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Post by Dipendu_Dutta on 12/1/2008, 9:27 pm

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Khwaish Apnaa Apnaa is a story about two rival hearts, Pranav and Garima. They want to destroy eachother at any cost, will they ever fall in love?

Story By: Diipendu Dutta

Pictures and Other Creations By: Diipendu Dutta

Story: Khwaish Apnaa Apnaa

Started On: April 29, 2009

Genre: Drama

Ended On: October 5, 2014
No. of Episodes: 200

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 17/7/2014, 8:57 pm

3 Months Later...

Garima ke maa-baba ka ghar. Garima was living here since these three-months.

SCENE: Garima is doing all house-hold works. Women in neighbours are gossiping how Garima is living here, leaving her husband's home. Garima ki maa abhi bhi Garima ko convince karna chahti hai ke woh kisi bhi tarah se Pranav ko divorce dey kar apni life phir se shuru kare.



Udhar Mittal Mansion mein-

OM Mittal bhagwaan ke saamne haath jod kar, apne galatiyo ke liye pray karte hue-

OM Mittal: mere ego ke wajah se Pranav ka aaj yeh haal hai... Pranav ne khud ko poore tarah se alcoholic bana dia hai. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha hai ke main apni Galati kaise thik kar sakta hoon.


SCENE: Pranav apne room mein, khud ko room mein band kar rakha hai. Poora room messed-up hai. Room ke floor par alcohol ke bottles padey hue hain.

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 17/7/2014, 9:05 pm

Garima apne baba ko medicines dey rahi houti hai tabhi oski maa osey bulati hai.

Garima ko oske room mein ley jakar oski maa puchti hai- "Kya socha hai aage tune apne future ka?"

Garima: maa, maine apko ees bare mein bata dia hai. Wahan pranav apne pyaar, karishma ke saath rahe esiliye main yehan hoon. Lekin jab tak Pranav divorce ke liye apne taraf se baat nahi rakhta, tab tak main bhi kuch nahi kahungi.

Maa: Garima, ab tou duniya, society, log bhi baatein karahe hain... Tujhe apni zindagi phir se, ek naye tarah se shuru karni chahiye.......


Tabhi ghar par Gayathri aur Badi-dadi aati hain.


Badi-dadi aur Gayathri Garima ko Pranav ke bare mein sab kuch batate hain.


Garima: maa, main aapki baat maanungi.

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 17/7/2014, 9:16 pm

Garima Mittal Mansion mein kadam rakhti hai.

Gayathri aur Badi-dadi Garima ko wapas ley aate hain. Garima OM Mittal se aashirwaad leti hai. OM Mittal ees baar Garima ko apni beti maan kar, osey aashirwaad dete hain.

Pranav apne room mein nashe mein pada hua tha. Tabhi koi door knock karta hai. Garima andar aakar dekhti hai tou osey yakeen nahi houta.

Pranav: tum?

Garima: haan, shayad tum bhool rahe ho... tumhare zindagi se main itni jaldi nahi jaane wali. Afterall main abhi bhi legally tumhari biwi hoon!

Pranav: tum...... tum chali jao.

Garima: main jaane ke liye nahi aayi hoon. Tumhe wapas se pehle jaisa banane ke  liye wapas aayi hoon...

Pranav bahut bure tarah nashe mein hai. Doctor ko bulaya jata hai aur doctor mittals ko pranav ke treatment ke bare mein samjhate hain. Garima continue poore 1 mahine tak Pranav ke treatment ka poora dhyaan rakhti hai aur Garima ke care ke wajah se Pranav recover karaha houta hai.


1 Month Later...

Pranav: yeh air-conditioner band karo!


Garima: remote mere paas tou nahi hai, tum khud kyu nahi karlete?

Pranav: zindagi narak bann gayi hai!

Garima: narak mein garmi houti hai! aur tum jaise shaitaano ke liye tou yeh ek air-conditioner bhi kam hai na!


Neeche een dono ke fights ko sunn kar mittals khush thhe ke wapas ab sab kuch pehle jaisa ho gaya hai.

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Post by GHT on 28/7/2014, 9:08 pm

ommmgggg...what a story line , the dialogues ,script awesommeeeee...i m floored with this setback.. wo kehte hai na duniya gol hai so is relations....great job man...i m impressed

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 29/7/2014, 1:51 am

Thanks Gayathri... Smile

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 1/8/2014, 3:50 pm

Scene: Morning time. Suburban area of an urban city.

Nandani pick-up a letter from the door side. Woh ek invitation letter hai jismein likha tha ke Nandani aur oska pati Sudeep ko aaj evening mein houne wale party mein invite kia gaya hai. Yeh party Mittal Mansion mein houne wala hai, Pranav aur Garima ke 1st marriage anniversary ke occasion par.

Nandani Garima ko phone karti hai-

Nandani: hello garima?

Garima: Hi Nandani kaisi ho tum?

Nandani: main thik hoon. Lekin tumse kuch baat karni thi. Party ka invitation tou mila lekin...

Garima: lekin kya nandani?

Nandani: Lekin yeh jaante hue ke Sudeep ki shaadi pehle tumse houne wali thi aur phir baad mein mujhse ho gayi, esi baat se party mein aakar thoda lagega na?

Garima: ab bilkul chup! Tum sabse pehle meri best-friend ho. Aur ab tum aur sudeep ko ana hi hoga.

Nandani: okay... (smiles)



Udhar Mittal Mansion mein-

Ankita was also invited in this party. Garima ne Ankita ko insist kia tha ke woh Garima se milne Mittal Mansion aaye.


Ankita to Garima: Don't you think marriage anniversary celebration aur ees oldie Mansion mein??? A little bit old? Maybe Goa could have been a better place?

Garima: Ankita, maine tumhe yehan esiliye bulaya hai kyunki mujhe lagta hai ke humey apne beech ke differences ko sort-out kar lene chahiye...Tumhe mujhse aur Pranav se jo bhi problems hain...

(suddenly Pranav enters in the room)


Ankita to Pranav: seriously, where did you find this quack?

Garima: excuse me?

Ankita: (rolled eyes) you are not babe! Mujhe tum dono se kabhi koi problem nahi tha...Except Garima ke roune-dhone wale nature ko chhor kar...

Pranav: Great! eska matlab ke tum party mein arahi ho.

Garima: lekin ek condition par.

Ankita: and what is that?

Garima: tumhe decently dress-up hona hoga.


Ankita: seriously pranav! where did you find this quack!

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 1/8/2014, 4:12 pm

Choti-Dadi aur Garima mill kar plan karte hain, jab tak Ankita Mittal Mansion mein hai, woh dono mill kar kuch aisa karey ke Ankita ek achhi ladki ke tarah behave kare.

Choti-Dadi aur Garima mill kar Ankita ko help karte  hain party ke liye ready houne mein jismein Ankita ek decent aur achhi ladki lagey.

Ankita: (mann mein kehte hue) oh god! Yeh main kahan fass gayi!



Party shuru houti hai aur Mittal Mansion mein guests Pranav aur Garima ke aane ka wait karahe houte hain.

Ankita party mein well-dressed hou kar enter karti hai. Ankita party mein Nandini ko dekhti hai aur milne jaati hai.

Ankita: oh, hello Nandini!

Nandini & Sudeep: Hello...

Ankita: waise kamaal ki baat hai! Tumhari shaadi osi se ho gayi jis se tumhari best-friend Garima ki shaadi pehle houne wali thi... I guess best-friends houte hi esiliye hain...Sharing!

[ Nandani and Sudeep feel embarrassed ]

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 1/8/2014, 4:22 pm

Ankita: waise kamaal ki baat hai! Tumhari shaadi osi se ho gayi jis se tumhari best-friend Garima ki shaadi pehle houne wali thi... I guess best-friends houte hi esiliye hain...Sharing!


[ Nandani and Sudeep feel embarrassed ]

Nandini: It was nice meeting you Ankita. Ab humey Garima se bhi milna hai...


[ Garima aur Pranav party mein enter karte hain and Garima see Nandini was talking to Ankita. ]


Ankita: why so hurry? Waise...tumne shaadi ke 3 mahine baad mein abortion bhi karva lia, I hope everything is well and good in your sweet little paradise? hmmm?


[ Sudeep is stunned to hear this ]


Ankita: Kya hua? Sudeep ko tumne bataya nahi tha kya? Oh I'm so sorry...


[ Sudeep leave the party ]

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 1/8/2014, 4:24 pm

Ankita: why so hurry? Waise...tumne shaadi ke 3 mahine baad mein abortion bhi karva lia, I hope everything is well and good in your sweet little paradise? hmmm?




[ Sudeep is stunned to hear this ]




Ankita: Kya hua? Sudeep ko tumne bataya nahi tha kya? Oh I'm so sorry...


[ Sudeep leave the party ]


( Ankita gives a wicked smile and wink to Nandini )


[ Nandini also leave the party ]




Garima wahan Ankita ke taraf aati hai.


Garima: yeh sab kya kia tumne?!


Ankita: oh god not again! Even bhagwaan bhi kehte hain ke sach bolna achhi baat hai... ab jab maine kuch achha kaam kia, phir bhi tum mujhe hi complain karahi ho... 


Garima: tumhe andaza bhi hai ke tumhare yeh sab keh dene se Nandani aur Sudeep ke beech mein tension ho sakta hai?

Ankita: Ab tumhare tarah poori duniya ke tensions lene lagi tou main jald hi dusre duniya pahuch jaungi...It's your party so have fun! Bye!

[Ankita leaves]

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 29/8/2014, 6:37 pm

Later after party...

Garima was walking towards the room and sees Pranav was sitting and drinking a lot, watching Karishma's photo. Pranav was remembering the past and drinking heavy alcohol. Garima walked-in. Pranav see Garima and said "Karishma...I wish maine tumhe nahi khoya hota..." Pranav goes and hugged Garima.

The whole thing became complicated and emotions ran to high. Garima couldn't stop Pranav and Pranav was thinking Garima as his love of his life, Karishma.

Scene: Pranav and Garima in a steam-room sort of place, made love and the night fades-out.


Next Morning...


Garima wake up and realised what happened. She gets-up and see Pranav sleeping. She kissed his forehead.

Pranav wake up with a hangover, found lemon-juice and tablets right next to him. Pranav tried to remember what happened last night and when he closed his eyes, he saw Karishma's face. He was stunned. How's this possible? Karishma cannot be here understanding the present circumstances.

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 29/8/2014, 6:39 pm

Next Morning...


Garima wake up and realised what happened. She gets-up and see Pranav sleeping. She kissed his forehead.

Pranav wake up with a hangover, found lemon-juice and tablets right next to him. Pranav tried to remember what happened last night and when he closed his eyes, he saw Karishma's face. He was stunned. How's this possible? Karishma cannot be here understanding the present circumstances.

OM Mittal calls up a press-conference. He declares up that from now, Mittal Industries will be run by Pranav Mittal and giving his the power of attorney he declare that the company's 71% shares will be in the name of Garima Mittal. The 7% of company's profit will go to the under-privilages and slums.



One month Later...


Garima is walking with choti-dadi and badi-dadi in the garden, suddenly she felt head-spin and fell on the ground. After doctor's arrival the goodnews get declared, Garima is pregnant.

Family congratulates both of them. Pranav was blank, how is that possible? Till now, only Garima know the truth that the father of this child is Pranav. She didn't tell him what happened that night.

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 19/9/2014, 1:15 am

Garima is sitting in a park where kids are playing. Lots of questions are disturbing her whether Pranav will accept this child or not. Garima see children playing. Garima is strongly against the abortion so she decide to keep this baby whatever happen.



Garima in Mittal Mansion, try to have a word with Pranav.

Pranav: Garima kya yeh tum mazaak karahi ho?

Garima is astonish to hear Pranav.

Garima: Pranav, oos raat emotions mein humne jo bhi kia, oos baat ko tum mazaak ka naam dey rahe ho?

Pranav: main ye bilkul nahi maan sakta ke yeh bachha mera hai! Afterall Mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi!

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 19/9/2014, 1:22 am

Pranav: main ye bilkul nahi maan sakta ke yeh bachha mera hai! Afterall Mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi!

Yeh soonkar Garima ka dil toot jata hai. Garima ko ab tak yeh laga tha ke shayad Pranav oos se pyaar karne laga hai. Tabhi Garima ko yaad ata hai. Oos raat Pranav ne bahut zyada alcohol peene ke wajah se Pranav ne Garima ko Karishma samajh lia tha aur esi wajah se Pranav ko kuch bhi yaad nahi hai.

Garima Pranav ko kehti ke yeh houne wala bachha Pranav ka hai lekin Pranav Garima par yakeen nahi kar paraha tha because Pranav ko kuch bhi yaad nahi. Garima ne Pranav ko DNA test ke liye bhi kaha lekin Pranav sure hai ke ye bachha oska nahi hai.


Pranav: Garima! Main yeh zaroor janta hoon ke yeh bachha mera nahi hai... Ab tumhe decide karna hoga... ya tou tum abortion karlo ya phir... Hamesha ke liye meri zindagi se chali jaao!


Yeh soonkar Garima toot jaati hai.

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 19/9/2014, 1:49 am

Next Day, Morning

Pranav subah uth-ta hai lekin Garima room mein nahi houti hai. Pranav ko lagta hai shayad Garima daadi ke saath hougi but tabhi Pranav apne pillow ke paas rakhe hue letter ko dekhta hai.

Room mein bahar se sunlight arahi thi, Pranav oos letter ko padhta hai.

Garima ne oos letter mein likha tha ke jab Pranav ne apne houne wale bachhe ko abort karne ki baat ki, tab Garima ko laga ke Pranav ne oos relation ko bhi khatam kardia jo abhi-abhi oon dono ke beech bana tha...Pyaar... Pranav ne Garima ko choice dia tha, ya woh abortion kare ya phir woh Pranav ke life se hamesha ke liye chali jaaye. Garima apne aur Pranav ke houne wale bachhe ko abort nahi karna chahti hai, esi wajah se osne decide kia hai ke woh Pranav ke life se hamesha ke liye chali jayegi.

Letter mein Garima ne Pranav ko ye bhi likha hai ke Pranav tum apna dhayan rakhna...

Garima ne yeh bhi likha tha, "Pranav aur Garima ka rishta kabhi jis dushmani se shuru hua tha...Woh rishta kab dushmani se pyaar mein badal gaya yeh pata bhi nahi chala... Lekin shayad har rishta umar-bhar ho yeh bhi zaroori nahi..." esiliye door houkar bhi ees pyaar ke rishte ko Garima hamesha nibhayegi, oske aur pranav ki beti 'Pari' ke saath nibhakar.

[ TRANSITION: 5 YEARS LATER...]

DELHI



"Pari beta kahan ho tum?" (Garima wearing blind-fold, playing)

Pari, a five-year old, cute and innocent daughter of Garima and Pranav.


Garima and Pari are playing hide & seek tabhi wahan Garima ki maasi aajati hai.

Maasi: Pari beta sambhal ke... girr jaogi...


[ Garima catch Pari and mother and daughter laugh. ]


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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 19/9/2014, 1:58 am

Garima to Maasi (Aunt) : Pata hi nahi chala... Dekhte-dekhte kab paanch saal beet gaye... Pari ab paanch saal ki ho jayegi.

Maasi: arre haan! Do din baad to pari ka birthday hai...party ke liye kuch socha hai?

Garima: haan maasi, maine party planners se baat karli hain aur invitations list bhi ready hain... main call kar doongi.

Maasi: Beta ek baat puchu? (took a pause) Pari jab apne friends ke papa ko dekhegi tou uske mann mein apne papa ke bare mein bhi tou khayal ayega na? Agar osne apne papa ke bare mein puch lia tou uska kya jawab dougi???


Yeh soonkar Garima soch mein padd jaati hai.

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Maasi: Beta ek baat puchu? (took a pause) Pari jab apne friends ke papa ko dekhegi tou uske mann mein apne papa ke bare mein bhi tou khayal ayega na? Agar osne apne papa ke bare mein puch lia tou uska kya jawab dougi???




Yeh soonkar Garima soch mein padd jaati hai. Pari apne room mein pillow ke neeche se ek drawing-book nikalti hai jismein osne apni "Perfect-family picture" draw kia hai. Oos drawing mein Pari ne apne mummy-papa aur pari ko draw kia hai.

Pari apne drawing mein apne papa ko miss karti hai.

Pari: (route hue) papa... aap mujhse naaraj kyu ho papa???

(Pari apne aansu pouchte hue)


MUMBAI


Mittal Mansion

Pranav has become a stone-hearted man. This morning he scolded his driver for being late and fired him, and he left for the office.



Mittal mansion mein sab log udaas aur pareshan hain.

Choti dadi: Jab se Garima ees ghar se gayi hai, Pranav bahut badal gaya hai... Pranav sab se nafrat karta hai... jaise oske liye poori duniya uski dushman hai...

OM Mittal: haan, osey aisa lagta hai ke poori duniya ne oos se oska sab kuch chhin lia hai... Lets hope ke Garima jahan kahin bhi hai, jald se jald wapas ajaye...

Gayathri: mera beta khud ko paanch se saza diye jaraha hai... pata nahi kab sab kuch theek hoga...

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 19/9/2014, 2:26 am

DELHI


Birthday party ke liye event-planner Garima se milne aati hai.

Event planner inform Garima that the actor they invited earlier, he cannot come because of some issues. Garima told the Event Planner that she has already promised Pari and pari really want this actor to come and meet her and her friends. Event Planner said it is not possible for this actor to come down. For the sake of Pari's happiness, Garima decide to go to Mumbai to personally invite this actor because now everything depends on it.



MUMBAI


Garima is stuck in the traffic. Garima has no idea that there is Pranav's car behind her car. Due to this heavy-traffic, Pranav get mad and walk-out of his car because he is getting late for his business-meeting. Pranav walked ahead to Garima's car and he was almost near to Garima. Garima is sitting in the car. Somehow Pranav's driver convinced him and promised him that he know a shortcut and he will move the car right now. Garima felt something strange and she looked outside the window. She saw Pranav sitting in the car and just right there, Pranav saw Garima.

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 19/9/2014, 2:35 am

DELHI


Garima's Maasi was a reading story for Pari. But Pari demanded to hear the same favourite story she love. So, Maasi start telling this story- "A boy and a girl met. They used to hate eachother...and then one day their hate converted into love and they finally fell in love with eachother. Then one day, they get separated..."

Pari asked what happened next?

Maasi told her- "Then one day, they again met...in a full of crowd...they saw eachother."


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MUMBAI


Garima and Pranav saw eachother (as matching with the tale maasi telling Pari). It was a moment.

After sometime, Garima reached the actor's place to request him and she told him how much important this is for her daughter... The actor agreed. Now the work is done for which Garima came so far. She is at the airport and about to leave... Garima was hoping if she will see him for once again.

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 23/9/2014, 12:04 am

DELHI



Garima came back to Delhi. Maasi tell Garima that she is going to pick Pari from her school. Meanwhile Pari, playing with her friends after their school get over. Pari's friends waved her goodbye and went with their parents. Pari saw them going with their parents and started wondering what it feel like to have a father...She closed her eyes and wished if she meet her father who can come and pick-up from her school daily.


The school gate is going to close so the watchman asked Pari to sit outside the school campus. Pari sat on a bench, she kept thinking about her dad. While sitting outside the school, a car was coming and suddenly it stopped. It was Pranav. He went out to check what is wrong with the car and then he saw a little girl was sitting and starring at him. It was Pari. Pranav smiled and walk near to her.


Pranav: arre beta... tum aise akele yehan? Tumhare mummy-papa tumhe lene nahi aye?


(Pari was silent.)


Pranav: kya hua? tum chup kyun ho? Strangers se baat karne ko mummy ne mana kia hai?


(Pari nods. )


Pranav: okay, lekin agar tum mujhe bataogi nahi ke tumhare papa kaun hai aur mummy kaun hain tou...


Pari: mere papa mujhse naraaj hain esiliye woh mujhse kabhi milne nahi aate...



Pranav is speechless.

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 23/9/2014, 12:13 am

Pari: mere papa mujhse naraaj hain esiliye woh mujhse kabhi milne nahi aate...

Pranav is speechless.

[ Pranav in mind say to himself- ]

Pranav: Mumbai mein maine jab Garima ko dekha mujhe ek pal ke liye laga ke shayad ab sab kuch theek ho jayega... esiliye Garima ko delhi ke flight mein dekhte hi main bhi yehan Delhi agaya... I hope mujhe Garima mill jayegi. Aur tab main Garima se puchunga ke kyun oosne mujhe chhor dia aur een paanch saalon mein usey ekbaar bhi yeh kyu nahi laga ke oske ees tarah se chaley jane se mera kya hoga?


Pranav ask Pari about her parents and he checks her ID-Card in which it was written she is Pari Mittal. And Garima Mittal is her mother. Pranav is all blank to see his daughter infront of him.

"Pari..." -Maasi reach there calling her name. Maasi ask Pari to go and sit in the car.

Maasi: Pranav tum?

Pranav: maasi aap? Pari meri beti hai? Garima kahan hai?

Maasi: haan Pranav... Garima ko dhundte hue tum Delhi agaye lekin koi fayeda nahi...Garima shayad tumse milna na chahe...


Pranav: maasi, mujjhe bas ek baar Garima se milna hai...

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 23/9/2014, 12:32 am

Maasi brought Pranav to Garima's place where Garima was instructing the decorators. Garima was trying to give the basket of flowers to the decorators and suddenly she slipped. Pranav rushed and hold her in his arms. The flowers fell on them.

For couple of seconds they were lost in eachother but then Garima shoved him and go near to the pari. Garima ask Maasi to take pari to her room.

Garima: Pranav! Tum yehan kya karahe ho?

Pranav: Aaj sawaal main puchunga! Paanch saal! Een paanch saalon mein tumhe zara bhi khayal nahi aya ke tumhare chale jaane se mera kya hoga???

Garima: mere saamne tum hi ne woh shart rakhi thi warna aaj...Pari...

Pranav: Garima, mujhe apne Galati samajh agayi hai... Pari ko abort karne wali baat mujhe nahi karni chahiye thi. Pari meri bhi beti hai.

Garima: tumhari beti??? Pari sirf meri beti hai!

Pranav: Garima maine apni Galati maan li hai. Ab tum hamare jhagre mein ek maasoom ko beech mein kyun laa rahi ho?

Garima: haan Pranav, Pari maasoom hai... Aur tum hi ne Pari ko abort karne ki baat ki thi. Aur ab paanch saal ke baad tum aakar keh rahe ho ke Pari tumhari beti hai?

Pranav: Bas Garima bas! Tumhara ego itna bada hai ke shayad aaj tum hamare rishte ke saath-saath pari se uske papa ko bhi door karahi ho. Lekin ek baat tum yaad rakhna, Pari ki maa tum ho lekin oske naam mein "Mittal" surname mera hai... Pari meri beti thi aur meri beti hai! Aur ab kanoon tumhe khud majboor karega yeh baat maan ne ke liye!


[ Pranav and Garima again draw their lines of war against eachother and there are so much of hatred in their eyes for eachother. ]


Pranav leave and go outside. He dialled a number to his lawyer.


Pranav: Hello, mujhe divorce file karna hai...

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 3/10/2014, 4:49 am

Garima to Maasi: Pata nahi maasi, Pranav itne saalon baad ees tarah achanak mere saamne agaya aur Pari ka pita houne ka dawa karne laga...Jisne khud kabhi mujhe abortion karne ke liye kaha tha ya phir yeh shart rakhi thi ke main oske zindagi se hamesha ke liye chali jaaun...main khud ko rok hi nahi paayi... Lekin Maine Pranav se jis tarah baat ki kya woh sahi tha?

Maasi: Tumne jo kia woh tumhara gussa tha...


Tabhi ghar par ek lawyer aata hai. Woh laywer Garima ko divorce papers dete hue kehta hai, ke, een papers par Pranav Mittal ne signature kar diye hain. Garima ko sunn kar yakeen nahi hota hai. Garima papers par Pranav ke signature dekhne ke liye papers ko check karti hai. Pranav ne actually signatures kiye hain. Yeh dekh Garima ke aankho mein aansu ajate hain.


Maasi: Garima, ab tumhara kya faisla hai???

Garima: Maasi, kya Pranav ne ees divorce papers par sign karne se pehle ekbaar bhi socha hoga ke woh kya karaha hai???

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 3/10/2014, 5:07 am

Garima divorce papers par sign karti hai.

Maasi: Garima! Yeh tumne kya kia?

Garima: wahi, jo mujhe 5 saal pehle Mittal Mansion chhorne se pehle kar dena chahiye tha... Tou aaj Pranav Pari par apna haq na jatata. Pari sirf meri beti hai!


Pranav to his lawyer: Pari sirf meri beti hai! Mujhe har haal mein Pari ki custody chahiye!

Lawyer: lekin Pranav, Garima ke chances zyada hain. Kyunki ek tou woh ees bachhi ki maa hai, aur, dusre baton mein dekha jaye tou... tumne een paanch saalon mein kabhi apni beti se milne ki koshish bhi nahi ki... Ab tou faisla Mumbai court karegi.


Udhar Garima ko ek call ata hai. Garima apni beti Pari aur Maasi ke saath Mumbai ajati hai. Garima ko jiska phone aya tha, Garima apni beti Pari aur Maasi ke saath yehan oos se milne aati hai.

Garima: Kaisi ho Nandani...

Nandani: Garima... (sad tone mein) een paanch saalon mein sab kuch badal gaya... Sudeep mujhse hamesha ke liye door ho gaye hain... Kyunki maine oon se abortion wali baat chhupai thi...

Garima: tuney Sudeep ko bataya kyu nahi ke agar tuney abortion nahi karaya houta tou teri jaan jaa sakti thi...

Nandani: Sudeep ko maine batana chaha... lekin unhe lagta hai ke maine jaan-bhuj kar abortion kia hai...



[ Nandani Pari ke taraf dekhti hai aur Garima se kehti hai- ]

Nandani: Garima, jo galatiyaan hui aur misunderstandings hue woh sab bhool kar tu Pranav ke life mein wapas chali jaa... Warna tum dono ke ees nafarat ka Pari par assar padega.

Garima: yehi baat maine Pranav se expect ki thi lekin woh divorce chahta hai aur saath mein pari ki custody bhi... Jo ke main aisa hone nahi dungi!

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 3/10/2014, 5:29 am

MUMBAI COURT-ROOM

(Background: Noise of people talking, typing on type-writer) Order! Order!

Judge: Applicants Pranav Mittal and Garima Mittal, aap dono ke taraf se liye gaye statements aur mutual agreement par... yeh court, yeh divorce manzoor karti hai. Aur bachhi ke custody kisey milegi... ab yeh khud Pari Mittal hi tyeh karegi.


[ After calling Pari's name, Pari is brought to the courtroom, where she stands on the witness-box area. ]

Judge asking to Pari: beta Pari, aap mummy aur papa mein se kiske saath rehna chahoge???

( Pari look towards her mother Garima and her father. Then she remember, when in school, her friends' parents used to come to pick them from school.)

Pari: Main Mummy aur Papa dono ke saath rehna chahti hoon...

Judge: kyunki koi sahi decision Pari se nahi mila hai, yeh court custody ke bare mein koi decision tabhi legi jab khud Pari dono mein se kisi ek saath rehne ke liye poori tarah jawab dey sakey. Esiliye court chahti hai, ke pari 1 month ke liye apne pita Pranav Mittal ke saath rahe. Ab court apna faisla ek mahine baad hi sunayegi. Tab tak ke liye this court is adjourned!



[ Pranav and Garima standing outside of the courtroom with Pari. ]

Pranav: Pari ki custody mujhe hi milegi, achha hoga ke tum bhi ees baat ko maan lo.

Garima: dekhenge.


Pari comes forward and hold Pranav and Garima's hand-

Pari: Mummy...Papa...aap dono please wapas se friendship karo na...

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 3/10/2014, 5:51 am

Garima was allowed to meet her daughter Pari once in a week. Garima go to Mittal Mansion just to meet Pari and Mittal family members get to meet Garima as well. This way 3 Weeks passed and this is the last week that Garima is going to meet Pari.

Garima was about to enter in the Mittal Mansion when she get struck with Pranav. Due to slippery floor, Garima was about to slip and fell but Pranav catched her. Pranav's cellphone rang, Pranav asked Garima if she is okay... Garima nodded.

Suddenly a noise came from OM Mittal's room. Every family members ran towards the room as soon as they heard this noise. OM Mittal had an heart-attack and he was lying on the floor. Pranav lift him and Garima called the ambulance. In no time OM Mittal has been admitted in the hospital. Entire family members are tensed. After an hour the doctors stated it was a major heart-attack and the situation is critical. This maybe OM Mittal's last few time. Gayathri and the entire family members are in shock.

Garima go near to Gayathri-

Garima: maa...

Gayathri break-down in tears.

Garima tell everyone to not give-up and stay strong at this moment. Garima has hopes that OM Mittal will survive this and he will get well. Pranav see her.


Pranav: (saying in mind) Mujhe pata tha aaj bhi tum mujhse pyaar karti ho... Tumhara aur mera rishta bhale hi nafarat se shuru hua tha... Lekin main tumse bahut pyaar karne laga hu Garima...

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Post by Diipendu Dutta on 5/10/2014, 2:32 am

Doctor ICU se bahar aakar Pranav aur Garima ko kehte hain ke OM Mittal Pranav-Garima se baat karna chahte hain. Pranav aur Garima OM Mittal se milne jate hain.

OM Mittal dekhte hain ke Pranav aur Garima eksaath milne aye hain.

OM Mittal: Mujhe pata nahi ke main theek ho paunga ya nahi... lekin meri ab sirf ek choti si khwaish hai... Jis nafrat ke bandhan mein tum dono kabhi bandhe thhe, osey hamesha ke liye pyaar ke rishtey mein badal do... Tum dono hamesha ke liye ek ho jaao...


Garima: papa, aap bilkul theek ho jayenge. Maine OM Mittal ko hamesha haalat se mukabla karte hue dekha hai...

Pranav: haan papa... aap bilkul theek ho jayenge.

OM Mittal: tou tum dono yeh waada karo... tum dono phir se ek ho jaoge...?


[ Pranav aur Garima OM Mittal ko promise karte hain. ]

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