Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: 4C: Parts.

by **gauriandme** 28/9/2007, 7:26 pm

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CHORICHORI CHUPKE

CHUPKE CHUPKE:

PROLOGUE

Hello Friends. I am writing a story which is abt Mahek and Pratham. Mahek’s nature is quite similar to my friend’s nature. This story will have 10 to 12 parts. Hope u will like it. No suspense in khalnayak.

.CHARACTERS:

1} Main Characters:

a)Hiten Tejwani as Pratham Mittal, also known as PM

b)Gauri Pradhan Tejwani as Mahek Punj also known as PM.

c) Akshadeep Saigal as Ansh Gujral.

d) Shabbir (Hrishi of Kaahin Toh Hoga) as Krrish Gujral.

e) Abhey Gujral: Harsh of Dulhan)

f) Aditya Gujral( Father of Ansh, Krrish and Abhey)

2} Other Characters:

A] Punj Family.

a) . Shekar Punj =dad of gauri in old kutumb
b) Sumi Punj =mom of gauri in old kutumb
c) Shashank Punj - Deepak Qazir.(Comedy) ,as shekar pradhan’s brother,sanju’s dad.
d) Shanti Punj -Mom of sanjana( dadi of Ek Ladki Anjani si))
(e) Saahil Punj =Saahil of kyunki(in this elder brother of priyanka)
f) Sanjana Punj.Sanju =Ganga of kyunki(cousin sis of Mahek, Mahek’s chacu’s daughter.
g) Komal Punj,Komo-=Rakshanda khan,Younger sis of gauri in this.
h) Niharika Punj :Nihu: Mansi Verma ( same of TLS)
i) Kasak Punj- Surveen chawla. .(Comedy)
j) Vicky khanna- Vikas Seth( Abhir of Kyunki) .(Comedy)
k)Pari Malhotra –Maninee Mishra.(Comedy)
l)Bobby darling. .(Comedy)
m) Riya Mittal =Sneha of Kasautii.
n)Dara Singh as Siddharth Punj.
o)Dadi of Kavvanjali as Mahek’s dadi.
p)Saahil of kyunki as Aryan Mittal.
q) Eijaz Khan as Nishant Mittal.
r) Yash Tonk as Yash Mittal. .(Comedy)
s) Punit Mittal: Vrajesh Hirjee(Comedy)
.Intro of the story:

Most important thing is tht ki Pratham’s family,i.e., his mom and dad, are not there. They died in a plane crash when all were small. They were killed by Aditya Gujral. Yash and Punit were adopted sons of Pratham’s father and mother. Sumi and Shanti Jethani- Devrani.
After the death of Pratham’s family Punj family took care of pratham and others. They treated them like their own child and grand children. They gave everything. They made the strong, self reliant so tht they will take revenge from Aditya Gujral..
Then later PM became ACP. Aryan becomes Advocate. Kunal becomes Boxer, Yash becomes A spy. And Riya becomes an Forensic expert. And Punit becomes a computer master. Yash loves riya.
In this story Saahil is ACP. Sanju, mehek, komu, nihu r like dons in their colony.
All of them r good in fighting. They r like Angles to the people. When ever sumi shouted at any of them all colony people used to get angry. They were like socialist. Surveen,i.e., Kasak is Qazir,i.e.,Shashank’s daughter. Kasak is in love with Vicy ,i.e,. Vikas. Everyone likes their jodi .But Shashank hates him. His thinking was tht only a military man will marry his daughter. Shashank has a moustache like an military officer., Big one.(HEHEHEHE)

Baki sab u will come to know. Hope u will like this part. Do Comment

Usha.

by Guest 19/10/2007, 1:17 am

haan iam veryy excited for parts next >>

by **aanchal** 26/10/2007, 11:13 am

pls continue soon

by **gauriandme** 8/11/2007, 12:14 pm

Ø Chori chori chupke chupke:Part3(ii)4C

Hello friends. Back with 3(ii) part pf 4C.

Ø Chori chori chupke chupke:Part3(ii)4C

In Arjun’s house, Angles were discussing about their next step. But Vicky

was sitting on bed was wondering about something. Kasu: Vicky kya soch rahe hoo??” Vicky

(keeping his fingers near his lips): Yaar muhje ek baat samajh me nahi aaraha hai.”

Arjun: Tujhe aaj tak kuch samjhe me aya hai bhala.” All started laughing. Vicky: Shut up! (To Mahu) Mujhe yeh nahi pata chal raha hai ki tumne PM ko jhota naam kyun btaya??” Kasu: Aree buddhu agar Mahu di usse apni pehechan batati toh who samaj jata he hum kon hai and usske saath masti kar rahe hai. Samajhe??” Vicky just nodded. Mahu: Tumhe pata hai na tumhe kya karma hai??” Arju: Ha. Muhje Mirchi Seth ke ghar jana hai jo 2 din pehele aaya hai, usse ye glass ka hira dena hai, aur usse samajhana hai who PM ke paas jakar kahe hai ke ye asli hira hai aur waha khatre me hai. Right???” Mahu: Yah! Right. Toh ab jaldi jao. We don’t have much time Arju.” Arju took his eyes and went away. After few mins Arju called Mahu and said tht the work is over. Mirchi Seth was a person to whom Angles had helped once. They rescued her daughter from some culprits and he said once tht he will help them whenever they need. He had his own house in a hill. It was like a museum.

PM and other parked the car near gate & climbed down. They glanced at the huge house. They did notice tht it was like a museum. They saw Mirchi Seth standing near the gate. They saw his fearful eyes and said: Sahab mere hire ko kuch nahi hoga na???” PM(keeping his hand on Mrichi seth’s shoulders): Aap kyun darr rahe hai. Aap chinta na kare. Maine apke hire ko kuch nahi hone donga. OK??” He just nodded in agreement. PM said Yash & Kunal to take their positions near two gates & said Punit to take his attach cameras on each corner of the wall. He didn’t want to take any risks. As ordered by PM they were engrossed in their work. PM & Aryan took their positions outside the room where the Diamond was placed at the center of the hall surrounded by electric eyes and vibration alarms and was placed in an eight-sided glass case.

Half an hour was passed but there was no sign of thiefs. Mirchi Seth came and said: Sahab koye nahi aaya.” With a victorious grin in his face PM said: Lagta hai humme yaha dekhkar sab darr gaye” Both started laughing. PM: Chalo andher chalkar ke baar dekhte hai. As they entered inside their face went chalk white and mouth flopped open and shut without a word coming out. For a moment PM thought Mirchi Seth was going to collapse like a balloon with the air let out. PM: Its empty.” Aryan and PM searched here and there for some clues. Then alarms began to shriek. “This is all urs fault,” Mirchi Seth yelp. PM: Look Plzz don’t yelp. We’ll find ur diamond. Don’t worry.” Mirchi Seth controlled himself.

PM & Aryan studied the case & then the room. Nothing seemed to be out of place. Puzzled he glanced up into the darkness of the spire. About sixteen feet up a flicker of motion caught his eyes. PM cried.: A rope! Someone hit the lights. Aryan yaha aao.” As Mirchi Seth hit the switch tht lit the spire. Aryan reached his brother’s side. “Get me up there Aryan.” PM said. Aryan cupped his hands together & in seconds PM stepped from Aryan’s hands to shoulders & was leaping for the rope. It was just within his grasp. Quickly PM started to work himself up hand over hand. As his eyes adjusted to the lights, he looked straight up.

Almost at the top of the spire, also climbing the rope, was a woman in a black jumpsuit. When she glanced down at him, PM saw she was young & beautiful with black hair sweeping over her shoulders. “I don’t believe this. Yeh toh Nandini hai,” PM said when he got a glimpse of woman’s face. “ Yeh Nandini kon hai??” Aryan: Don’t ask,” asking his head Aryan muttered. The beautiful young thief had made a fool of them once again. “Get outside & have the building surrounded” PM called down. “I’ll keep climbing.” Already he could hear the sirens of reinforcements arriving outside. They had trapped Mahek. For wht seemed an eternity, PM continue to pull himself up. He was almost within the reach of the woman dangling above him.She was peering out through the skylight at the top of the spire as if she were waiting for something or someone.

Kyun Pratham???” she said, finally deciding to acknowledge him,” Kyun tum har bar mere kaam ke beech aate ho?? YY???” “Give it up, Nandini.” His voice was gravelly from the exertion of the climb,” We have got u surrounded.” “Tht may be,” Mahek admitted, the lovely smile never leaving her rosy lips. Her hand slipped into her jumpsuit and came over a second later with a glint of silver. She moved so fast, he hardly saw the knife as she slashed the rope. PM sucked in a last breath & pictured with horror the long plunge to the marble floor below. But she didn’t cut the rope all the way through. “BEST OF LUCK DARLING” she said blowing a flying kiss. ‘The rope slipped another inch and he froze to stop its swaying:affraid:. But he slowly climbed up putting little strain on the rope.

Slowly he crawled out the window & fell on scaffolding. He was setting on the roof and peeped inside the hall. He breathed hard. A cool wind washed over him & he opened his eyes. Mahu exclaimed,“OOO!!! Wow! U r marvelous PM. Manana padega dear u has a lot of guts.” He tried to stand and warned her gaspingly: U r still here???” “Yes I was waiting for u. I doubt whether u will come or..?” PM: Whatever… Now u r trapped Nandini. Tum DIAMOND CHORI NAHI Kar PAOGI NANDINI.” PM2: Accha kun rokega muhje?? Kiski himat hai jo mujhe roke??” PM: I’ll stop u” PM2: OOOO… Ok. Then try it.” Mahu stands in a Karate style with her hands forward. Then their fighting started. ONE KICK, ONE PUNCH AND ONE 90 DEGREE MADE PM FALL DOWN. PM2: Come on Pratham. U can’t give up so quickly. Come on.” He got up & started fighting. PM2 GAVE PM A PUNCH AND HE AGAIN FALLS DOWN. He looks down in shock:shock: . He watched Yash, Nathesh & Punit tied on chairs with mouth closed with tape:lol!: . “Idiots”, PM said. They looked at him. HE AGAIN GOT UP & BEFORE HE WAS GOING TO WARN HER SHE GRAPPED HIS WRIST AND PUT THE HATKADDI (SORRY DON’T KNOW ITS NAME IN ENGISH)IN ONE WRIST & OTHERS SIDE WITH THE ANTINA EXSISTED BESIDE HER. SHE WENT BACK AND JUMPED FROM ROOF & SHE WAS IN ONE PIECE (HEHEHHEEH). SHE LOOKED BACK AND BLEW HIM A FLYING KISS. BEHIND HER STANDED A SCORPIO CAR CAME TO A HALT. PM TRIED TO SEE THE NO OF THE CAR BUT HE WAS UNABLE.

He kept his hand on his forehead. Yash, Nakul & Punit came towards him & said: Sorry bhai. Wohh…..” Before they could say further he got up & shouted: Shut up! Tumhare wajha se yeh hoa hai. Now just keep quiet. Ek kaam bhi thik se nahi hota hai tum logo se!” Abruptly his mobile rang. He answered the call. “Kyun apne bhaiyo par cilla rahe ho???? Isme unki kya galti hai???” “U just shut up!” “Maine kaha tha na tumse Pratham Muhje panga mat lena. Tum Muhje khabhi bhi pakad nahi paoge. U will have to pay for it.” Saying this she disconnected the call. He was fuming with anger. After few mins his mobile again rang. It was Riya. He told her tht he is too angry. She asked: Kya hoa bhaiya??? Wht happened???” He told her everything. Then she made him remind tht Nandini had called him in his mobile. So he can race her through the number. Then PM ordered his colleagues to trace the number. He came to know tht the no came from Delhi. He thnks Riya for helping her. He disconnected the call. He told to himself: Ab kaha jaogi tum Nandini???? He gave his cruel smile:twisted: .

Riya called Mahek & told: Maine bhaiya ko sab bol diya jo tumne kaha.” “Thnks riya.” “No probs Mahu.” “Aab aaya ga mazza.” She gave her naughty smile:lol: .

COMING UP NEXT:

Pratham: Maine tumhe aaj nahi chhodunga.”

“Kyun kaisa laga humara plan???”

Hope u all liked it.

USHA.

Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: 4C: Parts. - Page 2 6utvhpz

Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: 4C: Parts. - Page 2 6utvhpz

by **gauriandme** 8/11/2007, 12:20 pm

PLEASE COMMENT.

by Guest 8/11/2007, 4:50 pm

oh no ab pratham kahin oosey jaan se na maar de aur i hate that riya bcoz she is veryy bad :x

by **aanchal** 8/11/2007, 7:34 pm

i liked the part . pratham defeated by mehak. so cute Wink

by **gauriandme** 9/11/2007, 12:57 pm

Krishnaa wrote:oh no ab pratham kahin oosey jaan se na maar de aur i hate that riya bcoz she is veryy bad :x

Dont hate Riya. She is the cuttest girl in this story. Shez just helping both her best friend & his cute brother.

Usha.

by Guest 10/11/2007, 6:53 pm

oops ! iam sorry riya

by **gauriandme** 11/11/2007, 9:22 am

by Guest 17/11/2007, 7:01 pm

plzz post next parts soon

by **gauriandme** 6/10/2008, 8:39 pm

Ø Chori Chori Chupke Chupke:Part4(4C).

Riya called Mahek & told: Maine bhaiya ko sab bol diya jo tumne kaha.” “Thnks Riya.” “No probs Mahu. Don’t do this formality.” She disconnected the call. Appearing a naughty smile around her face she said: “Aab aaya ga mazza.”

{Mahek in her mind}

Hai unnis har baat mein main bees hun

Kehte hain duniya mein aisi one piece hun

Ulajh naa mujhse bahut pachhtaayegaa
Sabke aage mazaak ban ke reh jaayegaa
Sheesha hun jisse patthar bhi toote
Sach bolte hain mere aage jhootthe
Tu cheez kya hai ja-ja re jhootthe.

Next morning:

[size=18]Its 7am.PM & his brothers have reached at Delhi & they r trying to find Nandini. Mahu came to know tht PM had arrived in Delhi. PM calls his mother, i.e, Sumi, saying tht they r in Delhi. PM & others were tracing the number. On the other hand Sumi got busy preparing their fav.dishes. She tells Mahu to call Pm & ask his when will he came home, at wht time. There, abruptly Pm’s phone rang. He took a look at the number. It was an anonymous number. He replied it. The others said: Good morning ACP Pratham.” Astonishingly he asked: Yes???” “Hi. I’m Mahek. Mahek Punj.” She is in the garden, far away from Sumi.

{Guys u all must be wondering tht how come PM couldn’t recognize her voice. I’ll explain it. When Nandini talks to PM she uses an instrument which makes a difference in her actual voice. So that is y he didn’t recognize her voice.}

H[size=12]e remembered her. He said grinningly: Oh... Hi. Kaisi ho??” “:Fine. (with a naughty smile) Tum kaise ho?? Koi problem hai kya??” “Tumhe kaise pata chala??” “U see. I can recognize from ur voice.” “ Ohh.. Fine. Good.” “ Accha maine tumhe isliye phone taki maine tumse yeh puch pao kit um kitne baje aaoge.” “Mahek Mujhe jara dher hoga.” “(Innocently)Kyun???” He explains her everything. Controlling her laugh she consoles him: Don’t worry. Tum usse jaror pakoge. Dekhna. Dad kehte hai. Tum bahot genius ho. (Getting angry) Mujhe se bhi. Lets see. ” He laughed loudly: “Thnks Mahek for encouraging.” “ Mention not. Lekin agar tum usse har gaye toh tum mujhe se har jaye. Ok??? Bye” He cancelled the call. He couldn’t realize wht she said to him. Forgetting it he got busy in his work. There, Mahek wickedly smiled: Oolo ka pattha!!!”

by **gauriandme** 6/10/2008, 8:44 pm

At last they (Pm & his brothers) reached the place from where Nandini had called. It was a huge market. There were many people out there. Aryan checked the PCO. No clue ( Hey shez Mahek. How will she live a clue???). Pm; Check it well Aryan. There must be something.” Suddenly he heard a voice from backside: Oye!!!!! Maine toh itthe hoo. Tum kisse dhod raha hai???” All looked at her. She had done black type of makeup, with balck nail paint, dark liner & mild & transparent gloss. She had worn full black & shinny jumpsuit. Her hair was open, shoulder length long. She was looking hot!!! An unknown feeling for her was rising in his heart. She smiled at him. His knees were trembling. He felt someone’s hand. It was Yash. PM restrained himself. Mahu shouted: Come on!! Letz have a race. Agar tum mujhe pakad paye toh u win. If not then I.” She gave him a wicked smile. Others warned him not to follow her instruction. He was in a huge dilemma. She again shouted: Kyun Pratham. Darr gaye??? Woh bhi ek ladki se?? Areee……” He replied: Nandini…, Maine kisi se bhi nahi darta.” She again smiled. She took a few steps backward. With hand action she called him. He too took a few steps forwards. She muttered something. He couldn’t understand. She said: Fas gaya machli jal me!” From back side of the PM’s car Kasak had punctured the tyres. Due to which others couldn’t follow them. She ran.

The race of cat & mouse saw turning interesting. He started running a fast as he could. But she was faster than him. They continuously ran for 15 mins. Suddenly he came to a halt. He was tired. He was exhaling highly. His voice was choked. He saw tht others didn’t follow him. He saw tht Nandu was abt 25feet far. He examined the road & smiled. Nandini turned around & saw PM wasn’t there. She took a few steps backward examining the whole road. Suddenly some one pulled her right hand from backside. It was PM. He gave a vicious smiled: Gotcha!!” He held her hand so tightly tht it gave her terrible pain. She was getting angry. With her left hand she punched PM so hard tht he fell aback & got unconscious. Pm’s fingers had raised marks in her hand. She gave a tit slap & shouted: U lose!!! I won!!! U couldn’t even recognize me Pratham!! So sad!!” He got up & saw her running. He wasn’t in a state to run any more. She turned & showed her thumb indicating tht he is a loser!!

With a huge grief he was sitting in his office. All had surrounded him. He was quiet right when he returned. Aryan, breaking the cool silence: Maine kaha tha tumse. Kyun gaye tum uske pecche???” He still kept silence. His phone rang. All looked at each other. PM stopped everyone to take the call. He took it by himself: Hello??” Other side: Hello beta. Kab aa rahe hoot um Pratham??” He recognized the voice. It was Sumi. He said: Maine aa raha hoo Maa.” “Thik hai beta. Toh tum sab jaldi aa.” He agreed & cancelled the call.

by **gauriandme** 6/10/2008, 8:46 pm

T[size=12]hey reached home within 15 mins. They found Sumi & others(not Mahu’s paltan) in the garden. They went towards her. She gave them her blessings. Her eyes turned tearful. Dadu asked: How r u beta??” They answered tht they all were fine. Suddenly they heard a car coming to a halt. PM & others turned to take a look. His eyes turned wide!!!!!!!!

It was Komal. Others (PM’s paltan) were shocked!! She didn’t see them there. She was in her own world. She shouted: Maa Bhook lagi hai….!!!!” Sumi said: Komsl{Others shocked} Khjana tayar hai. Tu muh haath doh le.” Komu looked at her. She stayed still {Ofcourse she will as she has seen PM}. He kept on looking at her. Now he got a huge heart attack after watching her! Nandini!!!!!!!! She was wearing a mini skirt with pink full hand soft jacket(zip one). Her hair was open & her face had a light make-up. She had basketball in her hand & saw chewing gum( removing bubbles). Even she didn’t notice PM. She asked looking at Komu: Kya hoa. Ab toh jaan kha rahi the ki bhook lagi hai aur ab esse khadi hai jaise ki koi bhoot dekh liya hoa.” “Bhoot hi dekha hai di.” Mahu looked at her. Komu gave her a pale look & again looked at PM. Mahu too loked at the samw direct & got stunned. Even her bubble burst out. Pm kept on looked at her. Confused, Puzzled!!

Ø COMING UP Next:

LET IT BE SUSPENSE!!!!

by **aanchal** 6/10/2008, 9:10 pm

usha very very interseting & lovely update. thanks for updatimng. though i had to go thru the entire story again Razz

update soon. can't wait to read wat pratham does now :yew:

by **gauriandme** 7/10/2008, 7:37 pm

Thnks for commenting. I know u all must have lost the link. No probs.

by Guest 7/10/2008, 7:42 pm

hey usha i need 2 read dis serial frm begining... :battlingeyes: thanks for update Very Happy

by **gauriandme** 7/10/2008, 7:49 pm

No Probs :voshah:

by Guest 7/10/2008, 8:03 pm

:battlingeyes:

by **aanchal** 17/10/2008, 9:48 pm

plz update soon usha

by Guest 18/10/2008, 9:25 pm

usha come back as soon as possible !

---- and plzz do update CCCC parts-----

by **gauriandme** 19/10/2008, 4:21 pm

:titterr:

by Guest 19/10/2008, 8:52 pm

why u r laughing like laughing budha ??? :titterr:

by **aanchal** 19/10/2008, 9:24 pm

yup y r u laughing? :think: Rolling Eyes

by **gauriandme** 20/10/2008, 1:33 pm

Nothing!!! Actually I was laughing at ur eagerness.

by **gauriandme** 20/10/2008, 1:38 pm

diipendu... wrote:why u r laughing like laughing budha ??? :titterr:

Hey do u think I am a budhi :panganalena: ?????

by **aanchal** 20/10/2008, 3:06 pm

gauriandme wrote:Nothing!!! Actually I was laughing at ur eagerness.

ok lol

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