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Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
Love can change life, Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai is set on the picture where two lovers cross every hurdles together.
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* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 10 *
*RECAP*
1) Gunnu explains Adi as how she became friends
with Aaditya.
2) Press conference was held in MR. Reporters
asked several questions to Adi & other doc’s. One reporter even asked as
why they didn’t allow Monish to meet Adi.
3) Riya agrees tht Monish had killed her mom.
4) Monish calls Raghu to his secret farm house.
5) Riya & Aditi visit their college & are
lost in their past life.
6) Adi remembers her 1st meeting with
Aaditya.
*Tujhme
Rab Dikhta Hai: 10*
* COLLEGE
GARDEN *
They sat there on a bench in the corner of the
garden. A cool breeze flowed around them. They looked at each other &
smiled. Adi said: Kya din the woh! Wow!”
* 8 YEARS BACK*
*FLASH BACK Continues*
* Kashyap House*
When the
door bell rang one servant ran towards the door to open it. They entered the
house. They headed towards the Devgarh & saw her doing Puja of Lord
Krishna.
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They
slowly came towards her & hugged her from behind. It made her jump from
fear. She turned & saw them laughing. She exclaimed: Aadi!! Yash!!” Both
smiled & took aashirvaad of her. Aadi: Maa! Kaisi hoo???” Shefali was soo
Happy to see her son after soo many. She waved her hand on his cheeks &
said: Maine
toh thik hoo beta. Aree Yash tu kaisa hai??” Yash smiled & said: Maa maine thik hoo.”
Shefali: Bohot miss kiya maine
tum dono ko. Aacha hoa tum log aa gaye.”
A voice came from the stairs: Toh aa gaye tum log!” They turned towards
the stairs & found Monish standing there with a smirk. They came towards
him & Aadi & Yash took aashirvaad from him but he was least interested
in them. He said: Ha.. ha.. bas.” As a formality he smiled, got up & asked:
Aur… kaise hoo beta??” Aadi: Thik hoo Papa. Aur aap?” Simply nodding Monish
said: Thik…” Saying this he went towards the couch & sat reading Business
Newspaper.
Suddenly they heard a voice from their back: Hey Guys!!! Hi Shefu Maa!!”
She turned & saw Riya & Adi chewing gum & giving her a huge smile.
Shefali smiled & said: aree aa gaye tum log..” She saw Young Ronit &
Diya. They were at their 20’s who were still bachelor
while Riya & Adi were 18. Aadi kept on looking at Adi.
He was lost in her beauty.
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Adi gave Riya
an confused look. Adi: Kya?? Aadi mujhe ghoor raha tha??” Riya nodded in+tive.
Adi: Sachi??” Riya nodded again. Adi: Magar mera to uspar dhyan he nahi tha..”
*FLASH BACK Continues*
Shefali introduced Aadi & Yash to Ronit & Diya. When
she went to introduced Adi she said: Shefu maa! Hum mil cuke hai.”
Shefali got surprised & said: Kaha??” Riya: College me. Bhaiya toh
aaye the humse milne.” Shefali looked at Aadi & said: Toh Maa se jada behen
yaad aa gaye mere bete ko!” Aadi laughed & said: Nahi Maa! Wo toh airport
ke pass he Riya ka college padta hai. Isliye…” Shefali cutting in middle: Accha
accha thik hai. Explanation dene ki jarorat nahi hai. Maine janti hoo Beta ki tu Riya se sabse
jada pyaar karta hai.” Listening to this Monish peeped out of his newspaper. He
gave an I-don’t-agree-with-this look.
Shefali said: Aadi, Yash Ronit aur
Diya se tum dono nahi mile hoge yeh mujhe pata hai. Yeh Ronit hai Aditi ka bada
bhai..” Aadi in a lil big voice: BHAI??” Ronit laughed & said: Ha! Who hum
dono me 10 saal ka fharak hai. Isliye..” Aadi gave a huge smile n said: Ohh I
see..” Shefali smiled & said: Aadi, Yash jao, tum dono jake fresh hoo jayo
tab tak maine
parathe banati hoo… Ok??” They nodded.
*FLASH BACK Ends*
A
cool breeze brushed her face. Suddenly she burst out laughing. Riya gave her a
confused look. Riya asked: Kya hoa? Y r u laughing?” Adi controlling herself: Tujhe…Tujhe
yaad hai jab hum sab Ronit Bhai aur Diya bhabhi ka rishta tye karne gaya the tab…” Suddenly
her cell started rining. It flashed Diya’s name. She picked up the call n said:
Ha bhabhi kya baat hai?” Diya: Ha Adi baccha jaldi yaha aaj a..” Adi getting
scared asked: Kya hoa? Sab thik hai na??” Diya smiling: Ha baccha.. bas tu yaha
jaldi se aaj a. Yaha koi aaya hai tum dono se milne..” Adi getting confused: Kya
hoa bhabhi?? Kuch baat hai kya??” Riya too got tensed. Diya laughed n said:
Aree kuch darne kio baat nahi hai. Tu yaha aa toh sahi..” Adi: Thik hai.”
Saying this she cancelled her call. Riya asked her: Kya hoa Adi?” Adi said:
Diya Bhabhi ne MR bulaya hai. Koi aaya hai.” Riya: Kon?” Adi: Pata nahi…”
* MR*
Adi parked her ford car in
the parking lot. Riya: Kya Adi.. kon aaya hoga??” Adi: Pata nahi.” Suddenly Riya stopped. Adi looked
back n saw her. She asked her: Kya hoa?? Rukh kyun gaye?” Riya pointed at a
car. She said: Yeh kiski car hai?” Adi looked at the car n the at Riya. They
both shouted: Mamaji!!”
Riya n Adi started running
up. A nurse called Adi: Maam!” Adi n Riya stopped. Adi looked back n asked: Kya
hoa?” Nurse: Maam, aapko Pankaj sir ne bulaya hai.” Adi: Unhe kaise pata maine MR aa gaye hoo?”
Nurse: Unhone aapko dekha.” Adi: Ok.” She looked at Riya n said: Tu ja.. Maine aati hoo..” Riya
nodded n went upstairs.
Pankaj was reading a file when
he heard a knock at the door. He said: Come in.” Adi came in n Pankaj told her
to sit down. She looked beside her. A man was standing dressed in a simple
shirt and pant. Pankaj looked at her and said: Aditi yeh Ramu hai. Isse yaha
wardboy ka kaam chahiye. Toh…” Aditi gave Ramu an confused look and asked:
Tumhara pura naam kya hai??” He said: Ji….Ramu Prasad.” Aditi nodded n said:
Thik hai. Tum pehla kaha kaam karte the??” Ramu: Ji.. Woh Sikkim me ek
hospital hai…waha kaam karta tha…” Aditi nodded again. She said: Toh ek kaam
karo.. tum aaj ek din kaam kar ke dekh lo maine Matron ko bulati ho, woh tumhe
kaam batayegi aur tumhari kaam bhi dekh legengi. Ok?” Ramu just nodded. Pankaj
said: Wo sab maine
kar donga. Tum Rehne do. Maine Matron ko bol dunga. Aditi just nodded. Then she
said to Pankaj in a hurried tone: Doctor maine
chalti hoo.. Aadi ke kamre me jana hai.” She got up and went towards the door
when Pankaj stopped her n asked: Kya hoa? Koi problem hai kya??” Adi smiled n
said: Nahi Doctor. Wo Mamaji aaye hai. Unse milne jana hai. Maine chalti hoo. Bye!” Saying this she
hurried out.
Listening to this Pankaj’s
face turned into stone. His mind started running faster n faster. He looked at
Ramu who was giving him a smirk. Ramu said: Kaisa tha apun ka acting? Mast
na??” Actually he was Raghu who was been sent by Monish to kill Aaditya. Raghu
had gone under plastic surgery by a doctor on Monish’s command. Pakaj told him
tht Adi’s Mamaji is no other than ACP of CID. Listening to this Raghu said:
Kya?? Aree yeh issi ne toh mujhe jail
bheja tha!” Pankaj got terrified now.
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Adi was
running towards Aadi’s room. She came near the door and just pushed it hard.
The door opened half but it repelled back n her head banged the door hard.
“AAAAA!!!” She shouted hard n came inside putting her hand on her forehead. She
was shouting with pain. Rnit,Diya, Riya , Anup, Anushka n others burst out
laughing. Adi shouted : Aree yeh kon saala dewaar bankar darwaze ke pass khada
hai!! Haaaat!!” The guy said sorry to her but she was boiling with anger. She
had her back towards the guy. The guy
told: I’m sorry! Aapko laga kya??” Adi got angry and turned towards him n said:
Nahi!! ” The guy looked at her. Ohh shez soo pretty, he thought. Adi cont’d:
Isliye Maine
pagal hoo! Isliye chila rahi hoo!” He said: Accha!” Adi gave him an shocked
looked n said: Wht Accha??? Tumhe lagta hai maine pagal hoo?” The guy said: Nahi.. Aap
ne he kaha toh..” Adi: Toh Kya!! Ha??? Aur…Aur tumhe yaha darvaze ke pecche kya
kkar rahe the?? Ha??Watchman giri kar rahe the kya??” The guy innocent nodded
in –tive. Adinodded like him n asked: Yeh kya baial( buffalo) ki tarah sar hela
rahe hoo? Ha??” The guy was in soup now. Riya said: Aree kyun chila rahi hai tu
iss bechare par?? Aree..: Adi shouted: Aree bechare?? Kya bechare?? Yeh dekh(
showed her forehead which had turned red) dekh …ouc! Mujhe kitna dukhraha hai.”
She heard a loud laugh. She
saw towards tht man who was laughing. She went towards him n asked: Kya hass
rahe hoo aap?? Ha??” He controlled his laugh n said: Tumhe kisne kaha tha itne
zorr se darvaza kholne??” Adi said: Mujhe apn se milna tha isliye.” He laughed
again. He spread his hand wide for a hug n Adi came running towards him. She
cried: Mamaji!!” She gave him a hard hug. But she pushed him back n asked: Kyun
ACP Pradyuman!! Aaj yaad aaye hum sab ki??” He laughed again.
He said:
Sorry Adi! Mujhe maaf kar do?’ But she nodded in-tive. He gave Riya a help-me
look n she too got angry wid him. He came towards them, held his ears n did up
n down. They both looked at him n
smiled. ACP too smiled n said: I hav a surprise for u.” They gave him an
confused look. He inserted his hand in his coat’s pocket an removed 2 Dairy Milk
Fruit n Nut chocolate, their fav chocolate. They got excited n snatched it from
his hand n said thnk u in a childish tone. Suddenly somethg stuck into Adi’s
mind n she looked back. She didn’t found Aadi. She asked in an concerned tone:
Aadi kaha hai??” Diya told: WOP Yash aur Gunnu ke saath garden me khel raha
hai.”
The front door opened n Yash
came in. He got happy 2 see ACP there. He came n took ashirwaad from him. Adi
asked: Yash! Aadi kaha hai??” Yash looked back n said: Abhi toh yaha tha!” Adi:
Phir kaha gaya?”
She hurried towards the door.
Booh!!! Aadi n Gunnu frightened
her. She got scared n was going 2 fall went Aadi held her by hand. All laughed
n lookg at then Aadi gave a huge clap. Ooouch!! Adi shouted. She fell on the
floor with a huge sound. All again burst out laughing. Aadi laughed like a
child. ACP saw him n tears started flowing towards his eyes. Adi got up n ran
behind Aadi 2 beat him. He ran towards ACP n hide behind him. Aadi shout:
Bacho! Pls bacho!” ACP tuned towards him and said: Beta kaise hoo??” Aadi gave
him an confused look. Aadi asked: Aap kon ha??” Riya told him: Bhaiya yeh
humare Mamaji hai.” Aadi’s eyes got widened n said: Mama hai!!” Riya nodded in
+tive.
Pradyuman again inserted his hand
into his coat’s pocket n removed a chocolate. He gave him him. Aadi got happy
but his smile disappeared. ACP asked him: Kya hoa beta??” Aadi says: Ek he
hai??” ACP smiled n said: Nahi aur bhi hai! Tumhe bhi pasand hai na
chocolate??” Aadi nodded in –tive n said : Nahi mere liye nahi. Mere dosto ke
liye! (Counting in finger tips) Gunnu, Batu, uncle ke liye chahiye….” ACP said
with tearful eyes: Haha kyun ahi./ Hum sab ke liye choclate laye hai!” Aadi
gave him a huge n cute smile. He went towards Ronit, Diya, Anup, Anushka, Yash
n Riya saying tht his Mamaji will distribute chocolates 2 him n his frnds.
Looking at this ACP cried and went out
in the passage way. All his officers went towards him. Adi saw him n went
towards him. She kept his hand on his shoulders. He looked at her n she smiled
at him. They looked towards Aadi who was dancing with joy!!
* COMING UP NEXT *
ACP
promises 2 solve his sister’s Murder case. Aadi gets familier to CID officers.
Daya falls in luv wid Aditi. Raghu gets job of wardboy in MR.
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* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 11 *
*RECAP*
1) Riya n Adi remember the moments shared by them wid Shefali.
2) Adi learns tht Aadi used to secretly watch her through the
corner of her eyes.
3) CID team intro.
4) Daya gets lost in Adi’s beauty.
5) Adi narrates Aadi’s state to ACP.
6) He gets sad to see Aadi in such a condition.
* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 11 *
* MR*
ACP n Adi were sitting on the
green pasture on the garden. Cold breeze was brushing their face. ACP said:
Shefali ki bohot yaad aati hai.” Aadi, nodding said: Ha maine bhi.” Riya came there n sat beside
Adi. Adi told ACP tht Monish had came there to see Aadi. Aadi: Mamaji Monish
aaye the yaha… Aadi ko dekhne..” Acp got perplexed n asked: Kya???” Toh phir
kya hoa??” Aadi: Phir kya Aadi usne dekh kar aur chilane laga…” ACP was getting
angry. He bursted out: Usski himmat kaise hoe yaha aane ki. Tum logo ne usse
roka nahi???” Riya: Roka mamaji… par tab tak
bhaiya ne unhe dekh liya tha.” Acp: Isska kuch toh karna hoga….”
At tht time all his team members wid
aadi n Gunnu came towards them. Watching Aadi coming Acp got up. Smiling at him
Aadi asked: Kya aap mere dosto se milna chahenge??” Acp smiling: Ha ha kyun
nahi.” Aadi got happy n started clapping. He held Acp’s hand n demanded: Chalo
Chalo…. Jaldi chal phir maine
aapko unse milata hoo.” But he stopped and looked at the CID team n asked:
Mamaji yeh log kon hai??? Aapke dost hai??” Acp said smilingly: Na beta… Yeh
log officers hai aur maine
inka head hoo.” Saying this he introduced them to him. Aadi was standing wid
his mouth wide open. He asked: Toh kya aap Police maine kaam karte hai???” Acp smiled n
nodded. Aadi still in the same position
said: WOwwww…… Th aap roj gundo se ladte honge na??” Acp smilied n nodded
again. Aadi clapped wid joy n said: Toh chalo chalo.” Adi interrupted n said:
Aadi tum jao hum abhi aate hai. Thik hai?” Aadi nodded while Adi gave him a
cute smile. She turned to Acp n asked: Mamaji woh Apne guns….. Aap plss…” Acp
smiled n said: Don’t worry… Sab thik hai..” Adi gives out a sigh off relief.
Ten feet away Aadi shouts: Aree jaldi aao na!!!” Adi answers: Aayeee…” All
followed him to the common room.
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As they were heading towards
Common room they heard a huge chaos. Adi opened the huge door n entered in. She
was shocked to see the whole room was full of papers. All patients were
dancing, shouted. It resembled totally like a fish market….worst than tht. The nurses
were unable to control them. Watching Adi the nurses made an innocent face
while Adi ignored them. All patients were dancing wd their back to Adi. They
didn’t even know tht Adi was there. Adi sensed someone’s hand on her shoulders
n she looked back. She saw Anil standing there wid a confused look, Suddenly
tht Sadhu patients was dancing wid gr8 energy with his back to Adi. Dancing
like a monkey he turned back. Suddenly
he was taken aback to see Adi. His eyes got widened. Adi gave him a cute smile
n joining her hands she said: Namaste
Sadhu maharaj.”
Listening to her voice the room
turned silent. Sadhu n every patient ran towards their bed n covered themselves
wid their blankets. Acp n his team n Aadi tried to control their laugh. Daya
whispered to Abhjit: Lagta hai yeh yaha ki Hitler hai.” Saying this they both
laughed while Adi gave them a stink eye. Adi staned in the middle of the room n
asked in a huge but peaceful tone: Kya ho raha tha yaha par??” No answer. She
banged her hand on the table which made them scare n they came out of the
blanket. She asked again but now in a high angry tone: YEH SAB KYA HO RAH
HAI???” No answer. Controlling her anger she asked: Kyon karte hai aap log
aisa?? Aisa nahi hai ki maine
aap logo ko masti karne nahi deti. Maine khud aap logo ke saath masti karti ho,
gati hoo, dance karti ho.. Phir kyun?? Aap logo ke liye maien ek music hour bhi
set kiya hai jaha aap log gaa sakte hai, dance kar sakte hai.. masti kar sakte
hai… phir kyun aap log aise bartav karte hai?? Agar Dr.Pankaj ko yeh pata chal gaya toh kya hoa aapko
pata hai???”
“Kya hoga?”, listening to
this she turned around n saw Dr. Pankaj standing in front of her. Adi said:
Ha.. woh actually yeh log thodi se sheytaniya kar rahe the toh maine inhe samjha rahi
the ki…” He interrupted: Ha.. ha.. itne dino se tum inhe jis tarah se samjha
rahi ho mujhe toh lagta hai ki yeh kabhi nahi sudharenge….” Adi gave an stink
eye to her patients. They again covered themselves with their blankets. He
continued: Agar maine
kuc h kaho toh tumhari dost bura maan jate hai.Waise bhi mere kehne se kya hota
hai.” She didn’t utter a word. Saying
this he turned n was shocked to see ACP n his team behind him. ACP gave him a
warm smile n said: Hello Doctor! Kaise hai aap??” Dr. Pankaj, who didn’t see
tht ACP was there, trying to smile said: Maine…
Maine thik
hoo?? Aap kaise hai??” ACP still smiling said: Maine bhi thik hoo.” Dr. Pankaj said: Aditi
ne mujhe kaha tha ki Aap aur apka pura team aaya hai Aaditya se milne. Aur….”
B4 he cud say anythg else he saw Ramu coming inn he called Dr. Pankaj: Doctor
sahab. Maine….”
He stopped suddenly as he saw the CID team. His eyes went towards Daya. He
remembered tht Daya was the one who had sent him behind the bars. Daya gave him
a confused look as y he was looking at him in such a manner.
“Aree accha hoa tum yahi aa
gaye. Bhai yeh yaha ward boy ki naukri ke liye aaya tha.. toh maine isse rakh liya. Thik kiya na Bhai??”
Ronit (smiling at her): Tumne isse kaam par rakha hai toh thik he kia hai.”
Aditi smiled at him. Turning towards Raghu aka Ramu: Toh tumhari naam kya hai?”
He said: Ji.. Ramu Prasad sahab.” Ronit nodded n said: Toh tum kal se kaam par
aa sakte hoo aur…” Ramu interrupted him saying: Sahab kya maine aaj se join kar sakta hoo?” Ronit
said: Par ab toh shyam bhi hoo gaya
hai. Duty ka time bhi khatam hoo gaya
hai toh..” Pankaj said: Ronit maine
isse night duty de hai.” Aditi: Kyun? Night duty par ??” Pankaj n Ramu gave
each other a strange look. Then Pankaj said: Aise he. Raat maine ek aur helper aa jayega.” Adi just
nodded: Hmmm Thik hai.” Looking at Ramu she said: Toh tum kal see aaj jao. Thik
hai.” Saying this she turned towards her patients when Ramu called: Madam ji..
kya maine aaj
se join nahi kar sakta??” She turned towards him and gave him an confused look.
She said: Aaj?” Ronit said: Thik hai…. ( Looking at Adi) Aane do” Adi smiled n nodded. She turned
towards Ram n said: Toh thik hai tum aaj se he join kar lo.” Looking at Matron
she said: Matron kisse sab kam samjha do. Thik hai?” Matron nodded. While going
Ramu looked at Daya who in turn gave him a suspicious look. Aadi accidentally
dashed Ramu as he was playing wid Cube which Acp had gifted him. Aadi just
smiled n said: Sorry J.” Ramu gave him a smile n thought, ohhh toh yeh hai mera
shikar. He saw Dr. Pankaj n smiled.
Aadi was giving medicines to
everyone while Aadi was following her busy playing wid cube. Acp n his team was
watching how nicely he handles her patients. Daya was now getting more attracted
towards her. Suddenly Adi turned had dashed wid Aadi n his cube falls down.
Aadi said indignantely: Kya Adi dekh kar chalo na!” Hearing this Adi gave him
an confused look while others( not patients) chuckled. Adi narrowed her eyes n
said: Aadi!” Aadi said innocently still engrossed in playing: Hmmm???” Looking at his innocence she smiled n just
pulled his nose playfully. She said: Aadi aaj maine ghar jaldi ja rahi hoo. Ok?” Aadi gave
her a curious look n asked: Itne jaldi kyun??” Adi smiled n said: Kuch kaam
hai. Mamaji aaye hai toh unse kuch kaam hai.” Aadi made a sad face but it
lighted up when Adi said: Udass mat hoo. Kal maine jaldi aa jaungi. Ok??” Aadi gave his
million dollar smile n nodded.
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Cabin *
They both were happy tht their
plan was moving quite smoothly as expected. Ramu had infored Monish abt his
success. Monish was happy to hear this news. Ramu said: Maine uss Aaditya ko aaj he maar dalta
hoo..” Pankaj suddenly said: Nahi.. aaj nahi …. Thode dino baat jab tum sabka
barosa jeet loge tab taki tum par koi shak nahi kar sake.. Samjhe??” Ramu
nodded in +tive. Pankaj said: Ab Aaditya Kashyap ko koi nhi baacha sakta. Aditi
bhi nahi.” Saying this they both laughed wickedly.
*
ADITI’S HOME *
They reached home within few mins. Adi insised Acp to stay at her place.
Ronit even said: Mamaji aapke officers bhi yahi reh laenge.” Acp agreed n all
stayed at Aditi’s house. Daya was happy as he could possibly spend few moments
wid Aditi.
* COMING UP NEXT *
* Daya gets more attracted towards Aditi.
* Aditi gets suspicious
abt Ramu.
* She starts taking
precautionary measures for Aadi so as to keep him away from Ramu.
* Aadi gets more
attached to Adi.
*By*
*Usha & Diipendu*
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uffo aadi aur adi ke beech daya ..
keep updating usha .. its gtting on interesting
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diipendu wrote:Hope that Ramu won't get sucess on his bad plans...Usha story is really gearing-up but also, add some romantic sequences and interaction between aditi and aadi in next episodes...
Yes.. I'll do add... n thnks everyone for ur comments...
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diipendu wrote:Hope that Ramu won't get sucess on his bad plans...Usha story is really gearing-up but also, add some romantic sequences and interaction between aditi and aadi in next episodes...
yes usha add sum more romantic scenes b/w aditi and aditya
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Hey ppl! How r u all? I’m sooo sorry tht I cudn’t update the chps, but now I’ll try my level best to do so. Also forgive me for my earlier grammatical mistakes .. People I hav changed Yash. Now Yash will be played by Karan Wahi & Gungun by Ashnoor Kaur. Also I hav used short cut words. Plzz do understand
*RECAP*
1. Ramu learns tht Mumbai CID team has arrived in the Rehab.
2. Ramu has requested to Rahul & Aditi to join the night duty
3. Now Ramu will gain confidence of all doctors so that it wud be easy for him to kill Aadi.
4. Daya ofcourse is fallg for Aditi.
* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai:12*
* PRADHAN HOUSE:
Daya got freshened up & was enjoying the cool breeze in the garden. Suddenly his eyes fell on Aditi’s balcony. She jus had her bath & her hair was wet. She was talkg on the phone. Aditi: Aadi! Maine kal jaldi aa jaunge. Ok? Ab soo jao. Thik hai?” Aadi nodding: Ok. Par promise tum kal jaldi aaogi?” “ Ha baba, Promise!” “Ok Byeeeeeeee, Good night, Sweet Dreams!” “Bye Aadi.” She cancelled the call & moved towards her room when she saw someone peepg at her. When she turned she learnt tht it was Daya. Learng that she has seen him he suddenly turned with his back infront of Adi & started stretching his body. He gets soo teriified( Lol! Daya gettg teried! :O) & continuing with stretchg his arms he walked towards the door. Adi just kept on peepg at him & felt it quite strange. “Kya pagal insaan hai.”
Everyone r havg dinner . Diya is serving their guests. ACP climbed down the stairs with a thoughtful expression on his face. Aditi watches him & asks: Kya hoa Mamaji? Koi problem hai?” ACP: Haa beta. Headquarters se call aaya tha. Unhone kaha ki hum sab CID team ko Blueberry Hotel me rehna hai. Mission se related hai. Toh humsab ko aaj he waha jana padega.” Rahul got up & said: Its ok Mamaji. Duty duty hote hai. We understand.” ACP smiled & said: Thank u beta. (Lookg at Diya who wasn’t happy) Par hum sab dinner ke liya yahi aayenge. Promise.” Diya gave him a huge smile. But someone wasn’t happy at all. Daya looked at Aditi & got sad. Abhijit understand Daya’s saddeness, whispered to him: Tu dukhi mat hoo. Dinner me tu use jaror dekhe ga.” Daya was taken aback & said: Kya nahi. Kuch bhi mat bola Abhijit.” His face had turned pink while Abhijit tried to control his laugh. .
After havg dinner ACP said: Rahul ab hum chalet hai.” Rahul gave a +ve nodded. ACP turend towards Sachin & said: Tum MR jao aur puri raat Additya ke saath rehna.” Aditi in a concerned tone: Kyun? Kya hoa?” ACP: Pata nhi. Maine aisa lag raha hai ki Aadi needs safety. Uss par humme humesha nazaar rekhne padege. Mujhe Monish par zara bhi bharosa nhi hai. ( Moving towards Sachin) Sachin tum abhi issi waqt Aadi ke pass jao. Aadi ke saath Yash bhi hai. Toh tumhe dono ko sambhalna hai. Ok?” Sachin: Ok sir.”
*MR*
In storage room, Raghu was checking a needle which was immersed in a tube kind of small bottle with green liquid. Raghu: Yeh zeher jab Aaditya ke badan me jayege toh dhere dheere pure badan me felega aur phir dil ke dhadkane kam karta gayega. Saas ke nail ko fula dega. Aur fir Aaditya ko saas lene me takleef hoge aur wooh Maar jayega!!” Saying this he smirked. He calls Monish & says: Aap ka ladla kal ki subha nhi dekh payega. Aur sara injaam Yash par aayega. Fir thode dino baad maine Aditi ko bhi maar dunga.” Monish gets very happy after listening that his plan was moving as per his wish .
Raghu was moving towards Aaditya’s room. He was happy tht he was going to kill . Raghu had earlier murdered numerous times under Monish’s order. He was in jail but got released as there was no evidence against him. He was a perfect killer who didn’t leave any clues for the police. And yet again he will not leave any clues of this murder. Though CID team was present there he is quite confident that they won’t be able to stop him. Once Raghu takes a job, he doesn’t rest until he has completed it, whether it is a murder, extortion or physical abuse. He is ready to do Anything for Money.
When he was a kid he had murdered his uncle bcz he was illegimate relationship with his mother & he also beat both of them numerous times. His mother was very poor & the man used to give her money to feed her & instead asked her to sleep with him whenever he wanted. SO one night when his uncle was drunk & was physically abusing his mother Raghu tried to stop him. Instead he started beating Raghu. In anger, Raghu picked up the kitchen knife & pierced it into his uncle chest 15 times due to which he died. Later in life Raghu became friends with goons & worked for them.
Monish had met him in Club house where Raghu was working for his rival. So with the help of Raghu Monish killed his rival & undertook his business. The night when Shefali’s car was crushed by a huge truck, Raghu was the person driving the truck. He crushed her car with his truck. And now he will kill her dearest son. He had no mercy for anybody.
As he opened the door he was shell shocked. He was Sachin sitting on the chair. Sachin looked at him & asked what happened. sAchin: Tum. Itne raat ko yaaha kya kar rahe ho?” Raghu controlling his fearful voice: Sahab woh mujhe laga ki Aadi baba ko kuch chaheye rahega. Toh me yaha aa jaya.” Sachin: Nahi kuch nhi chaheye.” “ Sahab aap ghar nhi gaye?” “ Nahi maine har raat ko yahe par rukunga, Aaditya ke liye. Aur kuch?” “ Nahi sahab.” “ Suno jate waqt darwaza band kar ke jana.” “Jee sahab. Sahab maine aapke liye ko tea-coffee-thanda laoo?” “ Nahi, miane khana kha kar aaya hoo. Tum jao.” “Thik hai sahab.” Saying this Ramu closed the door & walked back to the storage room, cursing the officer .
He dialed a no. & when someone on the other end answer the call, he said: Sir kebab me hadde aa gaya hai. ACP ne apna ek Camcha bheja hai Aaditya Kashyap ke protection ke liye.” On the other end: Kya! ( After few seconds) Toh ab humme kuch aur plan banana padega. Ab tum kuch bhi mat karo. Bas ek normal insaan ki tarah raho taki unhe tum par shaq na ho. Thik hai?” “Thik hai Sir”. Saying this Raghu cancels the call.
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Daya was lying on his bed, his eyes stuck on the ceiling, deep in thoughts. He was thinking of Aditi. Her eyes, her smile, how her nose turns red when she get annoyed, how her cheeks turn pink when she smiles.
*Next day at Blueberry Hotel*
ACP & his team were ready & were moving towards their car. ACP: Abhijit tum subha Aaditya ke saath rahoge. Woh jaha jaha jayega waha waha tum jaoge. Thik hai.” Looking at Daya n then at ACP Abhijit requested in a soft tone: Sir aap Daya ko kyun nhi subha ki duty dete hai.” ACP gave him an stink eye & said: Kyun tumhe subha kya ghoomne jana hai Taarika ke saath jot um Aaditya ka dhyan nhi rekh sakte??” Turning red :Abhijit said: Nahi sir!! Wooh kya hai na ki Daya haatha-khaatha hai tohh…” ACP: Toh kyat um lukkhe hoo??” “ Nahi Sir! Daya ko dekh kar sab darr jate hai tohh” ACP: Toh kya log tumse nhi darte?” Abhijit: Nahi Sir!! Daya pehelwan type lagta hai. (Trying to avoid eye contact with ACP) Toh woh Aadi ko barabar control kar payega. ( Lookg down) Issliye.” ACP looked at Abhijit carefully as though scanning this brains & removing all truth & then he looked at Daya. Even Daya tried to avoid eye contact with ACP. Other members knew why Abhijit had suggested such an idea. ACP nodded slightly & said:Thik hai Daya. Tum jao.” Daya , controlling his joy, nodded slightly. ACP moved towards his car & controlling his laugh, said in stern tone: Kaam par nhi jana hai kya sabko???” Everyone turned towards ACP n nodded +vely & moved towards the car.
*MR*
Daya parked his car in the parking lot & moved towards the building. He opened the door of Aadi’s room (Daya opened the DOOR!! LOL ). He saw Sachin & Yash were talking to each other. SAchin got shocked to see Daya & asked: Sir aap yaha kaise?” “Haa woh ACP sir ne mujhe morning ki duty de hai Aadi ke saath rehne ki.” “ Ohh aacha.” “Sachin tum ghar jao aur fresh ho kar HQ chale jao. Thik hai?” “ Jee Sir.” Later when Sachin went away, Yash got up from sleep. He got confused to see Daya there. Then Daya explained him as y he had came.
*After Few Mins At MR*
Yash was trying hard to wake Aaditya but all in vain. Aadi was sleepg in such a way tht it seemed he was dead: D … While Yash tried out all the tricks to wake him up but Aadi didn’t move a bit.
“Good Morning Aadi!” Aaditya did recognize this voice. He abruptly got up from his bed & saw Aditi standing at the door with a cute smile on her beautiful face
Aadi got sooo happy to find Aditi that he started jumping on his bed calling her name in chorus Aditi! Aditi! Aditi! Daya’s knees got weak after looking at her.
Aditi was wearing light blue kurta with white woolen designs & white tights. She had pinned her hair with a puff in the center. She had applied light pink colour lipstick & had lightly shaded her eyes with kajal.
Watching Aadi jumping on bed she laughed & asked him: Aadi tum baith jao. Agar Dr.Pankaj ne dekh liya na toh fir data milege. Thik hai?” Listening to this Aadi quickly sat on this bed. Looking at his childish behaviour everyone started laughing. Aadi asked her in a childish tone: Adi tum aaj itne jaldi aa gaye?” Aditi smiled & replied: Ofcourse! Mere dost ko maine promise diya tha ki maine aaj jaldi aaongi. Tum maine aa gaye.” Happily Aadi clapped & shouted Yippie!
Aditi: Aadi tum jao aur brush kar ken aha lo. Thik hai. Fir tumhara Yoga class bhi toh hai na. Jao.” Aadi nodded in +ve. Yash helped Aadi to get into the bathroom. Usually in MR nurses & ward boys helped patients to get bath. Female patients were helped by nurses while male patients by ward boys. But Aadi wanted Yash to help him & Yash happily fulfilled Aadi’s wishes. From childhood, Aadi had helped Yash all the time. He had given him food, shelter, clothes & no the worn clothes, but new ones. He was the reason Yash was now a businessman. Now Yash thought that by nursing Aadi he will be able to return Aaditya’s favour. Aadi was his Best friend. A friend who understood him completely.
While Yash took Aadi to the bathroom, Aditi was folding Aaditya blanket, checking whether Aadi’s medicines are available or not. She didn’t even realize that Daya was continuously watching her. He was lost in her beauty. She was writing updates abt Aadi’s beahviour in her diary. Suddenly she realized that someone was looking at her. She looked up & saw Daya watching her.
Daya was taken aback by her look. It was as though he’ll hav a heart attack. He wasn’t able to breathe. Aditi looking at him: Kya hoa?” Controlling his fear (:O) , he nodded in –ve & said: Nahi kuch nhi.” He stood straight & didn’t utter a word. Aditi continued without looking at him, writing somethg in her diary: Mamaji ne Aap ko Aadi ke protection ke liye bheja hai?” Daya replied: Jee.” Aditi: Thik hai.”
A ward boy came into the room & said: Madam, woh Anarkali aa gaya… nahi aa gayee… nahi woh..” Aditi cutting hin: Rehne do. Maine dekhte hoo.”
Adi, Aadi, Daya & Yash followed the ward boy to the main hall where her new patient was waiting. When they entered the hall, Daya, Yash & Aadi got shocked while Aditi tried to control her laugh . Aaditya got soo shocked tht his cube fell on the ground .
Bobby Darling as Anarkali
Anarkali’s uncle got so embarresed that he gave Aditi a helpless look . Watching 3 handsome men walking into the hall Anarkali goes mad. He/She started dancing like old Bollywood heroines …. He/ She runs towards Daya & says: Ohh My God! Aap kitne handsome hai!!” He/ She tried to touch his face while Daya held his/ her hand. Then realizing that Daya wasn’t interested she/ He moved towards Yash. Yash looked here n there for help & found Riya standing in the corner laughing .. He runs towards her b4 Anarkali could touch him & says : Yeh meri patni hai.” She/ He made an annoying expression & says: Goru ka gulam!” Listening to this Riya bursts out laughing . Then Anarkali sees Aadi but before she/he could reach towards him he ran towards Aditi & hides behind Aditi & says: Yeh meri.. meri.. meri dost hai! Aditi mujhe bacchoo!!” Aditi laughs aloud & says: Anarkali yeh ek patient hai. Isse mat sato.” Anarkali with a girly expression: Miane isse kaha sata rahi thi, maine toh bas isse baat karna chahate the.” Aaditya : Nahi nahi! Mujhe tumse baat nhi karne hai. Tum jaoo yaha see! ”
Aditi tells the Naresh, the head of the ward boys too take Anarkali to his/ her room. Naresh: Madam isse konsa room do? Aadmi ka ya Aurat ka?” B4 Aditi could answer one ward boy said: Madam ek kaam karte hai. Dono sections se beech me ek room banate hai aur iss antique piece ko waha rekh te hai .” While others laugh aloud, Aditi gets angry & says: Tum bhool rahe hoot um MR me hoo. Yaha har patients ke saath respect se baat ke jate hai. Bhale he woh kaise bhi hoo. Samjhe tum sab!!!” Everyone nodded. She looked at Naresh & Naresh nodded +vely. B4 going Anarkali looks at Aaditya & says: Ab toh tum bhi patient hoo aur maine bhi. Ab tumhe mujhse kon bachayega handsome! Saying this she blinks at him & give him a flying kiss :* while Aaditya gets sooo terrified & he hides behind Aditi & holds her hand tightly.
COMING UP NEXT:
1. ANARKALI TROUBLES AADITYA & OTHERS.
2. MURDER IN MR. BUT WHOSE?????
NOTE: Thanks diipendu for giving me Bobby Darling’s idea
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Very cute scenes btn adi and aadi...
I cant wait for suspence to unfold
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