Naqaab 3 - The Final Revenge...

by **Story 7 Writer** 3/3/2013, 2:41 pm

This a third and final sequel of Naqaab series. Story revolves around 18 yr old Maya and her dark past, black magic and a revenge.

Story-          Naqaab :The Final Revenge
Story By-      Diipendu Dutta
Genre-          Supernatural thriller
Released On- July, 2013

Last Episode- 14th May, 2014

by **gauriandme** 3/3/2013, 3:43 pm

Superb Pic!

by **Story 7 Writer** 25/7/2013, 2:01 am

[ DREAM SEQUENCE: Its a mid-night and very disturbing blurry effect of a burning house. ]

[ Suddenly there's an explosion.] And with a hassle she wakes up. 18 years old Maya realises it was same another nightmare she having since she was very small. This nightmare always ends up in the middle. Maya was really upset and now, it has crossed all limits of tolerance.

Maya removing her blanket, gets off the bed. Suddenly phone rings. She picks it up. It was her BFF (Best Friend Forever) Shanaya.

Shanaya called her to remind her about their slumber party this weekend after a hectic school time.

About Maya's friend circle: Shanaya, the team leader. Maya, Preity, Trisha.

About Shanaya: Smart, Sexy, Practical and Moody. Mess with her and you are in trouble.

About Preity: Cute, Sensitive and very Emotional. She is shy and gets scare easily.

About Trisha: Attractive but mysterious. Deep interest in Black Magic and learning mystical things.

And Maya: Beautiful, dreamy eyes and Full of Life. She never say her friends "No" and always supports her friends and especially Shanaya as they are best childhood friends. They are like sisters, and financially Shanaya helped Maya to pay her school fees since Maya lost her parents and moved in with her uncle and aunt. So, that's why sometimes Shanaya reminds Maya about how much she took care of her, "Like a Sister"...

Maya feels her self as a debit-prisonor to Shanaya. But overall, they both are very good friends. And that is why Maya can never deny Shanaya.

June, 2012
Mumbai

11pm, its slumber party. Girls are gathered at Shanaya's place as decided. Girls enter Shanaya's fancy little farm house. Suddenly then Maya has a blurry vision of something. A woman. One man with a camera. A man pushed the woman and a burning painting... Suddenly she wakes up as Shanaya asked if she is okay. Telling Shanaya she is fine Maya saw that same painting hanging on wall which she seen in her dream/vision.

Maya: yeh painting?

Shanaya: ya! its very old painting... actually there is an orignal painting and its just a copy version as the original one is half burnt so my dad...

Maya: your dad?

by **gauriandme** 25/7/2013, 5:23 pm

woooooooooh! this is gettg interesting.. update soon Smile

by **Gayathri** 31/7/2013, 10:45 pm

wow... interesting storyline and characters ....keep up... looking forward to read more

by **Story 7 Writer** 2/10/2013, 12:35 am

Maya: yeh painting?

Shanaya: ya! its very old painting... actually there is an orignal painting and its just a copy version as the original one is half burnt so my dad...

Maya: your dad?

Shanaya show her photograph with her dad. Maya is stunned to see Shanaya's dad photo. The man who shoved the woman in her dream was non other than Shanaya's dad. Maya couldn't find any word to explain to her friends so she hushed.

Shanaya: mere papa kuch hi dino mein India wapas arahe hain...

"Girls! Girls! I have a plan........." Trisha said.

Trisha: lets have some chit-chat with ghosts around us... Whats say!

All other three were making faces but then Shanaya agreed. Girls sat down and opened some kind of a board so they can do a procedure to call ghosts and ask them questions. But Trisha had some other plans.

They arranged the board and all four sat. They start the procedure but nothing happened, then trisha found that to complete the procedure everyone have to hold eachother's hands and close their eyes and concentrate nearby around them. This time room blacks-out. A chilly feeling in this dark room and everyone try to calm.

The rule of this whole procedure was to ask questions to nearby spirits. Pick any four questions and you're suppose to ask the spirit questions one-by-one in your mind. So Trisha asked one question in her mind, if any real spirit is present then the candles on four sides of the boards will light up. Everyone's shock to see the candles are lightned up. The next chance was Shanaya's.

Shanaya asked if any real ghost is present then he/she have to tell name by moving the dices from their places to alphabets on the board. Then again everyone is surprised to see how the dice can move from its place automatically. The dice shown only one alphabet of the spirit's name 'C'.

The next turn was Preity's. Preity asked since when this spirit is here? The dices starts moving slowly and hits the numericals, and it shown, the spirit was here since 1988. Preity got scared. Now the next turn was for Maya's. Maya asked the spirit a question in her mind, has something bad happened to this spirit? The dice starts moving to the answer 'Yes' but then suddenly! The whole board fly in the air and slams to the wall. Girls get scared and Trisha somehow manage to solve everything as she know about how to tackle such situation.

Maya kept thinking what might happend wrong here.

by **Story 7 Writer** 12/2/2014, 1:06 am

Next Day

Shanaya's dad has reached Mumbai Airport. Here in shanaya's place, shanaya is waiting for her dad. Suddenly she hear her dad's car has arrived. She run to meet her dad so she excitedly opens the door. "Oh papa!" Shanaya said. She hugged her dad.

Her dad was non-other-than Sidharth Mehra.

Shanaya called her friends to meet her dad. Preity and Trisha came but Maya was not there. Shanaya introduced her dad with her friends.

Sidharth Mehra: And.. Where is your other friend, Maya?

"Sorry Shanu mujhe late ho gaya aane mein!!" -Maya finally arrives. Sidharth Mehra get this feeling that Maya reminds him of someone he knew. On other hand, maya also finds something strange about Shanaya's dad, that maybe she have seen his face earlier...

[ Sidharth Mehra, a topmost Indian business tycoon, after the mysterious death of his first wife 'Chitra', married again to Sriti Kapoor, Shanaya's mom. ]

After getting this information from Preity, Maya starts relating her those nightmares with Chitra's mysterious death.

Maya stands infront of a mirror in Shanaya's room. The mirror look classy but antique. Maya touched the mirror and suddenly there is a blackout infront of her eyes.

On the other hand, Trisha was sitting with Preity and Preity is continously talking about her new party dress she bought. Trisha is little bit of lost, an unknown fear she is able to feel but does not know. Trisha is now sure that last night when all four girls called the spirits, one of the spirit has not returned and there was not any successful signout. Trisha is sure, that one spirit was trying to tell something.

by **Story 7 Writer** 10/3/2014, 11:51 pm

Maya sees a black-out and suddenly one person, clicking her photo and asking Maya to smile. Maya realises it is not about her, it is about Chitra... She start realising that she was chitra in her previous birth. But then Maya tries to find-out the whole story happened with Chitra. But she sees glimpse of that photographer, being arrested for chitra murder and after 5 years, he somehow get involve in stealing and conning. After sometime how he escaped the police and fell in love with a princess and got killed. That photographer's name was Aryan.

Aryan finally got what he did to Chitra. Now Maya has all the knowledge about what has happened with Chitra but then comes the revealation part when she sees the face of Chitra's husband, was non-other than Shanaya's dad!

Here Shanaya is planning to throw a party. She called all her three friends to gather-up so they can decide the whole arrangement things. After the long discussion of party arrangement, Maya wanted to talk to Trisha. She told Trisha everything about she was Chitra in her previous birth. After Maya left, Trisha started thinking how this can be possible if Maya is saying she is Chitra then who's spirit is still present here in Shanaya's mansion?

It's 11.30pm, at this time spirits are more active so Maya and Trisha decided to meet at Trisha's place so that they can findout the details by contacting that spirit which is still present around Shanaya's mansion.

Maya was going to meet Trisha but to take shortcut to Trisha's place, she have to go through the dark jungle area. Maya decided to take the shortcut so that she can return home as soon as possible. Suddenly she face an old and ugly lady standing infront of her. Maya finds herself lost. "Who are you! And.. Where am I?" -Maya nervously asked. That old lady gave her the book of 'Black Magic' and said "This book is the key to all your answers, iam giving it to you because someone in a great pain, seeking for freedom, requested me...But remember, donot use it for your greed. If you do, you will pay!..."

Maya kept the book of black magic and found herself in that same forest place. That old lady was gone. Maya steps for Trisha's place. After she reach there, she tell everything to Trisha about the old lady and this black magic book. Trisha has already heard about this book but she wanted to confirm if it is really helpful.

by **Story 7 Writer** 8/4/2014, 1:42 am

Now that Trisha have this book of black-magic, a thought came in her mind and she decided something. Trisha opened the book and following those rules and rituals, she started chanting. The cause for which she was practising this black-magic was for her desire, to Live Forever.

Suddenly something happen, a blast. Maya came running to Trisha's room and find out an accident took place in which Trisha's face was badly burned and Trisha died. Maya is shocked to see this whole incident. She try to call other friends, but in vain. Maya noticed that trisha was practising a ritual from that book of black-magic, maya recalls those words of that old lady -"This book is the key to all your answers, iam giving it to you because someone in a great pain, seeking for freedom, requested me...But remember, donot use it for your greed. If you do, you will pay!..."

Maya took that book and went-off. Maya reached her home. She tries to join those puzzles which she saw in her dreams, and those words of an old lady, about that spirit or ghost. Maya reads the book and try to connect with that spirit. This whole incident was the beginnning of the new chapter of revenge. Maya find out Trisha's voice-message in her cellphone's voice-mailbox. Trisha was finding out if the claim was right according to Maya, that she is chitra, then whose spirit is still trying to contact with Maya? Trisha found out that Maya is not Chitra. According to the book of black-magic, a spirit cannot take another birth until and unless the spirit find peace. And Chitra's murder was still a mystery.

To findout how can it be possible to connect with such spirits, Maya read that a spirit can only enter someone's body who fears. Suddenly Maya hear a door knock.

Maya opened the door and it was Preity. Maya got it that the chitra's spirit is trying to connect with her that's why Preity was invited. Maya understood that Preity can be a perfect channel to connect with Chitra's spirit. Preity came in. Maya didn't told the whole story to preity so that she won't deny. Maya somehow convinced Preity to participate in this activity.

Maya start the process. After following the steps given in the book, Chitra's spirit enters Preity's body. Chitra is now in Preity's body. She look very calm and silent. Maya was very curious to know everything happened. According to the book, Maya is allowed to ask only 2 questions. Maya asked her first question to chitra, "Why was Chitra trying to tell what has happened by targeting only Maya but not anyone else?"

Chitra replied- "Because, Maya is Chitra's only daughter..." Maya couldn't believed it after when she heard it. Maya already knew that she spent her childhood in an orphanage. Now Maya knows the reason behind that connection and the bond between her and her real mother, Chitra.

Now it was the second question to ask, Maya asked the whole story in detail. Chitra told everything happened. After that Chitra also reveals, that the present wife of Sidharth Mehra, Kiara Mehra, is non-other than the princess of devgarh. 18 years ago, she was about to get engaged with a con-artist, Aryan, who mysteriously get killed. But the fact was, Aryan was the same photographer who plotted to kill chitra and later he got killed by the princess Kiara. Later some years, that princess Kiara married Sidharth Mehra, the famous business tycoon. Chitra asked her daughter Maya that she must avenge her mother's untimely death. Maya promised, she will take revenge from every person who is responsible for her mother's death.

by **Story 7 Writer** 29/4/2014, 12:23 am

Next Day

Morning 10AM.

Mehra Mansion, Garden Area.

Four ladies are sitting, having tea and doing chit-chat.

1st Woman: (rolled her eyes) Seriously! My husband sometimes act like one of those who can just play in his own golf area.

2nd Woman: hmm...not a bit like my husband who always forget about his own poker chips.

[ Women laughs.]

3rd Woman: So Kiara, what about you?

[ Mrs. Kiara Mehra took sip of tea. ]

Kiara: (raising her right eyebrow) what about me? I've got everything, every women desire her all life. But there are some pending deals with certain people...

2nd Woman: oh Kiara...we all certainly know you. When someone becomes your enemy, that fella doesn't deserve to live.

[ Kiara smiles ]

[ In the background inside the home, Sidharth Mehra was standing there and dropped an sms on Kiara's phone. Kiara took a look at it and looking back at her friends with a smile. ]

Kiara: And i have to deal with one of those, excuse me.

[ Kiara leaves the place and walk towards Sidharth. ]

Kiara: what urgency has made you to crash my party?

Sidharth: well it's about our little angel... She has planned an anniversary party of ours this evening.

Kiara: can't believe we survived eachother so well!

Now the day has vanished in the dusk and it is an hour left for the party. Maya is all prepared with her plan, knowing her mother, Chitra is following her. "I hope everything goes according to the plan." -Maya said in her mind. Maya enter in the party, she find Shanaya.

Shanaya: oh! Maya! Glad to see you here... And happy that you're not again wearing your typical stylish dress.

[ Then Preity entered in the party with her boyfriend Danish.]

Shanaya stunned and start wondering who's that handsome man with Preity. She go there to welcome them. Preity introduces her boyfriend Danish and Shanaya decide to get him. Preity tell Shanaya that Danish is the best biker and he had won many races.

Shanaya: Men drives bikes crazly... but i drive men crazy!

[ Shanaya ask Danish for dance.]

Shanaya: Care to dance with me?

[ Danish agrees. ]

Preity and Maya stood there.

Preity: Can't believe she is such a bitch!

Maya: donot worry. The show is yet to begin...

by **Story 7 Writer** 29/4/2014, 9:14 pm

1995, Mumbai.
Mehra Mansion.

Wedding ceremony of Sidharth Mehra and Kiara is going on.

[ Scene Fades into the evening of present situation in Mehra Mansion. Sidharth and Kiara's 18th Wedding Anniversary. ]

Crowd is gathered. The masquerade party begins. Everybody in this party is wearing a mask. Suddenly lights fades out and someone appears. Lights fades in and the song starts. This unknown girl, wearing a mask and extremely seductive, drank a large glass of scotch. Then she start dance on this song-

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The girl wearing a mask ended up falling on Sidharth same way as once her first wife Chitra fell on her in this same situation a decade ago. Lights fades out.

She took Sidharth inside the house in that same room. Sidharth saw a burning painting and get shock. He couldn't believe whatever is going on.

"Remember something?" -The girl asked.

Sidharth: Who are you!

The girl removed her mask and it was Chitra.

Sidharth: This cannot be happening!

Chitra: But it is happening now...

The fire from that burning painting touched the curtain and the fire spread in the whole room. Kiara and Shanaya came there running but the door was locked from the inside.

Chitra to Sidharth- "The way you betrayed me, murdered me... Now this time it will be once and for all! I have brought your death and you're summoned to die this night."

And there happen a blast the same way as it happened years ago.

by **Story 7 Writer** 14/5/2014, 12:47 am

FLASH-BACK: The evening when the fight happened between Chitra and Sidhaarth, the burning painting.

[ Suddenly someone put hands on the shoulder of Sidhaarth. "Dad, are you okay?" -Shanaya asked. Sidhaarth nodded his head. ]

Shanaya: dad, exactly what happened? The room in which you were inside in, was locked from the inside!

Sidhaarth: i am still figuring it out. It happened and the next moment it was all gone.

l]Sidhaarth leave the room and went outside of the house, the garden area was all dark in the night. "I hope you didn't burned yourself because you need to fix all those damages..." -Kiara was coming towards Sidhaarth. ]

Sidhaarth: I've already did that.

Kiara: ( raising right eye-brow) well thankyou!

Sidhaarth: Using your money.

Kiara: You will remain bastard as always! I wish you rot in hell!

Sidhaarth noticed a pendant of a necklace was on the ground. He showed that to Kiara asking if it is hers. Kiara recognise it and tell him that pendant is Maya's, and goes back in the mansion. Now Sidhaarth is sure about the girl in that mask and that whole scenerio was a setup, done by Maya.

In the Graveyard.

Maya was digging Chitra's body. She realised someone is there. "Come out! I know you are here!" -Maya said. Sidhaarth comes out.

Sidhaarth: so much of happiness to meet my daughter! But for who you're digging this...

Maya showed the name was written 'Chitra'. Sidhaarth came closer.

Sidhaarth: but still, why?

Maya turned back and hit Sidhaarth with that shovel. Sidhaarth fell on the ground and died on the spot.

Maya came closer to his dead-body and said- "This was my revenge... The Final Revenge! ..."

---The End---

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