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Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
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Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
Love can change life, Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai is set on the picture where two lovers cross every hurdles together.
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RECAP:
1 Aditi & Aaditya’s friendship gets stronger.
2) Entry of every patient in M.R.
3) Pankaj & Aditi challenge each other whether MR ppl will accepted & response to Music OR wont response.
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* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 06 *
*Pradhan house, at night*
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“Ha Pande ji!” Aditi was talking in phone: Aap music ke saare instruments aur unke players kal bhej degiye. Maine aapko yaha ka address sms se bhej te hoo. Thik hai. Maine rakhti hoo!” Saying this she cancelled the call. While she was sending address of MR through SMS, Diya entered her room. Diya sat on her bed near Adi. Diya asked: Adi? Kisse baat kar rahi thi beta??” Aditi looking at the phone: Woh mere ek jaan pehchan wale uncle hai. Jab maine school me thi na tu maine unse sangeet sikh ti thi. Kal Music Therapy ka 1st class hai. Usske liye musical instruments manga rahi thi. Kal thak sab pohoch jayega. Aur….” Aditi saw tension on Diya’s face. Aditi asked keeping her phone aside: Bhabhi?? Kya hoa? Aap itni tension maine kyun hai??”
Diya looked at her & said: Aditi tune Deal toh kar di Dr. Pankaj ke saath. Lekin Aditi. Agar tu haar gaye toh….” Adi: Nahi bhabhi! Maine nahi haarongi. Mujhe jeetna hai. Apne liya na sahi magar een logo ke liye toh jeetna hai.” Rahul entered her room. Aditi looked at both of them & requested: Plzzz! Aap toh mera saath doo. Plzzz!” Rahul sat at on his knees in front of Aditi & says (touching her chubby cheeks): Adi! Hum dono tumhari saath hai! Aur humesha rahenge!” Tears poured from her eyes. Diya waved her hand on Aditi’s head & Says: Tum jaroor jeetogi beta.” Aditi said in choked voice: Maine nahi. Hum! Hum Jeetenge!”
*MENTAL REHABILIATION*
A nurse was announcing to all the patients tht today there will be Music Class in which everyone should be present. She also said tht it will be conducted by Dr. Aditi. This was seen by Dr. Pankaj. He, later went towards his patients. Watching Pankaj they sat in their places. Pankaj threatened them: Agar tum log koi bhi uss Aditi ki Music class me gaya tho maine tum sab ko Shock Therapy de donga.” Poor Patients, in fear of getting shock, agreed to him. Pankaj, when turned towards the door, saw Anup & Anushka standing. They had heard him. Anup came near to him & showed him his mobile & said: Maine aapki sari baate mere mobile me record kar liya hai.” Saying this he plays it.
Listening to it Pankaj starts sweating. Anushka gives him a tissue & says: Aree apko toh pasina aa gaya. Tab kya hoga jab hum yeh Dr. Rahul ko sunayenge??” Dr. Pankaj said in choked voice: Kya?? Rahul koo?” Anup & Anushka smilingly nodded in +tive. Anup: Agar aap chahte hai ki hum yeh Dr. Rahul ko naa bataye toh AAP ADITI KE THERAPY KE BECH NAHI AAYENGE. Thik hai??” Dr. Pankaj gave them a stare then just nodded. Later he went outside & Anup- Anushka said sweetly to all patients to attend Aditi’s class.
Aadi went towards Yash & requested him to bring his blue diary. After few mins Yash brought Aadi’s diary.
* In the garden*
LATER, at evening, all the musical instruments had arrived with their players. Aditi called every patients as well as Doctors. There were no chairs. Patients were allowed to sit on long benches. Pankaj came towards her & said: Best of Luck Aditi!” Aditi turned & saw him giving her wicked smile. Aditi too gave him a huge smile & wished: Thnk u! Well same to u!” Saying this she smiled & went towards her patients
Aditi went towards the patients & said: Hey guys! Aaj humara Music Therapy ka pehla class hai. Aur pata hai aaj hum bohot maze karenge.” Then Aditi signals the flute player to play the flute. He started playing the flute. But no one pays any attention. All were lost in their own thought. The musicians played each & every instrument but no one paid attention. Aditi tried to talk with them, tried to make them understand, but it was in vain.
Slowly she felt as if she is losing her battleL. All doctor felt sorry of her. Looking at her Pankaj came near to her & said: Toh maine samaj leta hoo ki main Shart jeet gaya. Aur tum haar gaye.” Aditi kept quiet. Pankaj turned towards all doctors & said: Lo! Miss Aditi Pradhan haar gaye aur maine jeet gaya. Aaj se woh mere niche se post par kaam karegi.” Saying this he gave a huge smile to Rahul & Diya , Yash & Riya. Aditi slowly went back towards the fences & turned to looked at the beautiful scenario.
The climate was soo cool! The mountains were covered with thick layer of cloud.
Tears started pouring her eyes. Aadi saw her crying. He felt soo sad. He couldn’t see her crying. He went to the musicians & gave his blue diary.
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Suddenly Aditi heard Aaditya singing (Tu he to meri dost hai from Yuvraj):
Hooooooooo……
{Music is played. Aditi turns around & sees Aaditya dancing, snapping his fingers, doctors singing}
{(Violence music) Aadi comes running towards her, brings his face closer to her & sings)
Aaja Main Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chalun
Tu Hi Toh,
{Nodding his head continuously, catching the rythem, even Aditi does the sameJ}
Tu Hi Toh Meri
{Nodding & tilting his head to left}
Doost Hain
{Pointing the sky, holding her shoulder}
Aaja Main Khalaon Mein Uthake Le Chalun
{Removing tears from her cheeks}
Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain
{Coming towards the fences, dancing like a small kid with hand expression}
Awaaz Ka Dariya Hoon, Behta Hoon Main
{Pointing the sky}
Nili Raaton Mein
{Bringing his face closer}
Main Jaagta Rehta Hoon,
{Sings with expression, widening his eyes}
Neend Bhari Jheel Si Aankhon Mein (Aditi laughs)
{Raising his both hands}
Awaaz Hoon Main…
{Rahul sings dancing}
Aaja Main Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chaloon
Tu Hi Toh, Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain
{Anup sings dancing}
Aaja Main Khalaon Mein Uthake Le Chaloon
Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain
{Aditi laughs. Due to Aadi singing all patients concentrate. Rahul & Anup dances with the patients}
{(Violence music) Aadi dancing with Aditi, they do ball dancing}
{Coming towards the edge, it was almost night, Aditi sings pointing at the moon (yaar subha bhi kabh kabhi moon dekhaye deta hai) tells to Aadi with expression.}
Raat Mein Chandni Kabhi, Aisi Gungunati Hain
{Sings with hands expression, keeping her hands behind her eyes}
Sunn Zara
{Pointing Aadi}
Lagta Hain Tumse,
{Joining her palm}
Awaaz Milati Hain
{Aadi sings with expression}
Main Khayalon Ki (pointing his nose)Mehek Hoon,
{Expresses with hand}
Gungunate Hain Saaz Par
{Aditi brings him near piano, makes him sit)
Ho Sake Toh Milale…., Awaaz Ko… Le Saaz Par..
{Holding his hands, she plays piano. After playing they both laugh. Even all patients laugh}
{Aadi sings, taking around of the whole garden. Pankaj gets angry while Rahul, Diya, Yash, Riya & Anup, Anushka r happy watching all of them dancing}
Aaja Main Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chalun
Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain
{Aadi comes near to patients & they all dance but Aadi dances with expression. Aditi & others doctors laughs(expect Pankaj)}
Aaja Main Khalaon Mein Uthake Le Chaloon
Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain
Awaaz Ka Dariya Hoon, Behta Hoon Main Nili Raaton Mein
Main Jaagta Rehta Hoon, Neend Bhari Jheel Si Aankhon Mein
{Rasing his hand}
Awaaz Hoon Main…
{(Violence music) they all listen to the music. All patients r lost in the music}
{Adi & Aadi r standing near the fence, Adi & Aadi sings with hand expression}
Ooooooooo………………………….
Kabhi Kehta Hai Saahil,
Jahan Shaam Utarti Hain
Kehte Hain Samunder Se,
Ek Pari Gujarti Hain
Woh Raat Ki Rani Hain,
Sargam Par Chalti Hain,
{Aadi sings slowly, Adi nods her head}
Re Sa Re Sa Re Sa, Sa Re Sa Re Sa Re
{Adi runs towards the fences, raising her hand}
Aaja Main Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chaloon
{Pointing to Aaditya}
Tu Hi Toh,
{Pointing towards Aadi & coming towards him}
Tu Hi Toh Mera Doost Hain
{Dancing Aditi sings}
Aaja Main Khalaon Mein Uthake Le Chaloon
{Coming closer to Aadi, pinching her nose, Aadi smiles}
Tu Hi Toh Mera Doost Hain
{Dancing with patients, giving a stink eye to Pankaj}
Awaaz Ka Dariya Hoon, Behti Hoon Mein Nilli Raaton Mein
{Running towards the fences, calling with actions to all patients}
Main Jagti Rehti Hoon, Neend Bhari Jheel Si Aankhon Mein
{Rasing her hands, she sings loudly}
Awaaz Hoon Main
{ Echo comes…..}
Awaaz Hoon Main...
{ Everyone laughs, shouts happily}
Aditi went towards him & said: Ligiye Dr. Pankaj main shart jeet gaye! Aur aap haar gaye! Abt oh aap ko apna promise mibhana padega.” She turned towards the musician & gave signal to play the music. All doctors took him at the centre. The musician played Kajra re song & made him dance.
Aaditya & Aditi were still laughing remaining the scenario. Aditi looked at Aaditya who was laughing very sweetly. She said: Thnks Aadi! Meri madat karne ke liye!” Aadi: Dosto maine NO THNKS NO SORRY. OK???” Aditi nodded.
“ Hello Aaditya!” Listening to this they both turned back & saw him. Both of them got shocked. Aadi looked at him shocked. He went near him. Aditi got shocked & said to herself: Ohh no! Monish uncle!” He was wearing business suit.
Aadi went close to him & said: Papa!” Mohish nodded & held him with both his hands on Aadi’s shoulders. Aditi came close to them. Aadi said to Monish: Papa Aditi hai. Meri doctor.” Looking at Aditi he said: Aditi yeh mere Papa hai aur..” Aditi looked at him suspiciously & asked: Aur?” Aadi looked at her & then at Monish & said: Aur meri MAA KA KAATIL!” Aditi & Monish’s eyes widened. Aadi threw Monish’s hands from his shoulders & tried to hit him. But Aditi stopped him. Adti shouted: Ward boy! Nurse! Koi hai???” Hearing Aditi’s voice Riya & Yash came running outside. Aadi was shouted: Maine tumhe nahi chodunga! I’ll kill u! Tumne meri maa ko mara hai. I’ll not leave u!!” Saying this he tried to free himself from Aditi.
Ward boys came & forcefully took Aaditya away. After taking Aaditya away Riya came towards Monish & started shouting: Aap ko kisne kaha yaha aane ke liye?? Kyun aaye hoo aap yaha?? Aadi bhaiya kyun milne aaye hai aap??’ Monish: Kyunki woh mera beta hai aur maine apne bete se milne aaya hoo!” Riya: Beta? Aadi bhaiya aapke sabse bete ban gaye??” Monish maintained silence. Riya cont’d: Ab kyun apki boli band hoo gaye?? Dekho Mr. Monish Mehra, Mere bhaiya ab jaldi thik ho janyenge toh plzz aap yaha nahi aayenge toh apki bohot kripa hogi.” Saying she went inside & Yash followed her.
Aditi looked at Monish & Mohish looked at her. Monish asked: Kaise hoo tum??” Aadi carelessly said: Thik hoo.” Turning towards him she said: Dekhiye uncle, aap plzzz yaha mat aayeye. Aap jante hai Aaditya aapko dekh kar kitna violent hoo jata hai. Phir aap..??” Monish: Mujhe aapne bete se milne ke liya tumhari permission ki koi jarorat nahi hai.” Aditi looked at him amazed. He cont’d: Samjhi tum??” Aditi nodded in +tive & said: Thik hai. Magar jab aap next time aayenge na tab maine Aadi rokungi nahi. Aapse aachi tarah milne dungi usse. Thik hai??” She gave him a sarcastic smile & went away.
He saw her going inside. He smiled wickedly & said to himself: Tumhe maine dekh longa. Aur yeh bhi dekhta hoo ki tum uss Aaditya ko thik kaise karogi”
This episode ends with Monish’s wicked smile!
[size=24]To be continued……..
* questions*
Wht will monish do??? How will he take his revenge??
Will Aditi be able to control aaditya’s agitation???
Keep watching!
*Coming up next*
Riya to Aditi: Yaar mujhe chk up ke liye jana hai. I’m not feeling well.”
Pankaj to himself: Maine apne apmaan ka badla jaroor longa.”
Monish: Iss Aaditya ka kuch toh karma padega.”
*By*
*Usha & Diipendu*
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Mohnish is entering, now it will be intresting to watch... Plz update soon!
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* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 06 *
*RECAP*
1) Aditi wins the deal. She makes Pankaj dance with other patients.
2) Monish Mehra, step father of Aadi. Visits MR to meet Aadi.
3) Aadi gets annoyed after watching him. He tries to hit
Monish.
4) Adi requests Monish not to visit Aadi again or else she
wouldn’t be responsible for wht Aadi will do.
*Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 06*
*MENTAL REHABILIATION*
Adi was moving towards
Aaditya’s room when she saw Riya standing outside Aadi ‘s room. She hurried
towards Riya & asked: Kya hoa?? Aadi??” Roya: Woh apne room me hai. Bohot
chila rahe hai.” Suddenly the door got open & Diya came out. She saw Adi
& said: Tu yaha kya kar rahi hai?? Ja andar jaa! Aadi needs u!” Aditi
entered the room & saw Aadi shouting, screaming, trying to free himself:
Mujhe chhod doo! Maine
usse nahi chhodunga! LEAVE ME!! :mad: ” Adi came near him & tried to console him.
She said: Aadi! Plzz control ur
self. Meri baat suno. Suno Aadi.” Still Aadi was still shouting: Aditi plzz
mujhe chhod do na. Plzz!” The situation was out of control. Rahul said: Adi.
Beta! Aadi ko control karma impossible hai. Tum plzz usse neend ka injection de
do.” Adi nodded & filled the syringe with the liquid medicine. Later Rahul,
Yash & Anup held him tight. Adi went close to him & said: Sorry
Aaditya. Par iske alawa mere paas aur koi option nahi hai.” Saying this she
injected him. Slowly Aadi was fallin asleep murmuring: Aditi … plzz
mujhe..chodo.. mujhe… mujhe jana hai..
plzz…” Watching Aadi’s condition Riya burst of crying. Yash went towards her
& consoled her. Rahul & Anup
freed Aadi. Adi, exhausted, went near the couch & sat down. She covered her
face with her hand.
Pankaj was sitting on his chair at his cabin. He was remembering
the deal, how he made the deal & how he loosed it. He remembered how he was
insulted. Pankaj said to himself: Yeh sab uss Aaditya ki vajah se hoa hai.”
Suddenly he remembered something. He said to himself: Aaditya.” He remembered
wht happened in the garden btwn Aadi & Monish. Pankaj smiled wickedly &
said to himself: Maine
apne apmaan ka badla jaroor longa! Maine
tum logo se apna badla jaroor longa Aaditya aur Aditi! I’ll take my revenge.
Tum dono ki zindigi barbaad kar donga maine.
Thtz my promise to u both. :mad: ”
Adi was standing in
the corridor. She was looking outside the scenario. Riya came towards Adi &
asked: Kya hoa?? Yaha is tarah kyon khadi hai?? Ghar nahi jana hai kya??” Adi
nodded her head in –tive. Riya got studded. Riya asked: Kya??” Adi looked at
her & said( with blank expression):
Yeh sab kya hogaya Riya?? Aaditya kitna khush tha. Aur aachanak!” Riya
said quickly: Yeh sab uss Monish Mehra ke wajah se hoa hai. I’LL KILL HIM :panganalena: !!” Adi
said with blank expression looking at the scenario: Same here.” Rahul , Yash,
Anup, Anushka & Diya came towards them. Diya asked: Aditi kya tu kya raat
bhi rukne wali hai kya??” Riya: Nahi bhabhi. Isseghar le jao. Subha se over
loaded thi.” Looking at Adi Riya said: Tu ghar jaa. Tere chehre se pata chal
raha hai ki tu kitni thak gaye hai. U need rest.” Adi defending: Nahi agar Aadi
utha gaya too…”
Yash said: Toh maine
tumhe call kar dunga. But I think ki woh itne jaldi nahi uthega. Tumne he uss
neend ki dawa de thi na?? Phir??” Adi smiling nodded. Saying this everyone went
home except Yash & Riya.
* Next day at MR*
Adi came to MR soon. As soon
as she entered MR she ran towards Aadi’s room. She opened the door & found
no one there. She got shocked to see no one there. AS she turned Aadi scared
her saying: Bhooo!!! :devilish: ” She got scared & went back. Aadi, Rahul, Anup &
Yash burst out laughing :giggliee: . Aditi had kept her hand on her chest due to fear . They
were laughing while Aditi gave them an angry look :8: . Adi shouted: Aaditya! Tumne
mujhe dara diya!” Listening to this they again burst out laughing . Aditi gave
them an amazed look while Riya, Anushka & Diya were smiling from a corner :titterr: .
In Aadi’s room Aditi, still in shock,
was sitting on the couch having a cup of tea. Others were still laughing. Aadi
said: Riya tumne dekha na ki maine :gha:
Aditi ko kaise daraya.” Riya nodded smiling. Adi getting angry: Ha. Haso sab.”
Aadi suddenly burst out laughing . All looked at puzzled :loshish: . Adi asked him: Tum ko
kya hoa??? Hasss rahe hoo??” Aadi said innocently: Tumhe ne kaha na ki sab
haso. Toh main hasne laga.” Listening to this all laughed loudly. Suddenly Yash’s cell ranged. He accepted it.
After lil conversation he asked to Riya: Riya wo office me meeting hai.. toh
kya??” Riya said smiling: Jao.” Yash smiled & said: Thnk u!” He wished
everyone a good bye & went towards the door when Riya held him & said:
Jaldi aana.” Yash smiled, kissed her on forehead & nodded in +tive.
* In
Aditi’s cabin*
Adi heard a knock at her door. She said: Yes. Come in.” Riya came
in. Adi said: Riya?? Mere kamre me aaneke liye tumhe permission lene ki koi
jarorat nahi hai. Samjhi??” Riya smiled & nodded. Riya sat on the chair
& asked: Adi?? Kya tu mere saath hospital chalegi??” Adi asked puzzling:
Hospital?? Kyun??” Riya: Main tujhe raste me batati hoo.” Saying this at lunch
break they went to hospital.
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Yash arrived from his office to MR. He was searching for Riya here
& there. He went to Aadi’s room & saw everyone there except Riya &
Aditi. Yash went towards Diya & asked: Bhabhi?? Riya aur Aditi kaha hai??”
Diya: Wo dono doctor ke paas gaye hai.” Yash shocked: Doctor ke paas?? Kyun???”
A voice came from the door: Tum Riya se he pooch loo.” Everyone looked at the
door. Adi & Riya were standing at the door. Yash forcefully came towards
Riya & asked: Kya hoa tumhe?? Tum doctor ke paas kyun gaye thi?? Tum thik
to hoo na??” Riya & Aditi looked at each other & smiled :voshah: . Yash: Tum log
has kyun rahe hoo :loshish: ??” Adi said: Kyunki Isliye jijaji, aap Papa banana wale hai,
main maasi banana wali hoo aur apki
“dharmpati” Maa banana wali hai.” Yash got studded :gha: . He hugged her tighly .
Everyone gathered around them & congratulated them.
* After few mins*
Aadi was searching for
something . He looked at every corner of the room. All got puzzled :loshish: . Adi, who was
sitting on a couch asked: Adi! Kya dhoond rahe hoo tum :bore: ??” Aadi: Ruko. Mujhe
dhoond ne doo. Don’t disturb me plzzz.” Adi smiled :battlingeyes: . Riya: Aree bhaiya bata to
do ki aap kya doond rahe hoo?? Hum apki madat karenge.” He turned towards Riya,
came close to her & asked: Baccha kaha hai??” Riya: Kya?? Baccha??” Aadi
nodded in +tive & said: Tum Maa banene wali hoo na, toh baccha kaha hai??”
Everyone laughed . Riya bought him closer, took his hand & placed it on her
stomach saying :Yaha hai baccha.” Aadi laughed & said: Tum mujhe ooloo bana
rahi hoo??” Riya nodded in –tive.
* After
few mins*
For 10mins Aadi was peeping Riya’s stomach . All were looked at
Aadi’s expressions. Even Adi. He was making very funny faces :loshish: :think: . Placing her head
on her palm Riya asked: Kya kar rahe hoo bhaiya??” At last Aadi responded: Woh
tumhari tummy me fit kaise hoa ??” All smiled: Adi said: Kyunki baccha abhi
bohot chota hai. Isliye.” Aadi: Chota hai?” Adi nodded. Aadi cont’d: Kitna
chota hai?? Dekho!” Riya: Kya??” Adi explained him nicely: Ab nahi dikha
sakte.” Aadi: Kyun??” Adi: Kyunki usse abhi iss duniya me aane me waqt hai.
Isliye.” Aadi: Kitna waqt hai??” Adi: Ab do mahine toh hoo gaye hai toh total 7
months.” Aadi’s eyes widened. He screamed: 7 months :gha: :khoool: !!!” All laughed . Adi nodded
+tively. Aadi getting annoyed demanded: Nahi! I cant wait for 7 month! Mujhe
abhi chahiye :panganalena: .” Riya & Yash looked at each others confused :loshish: . Adi explaining
him: Aaditya…” Cutting her off he said: Nahi! Mujhe abhi chahiye varna MAIN KHANA NAHI
KHAOONGA :mad: !” All were in a hot soup!!
Adi sat beside him
& said: I’m sorry magar abhi nahi de sakte :battlingeyes: .” Aadi crying: Kyun :panganalena: !! Mujhe abhi
chahiye :420: !” Aadi started crying like a baby :420: ! Adi rubbed his tears from his checks
& cupped his face with her hand & said: Agar baccha abhi aa gaya toh wo bemaar hoo
gayega. Kya tum chahte ho ki tumhara Bhanga bemaare hoo??” Aadi rubbing his
eyes nodded in –tive & asked: Agar who bahar aaya toh kya bemaar padega??”
Adi nodded innocently in +tive. Rubbing his tears he said: Toh main nahi
rounga.” Saying this he gave her a big smile :voshah: . Watching him everyone’s eyes
filled with tears :cryingg: . Aditi kissed Aadi’s forehead :battlingeyes: .
Suddenly Riya laughed .
All looked at her puzzled. Yash asked: Tumhe kya hoa??” Riya smiling: Yash jab
baby hilta hai na to aisa lagta hai ki tummy me butterflies uud rahe hoo.
Tickle hone lagta hai.” All laughed. Aadi asked: Sachi :think: ??” Riya nodded in +tive.
Aadi laughed loudly . Diya said: Ha. Pata hai. Jab maien expect kar rahi th tab maine aise he aachanak
hass deti thi. Rahul toh kabhi kabhi kehte the ki Meri Biwi Pagal Hoo Gaye
Hai! ” All laughed loudly . Riya Asked: Aree ha Bhabhi! Gungun kaha hai?? Kissi
hai woh??” Diya: Acchi hai. Yaha aane se pehle usse London ke ek famous boarding school me
admission karwa kar aaye hoo. Thode deno me Rahul jakar usse lekar aayen ge.” Riya
asked: Aap Gungun ko miss karti hogi
na??” Diya nodded in +tive& said: Ha! I miss her a lot.”
Suddenly a voice came
from the door.” Mamma r u missing me??” All turned & saw Gungun standing at
the door. Rahul & Diya got shocked :gha: .
TO BE
CONTINUED…..
*How did gungun came to India from London???
*Keep reading!!!
* coming up next*
Gungun forwarding her hand: Hi. I’m Gungun
aur tum??” Aadi looked at her &
smiled.
Monish to
Riya: Congratulations Beti! I heard abt the good news!
Monish to
a stranger: Kill Aaditya! I want him dead!
*By*
*Usha & Diipendu*
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aadi is chooooo cute......
but im afraid of manish...na jaane woh kya karega...
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After a long time today I read your story and I enjoyed it a lot. I have read the first part of your story and its interesting. In coming days I will like to read more parts of this and your other stories..I will read triagular love story n other stories from beginning because it has been long time may be about 2 years or more when I had read them...the concept seems to be interesting..I like the way Adi treated aadi and aadi gave her flying kiss in the end. Coming up next is also interesting...
The pics are nice too. Great work you n Deepenu and one thing more your diaplay pic/avtar is really cute.
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*RECAP*
1)
Adi tries to control
Aaditya’s angry. As it wasn’t controllable she gave him sleeping injection.
2)
Pankaj owes to take
revenge from Aaditya & Aditi for insulting him in front of his colleagues
& patients.
3)
Next day Aadi is back
to normal.
4)
Everyone comes to know
tht Riya is expecting.
5)
But Aadi demands tht he
wants to see baby now. However, Adi explains him nicely as not to be stubborn.
6)
Gungun’s entry.
{Guys I made a
mistake in last part. While coming to India, Rahul & Diya had kept
Gungun in her friend’s house.}
*Tujhme
Rab Dikhta Hai: 06*
*MENTAL REHABILIATION*
Riya Asked: Aree ha Bhabhi! Gungun kaha hai?? Kissi hai woh??”
Diya: Acchi hai. Yaha aane se pehle usse uske friends ke ghar rakh kar aaye
the. Thode deno me Rahul jakar usse lekar aayen ge.” Riya asked: Aap Gungun ko
miss karti hogi na??” Diya nodded in +tive& said: Ha! I miss her a lot.”
Suddenly a voice came
from the door.” Mamma r u missing me??” All turned & saw Gungun standing at
the door. Rahul & Diya got shocked .
Rahul couldn’t believe his eyes. He
exclaimed: Gungun!!” They both ran towards her & hugged her. Diya started
kisses her face . Tears started following from her eyes. Diya asked: Kaisi hai
meri bacchi???” Gungun: Maine
thik hoo Maa. (Removing tears from Diya’s cheeks) Aap kaisi hoo??” Diya smiled
& said cupping her face: Maine
thik hoo baccha.” They both smiled & hugged each others. Diya asked; Beta
tu yaha kaise aaye???” Gungun looked towards the door. It was Gungun’s friends
mother. She said tht Gungun was feeling homesick, So she brought her here. Diya
& Rahul Thanked her. She went away.
“Gungun”, a voice came from her back. She
turned & saw Aditi there. She shouted: Atu!!!” They both ran towards each
other & hugged tightly. Adi kissed her tightly on her cheeks & in turn
Gungun too gave her a tight kiss. Gungun said: Atu! Aap kaisi hoo???” Adi made
her sit on her lap & said: Maine
toh thik hoo. Tum kaisi hoo??” Gungun smiled & said: EK dum mast hoo.” Adi
smiled & said: Aacha!!” Saying this Adi gave out a laugh . Riya came towards
Gungun & said: Hi!!! Kaisi hoo??” Gungun exclaimed: Hi Riya Atu???” Riya:
Ohh! So u remember me??” Gungun: Ya!” Riya smiled. Yash asked: Hi Gungun!”
Gungun: Hi Yash Mamu!” Yash smiled & asked Adi: Adi Atu ka matlab kya
hai??” Adi: Actually Yash wo Atu nahi Atya hai. Marathi me Bua ko Atya bolate
hai. Aur Atu Atya ka short form hai. Aur Atya ke husband ko ko Mama kehte hai.”
Yash: Ooo..”
Suddenly remembering Adi said to Gunu:
Gunu aa. Maine
tujhe apne naye patient se milati hoo.” They turned & saw Aadi sitting on
his peeping at Gunu. Gunu got shocked . She whispered in Adi’s ears: Atu yeh toh
Aadi hai.” Adi asked: Tum isse janti hoo??” Gunu nodded in +tive. Riya said:
Adi pata hai tujhe meri shaddi me yeh dono mile the. Bohot acche dost ban gaye
the.” Gunu said: Atu yeh mera best friend hai. Isse kya hoa hai??” Adi
explained her everything, how he got mad, whispering in her ears. Gunu started
crying but Adi told her to control her tears. Adi said: Roo mat. Tum roogi toh
Aadi ko bohot bura lagega. Tum usse dosti karlo. Ok??” Wiping her tears Gunu
nodded in +tive.
Gunu came towards Aadi
while Aadi gave her a suspicious look. Gungun said forwarding her hand: Hi
Aadi!!” Aadi looked at her hand . He gave an puzzled look to Adi . Adi said:
Aaditya yeh Rahul Bhai aur Diya bhabhi( vahini, marathi me bhabhi ko Vahini
bolte hai) ki beti hai. Gungun.” He looked at Gunu & she smiled at him. She
asked: Mujhse dosti karoge???” Aadi gave her a huge smile & shaked hands
with her. Aadi asked: Tum mujhe janti hoo??’ Gunu nodded in +tive & said:
Ha! Maine
tumhari best dost thi. Magar tum mujhe bhool gaya na??? lekin maine nahi bhooli tumhe.” Aadi laughed &
said: Promise ab maine
tumhe kabhi bhi nahi bhoolunga.” Saying this they both smiled. Diya said: Gunu.
Beta ghar chal. Jara fresh hoo jao.” Gunu said: Ok Mamma. Aadi maine ghar jakar jaldi
fresh hokar tumse milne aaongi. Phir hum milkar khelenge. Ok??” Aadi nodded in
+tive. Due to happiness he started clapping.
Gunua& asked: Mamma! Kya maine
Aadi se milne aa sakti hoo??” Diya smiled & nodded. Aadi & Gunu both
got happy. After a while Diya took Gunu home.
* AFTER 1HR*
Gunu came from home to MR. She was went toward Aadi’s
room & started playing with him. Riya was happy tht Aadi got a nice friend
to play with. While passing beside Aadi’s room, Pankaj peeped inside . He saw
Gungun playing with Aadi. He entered the room & saw shocked to find Gunu
playing with Aadi with Rahul. He said: Rahul yaha kya kar rahe ho???”
Rahul turned & saw him
standing. Rahul said: Good morning uncle!” Pankaj just nodded. Rahul introduced
Gungun to him. Pankaj greeted her. He asked: Beta! Tum iss pagal ke saath kyun
khel rahe hoo??” Adi got angry & even Aadi . Riya got annoyed . Gunu asked:
Pagal ?? Kyun pagal uncle?? Ye toh mera best friend hai.” Pankaj said: Lekin kya
tum nahi janti ki yeh mentally ill hai??” Gunu smiled & said: Aree uncle
sab mentally ill he hote hai. Papa kehte hai ki sare logo me koi na koi mental
problem rehta hai. Jaise gussa hona, marna, jealousy feel karma bhi ek mental
problem hai. Sab ko hota hai. Toh iska matlab saare log pagal hote hai??”
Pankaj was taken a back by her answer.
Everyone tried hard to control their laugh .
Pankaj said clearing his throat,
maintaining a smile on his face: Maine
toh sirf Isliye kaha tha ki yeh tumhe koi choot na pohochaye.” Gunu smiled
& said: Don’t worry uncle. Mujhe kuch nahi hoga. Atu ne mujhe patients logo
se kaise baat karte hai, kaise behave karte hai yeh sab sikhaya hai.” Pankaj
just smiled & said: Rahul tumhari bacchi bohot hoshiyaar hai.” Rahul smiled
& Pankaj went towards the door when Gunu stopped him & said; Uncle, aap
plzz mere dost ko pagal mat kaheye na! Plzzz! Mujhe accha nahi lagta.” Pankaj
just smiled & went out of the room. Pankaj got very angry while others
burst out laughing. Diya said to Gunu: Baccha aisa nahi kehte. Woh…” Rahul
interrupted saying: Diya. Rehne do. Gunu ne thik kaha hai. Tum usse dato mat.
(Turning towards Gunu) Very good Gunu. I’m proud of u.” Gunu gave him a big
smile .
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Riya was watching Gunu & Aadi playing
in the garden when her cell rang. The no. wasn’t similar so she accepted the
call. She asked: Hello??” From opposite side: Hello Riya beti! Kaisi hoo??
Mujhe abhi pata ki tum Maa banana wali hoo. Congrats!!” Riya asked in a stern
tone : Who is this?? Kon bol raha hai??” From opposite side: Tumhare Pita!”
Riya’s eyes widened . She warned him: Mujhe phone karne ki himmat kaisi hoye
aapki??? How dare u!!! Ab toh aapne mujhe phone kar diya hai magar phir se call
karne ki koshish mat karma! Samjhe aap??? Warna mujhe aapke khelaf legal action
lena hoga! Mind it !! Mere aur mere bhaiya ke zindagi se aap dorr chale jayeye.”
Saying this she cancelled the call.
Suddenly she felt someone’s
hand on her shoulder. She turned & saw Yash. She hugged him. Yash asked:
Unka phone tha??” Riya said: Kyun ??? Kyun woh hume pareshaan kar rahe hai???
Kya chahte hai wo humse??” Yash hugged her tightly, kissed her forehead &
said: Tum chinta mat karo. Aisi halat me tension lena acchi baat nahi hai.
Hmmm??” Riya just nodded her head .
* AT MEHRA MANSION*
Monish was sitting on a royal couch. She
came & hugged him from behind. But he did respond to her. She came in front
of him & asked: Kya hoa hai tumhe?? Itne tension me kyun ho tum???” She was
Monish’s PA as well as his girl friend, Alisha. Monish explained her
everything. He said : Aaditya ke wajah se Riya mujhe se dorr hote ja rahi hai.” He
went on saying her but Alisha was least interested . As he finished she asked:
So?? Ab tum kya karoge??” Monish: Aadi mere raste ka kaata ban gaya hai. Ab mujhe iss
raste ke kaate ho hatana hai.” Saying this he picked up his cell & dialed a
number. He said: Raghu kaha hai??” From opposite side: Woh toh jail me hai. Kal
wo jail se bahar chhotega.” Monish: Thik hai.”
Then after canceling the call
he dialed another no. He said: Sharad, kal Raghu jail se chhot jayaga. Tum usse
receive karma jao aur usse seedha mere secret farm house me lekar aao. Thik
hai??” Sharad: Yes sir!” Saying this he cancelled the call. Alisha asked:
Raghu?? Tumhe usse kya kam hai??” Monish: Kissi ko kahe bhejna hai.” Alisha got
confused & asked: Kisse aur kaha??” Monish gave a vicious smile & said:
Aaditya ko apni Maa aur Pita ki yaad aa
rahe hai na. Toh mujhe usski yeh tadap dekhi nahi jaa rahe hai. Toh socha kyun
na usse unhe ke paas bhej do??” Alisha: Aur Aditi???” Monish uske liye bhi mane
kuch socha kar rakha hai.” He turned towards Alisha & both gave each others
a vicious look . They came close to each other & kissed each other.
* AT MR *
Gungun met everyone at MR. Adi introduced her to Anil. He was happy to
meet her. Gungun was shocked to know tht even though Anil wasn’t mentally ill
he was allowed to stay in MR.
* AT ADI’S CABIN*
At 4pm, Aadi & other patients were busy
sleeping while Adi, Diya, Rahul, Riya, Yash, Anup, Anushka & Gungun were
busy chatting with each other. Gunu was sitting on Adi’s lap. Adi & Gunu
were busy playing, laughing with each other. Others were happy to see them
laughing. Suddenly Gunu became silent . Tears started pouring from her eyes . Adi
got anxious as wht happened to her. Adi got terrified. She brought her close,
removed tears from Gunu’s cheeks & hugged her tightly. Even others too got
anxious .
Adi asked, cuddling her: Kya hoa
baccha tujhe?? Kyun roo rahi hai tu??” Gunu asked crying: Atu?? Kya Aadi thik
ho gayega??? Mujhe usse aise dekh kar bohot bura lagta hai. Atu usse aap plzz
jaldi se thik kar do na!” Adi felt soo bad for her. She said: Gunu I’ll try my
best to treat him. Hmm??” Gunu rubbing her eyes said : Atu Aadi bohot aacha hai.
Woh aap se bohot pyaar karta hai.”
After hearing this Adi’s eyes
widened . Adi asked: Kya???” Gunu nodded in +tive. Gunu said: Woh aapse bohot
pyaar karta hai. Riya Atu ki shaddi se pehla main usse mili thi. Tab mujhe pata
chala ki woh aapse pyaar karta hai. Mujhe Aadi bohot pasand hai isliye maine usski madat karne
ke liye ha raha. Riya Atu ki shaddi me hum don one bohot koshish ki aapko
batane ki lekin Aadi kabhi bhi aapko bata nahi paya. Woh humesha aapko batane
ki koshish karta tha magar uski gale se aawaz he nahi aata tha.” Adi gave her a
puzzled look. Gunu asked: Atu aap Aadi se shaddi karogi na??” Adi gave her an
anxious look .
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