Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: 4C: Parts.

by **gauriandme** 28/9/2007, 7:26 pm

First topic message reminder :

CHORICHORI CHUPKE

CHUPKE CHUPKE:

PROLOGUE

Hello Friends. I am writing a story which is abt Mahek and Pratham. Mahek’s nature is quite similar to my friend’s nature. This story will have 10 to 12 parts. Hope u will like it. No suspense in khalnayak.

.CHARACTERS:

1} Main Characters:

a)Hiten Tejwani as Pratham Mittal, also known as PM

b)Gauri Pradhan Tejwani as Mahek Punj also known as PM.

c) Akshadeep Saigal as Ansh Gujral.

d) Shabbir (Hrishi of Kaahin Toh Hoga) as Krrish Gujral.

e) Abhey Gujral: Harsh of Dulhan)

f) Aditya Gujral( Father of Ansh, Krrish and Abhey)

2} Other Characters:

A] Punj Family.

a) . Shekar Punj =dad of gauri in old kutumb
b) Sumi Punj =mom of gauri in old kutumb
c) Shashank Punj - Deepak Qazir.(Comedy) ,as shekar pradhan’s brother,sanju’s dad.
d) Shanti Punj -Mom of sanjana( dadi of Ek Ladki Anjani si))
(e) Saahil Punj =Saahil of kyunki(in this elder brother of priyanka)
f) Sanjana Punj.Sanju =Ganga of kyunki(cousin sis of Mahek, Mahek’s chacu’s daughter.
g) Komal Punj,Komo-=Rakshanda khan,Younger sis of gauri in this.
h) Niharika Punj :Nihu: Mansi Verma ( same of TLS)
i) Kasak Punj- Surveen chawla. .(Comedy)
j) Vicky khanna- Vikas Seth( Abhir of Kyunki) .(Comedy)
k)Pari Malhotra –Maninee Mishra.(Comedy)
l)Bobby darling. .(Comedy)
m) Riya Mittal =Sneha of Kasautii.
n)Dara Singh as Siddharth Punj.
o)Dadi of Kavvanjali as Mahek’s dadi.
p)Saahil of kyunki as Aryan Mittal.
q) Eijaz Khan as Nishant Mittal.
r) Yash Tonk as Yash Mittal. .(Comedy)
s) Punit Mittal: Vrajesh Hirjee(Comedy)
.Intro of the story:

Most important thing is tht ki Pratham’s family,i.e., his mom and dad, are not there. They died in a plane crash when all were small. They were killed by Aditya Gujral. Yash and Punit were adopted sons of Pratham’s father and mother. Sumi and Shanti Jethani- Devrani.
After the death of Pratham’s family Punj family took care of pratham and others. They treated them like their own child and grand children. They gave everything. They made the strong, self reliant so tht they will take revenge from Aditya Gujral..
Then later PM became ACP. Aryan becomes Advocate. Kunal becomes Boxer, Yash becomes A spy. And Riya becomes an Forensic expert. And Punit becomes a computer master. Yash loves riya.
In this story Saahil is ACP. Sanju, mehek, komu, nihu r like dons in their colony.
All of them r good in fighting. They r like Angles to the people. When ever sumi shouted at any of them all colony people used to get angry. They were like socialist. Surveen,i.e., Kasak is Qazir,i.e.,Shashank’s daughter. Kasak is in love with Vicy ,i.e,. Vikas. Everyone likes their jodi .But Shashank hates him. His thinking was tht only a military man will marry his daughter. Shashank has a moustache like an military officer., Big one.(HEHEHEHE)

Baki sab u will come to know. Hope u will like this part. Do Comment

Usha.

by **aanchal** 20/10/2008, 3:06 pm

gauriandme wrote:Nothing!!! Actually I was laughing at ur eagerness.

ok lol

by Guest 20/10/2008, 9:15 pm

hey i mean laughing budha not budhha-budhi :titterr:

by **gauriandme** 29/5/2009, 8:42 pm

*Chori Chori
Chupke Chupke:5*

Mahu looked at PM & got stunned.
Even her gum’s bubble burst out. PM gave her a suspicious look. Others too
noticed PM. Sumi stood beside PM. Sumi: Beta idhar aa.”

PM got shocked as y Sumi called
Mahu beta. “Pratham pehchan ye kon hai.” PM again gave them a suspicious look.
Mahu slowly looked at him & gave a shot smile. Sumi(smiling): Aree yeh
Mahek hai.” PM & others eyes widened :gha: . Sumi slowly introduced everyone to them.
Sumi: Aur Mahu yeh Pratham hai.” Mahu looked at him & forwarded her hand
for a friendly handshake saying: Hey nice to meet u Pratham.” PM gave her a
look & she blinked at him :afcorse !: . When he forwarded his hand she waved her hand
through her hair{ In short Mahu ne PM ka popat kiya} & said: Anyways mom we
r hungry. Aap khana paroso hum fresh hokar aate hai.” PM’s face got blanked. He
didn’t understand wht happened. Saying
this all went towards the door. Stopped them Sumi asked: Ek minute. Mahek yeh
sab kya hai. Tumne Pratham ke saath aisa bartav kyu kiya???” Chewing her gum she lazily replied: Kaisa
bartav kiya maine.
Ohh come on mom. Chill yaar!! Waise bhi I’m tired. (Looking at PM) Aaj bohot
mazza aaya. Aaj kisse stupid ko maine itna
bhagaya ki bechara thakan ke mare zameen par he gir gaya.” On mentioning him as stupid he
forcefully went towards her & asked: Maine
kya tumhe stupid lagta hoo?? :panganalena: ” She took a look at him from head to toe :think: &
then said: Lagte toh waise he.” Sumi in a angry tone: Mahek yeh kya bol rahi ho???”
PM came in front of them & said in an anguish tone: Ma pata hai yeh ladki
mujhe karib ek mahene se chor banker sata rahi hai…” & explained
everything. Ignoring it Mahek & others went into their room to get fresh.

After 30mins they came out. Still then PM’s explanation
wasn’t over. She climbed down the stairs, sat on a couch with one leg on
another, holding her face with her palm she started listening to his story. As
he finished she asked dully :bore: : R u over or something is still remaining??”
Listening to this Dadu, Dadi & Shekhar burst of laughing Lol!

. Shekar(
controlling his laugh): Beta Mahu ne tujhe oolo banaya??? Tujhe???” Sumi in
anger: Chup raho ji. Kyun mere bete ka mazzak bana rahe ho. {Looking at Mahek}
Mahek bata na kyun kiya tune aisa??? Bata???” Mahu got up in anger & said:
Apne ne he kaha tha na.” PM got shocked & looked at her confused. Sumi:
Kya?? Maine???”
Mahu: Ha. Aapine kaha tha na ki mera beta bohot intelligent hai. (Pressing the
words) MUJHESE BHI JADA! Aur aapne he kaha ki agar maine
usse bhi intelligent hoo toh maine
usse ek puzzle do jo aapka yeh MAHAN BETA SOLVE KAREGA. But unfortunately yeh
haar gaya aur maine jeet
gaye. As usual! Toh aap mujhe kyun data rahe hoo. Daatna hai toh inn
bewakoofo ko daato jo itni aasan puzzle ko bhi solve nahi kar paye.” All gave
her an angry stare. Nishant quickly says: Agar puzzle diya tha toh koi hint toh
dena chaheye. Are eek criminal bhi ek na ek clue chhodd deta hai. Toh phir….”
Niharika cutiing him in middle: Aaaahhhaaaaa cule dena chaheye tha. Idiot!
Stupid! Riya tumhe culue nahi bata rahe thi toh kya kar rahe thi bewakoof!” All
got shocked after listening this. PM:
Kya! Riya ko yeh sab pata tha??” Mahu: Ha.” PM got angry & said: Usse toh maine nahi chhodunga.” Mahu:
Oye! Riya ne madat ki hai tumhari. Magar tum usske clues ko samaj nahi paye toh
woh tumhari galti.” He gave her an angry stare but kept quite. Mahu got up
& said: Maine
thak gaye hoo & I want a break. Bye guys! Bye Losers.” Sumi just gave him a
warning stare but they ignored it. Saahil who was watching this whole drama
quietly, still kept himself silent.

*AT NIGHT:

After having their dinner, PM & others went into their room
& started discussing their whole day. Shekhar knocked the door & came
inside the room. He said: Baccho kal 8 baje office pohoch jana. Humme aapna
naya misson shuru karma hai. Thik hai??” They agreed.

PM still
couldn’t believe how he got trapped into Mahek’s plan. His cell rang & he
accepted the call. It was Riya’s call. Riya: Hi bhaiya. Kaise hoo?” PM: Thik.
Tu??” “Maine
bhi thik hoo. Bhaiya??” “Hmm?” “Sorry! Maine
aapke saath aisa behave kiya.” “Its ok.” “Toh kya aapne mujhe maaf kiya?” “Ha.”
“Ohh thnk u bhaiya. Bhaiya toh maine
rakho??” He agreed & they cancelled their call. Yash asked hhim: Kya tune
Riya ko maaf kiya??” PM nodded. Yash got happy & went into his room to
sleep.

He was lost in
her thought. Maine
usske bare me kya socha tha aur kya hogaya. He got lost in her beauty. Suddenly
he heard foot steps outside the door. Someone was climbing down the steps. He
opened the door & saw tht the kitchen’s light was on. He too climbed down
to see who was there. He saw her near the fridge. She was drinking cold water.
He narrowly observed her. Her rosy lips, water which went down through her
throat. She kept the glass in the washing sink & turned towards the door.
She saw him standing near the door, looking at her. She got stunned He galped
& said coming inside pale

: Maine
toh paani pine aaya tha. Kyun kya mujhe pyaas nahi lagti??” She still gave him
blank expression :loshish: . She asked slowly, in dull voice: Kya maine tumse kuch pucha ya kaha??” He quickly
nodded in –tive

. She asked slowly: Toh??” She rolled her eyes Rolling Eyes

& went
towards the door. He went to drink water. She again came back & said in
dull voice: Tum aate waqt light off kar dena. Ok??” He slowly nodded. Yawning
& stretching her body she went out. A small smile appeared on his face.

*NEXT DAY AT OFFICE:

All(shekar, Dadu, Shashank & boys)
Were sitting in a huge, furnished room. Aryan to Shekar: Papa meeting sutru
kare??” Shekar: Ha. Bas Mahek aur baki sab aate he honge.” “Aate he honge nahi
aa gaye.” Girls entered the room. All boys eyes widened. PM was lost in Mahu
beauty :biggggg: .

Later all were shown their own cabin. All
went in their respective rooms. PM went & sat on his chair. He was a laptop
on the desk. Then he realized this was the same laptop Punit had given him. He
thought but the laptop was robbed by Mahek then how??” Suddenly he heard a
knocked at his door. He looked up & saw
Mahu there. She asked: May I?” He said : Sure!” She came in & said: Yeh
tumhari laptop jo maine
liya tha. Maine
tumhe yeh wapas de rahe hoo. Take care.” She went towards the door but he
called her back. He asked: Aur who Diamond??” “Maine nakli Diamond chori kiya tha. Usse
Diamond ke malik ki jaan maine
bacaye the. Iske badle me woh kuch bhi karene ke liye tyaar the. Toh maine unse ek natak
karvaya tha. Tht it.” He looked at her amazed. He asked: Toh kya tumne mujhse
woh fights, stunts sab karvaya sirf ek nakli Diamond ke liye.?” “Ha. Mujhe
tumaha fighting skills janana tha. Isliye.” She gave him a sweet smile :battlingeyes: . He
still gave her amazed looks :gha: . She said waving her hand: Bye!” She went out
whereas he still had foolish expression on his face Shocked

.

Ø *COMING UP NEXT:

* Mahu & PM become friends :afcorse !: .

* Riya comes to Delhi.

* GUJRALS ENTRY.

*BY

USHA*

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by **Gayathri** 29/5/2009, 10:10 pm

hey usha lovely story and characters .. sorry 4 replyin so late .....

by Guest 30/5/2009, 10:11 am

:titterr: lol the way pm got lost in mahu's beauty was li'l comic but sweet and romantic too. :tonguee: Thanks for updating cccc part... Very Happy

by **aanchal** 30/5/2009, 10:44 am

hmmm mujhe fir se sari story read karni padiiiii.
this part was very nicee

. poor PM :titterr:

by **gauriandme** 30/5/2009, 1:14 pm

Thnks for ur lovely comments :voshah: Howz the pix???

by Guest 30/5/2009, 1:29 pm

Pic is suiting this story. I guess u made it from blingee but it's cool! Wink

by **aanchal** 30/5/2009, 8:06 pm

ya i agree wid diipendu. the pix is suiting the story

by **gauriandme** 1/6/2009, 3:25 pm

Yes I made it in Blingee. Thnks Guys!

by **gauriandme** 13/6/2009, 7:41 pm

Here r some changes. Plzzzz forgive me.
Ronit Roy As Shekhar Punj
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Gautami Kapoor as Sumi Punj
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by **gauriandme** 13/6/2009, 7:53 pm

*Chori
Chori Chupke Chupke :4C: 5*

*RECAP *

1)
PM & others come to know the truth
abt Mehek.

2)
After asking Mehek the reason, she
said tht she wanted to know skills & talent of Pratham.

3)
She
also said tht she wanted to prove tht she is best

4)
Shekhar takes all children to their
headquarters.

5)
Mehek returns PM’s laptop to him &
says tht the diamond was a fake.

6)
She leaves PM confused

* At OFFICE*

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PM
was still thinking abt the morning incident. He explained everyone abt the
incidence. Kunal says: Iska matlab ussne aap ko itna bhagaya sirf ke fake
diamond ke liye??” PM nodded in +tive. Saahil still couldn’t believe tht Mehu
fooled PM. THE GR8 PM. Saahil says: Yaar at least tumhe mujhe batana chaheye
tha. Maine
tumhari madat kar sakta tha.” Aryan says: Saahil pata hai maine
PM se kaha tha ki yeh ladki me kuch gadbad hai. Tu ek baar check kar le. Magar
nahi! Kar le na apni manmani!” PM looked at Aryan & nodded. Aryan in
anger: Ab sar hela kar kya fayda??”

Still PM nodded. Aryan got exhausted
& went towards the chair to have a seat. Yash was busy watching his wallet.
Actually in his wallet lied Riya’s pix. He was lost in her beauty. At tht time
Komal entered the room, was near the threshold, when she saw Yash watching
Riya’s pix

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while others were busy
fighting, arguing. Komal came near to Yash sat beside him but still Yash was
lost in his thoughts while others in arguing. Komal peeped down to the pix
& asked Yash loudly (so as to make attention): Wah! Accha photo hai Riya
ka! Kab liya tumne Yash??” Suddenly hearing Komal’s voice, Yash got terrified. Everyone
looked at Yash suspiciously. Yash looked at everyone innocently. Then he looked
at Komal who gave him a huge smile () Komal, changing the topic said: Papa ne
tum logo ko ghar jane ke liye kaha hai. So came soon. Hum sab tumhari intajaar
kar rahe hai.” Saying this she went towards the door & turned back: Waise
harne ke baad rokar koi fayda nahi hai PM.” Saying this she waved her hand
gesturing “BYE”.

by **gauriandme** 13/6/2009, 7:57 pm

They reached came near the lift & pressed the button.
Later they came down & moved towards the underground parking lot.

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There stood Mehek & others. But PM didn’t find Dadu,
Shekhar & Shashank there. PM looked around & asked: Mehek?? Dadu, Pappa
& Chachu kaha hai??” Turning around Mehu said: Woh sab kuch kam se kahi
gaye hai.” PM asked: Kaha gaye hai??” Nodding her head in –tiveshe said: Pata
nahi. Maine
bhi wahi soch rahi thi. Anyways chalo ghar chalet hai.” PM nodded. PM &
others( Saahil, Aryan, Kunal, Yash & Punit) took Scorpio Black:

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while Mehek & others( Sanju, Komu, Nihu,
Kasu,Vicky & Arjun) took Innova- Black

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* At Punj House*

They
reached home in no time. They went towards the door & PM pressed the bell
door. No Response. Again PM pressed the door bell. Again No Response. But the
door slowly got open. They entered the house but there was no light. It was
totally dark. Kasu called: Chachi, Maa! No Response. They understood tht
something was wrong. Suddenly they removed their guns out & were ready to
attack. Abruptly they heard some noise & they rapidly turned towards the
noise.

Suddenly the light got on
& there was a huge blast of voice: SURPRISE!” Before they could understand
anything she came running towards Mehek & hugged her. Mehek in shock said:
RIYA!!”

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All looked around & saw
Dadu, Shekhar & Shashank there. Komu: Pappa! Aap toh..??” Shekhar smiling said:
Tou hum sab yaha kaise? Right??” All nodded. He cont’d: Actually mujhe Riya ka
call aya tha ki Pappa mujhe airport se receive kigiye. So maine
mikal gaya aur
tumse kaha ki tum sab ghar aa jao. Bas.” Riya went on hugging Mehek but Mehek stood
still. Riya looked at her & asked: Kya Mehu di? Aapko aacha nahi laga ki maine aaye hoo?” Mehek
gave her an angry stare, kept her guns inside & hugged her tightly. She
said lightly hitting her on her cheeks : Khabardaar agar tune aisa kaha tou. Tu janti
hai na ki maine
tujhse kitna pyaar karti hoo. Sabse jada laad maine karti hoo tujhe. Phir tou aisa kyu bol
rahi hoo??” Holding her ears she said: Sorry Di!” Both burst of laughing &
hugged each other tightly. Sanju said: Aree! Hum bhi hai line maine.” Riya looked at Sanju & smiled
& hugged her. Riya met everyone except Yash. She didn’t notice him. Yash
felt bad abt it.

PM watched her huggin her
everyone. PM asked: Hey baccha! Aapne bhai ko bhool gaye kya??” Riya turned
back & smiled. She ran towards him & hugged him tightly & said: Kya bhaiya! Aap bhi Mehu ki tarah baat kar
rahe hoo.” PM smiled & hugged her & asked: Kaisi hai meri bachi??’ Riya
smiling: Ek dum thik!” PM gave a small laugh. Watching them laughing, all felt
happy.

But Yash felt sad. Komu
understood his feeling. Before Komu could say anything Sumi said: Aree chal
Riya! Apne kamre me chal kar haath moo dhoo le.” Saying this elder went in
their rooms & others went in Riya’s room except Yash. Suddenly Riya
remembered tht she forgot her bags. So she came down & saw Yash was holding
her bags & coming up. Riya said: Aree Yash!
Kaise hoo??” Yash quickly said: Maine
thik hoo. Tum?” Riya: Maine
bhi thik hoo.” Both smiled. Suddenly Riya realized & said: Tum kyun utha
rahe hoo? Do maine..?”
Yash: Nahi. Rehne doo. Mane uthata hoo. Tum jao upar.” Riya said: Nahi thoda
mujhe bhi do.” Yash: Ok.” Saying this he gave her a small big & came up.
All this was seen by PM, Mehu & Komu. When Riya came into the room, Yash followed
her. Yash placed the bags in proper place. After placing he went out. Riya sat
on her bed with others (girls). Komu sat near her & asked: Riya? Tujhe Yash
kaisa lagta hai??” Riya shocked asked: Kya??? Tujhe aachanak aisa salwal maan
me kaise aaya??” Komu: Kaise bhi aaya hoo, tu bata??” Riya: Accha insaan hai.
Mera aacha dost hai. Aur..” Komu: Aur tera BF bhi hai.” Riya gave her an
shocked stare & asked: Kya??? Tu janti hai tu kya bhool rahe hai??” Komu: Matlab tu usse pyaar nahi karte.” Riya
nodded in –tive. Komu: Toh tera photo uske wallet me kaise aaya??” Riya’s eyes
widened. She said: Kya?? Usne abhi tak mera photo wallet me rakha hai??’ Nihu:
Abhi tak matlab???” Riya explaining: Actually usne mujhe ek mahine pehle
propose kiya tha. Aur maine
usse samjha kar mana kar diya.” Mehu: Kyun?? Mana kyun kia?? Wo to bohot aacha
hai na??” Riya nodded in+tive & said: Magar di maine usse apna acha dost manti hoo. Bas.”
Mehu nodded & said: Magar wo abhi tujhse pyaar karta hai.” Listening to
this Riya felt bad for him.

* COMING
UP NEXT*

Gujral’s entry.

Meeting for Gujrals with Punj’s & Mittal’s.

*WHT WILL HAPPEN AFTER THE MEETING OF GUJRALS WITH
PUNJ’S & MITTAL’S??*

*By

Usha*

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