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Naqaab
Naqaab
Written By- Diipendu Dutta
Story: Naqaab
Released On: 2011
Genre: Thriller
Last edited by Kdiipendu on 10/8/2012, 12:07 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Naqaab
1985, Mumbai
Yeh Story shuru start houti hai Mumbai se...Mumbai ke Top most Businessman 'Mr.Sidharth Mehra' ke Royal Mansion mein aaj raat Mr. & Mrs. Mehra ke 8th marriage anniversary ki Party hai...Party mein well known businessmen se lekar Bollywood Celebrities aaye hain...
1Month Ago...
Sidharth Mehra ki wife 'Chitra Mehra' bollywood ki Top actresses mein se ek hai...Chitra aur Sidhharth Mehra ne Love marriage ki thi lekin time jaise-jaise guzarta gaya oondono ki shaadi mein se pyaar bhi kam houta gaya...
Sidhharth apni wife Chitra se zyada business ko importance diya karta tha aur Chitra ne shaadi ke baad bollywood ko alvida toh kehdia tha lekin jab osne dekha ke silently woh ees shaadi ke ees emptiness ke depression mein aane lagi tab osne decide karlia ke woh modelling aur photoshoots karegi...
But Sidharth never liked it! Sidharth ne Chitra se bahut baar kaha ke woh modelling na kare lekin Chitra ke paas bhi bahut se sawaal thhey aur hardin ke tarah...-
Chitra: why everytime i have to understand and compromise?!.........Have you ever felt, ke meri khushi kya hai? Mujhe kya chahiye?!
Sidhharth: oh enough is enough!....Tumhe woh sab milraha hai jo tumne chaha...!
Chitra: lekin tumhara pyaar?.......Haan sidharth??? Tumne kabhi apni biwi ko time dena zaroori samjha?....I'm your wife god damn it!.........24hrs. office aur work mein main kaha hoon?
Chitra: yaad karo aakhri baar humne kab saath time spent kia?.........You don't care for me....Main jiyun ya marr jaaun!......You don't care!
Chitra Sidhaarth ke paas jakar os se kehte hue-
Chitra: Do you still love me?
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Re: Naqaab
Chitra: Do you still love me?
Sidhaarth osey dhaka dekar wahan se chala jata hai...Chitra was hurt because she still love sidhaarth aur esi wajah se woh gusse mein aakar wahan mirror ko deti hai...
Chitra ne khudko ees lonliness se bahar nikalne ke liye khudko busy karlia...Woh modelling aur photoshoots karne lagi...Aur ekdin Sidhaarth ko pata chal hi gaya ke Chitra photoshoots karahi hai...
Ek raat Sidhaarth ghar jaldi agaya aur osne dekha ke chitra ghar pe nahi thi...It was 11pm, aur tabhi sidhaarth ko awaaz ati hai...Chitra ghar agayi thi but she was drunk...Sidhaarth don't care from what chitra is going, so Sidhaarth's not even shocked but he is totally anger seeing all this things...
Chitra's drunk, sidhaarth came to chitra and he slap her...
Sidhaarth: you don't even care about my reputation and image in society!.......
[ Sidhaarth wahan se chala jaata hai...]
Chitra: ( route hue) and you don't even care for me...
----------= 2 days Later...=--------------
Chitra hamesha ke tarah photoshoot ke liye aayi thi but tabhi chitra ko pata chala ke aaj koi aur photographer aya hai jo Chitra ke photoshoots karega, and he is a well known photographer...
Rishi, an ace & well-known photographer...Kind hearted guy, shy, gentle and kind of artist who likes to draw paintings...
l]Chitra was reading a book and suddenly osko sidhaarth ka call ata hai, sidhaarth ke warn karne ke baad bhi chitra ne modelling quit nahi ki esi wajah se sidhaarth ne chitra ko bahut rude words bol diye...Chitra was very hurt, woh rou rahi houti hai tabhi wahan koi ata hai- " Hi...!" ,,, chitra apne aansu pochkar peeche murrkar dekhti hai toh wahan Rishi tha...]
Rishi: aaj main aapka photoshoot karunga...well hi! myself is Rishi......
Chitra wahan se bina kuch kahe jaane lagti hai tabhi-
"Aansu aur dard ko chahe kitna bhi chhipaane ki koshish kar lijiye...Lekin aankhein sab kuch keh deti hain..."
Chitra peeche murrkar osey reply karte hue-
Chitra: main kuch bhi chhupaane ki koshish nahi karahi hoon!..............Main bahut khush hoon...! mujhe kis baat ka dard?....
Rishi: are you sure??? kyunki aapki aankhein aapke zabaan ka saath nahi dey rahi hain......
Chitra wahaan se chali jaati hai...
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Episode 3
Rishi: are you sure??? kyunki aapki aankhein aapke zabaan ka saath nahi dey rahi hain......
Chitra wahaan se chali jaati hai...
Rishi: (mann mein sochte hue) kuch toh aisi baat hai tumhare dil mein......jaise bahut dard chupakar rakha ho tumne apne dil mein........
Chitra Ghar aajati hai aur hamesha ke tarah aaj bhi Sidhharth aur Chitra ka jhagra ho jata hai.....
Chitra: i don't understand what is your problem sidharth?!.......Agar tum busy ho apne business aur tours mein toh mujhe bhi busy rehne ke liye ek bahaana chahiye! and if u remember, tumne khud kaha tha ke tumhe bachha nahi chahiye esiliye shaadi ke itne saal tak........
Sidhaarth: oh please! tumne typical housewives ke tarah melo-drama karna shuru kardia!
Chitra: melo drama?!......melo drama lagta tumhe yeh sab??? agar kal main marr bhi jaaun toh woh bhi shayad tumhe melo drama lagega!..........
Sidhaarth Chitra ke paas jata hai aur osey samjhate hue kehta hai-
Sidharth: dekho please.....ahinda kabhi aisi baat mat karna.....promise me that you will never think about it.....please...
( Chitra ko Sidharth ki yeh baatein sunkar lagta hai ke maybe somewhere he still loves her and cares for her...)
Chitra: oh sidhaarth.....i promise i'll never think anything like this...
Sidhaarth: thankyou.....
Chitra:
[ Sidhaarth Chitra ko hug karte hue kehta hai-]
Sidharth: agar tumhe kuch hogaya toh society mein log kya kahenge??? Mere reputation ka kya hoga??? Media ko bhi mauka mill jayega mere reputation par daag lagane ka........
Chitra: oh!......................mujhse zyada tumhe apne "Reputation" ki chinta hai......ek second ke liye mujhe yeh dhoka hogaya tha ke shayad tumhe meri parwa hai.......but i was wrong...!
[ Chitra apne room mein chali jaati hai.]
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Episode 4
Chitra bahut routi hai......
Next Day
Chitra shoot ke liye aati hai, she see Rishi in the studio.
Chitra Rishi ke taraf aati hai aur Rishi se kehte hue-
Chitra: mujhe tumse baat karni hai.........................
[ Chitra aur Rishi studio ke bahar ajate hain. ]
Chitra: ok fine!.....meri zindagi mein kuch bhi fine nahi hai...........main...main yeh accept karti hoon ke main khush nahi hoon.....
Rishi: chalo mere saath...
Chitra: kahaan?
Rishi Chitra ka haath pakadta hai aur osey bike par bethne ko kehta hai, Rishi Chitra ko wahaan se bike mein lekar speed mein wahaan se chala jata hai.......
(speed bike chalate hue chitra se kehte hue-)
Rishi: een hawaaon ko feel karo.....zindagi bhi esi speed raftaar mein chalrahi hai......agar esmein chhupe choti-choti khushiyon ko jaan jao, toh zindagi haseen bann jaati hai........
Slowly they became friends.......Chitra ab Rishi se apne dil ki har baat share karne lagi thi......
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Re: Naqaab
Everyday chitra was trying to every possible way to win sidhharth's attention but in vain...
Servant: mam yehaan aag laga tha aapko kuch bhi ho sakta tha lekin aap apne baare mein na sochkar ees painting ko kyun bacha rahin thi?
Chitra: kyunki.......
Evening ko Sidhaarth jaldi ghar aya aur woh bhaag kar Chitra ke paas aya, chitra was expecting maybe sidharth is worried about this whole accident but she was wrong when sidhaarth came and started yelling on her.....
Sidhharth: what was you thinking damn it?! Aaj agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh........you have no idea mera reputation ek gossip bann jata logon ke liye!................
Chitra: ( route hue ) tumne ekbaar bhi yeh nahi poocha ke main theek hoon ke nahi......kahin mujhe kuch hua toh nahi...lekin
Sidhaarth: oh god tumne phir se wahi sab baatein shuru kar di!..........ees room mein aag lagi tumhe zara bhi parwa hai ke ees room ki har ek chiz kitni expensive hain?!
[ Sidhaarth ki nazar oos painting par padti hai. ]
Sidhaath: aur maine yeh bhi suna hai ke tumne ees stupid se painting ko bachaane ke liye ees room mein aag lag jaane dia......
Chitra: ( gusse mein zorr se kehte hue ) haan kyunki yeh painting maine humare shaadi ke anniversary ke liye banayi thi damn it!................socha tha ke tumhe gift doongi...........
Chitra route hue wahaan se chali gayi.
Next Day, Chitra Rishi se studio mein hamesha ke tarah milti hai...Rishi Chitra se oski udaasi ki wajah poochta hai, chitra route hue oske aur sidharth ke relation ke baare mein Rishi ko sab kuch bata deti hai...
Rishi: mujhe ek minute do..... ( Rishi went out for a minute)
Rishi: dekho zara een pictures ko....... Tum jab khush houti ho tab kitni achhi lagti ho....
Chitra: lekin yeh hassi kahin kho gayi hai.......Actually kahin kho gayi thi...Lekin...
Rishi: lekin???
Chitra: lekin, jab se tum mere life mein aaye ho...tab se meri smile bhi wapas agayi hai...... Thanks a lot
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Episode 6
Chitra's now totally fallen in love with Rishi. They started spending lots of time with eachother.
Rishi aur Chitra ko ghazals bahut pasand thhe esiliye ek evening Rishi aur chitra eksaath ek ghazal function attend karne gaye accidently wahaan sidhaarth ne chitra aur rishi ko saath dekha...Sidhaarth was stunned.
Next Day pata chitra ko pata chala ke Rishi ka murder hogaya hai.
Sidhaarth: oho bahut bura hua......
Chitra: yeh sab???...kya rishi ke murder ke peechey kya tum?...........
Sidhaarth gusse mein Chitra ke paas akaar osey bahut zorr se thappad maarta hai.
Sidhaarth: tumhe kya laga tha?! tum apne yaar ke saath mill kar mujhe dhoka dougi?!
Chitra: You!!! ( Chitra Sidhaarth ko thappad marne ki koshish karte hue but sidhaarth ne oska haath pakad rakha tha. )
Sidhaarth: tumhare paas aur koi choice bhi nahi hai mere saath rehne ke elava.....!
Sidhaarth ne Chitra ko dhakka dia aur wahan se chala gaya.
Present Day
Evening ka time houta hai. Sidhaarth ne ek bahut bada party throw kia hai. Achanak lights-off hou jate hain.
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Episode 7
Achanak---
Chitra was drunk. Sidhaarth Chitra ka haath pakad kar osey party se bedroom mein lekar ata hai, aur chitra ko thappad maarta hai. Chitra uthkar Sidhaarth ko dhakka deti hai aur puchti hai-
Chitra: how dare you?!...............
Chitra: tumne rishi ka murder kia hai aur ab tumhe darr lagraha hai kahin maine agar tumhari sachhai duniya ke saamne rakh di toh?!............
Sidhaarth: Just Goto hell!........... ( sidhaarth wahaan se jaane hi wala tha ke tabhi! )
Chitra: woh aaye thhe humse hamara haal puchne.......aur chal diye yu nazrein churakar?...... (Chitra baat karte-karte poore room mein whiskey gira rahi houti hai. )
Chitra: nazaron mein bas uska tasveer hi samaya hai..... kya hasratein hain zara humse bhi toh koi puche???
Sidhaarth: tum paagal ho gayi ho!
Chitra: ( smoke karte hue) tumhare pyaar mein....... aaj khud tabah hona hai....... Ya phir tumko tabaah kardena hai.........!
Chitra dropped her ciggerate aur poore room mein aag lagg jaati hai...
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Episode 8
Chitra dropped her ciggerate aur poore room mein aag lagg jaati hai...
Sidhaarth darr jata hai aur wahan se bahar nikalne ki koshish karne lagta hai lekin achanak Chitra ne oska haath pakad lia...Sidhaarth wahan se bhagne ki koshish karne lagta hai but koi raasta nahi milta....
Sidhaarth ne dekha ke table par ek pistol rakha hua tha...Tabhi wahan kisi ne oos pistol ko uthaya...
Woh person koi aur nahi Rishi tha.
Chitra Rishi ko dekhkar shock ho jaati hai. Chitra ko yakeen nahi araha tha ke Rishi zinda hai. Chitra ne jahan jeene ke saare umeed chhor di thi aaj Rishi ko zinda dekhkar Chitra bahut khush thi. chitra ke aankhon mein aansu agaye aur osne rishi ke taraf khudko oos aag se bahar nikaalne ke liye haath aage badhaya...
Lekin Rishi ne Chitra par woh pistol point kardia aur Rishi ne Chitra par goli chala dia.
Room mein aag aur bhi zyada critically badh jaati hai, aur poore room mein aag lagg jaati hai. Chitra ka woh banaya hua painting bhi jal jata hai...Aag lagne ke wajah se wahan bahut bada blast hota hai...
3days Later...
Sidhaarth aur Rishi ek silent place par milte hain aur baat karte hue-
Sidhaarth: I hired you to kill my wife...and you did your job well!........
Rishi: where's my money?
Sidhaath Rishi ko poore 1crores rupees deta hai.
Rishi: jaane se pehle ek baat batao, why did u killed your wife?
Sidhaarth: oske property, oske carieer se mere business ko profits...aur ab oske maut se aur bhi zyada sympathy aur oska sab kuch mera...!
Rishi: Ees poore murder ko maine finally ek accident ka Naqaab dey hi dia......
Sidhaarth: and now she's gone!
---The End---
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