Koi tum sa nahi

by **HitenGaurifan** 7/7/2009, 8:04 am

A new story filled with fun, laughter and romance...starting from coming Saturday...

Koi tum sa nahi Kts1psd

by **HitenGaurifan** 7/7/2009, 8:11 am

I dont know may be its the prob of size that com pic is not appearing...if you want you can see the pic at following link
https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/i/kts1psd.jpg/

by **aanchal** 7/7/2009, 8:52 am

will be waiting for this one also :voshah:

by **virgosaumya** 7/7/2009, 8:24 pm

iska bhi wait rahega

by **HitenGaurifan** 11/7/2009, 8:32 am

Koi tum sa nahi

Part 1

It was a beautiful atmosphere. There was beautiful garden. Rain was falling and a beautiful girl was dancing in rain. She was calling her name Pratham…wahan kya kar rahe ho yahan au dekho kitna maza aaraha hai. As he was about to go there, the sound of alarm clock made him wake up from his dream.
Pratham: Oh no…ye subha itni jaldi kyun hojaati hai. Abhi college jaana hai.
(Pratham Mittal is handsome, smart, naughty and funloving type of person. He belongs to a rich family who lives in Mumbai. Yash and Hiten are his best friends)

Gauri was combing her hair and getting ready for the college. Before going for the college she prays infront of the idol of Ganeshji..hai bhagwan aaj mera college mai pehla din hai. Sab kuch acche se ho.
(Gauri Pradhan is very cute, intelligent and fun loving girl. She belongs to middle class family. Her family has shifted from Hyderabad to Mumbai some time back so Gauri has got admission in new college. Its her first day in college. Her only friend here is Priya, who is also one of the friend of Pratham)

As Pratham was getting ready, chotti daadi comes there.
Chotti daadi: Kya hua aaj college badi jaldi jaa raha hai
Pratham: Haan wo kuch kaam hai
Chotti daadi: Kissi ladki se kaam hai na..Sab samjhti hu mai
Pratham smiles and goes away.

Pratham went to the college and while he was busy talking with Yash and Hiten he remembers that Natasha is waiting for him in library. Gauri was in very much hurry as she got late because of traffic problem. She was running and Pratham was also running. Both bumped into each other and fell down. Pratham looked into eyes of Gauri..what a beautiful eyes, beautiful face. She was looking very nice in blue salwar kameez. Gauri was lost in thoughts as she finds Pratham very good looking. As she stood up…
Pratham: Will you marry me?
Gauri: What do mean?
Pratham smilingly: Oh maine kaha excuse me. Don’t you know what it means?
Gauri: Oh sorry. I thought you said some thing else.
She went away while Pratham was thinking of her only.

Coming up next:
* Gauri : Next time if you will try to come on my way then I will teach you lesson. Yaad rakho gey ki Gauri koun hai !
* PM smiles towards Gauri and Gauri says to her self accha ab dekhna mai kya karti hun.

by **HitenGaurifan** 11/7/2009, 8:33 am

Ok friends remember

Every Saturday:Koi tum sa nahi
Every Sunday: Pyaar ki ek kahani
Every Monday: Bond of love

by **aanchal** 11/7/2009, 10:59 am

thanks for updating Very Happy

liked the part very much. pratham's reaction on seeing gauri :titterr: :kkht:

by Guest 11/7/2009, 10:53 pm

Gotcha!

So ur stories will be update every weekends... That's cool as u r doing 3 stories, so it's gud slot. Smile

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Mine fav. line is where hiten says to gauri ''will you marry me'' and den suddenly he turn his words to ''excuse me'' lol this style is really cool and also fits with pratham character as he is a badmaash... :titterr:

by **HitenGaurifan** 12/7/2009, 7:39 am

Thanks Aanchal and Diipendu for reading and replying..so you liked the first interaction of Pratham and Gauri. Now in coming parts you will see some funny acts. Hope you will enjoy the second part too.

by **HitenGaurifan** 18/7/2009, 6:06 am

KOI TUM SA NAHI
Part 2

It was morning. Pratham was still sleeping. Yash came to Pratham’s room and made him wake up…Pratham…Pratham….!

Pratham: Haan bol yaar kya hua?

Yash: Aaj Natasha ka birthday hai !

Pratham: Kya? Arre haan mai toh bhool hi gaya tha. Tu kya kal mujhey yaad nahi dila sakta tha?

Yash: Arrey aaj subha us ney mujhey call kiya. Mujhey khud pata nahi tha. Mai bhi bhool gaya tha Lekin wo bol rahi thi mujhey pata tha Yash tum bhool jaugey lekin dekhna Pratham ko yaad hoga.

Pratham: Accha tu collge jaa mai abhi gift shop se gift ley kar aata hun.

Gauri was standing in corridor and was reading a book. Pratham after buying gift for Natasha came running to the college and once again by mistake he bumped into Gauri and both fell down.
Pratham saw Gauri was today in beautiful pink top and black pant and was looking nice.

Pratham: Will you marry me??

This time Gauri burst out

Gauri: What you think of yourself?

Pratham: Some one who deserves to be your boy friend !

Gauri: How dare you ! Mr…

Pratham: Pratham !

Gauri: Whatever ! I am not that type of girl . Don’t dare to…

Pratham: I am sorry..Actually I was joking. Galti say mai tum sey takra gaya mai jaldi mai tha is liye mainey tumhein nahi dekha believe me..!

Gauri: Next time if you will try to come on my way then I will teach you lesson. Yaad rakho ge ki Gauri koun hai

Gauri went from there.

Yash : Arrey Pratham koun thi wo?

Pratham: Pata nahi !

by **HitenGaurifan** 18/7/2009, 6:08 am

KOI TUM SA NAHI PART 2 CONTINUES....

Chotti Daadi: Mai to ja rahi hun. Tu chal rahi hai ?

Badi Daadi : Kahan per?

Chotti Daadi: Beauty parlor mai aur kahan ? Facial, Wax, manicure karanay..

Badi Daadi : Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram ! Chotti tu kab badi hogi. Kalyug agaya hai kalyug !

Chotti Daadi: Tujhey aaj pata chala hai. Kal tak kya tu apney aap ko Treta yug mai samjh rahi thi. Dekh badi 2009 zamana agaya hai. Mai toh ja rahi hun..

Gauri was reading some thing from notice board and Pratham came from back and says
Will you marry me ?

Gauri in anger turned and saw Pratham with mobile in his hand.

Pratham (to Gauri) : Kya hua? Mai tumhein nahi keh raha hun. Apni dost Kali se baat ker raha hun.

Pratham : Haan toh mai tum say keh raha tha ki {Watching towards Gauri, he says in phone} kal tumhein blue salwar kurtey mai dekha. Bohot sundar lag rahi thi tum aur aaj is Pink top mai to tum bohot hi acchi lag rahi ho !

Gauri { in anger} Now will you please Shut up !

Pratham : Excuse me ! Whats your problem, Mai toh apni dost say baat ker rah hun.
Gauri goes from that place and Pratham also goes in same way following Gauri and pretending that he is talking with some one on phone.
Pratham { in phone but looking towards Gauri} toh mai keh raha tha tum gussay mai bohot acchi lagti ho par kya tum kabhi smile nahi kar sakti ho?
I love you Gauri..
Now Gauri turned towards him in extreme anger..
Pratham continues : Gauri Gauri si Kali !
Pratham smiles towards Gauri and Gauri says to her self accha ab dekhna mai kya karti hun.
Gauri saw Prathan has brought gift for some girl. She exchanged that gift and packs Cauliflower
In same type of gift paper and puts there !
Pratham gives gift to Natasha and says

You are such a special friend that I have bring special gift for you. Open it now and see the Surprise !

Natasha : Thank you Pratham

Gauri was looking all………
THE END
What will happen Next for that wait for the next part !

by Guest 18/7/2009, 9:05 am

Episode was khatta-meetha. But pratham asking gauri 'will you marry me?' Pratham really want to marry gauri??? :loshish:

by **aanchal** 18/7/2009, 12:18 pm

ya agree wid diipendu. khatta meetha lol!

:yess...:
loved this part too. waiting eagerly for next saturday

by **virgosaumya** 18/7/2009, 8:27 pm

epi was really good yaar pratham really wants to marry gauri or just flurt with her

jo bhi ho epi was nice

by **HitenGaurifan** 19/7/2009, 2:54 pm

Thanks diipendu, Aanchal and Soumya for the replies. Pratham right now is not fallen is love though he is amazed with beauty of Gauri. He did joke or flirt...and was not serious about what he said.

by Guest 20/7/2009, 11:40 pm

Actually munir... Iam sorry because i was thinking this topic is 'Pyaar ki ek kahaani'. But this page was opened from the last post so the name of this story was'nt appeared.

Yeh story kuch der se shuru hua but it is running gud(as viewpoints from other forums saying that.) Smile

by **HitenGaurifan** 22/7/2009, 6:12 pm

Diipendu thats good that you enjoyed this part..I hope you will enjoy the upcoming part even more.

by **HitenGaurifan** 25/7/2009, 7:06 am

KOI TUM SA NAHI
PART 3

I hope you all will continue to read this
and will give me your feedbacks, your likes, dislikes and suggestions.

Pratham : Natasha you are such a special friend
that I have brought a special gift for you. Open it now and see the surprise!

Natasha : Thank you Pratham and yeah sure I
am opening it…

Pratham : wait a minute first guess what will be
in it….

Gauri who was standing near, was smiling that
what will happen now !

Pratham : Guess karo na

Natasha : Pratham, I can’t guess

She opened the gift and Pratham was shocked.
There was Cauliflower in it

Pratham had written beautiful verses of poem
along with gift but instead of

that there was a note on paper which was :
“Dear friend I am giving you

in gift some thing special , cauliflower
because its good for health and you know

There is vitamin
C in cauliflower."

Natasha gets really shocked. Pratham was not expecting that this will happen.

He
begins to laugh and says: Natasha this was just a prank. This is not your gift.I was just joking. As for your gift, after
college we will go to restaurant and there I will Present you your birthday gift.

Now Pratham is in college canteen. He says: Yash
wait I am coming.

Pratham says to him self : Pata nahi ye
Hiten Kahan reh gaya
hai. Wo milley to saath mai discuss Karun ki
Natasha ko kahan le kar jaun. Kuch socha bhi nahi aur phir se gift bhi lena hoga. Gauri...usko toh mai nahi chodunga.

Gauri see Yash alone. She comes towards him

Gauri : Yash tum hi ho na !

Yash : haan

Gauri : Wo aik ladki kab say tumhein dhoond
rahi hai.

Yash : Koun ?

Gauri : Mai nahi jaanti usko. Abhi thodi der
pehlay canteen kay bahir thi.

Yash : Mai abhi aata hun. He goes to find
that girl.

Meanwhile Gauri puts lots of spices {laal
Mirchi} in Pratham’s Sandwich

Now after few mins Yash comes back as he
found no such girl and Pratham

And Natasha also comes and sit and start eating
sandwich.

Pratham takes a bite and quickly drinks a full glass of
water

Pratham: Whats this..itni zyada mirch ! kitna
teekha hai yai !

Yash : Nahi yaar roz jaisa hota hai waisa hi to
hai.

Natasha : Mujhey bhi accha lag raha hai.

Pratham again takes a bite. It was very very
spicy just then he saw

Gauri was very near to him.

Gauri tooks her mobile in hand and looking
towards Pratham

Says: Hi Mirchi lagi kya?

Pratham turns angry..!

Gauri : Wait a minute…(then says to Pratham) why
you are so angry? Mai

Tum say nahi apney dost Kalu say baat kar
rahi hun. Tumhein koi

Problem?

Pratham is silent now and understood that Gauri
is taking revenge in similar manner.

Gauri : Haan to aaj jo mai nay Cauli flower
tumhey diya wo kesa laga. Maza aya

And looks smiling towards Pratham.

{Back ground song from Kutumb…fast song}

“tu hai unnis har baat mein main bees hun

kehte hain college mein aisi one piece hun

ulajh naa mujhse bahut pachhtaayegaa

sabke aage mazaak ban ke reh jaayegaa

sheesha hun jisse patthar bhi toote

sach
bolte hain mere aage jhootthe

tu
cheez kya hai ja-ja re jhootthe”

by **aanchal** 25/7/2009, 5:36 pm

ha..ha. :yess...: . nice part. enjoyed reading it very much Razz

by **virgosaumya** 25/7/2009, 8:28 pm

dude it was great part but bahaut kam tha thoda sa aur zyada bhej dete
and i'm deadly sure that this serial will be rocking
and i'm excited to see the next updates b'coz now i can't wait for next week
plz one epi just send it

by **HitenGaurifan** 27/7/2009, 10:19 pm

Thanks Aanchal and Saumya. I am glad that you enjoyed the part. Saumya, I know it was a short part..actually I was busy this weekend. But hopefully from next time..u will not get this complain.

by **Gayathri** 28/7/2009, 2:43 pm

its mindblowing script .. ... intresting !!

by **BLH** 30/7/2009, 6:40 pm

very nice story...full of nok-jhokes between pratham and gauri.. :lovliness:

by **Gayathri** 31/7/2009, 8:20 pm

superb ... i m just enjoyn readin

by **HitenGaurifan** 1/8/2009, 6:59 am

Thank you very much Gayathri and BLH for the comments

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