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Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
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Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
Love can change life, Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai is set on the picture where two lovers cross every hurdles together.
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*MR*
Aadi grasps Aditi’s hand & pulls her wherever he went. Aadi runs as if some ghost is following him. Aditi tries to pull her hand back but she cudn’t bcoz of Aadi’s tight grip. Aditi: Aaditya tum kya kar rahe hoo?” Aadi says rung as fast as possible looking in all directions: Woh uss bohot se bhaag raha hoo.” Saying this he increases his pace while Aditi says: Aadi samne dek….” But b4 she cud complete her sentence Aadi bumps someone. Tht is Daya.
Aadi bumps Daya soo hard that Aadi repels back & bumps Aditi & both fall hard on the floor. The incident happens so quick that Daya doesn’t realize wht just happened. He peeps down at them & Aditi sees Daya in front of them. She gets soo annoyed. Daya helps Aditi to get up but b4 he cud ask her whether she is f9 she starts yelling at him. Pointing at Daya she says: TUM! Tumhare problem kya hai yaar! Huh??? Kyun hummaesha KHAMBE ki tarah khade rehte hoo??? Aur hummesha mujhe he KYUN COOT POHCHATE HOO??”
Aadi mourns: Aaaa.. Aditi mujhe lag gaye…!” Aditi abruptly loses her angry & turns towards Aadi & says: ohh Aadi! Kya hoa? Kaha laga?” Aditi blows where Aadi had got hurt & helps him to get up. Aadi: Kya Daya?? Dekhkar chalna chaheye tha na!” Daya: Sorry.” Aditi gives him a stink eye & takes Aadi towards his room & Daya follows her.
Daya gets confused as why always Aditi misunderstands him. He sees Abhijit who was watching this whole incident. Daya: Abhijit yaar hummesha mere saath aisa kyun hota hai? Galati Aaditya kit hi aur Aditi ne mujhe data!” Daya makes an annoying kid like face. Looking at Daya’s face Abhijit laughs aloud. Daya gets more annoyed. Sensing Daya’s angry Abhijit controls his laugh & says: Tum ek kaam karo. Jitna hoo sake Aadi & Aditi ke saath raho. Subha MR mein aur Raat ko ghar mein. Ok?” Daya just nods.
*After 1hr*
Aditi is walking towards the garden busy reading her patient’s file when she abruptly stops. She sees Daya was hiding behind the pillar. The way he was hiding made Aditi giggle. He was standing straight & still. Then he peeps to see some1 but again hides. She gets confused & peeps where Daya’s looking. He was hiding from Anarkali. Daya learns tht Aditi was standing near the wall. He watches her, leaning against the wall with her hands folded, staring at him. Then she looks at Anarkali who was busy searching him & Aditi giggles. Aditi sees Aadi hiding behind the sofa.
When Anarkali was having her back towards them Aditi goes towards Daya tiptoe. Daya thinks that Aditi is coming towards him but she turns towards the sofa where Aadi was hiding. Daya also follows her. She taps on Aadi’s shoulder & Aadi gets happy to see her. Aadi innocently says: Aditi dekho na. Yeh bhootni hummara pecha he nhi chhodte hai.” Aditi giggles & says: Tum darro mat. Chalo mere saath. Main Anarkali ko bolti hoo ki woh tumhe na sataye. Thik hai?” Aadi nods.
Aditi goes towards Anarkali with Aadi & Daya. Aadi walks behind Aditi holding her dupatta. Looking at them Anarkali gets very happy. She says in a girlish manner: Ohh! Toh tum dona sofa ke peche chupe the! Huh?” Anarkali comes near Aadi & tries to touch his face but Aditi comes in btwn. Aditi in a stern voice: Anarkali tum Aaditya ko kyun sata rahi hoo? Aadi darr jata hai.” Anarkali replies moving her hands: Main kya karo? Woh toh sab se darta hai!” Adit: Dekho yaha ka rule hai. Tumne agar kissi ko daraya toh tumhe outhouse mein sift kiya jayega jaha koi nahi hai. Tumhe akele rehna hoga.” Ignoring Aditi Anarkali replies: Toh kya hoa? Maine kissise nahi darte.” Aditi: Aacha! Thik hai.”
Calling Ramesh she says: Ramesh tum woh outhouse open kardo jo ( looking at Anarkali) JUNGLE mein hai.” Listening to this Anarkali’s eyes gets widened. She says in a terrified tone: Kya! Jungle mein hai?” Aditi: Ha! Jaha bohot se saap, chuhe rehte hai.” Anarkali: Nahi nahi!!!! Mujhe nhi jana outhouse mein! Maine wahi rehonge. Maine Aaditya ko nahi sataungee. Maine toh Aaditya ko jante bhi nahi….” Saying this Anarkali runs towards her room. Looking at Anarkali Aadi, Aditi & Daya laugh aloud. Aadi claps his hand. Aadi watches Riya & Yash near the pillar & runs towards them. Aadi: Riya! Yash! Tum dono ne dekha?” Riya & Yash both smile & nod. Aadi continues: Aditi ne uss bhootni ko bhaga diya!!! Yipppieee!!!!!” Aadi starts dancing holding Riya’s & Yash hand.
Raghu who is hiding behind the wall sees the whole incident & thinks that he should frame Anarkali for Aaditya’s Murder. And slowly he starts webbing his plans.
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Aditi tells Ramesh to bring all patients down to the garden as their Music class was going to start. Ramesh gathers all patients in the garden.
*After few mins in MR*
Aditi had hired a band people to sing & entertain her patients a day before. At first the band people were afraid abt how their ill patients will react. The band head to Aditi: Madam agar aapke patients panic hoo gaye toh…” Aditi cutting him in brwn, says: Aap plz cinta mat kigeye. Kuch nhi hoga.” After continuous pleading the band agree.
When the band arrives they get terrified to few patients but later when all the patients enjoy their song the band feel relaxed. All patients were dancing with their nurses when Raghu arrives. Aaditya asks Aditi to dance with him. Aadi: Aditi chalo na hum dance karte hai!” Aditi smiles & nods. Aadi holds her hand & starts dancing. Raghu watches Aaditya & Aditi dancing then he sees Daya standing behind them. Raghu thinks: Yeh zeher mujhe Aaditya ko lagana hoga. Yeh ek he needle baki hai. Agar yeh needle gir gaya toh main Aadi ko maar nhi paunga.
Raghu slowly walks towards them. When Raghu get close to them Daya’s mobile rings. Daya gets confused as the phone displayed UNKNOWN NUMBER. Daya accepts the call & says: Hello”. He wasn’t able to hear properly so he turns & goes away from the crowd. Raghu gets happy that his plan was working properly. Raghu opens the needle & injects it.
BUT Aadi unknowingly turns & the needle strike on the back of Ramesh, the ward boy. Ramesh feels as if something has bitten his back. He feels someone standing behind him & b4 he cud turn Raghu disappears from there.
Ramesh starts feeling itchy. He scratches on his back. Aditi watches him. She goes near to him & asks: Kya hoa Ramesh? Tum thik hoo na? Kya tumhe itching hoo rahe hai?” Ramesh ignoring his itching says: Mam maine thik hoo. Mungee ne kata hoo. Aap chinta mat karo.” Ramesh smiles & Aditi smiles back. Ramesh takes all the patients towards their room. After few mins Ramesh goes home.
After few mins, Aditi comes towards Aadi’s room. Aadi was busy playing with his cube. Aditi to Aadi: Aadi maine chalti hoo. Thik hai? Kal jaldi aati hoo. Ok?” Aadi smiles & nods. He says: Ok.” Sachin comes & tells: Daya Sir Aap ghar jao. Main ab duty par hoo.” Yash: Aur maine bhi toh. Aadi thik hoga.” Daya agrees. As Daya goes out of the room, a ward boy named Surya brings tea for Yash & Sachin.
*At parking lot in MR*
Daya sees Aditi goes towards her car. Aditi was opening her car door. He goes towards her & asks: Main tumhe ghar chhod do?” She gets taken aback from the question so she turns towards Daya. She says: Par mere paas meri gaadi hai.” Daya: Haa, par aapki jaan ko bhi khatra hoo sakta hai.” Aditi smiles which make Daya’s heart bounce. ^_^
Aditi says: No thank u. (Pointing at Riya who was standing behind Daya) Main aur Riya shopping ke liye r ja rahe hai.” Daya turns & watches Riya. Riya smiles at him & Daya smiles back. He feels sad about the deny. He says: Thik hai.”
Aditi hears something & when she turns back she watches Aadi (Parking lot was just behind Aaditya’s room) He gets happy that Aditi sees him. With one hand holding the cube & other hand waving he shouts: Byeeee!!!” Aditi keeps her hand on her hear & keeps her finger on her lips tellg him not to shout. Aditi realizes that Aadi was making the noise by hittg his cube on the grill. She smiles & waves her hand.
Looking at that Aadi gives her his million dollar smile. He waves to Riya & Riya waves it back. He gives Aditi & Riya a flying kiss. Both Riya & Aditi laugh aloud. They too give him a flying kiss. Yash who was standing beside Aadi laughs at the scene. Adit & Riya sit in the car.
Aadi, Yash & Daya watches Aditi & Riya getting out of the gate & disappearing from the sight.
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The night was too cold. It was around 15 degree. Aditi & Riya were driving towards their house. As trees had fallen on the shortcut road they had to take the long route which not only connected their house route but also MR route. Aditi & Riya had little lowered their windows. As Aditi was slowly driving enjoying the chill breeze they were nearing the section where the route was divided into two, one road tht lead towards their house & another to MR. Suddenly a person comes running towards the car & hits the car. They get terrified & Aditi hits the brakes & car comes to a halt.
Aditi & Riya climb down the car & run towards the person. Aditi sees light in front of the road where the road divided into two. It was truck’s head light, she thinks. The person was lying on the road with his face down. Aditi bends down & turns the person & gets shell shocked to see Aadi lying.
Riya & Aditi together shout: AADI!” Riya bends down & holds Aadi’s head. He had got hurt on his forehead. Aditi runs towards the light & sees A Yellow truck standing there with its engine off. Aditi runs to wards Riya & picks up Aadi. She says: Riya chal, Aadi ko lekar ghar chalte hai. Jaldi.” Riya & Aditi pick up Aadi & make him sleep on the backseat of the car. They sit into the car & rush towards their house.
*Aditi’s house*
Aadi is lying on the bed while Aditi, Riya, Rahul, Diya & ACP with his team except Sachin surrounding him. Riya runs towards ACP & asks: Mamaji kya Yash aur Sachin ka phone nahi lag raha hai?” ACP: Nahi beta. (Looking at Abhijit & Vineet) Tum dono jao aur dekho ke kya hoa hai. Thik hai.” Both: Yes Sir.”
Aadi gets conscious. He looks around & gets happy to see everyone. He runs towards Aditi & hugs her. He cries & says: Aditi thank u mujhe bachane warna mujhe bhoot kha jata!” Everyone gets astonished. Aditi: Kya? Bhoot?” From the corner of the room Freddy jumps & shouts: Bhoott!! MR mein bhoot hai!!!!” Saying this he runs out of the room. Everyone gets puzzled at Freddy’s reaction ^_^. ACP hits his head on his hand & says: Main kaha fhas gaya!”
Aditi looks at Aadi & asks: Kya hoa Aadi? Tumne bhoot ko kaha dekha?” Aadi: Mere room ke bahar aur window ke bahar bhi.” Aditi: Yash aur Sachin ne bhi dekha?” Aadi nodding in –ve: Nahi. Woh dono toh soo rahe the. Maine unhe bohot uthane ki koshish ki par woh uthe nahi.” Listening to this everyone gets terrified.
*After few mins*
ACP & his team enter the house with Sachin & Yash. Daya was holding Yash while Abhijit & Vineet hold Sachin. Both were fast asleep. Freddy at first didn’t want to go with his team at MR in fear of ghost but as he was more afraid of ACP’s anger he had to join them.
Yash & Sachin were laid on the sofa. Riya asks in a terrified tone: Mamaji! Kya hoa?” ACP: Beta innhe need ki dava dee hai. Aur sirf inhe nahi balki pura MR ke staff ko.” Rahul, Diya, Aditi & Riya together: KYA??!!” ACP: Haa. Watchman se lekar nurses aur ward boys tak. Mujhe lagta hai ki yeh sab pre planned tha. Aadi ko maarne ke liye.” Everyone gets terrified. Rahul, Diya & Aditi wonder as who did this. Later Sachin & Yash were taken to their room. Both were fast asleep. Rahul says to ACP & his team to stay with him & ACP agrees. Everyone gets happy that Aaditya is safe.
Aditi was wiping the blood from Aadi’s forehead with a cotton ball. Riya helps Aditi by giving her the medicine. Aadi looks at Aditi & gets carried away with her beauty. She hadn’t applied any makeup but still was looking super awesome. Aditi applies medicines on the wound & suddenly his wound starts paining. Aadi: Ouch! Aditi! Dheere! Dukh raha hai. Aste karo na plzz.” Aditi: Ohh sorry Aadi!” She starts blowing on his wound & applies medicines. It starts giving Aadi goose bumps . And then their eyes meet. Both get lost in each other’s eyes. Riya looks at both of them & gets happy.
Suddenly Rahul & Diya enter the room. Aditi & Aadi gets conscious. Rahul says: Aditi!” Aditi gets panicked. What is wrong, she wonders. Rahul: Aditi Ramesh ka accident ho gaya hai. Ussme……..ushme uski maut hoo gaye hai.” Lsitenign to this Aditi gets shocked!
COMING UP NEXT:
1. Aditi, Rahul, Diya & Daya goes to Ramesh house.
2. They learn truth behind Ramesh’s death.
3. More Aadi-Aditi romantic scenes.
NOTE: Thanks Diipendu for giving me the best idea of Aadi rung away from MR & abt romantic scenes
By Usha & Diipendu.
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Episode was interesting and its getting more interesting...add some romantic scenes in next episodes...
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humare zamane mein tou hum roya karte thhe...hahaha
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Daya ka aditi pe marna ..
Aur Aadi ka pyaar for aditi ...
I m awaiting for next episode jismein to bas khojana hai
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* ADITI’S HOUSE*
Aditi is applying anti-septic cream on Aadi’s wound when Rahul & Diya enter the room. Aditi looks at them & asks: Kya hoa?” Rahul says: Aditi Ramesh ka accident ho gaya hai. Ussme……..ushme uski maut hoo gaye hai.”Aditi gets stunned: Kya!!” Aadi looks at Aditi & asks: Kya hua Ramesh ko?” Riya says: Bhai kuch nahi. Woh bemar hai.” Aditi looks at Aadi giving him a short smile. She says: Kuch nhi Aadi. Tum soo jao. Tumhe choot lagi hai na. Isliye tum ab aaram karo. Thik hai?” Aadi nods sadly. Aditi makes Aadi sleep & comes out of his room. Vineet says that he’ll look after Aadi whole night. Rahul says: Thik hai. (Turning towards Aditi he adds) Adi humme kal subha Ramesh ke ghar jana padega.” Aditi nods & says: Pata nahi Ramesh ki patni ka kya haal hooa hoga. Woh toh ghar mein akela kamane wala hai.”
*NEXT DAY*
Riya is lying beside Yash, caressing his soft hair. He slowly opens his eyes & looks at Riya giving her a cute smile. Riya, still caressing his hair, smiles back to him. She says: Needh puri hoo gaye tumhare?” He slowly nods & gets up. He rubs his face with his palm & slowly stretches his neck from left to right. Suddenly he realizes that he is at Aditi’s home. He turns towards Riya & asks in anxious tone: Riya maine yaha kaise aaya? Maine toh MR mein than na? Aur Aadi kaha hai??” He abruptly gets up & starts search Aadi in each room. He went to the last room of the 1st floor & opened the door. He finds Aadi playg with Cube while Aditi is feeding him syrup.
“Aadi!” Yash calls. Aaditya & Aditi looks at him. Aadi runs towards him & hugs him tightly. Yash hugs him back. Yash notices Aadi’s wounds & gets anxious. He turns towards Aditi & asks: Kya hoa? Aadi ko yeh coot kaise lagi? Aur hum dono toh MR meinthe na, fir yaha kaise aa gaye?” At the same time ACP, Daya, Abhijit, Sachin & others enters the room. Looking at Sachin Yash asks: Tum toh humare saath the na? Toh..” Yash continuously keeps on askg questns. Riya interrupting inbtwn says: Yash shant ho gao! Relax.” She makes him & Aadi sit on bed & starts explaing the whole last night incident. Learning abt the attack on Aadi makes Yash more anxious.
Aadi pulls Yash’s face towards him & with an innocent expression he says: Yash tummhe pata hai mere saath kya hoa…….” He nonstop keeps on narrating abt wht happened to him & how he got hurt. Everyone watched Aadi’s face expression with amusement. Aadi’s talks makes Yash & Riya very happy. Then coming to a stop he asks: Tumhe pata hai maine jab uss bhoot ko dekh tha toh main kitna darr gaya tha??? Maine tumhe aur Sachin ko kitna uthaya tha! Tum dono nhi uthe.” Yash turns towards ACP & asks: Mamaji aise kaise? Aadi jabhi mujhe uthata hai toh main jaldi utha jata hoo, phir kal kaise nhi utha?” Sachin says: Kyunki hum dono ko needh ki davaye de gaye the.” ACP adds: Sirf tum dono ko he nhi balki MR ke sabhi staff ko, doctors, nurses, wardboys, yeh davaye khelaye gaye the.” Yash says: Par mamaji itne security hone bavajoodh aisa kaise hoo gaya?” Daya: Maybe MR ka koi mila hoa hoga.”
“Impossible”, says Aditi. She looks & Adit & says: Aadi tum yahi baitho, hum sab abhi aate hai.” Aaditya simple nods & starts playing with his cube.
They come out of Aadi’s room & enter the hall. Coming in front of Daya, Aditi says: MR ka koi aisa kabhi bhi kar nahi sakta. Aur waise bhi MR ke sare staff toh behoosh the na?” Daya says: Par patients toh behoosh nhi the na.” Aditi gives him a suspicious look & asks: Matlab?? Mere patients jo mentally ill hai woh yeh sab karnege??” Daya just nods to Aditi’s question. Aditi again asks in an irritated tone with her both hands in the air: Yeh kaise hoo sakta hai??” Daya replies in a soft tone: Hone ko toh kuch bhi hoo sakta hai.” Now everyone give him a doubtful look. Daya smiles looking down & then faces Aditi & says: Annarkali.
Aditi gets still after hearing Annarkali’s name. Is it possible?-she wondered. But then she thought that it is possible. Maybe Annarkali is an imposter, entered MR with an intension to kill Aadi. That is why she or he () was running behind Aadi just to make ppl think that she or he is in love with Aadi. I hadn’t thought Monish will do such a chea work; but he can do this; if he can kill his own wife then he can do anything, she understands. Daya looks at her; he senses that now even she is giving it a thought abt wht he said or maybe also agrees with him. Daya again asks in a soft tone: Kya mujhe Annarkali ki file mil sakti hai?” She gives him a narrow look as if she still disagrees but then taking a deep breath she nods.
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The Scorpio car is travelling at 50km/hr speed breaking the air & making its way. Daya, Rahul & Aditi had decided to go first at Ramesh’s house & then at MR where Rahul will give info abt Annarkali to Vinnet & Freddy, who r following the Scorpio in a Yamaha bike. In the car, Daya is on the driver seat, Rahul beside him while Aditi is sittg on the backside of the seat. It was Aditi’s decision to sit behind which didn’t please Daya at all. He wanted her to sit beside him; b4 he could offer her to sit beside him Rahul had already taken the seat. Rahul is tellg the directions to reach Ramesh’s house. As they arrive Daya suddenly applies a brake which gives Aditi a jerk. Realizing abt it Daya turns back to see how Aditi is. As he turns back he watches Aditi gives him a angry stare. All her hair had came in front of her face. Daya tries to ask but keeps mum after lookg at Aditi’s angry. Rahul quietly giggles.
Actually Ramesh’s house or room is in a small chawl. They climb down the car & move towards the house. It wasn’t difficult for Daya to find which house was of Ramesh’s as a lot of people in white dress have gathered near a house. Aditi is wearing a plain white kurta payjama with a white kada on her right hand & watch on her left hand. Rahul is wearing white kurta on black jeans while Daya is wearing white shirt with blue jeans. They enter the house; the house wasn’t that big. The paint of walls has worn out. It is 1BHK house with very small rooms. Aditi sees Ramesh deceased body was placed in the center of the hall. Ramesh’s mother, wife & kids r sittg on the left side of the body while his two younger brothers’ r sittg on the right. Looking at his brothers Rahul’s blood starts boiling.
When Ramesh was alive they didn’t even care to ask abt Ramesh’s family & now y have they come. When they didn’t come when their mother was seriously ill, then how come they hav come now? When they didnt care where Ramesh lived or died then why have they come in his funeral? There must be some fishy, Rahul thinks.
Ramesh didn’t have good relation with his brothers. They were always behind him to sell this house & share the money among them. Also his brothers weren’t ready to look after their mother. That is why his mother had given the house to Ramesh as his younger brothers had their own house in the same colony. But how could Ramesh sell this house where he was born n brought up? Then where will he take his family & live? When Ramesh said he didn’t want to sell the house his brothers had threatened him tht they will throw his family out. At this stage Rahul had helped Ramesh & given complaint in police; from tht moment his brothers didn’t dare to threaten Ramesh. They didn’t hav a tear in their eyes, Rahul learns.
Looking at Rahul Ramesh’s brothers tried to ignore him. They are still afraid of him. Aditi sitis btwn Ramesh’s mother & wife & they both hug her tightly & burst out crying. Aditi hugs them back & try to console them. Ramesh’s kids, one girl of 5yrs & one boy of 3yrs r still puzzled as y their grandmother & mother r crying & y their father is not gettg up even if they did their best to wake him up. Rahul tries to cheerup the kids but all in vain. Looking at Ramesh’s wife, one of Ramesh brother Mahesh says: Bhabhi aap plz mat royeye. Sab thik ho gayega.” Mahesh looks at his brother Suresh & nods: Suresh says: Pata nahi abhi bhabhi kya karege? Ghar kaise chalayege? Paise kaha se ayenge?” Mahesh suddenly says: Bhahi aap yeh ghar bhej digiye. Aur…”
B4 he could complete his sentence: Rahul says: Isiliye aaye the tum yaha par hai na?? Tab Ramesh ne nhi bhecha par ab bhabhi jaroor bhejege warna paise kaha se layege?” Mahesh gets up & says: Aap ko itni chinta kyun hai bhabhi ki? Kya rishta hai aapka.” Listening to this Rahul gets furious & says: Behen hai yeh meri!! Aur kuch!!” B4 Mahesh cud say anythg Daya comes towards them n grabs each one in each of his hands & says ht hez from CID & if they speak any rubbish things he’ll through them in to the jail.
Suddenly something catches Daya’s eyes. He leaves them n peeps at the deceased body. Ramesh’s hand has turned blue. Oh No!, exclaims Daya. He looks at Aditi & Rahul & calls him towards the body n asks them to take a look at the body. When they look at the hand they turn white in shock. Aditi looks at Rahul n then at Daya & says: Isska sharer toh neela padh gaya hai. Iska matlab….. Ramesh ko zeher diya hai?” Daya nods. The pandit who has come to do the funeral asks to Ramesh’s wife: Abhi humme Shamshaan jana hai.” Daya interrupts: Nahi!!!”
Aditi goes towards Ramesh’s wife Riddhi & says: Riddhi Ramesh ko kisi ne zeher diya hai. Pura sharer neela padh gaya hai.” Daya comes towards Riddhi & says: Isliye Ramesh ka post mortem karna hoga.” Listeng to this Ramesh’s family & colony ppl get perplexed. Daya calls Dr. Salunke & explains him everythg. Dr agrees & asks him to send the body to the hospital.
As they move towards their car Aditi comes towards Daya & asks: Post mortem Dr. Salunke kyun karenge?” Daya looks at her & says: Aditi Ramesh MR mein kaam karta tha. Iska use din khoon hoa hai jis din Aaditya MR se bhaga ya jab kissne Aadi ko marne ke koshish ki.” Aditi nodg in –ve says: Ramesh ka MR ke bahar accident hoa tha. Toh..” Interupptg in btwn Daya says: Toh use zeher kab diya gaya tha??” Aditi quickly answers: MR ke bahar.” Daya: R u sure??” Aditi gives him a puzzled look. Saying this Daya asks her & Rahul to sit in the car & they drive off.
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Aditi explains what all happened at Ramesh’s house. Diya: Par use zeher kisne diya hoga?” Daya: Wahi toh pata lagana hai.” At the same time Dr. Salunke comes towards ACP & tells: Daya sahi keh raha hai. Ramesh ko zeher diya gaya hai. Peetha par. Kisi needle ya injection se.” ACP asks: TOh kya use pata nhi chala hoga jab use yeh injection laga hoga??” Salunke: Yeh needle bohot patli hai. Jab use laga hoga tab use kaise feel hoa hoga jaise kisse macchar ya cheti ne kata hoo.” Aditi gets up from the sofa & says: Matlab use zeher MR mein diya gaya tha!” Everybody give a strange look. Rahul: Matlab??” Aditi tells him that Ramesh was feeling itchy at his back yesterday. She had also asked him abt it but he just said it must be an ant.
All were sitting on the couch wondering abt Ramesh’s murder. Diya asks: LEkin Ramesh ko koi MR mein aa kar kyun marega? MR mein toh itne security hoti hai.” Rahul: Par use koi marega he kyun?” Daya: Kyunki koi peche sabot nhi rakhna chata tha.” All give him a puzzled look. Turning towards Salunke Daya asks: Doctor sahab yeh zeher kitne ghanto baad asar hota hai?” Salunke: 5-6 ghanto baad..”
Daya says looking at his watch: Matlab raat ke 11-12 baje.” Turning towards others he says: Agar Aditi se hesab se Ramesh ko zeher 5.50pm ko diya gaya that oh uski maut raat ke 11 se 12 baje ke beech hoo jati.” Vineet: Par uski maut accident mein hoo gaye.” Daya turns towards Vineet & says: Vineet ek kaam karo. Tum aur Freddy waha jao jaha Ramesh ka accident hoa tha. Logo se pucho ki unhone kya dekha. Thik hai?” Both nod n move out.
Aditi asks: Par use kisne zeher diya hoga aur kyun?: Daya: Taki woh khooni ka naam na bataye.” Aditi gives him a blank look. Daya adds: Mujhe aisa lagta hai ki Ramesh ne he Aaditya ko MR ke bahar laya use dara kar. Isliye…” Aditi abruptly gets up n says: No. Not possible. Ramesh aisa kuch nhi kar sakta hai.” Daya too gets up n answers: R u sure?” She turns towards him n says: R u sure???” Daya nods in -ve. Aditi gives him a smile & turns towards ACP. ACP looks at Daya & Daya says: Mujhe aisa lagta hai..” Aditi interrupts: Aisa lagta hai?????? Prove ur self Inspector. Mujhe Ramesh par pura vishvass hai. Usne MR mein itne saal kaam kiya hai. Woh aisa kabhi bhi nhi kar sakta.” Daya nods & says: Thik hai. Main kuch proofs lata hoo jo meri yeh theory ko sacch sabit karega.” Aditi nods & says: Thik hai.” Daya takes Abhijit with him to find more clues & proofs.
*After 1hr*
Aditi is busy cleaning her room Yash enters. Aadi is sitting on the couch with Gungun, busying painting. Yash comes towards Aditi & says: Aditi kal Riya ka b’dy hai. Toh maine usske liye gift liya hai. He shows her a diamond set which included a necklace, earrings & 2 bangles. Aadi looks at them & gets curious to know what Yash is showing to Aditi. Aadi & Gungun run towards Yash & Aditi & peep at the diamond set. Aadi cries out: Woo….” Aditi interrupts & says: Sshhhhh!” Aadi bends towards Yash & Aditi & says in a slow voice: Wooowww!” Aditi, Gungun & Yash giggle at Aadi which makes Aaditya laugh. He asks: Aditi kya yeh tumahre liye hai?” Aditi: Nahi aadi, yeh Riya ke liye hai. Kal uska b’day hai na, iss liye.” Learning this Aadi shouts: B’day!!!!!”; to which Aditit & Yash say by putting finger on their lips: Shhhhh!!” Aadi again whispers in a funny manner: B’dayyyyyyy!”
Looking at Aadi’s wide eyes Aditi, Gungun & Yash burst out laughing. Aadi: Main bhi usske liye gift banaunga. Aditi: Ohh kya doge use?” Aadi: Woh toh ek surprise hai!” Aditi looks at Yash & says: Ohhhhhhh surprise hai. (Coming close to Aadi) Mujhe bhi toh batao!” Aadi nods in –ve & turning his back to her says: Nahi!!” Aditi runs in front of him; making an innocent face she asks: Aree yeh kya baath hoye! Tum mujhe nhi bataoge?” He again nods in negative: Shyam ko dekh lena!” Saying this he takes his colors & books & goes into his room. He doesn’t even look back at her.
*At 12am*
Others leisurely enter Riya & Yash’s room making sure that they don’t make any noise. Yash & others had made a plan to wish Riya exactly at 12am. Riya’s head is restg on Yash. Yash places a soft kiss on her forehead & whispers on her ear Happy B’day. She slowly opens her eyes & gives him a cute smile. Taking a deep breath she replies in a slow voice: Thank u.” Mesmerized by her smile Yash bends to kiss her; they suddenly realize that everyone are standing by the door, watching their romance n giggling. Yash & Riya both abruptly sit up, embarrassed.
Diya says: Oh! Sorry… U both continue with your romance, hum baad mein aate hai.” Aditi interrupts & says: Aree! Yeh kya baat hoye? Hum sab yaha b’day wish karne aaye hai aur humme bhagaya jar aha hai!!” Diya tries to stop her but Aditi goes on babbling. Riya climbs down the bed & says: Oho sorry yaar! Chal ab mujhe b’dy wish kar.” Ignoring Riya Aditi says: Ja! Mujhe nhi karna.” Riya comes in front & says: Oye! Bas kar ab! Itna akad mat. Warna teri naak tamatar ki tarah lal- lal hoo jayege.” They look at each other & both together Aditi chuckle out. Aditi says: A’ppie B’day dear.” “Thanks.” They hug each other.
Rahul & Diya gift Riya with a lovely saree wishing her “Happy B’day baccha” They hug Riya gently. ACP & his team gift Riya a beautiful gold ring. Riya places the ring in her left hand’s index finger & shows to ACP & says: Thank u mamaji”. He chuckles & places his hand on her head & she hugs him tightly. He says: Shefali hoti toh woh tumhe sone ka kuch toh deti. Isliye maine socha kiwoh na sahi main toh de sakta hoo na.” Riya (tears flowing off her eyes): Mamaji mujhe yeh gift bohot- bohot aacha laga!”
Yash comes towards her & wipes off her tears & hands over a diamond set to her. Looking at the beautiful set Riya says: Wow! It’s pretty!” She gives him a wide smile & says in a childish manner: Thanks!” Riya’s childish manner makes Yash give out a little laugh; he hugs her tightly & kisses her on her forehead. Aditi stands behind Riya & makes a coughing noise. As Riya turns around Aditi places the gift on Riya’s hands. Aditi had brought Riya’s favorite perfume bottle. Riya: Hey thanks yaar!”
“Kya main bhi gift doo?” Recognizing Aaditya’s voice Riya looks towards the door. Aadi & Gunnu are standing at the door step with their hands behind then as if they are hiding something. Aadi’s presence makes Riya happier. She runs towards him & hugs him tightly. He hugs her gently & wishes with his cute smile: Happy B’dy Riya.” Riya brings him into the room. He places a canvas covered in a bubble wrap on her hand. Riya removes the bubble wrap & gets stunned by looking at the picture.
The canvas is sketch of Riya; the carvings the color, the perfection of the sketch made it look so real.
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Tears pour out Riya’s eyes, she says: Thank u Bhaiya!” They hug each other tightly. Leaving him she says: Maine toh socha tha iss b’dy pe mujhe koi bhi painting nahi milege.” Aadi: Tujhe yeh painting aache lagi?” Riya wipes out her tears & nods her head: Ha, bohot aache lage!!” Learning this Aadi starts clapping his hands cheerfully. Aditi: Aadi yeh sketch bohot khoosbsurat hai, par tumhe yeh canvas kisne lakar diya?” Aadi: Daya ne. Maine usse kaha toh woh jaldi se mere liye le aaya.” Aditi looks at Daya & gives him a small smile. Her smile made his heart do somersault ( )
After few mins, Yash & Daya decide to stay with Aadi in his room while Aditi will stay with Riya as usual. So Yash goes towards Riya & gives her a kiss on her cheeks & says Good Night. Aadi comes towards Aditi & asks her about a picture which is on her right side. When she turns to her right, quickly Aadi kisses on her left cheek & says: Good Night!” The kiss makes her stunned but before she could say anything Aadi runs towards his room. Coming into senses Aditi runs behind Aadi to hit him. Looking at the hilarious scenario everyone one burst out laughing except Daya. He brings fake smile on his smile. Somewhere down in his heart he felt jealous. And this jealousness is sensed by both Yash & Riya.
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Rahul, Diya & Aditi had taken off from MR. So Rahul delegated authority & responsibility to Dr. Pankaj, Anup & Anushka. Also Gungun didn’t go to school. Diya is busy preparing cake & snacks with Aditi. Rahul, Gunnu & Aadir doing the decoration work. ACP is sitting on a couch opposite Riya. He tells Daya & Nikhil to go to bank & check Ramesh’s account & again ask the people who witnessed the accident of Ramesh. Daya agrees & says he’ll try he’s best to find out the killer. As he moves towards the main door Aditi comes out of the kitchen.
“Sun !” Daya thinks that she has called him. He turns back at Aditi. Aditi asks: Riya lunch mein aloo paratha aur dal khichdi banunge aur dinner mein chicken biryani hoga toh chale ga na?” Riya: Ha baba, mujhe dal khichdi aur chicken pasand hai yeh toh tu janti hai na.” Aditi smiles & says: Ha, pata hai. Maine isliye pucha ki tujhe kuch aur khane ka man kar raha hai kya?” Riya : Na! kuch chaheye hoga toh bol dungi.” Aditi: Thik hai.” Saying this she moves into the kitchen. She doesn’t even know that from last 5 mins Daya was busy looking at her. But this is sensed by Nikhil & Yash.
Yash gestures Riya to look at Daya who is still looking at the kitchen door with a hope tht Aditi will come out & ask him to stay back. Coming out of his senses he wonders why he is even keeping this hope. He is an officer & he doesn’t forge his duties. Daya tells Nikhil to come & they again move towards the main door when Riya calls him. Riya: Daya aaj rehne do na. (Looking at ACP) Mamaji aaj inn sab ko chutti de do na. Sab ghar par baith kar maje karnege.” At the same times Aditi comes out of the kitchen & says: Ha, waise bhi kitne din hoo gaye hai aap sab ne chutti nahi le hai. Aaj chutti leligeye.” ACP nodes & says to Daya: Daya aaj rehne do. Kal chale jana. Waise bhi mahine hoo gaye hai tum mein se kisne bhi chutti nahi le hai.” Daya silently nods but from his heart he is very happy that Aditi indirectly stopped him. This happiness reflected on his face which turns him into pink. His happiness is sensed by whole CID team including Yash & Riya.
Riya mobile starts vibrating; a numbers flashes on the mobile screen but cancels the call.
*At Evening*
Diya places the chocolate cake on the table & calls Riya to cut the cake. Everyone gathers around the table & Riya cuts the cake. First she takes a slice of cake, places it in front of Shefali’s photo & prays to her. Aaditya also prays to Shefali. Later Riya feeds cake to Aaditya, ACP, Gungun, Aditi Rahul, Diya & Yash. Riya turns towards Rahul & says: Mujhe aapse ek aur gift chaheye.” Rahul: Ek aur?” Diya & Aditi giggle; Rahul continues: Thik hai. Kya chaheye tujhe?” Riya gestures Yash & he nods. He does into his room & brings a huge gift wrap box. Rahul gets confused about the box & asks: Kya.. mere liye gift hai kya?” Riya: Ha, yehi samaj ligiye.” Aadi: Riya mujhe bhi return gift chaheye!!!” Everyone laughs aloud; Riya says: Haa Bhaiya, return gift aapko jaroor milega.”
Yash gives the box to Rahul & Rahul unwraps the gift. He gets astonished to see a new Guitar. He says: Yeh!” Aditi & Diya cry out: Wooww!” Riya: Haa, Yash ne uss din store room mein aapka purana tuta guitar dekha tha. Toh humne socha kuch na aapko naya guitar gift kiya jaye!” Rahul’s eyes gets little watery; he says cupping Riya’s face: Thank you.” Riya: Thank you bolne se kuch nahi hoga! Baja kar sunana padega!” “Par Riya ab aadadt choot gaye hai, aur aawaj bhi thik…..” Riya interrupting: Vahini dekho nab hai ko, kitne nakhare kar rahe hai.” Rahul: Diya tum he bolo…” “Riya itna keh rahi hai toh uski wish puri kijiye na” ACP: Ha! Bohot saal hogaye tumhari aawaj sune hoye, kuch gunguna lo!” Aadi & Gunnu: Ha! Ha! Kuch gao na!” Rahul turns towards Riya & asks: Konsa gaana sunana hai” Riya: Wahi jo hum pehele gaate the! Aur… Aditi & Vahine ho bhi saath dena hoga! Main bhi dunge!”
“Mujhe gaana yaad nahi hai”, Aditi says. Riya: Oyee!! Chal jhooti! Gaan toh tune he lekha tha na?” Aditi: Ha… par…” Riya: Par var kuch nahi, ab tu natak mat kar.Samjhe?” Aditi nods & says: Thik hai. Diya fills fireplace with small wood logs; the climate had got quite chilly. Rahul & Diya are sitting in such a way that they are 10 fet way from fireplace; Riya & Yash to their right & Aditi to their left, Aadi & Gungun are sitting near window which is left to Rahul. ACP & his team are sitting on the couch near Rahul. Due to fire the whole place had turns yellowish.
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[Rahul plays guitar & Riya asks Aditi to start singing.
[Aditi smiles & sings; Daya gets astonished to hear her voice]
Kehte hain khuda ne is jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai us rab ka ishara maano
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye (Aditi Gesturing Riya to sing)
[Riya sings]
Kehte hain khuda ne is jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai us rab ka ishara maano
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye [ Riya gets confused as she couldn’t remember the further para of the song]
[Aditi sings to remind Riya]
Kuch toh hai tujhse raaaaaabta
[Riya sings, she snaps her finger as she remembers the para]
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
[Aditi sings]
Kaise hum jaane hume kyaaaaa pata
[Riya sings]
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
[Riya sings holiding Yash’s arms, indicating him]
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
[Diya places her hand on Rahul’s arms & sings looking at him]
Jeene ki wajah yahi hai marna isi ke liye
[ACP & his team enjoy; Smilingly Aditi sings]
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liyeeeeee.
[The guitar plays, Rahul sings; Aadi comes towards her & pulls her towards him & starts dancing but while dancing he turned round & round instead of turning Aditi(lolz); this makes Aditi laugh Aadi’s heart starts beating faster; looking at Aditi’s happiness Aadi too starts laughing; looking at his cuteness Aditi pinches Aadi’s nose. Similarly looking at Aditi’s laugh Daya’s hearts starts pouncing]
Sa ni pa di na sa..
[Rahul sings looking at Diya while diya laughs; Daya looks at Aditi as if his heart is singing for her]
Meherbaani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
[Yash sings for Riya, looking at her; Daya still engrossed in Aditi as if hez singing for her]
Tere nazara mila, roshan sitara mila
Takdeer ki kashtiyon ko, kinara mila
[Going towards the window Aditi sings but in her heart she is singing for Aadi]
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
[Slowly looking at Aadi]
Teri sauhbat mein duaayein hain usi ke liye
Tera milna hai us rab ka ishaara [smiling at Aadi who is dancing with Gungun; Riya & Yash do sense her feelings]
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
[Riya sings]
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
[Aditi sings]
Tera milna hai us rab ka ishara maano
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye [Nodding her head]
[Aditi opens the window & chill breeze gush in; she sings]
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
[Riya sings]
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
[Aditi sings]
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
[Diya sings]
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
[Aditi sings looking at Aadi]
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah yahi hai marna issi ke liye
[Daya is lookg at Aditi; Aditi looking at Aadi & Aadi is busy dancing with Gungun; Aditi sings]
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye [Leaning against the wall]
I’m feeling ….[ Rahul sings, Daya still engrossed; ACP tells Rahul & Aditi that their voices still create magic]
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After having dinner everyone go to their rooms. Daya go towards Aditi who is talking on the phone with a nurse of MR. As she finishes the call & turns she finds Daya. She smiles at him & he says: Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum gati bhi hoo.” Aditi: Ha, Aayee gati thi toh unhe se maine aur bhai ne sikha hai.” Daya: Aacha laga sunkar.” Aditi smiles & nods to him. Riya calls Aditi: Chal sote hai, bohot raat hoo gaye hai.” Aditi nods & says Good night to Aadi, Yash & Daya & moves towards her room. Yash & Aadi go inside the room. Riya whispers Aditi: Aditi peche dekhna, par peche dekh kar Aadi karke bolna” Aditi gets confused & asks: Par…?” Riya: Aree aahista baat karna. Maine jaisa kaha hai waisa he kar, plzz.” Aditi agrees; both turn & Aditi says “Aadi” but suddenly stops in between.
Daya is standing at the threshold looking at Aditi . Daya freezes at the spot with mouth little open . Aditi gives him a suspicious look & then says: Aadi so gaya?” Few seconds Daya wonders & then says: Ha…….” Nodding his head he says: Ha so gaya.” Aditi too nods & gives him a short smile. She turns to look at Riya giving huge smile to Daya. Daya gives her a small smile & goes into the room. Still smiling Riya says: Dekha.” Aditi gives her a half shocked half suspicious look.
Suddenly Riya’s phone starts ring; she looks at the screen; the screen displays “Monish” on it. Aditi look at Riy; Riya gave an irritating look at her mobile. Riya: Kab se call kaat rahi hoo, baar baar phone kiye jaa rahe hai! Ab toh aisa jawab dunge ki wapas call he nahi karenge!” She accepts the call & says: Kyun baar baar phone kar rahe hai aap?? Ek baar jab call cut kiya tha maine phir bhi kyun call kar ke mujhe pareshaan kar rahe hai aap??” Monish replies: Happy B”day Beta…” Riya: Nahi hoo main aapki beti! Main aapni Maa ki beti hoo! Samjhe aap?” Aditi keeps her hand on Riya‘s shoulder to calm her down. Riya adds: Baar baar mujhe call mat kijiye warna police complaint kar dunge! Samjhe aap???” Monish says: Beta main toh bas…..”
Before he could continue Riya had already cancelled the call. In anger he breaths in the smoke of cigar & calls Raghu & says: Mujhe Aadi jaldi se jaldi mara hoa chaheye! Samjhe!!” Monish throws his phone on the ground which turns it into pieces; he gulps the last sip of Whisky & says looking at Shefali’s photo: Tumhare bête ko main jaldi tumhare pass bhejne wala hoo. “ Saying this he gives her his wicked smile.
COMING UP: Raghu hits Aadi & Aditi with a log!
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Re: Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
so raghu is still behind aadi to kill him...
but i doubt he wouldnt be able to do so...shayad aditi ya Daya beechmein ajayenge
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