Pyaar ki ek Kahani

Hello every one..Its Jai and I am posting the introductory part of my story. I hope you will like it. Whether you like, dislike or have suggestions, comments any thing please do post it. I really wish to get honest and sincere comments from you friends. If I will get good response, then I will try to post every Sunday one part of the story.
I will be starting one or two more stories very soon here. Meanwhile read the first part.

As this is just introductory part its short and in summarization way...



Gauri lives in
Panchgani in beautiful bungalow while Pratham lives in Mumbai.


Gauri is crying
for her fate remembering the past incidences of her life when she was little
girl. Her mother and father had passed away. After her grandfather’s death, her
aunt and uncle have came living with her and she had to bear all their cruel
acts all the time.


She remembers
two years back when she was eighteen years old and attended a party after a
long time. She saw a very smart guy who was of course Pratham but he was very
far away from her. She kept watching him from that distance and just then her
cousin Meghna cruelly scolded her that where are you lost. She made her insult
infront of every one.


Among the
family her only little cousin brother Shashank used to realize that every one
is so cruel towards Gauri. Once when her Aunt Mandira, asked her to sweep and
make every thing clean while she was busy watching movie and eating popcorns.
By mistake of Gauri, the flower vase was broken and that day Aunt got extremely
very angry on her and said she will not get dinner that day. Shashank asked her
every one here hates you then why don’t run away some where. Gauri don’t know
where to go..but now she thinks enough is enough. She heard her Uncle, Manik
was talking with her Aunt that there is man who is 67 years old and is very
rich and he likes Gauri. He said if we will make Gauri marry with him then he
can give us lot of money but don’t tell this to Gauri now.


Gauri thinks
now she has not any option then to leave the house.


In dark night
she runs away from the house.





Pratham Mittal,
belongs to a very rich family in Mumbai. His father Umesh Mittal is Strict and
gets angry easily while his mother is a loving mother.


Pratham had
holidays and he wanted to go to some hill station but his father not agreed. At
last he had convinced his father, “Dad..Its not so far away. I will come back after 15 days.”





Now in dark
night he is in Panchgani in his car. While Gauri is running fastly as she feels
some people are following her shouting like “ A..chikni kahan jaa rahi hai…a
ruk kahan bhaag reli hai..Apun ka paas jara aa to idhaar..haila ye shaari to
rukti hi nahi hai pakdo issey..”. She runs fast and is very afraid…She is in
forest type area and is running fast… Its dark and horrible night and winds are
blowing fast… Oh God help me. She tries to recite Hanuman Chalisa but she has
forgotten all words in fear…only she remembers at that time was yelling of her
aunt towards her.





She finds a
beautiful car..She run fast and ask please help me..Meri madad karo. Car stops
and Pratham comes out of it.

wahh ......... plss continue ....

ya plz continue. liked the introduction.

Munir i too belive in sincere comments... Bcoz they are very important to improve the story...

Glad to see one more writer for serial one... Welcome munir to fan-fiction area (as a writer)

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This the introduction and the character names are 'Gauri' 'Pratham' ...







Iam sure, u will get many more comments, compliments and viewership :afcorse !: (but no critical comments :lovliness: ) \



JUST ONE REQUEST: If u post this story, twice in a week... Then it will be more gud??? Plzzz munir?


P.S: Eagerly waiting for the next part! ( episode )

Hi!! Nice story yaar!! Plzzz update soon with big epis .

NICE WAITING FOR NEXT

awssim story dude story padke to pc se hatne ka man nahin karta ye baandhi rakhti hai
par tum ise twice in a week bheja karo aur agle part mein kya hoga
jaldi hi bhejna

nice story..... :lovliness:

Thank you very much Gayathri, Aanchal, Diipendu, Usha, Sahil, Saumya and BLH for your precious comments..
Diipendu and Soumya, thanks a lot for such encouraging words. It will be difficult for me to post the story twice a week, as I am planning to post two other stories besides this one (and after 5 to 6 episodes I will like to ask you all which of my story you are enjoying more) anyways but I will try my best, whenever I get time I will try to post it twice.

Thanks to all readers once again. I hope in coming parts, I will be upto your expectations. Feel free to give comments and your views..bye

Iam eager to watch the episodes, plz come soon...

ok so on your request I am posting the second part..Plz do give your comments about your likes and dislikes...
Pyaar ki ek kahani
Part 2
Prathams family members were talking about Pratham's marriage.



Ajay Chachu : Array jab bhi mai Saniya Mirza
ko dekhta hun mai sochta hu Pratham ki shaadi is jesi ladki say honi chahiye..


Badi Daadi : Array nahi nahi..agar is say
hui to ghar mai kab rahey gi..Mainay soch liya hai Pratham ki shaadi kis say
hogi. Pratham ki shaadi kissi sanskarri aur adarshwadi ladki say hogi aur mai
aisi ladki ko jaanti hun…


Chotti Daadi : Badi..tu to rehnay
dey..Mainay bhi soch liya hai Pratham ki Shaadi Katrina Kaif jessi kissi ladki
se hogi.


Umesh Mittal : Bas kijiye.Mai nahi chahta
abhi Pratham ki shaadi kay baaray mai kuch bhi discuss ho. Pratham abhi
university mai hai aur jab tak uski prahai puri nahi hoti tab tak aap mai say
koi bhi uski shaadi kay baaray mai baat nahi karay.

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Pratham stops his
car and finds a very cute girl standing near him looking very afraid.


Gauri : Mujhey
bachalo wo mera peecha kar rahey hain
And the she fells down.


Pratham got worried. He sat down and looked towards the face of Gauri. He took out bottle of
water and sprinkled some water on her face. she
opened the eyes and got nervous and confused.


Gauri : Kuch log
pata nahi kyu mera peecha kar rahay hain…Please mujhey bacha lo.


Pratham : Sure !


He opens the car
and Gauri sits inside. He drives the car fastly and then tells her..ab
ghabranay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.Mera
naam Pratham hai aur mai Mumbai mai rehta hun. Tumhara naam kya hai?


Gauri who is still
afraid and confuse tells : Mera naam Gauri hai.


Pratham : Oh ! Nice
name Gauri…Accha tumhein jaana kahan hai ?


Gauri : wo is taraf
dekho wahan par Mandir hai mujhey wahin par chod do.


Pratham : Kya ???
Itni raat ko mandir mai kya kaam hai…


Gauri : Kyu? Matlab
kay….mujhey..mujhey haan Mandir mai Puja karni hai is samay..


Pratham : Itni raat
ko ?


Gauri : Haan please
mujhey wahan par chod do please..


Pratham was
surprised but yet he said : ok jesa tum chaho..


He drops her
towards Temple and goes away to his home.





Pratham is not
staying in any hotel over there. Instead there is old bunglow of Ajay Chachu
over there so Ajay Chachu had given him keys of the house so he may stay there.
Pratham goes to house and whole night he thinks only about Gauri? Wo ladki koun
hogi..Kya wo Mandir jaana chahti hogi ya phir jhoot bol rahi hogi?





Gauri spent all
night in Temple and in morning goes to her friend’s home
whose name was Peenal. Peenal is childhood friend of Gauri. She and Gauri were
nice friends but Gauri never visited her home because of restrictions imposed
by her aunt and uncle.


Peenal got happy to see Gauri..



Peenal :
Gauri kesi ho tum?..tum itni subha subha..come inside


Gauri : Peenal,
Kya mai tumharay ghar mai kuch din ruk sakti hu agar tumhein koi problem na ho
to?


Peenal : zaroor
Gauri..kyun nahi? Magar ye bata aaj tu itni udaas kyu hai.


Tears came from
eyes of Gauri and she says : Peenal mera is duniya mai koi bhi nahi hai. She
tells every thing to Peenal.


Peenal : Come on
Gauri ! don’t cry please ! Dekho mai tumhari dost hun aur meray saamnay agar
tum rougi to mujhey bhi rona aajayega. Tum fikar nahi karo mai tumharay liye
kuch na kuch zaroor karungi. Tumhein chinta karnay ki zaroorat nahi hai.


After saying this
she gives tight hug to Gauri.


Gauri : Peenal
Uncle aur Aunty ghar mai nahi hai?


Peenal : Mom to Delhi gayi hai apni dost ki shaadi attend karnay
kay liye aur Dad office mai gaye hain. Shaam ko ayeingey.


Accha ruk mai abhi
aati hun..She brings golla ganda for her and Gauri..Pratham opens the
car and finds purse of Gauri…Array ye to apna purse yahin par bhool gayi..Kahan
dhundoo? Ho sakta hai wo abhi bhi ussi Mandir mai ho. He goes to Temple finding her..Oh God please mujhey us ladki
say milwa dijiye..He finds every where there but Gauri was not there.





Peenal shows some
of her dresses to Gauri..Gauri ye dekho..Mai kal shopping per gayi thi mainay
kal hi ye khariday..


Accha aik kaam karo
ye white wala skirt abhi mai pehnti hu aur ye black wala tum try kar ke dekho
kesa lagta hai tumhein..


Gauri : Nahi
Peenal wo mai…


Peenal : Oh please
Gauri please issey pehen kar dekho na please..


Gauri : Magar
mainay aisay dress kabhi pehnay nahi hai…


Peenal : Oh Gauri !
mujhey pata hai ye short hai magar yahan hum dono kay illawa aur koi nahi hai
is liye kya problem hai? Gauri believe me tum to is dress mai pariyon ki raani
lago gi.


Gauri smiles and
says ok…


Both of girls
change the dresses and wear skirt blouse whose skirt was just little above their knees.


Then Peenal says to Gauri:
aik minute mujhey aik kaam yaad agaya..Tum yahin raho mai padosi aunty Shanta
Bai kay ghar say abhi 10 minute mai aati hun..ok


Gauri says ok and
smiles.. Now Peenal goes away…After 3 minutes door
bell rings…


Gauri : Array
Peenal itna jaldi aagayi…Chalo accha hai


And as she opens
the door, it was PRATHAM.


Pratham looks at
her and gives her a big smile.


(How Pratham came there?...what will happen now. For that you have to wait for the next part)



Coming up next:


Gauri’s Uncle,
Manik will order Chakan bhai and Chiman bhai to kidnap Gauri.

Most touchy and romantic part, where gauri was asking help from pratham and then woh behosh hou jaati hai. Pratham ko gauri ka purse milta hai and wahi ek connection ka point banta hai.

Gauri ko skirt mein dekhkar pratham ko yeh yakeen hou jayega ke gauri safe hai and woh apne ghar mein hai, i guess... But ab precap ko dekhkar aisa lagta hai ke gauri danger mein hougi aur pratham aakar osey bachakar ley jayega.




Waiting for 3rd part/episode.

thanks for updating munir

liked this part also. eager to read wat happens next. & i too hope ki pratham will save gauri from the upcoming danger

Thank you very much Diipendu and Aanchal they you have enjoyed the second part too. The next part will tell you whether your guess that Pratham saves Gauri will come true or not..
Hopefully tomorrow I will be posting first part of "Koi tum sa nahi", Hope you will enjoy that too.

thanx for sending so romantic updates when pratham finds the purse of gauri in car there make a sun kind of bond so it was really good and when pratham saw gauri in skirt how will he react i'm eager to know that and i think pratham will save gauri frm kidnappers and take to bombay
and the 2nd part of ur story is very good but it's to short
nywys plz send next updates soon

so nice part,waiting 4 the next..
thanks 4 updating...

NICE THANKS

Saumya, BLH and Sahil...thanks for reading and giving comments on the part...thank you friends

Recap : Gauri asked help from Pratham to give her lift and she stayed night at temple. In morning she went to the home of her friend Peenal. Peenal told Gauri that she will help her. She had bought two mini skirts. She requested Gauri to try one. Gauri wore that dress. Peenal goes to her neighbour’s home. Some one knocked the door. Gauri opens and find Pratham.


Part 3:

Gauri is very surprise. Pratham smiles and is too stunned to look at Gauri.
Pratham : Gauri tum yahan ! ye lo apna purse…
Gauri took her purse just then Peenal comes and in excitement
Says : Pratham Tum ! Tum kab Panchgani aye…au ander chalo..Kesay ho tum?
Pratham : Peenal mai theek hu aur mai kal raat ko hi Panchgani aya hu.Subha socha tum say milney chala au by the way (looking towards Gauri) who is that cute girl?
Peenal : Oh Pratham ye meri dost hai Gauri aur Gauri he is my friend Pratham. He is from Mumbai.
Pratham shakes hand with Gauri
Gauri : Peenal mai abhi dress change ker kay aati hun..
Pratham : No Gauri, you are looking nice in it.
Pratham talks with Peenal and Gauri for some time, then he says bye and go away.

Mandira Aunty comes running towards Manik Uncle.
Mandira : Tum yahan baithay muskura rahe ho.Pata hai kya hua…
Manik: Kya hua.bas kuch mahino baad Gauri 21 saal ki hojayegi. Is ke baad kuch na kuch kar k Gauri say is ghar ke papers per sign karwa lunga aur is paper per sign ka matlab samajhti hai…ye ghar humaray naam ho jaye ga.
Mandira : Array sapnay dekhna band karo.Gauri ghar chod kar bhaag gayi hai.
Manik : Oye thand rakh thand.ye to aur Accha hua.Mai nakli papers bana lunga
Mandira : Array..agar baad mai chal kar Gauri agayi aur us nay property par claim kya aur court mai case kya…Mujhey pata hai aisa wo nahi kar sakti magar agar aisa hojata hai toh..
Manik : Mushkil say aik aadmi mila jo is say shaadi karna chahta tha aur us nay bola tha kay ussay Gauri kay paisay nahi chahiye..agar Gauri ki us say shaadi ho jaye to wo humein bohot paisay dey ga aur….kuch na kuch toh karna padey ga us chorri ka..Tu fikar na kar mai kuch karta hu..he gives wicked smile.

Then Manik calls Chakkan Bhai and Cheeman Bhai…
Manik gives photo of Gauri and says them : is ladki ko kidnap karna hai. Kahin se bhi issay dhoond kar kidnap kar lo. Agar aik haftey mai issay kidnap kar liya to aik laakh milley ga..
Chakkan : Aik lakh ! bas apun us ko jaroor dhoond ker kidnap kar ley ga.Ye apun kay liye bohot chotta kaam hai.
Manik : Toh jau aur kaam shuru karo…bohot chalaki say kaam karna !
Cheeman : Array boss ! tension nahi lene ka rey ! Apun bola na aik haftey mai tera kaam ho jaye ga..


Its now 9:30 at night. Ramesh (Peenal's father) comes home.
Ramesh : Peenal aaj mujhey office mai late ho gaya.
Gauri : Namastey Uncle
Ramesh : Namastey.
Peenal : Dad ye meri dost hai Gauri. Kuch dino kay liye meray saath rahey gi..
Ramesh : Gauri ! bohot accha naam hai.

After few minutes Peenal brings coffee for her dad.
Ramesh takes a sip and says : Peenal aaj to coffee bohot hi acchi lag rahi hai.
Peenal : Dad waisay ye mainay nahi Gauri nay banayi hai.
Ramesh : Oh ! coffee bohot acchi hai.
Ramesh : Accha tumhari mom to hai nahi.Ghar mai khana to nahi hai. Aaj bahar chal kar Pizza khatey hain..
Peenal : Sorry dad mujhey bhook lagi hai wo kya hain na ki aap ne kaha tha aap ko der lag jayegi aur mujhey bohot bhook lagi thi toh maine khana thodi der pehlay kha liya..
Ramesh : Its ok magar khana?
Peenal : Dad ! Gauri nay masala dosa banaya hai.bohot hi tasty hai.Aap bhi kha kar dekhiye.
Ramesh : Sure.
Ramesh eats masala dosa and then says : Gauri…
Gauri : Ji uncle..
Ramesh : Ye tum nay banaya hai…
Gauri who is nervous : Ji uncle.kya accha nahi bana hai.
Ramesh smiles : Accha nahi ye to bohot hi accha hai. It is very tasty and delicious.Gauri you are brilliant.
Gauri : Thank you uncle.
Tears have come in eyes of Gauri because cooking and working was her daily routine but she used to get only harsh words and after her Grand father’s death..first time she found sweet words for her from her friend’s dad.

On other hand Pratham is playing guitar. He is imagining Gauri. Her image has got fixed in his eyes. All the time her beautiful face comes infront of him when he begins to think.

Its now next day morning.
Peenal : Chalo Gauri Pratham say milney chaltey hain..
Gauri : Par mai…
Peenal : Chalo wo apnay Ajay Chachu kay ghar mai hoga.
Gauri : ok
Both girls are walking and talking happily in very pleasant weather. In garden near bungalow they find Pratham doing exercise.
Pratham : Hi girls how are you?
Both of them reply: fine
Peenal: Pratham is samay tum bohot handsome lag rahe ho
Pratham: Kya sirf is samay? Mai hamesha hi handsome lagta hu
Gauri slowly asks Peenal: Peenal kya tum Pratham se pyaar karti ho
Peenal: Gauri Pratham is like my good friend and brother.
They kept talking for some time.

Coming up next : Peenal : Gauri aik bohot hi badi bad news hai.
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i like pratham's attitude.& his comments when gauri says she will go & change her dress & when peenal says that he's looking handsome..... typical pratham mittal style :afcorse !:

liked this part alsol.

ya me too

Hey pratham ko gauri ka naam pata tha pehle se osne yeh bhi bola 'Gauri yeh lo apna purse' then phir woh peenal ke saamne dikhava kar raha tha ke osey gauri ka naam nahi pata... :titterr:

Gauri's uncle and aunt is soo cruel, as they want to kill gauri so they can claim to her property. But jab pratham gauri ko yaad kar raha tha... I think pratham gauri ke liye kuch feel kar raha hai...


Hey precap mein peenal ne bola ke 'Ek badnews hai...' I guess, peenal city se kahin baahar jaa rahi hai??? Esiliye gauri ko pratham ke uncle ajay chahu ke bunglow mein rukna hoga?



SUGGESTION: Munir next time please donot post such long episodes... If you break one episode in two posts, it will be easy and more eye-catchy!

Thanks a lot Aanchal, Sahil and Diipendu for reading and replying for the third part of the story.
Diipendu regarding your suggestion, I did not understand what you mean to say. Do you mean to say that Shall I divide one part, into different small parts and post it in different posts or do you mean to say that every week when I do post one part, I should shorten the length.

gauri ka peenal se ye pochna ki kya tum pratham se pyaar karti ho
i think she likes pratham ny wys keep it up and send updates for us aisi hi
awssim work dude

Ya you are right and thanks soumya for the comments.