Shashank has a moustache like an military officer., Big one.(HEHEHEHE)

Baki sab u will come to know. Hope u will like this part. Do Comment

Usha.

by Guest 28/9/2007, 7:45 pm

wowww !!!! i cant tell u yaar ke main kitna khush hoon that u r starting your fics. here in ght-one .. chalo ab mere takkar ka koi tou mila superb entry !!! keep it up Wink

by Guest 28/9/2007, 7:48 pm

characters r mind blowing yaar ! i like the character of gauri aka mehek Cool

by **gauriandme** 28/9/2007, 7:53 pm

Thnks for such a ovely comments Krishna Very Happy

. Hope people will like my ff.

Usha.

by Guest 28/9/2007, 8:05 pm

u dont worry creative or achhe chizon ko sab pasad kartey hain atleast tumhara fic. ek real hai aur jaise dekhava nahi hai that`s why u rocks !!!!!!!!

by **gauriandme** 28/9/2007, 8:12 pm

This is the link of the characters picture of the story.

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by Guest 28/9/2007, 8:17 pm

thanks for the link !

by **gauriandme** 28/9/2007, 8:18 pm

How is it??????????????????????????

by **aanchal** 28/9/2007, 10:13 pm

the picture as well as the intro of story is great. plz continue soon:D

by Guest 28/9/2007, 10:30 pm

ya i agree with aanchal plz continue

by **gauriandme** 29/9/2007, 10:44 pm

Thnks for the comments.

Usha.

by Guest 30/9/2007, 8:57 pm

ur welcome usha ! Smile

by Guest 2/10/2007, 6:36 am

I apreciate ur talent usha just keep ahead ur fic. and i try my best to tell all about ur fictions Wink

by Guest 2/10/2007, 6:38 am

arrey tumhe pata hai yahaan ek aur forum bhi hai general fictions karke u can also post some fiction

by **gauriandme** 2/10/2007, 12:07 pm

Ok. I will.

Usha.

by Guest 3/10/2007, 1:43 am

thanxx and keep continue ur fic. we all loving ur fic Cool

by **gauriandme** 8/10/2007, 6:56 pm

[color=#333333]Ø [color:d222=#333333:d222]Chori chori chupke chupke

Hello. I am back with my new story CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE. It’s a comedy story. Hope tht u will like it. I got a lot of comments regarding this story. Hope tht u will continue ur comments. And plzz tell me if there are some mistakes or something u all didn’t understand. I’ll surely help u.

[color=#333333]Ø [color:d222=#333333:d222]Chori chori chupke chupke

Delhi. A big city which has lakhs of peoples. HMM so beautiful. The streets are so quiet. Hey whtz tht. A man is snatching a woman’s purse. He snatched it and started running. Suddenly his way was stopped by a Black Scorpio car. From tht climbed down seven people. 2 boys and 5 girls. All had worn black top with black pant. Tht thief’s face turned white with fear as if he has seen a gang of ghost. He took a different direction and started running. All seven people with a gr8 force stared running behind him. 2 girls took a short cut to reach him. In no time the thief was surrounded by those 7.

Saahil came running and made 180 degree circle on the ground and the thief fell on the ground. He saw a girl coming towards him. She had black hairs, black brown eyes which had anger, she is Mahek. ( Mahek denoted as PM2): I hate crime.’’ Saying this she gives tht a big punch and kicks him down to ground. ‘’AAAAAAAaa’ ’ A noise came from front.6 more thieves were running towards them. But they were ready. With one kick and one punch they all fell down on the ground. They were better than ninjas and boxers. No BEST. At the same time police came and took them and took those thieves with them. They were Saahil(ACP), Sanjana, Mahek(PM), Komal, Niharika, Kasak and Vicky. Komal took the purse and gave it to that woman. Woman thanked her.Saahil: Chalo aaj phir ek mujrim pakda gaya.’’ Sanju: Ha. Hey PM chal. Chal kar party karte hai.’’ PM2: Hai chal. Lekin kaha???’’ Komu: Aree apna ROCK AND ROLL CLUB. Toh.. Chale???’’ All nodded.

[color=#993366]AT THE SAME TIME:

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In Nanital, a culprit was running faster than a horse. He was followed by an ACP. They saw a grass land beside him. He just layed on that land so tht he could be invisible from the eyesight of ACP. ACP came and looked here and there. He couldn’t find the culprit. In disappointment he went away. That culprit got up and turned. He got afraid as he saw a man with dark blue shrit with lite blue jeans and with black gogs. He was ACP. The culprit said in fear: PMMM!!!!!’’ ACP: Yes, PM. PRATHAM MITTAL.’’(Pratham will be denoted as PM1) He gave him a forceful punch. Then the culprit started running. ‘’SHOOT HIM!!!’’, shouted his officials to PM1. He took his gun and adjusted him gun towards the target. His target was 30 feet’s away from him. With concentration he pressed his trigger. And the culprit fell on the ground. From backside came a big black car, Travelta. 4 boys climbed down the car. They had worn black shirt with black jeans with black googs. ‘Good bhai.’’ Kunal told. They were Aryun, Kunal, Yash and Punit. There seniors came and told to them: Good job.’’ They all: Thank you sir.’’ Kunal: Bhai chal na masti karte hai.’’ Aryan smilingly: Kaha pe??” PM1: Rocking Club.(looking everyone) Chale??’’ All: Chalooo!!!!!!!

( Song is Dhoom again. THIS SONG IS FOR BOTH. Dances r the same. The starting part of

Hrithik, think abt Pratham and his brothers. And of Ash think abt Mahek and her sis and bro. And between the music think abt Sanju-Saahil and Kasak-Vicky.)

dhoom again and run away with meon a rollercoaster ridedhoom again and see your wildestdreamsslowly come alivedhoom again and gotta break therulesand party all the timedhoom againwe gotta steal theshowyou know that ain't no crimeso steal all that you canthe magic you begunlet's shout,break outcomes on once againlets hear itdhoom machaale......... dhoom againand feel the beat ofthe rythemrythem of the nightdhoom again and hear the voicescallingcreatures of the nightdhoom again and see the shadowsdancingin the pale moonlightdhoom againa and feel yourheartbeat pumpingnow the time is rightso go walk out the doorget down....get on the floorlet's shout break outcome on once again let's hear itdhoom machale and when love comes your wayyou'll know its here to stayyou'll steal the chance 'cose you'rethe thief of hearts yeahyou'll win with a galancewalk away with your romancethere's no more ther's no backingout now dhoom again and make the wholeworld crazyset your spirit freedhoom again anf take a break rightnowcome celeberate with medhoom again 'cos all wanna dois steal the showsomehowshoom again 'cos all i wanna sayis hey the time is nowlet nothing get you downgo out and paint the townlet;s shout break outcome on once again lets hear itdoom machale....

In Punj house, Sumi was busy in kitchen. As she heard the door bell, she came running towards the door bell. She got shocked because she never expected them. She saw her sasur, husband and devar on the door footsteps. She exclaimed: Aap. Lekin aap toh kal aane wala the Nanital se,aaj kaise???? Kaam khatam ho gaya???’’ Shekar: Saab idhar he puchogi???’’ She looked all surrounding. She smiled nad said: Sorry. Aaeye.’’ They all came inside. Shanti coming out of the kitchen: Kaun hai didi??’’ AS she saw them she smiled and run inside the kitchen. She came out of the kitchen with three glass of water. Siddarth: Bacche kaha hai???’’ Hearing smile disappeared from Sumi’s face: Social service karne gaye hai.’’ Siddarth: Kya hua bahu?? Kya baat hai???’’ Shanti watches Sumi and nods her head in negative. Sumi: Chup reh tu shanti. Apko pata hai kal kya hoa???” Shekar: Kya hoa??” Sumi: Kal Mahek ko dekhne aachanak ladke wala aaye the. Toh ussene ladke walo se maafi maga aur kaha ki who shaddi nahi karegi. Aur use Panditji ko jhadu se mara.’’ Shekar,Siddarth and Shashank together: Kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

A loud sound came : Hiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’’ Shekar: Areee mere bacche aa gaye.’’ Mahek and other came towards them. Hugging them Mahek said: Aap itne jaldi aayee. WOow thtz gr8. U know we all missed u a lot." Shekar to Mahek: Tumne pandit ke sath kya kiya??? They looked at Sumi and Nihu said: Ohh toh aate he mom ne complaints batana shuru kiya. Gr8.’’ She got annoyed with sumi. Shekar: Tum lag aisa kise kar sakte ho. Humare aanae se pehele tumne Pandit ko mara. YYYYY. Humhe bhi mazza lena tha. Kya Shashank??? Shashank: Hain bhiya. U r right.’’ Everyone looked at them and laughed. ’’ Shekar: Gr8. Accha kiya. Usse pandit ko asee he hona chahiye. Hamesha jabardasti karta hai.’’ Sumi looked at him in anger.” Mahek: Ohh . U all r soooooooo sweet. Next time I’ll keep tht in mind.’’ Sumi was fuming with anger:evil: . Shanti got happy tht they all didn’t shouted at them. As Shashank looked at Vicky he got angry. Shashank: Tum??’’ Vicky in fear: HHHHEELOOO Uncle:pale: .’’ Shashank nodded. Kasu got angry. But she kept quiet. Siddrath: Beta kaise ho??” Vicky: Fine dadu.” Siddarth nodded and smiled.

IN NANITAL:

Pratham came out of his bathroom. He was wiping his hair with a towel. He saw an image of a girl who was standing behind him wearing blue sleeveless Punjabi. He smiled and exclaimed: Riya!!!.” Riya too smiled: Hi bhaiya. Take juice." From gym room Yash came out. He looked at riya. She was looking like angle. He smiled and said: Hi.” She looked at him and smiled. Hi! Take juice. Aur backi sab ko de dena. Bhaiya maine kitchen maine jati hoo. Khana banana hai.” PM1 nodded. Yash followed her. When PM1 noticed it he smiled. Then turned towards the mirror. He saw Mahek. He got happy. (Guys He doesn’t know his name, address nothing. U all will come to u when did they met in the next part). But when he turned back there was no one. He just waved his hand towards his hair and smiled.

When Mahek and others got fresh they came out of their room. Mahek and her sis had same room while Saahil in other. They came down in the hall. Mahek had worn Blue sleeveless top and short white skirt. She caught her dadu from backside and said: Hi Boy friend.( She used to call him boy friend and her dadi her saut, hehehehehe:D Then she sat beside him. Sunaina came and sat beside Siddrath. PM2: Hi Mere Saut.” Sunaina looked at her and laughed. Shekar came there and give a file to Mahek. She said: Yee kya hai???’’ Shekar: Ek file. Ism eek ladke ka photo hai.” Pm2: Dad plzzzz u don’t start now” Shekar: Plz beta. Ek baar dekhoo. Plzzzz.” She looked at him and nodded. She knew tht she will never force her. She opened tht file. ‘’ Yee kaun hai???’’ PM2. Pratham. Pratham Mittal. Umesh ka beta.” She looked at him clearly: Sanju idhar aaa zara.” Sanju came towards her and looked at the photo. Both started thinking. Together: YEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

COMING UP: “AABB AYAEGA MAZZA” Mahek gave a mirthful smile:twisted: .

Ab kya hoga???? Kya Pratham aur Mahek ek dusre ko jante hai?????? Kaise??? Kab?????

U will come to know abt it soon. DO COMMENT.

Usha:D .

by **aanchal** 8/10/2007, 7:10 pm

great part. plz continue soon Smile

by **gauriandme** 8/10/2007, 7:10 pm

Ø CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE: part 2

Hello friends. I am back with 2nd part of 4C(Its short form). Plzzzzz read the part and tell me about ur views.

Ø CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE: part 2

Shekar came there and give a file to Mahek. She said: Yee kya hai???’’ Shekar: Ek file. Isme ek ladke ka photo hai.” Pm2: Dad plzzzz u don’t start now” Shekar: Plz beta. Ek baar dekhoo. Plzzzz.” She looked at him and nodded. She knew tht she will never force her. She opened tht file. ‘’ Yee kaun hai???’’ PM2. Pratham. Pratham Mittal. Umesh ka beta.” She looked at him clearly: Sanju idhar aaa zara.” Sanju came towards her and looked at the photo. Both started thinking. Looking at each other: YEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ”

They were surrounded by Nihu, Kasu, Komu, Saahil and Vicky. PM2: Hey toh wahi traffic wala hai na??” Sanju: Nahi. Airport wala.. Hai na??” Komu: NOO. Flirt guy. Mahek: Exactly. ( Looking at Shekar] kya ye Pratham hai???” Nodding in positive Shekar: Tum isse kaha mile thi???” Mahek: Nanital mein. Last year mein aur Sanju picnic ke liye gaye the. Yaad hai??? Waha mile the. U know dad, he is damn flirt guy. Who airport maine jo ticket collector hote hai na unko bhi nahi choodta hai ye. My god.” Sumi: Tunhe ussese baad ki?? PM2: Ha. Who actually ye hoa.(Remembering)

FLASHBACK:

In Nanital, the street was full of car. Landslide had taken place. Also a thief had escaped. Thtz y PM and other were present. Due to this there was traffic. Mahek and Sanju were sitting in a cab. The window of the cab was little bit open. PM was busy in reading some files. Suddenly he saw a taxi. In tht he saw Mahek’s beautiful brown laughing eyes. Tht cab was 3 feet away from him. He was just busy in watching her. At the same time Aryan, Kunal, Yash and Punit arrived. They saw him watching someone. Aryan keeping his hand on PM’s shoulder: Kya hoa. Kisse dekh raha hai??? PM pointed towards Mahek. All of them looked at her. They kept their mouth wide open. Suddenly Mahek looked at them. Sanju too watched them. PM fell in a trance of her beauty. He was so lost in his thoughts tht he fell down. Both Sanju and Mhek started laughing:lol: . PM gets up and watches Mahek. Mahek then got busy in reading a book. After sometime when she looked at him he was still looking at her. She felt very uncomfortable. Sanju also looked at both of them and started smiling. Mahek got very angry. Then a police inspector came towards the cab and called them out of the cab. Then checking took place. PM got a golden chance. He came near the cab. He said: Inspector aap jao maine dekhta hoo.” Inspector nods and goes away.

PM looks at Mahek but she ignored him. She turned her face. Sanju: Kya hoa hai?? Kab traffic khatma hoga??? PM looking at Mahek(trying to impress her): Woh…… ek choor bhag gaya hai. Toh MAINE:D (specifying) ussko pakadne ke liya….” AS Mahek heared choor she turned and said before he could complete his words: Kya. Chor bhag gaya???” PM looked at her deep beautiful eyes strangely. PM: Ha.” Sanju kept her hand on Mahek’s shoulder indicating wht she was talking. Mahek then kept herself calm. PM got happy after hearing her voice. Police started checking the cab. Then a he told them to go. PM wanted to talk to her. Sanju and Mahek were going to sit into the cab when a police man came near Mahek and said: Madam. Aap kya MISS INDIA ya fir MISS UNIVERSE hai kya???” Mahek got puzzled: Kyun?” Police man: Woh aap bohot sundar dehk thi hai.” Mahek looked at him in anger. She started fuming with anger:(Smiling) Thnk u. (Catching his coller) Muhje lagta hai ki aapko aapne kam par zada dhyan rakhna chahiye. Cab driver: Madam chaliye.” Sanju: Chalo”. Mahek leaved his coller and looked at PM in anger. She went towards the cab and sat inside the cab. Then the cab went towards the airport. Pantnagar is the nearest airport (71km from there). Tht Police inspector got scared. PM got felt it very strange.

In Airport, Sanju and Mahek were sitting on one of the bench. PM followed them and reached the airport. He saw them going to check their tickets (a person which checks the ticket inside the airport. For checking their tickets, a woman was there. She was beautiful. But not beautiful more than Mahek. PM went towards her and started talking with her. He was trying to make Mahek an impression. He took her hand and started telling abt her future husband. Mahek and Sanju were standing in line. When their turn came the woman was busy in talking with PM. Mahek got irritated. Not bcoz she was getting jealous but bcoz her time was getting wasted. They waited for 5 mins. But no response. Mahek was short tempered. She just banged her hand on the desk. Everyone looked Woman: Sorry wohh… (Removing her ticket) maine… (Smiling, looking at the ticket) Ohh aap Delhi jane wali hai??” Mahek: Ha.” She sat on the bench. Sanju brought two cups of coffee for both of them and had their coffee. PM was just looking at her. She was getting very angry. She was reading her book and was moving from here to there. Suddenly she fell down. When she saw back she was dumped by a small boy. She sat on the floor and looked at tht boy. Tht boy was just 3 yrs old. He had got scared after seeing her behavior with tht woman. Mahek was really getting angry. But when she saw tht boy’s cute face her heart melted. She smiled, waved her hand on his head and asked: Kya hoa??? Tum gir gaye????” She made him stand up on his legs. She sat on her knees and asked: Tumhara naam kya hai???” Tht boy: Hrishi. Ek baat kaho???” PM2: Kaho.” Tht boy: Aap kya MISS INDIA ya fir MISS UNIVERSE hai kya???” Mahek(Smiling): Kyun??” Tht boy: Woh aap bohot sundar dehk thi hai.” Mahek looked at him and smiled and said: Nahi. But u r very cute.” She kissed him on his head and asked: Aap kaha ja rahe ho??” Tht Boy: Delhi.” PM2: WOOW!! Maine bhi. Chalo plane mein betkar masti karege.” He nodded. He went running towards his parents. PM watched this whole affair. Sanju: Chal Mahu(They also called mahek mahu).” Mahek got up and looked at PM who was busy watching her. She ignored him. Tht boy came running towards him and they all went towards the exit door. PM was gonna stop her but she went away. Suddenly PM2 cell rang and she picked it up and exclaimed: Mamma!! Woow kaisi ho??? Hum abhi airport par hai. Jaldi aange.” Sumi: Thik hai. Bye” Mahek: Bye.

FLASHBACK ends:

Everyone looked at her and started laughing. PM2: Kya hoa?? Ussme hasne jaisa kya hai????” Siddarth: Nahi. Hum Pratham par has rahe the. Bada Flirt hai. Pata hai humme.” PM2: Aur aap aise insaan se meri shaddi karwana chahte hai???” Sumi: aise insaan matlab?? Toh tuhje kaisa pati chaheye??” PM2(moving here and there like old film actress): Joh bahoot handsome hoo. Joh bahot accha hoh. Joh mujhese pyaar kare. Sirf muhjese. Joh mere pyaar ko samjhe. Joh mere feelings samhje. Joh mere….” Sumi: Ha. Mera pratham bahot accha hai. Tujhse aur bhi sundar, intelligent hai.” PM2: Kya matlab??? Muhjese bhi intelligent. Muhje intelligent sirf mera dreamboy hai. Woh PM nahi. Woh toh buddhu hai.” Sumi (pointing her fingers towards Mahek) AA mera pratham bahot intelligent hai ha. Bohot se cases solve kiye hai ussne. Har paheli ka raaz janta hai woh” PM2: Acchaaaaa, Thik hai. Muhje waqt chahiye.

Angles bedroom:

Angles were sitting on bed and on the phone riya was there. The phone was on speaker. PM2: Maine ek plan karonge jo sabit karega ki woh intelligent nahi hai. Muhjse toh nahi. Lekin…” She turned towards them and gave a naughty smile: Pratham Mittal aa rahe hai. Usse welcome karne ki responsibility humari hai. Usse welcome hum aapne tarike se karenge.” All understood wht she wanted to tell. Vicky: Itna bata diya hai toh tumhara plan kya hai ye bhi bata do.” PM2 smiling: Ha. Toh suno….” Saying this she started describing her plan. Everyone understood wht was there work.

Coming up: Mahek was running with Pratham’s laptop. Pratham: Hey. “Chorrr Chorr!!!!!!!!!!!.”.

Usha.

by **gauriandme** 8/10/2007, 7:17 pm

Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: Part: 3(i)

Hello friends. Back with 3rd part. Hope u all will like it. If I’m wrong anywhere then plzz tell me about it.

Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: Part: 3(i)

Angles were sitting on bed and on the phone riya was there. The phone was on speaker. PM2: Maine ek plan karonge jo sabit karega ki woh intelligent nahi hai. Muhjse toh nahi. Lekin…” She turned towards them and gave a naughty smile: Pratham Mittal aa rahe hai. Usse welcome karne ki responsibility humari hai. Usse welcome hum aapne tarike se karenge.” All understood wht she wanted to tell. Vicky: Itna bata diya hai toh tumhara plan kya hai ye bhi bata do.” PM2 smiling: Ha. Toh suno….” Saying this she started describing her plan. Everyone understood wht was there work.

Next day, at 8am, Angles climbed down the stairs. Mahe: Maa We r getting late. Kuch khane ko dona.” In kitchen Sumi replied: Laa rahe hoo. Bas do minute.” Then she came out with a bowl and a food box. The box had parathas and in bowl it was pickles. Angles did their breakfast. Suddenly Mahek’s cell phone started ringing. Accepting the call she whispered: Haa Arjun( Alek from LRL). Kuch pata chala??” Arjun: Ha. Pratham toh kal he Darjeeling me aa cuka hai.” Mahu: Fine. Tune tickets toh book kiye hai na??” Arjun: Haa. Don’t worry. Woh sab hoo gaya hai.” Mahu: Fine me rakhti hoo. Mom ko tu yaha aa aur bata ki hum trip ke liye Darjeeling jaaa rahe hai. Ok??” Arjun agreed and cancelled the call. After canceling the call Vicky enquired Mahu in a low voice: When r we leaving for airport.” Kasak: Soon.” Then after few seconds Arjun with his GF Tanu( Reshmi Ghosh) reached Sumi’s house and said her tht they r getting bored now-a-days, so they have decided to visit Darjeeling. But they need her and others permission. Netheir Sumi nor dadi nor Shanti restricted their children to go anywhere. They knew they can take care of themselves as well as of others. So they agreed and gave permission to visit Darjeeling. Angles had already packed their bags as they knew their parents would agree.

At 2pm they had their flit. They reached Darjeeling at dusk. Arjun had a house in Darjeeling. Mahek had already informed Sumi that they had reached their destination in one piece. Then Mahek made dinner for others. And at night they discussed their plan.

At cock-crow they got ready to start their plan. At 8 Arjun called in CID office from PCO. He asked for PM. When PM took the phone Arjun started crying (in a offend tone): Sahab….” PM( in bold tone): Yes.” Arju: Saheb maine maara jaoonga. Woh muhje maar dalengi.. ” PM: Kon?? Tum kaha hoo??” Arju: Maine shooping center ke paas… “Saying this he cut off the line. Arju turned and smiled at others. Mahek( smiling): Ab aayega mazza:twisted: .”

Parked his car beside the shopping center, PM came out of the car. On the other hand, Angles were sitting in their Scorpio car. They saw PM coming out of his car. Angles had parked their car behind the wall opposite to PM. PM2( Mahu) Came out of the car. She was wearing a black gown which had a slit at the side. It had little bit deep neck. She had worn diamond necklace with similar earrings gifted by dadu to her. Arju and Vicky just kept on staring at her keeping their mouth wide open. Mahek( in stylish tone): How I’m looking???” Vicky and Arju both: Hot and Sexy.” Girls too nodded on this comment. Kasak: Di agar PM apko iss roop dekhega toh toh faint hoo jayega.” Mahek: I know darling. Well toh maine chalti hoo.” Vicky: Kaha???” Arjun: Kyun tu nahi janta??? Tune file nahi padi??’” Vicky: Kunsi file????” Niharika: Well leave it now. Baad me padna. Abhi PM di aap joo.” Mahek nods and goes away from there.

PM was working on his mobile. He had worn stylish glasses. His back was facing Mahek. She kept her hand on PM’s shoulder. First he looked at her hand and turned towards her to see who she was. He was shocked to see her. He couldn’t believe his eyes. He remembered her. He had never forgotten her. He remembered each and every moment. He used to pray that once he could she her. And now his aspiration was full filled. She looked dashing. She too had worn light blue glasses. She was grinning at him. Mahu: Hello.” He remembers me, Mahu thought. PM(Smiling): Hi.” Mahu; Kya aap ke address kaha hai jante hai????” She could recognize smile fading from PM’s face. He was not expecting this type of question. PM: Sorry???’” Mahek: Well dekhiye Maine yaha nayee hoo. Toh kya aap muhje VICEROY HOTEL ka rasta batayenge???” PM; Actually maine yaha khud naya hooo. So Sorry...” Mahek: Oooohhh it’s ok. I’ll ask someone else.” Saying this she turned her attention towards his car. She saw a laptop in PM’s car. PM said to her: Wow nice chain(the chain was made of beeds).” Mahu: Ha. Maine kal mele(FAIR) me se liya tha. AAJ BHI MAINE WAHI JAONGI. Well nice car. Maine chalti hoo.” Saying this she went away. PM realized that he should have asked her for lift. When he turned to ask her she had already gone away.

Vicky was watching the whole scene through his binoculars. Vicky: Yaar ye PM kaha gaye.” A voice came from behind. Yahi toh hoo.” “ Tu itne jaldi kisse??” Vicky asked. “Bhagkar aaye hoo” PM2( For mahu PM2) said. Turning to her car she removed a gaun which covered her head and face. It was of black colour. Wearing that guan she asked Komal: Komo tujhe pata hai na ki kya karma hai???” Komal nodded in +tive. Komo went infront of the wall opposite to PM.

Pratham was searching Mahu here and there. He didn’t even ask her name. Then suddenly his attention turned towards Komal who was reading a newspaper. She was wearing black skirt and blue top with her hairs open. He had worn brown shoe with hill. She smiled at him and vice- versa. Then he again started searching for Mahu. He had already forgotten y had he came there. Then again he was attracted to see Komal due to her expression. She was just staring at him. She looked stunned. When he asked her what happened through his actions she pointed towards his back. When he again asked her she did the same. When he turned back he saw a man wearing gaun had his laptop. Then he turned towards Komal. Realizing tht what idiotic thing he has done PM again turned back. That man started running. Pm sat in his car. Then he realized that the car’s key was missing. He knew it must have been taken by that thief. He came out of this car and started running behind tht thief. Nearly 30mins he was running behind that thief. They were running through fields, roads and now near lake. Then PM was at 10 feet away from that thief. Now btwn them at least 2 feet distance was there. He snatched that thief from his back and threw him towards the tree.

PM turned tht thief and was astonished to observe tht thief’s face. It was Mahek( I know u all must have expected her). Shocked PM shouted: TUM!!!!” Mahek gave him a wicked smirk:twisted: . She praised him with a smile: WOOOOO!!! U run really good. HATS OFF TO U.” PM who was still in the state of shock said: Tum ek chorr hoo??? I just don’t believe this.” Mahu: Tuh ab believe kar loo.” PM has holded her both hands. She warned him to leave her hands. But he didn’t. Mahu in anger: Leave me.” PM: Nahi. Pehle batao mera laptop kaha hai???” She warned him again and again. But all in vain. Now he has crossed his limits. She got enraged and kicked him from down with her legs. Then wht???? “ OOOCCCHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ”

The pain was unbearable. He turned towards the lake. And PM2 again kicked him from backside. And he fell inside the lake. And Mahu started running with gr8 speed. Angles came there and stopped the car in front of PM2. She climbed inside the car and it rode off. After few mins PM got up from the lake. He was full drenched. He searched for Mahu but she was no where. Then he came back to his car. He was shocked to find car’s keys in the car. But laptop was missing. There was a letter in the car. E opened the letter and read it. It was written: “THNKS FOR COMING.” He threw that letter, sat in the car and went away. Mahu and others was watching this and burst out laughing noticing his condition.

PM parked his car in the parking lot and went inside the office. He went inside his cabin where Aryan, Kunal, Yash and Punit were doing their work. After watching PM’s condition everyone burst out laughing. Aryan laughingly: Yaar PM ye kya halat bana rakhi hai apni??? Bahar barish toh nahi diri toh tu itna gila(wet) kaise???” Kunal: Aur bhai uss insaan ka kya hoa jisne aapko phone kiya??’ Pratham in anger: Aree ohh gya khade me. Tumhe pata hai aaj maine kissko dekha??” Punit: Yaar humme kaise pata hoga ki tune kissko dekha.” Pratham in stern voice: Dekh maine aaj mazak ke mood me nahi hooo. Samjha??” Yash getting up from his seat: Bas. Chood. Ab bata PM tune kissko dekha??” Taking Punit’s laptop Pratham opened Mahu’s photo taken in Nainital he pointed at her: Isse.” All surrounded him. Aryan(with a smie): Kya baat hai yaar. Toh tune usse baat ki.” PM: Ha. Tumhe pata hia woh kun hai???” Yash and Punit: Nahi. Kun hai woh.” PM; Ek CHORR.” All shouted in surprise: Kya!!!!!!!!!” PM told them the whole story what all happened. Punit: Yaar. Kya ladki hai. Lekin uss insaan ka kya hoa.”

Suddenly PM’s cell started ringing. It showed RIYA CALLING. He answered the call: Ha riya. Bol. Kaisi hai??” Riya: Maine thik hoo. Aap kisse hai??” PM; Ha. I am fine.” Riya: What happened bhai?? Any tension??” PM told her everything. PM(moving his hand through his soft hair: Ab pata nahi muhje aapna laptop milega ya nahi.” Riya; Milega. Jaroor milega. Aap mele maien kyun nahi jate??” PM: Me mele me jake kya karonga??” Then he suddenly remembers something: AAJ BHI MAINE WAHI JAONGI.. PM: Muhje pata hai riya ab muhje kaha jana hai. Thnks for reminding me baccha. Me rakta ho?? OK?? Bye.” Riya: Bye bhaiya.” She cancelled the call and dialed the no. of PM2. Riya: Hi PM. Tera kaam hogaya. Maine bhaiya ko Mele ki baat yaad diyae hai. Ab woh jaroor aayenge. Dekhna.” PM2 (smiling)(the call was on speaker): Thnks riyu. Tu janti hai me hum bohot miss kar rahe hai.” Riya: Me too guys. Chal me rakti hoo. Ok. Bye.” PM2: Bye.”

In fair, PM and his bro’s were searching Mahu. Atleast PM found her. She was 20 feets away from him. Mahu was chewing chewing gum. She was wearing black panjabi suit. The top was short and pants were parallel. She was wearing ox raise earings, chain and bangles. Her hairs were open. She was looking incredible. His knees were getting weaker and weaker as she was coming closer to him. Not only did PM was losing his control but also others. She was busy playing games in her mobile. She didn’t even realize PM. But abruptly KOMU came btwn them. KOMU: Di. Ye loo. Pani ka bottle.” PM2 looked at her and took the bottle with a smile thanked her and took a mouthful of water. When KOMU was having a mouthful of water she noticed PM at least 5 feet away from her. PM recognized her. Smiling at PM KOMU said: Di Pratham.” Mahu looked in the direction of Pratham. Smile appeared on Mahu’s face. Her smile had PM barmy. He lost his control and fell on the ground, head first. Mahu and Komu burst out laughing. Due to her laugh Komu had made a place in Aryan’s heart.

PM got up and walked towards Mahu. Still smiling Mahu said: Hello ACP PRATHAM MITTAL. HOW R U?? Kahi lagi toh nahi??” PM: Tuuuum mera naam kaise janti ho??” PM2: Maine toh sab janti ho. Each and everything about u and ur family.” Punit came near PM and whispered his ears: Yaar ye toh bohot pohoci hoe cheez hai.” Komu: Tum lago se zada hum pohoce hoa cheez hai.” PM to PM2: Dekho mera labtop do.” PM2: Kunsa laptop???” PM: Jo tumne chori ke thi.” PM2: Maine kaha chori ki tumhari laptop.” PM: Dekho jhot mat bolo. Maine dekha tumhe mera laptop chori karte hoa.” PM2: Any clue??? Sabut???” PM opened his maw to talk but kept silence. He had no clue. PM2: Kya hoa?? Chup kyun baat gaye. Still he kept silence. Saying this PM2 and Komu went towards there car. At least PM broke his silence(to Mahu): Apna naam toh batao.” Mahu turned towards him and said: Tumhare peeche jo dukan ka naam hai wahi mera naam hai.” Pm turned and read the shop’s naam. Turning towards Mahu he said: NANDINI??” Mahu smiled and went towards her car. Angles were watching this sitting in their car. PM noticed them. She sat in the car and went away.

Coming up: PM: Tum DIAMOND CHORI NAHI KAROGI NANDINI.” PM2: Accha kun rokega muhje??” PM: I’ll stop u” PM2: Ok. Then try it.”

I know u all must be wondering yyy Mahek said wrong name to PM. Thtz bcoz she didn’t want to reveal her identity that she is Shekar Punj’s daughter.

Hope u liked this part. The 3(i) part will be sent soon. Do comment.

USHA.

by **aanchal** 8/10/2007, 9:08 pm

fantastic part usha. it's just great. Smile

by Guest 10/10/2007, 1:18 pm

just chakde !

keep it up

by **gauriandme** 13/10/2007, 5:02 pm

Thkns

by **aanchal** 17/10/2007, 1:40 pm

pls post the next part soon Smile

by Guest 19/10/2007, 1:17 am

haan iam veryy excited for parts next >>

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