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Koi tum sa nahi
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Koi tum sa nahi
A new story filled with fun, laughter and romance...starting from coming Saturday...
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I am posting part 4 of the story. I am getting very less response nowadays..hope to get more comments on this part.
This weekend again I am very busy and have not much time to write long parts so I am writing short ones....
Now Pratham was really angry with Gauri. He
was more angry because she exchanged the gift which he bought for Natasha and
because of this prank there was possibility
Of misunderstanding and fight between Pratham
and Natasha.
Next day: There is Puja in Mittal Parivaar
because they are launching a new project in business.
{Note : I had earlier mentioned that Gauri
along with her family used to live in Hyderabad but
had shifted recently in Mumbai. Umesh Mittal and Gauri’s dad were childhood
friends but Gauri and Pratham don’t know about that. Umesh has now invited Gauri’s
dad along with his family to come in his house to attend the Puja.”}
Gauri’s dad : Gauri aaj tum college se jaldi
se ghar aana. Tumhein mainey bataya hai na aaj hum Sab ko jaana hai aur aaj mai
tumhein apney bachpan kay bohot hi acchay dost say
Milwaney wala hun.
Gauri : Ji Papa !
She goes to college thinking aaj ke baad Pratham
kabhi meri taraf dekhay ga bhi hi nahi Accha sabak sikhaya us ko.
Pratham comes infont of Gauri and pretending
that he is talking with some girl says
Hi Preity wo aaj mai tumharay saath nahi
chal sakta kyunki aaj mujhey bohot Zaroori kaam hai. Hum baad mai chalaingey.
Take care bye…
Now he again dial some number and pretends
to talk with some another girl
Hi Jasmine, kaisi ho tum. Mai soch rah tha
aaj mai aur tum disco chaltay hain.
Theek hai shaam ko miltey hain bye…
Then he says to Gauri : aisay kya dekh rahi
ho mujhey?
Gauri : Kuch soch rahi thi tumharay baarey
main !
Pratham : Mai bhi soch raha hun tumharay
baaray mai !
Gauri : Kya ?
Pratham : That will you marry me? He laughs
and goes away.
There was science exhibition and for that
those who have participated had made several creative things i.e, crafts and
models like solar system. Priya who was friend of both Pratham and Gauri had
made model of Volcano which she had given to Gauri to take care of it.
Pratham watches it and in absences of Gauri
comes and throw that volcano and it get break into pieces.
Gauri comes : Pratham ! enough is enough !
Sharam nahi aati hai tumhein aisa kartay huway? Tumhara jhagda mujh say tha tum
ney Priya ka banaya hua model kyu tod diya?
Pratham : Jhagda toh tum ney shuru kya.
Mainey toh mazak ki thi tum nay Natasha
ka gift exchange ker kay uski jaga Cauliflower rakh ker ladai shuru ki. Ab kya mai tum say poochu Kay tumhein problem
toh mujh sey thi toh phir
tum ney Natasha kay gift ki jagah
cauliflower kyu rakha ?
Gauri : Pratham tumhein is ki maafi mangni
hogi..
Pratham laughs and says Gauri tum mujhey
jaanti nahi ho. Pratham kissi say maafi nahi mangta.
Gauri : Accha tum bhi mujhey nahi jaantey
ho. Sorry to tumhein bolna hi padey ga Chahey kuch bhi hojaye…
Pratham : Best of luck..tum jo ker sakti ho
ker kay dekh lo
Pratham goes to Priya.
Pratham : Priya mujhey tum say aik baat
kerni hai.
Priya : Haan Pratham bolo
Pratham : tum ney jo volcano banaya ussey
tum ney kis ko sambhalney kay liye de diya. Us Gauri ney issey zamin per rakha
tha aur mujh say wo toot gaya.
Priya : Koi baat nahi Pratham. Its ok. Aaj
last date nahi hai. Mai baad mai doosra aur accha bana lungi.
Pratham : Bas aik request hai Gauri per
gussey mat hona. Yeh aur baat hai kay ussey care karni chahiye thi aur kisi
safe jaga per rakhna tha par galti toh aakhir insaan say hi hoti hai na !
Priya : Tum uski fikar mat karo.
Priya goes to Gauri.
Gauri : Priya tumhein aik baat batani hai.
Priya : Mujhey pata chal gaya
hai kay mera Volcano toot gaya
hai.
Gauri : Tumhein kis ney bataya ?
Priya : Pratham ney
Gauri : Us nay tumhein sorry bola ?
Priya : Nahi yaar. Friendship mai no sorry
no thanks !
Gauri : Kya ? tum ney us badtameez ko maaf
ker diya?
Priya : Haan ussey bhi aur tumhein bhi !
Gauri : Kya mujhey bhi…?
Priya : Haan tumhein bhi ! magar aik baat mujhey
samjh nahi ayi tumhein ussay sambhal kar sahi jaga rakhna tha. Tum issey zameen
per rakh ker kyu chali ayi. Anyways
Forget it. Mera waisay bhi itna zyada accha
nahi bana tha. Mai doosra bana ker laungi.
Gauri in her heart : Priya tum nay Pratham
ko maaf kar diya theek hai lekin mai ussay maaf nahi Karungi.
Pratham gets call from mobie.
Umesh Mittal : Pratham tum kab ghar aarahey
ho? Tumhien pata hai na aaj puja hai?
Pratham : Wo dad mujhey aaj bohot hi zarori
kaam hai !
Umesh Mittal : Kuch bhi kaam ho. Tum jaldi
say aa jau.
Pratham : Dad mai pooja mai zaroor aunga
lekin mujhey thoda late ho jayega. Mai koshish karunga jitna jaldi hosakey utna
jaldi aajaun.
Samay says to Umesh Mittal : Mujey samajh
nahi aata Pratham bhaya Ko aisa kya kaam agaya jo wo Puja mai late aarahey
hain.Puja say zyada zaroori kuch kaam hota hai kya?
UM gets more angry on Pratham.
Chotti Daadi : Badi thoda Prasad toh de !
Badi Daadi : Pehlay Puja toh honay dey !
Chotti Daadi : Arrey Pooja to hoti rahey gi
pehlay Prasad toh de dey !
Badi : Chotti sabar ker ! puja say pehlay
Prasad nahi milley ga.
Chotti : Badi tujhey to mai Pooja kay baad
theek karti hun.
Meanwhile Gauri is going to home and watches
Pratham.
Pratham : Yash chal swimming kernay chaltay
hain. Phir mujhey jaldi ghar per bhi jaana hai. Meray paas zyada time nahi hai.
Yash : Dekh Pratham mainey kaha mujhey abhi
Proffesor say zarori baat kerni hai. Aik kaam ker tu nikal mai bas thodi der
mai pohonchta hun.
Pratham : Chal theek hai…!
Pratham goes to swimming pool and Gauri
follows her and Pratham do not know about it.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> The End
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Now will Gauri play any prank on Pratham ?
Will Gauri meet Pratham in his home when she will go
for Puja?
For that read the next part ……………..!
What do you think will happen now? Can you
guess it?
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puja mein dono ek dooosre ko dekh kar hairaan ho jaayenge
ur script was really good and i hope tum aise hi awssim epi send karte raho
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I guess, gauri will reply pratham by doing some prank on him. This would be a volcanic-reply for him! :devilish:
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