Hello every one..Its Jai and I am posting the introductory part of my story. I hope you will like it. Whether you like, dislike or have suggestions, comments any thing please do post it. I really wish to get honest and sincere comments from you friends. If I will get good response, then I will try to post every Sunday one part of the story.
I will be starting one or two more stories very soon here. Meanwhile read the first part.
As this is just introductory part its short and in summarization way...
Gauri lives in
Panchgani in beautiful bungalow while Pratham lives in Mumbai.
Gauri is crying
for her fate remembering the past incidences of her life when she was little
girl. Her mother and father had passed away. After her grandfather’s death, her
aunt and uncle have came living with her and she had to bear all their cruel
acts all the time.
two years back when she was eighteen years old and attended a party after a
long time. She saw a very smart guy who was of course Pratham but he was very
far away from her. She kept watching him from that distance and just then her
cousin Meghna cruelly scolded her that where are you lost. She made her insult
infront of every one.
family her only little cousin brother Shashank used to realize that every one
is so cruel towards Gauri. Once when her Aunt Mandira, asked her to sweep and
make every thing clean while she was busy watching movie and eating popcorns.
By mistake of Gauri, the flower vase was broken and that day Aunt got extremely
very angry on her and said she will not get dinner that day. Shashank asked her
every one here hates you then why don’t run away some where. Gauri don’t know
where to go..but now she thinks enough is enough. She heard her Uncle, Manik
was talking with her Aunt that there is man who is 67 years old and is very
rich and he likes Gauri. He said if we will make Gauri marry with him then he
can give us lot of money but don’t tell this to Gauri now.
now she has not any option then to leave the house.
In dark night
she runs away from the house.
belongs to a very rich family in Mumbai. His father Umesh Mittal is Strict and
gets angry easily while his mother is a loving mother.
holidays and he wanted to go to some hill station but his father not agreed. At
last he had convinced his father, “Dad..Its not so far away. I will come back after 15 days.”
Now in dark
night he is in Panchgani in his car. While Gauri is running fastly as she feels
some people are following her shouting like “ A..chikni kahan jaa rahi hai…a
ruk kahan bhaag reli hai..Apun ka paas jara aa to idhaar..haila ye shaari to
rukti hi nahi hai pakdo issey..”. She runs fast and is very afraid…She is in
forest type area and is running fast… Its dark and horrible night and winds are
blowing fast… Oh God help me. She tries to recite Hanuman Chalisa but she has
forgotten all words in fear…only she remembers at that time was yelling of her
aunt towards her.
She finds a
beautiful car..She run fast and ask please help me..Meri madad karo. Car stops
and Pratham comes out of it.
So now its time for Part 4. I hope you will enjoy it. From this part there will be interaction of Pratham and Gauri and their friendship. Due to the length of the part, I am dividing it into two...take ur time to read them but do reply..positive, negative any comments you have..ur comments really matters a lot.
Part 4 (a)
Recap: In last
part you have read that Manik ordered Chakan and Chiman to kidnap Gauri. Gauri and
Peenal meet Pratham. Ramesh likes the food made by Gauri. Pratham finds
attraction towards Gauri.
Peenal gets phone call of her mother Shyla.
Shyla : Peenal Kesi hai tu?
Peenal : mom mai theek hu. Aap kesay ho? Wahan maza aaraha hai.?
Shyla : Haan Peenal maza to bohot aarahai. Accha sun tumhari class mai aik ladki thi Gauri…Tum jaanti ho na..
Peenal : Haan Mom magar..
Shyla : Us ki aunty yani Mandira ka phone aya tha k Gauri ghar say gayab hai. Ab ussey ye nahi pata hai k kissi nay ussey kidnap ker liya hai ya wo khud ghar chod ke bhaag gayi hai….Dekh Peenal agar Gauri teray paas ghar aye to mujhey phone ker ke bata dena. Uski beechari aunty aur uncle uskay liye bohot chinta kar rahay hain…
Peenal is now confused : ji mom..
Shyla : Accha mai phone rakhti hu..
Peenal : bye mom.
Shyla : Bye.
Peenal says to her own self : Mai ye baat kesay bhool gayi k meri mom aur Gauri ki Mandira aunty dost ki tarha hain. Ab mai kya karu? Agar Gauri wapis us ghar mai jayegi to uskay liye problem hoga aur mom jab wapis ayegi aur Gauri is ghar mai hogi tab toh aur bhi zyada problem hoga..Kya karun mai…
Gauri comes there and says : Kya hua Peenal tum itni pareshaan kyu lag rahi ho?
Peenal : Actually Gauri aik bohot hi badi bad news hai..
Gauri : Kya?
Peenal : Meri mom ko tumhari Aunty nay phone ker k tumharay baaray mai poocha. Ab tum yahan nahi reh sakti ho..Magar aik minute aik idea hai..
Gauri : Kya?
Peenal : Tum kuch dino k liye Pratham kay ghar par ruk jau..Gauri believe me, mai tumharay liye kuch na kuch zaroor karungi. Jaldi tumhari is problem ko end karungi lekin kuch dino kay liye tumhein Pratham ke ghar jaana hoga toh yahan par mai apnay mom aur dad ko sahi moqa milley tab convince kar ke sachai bata sakun.
Gauri : Lekin Peenal…..
Peenal : Gauri meri baat suno..Pratham is not stranger. He is my brother. Bhagwaan ne mujhey koi bhai nahi diya lekin Pratham aisa hai jo meray liye bhai ki tarha hai. He is very nice guy aur mujhey us par bharosa hai wo tumhara khayal rakhey ga aur kuch dino ki hi baat hai..I promise mai tum say roz milney aya karungi…
Gauri : Mai is wakt jis halat say guzar rahi hu mujhey khud ko samajh nahi aaraha hai mai kya karun. Mai kissi k liye problem create nahi karna chahti hu.
Mujhey kya karna chahiye kya nahi mujhey samjh nahi aarahai hai. Mai wohi
karungi jo tum mujh say kahogi.
Gauri starts weeping and Peenal replies : Gauri please rona band karo. Tumhari aankh mai ansoo dekh kar mujhey bhot dukh hota hai. Tumhari aunt aur uncle ko unkay kiye ki saza zaroor milley gi. Tum rona band karo. I am with you. Now please smile.
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Peenal dials cell number of Pratham..
Peenal : Hello Pratham tum kahan ho..
Pratham : Mai jogging kar raha tha..Bolo…
Peenal : Pratham agar tumhein koi problem na ho toh kuch din kya Gauri tumharay ghar mai reh sakti hai..
Pratham gets very excited on thought of Gauri..
Pratham : Haan haan sure, bilkul jaroor magar waisay kyun…
Peenal (Saying lie to Pratham): Gauri meri dost hai jo Chandigarh se yahan par sirf mujh say milney ayi hai. Meray ghar mai kuch problems hai mai tumhein abhi nahi bata sakti is liye kuch din ke liye tumharay bungalow mai rahey gi agar tumhein problem na ho…
Pratham : Bilkul mai abhi ghar ja raha hu..Tumhari dost yani kay meri dost..Ussay tum abhi la sakti ho…
Pratham thinks : kya wajah hogi jo Peenal apni dost ko meray ghar bhej rahi hai. Wajah jo bhi ho meray liye yahi badi good news hai. Oh God! Ye to sach mai chamatkar ho gaya..
Peenal then takes Gauri to Pratham’s house. She had given some of her clothes to Gauri..
Pratham opens the door and says to Gauri: Welcome here…Issey tum apna hai ghar samjho .
Gauri says : Thanks !
Pratham makes million dollar smile on his face and moves forward his hand saying friend
Gauri smiles and shake her hand with him.
Peenal went away..
Pratham takes Gauri inside his house.
Now he thinks to impress Gauri.
Pratham : Accha Gauri dekho tum is kamray mai reh sakti ho..Dekho kitna saaf hai..
He goes inside and shoes kept on floor comes in his way and he was about to fall down and
Gauri holds him..
He says : Thanks…Kamra toh saaf hai..ye shoes pata nahi beech mai kesay aagaye..strange !
Ab mera karma dekho kesa hai..
He tooks Gauri to his room and shows his room…
Gauri is having smile on her face..
Pratham : Ye mera room hai..aur tumhein mai batau aaj mainay apnay liye naya shirt kharida and as he opens the cupboard all dresses falls down which were all mess up in cupboard rather then being properly arranged.
Pratham : wo..
Gauri : Its okay Pratham
Now Gauri points towards a room : Ye kis ka kamra hai…ye tum nai bataya nahi..
Pratham just stands infront of door preventing Gauri to come and open door to see whats inside..
Pratham : Nahi..is room mai tum aaj nahi jaana…
Gauri : Accha magar kyun? Koi khaas wajah?
Pratham: Kyunki… yeh… Haan yeh Ajay chachu ka private kamra hai
Pratham is standing with his back on door.. and because of that door opens and he falls down inside..Gauri comes and give hand to Pratham..Pratham holds her hand..there is eye contact between two and both feel magical spark inside heart for each other..Any ways Pratham stands and Gauri finally watch what was inside room..
Pictures of Hollywood models wearing very sexy type costumes
hanging all over the walls..
Gauri : Pratham ye tum nay kesi pictures lagayi hui hai?
Pratham is confused. He tries to tell lie.
Pratham : Ye room Ajay Chachu ka Private kamra hai..unki lagayi hui hai..Ab wo mujh say baday hai mai kya bol sakta hu..
Gauri understands that Pratham is trying to make her fool..
Gauri : Pratham meray paas Bhagwaan ki tasveer hai. Tum in sab ko nikaal kar ussay yahan laga
do. Tumharay chachu bhi khush hongey..
Pratham : Nahi wo actually chachu ye kehtay hai Bhagwaan ki pictures toh har koi apnay ghar mai lagata hai..wo apnay ghar mai Bhagwaan ki banayi hui in pyaari cheezon ki tasveer rakhna chahtay hain..
Gauri : ok and
Pratham: Gauri… He thinks Gauri must be angry
on him and what she must be thinking of him.
So he goes to Kitchen.
He says : Kitchen mai ice cream hai. Mai Gauri say kahunga ye ice cream khud mainay us ke liye banayi hai. Wo khush ho jaye gi. He takes ice cream and is about to go but tray of ice cream slips from his hand and ice cream is on floor.. he is worried
what to do when Gauri enters kitchen.
Gauri: Kya hua?
She sees ice cream on floor.. ye kya hai?
Pratham: Ye..kuch nahi bas yunhi… meri aadat hai cheezein idhar udhar phainkna… its fun you know and he takes few things and throws on floor to convince Gauri that he is saying truth but Gauri stops him..
Gauri: Pratham…aisa mat karo.. khana zameen par aisay nahi phainktay hain.. paap lagta hai..
Pratham looks at Gauri and thinks how innocent and cute she is.
Gauri goes and suddenly her eye fell on the room in which there were pics of models..
She looks inside there was not any more pics of sexy girls. Instead there was picture of Bhagwan Ganesh which Gauri had given.
Gauri smiles and says : Pratham abhi toh tum keh rahey they ye Ajay chachu ka room hai aur un say poochey bagair tum ye pictures nahi hata saktay aur abhi hata di ?
Pratham smiles naughtily and says : Haan Chachu ka tha room jabhi toh hata di. Room say hata kar un pictures ko apnay dil mai rakha hai and he runs…
Gauri: Pratham…and goes after him and goes into kitchen following him and she falls because of ice cream on floor.
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but ab gauri par koi laanchan na lagaaye to acchha hai
kyunki humari society mein most of the people thinks that ek ladka-ladki kabhi dost nahin hote
aur pratham gauri ke saath flirt na kar raha ho
but the epi was nice
pratham thinks he is smart but gauri is smarter
i hope peenal ki mom koi problem na create kare gauri ke liye
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It is given in button.
Saumya, let see what happens next..btw Pratham was trying to impress Gauri but he do not any thing about Gauri except that she is friend of Peenal.
In last part
you had read Peenal got to know that Mandira had called her mother and inquired
about Gauri. Peenal asked Gauri to live in Pratham’s home meanwhile she plan
some thing for her. Pratham tries to impress Gauri..Gauri fells down on floor
because of ice cream there..
Gauri fall down
on floor..Pratham comes running towards her..
Gauri: Its ok
Pratham...She tries to get stand but is unable to do so..
hai meray pair (leg) mai moch agayi hai
her hand and help her in standing..
in innocent eyes of Gauri the pain which she is having because of some thing..
She took Gauri
to her room and made her rest on bed..
Pratham : Wait
a minute Gauri…
some where..Gauri closes her eyes and Pratham comes again with turmeric powder
near Gauri in bed and holds her leg..ab dekhna tumhein kitna jaldi theek
Gauri : Pratham
ye kya kar rahey ho..You don’t need to do this..I am fine sure…
don’t say any thing! Pata hai aik baar mujhey bhi aisay lag gaya tha aur maa nay mujhey lagaya tha..Tab
mujhey bhi laga ye kya maa laga rahi hai lekin phir mujhey jaldi theek bhi
He say this
while applying turmeric powder on her legs.
like crying because her own aunt and uncle have never concerned or cared for
her pains and Pratham who is just like unknown is caring for her so much.
see tears in eyes of Gauri gets afraid that is she feeling pain as I am
applying turmeric powder in her legs or what?
baat hai Gauri? Ro kyu rahi ho? Kya dard ho raha hai?
Gauri : Nahi,
bohot wakt kay baad dard kam ho raha hai..Thanks for so much caring..
and says : uff baar baar thanks mat karo..From now we are friends aura b tum
aaram karo subha tak theek ho jayega..
Aur me abhi
Khana bana kar laata hu..
Gauri : Kya !
Tumhein khana banana aata hai..thats sweet
confuse now : haan par tum yahan aaram karna..
Pratham go to
kitchen: Mai nay to socha tha roz restaurant mai say khana khaunga lekin ab
Kuch try karta
hu..nahi garbar ho jaye gi..best idea ye hai chupkey say bahir nikal jau aur
samany wali hotel say kuch le au..
He go out side
home silently..then thinks saamnay wali hotel say khana laya to Gauri ko shak
ho jayega kay itna jaldi mainay khana kesay bana liya.. Gauri waisay bhi aaram
kar rahi hai mai kahin aur say lay kar aata hu..
He go out
Shyla has come
Peenal : Mom Delhi mai kesa laga..Hope you enjoyed there..
Shyla : Haan
maza to bohot hi aaya..Tumhein bohot miss kya..Agar tum chalti toh kitna enjoy
tumhari dost Gauri ka kuch pata chala. Uski aunty ko uski bohot chinta ho rahi
confuse. She don’t want to say lie to her mother but she also don’t want to put
life of Gauri in danger. She don’t know what to say. Before she say any thing
Ramesh says : Shyla yaha aana..
And she goes
there in next room.
relax for a moment. She thinks of Gauri how she will be in Pratham’s home.
Mujhey pata hai Pratham bohot friendly hai..Hope kay Gauri theek ho aur khush
home silently and goes to kitchen. Then he comes to Gauri and says Gauri :
Gauri chalo khana tayyar ho gaya hai..
Both eat food.
Gauri smiles : Pratham khana kahan say laye ho?
Pratham : wo wo
kitchen say..haan kitchen say hi toh laya hu..
and says : kya sach mai…?
Pratham : Nahi
wo actually Gauri tum bohot smart ho..ye mai bahar say laya hu par yaar I don’t
know how to cook..
Both smiles and
enjoy the food.
mai abhi jogging karnay ja raha hu. Is kay baad Peenal kay paas jaunga..I will
come back soon so don’t worry..
Gauri : its ok
Waisay How are you feeling now?
Gauri : I am
Gauri now feels
she is quite fine. She looks at the home which she finds untidy..She thinks to
give Pratham a surprise by doing the work..
After some time
when Pratham comes he get surprise. He find house clean then before, things at
their proper places.
Pratham : Array
ye mai kis kay ghar agaya hu?
and says: Tumharay Ajay Chachu ke.
Ajay Chachu ka ghar ho hi nahi sakta..Itna Saaf?
towards Pratham and Pratham says : Mera matlab hai Ajay Chachu apna ghar saaf
nahi rakhtey is liye..
Chakkan : Array
cheeman abhi tak apun nay kuch kaam shuru nahi kya ..aik hafta to yuni khatam
ho jayega rey !
Cheeman : Abay
khajoor apun kay dimaag mai aik Solid idea hai rey..
Chakkan : Kya
Cheeman : dekh
wo Manik lagta hai bohot rich hai..
Chakkan : Reech
? ye to aik jaanwar ka naam hai
Cheeman : Abey apun ki baat sun ! us kay paas say bohot
saara rokraa mil sakta hai rey ! Apun ko uski baton say idea ho gayala hai wo
kuch bhi apun ko de sakta hai agar us ka apun nay kaam kar diya to..Apun is
haftey kuch kaam nahi karey ga..Baad mai apun us ko ye bol dega kay jis ladki
ko usney kidnap karnay ka bola tha wo itna aasaan kaam nahi hai..is liye agar
thoda zyada paisa milley tho hi kaam ho sakta hai…phir dekhna !
Chakkan : Haila
ye to mast idea hai lekin tujhey lagta hai wo aur jaada paisa dega..
Cheeman : Tu
dheeraj to rakh..Apna idea kabhi flop nahi hota.
with flowers for Gauri..
Peenal : Hi
Gauri how are you?
Gauri : Mai to
blikul theek hu
Pratham nay bataya tumhray per mai moch agayi..Mujhey to both fikar honey
Gauri : Chalo
accha hua tumhein apna promise to yaad hai roz milney ka..
Peenal : Sure
aur dekhna mai try karti hu jaldi kuch na kuch karu gi..