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Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
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Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
Love can change life, Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai is set on the picture where two lovers cross every hurdles together.
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Riya was watching Gunu & Aadi playing
in the garden when her cell rang. The no. wasn’t similar so she accepted the
call. She asked: Hello??” From opposite side: Hello Riya beti! Kaisi hoo??
Mujhe abhi pata ki tum Maa banana wali hoo. Congrats!!” Riya asked in a stern
tone : Who is this?? Kon bol raha hai??” From opposite side: Tumhare Pita!”
Riya’s eyes widened . She warned him: Mujhe phone karne ki himmat kaisi hoye
aapki??? How dare u!!! Ab toh aapne mujhe phone kar diya hai magar phir se call
karne ki koshish mat karma! Samjhe aap??? Warna mujhe aapke khelaf legal action
lena hoga! Mind it !! Mere aur mere bhaiya ke zindagi se aap dorr chale jayeye.”
Saying this she cancelled the call.
Suddenly she felt someone’s
hand on her shoulder. She turned & saw Yash. She hugged him. Yash asked:
Unka phone tha??” Riya said: Kyun ??? Kyun woh hume pareshaan kar rahe hai???
Kya chahte hai wo humse??” Yash hugged her tightly, kissed her forehead &
said: Tum chinta mat karo. Aisi halat me tension lena acchi baat nahi hai.
Hmmm??” Riya just nodded her head .
* AT MEHRA MANSION*
Monish was sitting on a royal couch. She
came & hugged him from behind. But he did respond to her. She came in front
of him & asked: Kya hoa hai tumhe?? Itne tension me kyun ho tum???” She was
Monish’s PA as well as his girl friend, Alisha. Monish explained her
everything. He said : Aaditya ke wajah se Riya mujhe se dorr hote ja rahi hai.” He
went on saying her but Alisha was least interested . As he finished she asked:
So?? Ab tum kya karoge??” Monish: Aadi mere raste ka kaata ban gaya hai. Ab mujhe iss
raste ke kaate ho hatana hai.” Saying this he picked up his cell & dialed a
number. He said: Raghu kaha hai??” From opposite side: Woh toh jail me hai. Kal
wo jail se bahar chhotega.” Monish: Thik hai.”
Then after canceling the call
he dialed another no. He said: Sharad, kal Raghu jail se chhot jayaga. Tum usse
receive karma jao aur usse seedha mere secret farm house me lekar aao. Thik
hai??” Sharad: Yes sir!” Saying this he cancelled the call. Alisha asked:
Raghu?? Tumhe usse kya kam hai??” Monish: Kissi ko kahe bhejna hai.” Alisha got
confused & asked: Kisse aur kaha??” Monish gave a vicious smile & said:
Aaditya ko apni Maa aur Pita ki yaad aa
rahe hai na. Toh mujhe usski yeh tadap dekhi nahi jaa rahe hai. Toh socha kyun
na usse unhe ke paas bhej do??” Alisha: Aur Aditi???” Monish uske liye bhi mane
kuch socha kar rakha hai.” He turned towards Alisha & both gave each others
a vicious look . They came close to each other & kissed each other.
* AT MR *
Gungun met everyone at MR. Adi introduced her to Anil. He was happy to
meet her. Gungun was shocked to know tht even though Anil wasn’t mentally ill
he was allowed to stay in MR.
* AT ADI’S CABIN*
At 4pm, Aadi & other patients were busy
sleeping while Adi, Diya, Rahul, Riya, Yash, Anup, Anushka & Gungun were
busy chatting with each other. Gunu was sitting on Adi’s lap. Adi & Gunu
were busy playing, laughing with each other. Others were happy to see them
laughing. Suddenly Gunu became silent . Tears started pouring from her eyes . Adi
got anxious as wht happened to her. Adi got terrified. She brought her close,
removed tears from Gunu’s cheeks & hugged her tightly. Even others too got
anxious .
Adi asked, cuddling her: Kya hoa
baccha tujhe?? Kyun roo rahi hai tu??” Gunu asked crying: Atu?? Kya Aadi thik
ho gayega??? Mujhe usse aise dekh kar bohot bura lagta hai. Atu usse aap plzz
jaldi se thik kar do na!” Adi felt soo bad for her. She said: Gunu I’ll try my
best to treat him. Hmm??” Gunu rubbing her eyes said : Atu Aadi bohot aacha hai.
Woh aap se bohot pyaar karta hai.”
After hearing this Adi’s eyes
widened . Adi asked: Kya???” Gunu nodded in +tive. Gunu said: Woh aapse bohot
pyaar karta hai. Riya Atu ki shaddi se pehla main usse mili thi. Tab mujhe pata
chala ki woh aapse pyaar karta hai. Mujhe Aadi bohot pasand hai isliye maine usski madat karne
ke liye ha raha. Riya Atu ki shaddi me hum don one bohot koshish ki aapko
batane ki lekin Aadi kabhi bhi aapko bata nahi paya. Woh humesha aapko batane
ki koshish karta tha magar uski gale se aawaz he nahi aata tha.” Adi gave her a
puzzled look. Gunu asked: Atu aap Aadi se shaddi karogi na??” Adi gave her an
anxious look .
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Pankaj was sitting on his chair thinking as how to take revenge
from Aadi & Adi. Suddenly his cell rang. He picked up the call. From
opposite side: Un dono se badla lene ki soch rahe hoo??” Pankaj got socked. He
asked: Kon bol raha hai??” From opposite side: Tumhara dost! Monish Mehra” The
person told him everything. Pankaj asked: Tum unke saath kya karne wale
hoo.” Monsih said: I’m going to KILL
THEM .” Monish: Toh kya tum meri madat karoge??” Pankaj smiled wickedly &
said: Ha! Jaroor!!” Both gave out a vicious laugh :devilish: .
* COMING UP NEXT *
*Flash back, 2yrs back. Riya & Yash's marriage.
* Press
at MR.
*Monish to Raghu (Giving him Aaditya’s pix):
Tumhe isse marna hai.
* Music class.
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oh monish & pankaj r so evil :mad:
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i liked the way gungun ans to pankaj
i hope yeh dono ko saza miley and adi jaldhi thik hojaye
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I read the second part of the story. The story is good and the pictures are making it more attracctive as it is helping to imagine about the plot and setting. There were some emotional scenes in the part. Although there wasnt interaction between aadi and adi but comingup next shows that in next part there will be their second encounter and their friendship will begin...thanks for the story.
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Today I read the third part of your story..I like the loving and caring nature of adi n even aadi is too innocent..I like the way he was so happy to know that aditi was his doctor. Thank you.. :biggggg:
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I read part 4 of your story and it was awesome. I think Adi will be able to start music in rehabilation. Adi seems to be creative and she is some one who understands the inner feelings of others. It was also a major turn in story that Adi got to know that Aadi loves her. I did not think that She will get to know this so soon. Now I am thinking how will she react infront of Aadi...
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* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 09 *
*RECAP*
1)
Gungun’s
entry. She’s the only daughter of Rahul & Diya.
2)
Gungun
recognizes Aadi as they had met each other in Riya’s marriage & had become
best friends.
3)
She felt
sad after knowing abt Aadi’s mental problem.
4)
Monish
calls Riya & congratulates her but she warns him not to call her again.
5)
Pankaj says
to Gunu not to play with Aadi as he’s a mental patient but Gunu says tht she
knows how to talk & handle him.
6)
Monish
plans to kill Aadi & Adi by sending his one goon. He & Pankaj become
friends.
7)
Gunu says to Adi tht Aadi loved her very much
& even she helped him.
Gunu meets
every patients of MR.
*
Tujhme
Rab Dikhta Hai: 06*
*PRADHAN HOUSE*
* ADI’S
ROOM *
Adi was sitting in her room lost in Gunu’s questions. All questions
were roaming in her mind: Atu kya aap bhi Aadi se pyaar karti hoo?? Aap Aadi se
shaddi karogi na??” Gunu entered the room & saw her lost somewhere. Gunu
came near her & asked: Atu??” But still Adi was lost somewhere. Gunu
brought her lips near Adi’s ears & shouted: Atu!!!” With a jerk Adi came
out of her thoughts. Watching Adi’s condition Gunu burst out laughing. Adi
pulled Gunu towards her & started tickling her.
Later Adi said: Tumhe pata
hai tumne mujhe kitna dara diya!!” Gunu was still laughing. Gunu asked: Aap
Aadi ke bare me socha rahi thi na??” Adi got quiet. Then Adi said: Gunu mujhe
yeh bata ki tera aur Aadi ka toh pehla nahi jamta tha. Tum toh usse baat bhi
nahi karti thi. Phir???” Gunug said; Maine
batati hoo.” Saying this Gunu started narrating the story.
*NEXT DAY, AT MR *
As she entered the
gate of MR, she was surrounded by dozens of reporters, having mikes in their
hand, with their camera men. She climbed down from her car & saw at the
crowd wondering why they were here. As she climbed down the car all reporters
rushed towards her as if there was any kind of race going on & she’s the
end point. She got terrified watching them running towards her. Suddenly she
was pulled by someone. She turned & saw Rahul was holding from her arms. He
said the reporters to stand outside until he calls them inside.
Rahul takes her
inside. After reaching her cabin Adi asked: Bhai! Yeh kya hoo raha hai??? Yeh
reporters??” Rahul breathed heavily & said: Adi!! Maine aur Diya jab yaha aaye toh inn logo ko
yaha dekha. Humne inhe thodi der intazaar karne ko kaha. Aur jab tumhe phone
karne ki koshish ki toh line busy aaya.”
Adi: Ha! Woh main apna cell charge karna bhool gaye thi. Toh cell bandh ho gaya.” Rahul nodded in
+tive. Adi asked: Magar Bhai in logo ko yaha kisne bolaya??? MR me toh kabhi
bhi reporters aaye nahi hai na??” Rahol nodded in +tive & said: Maine bhi yehi socha
raha tha. Waise maine
peon se keh kar hall me chairs lagva diye hai in reporters ke liye. Let’s see
yeh log kya kehte hai.” Adi nodded while peon came & said tht the chairs
have been arranged.
* HALL ROOM *
All
reporters were allowed to seat in the hall room in their respective chairs. Rahul,
Diya, Pankaj ,Adi, Anup, Anushka, Riya & Yash were sitting near Aditi while
other doctors were standing behind them.
Rahul said: U all can
ask ur
questions one by one. One reporter raised his hand. Rahul asked: Yes?” Tht
reporter asked: Dr. Aditi??” Adi moved her mike near & said: Ya??” Reporter
1: Dr kya aap The Gr8 Business Tycoon Aaditya Kashyap ko treat kar rahi hai???”
Adi (nodding): Ha. Aaditya mera patient hai.” R2: Kya hoa hai Mr. Kashyap ko??”
Adi: Apni Maa ki maut se unha bohot bada sagma hoa hai. Dil par choot lagi hai.
Isliye woh depression me chala jata hai. Aur kabhi kabhi wonka mind dus saal ke
bache jitna hoo jata hai.”
R3: Hume pata chala hai ki kuch dino
pehla Mr. Monish par hamla kiya tha Mr. Kashyap ne??” Adi & Riya got
shocked. R3 cont’d: Aur upar se Mrs. Riya ji ne unhe milne se mana kar diya??
Kya yeh sach hai??” Riya said: Ha! Yeh sach hai.” R4: Lekin Mr. Kashyap ne
unpar hamla kyun kia??” Riya: Kyunki Mr. Monish ne meri Maa ka khoon kiya hai.
Isliye jab Bhaiya ne uss insaan ko dekha toh unhe gussa aa gaya aur unhone Mr. Monish par hamla kiya.”
R5: Toh kya MR ki responsibility nahi hai ki woh apne patients par control
rakhe. Agar Mr. Kashyap ne Mr. Monish par jaan lewa hamla kiya toh…??”
Adi said: Toh eh Mr.
Monish Mehra ki galti hai. Dekhiya, MR ki kuch rules hai. Agar Mr. Monish ko
Aaditya se milna tha toh unhe sabse pehla Mr ke dean, yani ki Dr. Rahul se
permission leni chahiye thi. Phir Aaditya se Dr. ke nate mujhe se permission
leni chahiye thi. Yeh ek basic rule hai jo unhone follow nahi ki. Upar se wo
jante hai ki Aaditya cant bear him. Phir bhi wo unse milne aaya. Mana ki wo
unka beta hai magar yeh MR hai. Yaha bhi kuch rules hai. Jo unhone follow nahi
kiya.” R5: Toh kya Riya ji abhi lagta hai unki Maa ka khon Mr.Monish ne kiya
hai??” Riya: Ha! Mujhe ab bhi yeh lagta hai ki Maa ka khoon Mr. Monish ne kiya
hai. Aur maine
janti hoo ki aapko yeh information kisne diya hai. Mr. Monish ne.”
R6: Aap
itne confidence se kaise keh sakti hai??”
Riya:
Kyunki doctors ke alawa unhe he pata thain sab ke bare me. Ab docs toh batane
se rahe toh baccha kon???” Hearing this a huge conversation started btwn the
reporters.
Monish sitting on a couch
watching this news in a news channel. After hearing this news he gets annoyed.
He calls Pankaj & tells him to meet him at his secret farm house &
gives him the address. Later he calls his private driver to receive Raghu from Central Jai & bring him to his secret farm house.
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Adi was again lost in her thoughts. Riya came
into her cabin & saw Adi lost. Riya: Adi??” Adi looked at her & said:
Aree! Riya! Aa na. Waha kya khadi hai??” Riya came inside & says: Adi I’m
bored!!” Adi laughed & said: Chal bata! Kaha jaye??” Riya asked: Tujhe kam
nahi hai kya??’ Adi nodded in-tive & said: Aaj maine thodi der ke liye free hoo.” Riya
getting happy jumped & said: Wow!! Thtz gr8!!” Adi said: AA!! Aste. Jada
kudh mat. Chal na college chalet hai.
Purane din yaad tazza karte hai!” Both looked at each other & gave a
mischievous smile to each other.
* LORENTO COLLEGE *
They saw the huge gate in front of them.
She
horned twice to see whether there was any watchman. They saw a man came running
from a distance towards the gate. He removed the gate. They brought their car inside
the gate & halted at the entrance door of the college door. They climbed
down the car.
They went inside & met their teachers.
All teachers were happy to them. They chatted with them for a while & went
towards the college garden.
Later
they visited the church. Riya prayed to God to make his brother well soon.
*COLLEGE GARDEN
*
They sat there on a bench
in the corner of the garden. A cool breeze flowed around them.
They looked at
each other & were lost in their past.
* 8 YEARS BACK*
*FLASH BACK*
A black Lamborghini stooped
near the ground.
Two
handsome men climbed down the car. They were in their business suit with their goggs
on. They took a look around. There was a huge crowd gathered at the corner of
the ground. There were two bikes standing on the edge of ground, White &
Black. As the coach whistled, the bikes were in the air. So as to win the race
they increased their pace.
At last the
white bike won the race.
The crowd cried of joy. The guy
climbed down the bike & looked at the ground. As the helmet was removed both
business suited guys were shocked. It was a girl. Long, shoulder length hair, fair
like a fairy in white suit with white helmet.
She flew
the kiss to the crowd. The black bike guy climbed down the bike & threw his
helmet on the ground. The girl turned around the see while the guy giving her a
stink eyes goes away. The girl, least bothered, got again engrossed in the
giving flying kiss. .
A girl came running toward her &
hugged her from behind. She looked behind & saw her best friend standing
with a huge smile. They both hugged each other. She said: Congrates Aditi!!!”
Smiling 18yr old Adi said: Thnks Riya!!” 18 yr Riya gave a huge smile. Suddenly
Adi’s attention went towards the Lamborghini Car & those two men standing
right beside the ground. Puzzled Adi asked: Riya! Yeh log kon hai???” Riya turned & shouted: Bhaiya!!!” Riya
ran towards him & hugged him tietly while Adi just followed him. Riya
peeped behind him & smiled. She said: Yash!” Yash smiled & Riya hugged
him.
Riya turned & saw Adi
standing there. Riya introduced her to them. She said looking at her bro: Aadi Bhaiya
yeh meri dost Aditi hai. Aur Adi Yeh mere Bhaiya Aaditya hai.” Aadi: Ohh! Toh
humara pet name same hai. (Giving her a side smile) Hi!!” Adi gave him a
suspicious look from head to toe & then giving a short smile she said: Hi!!”
As he touched her hand a spark of light went through his body. He gave her a
huge smile while she smiled lil.
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* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 10 *
*RECAP*
1) Gunnu explains Adi as how she became friends
with Aaditya.
2) Press conference was held in MR. Reporters
asked several questions to Adi & other doc’s. One reporter even asked as
why they didn’t allow Monish to meet Adi.
3) Riya agrees tht Monish had killed her mom.
4) Monish calls Raghu to his secret farm house.
5) Riya & Aditi visit their college & are
lost in their past life.
6) Adi remembers her 1st meeting with
Aaditya.
*Tujhme
Rab Dikhta Hai: 10*
* COLLEGE
GARDEN *
They sat there on a bench in the corner of the
garden. A cool breeze flowed around them. They looked at each other &
smiled. Adi said: Kya din the woh! Wow!”
* 8 YEARS BACK*
*FLASH BACK Continues*
* Kashyap House*
When the
door bell rang one servant ran towards the door to open it. They entered the
house. They headed towards the Devgarh & saw her doing Puja of Lord
Krishna.
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They
slowly came towards her & hugged her from behind. It made her jump from
fear. She turned & saw them laughing. She exclaimed: Aadi!! Yash!!” Both
smiled & took aashirvaad of her. Aadi: Maa! Kaisi hoo???” Shefali was soo
Happy to see her son after soo many. She waved her hand on his cheeks &
said: Maine
toh thik hoo beta. Aree Yash tu kaisa hai??” Yash smiled & said: Maa maine thik hoo.”
Shefali: Bohot miss kiya maine
tum dono ko. Aacha hoa tum log aa gaye.”
A voice came from the stairs: Toh aa gaye tum log!” They turned towards
the stairs & found Monish standing there with a smirk. They came towards
him & Aadi & Yash took aashirvaad from him but he was least interested
in them. He said: Ha.. ha.. bas.” As a formality he smiled, got up & asked:
Aur… kaise hoo beta??” Aadi: Thik hoo Papa. Aur aap?” Simply nodding Monish
said: Thik…” Saying this he went towards the couch & sat reading Business
Newspaper.
Suddenly they heard a voice from their back: Hey Guys!!! Hi Shefu Maa!!”
She turned & saw Riya & Adi chewing gum & giving her a huge smile.
Shefali smiled & said: aree aa gaye tum log..” She saw Young Ronit &
Diya. They were at their 20’s who were still bachelor
while Riya & Adi were 18. Aadi kept on looking at Adi.
He was lost in her beauty.
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