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Ek Choti Si Aasha
Ek Choti Si Aasha
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Yeh kahaani hai, dhara ki. Dhara 8 saal ki, ek chote se sheyher mein dhara apni maa ke saath rehti thi. Uske pita ab ees duniya mein nahi thhey eseliye dhara ki zimmedari uske maa par thi.
Dhara ki maa janvi. Janvi job karti thi aur poori koshish karti thi ke woh dhara ke har sapno ko pura kar sakey aur eseliye janvi bahut mehnat kar rahi thi.
Dhara hamesha khud mein doobi rehti. Hamesha har chizo ko bahut dhyaan se observe karti rehti thi.
Aaj dhara ki maa hamesha ki tarah shaam ko office se ghar louti thi. Janvi ne dekha ke dhara kuch khoi-khoi si hai. Os se poochne par dhara ne apne sawaalon ki potri janvi ke saamne rakh diye aur janvi hamesha ke tarah phir se oske sawaalon mein olajh gayi.
Dhara ne janvi se poocha ke-
Dhara : mere baaki friends ke ghar bahut badey hain aur unke parents hamesha onke liye expensive gifts laate hain tou aap mere liye kabhi koi gift kyun nahi laate ?
Janvi dhara ko pyaar se samjhate hue kehti hai-
Janvi : woh beta... unke mummy-daddy onke liye gift zaroor laate hain magar jo parents itney expensive gifts dete hain na woh kabhi bhi apne bachho ko utna pyaar nahi karte...
Dhara : magar ?
Ees se pehle dhara phir se apne sawaalon ki train shuru karti janvi jaldi se kitchen mei chali gayi dinner tyaar karne.
Agle din pata chalta hai ke pados mein koi naye couple aaye hain rehne '
Mr. & Mr. dixit '.
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Mr. dixit apne naye ghar ke andar gayye peechey mrs. dixit bhi jaa rahi thi ke tabhi mrs. dixit ne ek pyaari si, masoom si bachhi ko dekha. Woh dhara thi.
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Mrs. dixit dhara ko bula rahi thi magar achanak dhara wahaan se chali apne ghar ke taraf chali gayi magar jaate hue woh apne ek best friend neha se takra jaati hai.
Dhara : arre neha, tu kahaan thi ? maine tujhe kitnaa dhunda tu nahi mili ?...
Neha : pata hai, main aaj se apne naye school jaa rahi hoon !... ( khush houte hue )
Naye school ke naam ko sunkar dhara chaukte hue bol uthi -
Dhara : kya ! naya schooool ?... kaisa yeh naya school ? hamaare school jaisa ?
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Naye school ke naam ko sunkar dhara chaukte hue bol uthi -
Dhara : kya ! naya schooool ?... kaisa yeh naya school ? hamaare school jaisa ?
Neha : nahiiii, naya school mein bahut kuch hai... bahut saare toys, bahuttttt badaa garden...
Dhara : woww...
Dhara : ( mann mein sochte hue ) kaash agar main bhi naye school mein jaa sakti
Dhara : idea !
Neha : kaisa idea ?
Dhara wahaan se apne ghar ke taraf bhaagte hue apne maa ke paas jaati hai.
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Maa maa = ( dhara apne maa ko bulate hue )
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Janvi : kya hua ?
Dhara : maa, mujhe naye school mein admission dila do na ?...
Janvi : naya school ? achanak se tujhe naya school jaane ki kaise sujhi ?
Dhara : maa pata hai aaj main neha se mili thi... woh naye school mei jaati hai... osne mujhe bataya ke wahan bahuttttt saare toys hain, wahaan bahuttt sundar badaaaa sa garden hai...
Dhara : maa, mujhe bhi naye school mei jaane do na ? wahaan neha bhi hogi ?
Janvi dhara ko haan nahi keh sakti thi kyunki jis school mein dhara jana chahti hai oos school ka fees bahuut zyada tha. Wahaan sirf badey lougon ke bachhon ko admission milta hai.
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Achanak Janvi ki tabiyat kharaab houne lagti hai. Janvi behosh hou jaati hai.
Aas-paas ke padosi milkar janvi ko hospital mein shift karte hain. Zindagi Janvi aur Dhara ke liye agle kuch hi minute o mein sab kuch badal dene wali thi jab doctor janvi ko bahut afsos ke saath yeh baat batate hain ke janvi ko brain tumour hai aur janvi ke paas sirf 3 mahine hain.
Yeh baat sirf ek baat na thi janvi ke liye balki yeh oske liye ek keher se kam na tha jo ospar bijli bankar girr chuki thi. Magar esmei oos masoom ki kya galati thi jisne abhi duniya ko apne nanhe aankhon mein theek se sanjoya bhi nahi tha ?
Janvi ko kuch samajh mein nahi araha tha ke woh een baaton ko kaise accept karey aur sabse badi baat tou yeh thi ke woh apne beti ko ees baat ka kaise yakeen dilaaye, kya karey aur kya na karey ?
Janvi hospital se ghar lout ati hai. Yakeen tou abhi bhi nahi araha tha ke Janvi ki zindagi oska saath sirf teen mahino tak hi nibha payegi magar phir oske baad dhara ka kya hoga ?
Janvi apne ghar mein andhere mein beith kar yehi soch rahi thi ke oske baad dhara ka kya hoga ? kaise jiyegi dhara apne maa ke bina ? Tabhi darwaaze par koi dastak deta hai. Janvi uthti hai aur jakar darwaza kholti hai. Darwaze ke khulte hi oos andhere kamre mein roshni hou jaati hai. Bahar mrs. dixit aayi thi janvi se aur uski beti dhara se milne.
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Janvi : arey aap ? aap tou pados mein naye-naye aayein hai na ? aayiye andar aayiye !...
Mrs.dixit : apki beti dhara kahin nazar nahi arahi hai ?
Janvi : woh andar padhai kar rahi hai...
Mrs.dixit : bahut hi pyaari bachii hai...
Mrs.dixit : woh actually... aaj jab maine dhara ko dekha tou woh mujhe bahut apni si lagi aur apse ek such baat batau ?... woh main yehaan actually dhara se hi milne ayi thi... osmein mujhe apni beti mansi ki jhalak nazar ati hai...
Mrs.dixit bahut emotional houkar apne zindagi ke oon saare baaton ko janvi se share karti hai jab osne apne beti mansi ko ek accident mein kho dia tha aur tab se lekar ab tak mrs.dixit oos din ko abhi tak nahi bhula paayi hain.
Yehi sunnkar Janvi ko ek khyaal ata hai. Shayad ees waqt janvi ek maa ke tarah soch rahi thi apne beti ke future ko secure karne ke liye aur esi wajah se janvi ne mrs.dixit ko apne bimaari wali baat bata di. Janvi ne mrs.dixit ke saamne Dhara ko adopt karne ki baat bhi ki.
Mrs.dixit ko aisa lag raha tha ke jaise onhe mansi phir se dhara ke roop mein milne waali thi. Mrs.dixit ne osi waqt haan keh dia.
Mrs.dixit ne yeh baat apne pati ko bhi bataya tou pehle Mr.dixit ne bahut mana kia magar mrs.dixit ne onhe bahut request kia phir akhir mein woh bhi maan gayye thhey.
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Samay na hi kisi ke liye rukta hai na hi yeh pata chalne deta hai ke kis tarah woh beet chuka hai. Eesi tarah 2.5 mahine beet gayye aur aaj Dhara apne maa se bichhar kar bahut doorr jaa rahi thi. Mr aur Mrs.dixit Mumbai shift hou rahey thhey. Janvi ne aaj Dhara ko akhri baar dekha aur osey alvida keh dia.
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Dhara apne naye mata-pita ke saath mumbai chali gayi. Edhar doctor ne janvi ko zaroori treatment ke liye dusre sheyher mein jaane ko kaha. Janvi shaam ke bus se dusre sheyher jaa rahi thi ke
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Achaanak !
Janvi jis bus mein jaa rahi thi oos bus ka accident hou jata hai. Kismat ka yeh kaisa khel tha yeh tou samajh pana bahut mushkil tha. Magar yeh kahani yehin khatam nahi thii...
20 saal baad...
Mumbai
Aaj Dhara Dixit sirf ek naam nahi balki woh ek bahut badi singer hai.
Dhara ko apni beetey zindagi sabkuch dhundli si dekhayi deti thi magar ab bhi woh chehra kahin na kahin yaad zaroor ata tha.
Aaj dhara ka bahut bada concert hai.
Scene : Dhara ne stage par kadam rakha.
Udhar hospital mein ek patient jo peechle 20 saalon se behosh thi osey aaj hosh aya.
Edhar dhara gana gaa rahi thi aur udhar woh patient jaldi se uth jaati hai. Osey kuch yaad sa ata hai-" Dhara "...
Woh patient koi aur nahi Janvi thi jiska 20 saal pehle accident hua tha magar kismat ne aise palti maari ke waqt ke saath-saath poori zindagi hi badal gayi. Saare aashaye kahin kho si gayi hain... kahaan hai woh ? kuch khabar nahi...
Janvi jaldi se apne beti ko dhundne ke liye nikalti tabhi oski nazar ayene par padi jispar osne khudko dekha ke waqt ab pehle jaisa nahi raha tha. Waqt ke saath ab chehre bhi badal gaye thhey aise mein woh kahaan dhunde apne dhara ko ?
Agar janvi ke paas kuch tha tou woh sirf ek naam- dhara...
Janvi mumbai pahuch jaati hai apne beti dhara ko dhundne ke liye. Mumbai ke mushkil raahon se thak-haar kar ab woh kahin beith gayi tabhi osey pata chalta hai ke oski beti Dhara ab ek bahut badi singer hai "Dhara Dixit". Shayad itne zulmon ke baad kismat thodi meherbaan ho gayi thi. Janvi ek concert mein pahuch jaati hai jahaan aaj dhara aaney waali thi magar mann mein ek toofan sa tha ke kya dhara osey pehchanegi ?
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Chahe jo bhi ho, janvi ek koshish zaroor karna chahti thi aur bahut mushkilon ke baad wahaan se dhara guzar rahi thi jahaan bahut bheer thi aur osi bheer mein oski maa janvi thi jo apne beti se milne ki aas rakhi hui thi. Dhara ki nazar ek baar janvi par padti hai aur woh soch mein padd jaati hai ke yeh chehra kuch jaana-pehchana sa lagta hai... magar phir bhi yeh koi apna sa lagta hai... Janvi wahaan saamne aati hai magar dhara osey pehchaan ne se mana kar deti hai.
Janvi ki poori ummedey toot jaati hain. Beekhar jate hain sab sapne aur onhi toote hue sapno ke saath janvi wapas chali jaati hai.
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Scene : Janvi ko ab oos train ka intezaar tha jo osey yehaan se, apni beti dhara se doorr ley jaata...
Magar janvi ko yeh pata na tha ke agle kuch minuton mein zindagi ek aur mourr lene waali thi. Shayad yeh bhi kismat ka koi khel tha ke ek choti si asha abhi bhi thi ke sab thik hou jayega...
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Achanak dhara ko yaad ajata hai. Dhara ko woh sab kuch yaad ajata hai aur woh wahaan se apne maa Janvi ko dhundne ke liye nikal jaati hai. Yehaan train platform par achuki thi aur janvi train mein beith gayi thi. Train ab jaaney hi waali thi.
Dhara ne poori koshish ki apne maa janvi ko dhundne ke liye magar woh kahin nahi thi.
Train ab jaane ke liye tyaar thi. Janvi ne khudko jaise-taise samjha lia ke ab kuch bhi pehle jaisa nahi hou sakta hai...
Achanak peechey se koi ata hai aur janvi ko galey laga leta hai. Janvi dekhti hai tou woh "Dhara" ko apne beti ko saamne paati hai.
Dono osi train se wapas osi sheyher chaley jaate hain jahaan se yeh kahaani shuru hui thi.
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